jonathanlfj wrote:

Modding upon request~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
00:05:361 - remove red line, then add one at 00:06:010 and you will have the correct downbeats. Then you should fix your NC patterns according to the new downbeat pattern fixed
on a side note, the audio quality is a bit poor; see if you can get permission to use the mp3 and offset from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/59055

[Normal]
00:09:901 (3) - forgot a clap on the repeat fixed
00:21:901 (1) - ^ on start fixed
00:23:847 (1) - forgot clap on both ends fixed
00:26:604 (1,2) - the angle on this plays a bit weird, how bout something like this:

SPOILER

fixed
00:27:415 (3) - claps went completely missing after this until the very end, do add them on the 2/4th white ticks when appropriate
00:35:685 (4) - this slider plays more comfortable if you shorten it to 00:36:009 imo (you can add a note at 00:36:172) fixed
00:52:064 (5) - 2 consecutive finishes sounds too overwhelming, consider taking off one of them fixed
01:02:117 (5) - plays better of you shorten this to 01:02:280 to follow the vocals fixed
01:08:118 (1,2) - try this:

SPOILER

fixed
01:13:793 (2) - finish on the end, like 01:16:388 (5) fixed
01:16:874 - felt like there should be a note here, its awkward to skip over the first sound of the vocals fixed

[Hard]
Circle size - 1, plays like an insane right now due to the difficulty of cursor snapping caused by small circles fixed
00:00:659 (1) - the sliders in this section are barely audible due to the nature of the custom hitnormal you used, please bump the volume to 40% or more fixed
00:13:145 (1,5,1) - not perfectly stacked fixed
00:16:388 (1) - add a finish on the start, its in the music fixed
00:23:847 (4) - make this a circle and start the slider at 00:24:008 instead, follows the music better imo fixed
00:34:388 (3) - add finish on start, very loud finish in the music here fixed
00:40:874 (4) - use a 3-point slider here, the blanket around 00:40:226 (2) isnt very good with the 4-point slider you have atm fixed
00:41:846 - add a note here to cover the guitar sound in the music fixed
00:50:766 (3,4) - snap this to the grid above it, so 00:50:118 (1,2,3,4) has a nice and even spacing fixed
00:57:739 (2) - finish on start, its heard in the music and can mark the start of the kiai time fixed
01:05:523 (4,5,6,7) - would have expected this to be perfectly centered fixed
01:08:118 (2) - again a finish on the start for music + kiai respawn fixed
01:12:657 - add a note here, the heavy rhythm in the music lands here and it feels really empty not hitting it (can stack under 01:12:009 (7))
01:14:604 (7) - i am doubting the rankability of this repeat slider, since half the slider track + the repeat is covered by the previous repeat slider. Please use something like this to avoid the ambiguity:

SPOILER

fixed
01:17:199 (6) - same as above, this one you can try something else, e.g. a blanket around 01:17:037 (5) fixed
01:23:684 (1) - finish on the start to match the music fixed
the claps patterns in this diff are quite interesting I'll try to fix it...

That's all, just don't forget to make an Easy diff so the spread will be complete ><
Good luck~

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my mod. From your PM.
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-General-
✔ Okay.

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-Easy-

1. 不知名原因無法更新, 怕會有些錯誤所以先跳過了

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-Normal-

1. 可以試著使用normal/soft-slidertick這個音效, 這樣就不會節奏一下有一下無
2. 00:29:685 (1,2) - 開頭加clap? 好的
3. 01:17:199 (7) - 尾端durm的clap? 好的
4. 01:18:658 (3) - 開頭durm的finish? 好的
5. 01:26:442 (1) - 不太適合放spinner吧....不然就是從 01:27:739 - 開始

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-Hard-

1. 這CS...好小 +1或2吧;w; 好的
2. 00:00:659 - 這裡25%音量, 也太小聲了吧 建議換成40~60, 或是漸漸大聲起來也不錯 好的
3. 01:26:442 (1) - 同Normal 好的
4. 都是1/2 沒放連打嗎? 還是說預備給Insane?

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End of this mod.
祝你好運 !

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TheVileOne wrote:

Recheck

General

Normal and Hard: 1st kiai starts 1ms off tick
Both kiais end 1 ms off tick.
Easy has second kiai 1ms off tick.
fixed
Easy
There's plenty of room for improvement in this map.

