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jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2013-07-11T10:10:34+00:00

Oyatsu wrote:
first! Can I make a GD? I like Choucho

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xChippy

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Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-08-30T22:35:37+00:00

Yo~ =w=/
I'm done~

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:ハルモニア
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:jonathanlfj
Version:xChippy's Normal
Source:Eiyuu Densetsu: Sora no Kiseki The Animation
Tags:Legend of Heroes VI Trails in the Sky ova ending rpg video game
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RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-09-22T12:35:49+00:00

From my queue~

[General]

Airtist: ちょうちょ
Romanised Airtist is OK
the silence of intro is too long, imo. I suggest to cut it.

[Easy]

Good!

[xchippy's Normal]

02:25:555 (1,2) - you might intend to heart shape? I see it too circular

[sjoy's Hard]

00:22:025 (2) - change angle. a little less-visible
00:25:555 (1) - I prefer to remove clap
00:59:084 (1) - on purpose? I see it awkward

[Kiseki]

00:14:672 (2,3,4) - stack correctly
00:17:761- add a note
02:29:525 (2) - I prefer to stack on the end of 02:29:084 (1) -

wow~ almost good , I think
high-quality finished map!

star~☆
~Good Luck~

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2013-09-26T08:40:51+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[General]
Airtist: ちょうちょ yes
Romanised Airtist is OK
the silence of intro is too long, imo. I suggest to cut it. i meant for the video to play as the intro, would like to keep this length
[Easy]

Good!
[Kiseki]
00:14:672 (2,3,4) - stack correctly changed this part a bit
00:17:761- add a note i prefer the 1/2 pause here feels cool
02:29:525 (2) - I prefer to stack on the end of 02:29:084 (1) - sure
wow~ almost good , I think
high-quality finished map!
star~☆
~Good Luck~

Thanks for the mod and star~

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,703 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-09-26T09:34:42+00:00

jonathan good luck

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2013-09-26T09:41:03+00:00

Satellite wrote:
jonathan good luck

Thanks for star <33

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2013-09-27T10:42:01+00:00

EASY

00:15:555 (2) - I think just having one long slider would the song smoother

00:46:731 (1) - Bring up for flow

01:55:554 (2) - add finish?

NORMAL

00:35:555 (6) - Ctrl+J for flow?

HARD

00:29:525 (2,3) - I would just combine them into a slider. Having them separate seems unesescary (dammit how do you spell that word)

00:30:260 (4) - You think you can stack it over 00:28:496 (3) ?

00:57:319 (3) - Make it more curved

01:13:202 (1,2,3) - the arrangement is weird

01:25:555 (3) - Curve the other way? bad for flow

Lovely song. (hooray choucho! don't you think that choucho sounds like stinko in chinese? lol) anyway nice mapset there. Star~

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-09-27T13:58:01+00:00

http://puu.sh/4Bsls.osu
thanks for moding

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2013-09-28T04:34:43+00:00

yurunneram wrote:
EASY

00:15:555 (2) - I think just having one long slider would the song smoother sure

00:46:731 (1) - Bring up for flow ok

01:55:554 (2) - add finish? dont think it really fits here as it is not in the music

Lovely song. (hooray choucho! don't you think that choucho sounds like stinko in chinese? lol) anyway nice mapset there. Star~ lol thanks

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Thanks for mod and star~
updated

Nines

392 posts

Joined May 2013

Nines 2013-10-03T05:58:17+00:00

Hey, lucky you, I scooted you into my next round from my mod queue

[Easy]
No beatmapping issues. Just this AImod thing. There are 3 more AImod warnings, but since they are Kiai time related, it's fine.

Very nice Easy!

[xChippy's Normal]
More conflicting letterboxes. Not sure what those actually are lol.
This is a perfect Normal. Not gonna criticize what doesn't need to be criticized.

[sjoy's Hard]
Going to get a little bit critical with hitsound volumes since this is a pretty song.

00:23:496 (1,2,3,4,5) Think about doing increments (reasonable ones) in volume for each individual circle.
and
02:33:790 I think you should make the end of this slider a bit quieter.

This diff is mapped well!

[Kiseki]

00:14:084 (5,6) I think these should be part of the blue combo rather than continuing from the purple combo. This is mainly because these different combo notes are sitting on top of each other compared to later in the song where they're spaced from each other.

While I was playing this, 01:48:496 seemed to stand out to me in terms of spacing. The distance spacing is larger than the rest of the notes that are rhythmically spaced the same.

Otherwise, another great diff

Good luck guys!

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2013-10-13T01:56:02+00:00

sorry for the delay
all are suggestions, feel free to ignore
[xChippy's Normal]
00:21:437 (1) - tail point x 106 y 222
00:27:319 (3) - tail point x 428 y 157
00:51:143 (2) - x 139 y 112
00:52:025 (4) - tail point x 135 y 318
00:53:790 (1) - tail point x 195 y 237
00:59:084 (4) - move to x 120 y 260 and adjust the tail to x 256 y 264
01:03:202 (5) - tail point x 212 y 131
01:09:084 (3,4) - I'm not sure is normal allow overlap? 01:09:084 (3) - move the tail to the left and 01:09:672 (4) - flip curve vertical
01:18:496 (1) - tail point x 84 y 116
01:39:672 (1) - tail point x 292 y 126
02:07:907 (4) - tail point x 300 y 264
[sjoy's Hard]
00:12:025 (3) - center point x 292 y 224
00:17:320 (3,4,5,6,1) - make it tidier like this?

