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Nam Goo-Min - Second Run

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Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[General]

Remove the countdown. (I know you can't hear it, but maybe peppy'll fix that later, so stick on the safe side)

Source? Tags?

Preview points need to be set.

Didn't really think Kiai fit the tune well, your choice.

[Normal]

Sounds nice. I nearly fell asleep, then I realized I actually have homework. The last timing section could be made to be softer, and I don't think having that many stacked spinners at the end is rankable. Otherwise, nice job.

[Insane]

Same comments as Normal, pretty much. Patterns also got a little confusing, but it's Insane.

Not starred, because you told me to~
Last edited by Kytoxid , edited 1 time in total.
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
I nearly fell asleep
I should have mapped it better ;_;
I'll keep the spinners for now

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [Bmin's Normal].osu

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [Bmin's Insane].osu
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid

bmin11 wrote:

I nearly fell asleep
I should have mapped it better ;_;
I'll keep the spinners for now
XDD, it's not your mapping, it's the song. :P
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Nice map

Only thing i can say about is to set a preview point
And lol at Insane... It caught me offguard and failed so badly D:

And also, why cant i star this map? D:
Hange
27 posts
Joined December 2008
Hange
Minor request issue
Source:Talesweaver
Tags:tales weaver Nauts Nexon
Since there is another Second Run put "Nauts" as the artist, I think it's better if you put that in tag too. ;)
They are the same person anyway...so no need to change the artist.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Wait for me ~ >:(
I found Im good at map [Normal] than [Hard].
So I need more time for its quality~
Thanks~ :)
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
DeathxShinigami
Sorry I can't seem to add Nauts to the artist...BSS likes to go nuts whenever I edit that part. Anyways, I don't think there needs to be any more dramatic changes so its not much of a big deal.
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
New version with source, tag, and a view point.
Last edited by bmin11 , edited 1 time in total.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Finally done~

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [kino's Hard].osu
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Sweet kino77 :) I like your diff. Beautiful
I changed the BG for you and some changes for my diffs (kiai)
Some few notes for kino77
00:26:001 (1) - I don't like this spacing. Screws me up
00:48:075 (1) - I had no problem but somebody could
00:51:028 (3) - The last note is missing a clap

Anyway, download the osz file I added below.
I forgot to add the tags for kino77's hard so add it for me plz
Thanks, DxS

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run.osz
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
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Topic Starter
DeathxShinigami
uploaded with corrections! (I hope) Still getting a BSS problem with adding Nauts as the artist. Will look into that in the weekend when I get more spare time. =/
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
Sorry DxS..... :cry: I Posted the file without BGs.....
Here is the new one.....

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run.osz
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11

kino77 wrote:

Thanks fixing for me bmin11~ :P
You diffs are great also~ :)

But I still needs two silence .wav files named "normal-sliderslide" and "soft-sliderslide" in song floder use as custom. hitsound
How could I send to you or you'd add those two for me DxS?

Also~Star~
Don't know how custom hitsound works..... you can just post it on the thread though and I'll add to file, but as I mentioned, I do not know how custom hitsound works.....
DeathxShinigami
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Topic Starter
DeathxShinigami

bmin11 wrote:

kino77 wrote:

Thanks fixing for me bmin11~ :P
You diffs are great also~ :)

But I still needs two silence .wav files named "normal-sliderslide" and "soft-sliderslide" in song floder use as custom. hitsound
How could I send to you or you'd add those two for me DxS?

Also~Star~
Don't know how custom hitsound works..... you can just post it on the thread though and I'll add to file, but as I mentioned, I do not know how custom hitsound works.....[/quote]

Same here... D;
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Now we both look like an idiot
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: hitsounds.zip
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
You didn't full submitted it D: Fullsubmitt with the one I posted and the hitsound plz
Lokamp
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Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Bmin's Normal
00:05:080 (1) - move it a square down

kino's Hard
[General]... where's the background? ^^" remember to set it even for this mode
00:25:070 (3) - move it 2-3 squares down (spacing)

Bmin's Insane
01:36:044 (12) - ... move it in another place... near to the slider is a bit ugly...

