[Yue] wrote:

Hi Lally-Sama >w<
In game request owo/

Easy:

1. 00:37:662 (4) - see this kind of slider here I do not like, I prefer it to be a slider with curve i dont think it fits here
2. 00:46:334 (1) - I think here was a mistake, instead of ending the slider on the white tick, you put it in a blue tick: c the slider should end here 00:46:802 -
3. 00:48:209 (3) - ^ actually not i follow the sound in the background not the claps here ^ same
4. 00:59:459 (3,4) - no music to follow here, it would be better if you replaced this with a slider i don't feel like it
   
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5. 01:02:740 - add circle? i try to follow vocal here
6. 01:36:959 (3) - I think if you make this slider with a little more curve would look better, you should also do the same to 01:38:834 (1) - nah is ok so
   you're sure the spacing is right? D: ofc

Normal:

1. 00:42:115 - add circle owo i prefder not here
2. 00:46:334 (1) - sounds a bit weird, I think you should do what I tell you in easy hmm dunno
3. 01:28:990 (4,5) - this does not look very good, so this would be better ok o3o
   
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4. 01:47:505 (3) - control+h and then fix the spacing i prefer mine o3o
5. 01:57:349 (1) - move to 01:57:349 - uhm what?
6. 01:58:052 - if you do the above, here you should add a circle
7. 02:59:459 (3,4) - Better that way, that you think? i prefer an overlap
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 03:07:427 (3) - change the shape of this, it looks bad ok
9. 03:24:771 (2) - maybe finish this in 03:25:123 - nah
   you're sure the spacing is right? D: ye D:

Hard:

1. 00:52:662 (6) - nc y
2. 00:56:646 (3) - You should eliminate repetition, and then 00:57:349 - add a circle i prefer not
3. 01:02:740 - add circle owo i follow the vocal here
4. 01:15:396 - to 01:19:849 - You should do what you did in the normal diff and you will have much, much better pace lazy =w=
5. 01:34:146 (3) - replace this circle by a slider uhm nah i prefer not
6. 01:53:834 (1) - so you'll have a better flow i like my actual one
   
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7. 02:38:130 - add circle o3o following vocal here o3o
8. 02:50:318 (1) - in normal and easy, this spiner looked good, but does not look good here, and here could put circles / sliders :c
9. 03:55:709 (1) - move to another place because it is too near 03:55:474 (5) -
10. 03:59:459 (1) - , 04:04:380 (1,2,3,1) - , 04:06:724 (1) - and 04:12:584 (1) - ^ won't change those patterns
    you're sure the spacing is right? D: sure

Collab:

1. 00:36:490 (4,1) - better try something like this: changed
   
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2. 01:08:365 (6) - te parece hacer una curva a este slider para que se vea bien con 01:07:662 (4) - ? se verá mucho mejor te lo aseguro ;3
3. 02:50:084 (1) - what I said in the hard
4. 03:57:584 (1,2,3,4) - this was very rare o.o I think you should change that D;

Good luck minna :3/

Sonnyc wrote:

01:04:615 - Sexy and I know it <3

Easy:

00:46:334 (1,3) - I really think increasing fits better as an easy, which matches the strong beats. will think about
01:30:865 (5) - NC please. It went too long. y
01:47:740 (2) - Imo this wasn't expected. Maybe replace as a note, and start the reverse slider from 01:48:209? will think about
03:51:959 (3) - Missing clap at the end. done
04:14:459 (3,4) - Imo, making the rhythm the same as 04:10:709 (3) would be more consistent, and fitting. You may wanted to give a diversity in rhythm, but I think keeping it consistent may be better since there isn't a significant difference at the song. i follow the ''aaaahaaaaaaa a aa''

Normal:

00:52:662 (3) - Mind making this NC as 00:37:662 (1)? why not?
01:10:240 (3,1) - Check spacing please. y
01:10:709 (1,3) - Imo starting NC from (3) will fit the song better. y
01:15:396 (1) - Honestly I can't get your intention of your whistle settings here. Anyways mind adding a whistle at the head of this, as 01:18:209 (5,6) this pattern? Else whistle at 01:16:099 (2) feels quite sudden. fixed
01:59:927 (4) - The flow to the next wasn't perfect. Mind setting the last point at (112,56)? fixed
02:12:584 (4) - NC plz. Combo went too long.
02:58:052 (2) - Ummmm starting from here, the spacing of 1/2 has become 0.3x. I think it's a bit sudden and confusing because you were keep using 0.8x before. Switching to 0.7 would be fine, but well. Fine not to fix since it's just my opinion.
03:50:084 (1,2) - lol 1/4 in Normal. Especially the distance was similar as the one I've mentioned above, and I really think it's not appropriate for Normal.
04:05:084 (1,2) - ^ :P

Hard:

00:49:498 - Mind adding a note? It may sound cool, but sure to ignore if you feel adding will be unreadable. i don't like it so much adding something here
00:53:130 (7) - Make the distance equal? jumps o3o
00:53:599 (8,1) - Imo this jump was too large for a Hard. i can click it in DT o3o
01:41:763 (7) - Check spacing? why so nazy ;; it looks good ;_;
01:49:146 (3) - Imo adding whistles only at lyrics would have a better effect. Suggesting to remove whistles at the reverse and the end. y
03:03:209 (1) - Shortening 1/4 and adding a note 03:03:560 fits the lyrics better imo. ;_; nuuuh
03:07:896 (1) - I don't know why this slider is NC. Oh was it because of the "woooo" sound behind? lol Well still I think removing it would be nice.. ok
03:18:560 - Add note? no :/
03:25:709 (1) - Instead 3/4, I think 1/2 rhythms fit here. i prefer not
04:04:380 (1,2,3) - Imo making the spacing of the starting notes consistent would be better. i wanted a good stack

Collab:

-- Quite interesting to see mappers who weren't expected to map pop songs participating this collab.

(Garven)
00:46:568 (2) - Imo (260,136) would have a better flow.
00:52:427 (2) - I feel something jump here. Consider something like ctrl+G?
(HeatKai)
01:04:263 (5) - I can't hear a beat here in the song, and also this is disturbing from emphasizing 01:04:146 (4). Rather add a note at 01:04:029?
(Sekai-nyan)
01:41:646 (5) - I think (352,156) would be better in flow.
(Dark_ai)
01:51:959 (7,1) - I think these should be in a same combo. Start NC from (7)?
(Luanny)
02:35:787 (3) - Imo this jump was too far. don't think so
(Gabe)
02:43:638 (5,6) - I think dragging them to 02:43:521 would fit the music. Gabe said no changes
(Chewin)
03:52:427 (3) - Missing Clap at the head?
(Amamiya Yuko)
03:57:935 (2,3,4) - I really felt this anti jump is sudden and not matching the song. Not giving any alternatives, since this is just my opinion.
(alacat)
04:11:998 (1) - Delete NC please. It's in the part of 04:11:646 (1).

Good luck~~

Aka wrote:

ohai, as requested ( /)u(\ )

easy

• lally

1. 00:46:334 (1,3) - i'd reeeeeeeally recommend you to go 1/1 there and follow the vocal part. this rhythm is kinda hard to read will think about
2. 02:50:084 (1) - whistle on the end of spinner? owo similar sound y
   leader
3. 01:15:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - pretty long combo >: maybe a nc somewhere
4. 01:27:115 (1,2) - swith ncs?
5. 01:30:865 (5) - nc :О]

normal

1. 02:12:584 (4) - nc? y
2. 03:03:209 - better to start an object here cause of a new phrase.. o.ò i mostly follow the lyrics here i don't think is needed here
3. 04:00:865 (6) - this. this. dunoo if it should be like this but.. umm well, when i make these kind of sliders i put them relying on ticks on a timeline. like, you can stay on a blue tick and put the sliderpoint somewhere in the top middle of sliderball o3o if this slider should be not like them wavy sliders then sry, misunderstood orz xD
   also yue have mentioned some parts i wanted to mention too, so..

collab
cs5 ♥////♥

1. xinely
   00:45:162 (4,5,6) - what about make these flow smoother after (,2,3) like it idk.. this?
   
