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Feint - The Journey ft. Veela

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Hula
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 January 2014 at 03:27:34

Artist: Feint
Title: The Journey ft. Veela
Tags: dnb drum and bass d'n'b
BPM: 172
Filesize: 8082kb
Play Time: 04:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crappier journey (5 stars, 667 notes)
  2. Newer 3/4 bigger journey lol (5 stars, 674 notes)
  3. Pretty Hard Journey (4.99 stars, 584 notes)
  4. Standard Journey (4.66 stars, 88 notes)
  5. THIS WILL BE NORMAL GODDAMMIT (4.61 stars, 33 notes)
Download: Feint - The Journey ft. Veela
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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crap

I'm actually going to remap this - dec 2014
[Luanny]
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Topic Starter
Hula

[Luanny] wrote:

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Mythiax
keep trying! the map has potential.

IRC mod/suggestions
2013-11-15 21:27 Zeroarg: you can try a better placing
2013-11-15 21:27 Zeroarg: overall
2013-11-15 21:28 Zeroarg: seems well mapped
2013-11-15 21:30 Hula: \o\
2013-11-15 21:31 Zeroarg: yeah xd
2013-11-15 21:31 Hula: actual opinion?
2013-11-15 21:31 Hula: be harsh
2013-11-15 21:31 Zeroarg: few misses due to lag ;_;
2013-11-15 21:31 Hula: idc
2013-11-15 21:31 Zeroarg: didn't felt anything out of place
2013-11-15 21:31 Zeroarg: setup seems fine
2013-11-15 21:31 Hula: \o/
2013-11-15 21:32 Hula: ooh
2013-11-15 21:32 Hula: another playthrough
2013-11-15 21:32 Hula: amazing!
2013-11-15 21:32 Zeroarg: HP seems to be too low xd
2013-11-15 21:32 Hula: lol
2013-11-15 21:32 Hula: Oh
2013-11-15 21:32 Zeroarg: i can pass with 87% with Hr
2013-11-15 21:32 Hula: ye
2013-11-15 21:33 Zeroarg: OD is ok
2013-11-15 21:33 Hula: hm
2013-11-15 21:33 Hula: it's od 8
2013-11-15 21:33 Hula: haha
2013-11-15 21:33 Hula: hr + od 8
2013-11-15 21:33 Hula: insane!
2013-11-15 21:34 Zeroarg: yeah
2013-11-15 21:34 Zeroarg: HP bar recovers really easy and fast
2013-11-15 21:34 Hula: need more hp drain?
2013-11-15 21:34 Zeroarg: also
2013-11-15 21:34 Hula: i think it might be default
2013-11-15 21:34 Hula: haha
2013-11-15 21:34 Zeroarg: at the beginneg
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: oh it's 6
2013-11-15 21:35 Zeroarg: beggining
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: don't like?
2013-11-15 21:35 Zeroarg: well
2013-11-15 21:35 Zeroarg: spacing it's too messed up
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: beginning*
2013-11-15 21:35 Zeroarg: try to make it more concistent
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: spacing is actually
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: all snapped
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: :V
2013-11-15 21:35 Zeroarg: i hate that word, can't write it properly
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: or most of it
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: haha
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: hm
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: i'll look into it
2013-11-15 21:35 Zeroarg: and
2013-11-15 21:35 Zeroarg: slower part
2013-11-15 21:35 Hula: i don't want it to be too linear
2013-11-15 21:36 Zeroarg: can be more interesting
2013-11-15 21:36 Zeroarg: it's pretty borind
2013-11-15 21:36 Zeroarg: and i expected
2013-11-15 21:36 Hula: it's meant to be a break within a break
2013-11-15 21:36 Hula: idk what else to put there
2013-11-15 21:36 Zeroarg: you followed voice there
2013-11-15 21:36 Hula: ye
2013-11-15 21:36 Zeroarg: and you followed BG muisc
2013-11-15 21:36 Hula: i followed what was obvious
2013-11-15 21:36 Zeroarg: so try to improve that too
2013-11-15 21:36 Hula: since it was quiet
2013-11-15 21:37 Hula: what aboutt hose 1/4 sliders
2013-11-15 21:37 Hula: at the end of the first part
2013-11-15 21:37 Hula: keep or lose?
2013-11-15 21:37 Zeroarg: they feel boring
2013-11-15 21:37 Hula: i can replace with a good old jumping scene
2013-11-15 21:37 Hula: i think
2013-11-15 21:37 Zeroarg: instead of that
2013-11-15 21:37 Hula: hm
2013-11-15 21:37 Zeroarg: what about