SPOILER

00:17:320 (3) - x 16 y 172
00:17:467 (4) - x 24 y 220
00:17:614 (5) - x 56 y 256
00:17:761 (6) - x 100 y 272
00:17:908 (1) - x 148 y 272, center point x 224 y 244, tail point x 244 y 156

00:35:555 (4) - stack to 00:37:907 (4) - x 249 y 33
00:44:966 (6) - center point x 348 y 60, tail point x 412 y 104
00:45:849 (1) - stack properly to x 410 y 101
00:55:555 (6) - center point x 404 y 320, tail point x 328 y 348
01:14:966 (1) - center point x 264 y 236, tail point x 260 y 288
02:07:907 (1) - center point x 412 y 252, tail point x 332 y 208
[Kiseki]
00:35:260 (3,4,5) - better to be curved

00:35:260 (3) - x 404 y 100
00:35:407 (4) - x 416 y 129

00:47:172 (2) - center point x 304 y 68
01:07:907 (1,2) - imo ugly, 01:08:349 (2) - change to curve
01:39:672 (1) - center point x 166 y 122
01:43:202 (1) - center point x 360 y 200, tail point x 277 y 205
02:11:143 (4,5,1) - curved

02:11:143 (4) - x 408 y 348
02:11:290 (5) - x 440 y 324

I think that's all, good luck for ranked!
the song is nice

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2013-10-14T04:10:58+00:00

Tsuchimikado wrote:
[Kiseki]

00:14:084 (5,6) I think these should be part of the blue combo rather than continuing from the purple combo. This is mainly because these different combo notes are sitting on top of each other compared to later in the song where they're spaced from each other.

While I was playing this, 01:48:496 seemed to stand out to me in terms of spacing. The distance spacing is larger than the rest of the notes that are rhythmically spaced the same.

Otherwise, another great diff Good luck guys!
fixed everything~

Setsurei wrote:
[Kiseki]
00:35:260 (3,4,5) - better to be curved
00:35:260 (3) - x 404 y 100
00:35:407 (4) - x 416 y 129 rearranged it a bit
00:47:172 (2) - center point x 304 y 68 fixed it another way
01:07:907 (1,2) - imo ugly, 01:08:349 (2) - change to curve meh ok
01:39:672 (1) - center point x 166 y 122 ok
01:43:202 (1) - center point x 360 y 200, tail point x 277 y 205 ~
02:11:143 (4,5,1) - curved
02:11:143 (4) - x 408 y 348
02:11:290 (5) - x 440 y 324 also fixed in a different way
I think that's all, good luck for ranked!
the song is nice[/color]

Thats for the mods ><

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-10-14T04:28:45+00:00

http://puu.sh/4PEwj.rar
fixed all !!!
thank you for modding

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-10-19T23:18:02+00:00

Sorry for the late update X.X, managed to kind of fix my computer, although I lost all my data @.@
@Modders fixed all~ and thank you all for modding~~ :3/

Diff

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67319
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Harmonia
TitleUnicode:ハルモニア
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:jonathanlfj
Version:xChippy's Normal
Source:Eiyuu Densetsu: Sora no Kiseki The Animation
Tags:英雄伝説 空の軌跡 Legend of Heroes VI Trails in the Sky ova ending rpg video game xchippy sjoy
BeatmapID:302407
BeatmapSetID:104082

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2013-12-08T07:53:25+00:00

Hi,jonathanlfj, M4M req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.sjoy'Hard diff 的 widescreen 沒取消。

[Easy]

02:19:672 (2) - 看你前面都有用symmetry來表示pattern，所以我想這裡應該也可以做。

[xChippy's Normal]

01:55:554 (3) - I feel can add finish in slider head to strongthen the beat.

[sjoy's Hard]

00:39:378 (5) - 故意放的? 放個弧型比較好連打吧。
01:06:143 (4) - 間距不放同距嗎? 移到(180|192)。
01:06:731 (1) - 跟上面對稱，移到(372|192)看看。

[Kiseki] (如果有不懂得中文可以PM..一下子打太多

)

00:15:114 (5) - 我覺得這個連打應該是放在(6)上，而不是(4)尾端，因為4跟5有一段距離，56又比較小，所以我建議放這裡。
00:18:790 (3) - 似乎放在00:19:084 (4) 滑條頭上比較好，因為00:17:908 (1) 這邊也表現停頓感，所以我覺得這邊應該也可以表現。
00:40:849 (3) - 也許可以移到(276|148)，既順手又可做一個blanket。
00:44:966 (1) - 放這邊好像顯得有點擠跟音樂不太搭配，ctrl+g然後移到(308|76)試試，

SPOILER

00:53:496 (7) - 微調一下看看，不太喜歡蓋到一點，

SPOILER

00:57:025 (5) - (0|312)，感覺放的比較flow。
01:05:849 (4) - (256|272)，感覺放這邊會較flow，也讓pattern整齊些。
01:07:907 (1) - 滑條頭跟前面疊看看?
01:21:437 (1) - 這邊應該能+finish，加強前面finish，可以考慮下。
01:21:584 (2,3) - Ctrl+g? 之前不太flow。
01:43:790 (2) - 這個節奏擺法節奏跟這邊01:15:555 (2) 一樣，可是你這邊有空一點間距，要不要跟前面擺一樣?
01:49:672 (5) - 試試滑條頭+finish，理由，前面有說過。
02:32:613 (1) - 不放在(224|248)嗎? 這可以成一個good pattern呢。

