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FictionJunction KAORI - Yume no Tsubasa
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Omg, this is one of my favourite songs!
I wonder whether I can make a diff of this song >_>
I wonder whether I can make a diff of this song >_>
Topic Starter
Sure! why not? n_n
thanks for starring guys
thanks for starring guys
Ok, here's my mod:
[normal]
01:03:44 (1) - remove the finish hitsound and add it to the end of the slider
[hard]
01:47:11 (2) -
01:48:78 (3) -
01:50:78 (2,3) - add soft whistle
sorry for my nasty hitsounds modding ;_; I'm not very good at it.
[normal]
01:03:44 (1) - remove the finish hitsound and add it to the end of the slider
[hard]
01:47:11 (2) -
01:48:78 (3) -
01:50:78 (2,3) - add soft whistle
sorry for my nasty hitsounds modding ;_; I'm not very good at it.
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
- Set a preview point on all difficulties.
- Cut the mp3 please.
[Easy]
Fine.
[Lissette's Normal]
Fine, too.
[Hard]
00:53:44 (6) - New combo.
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
- Set a preview point on all difficulties.
- Cut the mp3 please.
[Easy]
Fine.
[Lissette's Normal]
Fine, too.
[Hard]
00:53:44 (6) - New combo.
Topic Starter
ill do this after ccbp upload his diff. =)osuplayer111 wrote:
- Cut the mp3 please.
thanks for modding guys
Y..Yume no tsubasa !! ♥♥
Topic Starter
thanks for starrin' S i R i R u and statementreply >W<
really good map .
something i can find.
Hard
00:37:011 (9) - no clap.
01:09:044 (2) - no finish.
01:14:078 (2) - no finish.
01:17:011 (1) - clap . no finish
01:17:044 (2) - no hitsound
01:17:078 (3) - clap .no finish.
01:20:011 (2) - no finish.
01:22:011 (3) - no whistle
same like after breaktime . i dont suggest you add so much hitsounds . this isnt a noise song..
dont continuous use finish hitsound . it's really noisy,and will destroy your map.
something i can find.
Hard
00:37:011 (9) - no clap.
01:09:044 (2) - no finish.
01:14:078 (2) - no finish.
01:17:011 (1) - clap . no finish
01:17:044 (2) - no hitsound
01:17:078 (3) - clap .no finish.
01:20:011 (2) - no finish.
01:22:011 (3) - no whistle
same like after breaktime . i dont suggest you add so much hitsounds . this isnt a noise song..
dont continuous use finish hitsound . it's really noisy,and will destroy your map.
Topic Starter
All fixed.. thanks for modding.osu_CN_yaya wrote:
really good map .
something i can find.
Hard
00:37:011 (9) - no clap.
01:09:044 (2) - no finish.
01:14:078 (2) - no finish.
01:17:011 (1) - clap . no finish
01:17:044 (2) - no hitsound
01:17:078 (3) - clap .no finish.
01:20:011 (2) - no finish.
01:22:011 (3) - no whistle
same like after breaktime . i dont suggest you add so much hitsounds . this isnt a noise song..
dont continuous use finish hitsound . it's really noisy,and will destroy your map.
Thnx Crazy Jay
Overall:
you have two osb files.plz remove one of them
Easy & Normal:
the last spinner make players wanna play more.coz everyone clearly know the song is not ended.
the spinner will be fine to end on 02:28:044(suggestion)
[Easy]
fine
[Lissette's Normal]
decrease slider tick.1 tick is fine.(suggestion)
coz if you use high tick in the song of lower BPM,it will sound bad.
[Hard]
fine
shooting star^^
you have two osb files.plz remove one of them
Easy & Normal:
the last spinner make players wanna play more.coz everyone clearly know the song is not ended.
the spinner will be fine to end on 02:28:044(suggestion)
[Easy]
fine
[Lissette's Normal]
decrease slider tick.1 tick is fine.(suggestion)
coz if you use high tick in the song of lower BPM,it will sound bad.
[Hard]
fine
shooting star^^
eeemod GO!!
[Easy]
01:27:011 (1) - add a finish on this -_-, it's on Liss's, you decide, I'd like a finish here
[Lissette]
can't find nothin'
[Hard]
01:27:011 (1) - same as Easy
This was extremely fun, it flowed well at the beginning and gained it's difficulty towards the end
STAR!!!
idk, I don't think it would prevent it of being ranked, but it's there, you wanna delete?gdeath wrote:
Overall:
you have two osb files.plz remove one of them
[Easy]
01:27:011 (1) - add a finish on this -_-, it's on Liss's, you decide, I'd like a finish here
[Lissette]
can't find nothin'
[Hard]
01:27:011 (1) - same as Easy
This was extremely fun, it flowed well at the beginning and gained it's difficulty towards the end
STAR!!!
