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FELT - Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix)

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Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 9, 2016 at 11:24:08 PM

Artist: FELT
Title: Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix)
Source: Touhou
Tags: NAGI☆ Boyz Party Grow Color c85 Maika Silver Drive Kamisirasawa Keine plain asia 10nya rui
BPM: 180
Filesize: 7720kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. 10nya's Normal (1.57 stars, 204 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.63 stars, 823 notes)
  3. rui's Hard (3.67 stars, 608 notes)
Download: FELT - Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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: rui
: 10nya
for ranking
Last edited by Freya , edited 70 times in total.
RyuukiBeat
54 posts
Joined March 2013
RyuukiBeat
Nice song, hope this will be ranked together with mine xD
ca20114
25 posts
Joined March 2012
ca20114
nice map :D
FELT is best band!
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya

Ryuukishi wrote:

Nice song, hope this will be ranked together with mine xD
sori gan saya berusaha biar saya duluan, hhe

ca20114 wrote:

nice map :D
FELT is best band!
thanks :D
yeah, osu need more FELT (Maika)
RyuukiBeat
54 posts
Joined March 2013
RyuukiBeat
Consider this is my mod :D

The bitrate of your mp3 is higher than 192kbps. So replace your mp3 with this instead :D

[Lunatic]
Oh, and about your lunatic diff, kiai is toggled less than 15 sec, and that is annoying.
03:06:063 - merge it, or remove the next or before KIAI time.

Maybe that's all for now :|
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya

Ryuukishi wrote:

Consider this is my mod :D no, i expect more hhe

The bitrate of your mp3 is higher than 192kbps. So replace your mp3 with this instead :Dok bos

[Lunatic]
Oh, and about your lunatic diff, kiai is toggled less than 15 sec, and that is annoying.
03:06:063 - merge it, or remove the next or before KIAI time. Maybe no since beetween that two kiai there is slow part and the kiai not really that short imo.
i reconsider it though since i am noob

Maybe that's all for now :| thanks bos
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
okay mp3 updated,

btw thanks Frostmourne-senpai for star /o/
Hurrikn
2 posts
Joined November 2012
Hurrikn
The offset is off. Try an offset of 766 and it will be more accurate. You can compare the way the beats match up towards the end of the song.
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
Okay, i'm still bothered with offset, so i hold this mapset for a while
i'll check your offset later. thanks

edit : okay i'll continue this project next week. (remap whole mapset)
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
<3
Decipher
617 posts
Joined December 2010
Decipher
<3

offset 777
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
<3 well 777 sounds better for me
anyonewanttofillharddiff?
Last edited by Freya , edited 2 times in total.
Kyouren
5,714 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Can i make a Normal Diff?
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
wah, normalnya udah jadi, tinggal upload, sori

normal diff turned to be troll orz, ._.
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,608 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
quick testplay+irc

SPOILER
2014-04-03 10:49 Freya: hi captin! up for testplay? i need feedback 8)
2014-04-03 10:49 captin1: i just sat down but sure heh
2014-04-03 10:50 Freya: ew, sorry but thanks
2014-04-03 10:50 Freya: lol
2014-04-03 10:50 Freya: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/394345 FELT - Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix)]
2014-04-03 10:56 captin1: couple quick things to point out
2014-04-03 10:56 Freya: okay
2014-04-03 10:56 Freya: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/394345 FELT - Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix) [Lunatic]]
2014-04-03 10:57 captin1: beginning section, notice how the distance between 00:22:443 (2) -  and 00:23:110 (3) - looks about the same as the distance from 3 to 00:23:776 (1) - , but the rhythm is different
2014-04-03 10:57 captin1: ends up making it confusing and a lot of people will try playing 00:23:776 (1) -  too early because of it
2014-04-03 10:58 Freya: i see, i'll look at it
2014-04-03 10:58 captin1: 00:42:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I would introduce the 1/3 with a repeat slider first, it's very sudden and not expected at all. Later on in the song you can start doing full streams but at the very beginning there's no way to know that this is the rhythm
2014-04-03 10:58 Freya: basically first part right
2014-04-03 10:59 captin1: yeah
2014-04-03 10:59 Freya: well, it does make sense
2014-04-03 10:59 Freya: will do remap at 1/3 stream
2014-04-03 11:00 captin1: 02:10:776 (3,4,1,2) - parts like this, the music does a 3/4 rhythm and it seems like you mostly ignored it, I'd personally try to map it since it sounds pretty loud and important
2014-04-03 11:02 Freya: well, i still dont get it, ._. i dont really good at rhytym-wise
2014-04-03 11:02 captin1: jumping back a bit but 01:32:776 (3,4,5) - notice how this triple leads into a red tick? generally that doesn't feel as good as if you were doing it 1/2 later, if you're going to add triples to the music try to do them so that they end on a white tick, will feel much better
2014-04-03 11:04 captin1: 02:10:776 - starting here the rhythm of that sound is http://puu.sh/7UtlW.jpg 
2014-04-03 11:04 captin1: that's not the best way of mapping it but to show where the beats are
2014-04-03 11:05 Freya: okay i get it now
2014-04-03 11:06 captin1: and just as a general statement I'm all for doing 3/4 sliders to emphasize certain vocals, but you might have overdone it just a little bit, try to stick to the drum just a bit more so that it's comfortable
2014-04-03 11:06 captin1: think that's all i have, keep workin at it!
2014-04-03 11:06 Freya: well yeah
2014-04-03 11:06 Freya: thanks captin, it's kd worth
2014-04-03 11:07 captin1: hah sure

nice song~ good luck!
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
yeah, thanks captin1,
that was good quick mod and testplay
KSHR
osu! Alumni
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
FELT! ;)
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
thanks KSHR for star, testplay and small mod, you said no need kds so okay.

i want your FELT-012 album!! ww
Decipher
617 posts
Joined December 2010
Decipher
why are you slow banget sih
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
ajarin ngemap dong desiphuru-senpai
biar saya jadi puro kaya kamu, ehue,

on serious note : will finish my 2 diffs on sunday (i hope)
something came up, i hope it's done next week
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
Placement only done
http://puu.sh/8j2Sf.zip
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
yea, thanks rui!

will add it later after in front of computer

edit: oh maan t/201229&start=0
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
sorry this ver is a little old. so I wrong upload. plz update again.
http://puu.sh/8mOBA.zip
RandF
1,249 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
Nice song!
FELT <3

tags suggetion:
Kamisirasawa Keine
plain asia

lunatic diff is too hard for me, sorry not to do test play...

good luck~☆


-no kds please-
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
@rui : updated
thanks rui

RandomEffect wrote:

Nice song!
FELT <3

tags suggetion:
Kamisirasawa Keine
plain asia

lunatic diff is too hard for me, sorry not to do test play...

good luck~☆


-no kds please-
thanks for the star <3
will update the tags after pending
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
aaa sorry for the long wait orz http://puu.sh/8FdeX.rar
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
tenks nyoo~!
also please redownload.
normal still in progress though :^)
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
All finished my diff. so late sorry.
http://puu.sh/8HOgk.zip
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
updated, thx rui,

~(-o-)~
P A N
2,357 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
[Lunatic]

I think the NC on the first part is not fit well, 00:23:110 (1) / 00:24:443 (1) - remove NC and add on 00:24:776 (2) instead.
00:26:110 (1) - remove NC and add on 00:26:776 (3) instead for the pattern.
00:34:776 (1,1) - remove NC and add on 00:35:443 (2) instead.
00:36:776 (1,3) - swap NC for the pattern.
00:39:776 (1,4) - swap NC and remove NC on 00:41:110 (1).
00:43:221 (5) - if remove reverse and add note instead would be fit with cymbal nicely. also add NC on the note you add.
00:44:610 (4) - stack?
00:45:276 (2) - why spacing suddenly short?
00:44:943 (1) - I think NC here is not a good idea but I also don't have any idea :3
00:48:776 (5,1) - swap NC.
00:58:110 (5) - force flow imo.
01:25:110 (1) - this NC is unnecessary imo. or you just remove NC on 01:24:776 (1), NC both is not fit.
01:26:110 (6) - add NC.
well please check the NC, I think it's not fit but your pattern is fine though. NC like on big white tick of the beginning of vocal.
01:48:193 (3) - I don't hear any stream here, and it also not fit with music so remove it.
01:51:443 (4) - perfect stack.
02:10:110 (1,2) - this spacing is hard to read.
02:20:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - why stream here, circle on red tick, white tick and triple on the 2nd red tick is also fine if you want to stream that much.
02:28:776 (2,3,4,5) - now why you use 1/2 slider but I think it's fit with music better than 3/4 so maybe fix the first part as well.
03:00:110 (1) - spread to two circles would be fit with both whistle and vocal sound.
03:02:443 (1) - end on 03:02:693 and add note on 03:02:776 instead, really more fit.
I think 03:08:776 (2,3,4) 's spacing should be larger than 03:07:276 (1,2,3).
03:10:110 (1) - remove NC.
03:20:943 (4) - you miss the strong clap sound. please add the note to it.
03:23:610 (6) - spread it to two circles to fit with vocal.
don't forget to check the NC :X

[Rui]

01:48:610 (1) - remove NC. unnecessary.
01:53:943 (1) - ^
02:01:776 (1) - ^
02:06:610 (7) - can be better blanket.
remove 02:10:276 (4) and add note on 02:10:110 and 02:10:443 instead is more fit.
02:59:443 (1) - remove NC?
I think after the last kial part NC is a bit... random even if you follow something, it's really too often.

