Zekira wrote:

Offset: 1795

Also, um... why is there a green timing point right directly above the red one? :\

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Why don't you make an Easy or an Insane?

[Normal]

01:31:067 (1) - End this spinner here 01:34:320

[Hard]

00:06:488 (11) - New combo
01:26:729 (4,1) - Spacing
01:32:874 (1) - End this spinner here 01:34:320

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[Normal]
01:05:048 (6) - No new combo new combo?fix

[Hard]
00:32:879 (8,9) - Move 1 grid downfix

Nice map!
Star 4 U thanks

DJPop wrote:

The song is really too soft in the last part - -"
BPM 83.000

~Normal~
SliderTickRate: 2 _ (If you change BPM to 83.000, don't change it)
00:50:951 (6) - new combo
01:13:361 (7) - ^

~Hard~
00:04:686 (7) - new combo
00:16:252 (7) - ^
(Compared to the patterns in last part.)

All fix


+Starthank you~

VanMoNky wrote:

Done! Please add.
Included the new offset, but not DJPop's bpm.

Also, I don't have any idea why I can't silence the end of the spinner. Please someone check it!???

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
Use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Use Grid Level 3.

[Normal]
00:18:060 (x) Add a hitcircle here.
00:18:421 (x) ^.
00:18:782 (x) ^.
01:27:457 (x) ^.
01:27:819 (x) ^.
01:28:180 (x) ^.
All fix
[Hard]
01:03:782 (x) Add a spinner who finish at 01:04:867.
01:21:493 (x) ^, with finish at 01:22:578.


And that's all for your map! hoe you will ask me again for other maps-modding x3 Starred

thank you~

VanMoNky wrote:

AngelHoney. My last spinner is not silenced even I've turn the volume off.

VanMoNky wrote:

Also, capitalize all the words in the tag box, AngelHoney.

Armin wrote:

Optimize the offset: 1797 done
Also, add the tag "Vanmonky" on all the difficulties.done

[Normal]

00:01:795 Remove the whistle in the middle, add a whistle on the start instead
00:03:240 As above
00:05:770 Remove the whistle in the middle
00:07:578 (1,2) As above
00:04:686 (3,5) Whistles
00:16:252 Remove the whistle at the start
00:58:903 Add a finish instead
00:59:626 Finish at the start
01:02:517 Clap on the repeat; remove the clap at the end
01:07:216 (3,5) Whistles
01:10:469 Finish
01:11:192 Finish
01:32:517 (time section) Volume: 0%
All fix

[Hard]

You should add the hitsounds better... see the file .osu thank you very much~
01:27:459 Add this hitcircle in the middle of the editor, then make (2) and (3) symmetrical
01:32:881 (time section) 0% volume
All fix

[MoNky's BeaT]

Very nice.

AngelHoney wrote:

VanMoNky wrote:

AngelHoney. My last spinner is not silenced even I've turn the volume off.

Yes ..i know...(maybe..is BUG?

AngelHoney wrote:

VanMoNky wrote:

Also, capitalize all the words in the tag box, AngelHoney.

sorry...i dont know ...Whats meaning
my english is so poor....

AngelHoney wrote:

Armin wrote:

Optimize the offset: 1797 done

KnuckMew wrote:

Well, since I found out I didn't star this map yet, so...
:3

(+) Added a minimum volume limit for all control point volume adjustments.
這句...沒理解 all control point 的意思


vanmonky <--tag的這個字在應該用大楷的用大楷(capitalize一般是指第一個字母用大寫)
嗯嗯 謝謝
e.g. DO NOT Kudos this post. (<--DO NOT is capitalized in this sentence.)
(And yes, please don't give me kudos for this post, thx x.x)

AngelHoney wrote:

my english is so poor....

VanMoNky wrote:

AngelHoney wrote:

my english is so poor....

Here I give you an example.
Vanmonky = vanmonky <-- this is called capitalization.
Hell = hell <-- this is called capitalization.
Makai Kishi Ingrid Yakushi = makai kishi ingrid yakushi <-- this is called capitalization.

So, what do we ask you to do is to make all words in the tag like this:
hell makai kishi ingrid yakushi vanmonky

VanMoNky wrote:

The unsilenced spinner is now fixed with blank.wav sound.
Angelhoney, extract the .rar file to the song folder and replace the diff.

BananasGoMoo wrote:

[Normal]
Drain rate a little too high
too many spinners imo, but maybe cause i dont like spinners
00:56:011 (1) - i dont understand why there are 4 timing sections here
otherwise fine.

[Hard]
Fine.