2. garven
   00:46:334 (1,2,3,4) -, 00:48:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol, i remember when i was first testplaying the diff i almost pissed my pants off kinda scared on this part.. i'd recommend to reduce the spacing here a bit, 2,95x jumps are too much and really sudden, comparing with the spacing of the whole diff imo
3. heatkai~
   01:02:740 (6) - clap is missing? fixed
4. бака кодора
   01:19:615 (1,2,3,4) - веселее звучит clap-clap-whistle-whistle, как по мне
   01:18:209 (1,2) - вот такие вот биты неплохо ставить по... Я ХЗ КАК ЭТО НАЗВАТЬ БЛИН
   ну вот у тебя 01:17:505 (1,2) - эти вверху слева и как бы так же идут туда. потом от двойки флоу пошло ниже к 01:18:209 (1) - и неплохо было бы продолжить его так же, типа такого. пиздец я флоудрочер
   понял-непонял? XDD запмь если не влом, лол /me удаляется (~OoO)~
5. saten
   01:24:302 - here is a pretty hearable beat on which you have objects here 01:25:240 -, 01:26:177 (3) - here, 01:27:115 - and here.. why did yo uignore this one, hmmm? o.o
6. nemissssss
   04:18:209 (1) - idk why how and for what but i got confused here while testplaying it first time｜−・;）maybe because of half-hidden sliderbody.. IDK. though all was okay all next testplays, NVM OK

well i started mod from collab, then easy and normal, and its damn 5am.. nfjkdsnfkdsjf generally hard seems fine as for me u.u)/ zzzzzzzzzzzzjkshlkhkr


WOOOOOOOOAOOOOHOOOOOOHHHH~ I WISH U A GOOD LUCK~ Σ (੭ु ຶਊ ຶ)੭ु⁾⁾

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

i feel the notes are a bit late. Perhaps try with a 31300 offset to see if it's better won't change my timing it was made by a BAT

[Collab]
How about some custom combo colors? Those would be nice. Also i feel the 1/4 notes are too close together maybe space them farther apart?
01:19:615 (2,4) - remove the whistles on these 2 notes. it sort of overpowers over the music no
01:41:646 (5) - move this one grid to the right
02:42:115 (6) - move this to x:356 y:324
04:18:209 (1) - <3 this slider

[Hard]
your 1/4 notes are too close that it seems unnecessary to space them apart... actually not since it's a hard and i don't wanna have difficult spacing
02:01:300 (1) - remove the nc y
02:35:050 (1) - move your slider end point to x:92 y:132 no
02:44:425 (1) - remove this nc y

[Normal]
looks fine

[Easy]
Also looks fine

Gabe wrote:

like promised

General
On every difficulty, I can see that the spinner at around 03:42:584 (1) - is never placed at the same time. You somehow.. must make it at the same time to keep a nice spread. ✔

Easy

1. 00:40:240 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to do a better blanket here. It's not perfect and it can easily be fixable. ✔
2. 00:46:334 (1,2,3,4) - The way you tried to follow the vocals with the reverse arrow stacked on a blue-tick sounds a bit weird and feels like there's something missing. I highly suggest you to do something else here that will focus more on the vocals and make it more natural. I am giving you two suggestions: ✔
   
   SPOILER

   If you want something that is easy and follows the vocals, I suggest you to take this one
   
   
   SPOILER

   or if you don't mind the difficulty but still stays Easy, this would be better for you since it's following more the vocals.
   