Well, it looks like some pieces of Normal mode have random spacing... but the other modes were fine.
Remember to set the background on Hard, too! ;3
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11

Lokamp wrote:

Bmin's Normal
00:05:080 (1) - move it a square down
My Distance Snap won't let me do this D: fixed without Distance snap

Bmin's Insane
01:36:044 (12) - ... move it in another place... near to the slider is a bit ugly...
Fixed
Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [Bmin's Insane].osu

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [Bmin's Normal].osu
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
kino77
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kino77
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bmin11
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bmin11

kino77 wrote:

Sorry Im AFK this weekend,and thanks Dusty for the hitsound,the thread wouldn't allowed me to add .wav files,but I never think of .zip~

Lokamp wrote:

kino's Hard
[General]... where's the background? ^^" remember to set it even for this mode
00:25:070 (3) - move it 2-3 squares down (spacing)
00:25:070 (3)-Actually the spacing is right with x1.2 distance snap,so I think you might mean the start of 1 doesn't disappered when 3 show up in edit,but it seems no problem in test~
So I won't change~please just help me with BG~DxS~ ;)

Could I call people to mod this now?
Here is my star~:)
Go redownload the map and the BG is ready for you. You have to change the hitsounds by your self though
Go call peoples to mod too :D

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [Bmin's Insane].osu

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [Bmin's Normal].osu
DeathxShinigami
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Topic Starter
DeathxShinigami
uploaded as of 12/06/09..Won't be on much after today, I'll try to update hopefully before thursday.
Gens
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Gens
[General]
  1. Why is the source in the tags field? I don't think it's necessary. Also, tags need to be applied to all difficulties.
  2. Delete "Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (bmin11).osb" from the folder and full submit.
[Bmin's Normal]
  1. Feels a little harder than a normal... Making an easier difficulty is always good.
01:17:177 - Maybe add a beat here? Moving (2) here works too. It's kind of trippy.

[Bmin's Insane]

00:19:150 - I don't think this break is necessary.

~ ~ ~

Also, about the artist name change, yes it's kind of weird how to do it, but I know how. Simply change the artist in one difficulty, full submit, and then change the artist on the other difficulties, and standard submit. :)
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Tags added on kino77's hard
Deleted bmin11 something and fixed as the mod
Fullsubmit plz

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run.osz
kino77
909 posts
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kino77
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
alvisto
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alvisto
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DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
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kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Thanks modding alvisto~

Gonna AFK from now~
But I'll call people to mod and keep eyes on it till rank~ :)
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
I do agree with you on whistles, but not claps. I mean claps on instrumental (Classic) doesn't fit neither :o
I might go for soft whistle when I really have time or if somebody can get a soft whistle file for me (I don't know how the heck they get it). I agree with your newcombos. Looks much better. I'll work on newcombos later....
Currently, [Insane] has no hitsounds. Need suggestions

To Kino77
Hey. Thanks for the comboburst :) but can you do me a favour? It would be nice if the comboburst was larger and we should use this one too. Should we?


Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run.osz
DeathxShinigami
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Topic Starter
DeathxShinigami
Personally I like the one you just posted bmin, nicer quality and a better overall standout comboburst than kino's. p:
kino77
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Joined March 2009
kino77

bmin11 wrote:

To Kino77
Hey. Thanks for the comboburst :) but can you do me a favour? It would be nice if the comboburst was larger and we should use this one too. Should we?
Ya~this one is better than mine~Just use this~ :)
Diasios
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Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Offset = 755

[Bmin's Normal]

01:50:088 (1) - End = 01:56:019 (white tick)

[kino's Hard]

Awesome *w*

[Bmin's Insane]

01:50:088 (1) - End = 01:56:019 (white tick)

Starred~
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Hi~ Mod asked by kino.