Nice song and map~
[Easy]
01:23:12(1)-Sounds weird,remove whistle?
01:25:12(4)-I suggest to delete 2 repeat and move to 01:25:78,at the same time add a note here~
01:52:45(1)-Remove whistle?
[Lissette's Normal]
01:54:45(x)-Add a note here?
[Hard]
Fine~
Star~
[Easy]
01:23:12(1)-Sounds weird,remove whistle?
01:25:12(4)-I suggest to delete 2 repeat and move to 01:25:78,at the same time add a note here~
01:52:45(1)-Remove whistle?
[Lissette's Normal]
01:54:45(x)-Add a note here?
[Hard]
Fine~
Star~
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding gdeath, eee and kino77. n.n
Removed the extra osb file.
Removed the extra osb file.
[Easy]
02:16:448 (x) - Place note here
[Lissette's Normal]
00:20:448 (1) - No new combo please
00:21:782 (3) - New combo
00:33:782 (x) - Place note here
02:05:115 (1) - No new combo please
02:06:448 (1) - ^
02:07:782 (1) - ^
02:18:448 (1) - ^
[Hard]
02:23:782 (2) - Don't too far away with 1
02:24:115 (3) - Don't too far away with 2
Good beatmap! I give you a star
02:16:448 (x) - Place note here
[Lissette's Normal]
00:20:448 (1) - No new combo please
00:21:782 (3) - New combo
00:33:782 (x) - Place note here
02:05:115 (1) - No new combo please
02:06:448 (1) - ^
02:07:782 (1) - ^
02:18:448 (1) - ^
[Hard]
02:23:782 (2) - Don't too far away with 1
02:24:115 (3) - Don't too far away with 2
Good beatmap! I give you a star
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Easy:
no problems found
Normal:
00:41:115 (3): Move the circle 1 grid to the right for irregular shape/spacing
02:15:448 (6): ^ and if you do this, move (7) also.
Hard:
02:05:115 (6): Move the circle 1 grid to the right to align with (5)
Don't forget that these are suggestions. Don't have to follow them!
star~
no problems found
Normal:
00:41:115 (3): Move the circle 1 grid to the right for irregular shape/spacing
02:15:448 (6): ^ and if you do this, move (7) also.
Hard:
02:05:115 (6): Move the circle 1 grid to the right to align with (5)
Don't forget that these are suggestions. Don't have to follow them!
star~
Normal:
01:11:078 (3) - new combo
Easy:
00:54:044 (1) - better to make the combo after it
01:10:044 (1) - ^
02:02:044 (4) - this slider sounds late.. its better at 2:01:782 or 2:02:115
beautiful map
01:11:078 (3) - new combo
Easy:
00:54:044 (1) - better to make the combo after it
01:10:044 (1) - ^
02:02:044 (4) - this slider sounds late.. its better at 2:01:782 or 2:02:115
beautiful map
Topic Starter
thank you all guys for taking your time modding this map
n.n
n.n
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ise algo pero nose como postearlo liz Dx ... enseñame ;_;
Lumi ...
pd: Star!
Lumi ...
pd: Star!
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
nuuu agregue cosas a tu mapa ala dificultad hard , pero no tengo idea como ponerlo para ke veas ke fue lo ke agregueLizbeth wrote:
a ver Lumi, Que es lo que quieres hacer? subir un beatmap? n.n
;__;
Topic Starter
lumibot solo tienes que adjutar la dificultad que modificaste en el post, como si fuera posteando una imagen
[Lissette's Normal]
02:24:011 (1) - Unsilence the end?
[Hard]
01:01:011 (8) - Unstack from (6,7) and move to be aligned vertically to (4,5)?
02:37:078 (1,2,3) - Symmetricize that somehow?
It's good, *star
02:24:011 (1) - Unsilence the end?
[Hard]
01:01:011 (8) - Unstack from (6,7) and move to be aligned vertically to (4,5)?
02:37:078 (1,2,3) - Symmetricize that somehow?