   
3. 01:38:834 - Since this notes (01:35:084 - ) has an addition finish and the next big downbeats has a simple finish, I suggest you to replace this one for a normal addition finish that will keep the same consistency of your the previous sounds. Also, it feels weird the way to currently sound, so changing it would be better o3o i prefer to keep it as it is now
4. 01:42:584 - Should be the same with the previous suggestion ^same
5. 01:47:740 (2) - I am really unsure about this slider, it might feel a bit weird for beginners since they won't exactly know when they have to stop pressing and it can easily make them fail. ✔
6. 04:17:974 (1) - Like Nemis has done in the collab with the final slider, you should end this spinner at 04:19:380 -. It will sound better since Minaj's voice ends here. You should actually do the same with all your difficulties. :3 ✔

Normal

1. 00:37:662 (1) - I guess you can move this circle one grid left to make it more aligned with the direction of your previous slider. ✔
2. 01:10:240 (3) - You might want to reconsider the spacing here, it's inconsistent and we can see it in the playfield.. fixed a bit
3. 01:47:974 (1) - If I am right, you need more space between the end of a spinner and the next object. I suggest you to move the end it to 01:49:146 - so it will give more spaces and also, since Gomez's voice stops here, I guess it would be a nice idea to emphasize it. i don't think ,there is enought time to catch it
4. 02:49:615 - I feel like there is missing something here x.x .. You can easily add a circle here to break the emptiness. ✔
5. 02:58:052 (2) - Since when the spacing is that short? I meant.. it's totally not consistent with what you were doing before the slider (ex. 01:20:084 (1) - ; 01:25:240 (4) -; 02:46:334 (2) - ) So, in order to keep it consistent, user either the Distance Snap or your instinct to keep the spacing at 0.80x or 0.70x; you have to do this on almost everything after the spinner. kiai is a wounderfull time, i wanted to have something different in the kiai since is imo the best part of the song o3o
6. 03:07:427 (3) - I guess you missed a clap here since it feels a bit empty and inconsistent o3o ✔
7. 04:04:146 (1,1,2) - this part might be a bit confusing because first, the spacing and the objects placed on the timeline is not consistent, so we barely know when we should exactly click on the second slider (1). second, just the fact of having a 6-reversed-arrow slider might be confusing for novice players.. ✔

Hard

1. 00:53:130 (2) - wanna make this circle's spacing more consistent please? :3 ✔
2. 01:12:584 - You might want to do a better blanket with the previous slider's end here, we can see that it isn't perfect. ✔
3. 01:16:685 (1) - In order to keep the consistency and the spread with Easy and Normal, you should delete this slider and keep adding those reverses sliders all over, it should be more fun :3 ✔
4. 03:19:615 (4,2) - were those two sliders supposed to be stacked? If yes, you should actually stack it and fits the blanket. uhm actually not
5. 03:51:021 (3,1) - The blanket here looks bad, you should fit it by moving the slider (3) closer to the slider (1) to fix the blanket. hmm
6. 04:04:380 (1,2,3) - how to say... it looks terrible? lol. The spacing between those sliders are not consistent at all, which makes a weird appearance.
   [spilerbox][/spoilerbox]

so, I'm stopping here. hope I was helpful :3

Bellum wrote:

From your queue

03:18:209 - International Love <3

I couldn't hear the hitsounds well, so i was confused whether i hit it or not.

Heatkai
01:01:334 (1,2) - how about bend opposite side. like no changes here

SPOILER

It seems better for flow
Kodora
01:15:396 (1,1,1) - place like this. it's easier to read

SPOILER

-Bakari-
01:58:990 (4) - reduce 1/4, this sounds same as 01:57:584 (1,2,3) - it's sounds good here

02:20:552 - make the break time start here absolutly no,i don't hear a sound that make start the break there and to start a break random for no reason no ty

Luanny
02:35:436 (2,3) - hard to read the 1/4 rhythm it's an insane for this (?)

Byakugan249
03:22:662 (3) - 231||258 is better for flow

Amamiya Yuko
03:57:584 (1,2,3,4) - this distance is so short that i couldn't recognize the 3/4 ryhthm

04:18:209 (1) - o.o amazing slider!


Rank it plz :p

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