2013-11-15 21:37 Zeroarg: kick sliders following voice?
2013-11-15 21:37 Hula: i tyhink i only got 1.5 beats to play with though
2013-11-15 21:38 Hula: oh
2013-11-15 21:39 Hula: HAHA
2013-11-15 21:39 Zeroarg: yeah i can dance whole map
2013-11-15 21:39 Zeroarg: and miss
2013-11-15 21:39 Zeroarg: and i don't die
2013-11-15 21:39 Zeroarg: xd
2013-11-15 21:39 Hula: amazing
2013-11-15 21:39 Zeroarg: lemme try something at editor
2013-11-15 21:39 Hula: k
2013-11-15 21:53 Zeroarg: okay
2013-11-15 21:53 Zeroarg: sorry for afk
2013-11-15 21:53 Zeroarg: look at this
2013-11-15 21:54 Hula: hm
2013-11-15 21:54 Hula: what am I looking at
2013-11-15 21:54 Zeroarg: if you wait until i take the screenshot
2013-11-15 21:54 Zeroarg: = =''
2013-11-15 21:55 Hula: :v
2013-11-15 21:56 Zeroarg: i lowed the AR so you can see the whole pattern
2013-11-15 21:56 Zeroarg: i'll send you the code if you want it
2013-11-15 21:57 Zeroarg: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1104077
2013-11-15 21:57 Zeroarg: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1104080
2013-11-15 21:57 Hula: send me da code
2013-11-15 21:58 Zeroarg: that fits much better than 1/1 sliders :P
2013-11-15 21:58 Hula: as long as you haven't touched anything else
2013-11-15 21:58 Hula: :V
2013-11-15 21:58 Hula: haha
2013-11-15 21:58 Hula: i hope so
2013-11-15 21:58 Zeroarg: i'll only send those notes
2013-11-15 21:58 Hula: the 1/1 sliders were just put in
2013-11-15 21:58 Zeroarg: so you won't mess up
2013-11-15 21:58 Hula: oh cool
2013-11-15 21:58 Hula: <3
2013-11-15 21:58 Zeroarg: 01:52:687 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2013-11-15 21:58 Zeroarg: delete all notes
2013-11-15 21:58 Zeroarg: those
2013-11-15 21:58 Zeroarg: or every note between
2013-11-15 21:59 Zeroarg: 01:52:687 -
2013-11-15 21:59 Zeroarg: and
2013-11-15 21:59 Zeroarg: 01:59:664 -
2013-11-15 22:00 Hula: k
2013-11-15 22:00 Hula: once i get this difficulty kind of nicely done
2013-11-15 22:00 Hula: i will make the rest
2013-11-15 22:00 Hula: hard and normal or w.e
2013-11-15 22:00 Zeroarg: H N I
2013-11-15 22:00 Zeroarg: it's usual for long songs
2013-11-15 22:00 Hula: ye
2013-11-15 22:00 Zeroarg: depending on mappers lazyness
2013-11-15 22:01 Zeroarg: http://puu.sh/5jx7E.osu
2013-11-15 22:02 Zeroarg: only copy HitObjects
2013-11-15 22:02 Zeroarg: first save your map
2013-11-15 22:02 Zeroarg: without the notes
2013-11-15 22:02 Zeroarg: then paste the code at the end and save it
2013-11-15 22:03 Hula: i like the repeating slider
2013-11-15 22:03 Zeroarg: it's the most fitting thing i could make there xd
2013-11-15 22:04 Zeroarg: it can be much more interesting that way
2013-11-15 22:04 Hula: ye
2013-11-15 22:04 Hula: testing now
2013-11-15 22:06 Hula: haha
2013-11-15 22:06 Hula: fuck my life
2013-11-15 22:06 Hula: i failed at pasting it in
2013-11-15 22:06 Hula: cos now when i play it
2013-11-15 22:06 Hula: it treats it like it's still int he break somehow
2013-11-15 22:06 Hula: what did i do wrong D:
2013-11-15 22:06 Zeroarg: update and i'll check
2013-11-15 22:06 Hula: sec
2013-11-15 22:07 Hula: i have a back up anyway
2013-11-15 22:09 Hula: updated
2013-11-15 22:09 Hula: fixed it
2013-11-15 22:09 Hula: i put a circle in the break, saved it, deleted it and saved it again
2013-11-15 22:09 Zeroarg: ok let's test now
2013-11-15 22:10 Hula: updating again
2013-11-15 22:10 Hula: sec
2013-11-15 22:10 Zeroarg: okay owo
2013-11-15 22:11 Hula: k
2013-11-15 22:11 Hula: now
2013-11-15 22:11 Hula: upate
2013-11-15 22:11 Hula: oh
2013-11-15 22:11 Hula: i got 2 journey homes
2013-11-15 22:11 Hula: haha
2013-11-15 22:11 Zeroarg: rofl
2013-11-15 22:15 Zeroarg: yeah
2013-11-15 22:15 Zeroarg: plays much better
2013-11-15 22:15 Zeroarg: also
2013-11-15 22:15 Zeroarg: HP 8 pls
2013-11-15 22:15 Hula: hm ok
Soinou
Hi !

I promised you a mod, so here it is, even if it's not really useful.

These are just advices, i'm surely not the best modder here, but i'll try to make the best i can do, because i really want this map ranked, just because you did an amazing job here :).

Journey Home
General :


I'm repeating myself again, but i think CS 5 is amazing on this, but i'm probably the only one to think this xD.