It's good, *star
Bueno Liz!., hoy Liss me explico algunas cositas muy útiles y creo que puedo postear ahora xd
aquí voy ;3
[Hard]
01:43:044 (1) - Nuevo
01:43:078 (1) - Movido
01:44:011 (2) - Nuevo
01:44:028 (3) - Nuevo
01:44:044 (4) - Nuevo
01:44:078 (1) - Movido
01:45:011 (2) - Movido
01:45:044 (3) - Movido
01:45:078 (4) - Movido
01:46:011 (5) - Movido
01:46:044 (1) - Movido
01:47:011 (2) - Movido
01:52:011 (1) - Nuevo
01:52:028 (2) - Nuevo
02:24:044 (1) - Nuevo Spin (clap)
02:26:078 (1) - Nuevo (clap)
02:27:044 (1) - Nuevo(clap)
02:27:078 (2) - Nuevo(clap)
02:28:044 (1) - Nuevo(clap)
02:28:078 (2) - Nuevo(clap)
02:29:011 (1) - Nuevo
02:29:028 (2) - Nuevo
02:29:044 (3) - Nuevo
02:29:061 (4) - Nuevo
02:29:078 (1) - Movido
02:30:011 (2) - Movido
02:30:078 (3) - Movido
*Los combos Movidos, son los que como dice la palabra, movi para acomodar siertas partes ;3
-Bueno eso es lo que realize en el mapa, si ai que cambiar los numeros de los combos Hazlo nomas, porque yo fui agregando y moviendo entonces si se ven mal los numeritos (1,2,3,4 etc) eso no se acomodarlo bien. era para que vieras los que habia puesto >.< , lo mismo por los sonidos si hay que quitarlos o agregar nuevos sonidos (Clap , Finish) ai que chekearlo.
[Este es mi primer post de este tipo osea de Mod xd, ojala sea útil esto y no aya dejado la embarrada nomas >.<]
Con cariño Lumibot ;3
Download: FictionJunction KAORI - Yume no Tsubasa (Lizbeth) [Insane].osu
aquí voy ;3
[Hard]
01:43:044 (1) - Nuevo
01:43:078 (1) - Movido
01:44:011 (2) - Nuevo
01:44:028 (3) - Nuevo
01:44:044 (4) - Nuevo
01:44:078 (1) - Movido
01:45:011 (2) - Movido
01:45:044 (3) - Movido
01:45:078 (4) - Movido
01:46:011 (5) - Movido
01:46:044 (1) - Movido
01:47:011 (2) - Movido
01:52:011 (1) - Nuevo
01:52:028 (2) - Nuevo
02:24:044 (1) - Nuevo Spin (clap)
02:26:078 (1) - Nuevo (clap)
02:27:044 (1) - Nuevo(clap)
02:27:078 (2) - Nuevo(clap)
02:28:044 (1) - Nuevo(clap)
02:28:078 (2) - Nuevo(clap)
02:29:011 (1) - Nuevo
02:29:028 (2) - Nuevo
02:29:044 (3) - Nuevo
02:29:061 (4) - Nuevo
02:29:078 (1) - Movido
02:30:011 (2) - Movido
02:30:078 (3) - Movido
*Los combos Movidos, son los que como dice la palabra, movi para acomodar siertas partes ;3
-Bueno eso es lo que realize en el mapa, si ai que cambiar los numeros de los combos Hazlo nomas, porque yo fui agregando y moviendo entonces si se ven mal los numeritos (1,2,3,4 etc) eso no se acomodarlo bien. era para que vieras los que habia puesto >.< , lo mismo por los sonidos si hay que quitarlos o agregar nuevos sonidos (Clap , Finish) ai que chekearlo.
[Este es mi primer post de este tipo osea de Mod xd, ojala sea útil esto y no aya dejado la embarrada nomas >.<]
Con cariño Lumibot ;3
Download: FictionJunction KAORI - Yume no Tsubasa (Lizbeth) [Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Lumi muchas gracias por tu moderacion n.n, que honor (tu primer mod post) En cuanto tenga mi pc voy a chekear todo lo que moderaste n_n gracias por gastar tu tiempo en esto.
Also thanks Dusty, ill check all tomorow :3
Edit: Already checked the modding thnks Dusty and Lumi.
Lumiere me encantaron tus cambios, los agregue inmediatamente, jejeje n.n chekealo cuando puedas. Ese kudosu estuvo bien ganado Deberias hacer un mapa, saldria buenisimo XD
grax
Also thanks Dusty, ill check all tomorow :3
Edit: Already checked the modding thnks Dusty and Lumi.