[nya]

00:43:110 (2) - hmmmm spread it to two circle and add finish plus NC on the note on big white tick?
what about swap NC on 01:30:776 (1,2) and remove NC on 01:32:776 (1) ? I think it's more fit nya
03:09:610 (2) - 1/2 instead and add note on 03:10:110 ? or extend your slider to 03:10:110 because I think 03:10:110 need to have a note to make beginner easier to catch the beat.
03:15:443 (1) - remove NC? since this note is not that strong to add NC and the previous combo is too short.
dat end D:

GL :3
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui

P A N wrote:

[Rui]
01:48:610 (1) - remove NC. unnecessary. ok
01:53:943 (1) - ^ ok
02:01:776 (1) - ^ ok
02:06:610 (7) - can be better blanket. ok
remove 02:10:276 (4) and add note on 02:10:110 and 02:10:443 instead is more fit. no fixed.
02:59:443 (1) - remove NC? ok
I think after the last kial part NC is a bit... random even if you follow something, it's really too often.
You're right. I redid to add newcombo ><
Thank you for modding P A N

http://puu.sh/9GGgg.osu
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya

P A N wrote:

[Lunatic]

I think the NC on the first part is not fit well, 00:23:110 (1) / 00:24:443 (1) - remove NC and add on 00:24:776 (2) instead.okay
00:26:110 (1) - remove NC and add on 00:26:776 (3) instead for the pattern. okay
00:34:776 (1,1) - remove NC and add on 00:35:443 (2) instead.okay
00:36:776 (1,3) - swap NC for the pattern.okay
00:39:776 (1,4) - swap NC and remove NC on 00:41:110 (1).okay
00:43:221 (5) - if remove reverse and add note instead would be fit with cymbal nicely. also add NC on the note you add.keep it for now because it's 1/3
00:44:610 (4) - stack? i like how they overlaping each other
00:45:276 (2) - why spacing suddenly short? okay
00:44:943 (1) - I think NC here is not a good idea but I also don't have any idea :3 okay, move nc
00:48:776 (5,1) - swap NC.okay
00:58:110 (5) - force flow imo.okay
01:25:110 (1) - this NC is unnecessary imo. or you just remove NC on 01:24:776 (1), NC both is not fit.done
01:26:110 (6) - add NC.kay
well please check the NC, I think it's not fit but your pattern is fine though. NC like on big white tick of the beginning of vocal.
01:48:193 (3) - I don't hear any stream here, and it also not fit with music so remove it.keep it for now because it's just slider repeat
01:51:443 (4) - perfect stack.okay
02:10:110 (1,2) - this spacing is hard to read.kay, stack instead
02:20:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - why stream here, circle on red tick, white tick and triple on the 2nd red tick is also fine if you want to stream that much.kay removed
02:28:776 (2,3,4,5) - now why you use 1/2 slider but I think it's fit with music better than 3/4 so maybe fix the first part as well.ok
03:00:110 (1) - spread to two circles would be fit with both whistle and vocal sound.nice catch, but i'll keep it for now since i'm following drum
03:02:443 (1) - end on 03:02:693 and add note on 03:02:776 instead, really more fit.03:02:776 < i didn't hear any sounds here
I think 03:08:776 (2,3,4) 's spacing should be larger than 03:07:276 (1,2,3).kay
03:10:110 (1) - remove NC.woops
03:20:943 (4) - you miss the strong clap sound. please add the note to it.slider repeat instead
03:23:610 (6) - spread it to two circles to fit with vocal. nice catch actually, but i don't have bright idea
don't forget to check the NC :X lazyyyyyyyyyyyy :x

GL :3
thanks PAN
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya

P A N wrote:

[nya]

00:43:110 (2) - hmmmm spread it to two circle and add finish plus NC on the note on big white tick? i want to keep this part all slider :3
what about swap NC on 01:30:776 (1,2) and remove NC on 01:32:776 (1) ? I think it's more fit nya oops fixed
03:09:610 (2) - 1/2 instead and add note on 03:10:110 ? or extend your slider to 03:10:110 because I think 03:10:110 need to have a note to make beginner easier to catch the beat. fixed on my own :3
03:15:443 (1) - remove NC? since this note is not that strong to add NC and the previous combo is too short. sure
dat end D: lol rip sliders

GL :3
thx for modding
update
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Runway Drive(BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 85230
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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Title:Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix)
TitleUnicode:Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix)
Artist:FELT
ArtistUnicode:FELT
Creator:Freya
Version:10nya's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:NAGI☆ Boyz Party Grow Color c85 Maika Silver Drive Kamisirasawa Keine plain asia
BeatmapID:419158
BeatmapSetID:142585

[Difficulty]
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256,192,247443,12,4,252776,0:1:0:0:
RandF
1,249 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. add guest names in tags
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:110 (7,8) - blanket correctly
  2. 00:30:443 (2,4) - not good overlapping
  3. 00:32:110 (5,6,7,8) - I perfer not to stack. hard to see?
  4. 00:42:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend to make stream pattern. reverse sliders are hard to find rhythm
  5. 00:45:443 (2,3) - change their positions?
  6. 01:03:443 (2) - rotate clockwise more. I prefer to make symmetric angle as 01:03:776 (3) -
  7. 01:24:776 (8) - how about ending at 01:25:026?
  8. 01:33:443 (1,2) - make symmetrically
  9. 01:43:443 (3,4) - suggetion
  10. 01:48:193 (3) - 1/4 reverse is necessary? I suggest to add a circle at 01:48:276- simply
  11. 02:02:110 (1,2) - make parallel correctly
  12. 02:08:610 (1) - 1/6 beat continues, doesn't it? suggetion~
  13. 02:46:943 (4) - long slider is not suitable, imo. how about this?
  14. 03:04:776 (1,2,3,4) - hard to find rhythm. stream(all circles) is better, imo
  15. 03:51:110 (4) - NC?
  16. 04:08:943 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest to consider NC in accordance with 1/4 rhythm
  17. 04:11:443 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - u~m, I prefer to conform DS
[10nya's Normal]
  1. 03:19:776 (2) - end at 03:19:943
[rui's Hard]
  1. recheck tags (文字化け？）
  2. 00:56:776 (1,2) - blanket correctly
  3. 02:22:610 (2,3) - ^
  4. 02:49:443 (1,2,3,4,1) - DS揃えた方が良いと思いますが。。。
  5. 02:51:110 (4,6) - avoid overlap. 少し流れも悪いような気がします
  6. 03:12:610 (6) - curved sliderが良いと思います。
  7. 03:43:943 (2,4) - blanket correctly
I'm so happy that this map is headed for ranked!
FELT <3
~Good Luck~
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
[rui's Hard]
  1. recheck tags (文字化け？）fixed
  2. 00:56:776 (1,2) - blanket correctly fixed
  3. 02:22:610 (2,3) - ^ fixed
  4. 02:49:443 (1,2,3,4,1) - DS揃えた方が良いと思いますが。。。 揃えた
  5. 02:51:110 (4,6) - avoid overlap. 少し流れも悪いような気がします　被らない様に調整はしました。流れはそのままで
  6. 03:12:610 (6) - curved sliderが良いと思います。 fixed
  7. 03:43:943 (2,4) - blanket correctly fixed
Thank you for mod RandomEffect

http://puu.sh/9ZdMj.osu (didn't fix tag)
Last edited by rui , edited 1 time in total.
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
Hey! Requested mod from a long time ago.

[10nya's Normal:]
01:00:443 (2,3) - this could be confusing to newbie players so I would suggest you to change it, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789372 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789375 (and it might actually flow better)
03:14:110 (1,2,3) - this is also rather confusing imo, it would be better if you tried placing (3) a little above and not beside (2) so for example like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789402
04:02:110 (1,2) - I'm sure you can make this blanket nicer :P - http://puu.sh/9Z3u7/03a9cb5ab9.jpg

That's all for this diff, it was pretty nice, I didn't really find anything bad about it.

[rui's Hard:]

AiMod says that the tags are different in your difficulty - http://puu.sh/9Z4ih/7eb533220a.png it should be --> http://puu.sh/9Z4jU/f688ffddf2.png

00:36:610 (4,1) - this doesn't really look nice imo, I would try a different pattern, example: http://puu.sh/9Z5eU/fdac3e0dec.jpg - like this they don't overlap so it looks nicer in my opinion
00:45:776 (7,1) - nazi but I think you could make this blanket better, just move the end point of the slider down 1-2 grids
00:48:443 (2,3) - same as above ^ move the middle point one grid right and do the same with the end point
00:54:610 (2,4) - ^ move the end point a few grids down
01:28:776 (3,4,5) - why do you use different distance here? they don't sound different from each other, you should use equal spacing, on the screenshot I used 1,3 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789611 - http://puu.sh/9Z6bt/bb70b4d17d.jpg
01:37:943 (5) - it might flow better if (5) had a different direction, it will lead into (1) nicely so imo the flow will be better - http://puu.sh/9Z8Fd/2fe6e034cf.jpg
01:55:110 (4) - this is placed in a weird way, I think it doesn't flow well and that it's also confusing because of the jump, so try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789870
02:00:610 (6) - it's disturbing that you don't hit the beat in the middle of the slider so I would rather use a hit circle and shorten the slider - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789877
02:10:276 (4) - this sounds really weird because there are no big beats in the music (even though there are vocals here) so I think you should try maybe this: http://puu.sh/9ZagC/0fc7870507.jpg or at least remove the clap because it sounds too loud when there aren't any big beats
02:20:943 (4) - same as above ^
02:47:776 (4,5,6) - you use different distance again for no reason, try to use the same distance so that it will look nice and neat
03:17:610 (3,4) - nazi but they are a bit too close, try putting (4) a few grids to the right - http://puu.sh/9ZbMD/4a6683eece.jpg
03:19:443 (4) - nazi again >.< put this a bit to the left so that it won't reach 03:18:610 (1) - and it will also make a blanket with (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789988
03:24:776 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the song has a finish sound too, so it would fit in my opinion
03:43:943 (2,4) - nazi again but try to make the blanket nicer http://puu.sh/9ZbXl/c0649ad623.jpg

It was a pretty nice difficulty, I enjoyed playing it even though the patterns could be a little bit nicer :P

[Lunatic]
00:43:221 (5,1) - this doesn't feel right, you end the slider on a big beat and start the next slider on a red tick, it would be better if you started the slider on the white tick, it feels better to play - http://puu.sh/9Ze0v/2e3fbc5cff.jpg
01:00:276 (3) - it sounds bad that you didn't emphasize the beat in the middle of the slider, try this? - http://puu.sh/9Zeeh/202bad79bf.jpg
01:15:443 (1) - well this spinner is quite long, why don't you map it instead? but even if you don't do it, at least remove the clap, there isn't any loud sound so it doesn't fit imo >.<
01:55:943 (3,4) - I generally don't like this kind of flow - http://puu.sh/9Zfpd/3c51c8b2e5.jpg I would rather do something like this - http://puu.sh/9Zfxe/59d227cc44.jpg - but it's just an example
01:56:776 (1,2,3) - you can make this pattern nicer - http://puu.sh/9ZfCj/e832b0e3e4.jpg (and then also replace 01:57:943 (2) - )
02:00:443 (5) - there should be something starting at the end of this slider, ending the slider there doesn't fit well to the music - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790350 (just an example)
02:02:776 (3,4,5,6) - very nazi but put this a little up so that 02:02:110 (1,3) - these won't touch xD - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790417 (well to be honest I actually rotated them a bit)
02:05:776 (5,1) - same as 02:00:443 (5) -
02:13:776 (4) - it sounds like you missed a clap here
02:40:110 (1,2,3,4) - again very nazi but use equal distance please, it will look nicer http://puu.sh/9Zis0/9f2dc668d5.jpg --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790439
03:22:943 (4,5) - well imo this doesn't look nice, try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790444
03:35:110 (3) - missing clap from the beginning of the slider
03:36:776 (2) - missing clap from the end of the slider
03:40:443 (3) - add clap? (or did you purposely use only a whistle?)
04:00:943 (2,3,4,5,6) - place these a little upwards so that 04:00:443 (1,2) - they won't touch - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790475

