This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年10月12日 at 15:49:19

Artist: Dark Tranquillity
Title: Haven
Source: Haven
Tags: Melodic Death Metal drak tranquility
BPM: 116
Filesize: 3426kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:

1. Blood (4.63 stars, 369 notes)
2. Darkside (5 stars, 529 notes)
3. Silence (1.35 stars, 146 notes)

Download: Dark Tranquillity - Haven
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The first map for ranking.
One of my favorite English songs. Have fun :-).

Sorry, but I didn't pass any of your diff

Recheck your rhythm, flow and the DS is really bad in Normal mode.

Cheers!

Phoenipx wrote:

Hello, Phoenipx here for random mod.

General
-Add more breaks to your song, especially on Easy difficulty
-Turn off Letterbox During Breaks
-Please trim the song if your don't intend to map it all.
-Change the mp3 bitrate. Yours is 320kps. Convert/change it to 192 or 128.
-Change the background. The size is wrong. Check the Wiki for the size/s
-Either use countdown on all difficulties or remove it from all difficulties.

Easy
-Make sure that your notes look more polished for example, this should look like this
00:58:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section's rhythm is too hard for Easy, or any difficulty.
01:33:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Please check your timing. The beats are not exactly correct.
01:58:447 (4,5,6,7,8) - Too hard for Easy and doesn't look clean.
02:11:766 (7) - Move beat to red tick.
02:22:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Check timing and make it easier.
02:38:016 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Check timing and don't do this. (Too hard and jumps are way too big)

Hard
This difficulty is not consistent. Sometimes it's really easy and sometimes it's not possible. Spacing also needs work, the shapes of the sliders need work and most importantly, the rhythm needs a lot of work.
02:56:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No.
02:11:249 (4,5,6) - Confusing.

Insane
-The patterns keep repeating themselves. Please use a variety of patterns
-This difficulty is monotonous
02:56:120 (1,2,3,4,5) - No.

There are many more problems and needs more work. However, this is pretty good for a beginning map. If you don't understand anything, just send a PM and if you finish fixing your map, you can ask me to recheck.

Thanks yachiru4 for testing.
Thanks Phoenipx for modding.
ヾ(＠⌒ー⌒＠)ノ
I made a　lot of changes today and tried to make the map better.
I updated the new version just now.
The map is ready for further modding now^^
And thanks again!

虽然那不喜欢歌 方块还是加油改吧

Hello, Phoenipx here, PM recheck request.

Comments
Good work on improving it! However, you made the timing all wrong now.

General
-Change the Offset to 2430. Then, re-snap the notes.
-Change background to a bigger one.
-Use kiai time. Ask me if you don't know.
-Most importantly, please use a range of hitsounds. There are no hitsounds anywhere and it will sound boring without it.

Easy
01:58:447 (1) - Move this away.
02:01:809 (3,4,5) - Avoid using triple notes on slow sections. It could be confusing.
02:11:120 (2,3,1) - The spacing here is not good. Move 2 closer to 3 and move 1 away from 3. Something like this?
02:33:878 (4) - Remove extra repeat so it looks like this. Having another repeat doesn't match with the song.
-Please use this

In general, big improvement! Still though, work on the timing, shape and distance of your notes.

Hard
01:09:309 (1,2,3) - Confusing section. The repeating slider is finishing unaturally
02:32:816 (6,7) - Impossible to do and not allowed. You cannot have more than one beat at one tick (except osu!mania)
01:14:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Good, but look at the distances between each note, they are not equal. Therefore, use distance snap.
01:17:973 (1,2) - Nope, don't do that. The note after the slider is way to close.
01:18:878 (3,4) - Same with this, too close.
01:50:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks messy and hard to play.
02:13:189 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too easy for Hard difficulty.
02:38:016 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same. Too easy for Hard difficulty.
02:42:154 (4,5,6,7) - 4 doesn't look like 5, 6 or 7. Make the slider shape of 4 the same.

In general, this difficulty is way too easy to be "Hard". Also, it's too confusing, everything in general. It needs a lot of work.