其他難度mod不多，給你一顆Star。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-12-08T15:32:02+00:00

M4M from msg(咦

[General]

sjoy的diff勾了宽屏其他没勾
[Easy]
01:13:202 (3) - 尾巴whistle?
01:21:437 (4) - ^
02:18:496 (1) - ^
02:33:202 spinner还是放到这里开始比较好 ez的话
[xChippy's Normal]
01:20:849 (4) - I advise u to put finish instead of clap at end.
01:58:202 (3) - no hitsound may sound empty
[sjoy's Hard]
00:13:643 (4) - 我比较倾向换成两个circles
00:54:966 (5) - ctrl+g better flow?
00:58:496 (5) - ^
01:01:437 (2) - 建议ctrl+j一下一直这么顺着过去感觉不是很好
01:36:584 (2) - 往左移一点挨到惹要不你就这么挨着blanket perfect
01:49:819 (4,5,6,7) - 有点老图的feel 建议搞弧度弯
02:04:378 (5,1) - 交换NC
[Kiseki]
现在的rule不允许自创难度名了0.0
01:09:378 (4) - 感觉移到x427y354比较顺
01:51:290 (2) - 这样的hitsound在end加fin好像更好点虽然有点吵的样子
02:32:613 (1) - 这个放在上面打的爽点吧也有一种紧绷的感觉 like x297y36

Nice Map~!
Give away my star!(ノ·ω·)ノ︵

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-12-08T16:20:05+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Hi,jonathanlfj, M4M req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[xChippy's Normal]

01:55:554 (3) - I feel can add finish in slider head to strongthen the beat. but there is no cymbal in the music so nope not adding

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Thanks for modding!

Awaken wrote:
M4M from msg(咦

[xChippy's Normal]
01:20:849 (4) - I advise u to put finish instead of clap at end. no cymbal or whatsoever in the music so no change ~.~
01:58:202 (3) - no hitsound may sound empty added a whistle

Nice Map~!
Give away my star!(ノ·ω·)ノ︵

Thanks for modding!

My diff owo:

diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Harmonia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67319
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Harmonia
TitleUnicode:ハルモニア
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:jonathanlfj
Version:xChippy's Normal
Source:Eiyuu Densetsu: Sora no Kiseki The Animation
Tags:英雄伝説 空の軌跡 Legend of Heroes VI Trails in the Sky ova ending rpg video game xchippy sjoy
BeatmapID:302407
BeatmapSetID:104082