That's all, it's a nice mapset, good luck! :3
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui

Mystyk wrote:

[rui's Hard:]

AiMod says that the tags are different in your difficulty - http://puu.sh/9Z4ih/7eb533220a.png it should be --> http://puu.sh/9Z4jU/f688ffddf2.png fixed

00:36:610 (4,1) - this doesn't really look nice imo, I would try a different pattern, example: http://puu.sh/9Z5eU/fdac3e0dec.jpg - like this they don't overlap so it looks nicer in my opinion this pattern is whistle sounds follow. no fixed
00:45:776 (7,1) - nazi but I think you could make this blanket better, just move the end point of the slider down 1-2 grids ok
00:48:443 (2,3) - same as above ^ move the middle point one grid right and do the same with the end point ok
00:54:610 (2,4) - ^ move the end point a few grids down ok
01:28:776 (3,4,5) - why do you use different distance here? they don't sound different from each other, you should use equal spacing, on the screenshot I used 1,3 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789611 - http://puu.sh/9Z6bt/bb70b4d17d.jpg fixed I used 1.3 distance only.
01:37:943 (5) - it might flow better if (5) had a different direction, it will lead into (1) nicely so imo the flow will be better - http://puu.sh/9Z8Fd/2fe6e034cf.jpg ok
01:55:110 (4) - this is placed in a weird way, I think it doesn't flow well and that it's also confusing because of the jump, so try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789870 I am wrong placement :-O fixed
02:00:610 (6) - it's disturbing that you don't hit the beat in the middle of the slider so I would rather use a hit circle and shorten the slider - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789877 nope
02:10:276 (4) - this sounds really weird because there are no big beats in the music (even though there are vocals here) so I think you should try maybe this: http://puu.sh/9ZagC/0fc7870507.jpg or at least remove the clap because it sounds too loud when there aren't any big beats I see. fixed
02:20:943 (4) - same as above ^ fixed
02:47:776 (4,5,6) - you use different distance again for no reason, try to use the same distance so that it will look nice and neat fixed
03:17:610 (3,4) - nazi but they are a bit too close, try putting (4) a few grids to the right - http://puu.sh/9ZbMD/4a6683eece.jpg ok
03:19:443 (4) - nazi again >.< put this a bit to the left so that it won't reach 03:18:610 (1) - and it will also make a blanket with (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1789988 ok
03:24:776 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, the song has a finish sound too, so it would fit in my opinion ok
03:43:943 (2,4) - nazi again but try to make the blanket nicer http://puu.sh/9ZbXl/c0649ad623.jpg ok

It was a pretty nice difficulty, I enjoyed playing it even though the patterns could be a little bit nicer :P Thank you XD
Thank you for modding Mystyk. Your mod was useful. :)

http://puu.sh/9ZoNO.osu (didn't fix tag)
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
all issues has been fixed, thank you for the mods~

code
osu file format v13

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Drive(BYPT Planet sorrow 

#2 Venus Remix).mp3
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Title:Runway Drive (BYPT 

Planet sorrow #2 Venus 

Remix)
TitleUnicode:Runway Drive 

(BYPT Planet sorrow #2 

Venus Remix)
Artist:FELT
ArtistUnicode:FELT
Creator:Freya
Version:10nya's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:NAGI☆ Boyz Party Grow 

Color c85 Maika Silver 

Drive Kamisirasawa Keine 

plain asia
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0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,284,166110,2,0,P|

288:292|248:324,1,90,2|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,332,166776,2,0,P|

120:324|80:292,1,90,0|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,220,167443,6,0,P|

132:152|132:76,1,135,2|

0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,52,168276,2,0,P|

280:40|360:56,1,135,2|

0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,124,169110,1,8,0:0:0:0

:
468,188,169443,2,0,P|

472:240|464:284,2,90,0|8|

0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,124,170443,6,0,B|

316:112|316:112|

216:144,1,180,8|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,171443,2,0,P|

100:140|56:116,2,90,2|8|

0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,224,172443,1,8,0:0:0:0

:
268,276,172776,6,0,P|

320:288|404:240,1,135,2|

0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,173610,2,0,P|

356:116|404:32,1,135,2|

2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,88,174443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,176,174776,2,0,L|

472:280,1,90,0|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,300,175443,6,0,P|

320:312|248:232,1,180,4|

0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,172,176443,2,0,P|

148:180|92:256,1,135,8|

0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,308,177276,2,0,P|

88:336|160:304,1,135,0|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,178110,6,0,B|

280:252|344:296|344:296|

384:216|348:148,1,270,2|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,88,179443,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,64,179776,2,0,L|

112:64,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|

0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,88,180776,6,0,B|

344:36|420:88|420:88|

400:136|400:136|432:200|

360:248,1,315,2|0,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,272,182276,2,0,L|

224:284,1,45,0|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,216,182943,2,0,L|

104:160,1,45,0|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,84,183443,6,0,P|

168:60|216:60,1,90,4|

2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,120,184110,2,0,L|

240:220,1,90,2|2,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,264,184776,2,0,P|

356:259|395:237,1,90,2|

2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,152,185443,2,0,L|

395:65,2,90,2|2|4,0:0|

0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,332,188776,6,4,L|

216:228,1,90,4|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,168,189610,2,0,L|

116:104,1,45,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,100,189943,2,0,L|

180:56,1,45,0|2,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,190443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,92,190776,2,0,P|

400:100|448:80,2,90,0|8|

2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,191776,6,8,B|

256:104|256:104|264:168|

228:232,1,180
160,276,192776,1,2,0:0:0:0

:
233,221,193110,2,8,P|

297:217|360:308,1,180
268,308,194110,5,2,0:0:0:0

:
136,276,194610,2,0,L|

40:256,2,90
172,304,195443,2,0,B|

184:236|208:192|208:192|

212:116,1,180,2|0,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,68,196443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,32,196776,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,88,197110,2,8,B|

72:88|72:88|64:156|-

4:188,2,180
164,112,198610,2,0,P|

224:120|292:80,1,135,0|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,44,199443,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,80,199776,2,0,L|

464:136,1,45,8|0,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,212,200276,2,0,P|

428:256|448:348,1,135,0|

2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,360,201443,5,0,0:0:0:0

:
188,304,201776,2,0,L|

168:216,1,90,8|2,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,140,202443,2,0,P|

68:144|0:244,2,180,8|0|

8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,160,204443,1,8,0:0:0:0

:
376,112,204776,6,0,L|

464:132,1,90,4|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,220,205443,2,0,L|

452:308,1,90,0|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,206110,2,0,B|

296:344|288:272|288:272|

256:276|228:252|228:252|

128:252,1,270,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207443,12,4,210110

,0:0:0:0:
256,260,211110,5,8,0:0:0:0

:
176,220,211443,2,0,P|

124:188|104:68,2,180,2|0|

2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,213110,1,8,0:0:0:0

:
416,256,213776,2,8,P|

468:224|488:104,2,180
332,284,215443,6,0,L|

232:284,1,90,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,228,216443,2,8,B|

96:152|96:152|48:120|

48:48,2,180
32,308,218110,2,0,P|

88:316|156:252,2,135,2|0|

0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,220,219443,6,0,B|

8:136|8:136|20:84|

84:56,1,180,2|0,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,116,220443,1,8,0:0:0:0

:
216,64,220776,2,0,B|

262:83|274:135|274:135|

266:219,1,180,4|0,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,308,221776,1,8,0:0:0:0

:
332,336,222110,6,0,P|

372:336|420:308,1,90,2|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,223110,1,8,0:0:0:0

:
268,116,223443,2,0,P|

216:108|124:140,2,135,2|

0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,224776,6,0,L|

300:296,1,90,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,300,225443,2,0,L|

204:208,1,90,0|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,124,226110,6,0,P|

116:100|12:244,1,270,4|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,280,227276,2,0,B|

80:304|112:340|112:340|

152:336,1,135,4|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,244,228443,1,0,0:0:0:0

:
336,164,228776,6,8,P|

340:120|316:76,1,90,4|

2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,229443,2,0,P|

204:132|160:156,1,90,2|

2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,244,230110,2,2,B|

200:288|180:336|180:336|

88:376|8:336|8:336|-

16:280|24:248,1,360,2|

4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,196,231776,6,0,B|

112:132|108:84|108:84|

192:84,1,180,8|10,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,148,232776,2,0,B|

288:164|288:164|304:200|

304:200|360:216|436:200|

440:116,1,270,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,72,234110,6,0,B|

292:36|292:36|200:76|

104:48,1,270,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,132,235443,2,0,B|

104:184|104:184|100:224|

100:224|148:264|128:288|

152:340|216:344,1,270,2|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,252,236776,6,0,B|

284:236|316:312|316:312|

388:172,1,270,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,108,238110,2,0,B|

212:108|212:108|180:140|

180:140|68:140,1,270,2|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,232,239443,6,0,B|

184:232|184:232|216:264|

216:264|328:264,1,270,2|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,320,240776,2,0,B|

440:260|384:188|384:188|

428:148|392:96|392:96|

356:88,1,270,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,64,242110,6,0,B|

216:64|216:64|176:124|

176:124|132:156|

48:108,1,270,4|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,196,243443,2,0,P|

92:224|272:160,1,270,2|

8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,104,244776,6,0,B|

404:60|404:60|388:200|

420:264,1,270,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,320,246110,2,0,B|

292:364|292:364|308:224|

276:160,1,270,2|8,0:0|

0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,247443,12,4,252776

,0:1:0:0:
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya

Mystyk wrote:

Hey! Requested mod from a long time ago.