[General]
Add tags 'bmin11' and 'kino77'


[Bmin's Normal]
00:09:012 (6) - new combo
01:45:075 (1,1,1,1,1) - I'm little bit annoyed at these spinners spin sound. Consider make to other way or decrease audio volume.


[kino's Hard]
00:38:001 (7) - new combo


[Bmin's Insane]
offset 756
01:47:003 (1,1,1,1) - same as Normal.


Nice instrument and map. :)

bmin11
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bmin11
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run.osz
arien666
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Joined May 2009
arien666
[Bmin's Normal]
00:06:44(2,3,4) - [Suggestion] I saw these note's distance are LITTLE different. You can ignore this suggestion :3
01:03:91(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
01:06:44(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:17:65(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:22:22(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:31:54(7,1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?

[kino's Hard]
00:29:80(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:10:22(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:14:01(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] I saw these note's distance are a little different. Maybe you need to check them :3
01:20:65(2) - Move 1 grid up
01:24:44(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

[Bmin's Insane]
00:41:19(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:03:30(6) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:03:93(10) - [Suggestion] New combo?
01:08:98(11) - ^

Good song :3
And good luck for this XD

Here's my star XD
DJPop
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3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Bmin's Normal~
00:58:038 (1,2) - don't overlap

~Kino's Hard~
00:48:044 (3,4,1) - bad spacing
01:43:007 (4) - silence the ending

~Bmin's Insane~
00:02:003 (6) - new combo
00:04:056 (1) - ^
00:15:093 (3) - end on white tick
01:03:093 (10) - new combo
01:08:098 (11) - ^
01:30:077 (11) - ^
01:31:024 (1) - remove new combo
01:35:051 (7) - new combo
01:38:035 (6) - ^
01:40:064 (7,8) - suggest to delete them


+Star
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77

arien666 wrote:

[kino's Hard]
00:29:80(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:10:22(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:14:01(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] I saw these note's distance are a little different. Maybe you need to check them :3
01:20:65(2) - Move 1 grid up
01:24:44(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

DJPop wrote:

~Kino's Hard~
00:48:044 (3,4,1) - bad spacing
01:43:007 (4) - silence the ending
All fixed~Thanks~

To bmin~Fixed~ :)

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [kino's Hard].osu
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

-Timing looks close enough
-Make an easy? The song is short so it should be much of a problem

[BMIN'S NORMAL]

no problems

[KINO'S HARD]

Some of the little jumps, like at 00:21:075 (4,1) are awkward, but they can be fun, so no problems

[BMIN'S HARD]

-I like your hitsounds for this. nice touch
-This should be called insane. It's too hard for a hard
-I think you overmapped this. such a hard, fast map for a slow song :(

00:16:040 (4) - I think you should make this 1/4 longer, and delete the slider just after this one. it feels awkward the way it is

Nice map. Some rough edges but its a nice package overall

star'd
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
To arken
some was uneccery but new combos were really helpful. Thanks

To DJPop
Omg It's DJPop ignore it. I was too excited
01:40:064 (7,8) - suggest to delete them
Couldn't understand, but tried my best. Thanks for the mod

To Doomsy
It does feels like overmapped but I'll keep it for now
Thanks for the mod

To kino
00:26:003 (1) - plz fix this. I did told you a few days ago
Thanks

To DxS
Sorry. I uploaded without BGs again. Sorry

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run.osz
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
new combo suggestions to help the spacing

Bmin's Normal
00:14:066 (7) - add new combo
00:15:061 (1) - remove new combo

kino's Hard
01:31:072 (1) - remove new combo

Bmin's Insane
01:08:035 (7) - new combo
01:08:098 (1) - remove new combo, and add new combo on the next note
01:30:077 (11) - new combo
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77

bmin11 wrote:

To kino
00:26:003 (1) - plz fix this. I did told you a few days ago
Thanks
I try to fix but I don't know if it fit?
Please recheck it ~
Thanks~ ;)

To EEeee
Fixed~
Thanks~

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [kino's Hard].osu
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Remove bmin11's osb file.