Lumiere me encantaron tus cambios, los agregue inmediatamente, jejeje n.n chekealo cuando puedas. Ese kudosu estuvo bien ganado
Deberias hacer un mapa, saldria buenisimo XDgrax
Si lumi deberias mapear, a mi tambien me encantaron tus cambios ^^
Offset is off!
You should turn it down to about 11, 100.
You should turn it down to about 11, 100.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mod Infos:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
It's ok
[Lissette's Normal]
It's ok
[Hard]
00:11:077 (4) - New combo
Starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Start Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
It's ok
[Lissette's Normal]
It's ok
[Hard]
00:11:077 (4) - New combo
Starred~
Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3
[General]
It's ok.
[Easy]
I think you should add some beat who follow more the voice, but it's ok too if the map follow the bass rythm!
Seems fine anyway ^^
[Lissette's Normal]
I think you should use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Seems fine ^^
[Hard]
I think you should use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Seems fine ^^
That's all for your map! I'm glad to star it and hope to see it ranked soon
I hope too you will ask me to mod other maps x3
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3
[General]
It's ok.
[Easy]
I think you should add some beat who follow more the voice, but it's ok too if the map follow the bass rythm!
Seems fine anyway ^^
[Lissette's Normal]
I think you should use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Seems fine ^^
[Hard]
I think you should use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Seems fine ^^
That's all for your map! I'm glad to star it and hope to see it ranked soon
I hope too you will ask me to mod other maps x3
Topic Starter
Thanks but since this map is part of a project i dont want that have a different skin.
thanks for starring ^^
thanks for starring ^^
Offset: 11.110 (much better imho)
Topic Starter
Thanks xxheroxx, is fixed.
Pubbled ;o
[General]
*Delete the two .osb files in the folder.
*I really like the different colored bg effect
[Easy]
00:42:776 (1) - starts on the red tick after the previous slider, but 02:08:443 (1) - doesn't start until the white tick after. Care to make them match up?
[Normal]
Looks fine.
[Hard]
Very nice.
I'm not gonna pop the pubble, since these are just minor issues. Great job to both of you!
EDIT: Still not gonna pop the pubble, but I forgot to do an offset check, and I think that it's about 15ms late; 11,095 seems to work much better.
*Delete the two .osb files in the folder.
*I really like the different colored bg effect
[Easy]
00:42:776 (1) - starts on the red tick after the previous slider, but 02:08:443 (1) - doesn't start until the white tick after. Care to make them match up?
[Normal]
Looks fine.
[Hard]
Very nice.
I'm not gonna pop the pubble, since these are just minor issues. Great job to both of you!
EDIT: Still not gonna pop the pubble, but I forgot to do an offset check, and I think that it's about 15ms late; 11,095 seems to work much better.
Cut the mp3
+kudosu star
+kudosu star
11,095 is a bit wrong, don't you think? 11.110 seems betterDerekku Chan wrote:
Still not gonna pop the pubble, but I forgot to do an offset check, and I think that it's about 15ms late; 11,095 seems to work much better.
Topic Starter
indeed, 11,110 look better for me too...xxheroxx wrote:
Cut the mp3
+kudosu star11,095 is a bit wrong, don't you think? 11.110 seems betterDerekku Chan wrote:
Still not gonna pop the pubble, but I forgot to do an offset check, and I think that it's about 15ms late; 11,095 seems to work much better.
also i already cut the mp3 a while ago, you may wanna redownload the map.
osb extra file, deleted.
thanks for modding Derekku Chan and xxheroxx, and thanks for the kds star *.*
*tests again* I'm still getting 10-20ms early hits when testing, but I won't argue. XP
loving this song*
Remember: Don't feed me kudosus if my post isn't really useful.
[Easy]
Overall: No spacing/timing/stacking/snapping problems found.
00:16:443 (1) Use a finish instead
00:31:110 (2) This seems a random slider <_<. Maybe try to do something like this:
01:03:109 (3) Finish at the end
01:12:443 (4) Make this slider symmetrical with the previous (2)
01:41:776 (1) Finish at the start
01:49:110 (3) This slider breaks the "clap"-rythm. Try to fix it, adding a clap at the start
02:01:110 (3) Make this symmetrical with the previous (1)
Overall Rating: 8/10
[Lissette's Normal]
Overall: No spacing/timing/stacking/snapping problems found. Some sliders are asymmetric, this make the difficulty a little ugly.