[rui's Hard:]

AiMod says that the tags are different in your difficulty - http://puu.sh/9Z4ih/7eb533220a.png it should be --> http://puu.sh/9Z4jU/f688ffddf2.png done

[Lunatic]
00:43:221 (5,1) - this doesn't feel right, you end the slider on a big beat and start the next slider on a red tick, it would be better if you started the slider on the white tick, it feels better to play - http://puu.sh/9Ze0v/2e3fbc5cff.jpg ok
01:00:276 (3) - it sounds bad that you didn't emphasize the beat in the middle of the slider, try this? - http://puu.sh/9Zeeh/202bad79bf.jpg ok
01:15:443 (1) - well this spinner is quite long, why don't you map it instead? but even if you don't do it, at least remove the clap, there isn't any loud sound so it doesn't fit imo >.< map slider part
01:55:943 (3,4) - I generally don't like this kind of flow - http://puu.sh/9Zfpd/3c51c8b2e5.jpg I would rather do something like this - http://puu.sh/9Zfxe/59d227cc44.jpg - but it's just an example ok
01:56:776 (1,2,3) - you can make this pattern nicer - http://puu.sh/9ZfCj/e832b0e3e4.jpg (and then also replace 01:57:943 (2) - ) okay
02:00:443 (5) - there should be something starting at the end of this slider, ending the slider there doesn't fit well to the music - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790350 (just an example) end sldr is not really weird imo, i'll keep in mind tho
02:02:776 (3,4,5,6) - very nazi but put this a little up so that 02:02:110 (1,3) - these won't touch xD - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790417 (well to be honest I actually rotated them a bit) well fixed
02:05:776 (5,1) - same as 02:00:443 (5) - same as before
02:13:776 (4) - it sounds like you missed a clap here fixed
02:40:110 (1,2,3,4) - again very nazi but use equal distance please, it will look nicer http://puu.sh/9Zis0/9f2dc668d5.jpg --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790439 done
03:22:943 (4,5) - well imo this doesn't look nice, try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790444 fixed
03:35:110 (3) - missing clap from the beginning of the slider ok
03:36:776 (2) - missing clap from the end of the slider ok
03:40:443 (3) - add clap? (or did you purposely use only a whistle?) ok
04:00:943 (2,3,4,5,6) - place these a little upwards so that 04:00:443 (1,2) - they won't touch - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1790475 ok

That's all, it's a nice mapset, good luck! :3
thanks for modding Mystyk :D

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. add guest names in tags done
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:110 (7,8) - blanket correctlyok
  2. 00:30:443 (2,4) - not good overlapping ok
  3. 00:32:110 (5,6,7,8) - I perfer not to stack. hard to see? did modify the placement
  4. 00:42:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend to make stream pattern. reverse sliders are hard to find rhythm previous modder said it'd confusing if i place stream there because 1/3 beat
  5. 00:45:443 (2,3) - change their positions? done
  6. 01:03:443 (2) - rotate clockwise more. I prefer to make symmetric angle as 01:03:776 (3) - ok
  7. 01:24:776 (8) - how about ending at 01:25:026? why not
  8. 01:33:443 (1,2) - make symmetrically symmetry already o.o
  9. 01:43:443 (3,4) - suggetion nice
  10. 01:48:193 (3) - 1/4 reverse is necessary? I suggest to add a circle at 01:48:276- simply ok
  11. 02:02:110 (1,2) - make parallel correctly ok
  12. 02:08:610 (1) - 1/6 beat continues, doesn't it? suggetion~ ok
  13. 02:46:943 (4) - long slider is not suitable, imo. how about this? ok
  14. 03:04:776 (1,2,3,4) - hard to find rhythm. stream(all circles) is better, imo keep it for now
  15. 03:51:110 (4) - NC? ok
  16. 04:08:943 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest to consider NC in accordance with 1/4 rhythm i don't really get it, but i guess fixed
  17. 04:11:443 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - u~m, I prefer to conform DS b-b-but i like it
I'm so happy that this map is headed for ranked! i'm happy too you modded my map >.<
FELT <3 give some love to maika
~Good Luck~
thanks for modding Rand
Ciyus Miapah
3,028 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
nice map, but timing still not good.
i try this map with HR and the result is my hit is early

i check the timing and that was right!
the offset is 758 not 777

so the offset is -19ms

hope this help
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
really? i'd ask some more people for offset then, i thought it was ok already
Ciyus Miapah
3,028 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah

Freya wrote:

really? i'd ask some more people for offset then, i thought it was ok already
its okay, but i have some prove

^look at hit error pls (in center down)

the timing should be put perfectly
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Hi requested from Dark Fang's Queue Team




  • General
  1. inconsistency combo colours for all diffs. be sure make them consistent each other
  2. Yang di Fort bener. coba dengerin 25% dan musiknya agak mulai dluan (sblm beat stanza).i would say offset 750 (confirmed with Hinsvar)


  • 10nya's Normal
  1. Karena Normal yang "under 3 star" itu emang ada alasan kok AR 3 tp AR 3 disini bener2 lambat dan AR spread ke other diff jadi berantakan. use AR 4,3 instead. HP OD 3
  2. 00:44:776 - drum ini walau drum nya biasa2 aja tp imo ini penting di map beb. remove repeat and 1/1 slider disini (cuma taste)
  3. 00:46:110 - remove whistle nya. drum nya gak kuat. gak perlu sampe hitsound keras. ngangetin jg sih
  4. 00:50:110 - ^
  5. 00:51:443 - ^
  6. 00:51:443 (2) - dan imo curve slidernya tiba2 rada beda dari biasanya. biar flownya skalian jg lebih bagus, drag tail nya ke 352,136
  7. 00:56:776 - 00:59:443 - sampe 01:03:443 - tiap stanza imo harus remove whistlenya. suaranya terlalu keras dan ngangetin while musik nya drum pelan
  8. 01:03:776 (3,4,1) - coba arrange placement nya jadi http://puu.sh/axehs/66113270ab.jpg ? imo flow yg terlalu naik terus kadang kerasa aneh tp cuma taste aja sih, gw lebih prefer zig zag
  9. 01:04:443 (1) - addition normal di tail, ini lagi kena bug jadinya.. ya gak bunyi. daripada nunggu bug di benerin (gak tau kapan), mending jaga2 :3
  10. 01:21:443 (2,4) - blanket please :< . ekor kira2 376,296 (kalo mw perfect ya utak atik lagi soalnya)
  11. 01:26:110 (1) - ritme nya bisa improve disini. 2 1/1 slider should be fine. 01:26:776 - ada pianonya beb jadinya kerasa aneh di skip
  12. 01:36:110 (4) - ini designnya bisa lebih rapi kalo slidernya di blanket in jg beb (gak ngatur sih sampe detail krn males hehe) ya kira2 kea http://puu.sh/axwtp/0073372430.jpg
  13. 01:44:443 (3) - stack di kepala 01:42:443 (1) - please biar rapi :< . nazi sih tp penting imo
  14. 02:11:110 (3) - karena terlihat beb NC'ed tiap 2 stanza. NC disini biar konsisten
  15. 02:13:443 (5) - entah kenapa headnya kerasa empty buat ku.. hmm coba drum whistle beb? *taste doang*
  16. 02:19:110 (3) - kalo menurut teori sih cymbal lebih kerasa feel nya kalo di map dimana kita perlu teken object nya jadi.. circle dan 1/1 slider instead repeat slider please :<
  17. 02:22:110 (3) - sama kea 02:11:110 (3) - , atau NC 02:23:110 (4) - jg boleh :<
  18. 02:24:110 (5) - sama kea 02:13:443 (5) - (blame music gaje nya)
  19. 02:28:776 (2,3) - daripada whistle (imo kerasanya terlalu keras), clap di semua head dan tail lebih cocok sih kalo denger dari drum nya jg
  20. 02:32:776 (3) - NC, krn 02:35:443 (1,2,3,4) - NC'ed 2 stanza. konsistensi lol
  21. 02:40:776 - nazi sih, krn cuma vocal doang. pergantiannya lebih bagus kalo volume nya diturunin disini. sekitar 20%
  22. 02:44:776 (1) - imo ritme nya jg masih bisa improve, 02:45:610 - suara drum kuat nya ada disini dan di skip :< , aku sih saranin jadi kea gni aja http://puu.sh/axxTq/b068707ea4.jpg
  23. 02:47:443 (1) - nazi, imo krn lengkungan slider kurang jelas. player jd bingung kemana flownya. drag 2nd node tengah nya ke 140,156 biar lengkungan slidernya jg lebih nampak rapi
  24. 02:49:443 (4) - kalo dibolehin nazi lagi , move ke 448,204 biar lengkungan flow nya seimbang jadinya kerasa lebih nyaman dimainkan
  25. 02:54:776 (4) - i smell something copas dari 02:53:610 (2,3,4,1) - /runs. well disini aku saranin buat lengkungin slidernya ke arah kanan biar flow dari tail ke next slidernya searah dan jadi lebih natural https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1873635
  26. 02:57:610 - why skip this time beb? :< , sebenarnya perlu di map sih tp dilihat dari pattern mu, keliatan gak bakal di fix krn udh bagus. well just sayin
  27. 03:04:110 (2,4) - ada 2 saran jadi satu saja disini. yang pertama slider (2) imo lebih rapi kalo di curve ke kiri jadinya kea pattern apa ya.. pokoknya gtu, dan slider (4) imo flownya rada maksa jadi bisa lebih di smooth dan natural. gampangannya kea https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1873646
  28. 03:09:943 (3) - gak nemu alasan kenapa harus ngemap red tick disini krn gak ada vocal dan musik pun gak keras. well aku lebih prefer remove ini terus add circle di 03:10:110 -
  29. 03:38:110 (3,1) - swap NC here and swap NC buat 03:40:776 (3,1) - jg. ini beat nya 03:40:776 - harus di NC, apalagi cymbalnya yg keras x.x
  30. 03:47:276 (2) - gak ada cymbal disini. remove finishnya + aku denger gak ada musik kuat di red tick jadi lebih bagus kalo slidernya jadi 1/1 slider dan mulai di 03:47:443 -