Bmin's Norma:l
Combo mod:
01:37:247 (5) - consider adding a new combo here to break up the long combo

kino's Hard:
Timing section mod:
There are quite a few timing sections in the beginning of the song that should be moved back a quarter note such as 00:27:28.

Bmin's Insane:
Combo mod:
I am a little confused on how you added combos in the first 20s. Your first 3 combos are quite short, but the fourth combo is quite long even though it covers a similar part of the music. Then after these 4 combos you do something inbetween. I would this part to the map to have consistent combos, but it is your choice to fix it or not.

===
Nice map with very few flaws. Star.
bmin11
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bmin11
hope it turned out ok
Need help for comboburst...
Yes_old
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Joined May 2009
Yes_old
insane
01:32:082 (5) - spacing

hard
nothing~ :D

normal
00:12:077 (5) - whistle?
00:33:093 (4) - ^
00:34:040 (6) - ^
00:34:072 (7) - ^
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
by request, and hi DxS~ plz make a diff for your own submitted map even if its for someone else >_>

Normal- as long as this doesn't get called [Easy], I'm quite fine with it
only thing I want to point out -> Since you used 00:41:19 - used a 0.5x timing panel.... shouldn't 01:40:48 also? (since it sounded slower, too)
-excuses the 4x spinner ending-

Hard- Overall diff +1, please
01:36:65 - timing panel is "too loud" imo
other those that... this map is nice~

Insane- Overall diff +1 for sure, maybe even +2 on overall, but then that would be seem kinda fast for the -song-, but would feel good for the -map- >_<~ (I'd prefer +2)
Too much whistles! though most of them makes sense, so its okay, but, please reduce the whistles in the slower sections
This map looks fun, but I can't click at 190BPM so long T.T;
Its fine~!
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
I can't find much wrong, good map. I don't think it's much of a problem that you don't have a difficulty here, but it's kinda "meh" for me. What I disagree with is you're gonna take the credit/mapper ranking stuff from bmin, for not contributing. The part that contradicts this is that IT WAS a favor, and if bmin agreed to let you take cred, then you don't have to make a difficulty.

eeemod GO!!!

there are two .osb files in the folder, consider removing them? saves space and I've seen other's point this out :(

[kino]
the preview point is different from the other diffs, suggest making them consistent (for an opinion, I like the previews in bmin's)

that is all, star :D
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
To blissfulyoshi,Yes,Shinxyn and eee~
All fixed~
Thanks a lot~!

Download: Nam Goo-Min - Second Run (DeathxShinigami) [kino's Hard].osu
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
To Shinxyn
Normal- as long as this doesn't get called [Easy], I'm quite fine with it
only thing I want to point out -> Since you used 00:41:19 - used a 0.5x timing panel.... shouldn't 01:40:48 also? (since it sounded slower, too)
It does but I'll keep it for now since it is the climax

To eee

eee wrote:

I can't find much wrong, good map. I don't think it's much of a problem that you don't have a difficulty here, but it's kinda "meh" for me. What I disagree with is you're gonna take the credit/mapper ranking stuff from bmin, for not contributing. The part that contradicts this is that IT WAS a favor, and if bmin agreed to let you take cred, then you don't have to make a difficulty.

DxS wrote:

For bmin11..He can't upload right now so I uploaded it for him for reference
Which means I'll be uploading the map as mine later. Thanks for the mod :D

To kino77
Set the preview point on 00:57:093 plz. Thanks you :)

To DxS
I don't think I'll be online on 12/18 due to some business. Sorry and Thank you
Oh and I might work on [Easy]. PM me if you want to discuss about [Easy]

P.S I'm actually here now and I can upload this. Gonna talk with DxS now
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bmin11
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bmin11
]Now Second Run is uploaded on this thread
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