00:05:847 (1) - Missing clap on end. fixed
00:05:847 (1,2,3,4) - Not that great. Try to avoid having patterns that have very different slider arcs and angles. I suggest a pattern that uses similarly angled sliders that have similar curves. Here's an example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/929376 fixed
00:09:577 (3) - Another random curve slider curve. The curve of this doesn't match the previous slider or the one ahead of it. you could go for a softer curve, but it may require a rotation of 00:11:036 (5) - , which shouldn't be a big deal. fixed
00:10:550 (4) - Personally I think this plays badly compared to if this was just a single slider. fixed
00:11:037 (5) - Main issue with this is that it skips over a hitsound tick. It wouldn't be more difficult really if you had a pattern like 00:12:171 (1,2) - here only the slider is 1/2th shorter. Maybe that's worse to look at. idk fixed
00:13:469 (3) - ^ Same opinion. It doesn't sound as good when it doesn't end on the hitsound tick. fixed
00:14:928 (6) - This sounds fine.
00:34:225 (2) - You have a finish on 4 but not on this sound? fixed
00:34:225 (2,3) - Have a more normal looking blanket here (Normal = the entire edge of the blanket is the same distance from the center) fixed
01:01:469 (2) - Unnecessary complication of the beat. Fixing would destroy your patterns though.
01:08:117 (1,2,3) - ^ I don't really like the 185 BPM stacks in Easy difficulty.
01:11:685 (2,3,4) - ^ meh whatever I guess they can pass. Spread out doubles are easier to read though :/
01:23:685 (1,2,3,4) - Shameful copy paste of first flawed pattern. haha... fixed

Normal
There were some parts I didn't agree with that I didn't mention. Some of the 1/2th sections only looked okay. I know it is hard to make abstract rhythms look good, so I left out parts I felt were sufficiently mapped given the rhythm available.

00:10:712 (1) - Maybe remove and add a note on the white tick stacked on 00:11:036 (2) - ? imo this beat canno tbe ignored
00:17:037 (2) - I think it would look better if it were shaped similar to 00:18:009 (4) fixed
00:30:333 (2) - Missing clap on start. fixed
00:50:118 (2) - Not sure what effect you were going for, but this slider has a small lip towards the end. You can get a more symmetrical shape by moving the third point to x 231 y 201 fixed
00:52:064 (5) - Just have a normal slider here? fixed
00:58:388 (4) - end with clap? fixed

Hard
Some parts are a bit intense for a Hard, but I had a lot of fun playing it. I tried to be as thorough as I could for this difficulty. My mod is much better than my previous attempt.

00:05:848 (1) - Finish on start like the other difficulties. fixed
00:08:604 (7,8,9) - Your pattern gets squished here. I suggest continuing the even spacing between all the notes. It's certainly possible. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/929507 BTW is it me or did you clean up the spacing since the last time I modded. it looks and feels a lot better than I remember it. fixed
00:12:172 (3) - Curve too sharply inward. It doesn't look great. Cutback on the sharpness. http://puu.sh/434gQ.jpg fixed
00:13:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This flows really well!
00:27:091 (6,1) - not sure about this spacing. I can still hit it right even if i misjudge the timing but it's still a 20 ms change in accuracy because the spacing is different. You could move to x 208 y 56. It flows a bit better there. fixed
00:30:009 (3,4) - blanket better? fixed
00:31:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really good flow here.
00:36:334 (5) - Better slider shape. fixed

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fixed
00:40:874 (4) - The angle doesn't seem right to me. I think you can get a better blanket slider by moving it further away from the blanket center (move it slightly more to the left and adjust spacing to make a proper blanket). fixed
00:41:847 (5,6) - I really dislike the movement required to hit these. It's an awkward angle. I came up with this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/929533 fixed
00:43:469 (4,5,6) - Might just be me but the curves here look slightly too sharp. Softer may give a smoother appearance. fixed
00:47:037 - add note? fixed
00:48:820 (4) - Try to wrap around the previous object more. the flat curve here doesn't look great off the previous transition. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/929545 < better approach fixed
00:50:118 (1,2,3) - So ugly. I suggest remapping this to something more spaced out. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/929547 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/929548 fixed
01:00:009 (1,2,3) - That blanket is just awful. Please make it cleaner. fixed
01:10:064 (10) - This is just an ugly shape. try moving second point to x 181 y 161 and the third point to x 225 y 224
fixed
01:11:199 (4) - This is a bad slider too. It would be a lot better if you used a new algorithm three point slider here. fixed


Conclusion

Mapset is in good shape.

1. Object's end is not snapped! 00:37:143
2. Object's end is not snapped! 00:35:197
3. Object's end is not snapped! 00:39:089
4. Object's end is not snapped! 01:01:143
5. Kiai'end isn't snapped 01:07:440

1. Too hard for an easy. Try renaming to Easy+. Too many 1/2 notes.
2. if you don't want to change the 1/2 notes, rename to easy+? ._.
3. AR +1/2, the map is easier to read that way
4. 00:23:198 (1) - curve to match 00:21:901 (4) - ? for consistency
5. 00:10:550 (4) - remove repeat and make 00:11:036 (5) - start 1/2 earlier & extend by 1/2, seems to match the song more
6. 00:49:793 - add note here? consistency
7. 00:59:361 (4) - start 1/2 earlier and add 1 repeat, matches song more

1. 00:06:820 - add a note. I think it matches song more
2. 00:21:253 (5) - try curving with a 'v' like shape. flows nicer imho
3. 00:40:712 (6) - try curving with a '(' like shape. flows nicer imho
4. 01:24:658 - add a note here. see 00:06:820