  • rui's Hard
  1. try use CS 3,6 /3,7 since the Normal diff is really easy with so many long sliders and 2/1 gap of rhythms? it playable with nicely too
  2. 00:35:110 (2,1) - imo the jump would be nice if do on the stanza (00:35:443 - i mean) because feel of the music too. how about arrange these sliders like http://puu.sh/ayieD/8d6556267b.jpg
  3. 00:43:943 (2,3) - from here i feel a kinda bad flow. maybe just a taste but try this flow instead http://puu.sh/ayrGy/79588ee1b3.jpg ?
  4. 00:43:526 - try change use S:C6 back here rather than in 00:43:776 - ? i know this is nazi but no sliderslide at custom soft 4 and the slide having a sound making inconsistency and a kinda noisy sound while the music calm as well (if you don't want be busy to change whole part which same as this. add soft-sliderslide4 lol)
  5. 00:46:610 (2) - imo the overlap could improve here altho just a little bit. hmm try change it and 00:47:110 (3) - like http://puu.sh/ayrZI/e0c5913e10.jpg for neater overlap and better flow?
  6. 00:51:443 (5) - when hear the music i feel this one really need to give NC. also the combo kinda long so keeping the consistency is nice
  7. 00:54:193 - , 02:19:526 - 02:44:860 - 03:08:860 - 04:10:193 - same meantion as 00:43:526 -
  8. 00:55:110 (3,4) - if i were you i would stack the circle on (2)'s tail since i kinda not like the previous flow (i feel it kinda forced) and i will make proper blanket between the circle and (4) slider as http://puu.sh/ayskB/4f7c644048.jpg
  9. 01:01:776 (6,7,1) - this is just a personal taste, since i like zig zag flow and it become one of used flow by mappers at 2014, try zig zag flow and up flow on (1)'s slider? i mean like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1875322
  10. 01:04:943 (1) - i saw what music that followed on spinner but imo the end of spinner not really good since the music already dissapear at 01:08:443 - , how about end the spinner at 01:08:610 - to follow the vocal , move the greenline from here to 01:08:693 - with 25%?
  11. 01:33:443 (1) - imo the rhythm kinda undermapped and usually music strong on stanza as 01:34:110 - didn't fit mapped with tail which no need to click to get that :< , hmm try this rhythm http://puu.sh/aysQn/060143971a.jpg with jump at stanza (3rd slider) ?
  12. 01:40:776 (6) - imo the clap making inconsistency while the music isn't snare drum too. remove the clap better
  13. 01:43:276 (4) - NC for consistency and avoiding kinda long combo (or i would say long combo than usual i saw here w)
  14. 01:44:776 (1) - finish on head since i heard such strong cymbal here
  15. 01:46:443 (2,4) - well i don't really like to see the overlap on so imo it would better if you arrange them with consistent of spacing. just like http://puu.sh/aytbI/c044d61a60.jpg
  16. 01:49:943 (5) - imo the rhythm can improved here because you skipped 01:50:110 - which has strong music. how about this rhtyhm instead http://puu.sh/aythQ/7e8e1946e9.jpg ?
  17. 01:55:276 (5) - ^ , 01:55:443 - is stronger than before so i really suggest to map it >_<
  18. 02:00:610 (6) - , 02:05:943 (6) - both same as 01:49:943 (5) -
  19. 02:11:110 (7,8,1) - actually the flow between these can improved too imo, since i feel kinda unnatural here. actually i prefer http://puu.sh/aytxs/8f00602d78.jpg this flow instead but yeah need to replacement for few of next objects lol
  20. 02:21:776 (7) - hmm imo the flow can improved too here, well try move this circle to 304,200 instead? just my taste >_<
  21. 02:32:443 - just a nazi thing, since the music still appear until 02:32:610 - while on 02:32:776 - just has a vocal, imo delay break needed here. drag the break time until 02:32:776 - just like http://puu.sh/aytMl/ad854742cf.jpg
  22. 02:52:110 (1) - same as 01:33:443 (1) -
  23. 03:00:443 (3,4) - how about ctrl+G these circles since both music and music on 03:00:776 - are louder than 03:00:610 - so giving jump and stanza would feel nicely here
  24. 03:24:776 - the sound of cymbal somehow almost same as customhitfinish4 here so use S:C4 instead?
  25. 03:28:610 (2) - since the music becoming calm here and 03:28:776 - the vocal is feel strong so use circle and 1/1 slider to map it (just make sure 03:28:776 - map this one with circle or slider's head)
  26. 04:04:443 (5,6) - well nazi, can you increase the spacing slightly to avoid the overlap and make the pattern neater? http://puu.sh/ayubA/c307f192f3.jpg
  27. Nice Hard ~


  • Lunatic
  1. 00:29:776 (9) - suara di 00:29:943 - masih keras jadinya kerasa aneh dengan ritme ini. tau sih di blue tick ada suara tp lebih bagus kalo km pendekin slider berhenti nya di tick merah terus add circle di 00:30:026 - jadinya triple. untuk placement bisa kea http://puu.sh/ayuV2/834c7bb6c7.jpg
  2. 00:29:110 (7,8) - nazi, blanket nya bisa lebih bagus, contoh http://puu.sh/ayv8U/85ab288390.jpg (pke appoarch circle sbg dasar blanket kalo kesusahan ~)
  3. 00:31:443 (1,3,5,7) - whistle nya berisik banget disini krn whistle tiap 1/2. aku lebih saranin hapus semua whistle di circle ini. biar emphasize nya jg pas
  4. 00:32:776 (1) - add finish di kepala. cymbal :D
  5. 00:33:110 (2) - ini flownya bisa tetep circular flow sih kalo km ctrl+G. terasa lebih smooth kok
  6. 00:36:776 (6) - overlapnya jelek, bisa lebih rapi kok patternnya ini. gampang, cuma move ke 192,40 (flow ofc masih tetep enak)
  7. 00:37:610 (2,4) - whistle remove disini. gap 1/2 buat whistle terus itu kerasa berisik (kecuali main setting volume biar pas sama musik)
  8. 00:26:943 (2,4) - ^
  9. 00:43:443 (1) - finish di kepala, cymbal nya strong banget :<
  10. 00:49:943 (5) - krn jumpnya jauh banget, kasih NC disini biar kebaca 1/2 jump. biasanya kalo gni mikir nya 1/1 lol
  11. 00:49:943 - 00:50:776 - whistlenya berisik banget soalnya tiap 1/2 di whistle. you should removed some of them :<
  12. 00:52:276 (3) - vocal di 00:52:610 - walau kecil tp aneh kalo di map sama tail :< , 00:52:443 - jg kerasa penting jadinya pendekin slidernya sampe di whitetick 00:52:443 - terus add note di redtick nya
  13. 00:54:110 (1) - finish at head because cymbal
  14. 00:57:276 (2) - flow bisa lebih rapi dan enak kalo move slider ini ke 196,208 terus 00:57:776 (3) - 320,160 00:57:943 (4) - 112,112. kea gni http://puu.sh/azHf0/af44630f5a.jpg
  15. 01:01:610 - ada kick sound disini. should be mapped :< , ganti jadi http://puu.sh/azHiL/89089de0e3.jpg dan slidernya ngejump. sedangkan (5) itu jadi triplet
  16. 01:02:610 (2) - krn suara di whitetick dan blue tick disini sama2 jelas. better rhythm should be like http://puu.sh/azHrq/c8b7011128.jpg
  17. 01:04:776 (1) - ini harus jump, krn musik cymbalnya keras banget. kalo aku sih bakal move ke 416,216 tp dimana aja terserah asal ngejump
  18. 01:18:110 (5) - NC :< , konsistensi
  19. 01:22:776 (3) - ini flow lebih bagus kalo di ctrl+G, 01:23:110 (4) - ofc ini juga
  20. 01:24:776 (8) - better kalo di shorten ke red tick aja. jump 1/4 kek gni imo terlalu mendadak jadi rada gak ke baca
  21. 01:29:110 (2) - move ke 484,200 biar circle nya lebih gampang dibaca >_<
  22. 01:26:110 - kiai seharusnya mulai disini kyk other diffs :< (kiainya gak pas di vocal jg)
  23. 01:30:943 (6) - flownya bisa lebih natural kalo ke 480,192 here
  24. 01:34:110 (3) - you can make better blanket here actually. the blanket kinda off :< http://puu.sh/azUON/490b98c551.jpg
  25. 01:43:776 (5) - overlap somehow sekarang udah jadi sesuatu yang dilupakan pada jaman ini. move 128,124 biar lebih rapi
  26. 01:44:776 (4) - NC + finish at head. because stanza and cymbal
  27. 01:45:276 (5) - blanketnya jg off. move ke 160,232 for better blanket
  28. 02:08:776 (9) - NC krn musiknya udh ganti part. combonya too long jg
  29. 02:16:110 (1) - intentional anti jump? gw sih lebih prefer move ke 368,272 biarlebih gampang di read
  30. 02:19:443 (1) - finish at head because cymbal :<
  31. i still remember 5 months ago i modded your map and i felt so stress at that moment because so many problems i need to mention. but now i'm glad, you're improving a lot here!
  32. Gw udah cek semua patternnya dan flownya emang awesome.. kekurangan yg bisa improve a lot disini adalah hitsound. tau sih km hitsound sesuai piano or anything dan bener tp gak sampe whistle 1/2 terus2an, berisik amat. antara gap 1/1 aja atau atur volume biar pas. Yang kedua, NC nya terlihat berantakan jadinya inconsistent (mostly), biasanya kalo insane NC itu disetiap stanza (whitetick panjang) jadinya teratur

Good Luck :oops:
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Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
makasih Xinely, btw selamat lebaran juga

  • for timing i'd use 750 like Xinely suggested
    applied all except
  1. 01:02:610 (2) - krn suara di whitetick dan blue tick disini sama2 jelas. better rhythm should be like http://puu.sh/azHrq/c8b7011128.jpg bueticknya nggak terlalu jelas imo
  2. 01:24:776 (8) - better kalo di shorten ke red tick aja. jump 1/4 kek gni imo terlalu mendadak jadi rada gak ke bacaerr, aku suka 1/4 jumpnya, keep dulu
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rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui

Xinely wrote:


  • rui's Hard
  1. try use CS 3,6 /3,7 since the Normal diff is really easy with so many long sliders and 2/1 gap of rhythms? it playable with nicely too no changed. bcz broke some blanketand and some part became overlap. so damage that this change will bring is too large.
  2. 00:35:110 (2,1) - imo the jump would be nice if do on the stanza (00:35:443 - i mean) because feel of the music too. how about arrange these sliders like http://puu.sh/ayieD/8d6556267b.jpg changed
  3. 00:43:943 (2,3) - from here i feel a kinda bad flow. maybe just a taste but try this flow instead http://puu.sh/ayrGy/79588ee1b3.jpg ? changed
  4. 00:43:526 - try change use S:C6 back here rather than in 00:43:776 - ? i know this is nazi but no sliderslide at custom soft 4 and the slide having a sound making inconsistency and a kinda noisy sound while the music calm as well (if you don't want be busy to change whole part which same as this. add soft-sliderslide4 lol) I am so lazy. I use soft-sliderslide4 _(:3 」∠)_
  5. 00:46:610 (2) - imo the overlap could improve here altho just a little bit. hmm try change it and 00:47:110 (3) - like http://puu.sh/ayrZI/e0c5913e10.jpg for neater overlap and better flow? no fixed.
  6. 00:51:443 (5) - when hear the music i feel this one really need to give NC. also the combo kinda long so keeping the consistency is nice ok
  7. 00:54:193 - , 02:19:526 - 02:44:860 - 03:08:860 - 04:10:193 - same meantion as 00:43:526 - _(:3 」∠)_
  8. 00:55:110 (3,4) - if i were you i would stack the circle on (2)'s tail since i kinda not like the previous flow (i feel it kinda forced) and i will make proper blanket between the circle and (4) slider as http://puu.sh/ayskB/4f7c644048.jpg changed placement this part
  9. 01:01:776 (6,7,1) - this is just a personal taste, since i like zig zag flow and it become one of used flow by mappers at 2014, try zig zag flow and up flow on (1)'s slider? i mean like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1875322 no fixed
  10. 01:04:943 (1) - i saw what music that followed on spinner but imo the end of spinner not really good since the music already dissapear at 01:08:443 - , how about end the spinner at 01:08:610 - to follow the vocal , move the greenline from here to 01:08:693 - with 25%? moved spinner but no change volume
  11. 01:33:443 (1) - imo the rhythm kinda undermapped and usually music strong on stanza as 01:34:110 - didn't fit mapped with tail which no need to click to get that :< , hmm try this rhythm http://puu.sh/aysQn/060143971a.jpg with jump at stanza (3rd slider) ? changed your rhythm
  12. 01:40:776 (6) - imo the clap making inconsistency while the music isn't snare drum too. remove the clap better ok
  13. 01:43:276 (4) - NC for consistency and avoiding kinda long combo (or i would say long combo than usual i saw here w) ok
  14. 01:44:776 (1) - finish on head since i heard such strong cymbal here ok
  15. 01:46:443 (2,4) - well i don't really like to see the overlap on so imo it would better if you arrange them with consistent of spacing. just like http://puu.sh/aytbI/c044d61a60.jpg I like this overlap. no changed
  16. 01:49:943 (5) - imo the rhythm can improved here because you skipped 01:50:110 - which has strong music. how about this rhtyhm instead http://puu.sh/aythQ/7e8e1946e9.jpg ? changed your rhythm
  17. 01:55:276 (5) - ^ , 01:55:443 - is stronger than before so i really suggest to map it >_< ok
  18. 02:00:610 (6) - , 02:05:943 (6) - both same as 01:49:943 (5) - ok
  19. 02:11:110 (7,8,1) - actually the flow between these can improved too imo, since i feel kinda unnatural here. actually i prefer http://puu.sh/aytxs/8f00602d78.jpg this flow instead but yeah need to replacement for few of next objects lol your placement is better imo. changed
  20. 02:21:776 (7) - hmm imo the flow can improved too here, well try move this circle to 304,200 instead? just my taste >_< changed placement this part
  21. 02:32:443 - just a nazi thing, since the music still appear until 02:32:610 - while on 02:32:776 - just has a vocal, imo delay break needed here. drag the break time until 02:32:776 - just like http://puu.sh/aytMl/ad854742cf.jpg ok
  22. 02:52:110 (1) - same as 01:33:443 (1) - ok
  23. 03:00:443 (3,4) - how about ctrl+G these circles since both music and music on 03:00:776 - are louder than 03:00:610 - so giving jump and stanza would feel nicely here good
  24. 03:24:776 - the sound of cymbal somehow almost same as customhitfinish4 here so use S:C4 instead? yes, used S:C4
  25. 03:28:610 (2) - since the music becoming calm here and 03:28:776 - the vocal is feel strong so use circle and 1/1 slider to map it (just make sure 03:28:776 - map this one with circle or slider's head) changed
  26. 04:04:443 (5,6) - well nazi, can you increase the spacing slightly to avoid the overlap and make the pattern neater? http://puu.sh/ayubA /c307f192f3.jpg fixed
  27. Nice Hard ~ Thank you :3
Thank you for modding Xinely. Your mod is easy to understand and useful. :)

http://puu.sh/aA49Z.zip update plz
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10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
some changed, thanks owo
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48,84,96110,2,0,P|24:128|28:184,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,256,96776,6,0,P|100:280|208:216,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,140,97776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,80,98110,2,0,P|332:76|372:96,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,136,98610,2,0,P|352:184|376:272,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,336,99443,6,0,L|176:352,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,296,100276,2,0,P|88:248|124:160,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,101110,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,101443,2,0,P|300:172|352:132,2,90,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,102443,6,8,P|168:152|240:268,1,180
304,320,103443,2,0,P|320:260|308:224,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,104443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104776,12,4,107443,0:0:0:0:
256,192,127443,12,4,128776,0:0:0:0:
164,200,129443,6,0,P|168:148|188:104,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,56,130110,2,0,P|304:60|348:80,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,252,131110,2,0,P|368:304|348:348,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,132443,2,0,B|168:112|168:112|136:156|88:160,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,236,133443,2,0,L|76:328,1,90,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,356,134110,6,0,P|204:360|252:328,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,180,135110,2,0,P|355:160|400:165,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,136110,2,0,P|180:232|112:136,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,56,137110,5,8,0:0:0:0:
292,56,137776,2,0,L|392:60,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,136,139110,2,0,L|28:140,2,90,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,140443,6,0,L|260:352,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,141110,2,8,B|428:344|444:296|444:296|444:224,1,180
380,168,142110,2,0,P|372:128|384:76,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,44,143110,6,8,P|224:96|152:192,1,180
76,224,144110,2,0,P|68:272|80:324,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,336,144776,6,0,P|212:344|264:332,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,216,145776,2,0,P|432:208|484:220,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,264,146776,2,0,P|260:272|208:260,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,147443,6,0,B|136:160|84:144|84:144|76:96,2,135,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,304,148776,2,0,P|176:352|220:372,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,288,149443,2,0,P|292:268|312:224,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,200,150110,6,0,B|180:148|180:148|120:160|84:100,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,56,152110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,212,152776,6,0,B|448:272|420:332|420:332|464:368|484:332,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,154776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,224,155443,6,0,P|88:164|104:120,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,76,156110,2,0,P|224:80|268:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,172,156776,2,0,P|284:232|268:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,320,157443,2,0,P|148:316|104:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,236,158110,6,0,P|48:192|88:104,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,92,158943,2,0,L|256:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,184,159776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,256,160110,2,0,P|416:312|400:352,2,90,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,252,164776,6,0,P|436:200|404:124,2,135,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,284,166110,2,0,P|288:292|248:324,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,332,166776,2,0,P|120:324|80:292,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,240,167443,6,0,P|160:172|156:96,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,44,168276,2,0,P|288:32|368:48,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,120,169110,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,188,169443,2,0,P|472:240|464:284,2,90,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,120,170443,6,0,B|316:108|316:108|216:140,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,171443,2,0,P|100:140|56:116,2,90,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,224,172443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,276,172776,6,0,P|320:288|404:240,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,173610,2,0,P|356:116|404:32,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,88,174443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,176,174776,2,0,L|472:280,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,300,175443,6,0,P|320:312|248:232,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,172,176443,2,0,P|148:180|92:256,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,308,177276,2,0,P|88:336|160:304,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,178110,6,0,B|280:252|344:296|344:296|384:216|348:148,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,88,179443,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,64,179776,2,0,L|112:64,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,88,180776,6,0,B|344:36|420:88|420:88|400:136|400:136|432:200|360:248,1,315,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,272,182276,2,0,L|224:284,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,216,182943,2,0,L|104:160,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,84,183443,6,0,P|168:60|216:60,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,120,184110,2,0,L|240:220,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,264,184776,2,0,P|356:259|395:237,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,152,185443,2,0,L|395:65,2,90,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,332,188776,6,4,L|216:228,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,168,189610,2,0,L|116:104,1,45,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,72,190110,2,0,L|180:12,2,45,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,112,190776,2,0,P|316:120|364:100,2,90,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,72,191776,6,8,B|172:128|172:128|180:192|144:256,1,180
188,328,192776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,256,193110,2,8,P|304:252|367:343,1,180
276,336,194110,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,288,194610,2,0,L|52:268,2,90
184,316,195443,2,0,B|196:248|220:204|220:204|224:128,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,68,196443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,32,196776,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,88,197110,2,8,B|72:88|72:88|64:156|-4:188,2,180
164,112,198610,2,0,P|224:120|292:80,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,44,199443,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,80,199776,2,0,L|464:136,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,212,200276,2,0,P|428:256|448:348,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,360,201443,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,304,201776,2,0,L|168:216,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,140,202443,2,0,P|68:144|0:244,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,160,204443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,112,204776,6,0,L|464:132,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,220,205443,2,0,L|452:308,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,206110,2,0,B|296:344|288:272|288:272|256:276|228:252|228:252|128:252,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207443,12,4,210110,0:0:0:0:
256,260,211110,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,220,211443,2,0,P|124:188|104:68,2,180,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,213110,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,256,213776,2,8,P|468:224|488:104,2,180
332,284,215443,6,0,L|232:284,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,228,216443,2,8,B|96:152|96:152|48:120|48:48,2,180
32,308,218110,6,0,P|88:316|156:252,2,135,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,220,219443,2,0,B|8:136|8:136|20:84|84:56,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,116,220443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,64,220776,6,0,B|262:83|274:135|274:135|266:219,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,308,221776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,336,222110,2,0,P|372:336|420:308,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,144,223110,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,116,223443,6,0,P|216:108|124:140,2,135,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,224776,2,0,L|300:296,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,300,225443,2,0,L|204:208,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,124,226110,6,0,P|116:100|12:244,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,280,227276,2,0,B|80:304|112:340|112:340|152:336,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,244,228443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,164,228776,6,8,P|340:120|316:76,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,229443,2,0,P|204:132|160:156,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,244,230110,2,2,B|200:288|180:336|180:336|88:376|8:336|8:336|-16:280|24:248,1,360,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,196,231776,6,0,B|112:132|108:84|108:84|192:84,1,180,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,148,232776,2,0,B|288:164|288:164|304:200|304:200|360:216|436:200|440:116,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,72,234110,6,0,B|292:36|292:36|200:76|104:48,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,132,235443,2,0,B|104:184|104:184|100:224|100:224|148:264|128:288|152:340|216:344,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,252,236776,6,0,B|284:236|316:312|316:312|388:172,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,108,238110,2,0,B|212:108|212:108|180:140|180:140|68:140,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,232,239443,6,0,B|184:232|184:232|216:264|216:264|328:264,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,320,240776,2,0,B|440:260|384:188|384:188|428:148|392:96|392:96|356:88,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,64,242110,6,0,B|216:64|216:64|176:124|176:124|132:156|48:108,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,196,243443,2,0,P|92:224|272:160,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,104,244776,6,0,B|404:60|404:60|388:200|420:264,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,320,246110,2,0,B|292:364|292:364|308:224|276:160,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,247443,12,4,252776,0:1:0:0:
rui
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Joined February 2009
rui
Please update my diff. I put zip file link already :(
Freya
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Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
very sorry for late update rui >w<

updated
riffy
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Joined December 2010
riffy
Yoooo, as requested.