Insane
00:11:378 (7,8) - No.
01:54:051 (1,2,3) - Make the shape and flow more smoothly.
02:02:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - With this, a straight line is too boring. Try and make a curved stream.
02:13:706 (9,10) - Jump too big.
02:14:223 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Monotonous and sounds boring. Try not to do this.
02:21:464 (9,1) - Jump too big.
02:24:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stop using this so much. It gets repetitive.
02:28:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This as well.
02:38:016 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Good idea, but no.

This difficulty is way to monotonous and you keep repeating things too much. If your stuck on ideas, try and use spinners, or go to the wiki for ideas. Right now, it's too repetitive too play. It needs heaps of work.

That's it for now. If you want, call me for another recheck. Be sure to add hitsounds.

Phoenipx wrote:

Hello, Phoenipx here, PM recheck request.

Comments
Good work on improving it! However, you made the timing all wrong now.

General
-Change the Offset to 2430. Then, re-snap the notes.
-Change background to a bigger one.
-Use kiai time. Ask me if you don't know.
-Most importantly, please use a range of hitsounds. There are no hitsounds anywhere and it will sound boring without it.

Easy
01:58:447 (1) - Move this away.
02:01:809 (3,4,5) - Avoid using triple notes on slow sections. It could be confusing.
02:11:120 (2,3,1) - The spacing here is not good. Move 2 closer to 3 and move 1 away from 3. Something like this?
02:33:878 (4) - Remove extra repeat so it looks like this. Having another repeat doesn't match with the song.
-Please use this

In general, big improvement! Still though, work on the timing, shape and distance of your notes.

Hard
01:09:309 (1,2,3) - Confusing section. The repeating slider is finishing unaturally
02:32:816 (6,7) - Impossible to do and not allowed. You cannot have more than one beat at one tick (except osu!mania)
01:14:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Good, but look at the distances between each note, they are not equal. Therefore, use distance snap.
01:17:973 (1,2) - Nope, don't do that. The note after the slider is way to close.
01:18:878 (3,4) - Same with this, too close.
01:50:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks messy and hard to play.
02:13:189 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too easy for Hard difficulty.
02:38:016 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same. Too easy for Hard difficulty.
02:42:154 (4,5,6,7) - 4 doesn't look like 5, 6 or 7. Make the slider shape of 4 the same.

In general, this difficulty is way too easy to be "Hard". Also, it's too confusing, everything in general. It needs a lot of work.

Insane
00:11:378 (7,8) - No.
01:54:051 (1,2,3) - Make the shape and flow more smoothly.
02:02:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - With this, a straight line is too boring. Try and make a curved stream.
02:13:706 (9,10) - Jump too big.
02:14:223 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Monotonous and sounds boring. Try not to do this.
02:21:464 (9,1) - Jump too big.
02:24:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stop using this so much. It gets repetitive.
02:28:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This as well.
02:38:016 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Good idea, but no.

This difficulty is way to monotonous and you keep repeating things too much. If your stuck on ideas, try and use spinners, or go to the wiki for ideas. Right now, it's too repetitive too play. It needs heaps of work.

That's it for now. If you want, call me for another recheck. Be sure to add hitsounds.

Thanks for modding again:-)
The new version are online now.
I made some big changes in insane and changed the second diff from hard to normal+.
Hitsounds are used in all diffs now.
Maybe insane is better now= =, I tried to make it now monotonous.

hello ~ from my Modding Queue

● background should be the size of 1024x768 or 800x600 (or 1366x768)

● Make the volume down 50%

● start and end of all diffs should be the same

● Kiai time:

01:09:671 start - 01:42:257 finish (removew break. map it )
02:21:050 start - 02:54:154 finish

● objects can not be located on the blue ticks.

you have to change everything and make it so that the objects were white and red ticks. at the moment your map is absolutely impossible to pass.

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello ~ from my Modding Queue

● background should be the size of 1024x768 or 800x600 (or 1366x768)

● Make the volume down 50%

● start and end of all diffs should be the same

● Kiai time:

01:09:671 start - 01:42:257 finish (removew break. map it )
02:21:050 start - 02:54:154 finish

● objects can not be located on the blue ticks.

you have to change everything and make it so that the objects were white and red ticks. at the moment your map is absolutely impossible to pass.

ZLOdeuka-, thanks for your modding~
I amost changed everthing now, I wish it could be better(・∀・).

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