00:16:443 (1) Finish
00:43:109 (1) On this slider the "clap-rythm" is broken. You should fix this using a custom hitsound
00:47:776 (3) Clap+finish
01:18:443 (4) Finish at the end
02:23:110 (4) A bit offscreen D:, try to fix it
Overall Rating: 7,5/10
[Hard]
Overall: No spacing/timing/snapping problems found. Some hitobjects aren't staked perfectly, but this isn't a big problem xD.
00:59:443 (3) Make this symmetrical with the previous (2)
01:46:109 (4) and 01:46:443 (5) should be placed like in the picture:
01:51:443 (3,4) Make them symmetrical with (1) and (2)
This difficulty is perfect, I found just some little imperfections ^^
Overall Rating: 9/10
Remember: Don't feed me kudosus if my post isn't really useful.
[Easy]
Overall: No spacing/timing/stacking/snapping problems found.
00:16:443 (1) Use a finish instead
00:31:110 (2) This seems a random slider <_<. Maybe try to do something like this:
01:03:109 (3) Finish at the end
01:12:443 (4) Make this slider symmetrical with the previous (2)
01:41:776 (1) Finish at the start
01:49:110 (3) This slider breaks the "clap"-rythm. Try to fix it, adding a clap at the start
02:01:110 (3) Make this symmetrical with the previous (1)
Overall Rating: 8/10
[Lissette's Normal]
Overall: No spacing/timing/stacking/snapping problems found. Some sliders are asymmetric, this make the difficulty a little ugly.
00:16:443 (1) Finish
00:43:109 (1) On this slider the "clap-rythm" is broken. You should fix this using a custom hitsound
00:47:776 (3) Clap+finish
01:18:443 (4) Finish at the end
02:23:110 (4) A bit offscreen D:, try to fix it
Overall Rating: 7,5/10
[Hard]
Overall: No spacing/timing/snapping problems found. Some hitobjects aren't staked perfectly, but this isn't a big problem xD.
00:59:443 (3) Make this symmetrical with the previous (2)
01:46:109 (4) and 01:46:443 (5) should be placed like in the picture:
01:51:443 (3,4) Make them symmetrical with (1) and (2)
This difficulty is perfect, I found just some little imperfections ^^
Overall Rating: 9/10
i love your maps, but i'm going to nitpick on some things~
hard:
hmm, it feels that some parts lack hitsounds. D:
01:43:776 (1) - jump doesn't flow with the music imo. :\
01:45:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - big spacing here doesn't fit to me either.
i'm sorry. ;~~;
ps lizbeth and lissette are gods
hard:
hmm, it feels that some parts lack hitsounds. D:
01:43:776 (1) - jump doesn't flow with the music imo. :\
01:45:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - big spacing here doesn't fit to me either.
i'm sorry. ;~~;
ps lizbeth and lissette are gods
Topic Starter
Thanks Takuma ^^
I also love your maps *.*
Thanks for de modding, all fixed, also Armin modding, thx n_n
I also love your maps *.*
Thanks for de modding, all fixed, also Armin modding, thx n_n
Hard~
- 00:13:776 (9) - Move a tad bit to the right so it's evenly spaced with 7 and 8.
- 00:30:443 (4) - Move a little farther from 3 like how 2 is.
- 01:23:776 (2) - Mirror with 1.
- 01:24:776 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo, then make 01:25:109 (2) a new combo.
- 01:56:443 (2) - Mirror with 1.
- 02:33:776 (3) - Mirror with 1.
- 02:40:443 (3) - Mirror with 2.
- 02:44:443 (3) - Mirror with 1 again lol.
- 02:54:776 (3) - Mirror with 2....
Topic Starter
Done. Thanks Mafiamaster ^^
[Overall]
Use offset 9.770 so you don't have notes before the offset. <Remember to resnap all notes next>
There are 2 .osb files on the folder. Delete please~ <Remember to full submit next>
Fix and I'll bubble.
Use offset 9.770 so you don't have notes before the offset. <Remember to resnap all notes next>
There are 2 .osb files on the folder. Delete please~ <Remember to full submit next>
Fix and I'll bubble.
Topic Starter
Done Andrea, thanks for modding. ^^
looks pretty good!
bubbled
bubbled
Topic Starter
thank you so much n_n
Awesome!
Ranked.
Ranked.
Topic Starter
Thanks!