[General]
  1. It may be difficult, but I suggest you looking for a better version version of the same BG. 1024x768 and 1366x768 are the recommended sizes, so it would be better to use a BG with these dimensions.
  2. 3 diffs, 3 different sets of colours, it makes the mapset look rather inconsistent. I would recommend you to talk to the mappers and use some consistent set of colours.
    Why not these ones? :)

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 184,156,146
    Combo2 : 103,105,88
    Combo3 : 176,171,121
    Combo4 : 189,184,203
  3. Please, make sure that the Widescreen Support is disabled in all diffs. This is a toggler for storyboards and it does not really make sense to keep it enabled if you don't have a storyboard.
[10nya's Normal]
  1. Please, set Slider Tick Rate to 1, I believe that 2 does not work with the rhythm of the song and gives too much HP, which kinda hurts the balance of the diff.
  2. 00:24:083 - for the bacground whistles and some variety inrhythm I would map this beat. Same applies to 00:26:749 - 00:29:416 - and so on.
  3. 01:21:416 (2,3,4) - minor - try to make (2) blanket with (4). It will look pretty neat and make your flow a bit more reasonable. Re-adjusting patterns a bit won't hard since they're placed right before the spinner, anyway.
  4. 01:25:083 - both Hard and Lunatic have a stop here. Finishing the spinner here would make more sense with the music + would add some more consistency, which is a good idea, even though this is a guest diff.
  5. 02:32:749 (1) - minor - try to make curve a bit softer, so, beginners will be able to read it easier. Just a liiiitle bit
  6. 02:38:916 (2) - I would add a repeat to this slider and to match with the vocals and to prevent confusing polarity change. Example

    Some of the 3/2s feel difficult, but that's the way how the song feels and I like how you've mapped it. Pretty solid diff, although I feel like it could use a few more mods on its appearance.
[rui's Hard]
According to the star rating, the diff gap seems to be pretty big but it actually plays as a Hard and feels really enjoyable to me. I'd just get a couple more opinions to make sure that it's fine.
  1. Try to reduce AR by 0,5, it will make more sense with your relatively low SV and will make the spread more balanced.
    Note: it will also drop the star rating a bit, which is a good thing in this case. :P
  2. Minor: quite a lot of your blankets seem to be rather untidy. I am sure that you can fix them on your own to make your maplook better. It won't take too much time and it's an easy thing, so give it a try.
    Note: if you still can't notice any of the blankets, just poke me in-game and we will do it. I doubt that you'll have any problems with it, tho.
  3. 00:37:416 (1,2,1) - I would use x1.6 instead of x1.4. This way, there will be a little jump, which will represent the music and keep players entertained. While x1,4 looks and feels more like a spacing mistake due to DS-difference being too little.
    Note: 00:40:416 (2,1) - same here. And in quite a few of similar patterns, I am sure that you can find and apply it yourself. :) And if you can't - just ask me!
  4. 00:47:583 (4,5) - the jump seems to be pretty random here. The distance and it's flow are rather unnatural and I don't feel like yu need it here. Mind replacing it with consstent DS or at least reducing the DS of this jump?
  5. 01:08:833 - Why did you start the delayed break here? There is no any reason to do so, just drag it to the left and the delay will disappear. As you see, the "blue" part is the delay
  6. 01:46:083 (1,2,3,4) - minor - try to re-arrange them in a way, so they don't get overlapped. it will sligtly improve them and make them mor eintuitively-understandable. Here, have an example.
  7. 02:13:583 (2,3) - it might be just me, bu if you select them and Ctrl+G, the pattern you get works really well, in my opinion.
  8. 02:23:083 - I see that you're following the vocals, but an ignored bass here feels rather confusing. I recommend you to make the slidr 1/2 shorter and add a repeat to it.
  9. 02:28:749 (1,2,3,4) - the part feels rather calm to me, personally, I would go with antijumps at this part. Try them and see if you like them or not!
  10. 02:42:916 (6) - minor - try smoothering the curve of this slider, to make it a bit more readable. Example.
  11. 03:04:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels too hard. Hitting 8 circles in the end of the diff, when players are already quite tired feels like a huge stress. Mind replacing some of the circles with 1/2 sliders? That would make the pattern much more playable.
    Note: 03:50:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sorry, the same applies for this awesome pattern. I like it, but it really feels too hard. :(

    Pretty nice diff, I liked how your style feels. It is really charming in some way and pretty simple and easy to understand. You can work a bit more on the patterns, but the diff is nice! I did not really like sliders like 04:10:583 (2) - since 2nd and 3rd repeats are hard to notice, and it might confuse players, a specially in the end of the map. But, oh well, they match with the song and I doubt that there is any more playable replacement for this, so it should be fine.
[Lunatic]
  1. Please, take some of your time to improve the blankets in this diff. It's an annoying thing and takes lots of time, but the outcome is totally worth it!
  2. Please, reduce your OD and HP Drain settings, they are too high currently. I'd go with 7,5 or even 7.
  3. 00:29:583 (8,9) - whoops, the jump is exaggerated. You're using x4.0+ DS here, which is way too fast fr this part and feels out of this diff, to be honest. Try reducing the DS here, somehow.
    Note: 00:49:749 (8,1) - same here. Please, do not use insanel huge jumps unless you have a great reason and this is really needs to be done, which is not the case, I believe. Those jumps ruin the balance and give an unnatural feeling while playing.
  4. 00:49:666 (7) - sounds overmapped, try to remove the circle and avoid overmapping. In most cases, overmapped patterns feel rather confusing and don't make much sense with the music.
  5. 00:52:583 (4,5) - minor - please, unstack them a little bit to make them more readable. For those, who have disabled the "snakking sliders" feature it might be a problem to read this pattern.
  6. 00:58:083 (5) - an 1/2 slider + circle would match here better. Just listen to the "whistles" in the music, you really should give a chance to something like this pattern.
  7. 01:24:749 (8,1) - the 1/4 jump doesn't seems to be readable + it does not really flow. Try to make the DS smaller or even stack it with the previous slider to improve the pattern?
  8. 01:35:083 (6) - somehow I like the pattern. It looks weird in the editor, but when I was testing the map it gave a surprisingly interesting flow.
  9. 01:38:916 (1,1) - either first or the second new combo is extra. Please, remove one of them to keep your comboing more consistent.
  10. 02:01:583 (2,3) - the same as I've already mentioned, this jump feels exaggerated. Just stack (2) and (3), it may make more sense with the music and will increase playability.
    Note: 02:06:916 (2,3) - same happens here and a few more times. Seriously, try to test it, the x4.0+ jumps are too much for this diff. ;_;
  11. 02:08:083 (7,8) - you're going even crazier with these jumps. They are 1/3s, which is even harder. Reduce the DS and maybe, swap them on the timeline, so, the outcome looks like this
  12. 02:13:416 (6) - maybe a new combo here to reflect the jumps and to make the comboing more consistent?
  13. 02:41:166 (6) - overmapping. I understand your intention, but the circle has nothing to do with the music and vocal, I would insist on removing it and some similar ones.
  14. 03:03:416 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - antiumps combined with jumps make the cursor moves choppy and it feels forced here. It just does not olay well, from my point of view. I highly sggest you avoiding antijumps or jumps at this part.

    You have quite a lot of things to work on, exaggerated jumps, overmapped patterns and flow improvements. Oh, and don't forget the blankets. It will take quite a lot of time, but it is required to improve your map. Overall, it's quite cool, just keep going in this direction! :)
Pretty nice mapset and looks quite cool overall, just work on the details and minor stuff to make it even better!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Edit2: my idea was to make colours match with the BG better, and neither brigh-green nor the blue one fit with the BG. So, I was suggesting something dark. @rui
Last edited by riffy , edited 2 times in total.
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui

-Bakari- wrote:

Hey, there is a WiP modpost, I will edit it tomorrow.

whooo, it is taing longer than I expected. Will finish it tomorrow morning!
Yoooo, as requested.


[General]
  1. It may be difficult, but I suggest you looking for a better version version of the same BG. 1024x768 and 1366x768 are the recommended sizes, so it would be better to use a BG with these dimensions.
  2. 3 diffs, 3 different sets of colours, it makes the mapset look rather inconsistent. I would recommend you to talk to the mappers and use some consistent set of colours. I write later
    [bx=Why not these ones? :)　]
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 184,156,146
    Combo2 : 103,105,88
    Combo3 : 176,171,121
    Combo4 : 189,184,203
    I don't like it. Too dark[/bx]
  3. Please, make sure that the Widescreen Support is disabled in all diffs. This is a toggler for storyboards and it does not really make sense to keep it enabled if you don't have a storyboard.　ok remove
[rui's Hard]
According to the star rating, the diff gap seems to be pretty big but it actually plays as a Hard and feels really enjoyable to me. I'd just get a couple more opinions to make sure that it's fine.
  1. Try to reduce AR by 0,5, it will make more sense with your relatively low SV and will make the spread more balanced.
    Note: it will also drop the star rating a bit, which is a good thing in this case. :P nope
  2. Minor: quite a lot of your blankets seem to be rather untidy. I am sure that you can fix them on your own to make your maplook better. It won't take too much time and it's an easy thing, so give it a try. I fix some blankets. but I have not focused on it
    Note: if you still can't notice any of the blankets, just poke me in-game and we will do it. I doubt that you'll have any problems with it, tho.
  3. 00:37:416 (1,2,1) - I would use x1.6 instead of x1.4. This way, there will be a little jump, which will represent the music and keep players entertained. While x1,4 looks and feels more like a spacing mistake due to DS-difference being too little. nice idea
    Note: 00:40:416 (2,1) - same here. And in quite a few of similar patterns, I am sure that you can find and apply it yourself. :) And if you can't - just ask me!
  4. 00:47:583 (4,5) - the jump seems to be pretty random here. The distance and it's flow are rather unnatural and I don't feel like yu need it here. Mind replacing it with consstent DS or at least reducing the DS of this jump? . fixed keep distance 1.1
  5. 01:08:833 - Why did you start the delayed break here? There is no any reason to do so, just drag it to the left and the delay will disappear. As you see, the "blue" part is the delay fixed. 01:09:083 is right. I fit the vocal
  6. 01:46:083 (1,2,3,4) - minor - try to re-arrange them in a way, so they don't get overlapped. it will sligtly improve them and make them mor eintuitively-understandable. Here, have an example. nope I like this placement
  7. 02:13:583 (2,3) - it might be just me, bu if you select them and Ctrl+G, the pattern you get works really well, in my opinion. nope
  8. 02:23:083 - I see that you're following the vocals, but an ignored bass here feels rather confusing. I recommend you to make the slidr 1/2 shorter and add a repeat to it. changed
  9. 02:28:749 (1,2,3,4) - the part feels rather calm to me, personally, I would go with antijumps at this part. Try them and see if you like them or not! jump is better imo. same as 01:03:416 (1,2,3,4,5) -
  10. 02:42:916 (6) - minor - try smoothering the curve of this slider, to make it a bit more readable. Example. ok
  11. 03:04:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels too hard. Hitting 8 circles in the end of the diff, when players are already quite tired feels like a huge stress. Mind replacing some of the circles with 1/2 sliders? That would make the pattern much more playable. I know hitting 8 circles so difficult. But I think that it is necessary in order to liven up
    Note: 03:50:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sorry, the same applies for this awesome pattern. I like it, but it really feels too hard. :( same