1. 00:29:685 (1) - remove. Doesn't really match the song
2. 00:13:793 (5) - ^
3. 00:34:064 (1,2) - sliderize
4. 01:00:658 (1,2) - add clap
5. 01:05:847 (5,6) - unstack and move around! do something creative~

quantum-rose wrote:

这里是新人的弱弱mod☆~

[Easy]
00:14:766 (5,6) - 00:27:090 (1,2) - 01:01:469 (2,3) - 如果要stack的话请让他们的节奏一样（都间隔半拍或一拍） 跟音樂沒法啊
01:11:685 (2,3,4) - Easy放这个太鬼畜了吧，这歌185bpm啊 沒法啊
01:19:955 (1,2) - 这个也不好打，2和3换成滑条也许可以 好的
01:21:090 (1,1) - 1拍半还是感觉有点短 嗯

[Normal]
00:17:037 (2,3) - 没包好 好的
00:21:901 (1,2) - 感觉怪怪的……把1用2的对称替换掉（其实要画弧线三个锚点就够了啊，四个以上锚点用的算法和三个的不一样） 的確有點怪, 但overlap較美觀:D
01:18:658 (3) - 用三点滑条替代 好的

[Hard]
这Hard可真够难的
00:20:117 (1,2,3) - 形状不太对劲 好的
00:27:901 (3) - 往上挪一点 好的
00:45:415 (3) - 开GS调一下锚点，不对称 好的
01:04:550 (1,2,3,4) - 这不是正方形 好的
01:09:091 (7) - 弧度小一点 好的
追加：01:25:468 (2,3,4,5,6) - 对称下 好的

[Seraphin] wrote:

Hi.
From forum PM.

[General]
00:06:010 - why did you use a uninherited timing point? change to inherited

[Eazy]
AIMOD

1. Object's end is not snapped! 00:37:143
2. Object's end is not snapped! 00:35:197
3. Object's end is not snapped! 00:39:089
4. Object's end is not snapped! 01:01:143
5. Kiai'end isn't snapped 01:07:440

Haha... fixed

ME

1. Too hard for an easy. Try renaming to Easy+. Too many 1/2 notes.
2. if you don't want to change the 1/2 notes, rename to easy+? ._. ok
3. AR +1/2, the map is easier to read that way ok
4. 00:23:198 (1) - curve to match 00:21:901 (4) - ? for consistency fixed
5. 00:10:550 (4) - remove repeat and make 00:11:036 (5) - start 1/2 earlier & extend by 1/2, seems to match the song more imo that beat can't be ignored...
6. 00:49:793 - add note here? consistency fixed
7. 00:59:361 (4) - start 1/2 earlier and add 1 repeat, matches song more fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:06:820 - add a note. I think it matches song more too hard for normal
2. 00:21:253 (5) - try curving with a 'v' like shape. flows nicer imho fixed
3. 00:40:712 (6) - try curving with a '(' like shape. flows nicer imho fixed
4. 01:24:658 - add a note here. see 00:06:820 Same^^

Not much to say here.
Nice dif

[Hard]

1. 00:29:685 (1) - remove. Doesn't really match the song drum sound here...
2. 00:13:793 (5) - ^ drum sound here...
3. 00:34:064 (1,2) - sliderize circles are more fun imo
4. 01:00:658 (1,2) - add clap fixed
5. 01:05:847 (5,6) - unstack and move around! do something creative~ fixed

winber1 wrote:

Hard

1. 00:00:659 (1,2) - This probably will work better as symmetry over the x-axis imo http://puu.sh/46mIz.jpg I also think bigger spacing might be more fitting. Just my opinion though. fixed
2. 00:10:550 (1,2,3) - Awkward. This will play much better as 4 hitcircles, 2 sliders, or a slider and 2 hitcircles (the 2 hitcircles as a slider is very weird). Something like this would be nice http://puu.sh/46mOP.jpg fixed
3. 00:11:847 (1,2,3) - possibly do something more interesting than stacking? I don't see a huge point in stacking all of these notes. fixed
4. 00:23:199 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/46n3e.jpg this rhytm works better imo. fixed
5. 00:24:982 - Consider adding a note to follow the drum snare in the music. You will need to change some spacing if you do it though. fixed
6. 00:27:415 (1) - Works better as a 1/2 tick slider (that ends on 00:27:577 - ) fixed
7. 00:30:496 (4) - end slider at 00:30:820 - and fix spacing after fixed
8. 00:31:469 - Well not a huge problem, but I'd like to see this part of the vocals mapped. Just my opinion though. Not completely necessary since it plays fine (if you apply the above change) okay I'll leave it
9. 00:33:901 - You should add a note, the emptiness here kinda of breaks the "flow" and feels weird to play. fixed
10. 00:48:820 (4,5) - not with the vocals. http://puu.sh/46ndK.jpg This is one possibility fixed
11. 01:05:523 (4,5,6,7) - Again the stacks are meh. DOn't see much reason to do it. fixed
12. 01:16:874 - add note (you can just put it on top of the slider. it works fine) fixed
13. 01:20:442 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/46nhM.jpg Imo it's better like this. No need to put it under the slider. fixed
14. 01:23:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - that copy paste bro. you could at least move the notes around so it does look like copy paste. THat's what I usually do LOL. fixed
15. 01:26:442 - 01:27:577 - In this time interval you should map the 3/2 tick rhythm imo fixed