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-40,"video.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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124378,-100,3,2,2,60,0,0
152760,-100,3,2,2,25,0,0
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152,108,40555,6,0,B|137:153|156:184,2,70,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,145,41437,2,0,P|295:142|365:193,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,248,42319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,328,42613,2,0,L|287:346,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,356,43202,6,0,P|193:316|185:204,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,152,44084,2,0,P|186:147|238:164,2,70,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,77,44966,2,0,B|184:56|248:77,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,154,46143,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,234,46437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,302,46731,6,0,P|254:318|178:301,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,234,47613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,154,47907,2,0,P|160:120|168:96,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,69,48496,2,0,B|288:84|361:67,2,105,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,149,49672,6,0,P|285:159|380:145,2,140,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,112,51143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
61,80,51437,2,0,L|41:153,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,229,52025,2,0,P|52:291|135:318,2,140,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
110,232,53496,1,8,0:3:0:0:
105,146,53790,6,0,P|168:172|195:237,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,316,54672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,359,54966,2,0,L|372:364,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,363,55555,2,0,P|467:292|424:224,2,140,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,299,57025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,226,57319,6,0,P|268:212|214:157,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,91,58202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,109,58496,2,0,L|91:200,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,260,59084,2,0,P|175:295|256:264,2,140,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,212,60554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,131,60849,5,4,0:0:0:0:
378,108,61437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
402,274,62025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,297,62613,1,4,0:0:0:0:
212,131,63202,2,0,P|280:153|350:111,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,72,64084,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64378,12,4,66731,0:0:0:0:
326,79,67907,6,0,B|257:109|168:75,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,58,68790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,117,69084,2,0,L|57:193,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,268,69672,2,0,P|83:231|177:250,2,140,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,305,71143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,325,71437,6,0,L|339:336,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,339,72319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
458,265,72613,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,191,72907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,191,73202,2,0,P|268:224|198:197,2,140,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,140,74672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,76,74966,6,0,P|256:57|192:90,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,90,75849,2,0,L|95:182,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,243,76437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
18,289,76731,2,0,P|74:325|157:292,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,270,77613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,235,77907,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,149,78202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,114,78496,6,0,B|154:62|84:116,2,140,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,171,79966,1,2,0:0:0:0:
174,251,80260,2,0,L|214:331,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,273,80849,2,0,L|338:339,2,70,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,82025,6,0,P|255:86|183:108,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,163,82907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,247,83202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
187,306,83496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
246,365,83790,2,0,P|270:320|223:231,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,169,84672,2,0,L|128:163,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,147,85260,1,2,0:0:0:0:
4,220,85555,6,0,P|-4:297|50:352,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,269,86437,2,0,P|129:297|149:297,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,313,87025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,253,87319,2,0,P|310:180|274:117,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,185,88202,2,0,L|136:191,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,277,89084,6,0,L|5:361,2,70,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,277,89966,2,0,L|104:201,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,123,90554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,63,90849,2,0,P|103:38|183:79,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,142,91731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,142,92025,2,0,P|338:149|378:135,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,64,92613,6,0,P|392:33|455:58,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,136,93496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
487,219,93790,2,0,P|449:249|398:253,1,70,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,254,94378,1,4,0:0:0:0:
257,338,95554,6,0,L|252:294,1,35,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,180,96143,2,0,B|207:174|179:142|179:142|142:170|97:158,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,168,97025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
13,249,97319,2,0,P|10:297|29:333,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,277,97907,2,0,P|152:247|219:263,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,338,98790,2,0,P|303:298|301:263,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,205,99378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
405,189,99672,6,0,P|364:132|292:126,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,120,100554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,142,100849,2,0,P|90:167|71:212,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,227,101437,2,0,P|71:266|137:245,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,204,102319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,179,102613,2,0,L|372:200,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,159,103202,6,0,P|431:218|368:276,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,337,104084,2,0,P|256:321|185:341,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,366,104966,2,0,P|132:278|191:253,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,215,105849,2,0,P|279:182|296:141,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,163,106437,2,0,P|391:192|418:214,1,70,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106878,12,8,109672,0:0:0:0:
185,211,110260,6,0,P|213:259|209:299,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,272,110849,2,0,P|305:238|327:210,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,151,111437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
445,210,111731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,291,112025,2,0,P|394:358|316:388,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,303,112907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,261,113202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
181,303,113496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,388,113790,6,0,P|116:356|97:291,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,207,114672,2,0,P|90:137|161:84,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,166,115554,2,0,P|261:126|321:138,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,129,116437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,188,116731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,221,117319,5,4,0:0:0:0:
216,280,117613,2,0,P|168:288|136:272,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,250,118202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
10,190,118496,2,0,P|3:146|24:93,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,156,119084,2,0,P|150:170|230:152,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,133,119966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,89,120260,2,0,P|383:145|367:177,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,235,120849,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,120996,12,4,122613,0:0:0:0:
464,208,123790,6,0,L|436:276,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,332,124378,2,0,P|310:319|231:341,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,354,125260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,380,125554,2,0,P|78:333|94:300,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,236,126143,6,0,P|177:230|243:170,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,103,127025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,171,127319,2,0,P|344:201|375:217,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,207,127907,2,0,P|408:295|300:264,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,235,129084,2,0,L|171:246,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,329,129672,6,0,P|85:269|141:162,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,105,130849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,48,131143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,105,131437,1,4,0:0:0:0:
405,249,132025,2,0,P|387:318|312:351,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,265,132907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
307,178,133202,6,0,P|249:214|233:280,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,354,134084,2,0,P|226:363|175:344,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,336,134672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
62,276,134966,2,0,P|34:200|90:72,1,210,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,61,136143,2,0,L|238:57,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,56,136731,6,0,P|350:112|338:179,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,262,137613,2,0,P|297:253|253:201,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,132,138496,2,0,P|227:120|174:168,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,305,139672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,350,140260,6,0,P|356:306|384:254,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,205,141143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,133,141437,2,0,P|405:122|358:131,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,183,142025,2,0,P|251:205|173:170,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,28,143202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,28,143790,6,0,P|440:93|421:160,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,219,144672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,174,144966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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255,256,147319,2,0,B|262:255|262:255|354:201|450:134|336:-2|256:73,1,350,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,149084,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149231,12,4,152613,0:0:0:0:
256,192,152760,12,0,159966,0:0:0:0:

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2013-12-10T06:09:29+00:00

mod replys

smallboat wrote:
Hi,jonathanlfj, M4M req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.sjoy'Hard diff 的 widescreen 沒取消。取消掉了

[Easy]

02:19:672 (2) - 看你前面都有用symmetry來表示pattern，所以我想這裡應該也可以做。 rearrange了一下

[Kiseki] (如果有不懂得中文可以PM..一下子打太多 )

00:15:114 (5) - 我覺得這個連打應該是放在(6)上，而不是(4)尾端，因為4跟5有一段距離，56又比較小，所以我建議放這裡。好
00:18:790 (3) - 似乎放在00:19:084 (4) 滑條頭上比較好，因為00:17:908 (1) 這邊也表現停頓感，所以我覺得這邊應該也可以表現。这里我比较喜欢拉大距离因为stack对flow有不小的抑制所以感觉这里不是很适合
00:40:849 (3) - 也許可以移到(276|148)，既順手又可做一個blanket。移到附近了
00:44:966 (1) - 放這邊好像顯得有點擠跟音樂不太搭配，ctrl+g然後移到(308|76)試試，好
SPOILER
00:53:496 (7) - 微調一下看看，不太喜歡蓋到一點，好
SPOILER
00:57:025 (5) - (0|312)，感覺放的比較flow。移动了一下
01:05:849 (4) - (256|272)，感覺放這邊會較flow，也讓pattern整齊些。 ok
01:07:907 (1) - 滑條頭跟前面疊看看? 小间距故意的
01:21:437 (1) - 這邊應該能+finish，加強前面finish，可以考慮下。不大喜欢加音乐里没有的sound
01:21:584 (2,3) - Ctrl+g? 之前不太flow。我打起来更难一些，现在这样个人感觉更舒服
01:43:790 (2) - 這個節奏擺法節奏跟這邊01:15:555 (2) 一樣，可是你這邊有空一點間距，要不要跟前面擺一樣? 好
01:49:672 (5) - 試試滑條頭+finish，理由，前面有說過。同上
02:32:613 (1) - 不放在(224|248)嗎? 這可以成一個good pattern呢。放在另一个三角的地方了