Also, because it's really really well timed, OD 9 doesn't make this a lot harder. So if you wanted to make your map a bit harder to SS, OD 9 could be a good thing to do. But it's just my opinion, feel free to do whatever you want :P.

Map :


00:45:711 (3,4,6,8) - I'm not a fan of sliders like these. peppy has implemented bezier curves to make rounded sliders, so i think it's a shame to not use it. It makes flow a lot better imo. But well, it's your map, it's your choice :P. I'm not going to post here all sliders like these, but i think there's a lot in the map.

00:50:245 (1,2,3) - I think a stacked triplet could be better, not a fan of triplets like these. They feel weird :/.

00:54:083 (2) - Why not reverse it ? And maybe space it a bit, for moar flow.

00:56:873 (2) - ^

00:57:745 (5) - ^ \o/

01:02:106 (1) - ^ :3

02:16:757 (4,5,6) - Same as the second line, i think a stacked triplet would feel a lot better.

02:21:641 (1,2,3) - Don't really like the V shape, i think a U shape would be a lot better. Make the sliders a bit more rounded and make the circle go up a bit.

02:33:327 (3,4,5) - Another stacked triplet maybe ? :P

02:53:036 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I love the flow here, but maybe space it a bit more ?

03:12:484 (9,10,11,12,13) - I'm really not a fan of weird shapes like this, i think rounded shapes feels so much better.

03:18:152 (9,1,2,3) - Maybe space it a bit too ? :3

03:24:344 (1,2) - Feels awkard to play, maybe move the circle a bit ?

03:34:896 (6,7,8) - Same, maybe destack it a bit ? You have some spaced triplets, some spaced streams, and from time to time some packed triplets like these. It feels somehow inconsistent and it feels kinda bad to play :/

Well, i hope it will be useful to you.

Gl getting this ranked ;).
Topic Starter
Hula
Woop woop, I'll do this later. Fyi the 3/4 sliders i put in aren't going to stay, was just checking em out, and I've been lazy!
Topic Starter
Hula

Soinou wrote:

Hi !

I promised you a mod, so here it is, even if it's not really useful.

These are just advices, i'm surely not the best modder here, but i'll try to make the best i can do, because i really want this map ranked, just because you did an amazing job here :).

[Journey Home]
General :


I'm repeating myself again, but i think CS 5 is amazing on this, but i'm probably the only one to think this xD.

Also, because it's really really well timed, OD 9 doesn't make this a lot harder. So if you wanted to make your map a bit harder to SS, OD 9 could be a good thing to do. But it's just my opinion, feel free to do whatever you want :P.

Map :


00:45:711 (3,4,6,8) - I'm not a fan of sliders like these. peppy has implemented bezier curves to make rounded sliders, so i think it's a shame to not use it. It makes flow a lot better imo. But well, it's your map, it's your choice :P. I'm not going to post here all sliders like these, but i think there's a lot in the map. I felt having these gave more variation to the map, which it kind of needs as it's a repetitive song, and i thought it kind of gives the map a weird sense of rhythmt

00:50:245 (1,2,3) - I think a stacked triplet could be better, not a fan of triplets like these. They feel weird :/. Agreed

00:54:083 (2) - Why not reverse it ? And maybe space it a bit, for moar flow. I like this, i hope you mean it like i think you do :p

00:56:873 (2) - ^ Like it

00:57:745 (5) - ^ \o/ Can't see the repeating slider fitting here

01:02:106 (1) - ^ :3 No, but the 2nd slider in that combo works haha 8D

02:16:757 (4,5,6) - Same as the second line, i think a stacked triplet would feel a lot better. i feel it would too, i feel that this combo is a bit spazzy now. idk though

02:21:641 (1,2,3) - Don't really like the V shape, i think a U shape would be a lot better. Make the sliders a bit more rounded and make the circle go up a bit. I don't really have much slider to play with, just going to round off the corners :p

02:33:327 (3,4,5) - Another stacked triplet maybe ? :P Nahh, i like this one

02:53:036 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I love the flow here, but maybe space it a bit more ? Just the stream, right?

03:12:484 (9,10,11,12,13) - I'm really not a fan of weird shapes like this, i think rounded shapes feels so much better. I like it, i like to wiggle my cursor along it when i play haha

03:18:152 (9,1,2,3) - Maybe space it a bit too ? :3 the other one i spaced was to 0.8x distance snap, this one's the same, so I'll keep it the same :p

03:24:344 (1,2) - Feels awkard to play, maybe move the circle a bit ? The song goes with it, but i didn't really know how it played, so deleted.

03:34:896 (6,7,8) - Same, maybe destack it a bit ? You have some spaced triplets, some spaced streams, and from time to time some packed triplets like these. It feels somehow inconsistent and it feels kinda bad to play :/ Agreed with destacking. And yeah, I've only got 1 or 2 stacks now, but i feel they add a touch of variety to it. Kind of liking this now, i feel like i've messed up some combvos, and i'm super tired.

Well, i hope it will be useful to you.

Gl getting this ranked ;).

Thanks for the mod, I'll think about od 9, but it would mean it would be played less since people would get OWNED. Lol
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