Normal

1. 00:06:982 (3) - I find the stack more fitting on top of combo 4, not combo 2 fixed
2. 00:14:928 (3) - You should end this on 00:15:739 - imo (and consider adding a note at 00:15:901 - ) it's weird to add note imo
3. 00:22:550 (3,4,1) - I would do something more like this: http://puu.sh/46HVw.jpg (follow-up http://puu.sh/46HWp.jpg ) You will have to change the spacing and location of the other notes though. fixed
4. 00:31:307 (4,5) - follow vocals more you could potentially do something like I'd rather not ignoring drum...
5. 00:42:982 (2,3) - doesn't follow music. 00:43:469 - this note need sto be mapped imo. fixed
6. 00:45:253 (6) - http://puu.sh/46IeH.jpg something like this will fit the music better. fixed
7. 00:57:252 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/46IjB.jpg Try this, using too many 1/2 tick kick sliders may cause confusion. alternatively you can also do this http://puu.sh/46Inr.jpg fixed
8. 01:00:658 (2) - better if this slider ends at 01:01:145 - fixed
9. 01:02:117 (5) - end slider at 01:02:280 - fixed
10. 01:08:604 (2) - end slider at 01:08:928 - fixed
11. 01:10:550 (1,2) - Spacing isn't that great. Having spacing further ahead of a repeat slider like this looks awkward and some reason it often times it's harder to read some reason. It would be much bette to place it above like http://puu.sh/46Iw7.jpg fixed
12. 01:17:036 (6) - move note to 01:16:874 - fixed
13. 01:23:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol the copy paste again. I mean not that it plays badly, but just the fact that i can clearly see that it's copy pasted should mean something. fixed

This normal is on the hard side... I think it plays slightly harder than a normal. You can fix this by not using as many 1/2 tick notes as you did. As shown in some of the pictures, if you are able to end sliders at the right time, you can greatly decrease the amount of notes used while still maintaining a smooth flow.

Easy

1. 00:05:848 (1) - Increase the volume of the first note, You cannot hear the finish hitsound. fixed
2. 00:09:577 (3) - remove finish hitsound makes no sense imo. I'm prolly blind at that moment...fixed
3. 00:08:280 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/46ISw.jpg (and here's the follow-up http://puu.sh/46IV1.jpg&#41; something like this works better. You try not to use 1/2 tick repeat sliders in this easy diff. They cause confusion for beginners. fixed
4. 00:12:172 (2,4) - finish hitsounds don't seem to make much sense on these two notes. fixed
5. 00:14:442 (5,6) - If anything you should really turn this into a slider. fixed
6. 00:14:928 (7) - Sounds much better if this ended on 00:15:739 - imo missing the last beat makes me feel weird...
7. 00:20:604 (3,4,1,2) - well this is a common beginner thing where you just follow the drums in the background instead of the melody and vocals. Generally it makes the map boring to play unless you execute it in special cases. I don't feel like this is a special case where following the drums makes it that much more interesting. There's nothing wrong with it, but following the vocals would add a better touch to this map. fixed
8. 00:26:604 (4,1,2) - Confusing spacing for a beginner player. You should turn 00:26:604 (4,1) - into a slider and then add a new combo to 00:27:415 - fixed
9. 00:32:928 (4,1,2) - http://puu.sh/46Jeb.jpg look above at the timeline. THat rhythm works better. fixed
10. 00:44:118 (3) - yea i know the drums are here. Still i'd generally try to avoid this kicksliders fixed
11. 00:44:118 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/46Jou.jpg don't mind the pattern, but this rhymth works better. fixed
12. 00:47:199 (2) - again meh. You can avoid this. THis isn't necessary. fixed
13. 00:55:307 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Way too confusing for a beginner imo. You're better off just using single notes. I know it probably sounds worse, but this way you won't get the cluttler of notes http://puu.sh/46JBU.jpg and http://puu.sh/46JCt.jpg fixed
14. 00:58:064 (2) - end slider at 00:59:037 - fixed
15. 01:00:172 (1) - http://puu.sh/46JH5.jpg fixed
16. 01:01:631 (4) - probably better to end at 01:02:604 - fixed
17. 01:11:685 (2,3,4) - similar to the kicksliders... you shouldn't do this. fixed
18. 01:12:982 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - again, just really confusing for beginners. this is one other posssible and much better way http://puu.sh/46JNI.jpg fixed
19. 01:23:685 (1,2,3,4) - at least this time it's flipped over the origin ._.