其他難度mod不多，給你一顆Star。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Awaken wrote:
M4M from msg(咦

[General]
sjoy的diff勾了宽屏其他没勾改了
[Easy]
01:13:202 (3) - 尾巴whistle? 音乐里没有whistle
01:21:437 (4) - ^ 上面有个clap
02:18:496 (1) - ^ 没whistle
02:33:202 spinner还是放到这里开始比较好 ez的话这里另改了一下

[Kiseki]
现在的rule不允许自创难度名了0.0 改成insane了
01:09:378 (4) - 感觉移到x427y354比较顺移到附近了
01:51:290 (2) - 这样的hitsound在end加fin好像更好点虽然有点吵的样子嗯是有点吵
02:32:613 (1) - 这个放在上面打的爽点吧也有一种紧绷的感觉 like x297y36 放到y轴上了
Nice Map~!
Give away my star!(ノ·ω·)ノ︵

谢谢mods还有star :3

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-12-10T10:51:07+00:00

M4M
[General]
Fine.
[Easy]
Rhythm
01:34:378 Useless green line
01:35:260 ^
Hit Sound
02:17:613(3) Same as Insane.
[Normal]
Some blanket placement looks forced and not good movement for newbie, I recommend you to make a natural flow.
So you should fix these placements even if I don't pick up.
Placement
00:44:084(2) Nazi, move left a bit, and the blanket looks more better.
00:47:907(3) Change this direction like this? I suppose it would be nice flow.

SPOILER

01:14:672(6) I suppose it is better not to make blanket placement, and move out side this note better.

SPOILER

01:15:849(2,3) ^

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:34:378 Useless green line
01:35:260 ^
00:19:0894(3,4) Sounds odd since the music has lasted, so replace 1/1 slider better.

SPOILER

00:23:202(3,4,5,6,7,8) For normal diff, this 6 notes is a bit difficult even if song has low BPM.
[Hard]
Placement
00:33:496(4) This spacing looks a bit narrow and weird. And (5) to (1) movement looks not good because of shaping, so maybe like this?

SPOILER

00:58:496(5,1) This flow looks not good I suppose, so you can move this note like this?

SPOILER

01:13:102(1,2,3) This vertical 1/4 placement not good for playing, so you can move these notes a bit curved. e.g.)

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:15:114 You can add a note here since it sounds back music clearly, and for constant rhythm. e.g.)

SPOILER

01:26:143(4) Separate this 1/1 slider to 1/2 slider and circle better to follow the vocal.
Hit Sound
You miised some basic cymbal sound to add finish, listen to music and add these sound.
00:08:790(1) Finish sounds too louly, I guess whistle would be better.
00:11:143-00:17:761 No sounds in this part? I suppose you can add soft-whistle to follow the instrumental better same as other diffs.
01:20:702(2) Add finish at end.
01:32:613(1) Prefer finish than whistle to follow the instrumental.
01:43:202(1) Add finish at head.
01:46:731(1)^
01:48:496(1)^ ... and more.
[Insane]
Placement
00:14:084(1,3) Swap NC for consistence pattern like 01:11:143?
01:20:260(1) I suppose you can bent this slider opposite direction, and the flow looks more better.

SPOILER

01:42:613(5) Just CTRL+G looks more nice movement I suppose.
Rhythm
01:22:466(2,3) Current sounds a bit odd since it doesn't follow vocal properly, so I recommned this rhythm.

SPOILER

Hit Sound
00:15:261(6) Add whistle at head.
01:03:202(2) Delete clap at end, there is no similar sound here.
02:17:613(4) Prefer finish than clap at head to follow the instrumental.

Good Luck.

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-12-11T03:27:08+00:00

[sjoy's Hard]

00:39:378 (5) - 故意放的? 放個弧型比較好連打吧。[/color]
01:06:143 (4) - 間距不放同距嗎? 移到(180|192)。好
01:06:731 (1) - 跟上面對稱，移到(372|192)看看。重叠好了

[sjoy's Hard]
[*]00:13:643 (4) - 我比较倾向换成两个circles 开头送点比较好
[*]00:54:966 (5) - ctrl+g better flow?changed another style
[*]00:58:496 (5) - ^ ^
[*]01:01:437 (2) - 建议ctrl+j一下一直这么顺着过去感觉不是很好改了
[*]01:36:584 (2) - 往左移一点挨到惹要不你就这么挨着blanket perfect 改了
[*]01:49:819 (4,5,6,7) - 有点老图的feel 建议搞弧度弯改了
[*]02:04:378 (5,1) - 交换NCfixed

[Hard]
Placement
00:33:496(4) This spacing looks a bit narrow and weird. And (5) to (1) movement looks not good because of shaping, so maybe like this?changed

SPOILER

00:58:496(5,1) This flow looks not good I suppose, so you can move this note like this?changed

SPOILER

01:13:102(1,2,3) This vertical 1/4 placement not good for playing, so you can move these notes a bit curved. e.g.)changed

