DJPop wrote:

I think the offset is too early.

Video offset: 410

~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
Fine.

~X BURNER~
00:43:62 (4,5) - offscreen
01:04:28 (1) - move start 1/2 right
01:20:42 (1) - on red tick


+Star

Krisom wrote:

For some weird reason, I could not download either the Video nor the background.
Maybe it's just me, but check it anyway please :S. {Fixed. I did a shortcut wrongly, resulting in no videos.}


Easy.-
Everything seems fine.

Normal.-
00:26:28 (3) - The ending of this slider looks weird to me. I'd make it end 1/4 earlier.
00:59:62 (1) - I think this would sound better if this slider ended 1/2 earlier (At: 00:59:95) and you added a beat at 01:00:12

X BURNER.- /Side note: I can't play like this yet/
01:29:22 (1,2,3,4)- This is a bit random to me.
Everything else seems fine to me.

I like the way it's mapped, sorry if I could not find anything.

Star!

Kytoxid wrote:

[Easy]

01:12:01 (1) - A tiny bit too close.
01:15:35 (4) - Move this 1 grid left to line up with the 2 that's upcoming.

[Normal]

All good.

[X BURNER]

01:29:20 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really fit, imo. {I like it :<}

Starred.

JInxyjem wrote:

jmaeshawn wrote:

Also it might be better to have a cool-looking custom comboburst of Tsuna or someone instead of pink default Pippi. She seems to take away from the "fire-ry" feel of the map with all her pink girliness XD

0_o wrote:

Easy and Normal are great, but I'm not crazy about X BURNER. In parts like this:
00:00:077 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -
00:55:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
the increasing spacing doesn't really make sense with the music, and these parts as well as others just feel like jumps for the sake of jumps/difficulty imo. {You are the 1st person to talk about the jumps instead of the streams, lol. P:


I could go into specifics but really, it's mostly a matter of opinion and I'm not gonna force my views on you Easy and Normal were well done, so here's a star.

EDIT: woah I didn't notice this the first time because I exited early because I thought the spinner was the last note >_>
01:29:020 (1,2,3,4) - err yeah, get rid of this, mapping to guitar noise is weird and unintuitive, and anyone who combobreaks on it will hate you {That's the point =D Will remove when 3 modders tell me to. You are no.2}

bmin11 wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:046 (1) - reduce 2 returns
00:09:042 (x) - new slider like #1
00:10:006 (2) - back this slider to white tick and make it like #1
00:56:066 (2) - make kiai starts here?

[Normal]
00:56:049 (3) - make kiai starts here?
Nice Normal

[X BURNER]
turn off your caps lock
00:10:070 (1) - new combo, so people can tell the spacing is different?
00:38:032 (1) - ^
00:56:049 (4) - make kiai starts here?

Star for a nice easy [Easy] and [Normal]. I think we need [Hard] to fill the gap between diffs

WyndII wrote:

[M0D]

[X BURNER]
00:07:050 (1,2,3) - Where did the finish hitsounds go?
00:09:042 (3,4) - is not symmetrical with 00:08:078 (1,6) - or viceversa
00:13:591 - this part feels so incomplete
00:26:063 (6,7,8) - claps here is funnywww
00:37:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are bit out of the grid thing
00:39:323 - remove break
00:44:747 - ^
00:44:664 - ^
00:50:005 - ^
00:58:066 (1,2,3,4) - out of the editor world
01:02:066 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - messy {This is an epicly weird Accelerated Spacing mapping.}
01:29:038 - lower volume


Some are just suggestions, you must follow them.
jk

[Normal]
00:11:082 (1) - remove new combo + 00:11:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - messy
01:02:066 (4) - newcombo
01:08:000 (4) - ^
01:09:034 (7) - ^
01:13:001 (4) - ^
01:18:035 (4) - ^

[Easy]
u should have mapped XBURNER like easy and clean.

This is chinese? like omg o.o {?}
star~

DJPop wrote:

These things should be removed... You can replace with blank images and muted sounds.
- section-pass.png
- section-fail.png
- sectionpass.mp3
- sectionfail.mp3
Erm, wat? I don't see them in my folder.


~Easy~
00:03:065 (1,2,3) - add hitfinish

~Normal~
00:03:065 (4,5,6) - add hitfinish
00:07:050 (1,2,3) - add hitifinish on white ticks

~X BURNER~
00:08:014 (3) - add hitfinish
01:23:038 (1) - end on 01:29:740


I've given you a star before

JInxyjem wrote:

DJPop wrote:

These things should be removed... You can replace with blank images and muted sounds.
- section-pass.png
- section-fail.png
- sectionpass.mp3
- sectionfail.mp3
Erm, wat? I don't see them in my folder.

Mukku wrote:

HIai~

Easy -
Fine.