Don't try to use too many red tick notes. Try to keep easy simple.

Good luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ey! Mod via PM request.
Sorry my modding might be a bit rusty, just came back from vacation x.x

[General]

1. Kai time looks more proper starting at 00:57:739 instead. fixed

[Easy]
00:14:766 (6,7) - Try to avoid overlapping in Easy mode, since it may confuse new players. fixed
00:32:928 (4) - This slider doesn't look to pretty. You can try modelling 00:32:280 (3,4) to look something like this for a better flow:

*NOTE* You may have to slightly re-position the next sliders. fixed
01:11:685 (2) - Looks a bit challenging for new players, you may just wanna add a hit circle here. fixed
01:13:307 (5) - NC fixed
01:24:820 (3) - Sounds too early. Remove it, and try adding 01:23:685 (1) in at 01:24:982 as well,not only for better timing ,but for a steady rhythm too! aha imo it's just the music confusing

[Normal]
00:25:145 (6,1) - Swap combos! fixed
00:26:604 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:27:415 - NC fixed
01:08:118 - 01:10:226 this part isn't sounding too good I suggest you re map this small part. One way to do it is you could add 00:57:739 (1,2,3,4,5) here, though re-arranging the objects of course. But if you find another solution, that's also good! fixed
01:24:982 - Try using the same rhythm at 01:23:685:
Sounds better to me, but yours is ok. fixed

[Hard]
00:00:659 (1) - Add a finish to the head of the slider. fixed
00:16:874 (2) and 00:17:523 (4) should switch positions, so it's spacing looks better. fixed
01:11:199 (4) - Slider doesn't sound quite right with the vocals. Try this:

fixed
* This is going by the spacing in the 'hi wa' and 'noboru' in the lyrics of the song.
01:16:388 (4) - NC fixed

Nice map Hope this helps~!

kelvinli wrote:

Hai! Recheck via. pm request

[General]
seems fine~!

[Hard]
00:01:956 (3,5) - Ctrl+G for these 2 for better flow fixed
00:01:956 (3,4,5,6) - It seems too clustered. Try to separate them fixed
00:08:604 (7) - try x,y:(224,80) fixed
00:10:874 (3,4) - merge into 1 slider? fixed
00:11:037 (4,5) - since there are no beats in the end of (4), merge (4) with the start of (5) to become 1 slider:

if you don't know what I mean

fixed
00:11:361 (5) - missing a clap. You know where to add fixed
00:26:280 (4) - shape is too alike with the previous one, does not look good imo. fixed

SPOILER

00:27:415 (1,3) - imperfect stack. fixed
00:31:307 (1) - There is vocal on the red tick. I suggest to use some sort of objects (be it circles/ repeating slider) to indicate it. fixed
00:40:874 (4) - Put it under (1) for the sake of flow:

SPOILER

fixed
01:04:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't you just lay them on the x/y axis? That's fine...
01:10:064 (10) - minor overlaps with (8), move it downwards fixed
01:13:793 (4) - spacing is too close for me fixed
I still can't find solutions for the last part ;_;


[Normal]
Tick Rate -1? I am not sure about this, but it is just too much in its current state.
00:39:090 (3) - This sounds very weird.. Mainly because it is not following obvious beats. If you can find a solution to that, that'll be great It's inevitable to follow drum beats...
00:40:063 (5) - NC fixed
00:44:118 (4) - remove the clap, it is not following any beats fixed
00:51:253 (4) - Shape is not smooth enough.Play with the second anchor point until you are satisfied with it fixed
01:04:550 (5,1) - red ticks are quite a challenge to follow. Use a slider instead? fixed


[Easy]
Woah that's quite hard for an easy. Try using longer sliders to overcome red ticks
00:55:307 (1,2,3,4) - That can be very hard to follow, since players are not adapted to 1 1/2 distance. Use sliders instead Hmm.... I guess sliders are much harder to follow
rest seems nice


Right then, good luck to your map!

rinsukir wrote:

Hi~From forum PM
这里是蠢爆的新人mod,估计摸不出什么,以下都是建议,如果有说的不好/不对的地方请无视;w;

[General]
好像没combo color?

[Easy]
00:17:361 (2) - 这个往左移一点好看些呢(可是不符合ds了 好的
00:52:064 (1) - 这个算不算出界0 0 不算的XD 我猜
01:07:145 (5) - ↑ ^
别的应该都没问题了..小的太蠢了摸不出更多

[Normal]
感觉良好..摸不出什么QAQ

[Hard]
好难+1 呵呵已經沒有1/4了...
感觉四个角还可以好好利用一下
四方跳考虑改成N型的?
00:01:956 (3,4,5,6) - 感觉3546这样比较好呢.. 好的
00:16:874 (2,4) - 上移一点好看些吧.. 好的
00:28:550 (5) - 感觉怪怪的 好的 讓我包得像樣點

摸不出更多了QAQ
祝早日rank.!

lkx_Shore wrote:

说不出啥...Goodluck

Asphyxia wrote:

Helo, sorry I forgot ):

Anyway mod from my modding queue (:

Please respond to my suggestions!