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:15:114 You can add a note here since it sounds back music clearly, and for constant rhythm. e.g.)changed

SPOILER

01:26:143(4) Separate this 1/1 slider to 1/2 slider and circle better to follow the vocal.I think it's ok now
Hit Sound
You miised some basic cymbal sound to add finish, listen to music and add these sound.added
00:08:790(1) Finish sounds too louly, I guess whistle would be better.ok
00:11:143-00:17:761 No sounds in this part? I suppose you can add soft-whistle to follow the instrumental better same as other diffs. ok
01:20:702(2) Add finish at end.keep
01:32:613(1) Prefer finish than whistle to follow the instrumental.ok
01:43:202(1) Add finish at head. ok
01:46:731(1)^ ^
01:48:496(1)^ ... and more.^
thanks for modding~

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2013-12-14T12:24:52+00:00

mod reply

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[General]
Fine.
[Easy]
Rhythm
01:34:378 Useless green line
01:35:260 ^
Hit Sound
02:17:613(3) Same as Insane.
done everything
[Insane]
Placement
00:14:084(1,3) Swap NC for consistence pattern like 01:11:143? sure
01:20:260(1) I suppose you can bent this slider opposite direction, and the flow looks more better. cool
SPOILER
01:42:613(5) Just CTRL+G looks more nice movement I suppose. hmm i would like to keep the current setup due to the "going down" feeling which corresponds nicely with the music
Rhythm
01:22:466(2,3) Current sounds a bit odd since it doesn't follow vocal properly, so I recommned this rhythm. nice
SPOILER
Hit Sound
00:15:261(6) Add whistle at head.
01:03:202(2) Delete clap at end, there is no similar sound here. kk
02:17:613(4) Prefer finish than clap at head to follow the instrumental. done

Good Luck.

Thanks for the mod! will get to your map soon

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-12-17T22:03:17+00:00

Ye srry for the late update OAO

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[Normal]
Some blanket placement looks forced and not good movement for newbie, I recommend you to make a natural flow.
So you should fix these placements even if I don't pick up.
Placement
00:44:084(2) Nazi, move left a bit, and the blanket looks more better.
00:47:907(3) Change this direction like this? I suppose it would be nice flow.
SPOILER
01:14:672(6) I suppose it is better not to make blanket placement, and move out side this note better.
SPOILER
01:15:849(2,3) ^
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:34:378 Useless green line
01:35:260 ^
00:19:0894(3,4) Sounds odd since the music has lasted, so replace 1/1 slider better.
SPOILER
00:23:202(3,4,5,6,7,8) For normal diff, this 6 notes is a bit difficult even if song has low BPM. I'll need some more opinions on this one
Fixed the rest~ +remapped alot
Good Luck.

Thanks for modding!~ :3/
Diff:

xChippy's Normal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Harmonia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67319
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Harmonia
TitleUnicode:ハルモニア
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:jonathanlfj
Version:xChippy's Normal
Source:Eiyuu Densetsu: Sora no Kiseki The Animation
Tags:英雄伝説 空の軌跡 Legend of Heroes VI Trails in the Sky ova ending rpg video game xchippy sjoy
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Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-12-28T19:17:36+00:00

and I look at the booty and I'm just like "Damn look at that booty" but the booty don't care the booty free flowing so I gotta take it I gotta catch it I gotta make it mine.

Insane:
01:50:260 (1,2,3) - I'd work with this to see if there's a way to make it contrast more with the next combo. Right now it just sounds like two awkward finishes.
It's going against every fibre of my being to say that the 1/4 jumps are fine but they kind of are lol

Hard:
00:21:437 (1) - This curve is so slight that it looks like an issue
Maybe add a spinner like in the other diffs at the end?

Normal:
01:54:672 (2) - Add finish on beginning?
01:55:554 (3) - ^

Easy:
02:32:613 - Add note right before the spinner.

There needs to be a change to the BSS so that maps uploaded by jonathanlfj just get instantly ranked upon upload.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2014-01-01T16:53:02+00:00

CDFA wrote:
and I look at the booty and I'm just like "Damn look at that booty" but the booty don't care the booty free flowing so I gotta take it I gotta catch it I gotta make it mine. bubble bubble butt

Insane:
01:50:260 (1,2,3) - I'd work with this to see if there's a way to make it contrast more with the next combo. Right now it just sounds like two awkward finishes. added a whistle on the second one so it sounds "sharper" than the first
It's going against every fibre of my being to say that the 1/4 jumps are fine but they kind of are lol well it is only 102bpm so...

Easy:
02:32:613 - Add note right before the spinner. alright

There needs to be a change to the BSS so that maps uploaded by jonathanlfj just get instantly ranked upon upload. then i would get nuked so hard

Thanks for the mod CDFA, hope you stay around this time~

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2014-01-04T02:28:02+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
CDFA wrote:
There needs to be a change to the BSS so that maps uploaded by jonathanlfj just get instantly ranked upon upload. then i would get nuked so hard

oh i'll nuke you hard

General
- delete "the" from tags lololo

Easy
01:27:319 (2) - maybe angle this a bit deeper so it's not in the awkward alignment with (1), like it's trying to be parallel but not xD