    Pretty nice diff, I liked how your style feels. It is really charming in some way and pretty simple and easy to understand. You can work a bit more on the patterns, but the diff is nice! I did not really like sliders like 04:10:583 (2) - since 2nd and 3rd repeats are hard to notice, and it might confuse players, a specially in the end of the map. But, oh well, they match with the song and I doubt that there is any more playable replacement for this, so it should be fine. I know 04:10:583 (2) plasement is bad idea. However, I wanted to pick up the sound. bcz the purpose is to make a difference other part.

Thank you for modding -Bakari-


It is a suggestion of the combo color from me
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,170,213
Combo2 : 151,255,151
Combo3 : 140,255,255

If you don't like it, you can change my diff combo color

http://puu.sh/aNAYF.osu plz update
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya

-Bakari- wrote:

Yoooo, as requested.


[General]
  1. It may be difficult, but I suggest you looking for a better version version of the same BG. 1024x768 and 1366x768 are the recommended sizes, so it would be better to use a BG with these dimensions.
  2. 3 diffs, 3 different sets of colours, it makes the mapset look rather inconsistent. I would recommend you to talk to the mappers and use some consistent set of colours.
    Why not these ones? :)

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 184,156,146
    Combo2 : 103,105,88
    Combo3 : 176,171,121
    Combo4 : 189,184,203
    i'll use rui's combo color
  3. Please, make sure that the Widescreen Support is disabled in all diffs. This is a toggler for storyboards and it does not really make sense to keep it enabled if you don't have a storyboard.
[Lunatic]
  1. Please, take some of your time to improve the blankets in this diff. It's an annoying thing and takes lots of time, but the outcome is totally worth it!
  2. Please, reduce your OD and HP Drain settings, they are too high currently. I'd go with 7,5 or even 7. keep it for now, since hard diff is a bit more harder imo
  3. 00:29:583 (8,9) - whoops, the jump is exaggerated. You're using x4.0+ DS here, which is way too fast fr this part and feels out of this diff, to be honest. Try reducing the DS here, somehow. actually fine for me but okay reduce to 3.6x
    Note: 00:49:749 (8,1) - same here. Please, do not use insanel huge jumps unless you have a great reason and this is really needs to be done, which is not the case, I believe. Those jumps ruin the balance and give an unnatural feeling while playing. well 2.6x how about now?
  4. 00:49:666 (7) - sounds overmapped, try to remove the circle and avoid overmapping. In most cases, overmapped patterns feel rather confusing and don't make much sense with the music.well change triplet to slider
  5. 00:52:583 (4,5) - minor - please, unstack them a little bit to make them more readable. For those, who have disabled the "snakking sliders" feature it might be a problem to read this pattern. okay
  6. 00:58:083 (5) - an 1/2 slider + circle would match here better. Just listen to the "whistles" in the music, you really should give a chance to something like this pattern.why not?
  7. 01:24:749 (8,1) - the 1/4 jump doesn't seems to be readable + it does not really flow. Try to make the DS smaller or even stack it with the previous slider to improve the pattern? i guess change slider to 1/2
  8. 01:35:083 (6) - somehow I like the pattern. It looks weird in the editor, but when I was testing the map it gave a surprisingly interesting flow. well i like that one too
  9. 01:38:916 (1,1) - either first or the second new combo is extra. Please, remove one of them to keep your comboing more consistent. didn't notice that before
  10. 02:01:583 (2,3) - the same as I've already mentioned, this jump feels exaggerated. Just stack (2) and (3), it may make more sense with the music and will increase playability. feel fine for me, i'll keep it in mind tho
    Note: 02:06:916 (2,3) - same happens here and a few more times. Seriously, try to test it, the x4.0+ jumps are too much for this diff. ;_;
  11. 02:08:083 (7,8) - you're going even crazier with these jumps. They are 1/3s, which is even harder. Reduce the DS and maybe, swap them on the timeline, so, the outcome looks like this reduce jump
  12. 02:13:416 (6) - maybe a new combo here to reflect the jumps and to make the comboing more consistent? did modify nc pattern
  13. 02:41:166 (6) - overmapping. I understand your intention, but the circle has nothing to do with the music and vocal, I would insist on removing it and some similar ones. well wrong rhytym after all, fixed
  14. 03:03:416 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - antiumps combined with jumps make the cursor moves choppy and it feels forced here. It just does not olay well, from my point of view. I highly sggest you avoiding antijumps or jumps at this part. well i'll ask some of other modder

    You have quite a lot of things to work on, exaggerated jumps, overmapped patterns and flow improvements. Oh, and don't forget the blankets. It will take quite a lot of time, but it is required to improve your map. Overall, it's quite cool, just keep going in this direction! :)
well i'll look at jump pattern once again

Pretty nice mapset and looks quite cool overall, just work on the details and minor stuff to make it even better! thanks bakariin~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Edit2: my idea was to make colours match with the BG better, and neither brigh-green nor the blue one fit with the BG. So, I was suggesting something dark. @rui
@rui & ate : i resized the bg, pls redl
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Lunatic

  1. 00:52:749 (5) - nc, and... lots of nc settings r following patterns, but actually just set them at heavy lines in normal is some kind of better most time. i highly recommend u to change some when check them by urself
  2. 01:15:416 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - larger all of them's ds, it's a bit weird to set so short ds with that 1/1 gap
  3. 01:47:749 (2) - just ctrl+g
  4. 02:20:249 (5,6) - parallel?
  5. when i saw the beginning of this diff, i thought i finally find a good map, but later i just uh... maybe u listen to the song more to decide what setting u can give with various of tracks, and think more how to express the music better. generally nothing wrong with the settings in the map, but i can hardly say it give the full feeling of this song. it can be mapped better if u improved imo

rui's Hard

  1. check the tag
  2. 00:50:416 (1,3) - avoid this overlap, u can do that with ds kept easily imo
  3. 01:28:749 (3,7) - stack perfect
  4. 03:13:416 (1) - hmm... maybe ctrl+g? thou this is good as well
  5. 03:17:916 (4,3) - stack? with those organizations kept imo
  6. good map, star

10nya's Normal

  1. why not use custom combo colors?
  2. generally nothing wrong, gj
this is a really beautiful song, hope u can do ur best to this map

good luck
Freya
337 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Freya
i actually feel same too about that, i feel something lacking with this diff (this one is my first submitted map tbh)
but i feel satisfied afterall since this is my first work in mapping. thanks for the input btw
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

rui's Hard

  1. check the tag fixed.Garbled again :(
  2. 00:50:416 (1,3) - avoid this overlap, u can do that with ds kept easily imo fixed
  3. 01:28:749 (3,7) - stack perfect ok
  4. 03:13:416 (1) - hmm... maybe ctrl+g? thou this is good as well ok
  5. 03:17:916 (4,3) - stack? with those organizations kept imo ok
  6. good map, star I'm gladXD

good luck
Thanks for modding Hollow Wings

update plz
osu file format v13

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432,128,232749,6,0,P|356:144|300:176,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,232,233249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,233416,2,0,P|172:220|168:260,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,304,233749,2,0,P|96:268|92:228,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,164,234083,6,0,P|124:124|156:100,2,70,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,234583,2,0,L|16:156,4,35,8|0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,252,235083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,316,235249,2,0,P|184:312|260:284,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,196,235749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,196,236083,6,0,P|324:208|376:216,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,156,236416,2,0,P|400:144|348:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,236749,6,0,P|356:68|408:60,2,70,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,56,237249,2,0,L|272:16,4,35,8|0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,128,237749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,200,237916,2,0,B|168:192|136:168|136:168|100:188|64:192,1,140
36,96,238416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,96,238749,5,8,0:0:0:0:
112,84,238916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,16,239083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,28,239250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,40,239416,6,0,P|332:24|380:16,2,70,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,100,239916,2,0,L|292:120,4,35,8|0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,240416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,116,240583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,188,240749,6,0,P|80:224|96:264,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,312,241083,2,0,P|183:279|187:244,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,241416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,268,241583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,184,241749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,280,241916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,196,242083,6,0,P|432:188|472:180,2,70,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,120,242583,2,0,L|420:112,4,35,8|0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,243083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,96,243249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,243416,6,0,L|156:88|144:128,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,136,243749,2,0,L|84:176|96:216,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,276,244083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,329,244249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,352,244416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,260,244582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,288,244749,6,0,P|304:324|308:376,2,70,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,245249,2,0,L|368:276,4,35,8|0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,245749,2,0,P|400:136|412:88,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,246083,6,0,P|319:80|297:107,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,246416,2,0,P|224:83|219:118,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,246749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,246916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,280,247083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,196,247249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,280,247416,6,0,P|152:324|164:364,2,70,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,260,247916,2,0,P|228:284|236:308,4,35,8|0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,248416,2,0,P|248:152|224:116,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,68,248749,6,0,P|149:68|114:62,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,148,249083,2,0,P|133:175|116:205,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,260,249416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,312,249583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,200,249749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,260,249916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,296,250083,6,0,P|56:264|40:220,2,70,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,250583,2,0,L|140:376,4,35,8|0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,328,251083,2,0,P|240:320|276:296,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,251416,6,0,P|315:247|336:258,2,46.6666666666667,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,189,251749,2,0,P|380:193|404:192,2,46.6666666666667,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,115,252083,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,26,252249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,40,252416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,145,252583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,225,252749,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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