Red = Unrankable

Blue = Highly recommended

Black (aka normal) = Just a suggestion

General thoughts: None

Easy

Just +1 OD. nothing else really

Normal

Also +1 OD, nothing else.

Hard

Well, +1 OD aswell.
00:01:956 (3,4,5,6) - Like this would be muuuch better! http://puu.sh/49yEG.jpg fixed
00:08:604 (7) - No, how about like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/945264 fixed
00:11:037 (4,5) - This doesn't feel good while playing, I suggest you do something about this. fixed
00:14:928 (2) - ctrl + g I think fixed
00:17:036 (3) - Ctrl + G to keep the distance equal + better flow I think? (you may need to fix some spacing after this!) fixed
00:26:604 (5) - More curve, while playing this seems dull. fixed
00:37:469 (1,2,3) - Make these a bigger jump, seems better that way =P fixed
00:46:388 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:52:064 (6) - CTRL + G maybe? fixed
00:54:334 (1,2,3) - Bigger jump, more fun! fixed
00:57:739 (2) - After this you could increase the spacing since kiai started, but that's really up to you. fixed
01:02:280 (4) - This slider should be like 01:01:631 (1) - fixed
01:04:874 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bigger jumps? fixed
01:10:064 (10) - Move this a bit left + down so it wont overlap with 01:09:739 (9) - fixed
01:19:955 (1) - Place it a bit higher? fixed
Anyway, pretty fun hard.

GL with the mapset (:

1. 歌曲的音质 整个map加上视屏总共14M 还有很大的空间 带上耳机和其一样rank的曲子比一下就能听出好坏之分 这样也直接决定了玩家玩图的第一印象（建议192音质 电吉他128感觉像蒙了层布

1. 音效里面的NC1 finish的音效音调不高 歌曲里面基本听不出来 finish试着用时间线下成soft的finish音效

1. 歌曲本身比较吵 音效音量感觉至少要放到85% 70%感觉基本听不出来

1. 00:00:659 (1,1) - spinner离slider有些近尾巴往前拉一点点

1. 00:44:928 (4) - 尾巴clap

1. 01:15:577 (4,5) - 这两个试着再摆好看些

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

from my queue~
[General]

1. 歌曲的音质 整个map加上视屏总共14M 还有很大的空间 带上耳机和其一样rank的曲子比一下就能听出好坏之分 这样也直接决定了玩家玩图的第一印象（建议192音质 电吉他128感觉像蒙了层布

嗯嗯

1. 音效里面的NC1 finish的音效音调不高 歌曲里面基本听不出来 finish试着用时间线下成soft的finish音效

嗯嗯

1. 歌曲本身比较吵 音效音量感觉至少要放到85% 70%感觉基本听不出来

嗯嗯
[Easy]

1. 00:00:659 (1,1) - spinner离slider有些近尾巴往前拉一点点

好的

1. 00:44:928 (4) - 尾巴clap

好的
[Normal]

1. 01:15:577 (4,5) - 这两个试着再摆好看些

好的
Hard没什么问题 这个音质听得耳朵要坏掉惹> <

sheela901 wrote:

[Easy]
00:17:361 (2) - Make a curve? fixed
00:57:253 (5) - Remove the NC (new combo) here and add NC to 00:58:064 (6) . fixed
01:23:685 (1) - The last little square, put it at x:384 y:152. fixed
01:26:118 - 01:28:550 - A suggestion. fixed
Add note to: 01:26:118 , 01:26:442 .
Add a spinner to: 01:26:604 to 01:28:550 .

[Normal]
00:35:685 (4) - Ctrl+H for a natural flow? now is more natural imo XD

[Hard]
00:09:253 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try to make another pattern because this pattern is not for a hard difficulty. ...
00:45:415 (3) - At the tail of the slider, try to put the little square to x:156 y:228. fixed
01:10:712 (2) - Try to put at x:276 y:232 so it can't be overlap. fixed
01:16:388 (1) - Remove NC so it could be like 01:13:793 (4) . fixed
01:20:442 (2) - Pretty big distance. fixed

Good Luck!