SPOILER

02:32:760 (1) - spinner was a bit loud towards the end, try making a decrescendo using green lines

xChippy's Normal
00:10:359 - snap this green line to the red tick & make the volume 40%
00:23:496 (4) - NC to isolate this scale, would look cool imo
01:09:672 (4) - nazi but maybe curve this slider more to blanket (5) better xD
01:18:496 (1) - ^ same, it'd be nice to redo these with the new slider maker. Subtle but the little details can accumulate overall lol
01:36:143 (2) - NC to introduce the kiai?
02:25:555 (1,2) - i suggest to stick with the distance snap and space these apart so you don't have to deal with the awkward unsnapped overlap at the heart's bottom there

SPOILER

(had to adjust the previous combo a bit)
02:32:760 (1) - like Easy, i felt the spinner was a bit loud, consider making a decrescendo during this using green lines

sjoy's Hard
00:59:966 (2,3,1) - any reason for the sudden decrease in spacing?
01:04:966 (2,3,4,1) - i think it'd be cool to center this pattern

SPOILER

makes a nice transition into the kiai imo
01:25:555 (3,4) - flip this rhythm

SPOILER

fits the vocals more smoothly imo
01:36:143 (1,2) - i think its better off using distance snap and making these touch, also avoids the funny blanketing here
01:47:319 (2) - try this rhythm instead

SPOILER

if you hear the bgm closely, the beat starts on 01:47:172 - ,atm it seemed like you were making your own rhythm with the hitsounds or something =v=
01:58:202 (2) - Delete Finish on head, clap on reverse
02:04:084 (3,4,1) - hmm i think you can straighten out this stream better ~

SPOILER

02:17:613 (3) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bgm
02:27:319 (1) - ^
02:29:084 (1) - ^

Insane
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1224355 - wait is that the guy from your skype pic LOLLLLLL
00:20:555 (3) - make this curve and blanket (2)? wasnt sure where the angle was derived from
00:30:849 (1,2) - a little far imo, i suggest decrease the distance a bit like at 00:12:614 (1,2) - , they both have similar tones anyway
02:32:760 (1) - same as Easy, consider making a decrescendo

hnNGnnGngh

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2014-01-04T07:47:15+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
oh i'll nuke you hard ☢mmMmMmMmMMmMM☢

General
- delete "the" from tags lololo i see what you did there

Easy
01:27:319 (2) - maybe angle this a bit deeper so it's not in the awkward alignment with (1), like it's trying to be parallel but not xD aite
SPOILER
02:32:760 (1) - spinner was a bit loud towards the end, try making a decrescendo using green lines ok

Insane
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1224355 - wait is that the guy from your skype pic LOLLLLLL yes it is, though he looks lameee in the ova
00:20:555 (3) - make this curve and blanket (2)? wasnt sure where the angle was derived from lol just wanted some variety, but by my style today i would go with curved slider so changed
00:30:849 (1,2) - a little far imo, i suggest decrease the distance a bit like at 00:12:614 (1,2) - , they both have similar tones anyway sure
02:32:760 (1) - same as Easy, consider making a decrescendo so i just copy pasted the code form Easy does that count

hnNGnnGngh

mon body est ready

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-01-04T08:29:32+00:00

sjoy's Hard
00:59:966 (2,3,1) - any reason for the sudden decrease in spacing? it's my fault .fixed
01:04:966 (2,3,4,1) - i think it'd be cool to center this pattern

SPOILER

makes a nice transition into the kiai imo ok
01:25:555 (3,4) - flip this rhythm

SPOILER

fits the vocals more smoothly imofixed
01:36:143 (1,2) - i think its better off using distance snap and making these touch, also avoids the funny blanketing herefixed
01:47:319 (2) - try this rhythm instead

SPOILER

if you hear the bgm closely, the beat starts on 01:47:172 - ,atm it seemed like you were making your own rhythm with the hitsounds or something =v=changed it
01:58:202 (2) - Delete Finish on head, clap on reverse add the clap,but I think this fin is ok

02:04:084 (3,4,1) - hmm i think you can straighten out this stream better ~

SPOILER

fixed
02:17:613 (3) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bgm fixed
02:27:319 (1) - ^ fixed
02:29:084 (1) - ^ fixed
thanks for modding

I'm a noob mapper

http://puu.sh/692o9.rar

Last edited by sjoy 2014-01-04T09:05:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2014-01-04T09:04:07+00:00

@CDFA
Those finishes you mentioned, I'd rather not add them since they have no cymbal supporting it~
Thx anyway for modding ^^

You didnt upload my latest update ><

LunarSakuya wrote:
xChippy's Normal
00:10:359 - snap this green line to the red tick & make the volume 40% fixed
00:23:496 (4) - NC to isolate this scale, would look cool imo fixed
01:09:672 (4) - nazi but maybe curve this slider more to blanket (5) better xD this isnt a blanket owo since you got the old version owo
01:18:496 (1) - ^ same, it'd be nice to redo these with the new slider maker. Subtle but the little details can accumulate overall lol done
01:36:143 (2) - NC to introduce the kiai? done
02:25:555 (1,2) - i suggest to stick with the distance snap and space these apart so you don't have to deal with the awkward unsnapped overlap at the aight doneheart's bottom there
SPOILER
(had to adjust the previous combo a bit)
02:32:760 (1) - like Easy, i felt the spinner was a bit loud, consider making a decrescendo during this using green lines yep

hnNGnnGngh

Thx for modding Sakuya~ ;3/!!