Normal
Fine.

Hard ~ More like an insane
00:06:006 (4,5) - Intentional gap? {Yup. Its my kind of Accelerated Spacing, a weaker version.

Overall ~ I would suggest lowering volume a bit.. Atleast in Normal and Easy, since they're full of finishes and claps.

DJPop wrote:

Sorry, I didn't tell much clearly =_="

Make a transparent image with 1x1 and rename to "section-pass.png" and "section-fail.png".
Then find a mute sound file (example: normal-slidertick.wav in Chihara Minori - Sakura Mau Kono Yakusoku no Chi de) and rename to "sectionpass.wav" and "sectionfail.wav"

To silence all O X during break times.

osuplayer111 wrote:

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes.
File Size: 13,9MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing seems fine.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase by 1 or 2 ticks HP Drain.

I Don't understand the placing of some new combos.

00:15:064 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:098 (1) - ^
00:26:031 (1) - ^
00:31:064 (1) - ^
01:18:071 (1) - ^
01:19:071 (3) - New combo. {Nope.}

[Normal]

Increase by 1 tick HP Drain for balance with Overall difficulty?

00:59:065 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:19:021 (1) - ^
01:19:071 (2) - New combo.

[X BURNER]

00:00:077 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Why do you change the spacing on all the patterns? This can confuse players. {Thats the point.}
00:05:058 (1,2,3,4) - Adjust spacing. {Intentional.}
00:40:064 (1,2) - You need a short storyboard warning due to BPM change. {The slider is a zigazg one, so its not needed.}

Matma Rex wrote:

OMG man, get it ranked at last and start spamming #mod with something else.

MaxwellDemon wrote:

01:16:734 (x) - Move this inherited timing section 1/4th backward. XD XD
[X BURNER]

00:00:803 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds like a neat idea at this point, but hmm... I am not so sure since this is the start of the song, LOL. And I see I am not first one to remark on this. XD XD

tmokb93 wrote:

[General]
Delete the .osb file, then do a full submission.

{It will just reappear.}

[Easy]
00:31:696 (1) Remove New Combo
01:18:092 (2) Move it 2/4 before {Its called 1/2. Also, moving it sounds like shit}
01:18:761 (1) Remove New Combo

[Hard]
Try to do again the begenning, sometimes it sounds of for some beats D:
the rest seems fine ^^

fartownik wrote:

- First offset -15.
- The 3rd timing section value is probably too fast. (I can barely find offsets, I don't even want to talk about BPMs.)

[Hard]
00:32:069 (8,9) - Spacing.

Good.

Xero_HT wrote:

Wow great mapped!
Hard to find something wrong.

Easy is perfect i think.

Normal
00:48:029 (1-6 purple) Maybe the combo to the left a bit. Just a suggestion!

X Burner
00:30:279 (1-9) The spacing here is kinda strange..
00:41.363 (2) This slider is a bit off screen.

star~

1. I think sectionfail, sectionpass images, and sound samples are not necessary. Brakes are short so they don't even appear when play

1. 00:14:36 (1) - Too close to previous object. I suggest flip whole combo horizontally

Agent Spin Here wrote:

X BURNER
00:04:665 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - aaaaaaah these patterns are impossible to read aargh why{Was going to red this, but then I had a better idea.}
00:16:530 (8) - Start 1/2 later and shorten by 1/2. Just seems a little derp how the start isn't on anything in the music. {It is on something.}

whatever

strager wrote:

General
Remove all your breaks instead of killing the warning arrows.
Star because the maps are correct. However, I wouldn't play them for fun myself. It's mostly the pausing nature of the song, I guess.

Easy
I'd call this a Normal which is much better than the current Normal.
Nothing really wrong with it.

Normal
Seems like a silly Hard difficulty to me.

00:02:745 (3,4) - I wouldn't stack these.
00:11:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - Space as if these were 1/1. Easier to read that way.
00:59:206 (3,1) - Overlap be messy.
00:59:708 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Square mapping is square. (Too long, what the hell.)

X BURNER
Retarded diff name. Change it to "Hard" or "Insane" or something.
Needs more sliders.
Hit Ctrl-A. Notice all those notes along the vertical centre line...? {Uh huh... So what do I do?}

00:48:696 (3,4) - Ctrl-R?
00:56:030 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This was really exciting. Not. Spicy please. Streams? {Added two more beats.}
00:59:708 (1,2) - Space further apart and less symmetrically {I think I fixed it?).

JInxyjem wrote:

Can I not fix that?

JInxyjem wrote:

... anyone who passed the first 38 seconds will definitely pass this.

tmokb93 wrote:

[X BURNER]
Hey you. Look at what AImod (Ctrl + Shift + A) has to say about this one difficulty.