Squirrel wrote:

It's not much, but here's the requested mod. c:
And it's all just suggestions.. feel free to change things. x3

Easy

1. AR3 is easier to read, I think, especially if you use things like 00:14:766 (6,7)
2. actually it might even be better to remove those "stacks" completely, cause it's really confusing for beginners..
   I know it looks great and I like to play it, but for beginners.. naaaah, I don't know. >o<
3. just a footnote: since you don't place anything on blue ticks in Easy difficulties it's clearer to use 1/2 Beat Snap
4. 00:00:659 (1) - reduce the length at the end a bit, beginners need more time to know where their cursor is after a spinner and the time they have to get it to the next circle is too short imo fixed
5. 00:05:848 (1) - I don't know if this is allowed (for ranked maps.. dunno if you're going for ranked) and this is already a harder Easy difficulty, might be better to not add more difficulty to it. (I know it's not that much of a change, but just on principle..)
6. maybe (just to start off easier) replace 00:05:848 (1,2,3,4) by http://puu.sh/49KA6.png fixed
7. 00:08:280 (1) - curve like http://puu.sh/49KGf.png (I just prefer curved sliders.. |D) fixed
8. 00:14:766 (6,7) - like I said above, looks great, but stacks are not that beginner-friendly.. :\ fixed
9. 00:16:388 (1) - ctrl+G and -> http://puu.sh/49KXZ.png oh thanks
10. 00:26:604 (4) - it's better not to start sliders on red ticks in Easy Difficulty since it dosn't follow the.. ehm.. I forgot the english word... the.. basic thing.. sorry. u-û Hope you know what I mean.. might be better to do it like http://puu.sh/49L9q.png fixed
11. 00:34:388 (2) - same here fixed
12. 00:51:253 (5) - and here fixed
13. 01:01:469 (2,3) - mentioned that somewhere as well. >o< fixed
14. 01:05:523 (3,4) - I have the feeling it might be easier to use one slider here instead of two or maybe one of teh others, cause it's a bit too confusing. O: fixed
15. 01:21:091 (1,1) - there is too less time. >-< fixed

I didn't mention every "stack" and red tick slider in the end.. sorry I'm lazy. xD

Normal

1. you could change AR to 4
2. 00:05:847 (1) - mentioned that in Easy as well, but it's playable, so if it's allowed just keep it. xD (otherwise use two circles instead of a slider) I'd rather keep it:D
3. 00:20:279 (3) - move it doen a bit -> http://puu.sh/49LAv.png fixed
4. 01:03:901 (4) - NC? fixed

Hard

1. AR and OD are too high imo >o<
   then again it's a really nice difficulty and I don't have much to say, maybe rename it to Hard+ or Insane? (I just have a feeling it's too hard for a Hard diff.. but not really an Insane either. >___<)
2. 00:31:307 (1,2,3) - remove 2? (it's okay for hard but I just don't have the feeling it belongs there. xD) Oh yeah 2 is abit weird

Overall really nice difficulties! Your mapping style is great. ^__^
Good luck with the map. :3

-Cloudchaser wrote:

IRC mod ~

00:17 kookookook: hi~
00:17 -Cloudchaser: Hellow :3/
00:17 kookookook: Can you take a look at my map?
00:18 -Cloudchaser: sure, why not?
00:18 *kookookook is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/288761 Aimi - Link (TV Size)]
00:18 kookookook: thanks
00:18 -Cloudchaser: if you want, I can do a irc mod
00:19 -Cloudchaser: I'm in mood~
00:19 kookookook: sure~ thanks
00:22 -Cloudchaser: can you find another bg?
00:22 kookookook: okay
00:22 kookookook: this one is too bad in quality? XD
00:22 -Cloudchaser: +/-
00:22 -Cloudchaser: I don't liked it
00:22 kookookook: okay
00:23 -Cloudchaser: I'm a nazi modder :<
00:23 kookookook:
00:23 -Cloudchaser: alright
00:24 -Cloudchaser: the quality of the mp3 is really poor, I think I can bring you a good mp3
00:24 kookookook: oh thanks
00:25 kookookook: I have trouble in finding TV Size
00:25 -Cloudchaser: some tv sizes are locked by copy rights
00:25 -Cloudchaser: ><
00:25 -Cloudchaser: blocked*
00:27 kookookook: I can only find full version >^<
00:27 -Cloudchaser: other thing what you can do
00:27 -Cloudchaser: is take the mp3 from the ranked one
00:28 kookookook: i see
00:29 kookookook: Also, I'm not good at finding offset so I did't intend to find a new mp3...
00:29 kookookook: is mediacoder good for trasncoder?
00:30 kookookook: I would like to extract the audio from the video
00:30 -Cloudchaser: it's not suggested extract the audio from videos
00:30 -Cloudchaser: unless the video has a really good quality
00:30 kookookook: what's bit-length?
00:31 -Cloudchaser: upon 720p
00:33 -Cloudchaser: I can't find a decent mp3
00:33 -Cloudchaser:
00:33 kookookook: ..
00:33 *-Cloudchaser is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/177324 Aimi - Link (TV Size)]
00:34 kookookook: use this?
00:34 -Cloudchaser: yes :3
00:35 kookookook: should I ask for the permission to the mapper first?
00:36 -Cloudchaser: Yes, before all :3
00:39 kookookook: haha my flow sucks
00:41 -Cloudchaser: No, but there are some flow issues in specifict parts, nothing else
00:41 kookookook: tell me
00:42 -Cloudchaser: open normal diff
00:42 -Cloudchaser: 00:45:252 (6,1) - the flow here is kinda awkward
00:43 kookookook: oh yeah
00:43 -Cloudchaser: move (6) to x:303 y:105
00:44 -Cloudchaser: wait me a bit
00:46 kookookook: yo i guess i fixed it
00:46 kookookook: I try to sorround the previous object like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/947068
00:48 -Cloudchaser: I did something better
00:48 kookookook: >v<
00:48 -Cloudchaser: http://i.imgur.com/awgXK3k.png
00:49 -Cloudchaser: http://i.imgur.com/x65HcrX.png
00:49 -Cloudchaser: btw, add custom hitcolors
00:49 -Cloudchaser: colours
00:50 kookookook: what?
00:50 kookookook: how?
00:50 -Cloudchaser: you mean, custom hitcircles?
00:50 -Cloudchaser: o.o
00:50 kookookook: hit color
00:50 -Cloudchaser: asd, sorry xD hitcircles
00:51 kookookook: just random choosing a color ?
00:51 -Cloudchaser: song setup>colour
00:51 -Cloudchaser: nope, combo colours has contrast
00:51 -Cloudchaser: with the background
00:51 kookookook: which?
00:52 kookookook: you mean the yellow one?
00:52 -Cloudchaser: wait
00:53 -Cloudchaser: I will send you something by pm
00:53 -Cloudchaser: I haven't puush for the moment
00:53 -Cloudchaser: ;_;
00:54 kookookook:
00:54 -Cloudchaser: done
00:55 kookookook: how to put?
00:55 -Cloudchaser: file>open .osu in notepad
00:55 -Cloudchaser: but
00:55 -Cloudchaser: first, save the map
00:56 -Cloudchaser: after that, open the notepad
00:56 kookookook: i can't find colours column
00:56 -Cloudchaser: put that code above of timing points
00:57 -Cloudchaser: below* sorry
00:57 -Cloudchaser: and save the notepad
00:57 kookookook: oh thankyou
00:57 -Cloudchaser: you have to do the same in the other diffs
00:58 kookookook: done
00:58 kookookook: sorry I have to have lunch now T.T
00:58 -Cloudchaser: okay :3/
00:58 kookookook: maybe mod if you have time
00:58 -Cloudchaser: we can continue later
00:58 kookookook: savelog first
00:58 -Cloudchaser: I don't know if I will sleep o3o