xChippy's Normal

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Giralda

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Giralda 2014-01-04T13:37:22+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
oh i'll nuke you hard

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-01-04T17:08:10+00:00

xChippy wrote:
You didnt upload my latest update ><

wat i swear i did ><
also when i was checking Normal 01:52:025 (5,1) - are out of screen, so i moved it up a bit hope you dont mind
~~i should get kd for that~~

anyways all updated, Giralda cant wait to see me get nuked

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2014-01-05T02:02:51+00:00

~~Giralda you naughty little boy~~

im so screwed

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2014-01-05T03:13:25+00:00

Omg.... Jona pro ><
Congrtaz!! Osu! needs more ChouCho

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-01-05T03:15:26+00:00

wait what just happened

did you just rank this without bubbling LOL

i thought u were kidding about ranking this

Giralda

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Giralda 2014-01-05T03:16:10+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
Giralda you naughty little boy

i love you too LS. ♥

and congrats jonny ♥

inb4 nuked

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-01-05T03:17:41+00:00

Unranked for obvious reasons, bubble was not in place before rank.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-01-05T03:20:47+00:00

Loved this mapset. Rank again soon please <3

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-01-05T03:21:35+00:00

~~omg am i a pro mapper now that my map experienced unrank~~

but yeah just to clarify things a bit, i think there were some confusion about the state of this map; another one of my pending map is also bubbled AND i received a mod promise from another BAT for this map, hence LunarSakuya probably thought this was bubbled because she knows everything about my maps

please dont raise shtstorm in this thread

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2014-01-05T03:24:29+00:00

wow did i just do that

Giralda

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Giralda 2014-01-05T03:25:08+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
wow did i just do that

Do you even...

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-01-05T03:33:51+00:00

I just gave it my check, have my bubble.

popner

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popner 2014-01-05T03:33:53+00:00

~~Reset to bubbled status, for LunarSakuya.~~

Oh Nyquill.

Edit: I have no time to check this map now so ignore my post.

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-01-05T03:34:57+00:00

wtf popner

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-01-05T03:36:21+00:00

lol so many things happening at once

so im guessing the current bubble will be Nyquill's Instead of LunarSakuya?

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-01-05T03:37:54+00:00

yes

popner

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popner 2014-01-05T03:39:11+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
lol so many things happening at once

so im guessing the current bubble will be Nyquill's Instead of LunarSakuya?

I guess so, but actually I think the bubble belongs to LunarSakuya, considering the misoperation. Now I think we should go with Nyquill's bubble since it is already there, after Nyquill's check.

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-01-05T03:39:51+00:00

Either way, best if someone else comes to rank, though I don't think its technically illegal for LS to rerank. What do you say mr bat manager?

Actually, just consider my check lunarsakuya's. This is lunarsakuya's bubble.

This actually leads us into an odd paradox, meaning I can actually rerank while giving the bubble....

popner

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popner 2014-01-05T03:41:50+00:00

Hmm..I will try to have a look at this map tomorrow.

你们不是都懂中文么

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-01-05T03:45:44+00:00

LunarSakuya写中文有点困难，所以我们post的时候习惯用英文交流

anyways since popner said he will check this later i guess the issue is resolved? if any one wants to know the cause behind this refer to p/2785351

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2014-01-05T04:22:43+00:00

wow. throwing stars at an unranked map is the coolest thing you can ever do.

star.

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-01-05T04:29:10+00:00

NOTE: If you pop this bubble, or mod rank, remember to wipe scores.

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-01-05T04:54:15+00:00

lol....

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-01-05T07:59:45+00:00

I come here to rank you

jk

Also it's now a Nyquill's bubble and LunarSakuya should be able to rank it
since the previous bubble, which was a heart and now is a broken heart, wasn't popped by any technical issues in the map itself but the swag action lel

Aurele

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Aurele 2014-01-05T08:03:40+00:00

wait, I don't understand. Did LunarSakuya ranked the map instead of bubbling? LOLOL

Nice fail ♥

Alarido

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Alarido 2014-01-05T09:00:16+00:00

No matter if popner LS or sharpy bubbled it, let's rank this map jonaaaa~ ♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡♥♡

de olho nos conselhos do Mestre Iodo

Giralda

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Giralda 2014-01-05T14:38:10+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
now is a broken heart

Implying Sakuya's heart got broken after what she did.

w

popner

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popner 2014-01-06T09:24:50+00:00

Checked and nothing important to mention, but I suggest AR9 for Insane because some part is hard to read for me under AR8 (for example pattern like 01:21:437 (1,2,3,4) -, and 1/8 beats like 00:17:172 (4,5,6,7,8) - ). Just my feeling so it is up to you.

Poke me when you are ready.

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2014-01-06T16:27:07+00:00

popner wrote:
Checked and nothing important to mention, but I suggest AR9 for Insane because some part is hard to read for me under AR8 (for example pattern like 01:21:437 (1,2,3,4) -, and 1/8 beats like 00:17:172 (4,5,6,7,8) - ). Just my feeling so it is up to you.

Poke me when you are ready.

Yep changed to AR9, I was afraid it might be hard to react to but then it makes the kiai and jumps a lot easier to read, so the trade off is worth it i guess.

Not sure what is happening to BSS but i can't update right now, will edit this post once i update it

EDIT: Updated

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-01-06T21:58:01+00:00

Scores wiped.

popner

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popner 2014-01-07T05:35:54+00:00