[MoNky's BeaT]
Fine as well.

+Star

ccbp wrote:

你的难度：音量整体+10%，softclap不合，特别是hard的这个：00:17:337 (4) -
monky的：softfinish非常不合，特别是从这里开始，请让他务必改00:48:060 (1) -
monky: IMO the softfinish hitsounds in your diff does not suit very well, especially starts here:00:48:060 (1) -, plz change it.

arkiandruski wrote:

Normal:

Good for the most part. I think it could be spruced up a little bit more without raising the difficulty too much.

Examples:

00:05:770 (6,1) - Fill the space between these notes. Follow the piano line.
00:27:819 (3) - I think the pattern should change here. Speed up the notes just a bit.
00:39:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm happens a lot in this map. I don't think it fits here.
00:43:722 (5,1) - Why such a long break here?
01:10:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think that rhythm fits here either.

Hard:

00:25:288 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe try the 1/4 beats a beat earlier?
00:27:819 (2,3,4) - Maybe try these 1/4 beats a beat later?
00:34:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe have 1/4 beats somewhere in this combo?
01:03:602 (7,1,2) - Maybe try something to fill this space?

MoNky's BeaT:

The Diff name seems out of place for both the song and the naming scheme for other difficulties. Besides that, no comment.

Looks pretty good. Star.

Lissette wrote:

mmm i think clap don't fit with this song, cuz the song is too soft and claps are too noisy, only whistle and finish are perfect (in intro just use whistle)


Normal
01:02:517 (5) - repeat one more time

Hard
00:05:770 (4) - remove clap >.<
00:17:337 (4) - ^
00:21:674 (7) - ^
00:52:397 (1,2,3,4) - this is a lil confusing, but is rankeable, but if you want, stack (3,4) with (1,2)

MoNky's BeaT
00:23:391 (4,5) - this sound bad, and is wrong spaced, the spacing between the notes of the same combo should be the same
00:39:023 (7) - new combo?
00:58:903 (9) - ^
00:59:626 (1) - remove new combo
01:02:156 - new combo
01:26:644 (4,5) - this sound bad, and is wrong spaced, the spacing between the notes of the same combo should be the same

Very nice map!
star!!^^

Lissette wrote:

so.. you decided to keep the claps >.< i guess its ok

Hard
00:17:337 (4) - you forgot the whistle here, right? >.<
00:21:674 (7) - ^

MoNky's BeaT
00:23:391 (4,5) - stack under prev (3)
01:26:644 (4) - remove

fix this and i'll P-bubble

Lissette wrote:

MoNky's BeaT
00:23:391 (4,5) - stack under prev (3)

VanMoNky wrote:

Fixed. But..

Lissette wrote:

MoNky's BeaT
00:23:391 (4,5) - stack under prev (3)

Sorry But I wanna keep the distance. That's exactly not a big problem since this is a hard or maybe the hardest diff in this song. So, I'll keep this.

abalee wrote:

Hmm.. proto-bubble popped sorry.

hard:
00:44:807 (8,1) - spacing.这里我认为间距要小一点。
00:55:650 (2,3) - ^ 这里要再拉开一点。我建议1和2一起拉远点。
...and some boring new combo mod.
00:48:060 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:397 (1) - ^
00:48:782 (2) - add new combo.
00:50:951 (9) - ^


这张图好很多了，fixed之后我重新再推。

Skyripper wrote:

[Normal]
00:45:529 - insert break here
01:31:072 (1) - try ending this spinner at 01:32:879

[Monky]
01:29:264 (4) - new combo (jump)
01:31:072 (1) - try ending this spinner at 01:32:879

Note: There is a preferred skin set on [Hard] in the beatmap's song settings. It is set to Hikari. Please change all difficulties to Hikari, or all difficulties to User Preference (No Change)

will bubble after fixes are made

Skyripper wrote:

Still didn't fix the part with the preferred skin.

Hit F4 -> Go to Storyboarding tab -> Under the "Skinning" section set your skin type to either "User Preference" or "Hikari" on all of them. One or the other please.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Sorry, have to pop this one :<

Add an hitcircleoverlay on the folder. You can't add only hitcircle.

Remove the 2 .osb files on the folder. There are no storyboard on this map.

When you're done with this fix call me for a bubble.

abalee wrote:

Grats

Leorda wrote:

Congrats for your first ranked map!

S i R i R u wrote:

ヾ(´ー｀)ﾉ｡･:*:･ﾟ'★,｡･:*:･ﾟ'☆ Congratulations･･･

VanMoNky wrote:

Ooops. Forgot to say.

CONGRATULATIONS!!