2014-04-03 10:49 Freya: hi captin! up for testplay? i need feedback 8)
2014-04-03 10:49 captin1: i just sat down but sure heh
2014-04-03 10:50 Freya: ew, sorry but thanks
2014-04-03 10:50 Freya: lol
2014-04-03 10:50 Freya: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/394345 FELT - Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix)]
2014-04-03 10:56 captin1: couple quick things to point out
2014-04-03 10:56 Freya: okay
2014-04-03 10:56 Freya: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/394345 FELT - Runway Drive (BYPT Planet sorrow #2 Venus Remix) [Lunatic]]
2014-04-03 10:57 captin1: beginning section, notice how the distance between 00:22:443 (2) -  and 00:23:110 (3) - looks about the same as the distance from 3 to 00:23:776 (1) - , but the rhythm is different
2014-04-03 10:57 captin1: ends up making it confusing and a lot of people will try playing 00:23:776 (1) -  too early because of it
2014-04-03 10:58 Freya: i see, i'll look at it
2014-04-03 10:58 captin1: 00:42:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I would introduce the 1/3 with a repeat slider first, it's very sudden and not expected at all. Later on in the song you can start doing full streams but at the very beginning there's no way to know that this is the rhythm
2014-04-03 10:58 Freya: basically first part right
2014-04-03 10:59 captin1: yeah
2014-04-03 10:59 Freya: well, it does make sense
2014-04-03 10:59 Freya: will do remap at 1/3 stream
2014-04-03 11:00 captin1: 02:10:776 (3,4,1,2) - parts like this, the music does a 3/4 rhythm and it seems like you mostly ignored it, I'd personally try to map it since it sounds pretty loud and important
2014-04-03 11:02 Freya: well, i still dont get it, ._. i dont really good at rhytym-wise
2014-04-03 11:02 captin1: jumping back a bit but 01:32:776 (3,4,5) - notice how this triple leads into a red tick? generally that doesn't feel as good as if you were doing it 1/2 later, if you're going to add triples to the music try to do them so that they end on a white tick, will feel much better
2014-04-03 11:04 captin1: 02:10:776 - starting here the rhythm of that sound is http://puu.sh/7UtlW.jpg 
2014-04-03 11:04 captin1: that's not the best way of mapping it but to show where the beats are
2014-04-03 11:05 Freya: okay i get it now
2014-04-03 11:06 captin1: and just as a general statement I'm all for doing 3/4 sliders to emphasize certain vocals, but you might have overdone it just a little bit, try to stick to the drum just a bit more so that it's comfortable
2014-04-03 11:06 captin1: think that's all i have, keep workin at it!
2014-04-03 11:06 Freya: well yeah
2014-04-03 11:06 Freya: thanks captin, it's kd worth
2014-04-03 11:07 captin1: hah sure