\:3/

SPOILER

15:57 kookookook: hi~
15:57 -Cloudchaser: hi~
15:57 kookookook: give me opinion of my map please~
16:01 -Cloudchaser: looks good for me but it has specific issues
16:01 -Cloudchaser: with mods your map will improve quite better
16:02 kookookook: 0.0
16:02 -Cloudchaser: o3o)b
16:03 -Cloudchaser: we gonna continue?
16:03 kookookook: yup
16:04 -Cloudchaser: which part we were?
16:04 kookookook: good question
16:04 kookookook: 00:45:172
16:04 kookookook: normal
16:06 -Cloudchaser: okay :3
16:07 -Cloudchaser: 00:44:604 (5) - make it more curved
16:07 -Cloudchaser: http://i.imgur.com/3DlAw2f.png
16:08 kookookook: change the direction?
16:08 -Cloudchaser: yes :3
16:09 kookookook: okay
16:09 -Cloudchaser: 00:45:252 (6) - rotate 90° and do this 00:45:010 -
16:10 -Cloudchaser: http://i.imgur.com/5BtGpZL.png *
16:11 kookookook: alright
16:12 -Cloudchaser: 00:46:388 (1) - make more curved this slider http://i.imgur.com/Tp0LjaK.png and don't forget fix the distance of the other nothes~
16:13 -Cloudchaser: notes*
16:13 kookookook: i made like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/947312
16:14 kookookook: i tried to get the previous slider surrounding 00:46:388 (1) -
16:14 kookookook: sounds weird, though
16:14 -Cloudchaser: actually I can't hear very well the audio because I haven't headphones
16:15 -Cloudchaser: in the morning I'll check hitsounds and everything o/
16:15 kookookook: actually I;m truning the volume 0
16:15 kookookook: turn*
16:15 -Cloudchaser: 4:15 am ;w;
16:15 kookookook: good moning
16:15 kookookook: morning
16:16 kookookook: I guess the rhythm is ok as I got a lot of mods
16:17 kookookook: at first I just followed the vocal and missed all the drum part > <
16:17 -Cloudchaser: you should add this as source 織田信奈の野望
16:17 -Cloudchaser: (Oda Nobuna no Yabō)
16:17 kookookook: oh yeah
16:18 -Cloudchaser: but the romanized name is already in tags
16:18 kookookook: I don't know japanese well
16:18 kookookook: apart from おだのぶなのやぼう , add the above tag?
16:18 -Cloudchaser: add 'Oda Nobuna no Yabō' too :3/
16:19 -Cloudchaser: what it says?
16:19 kookookook: how about おだのぶなのやぼう ?
16:19 -Cloudchaser: I don't know japanese D:
16:19 kookookook: i guess it's same as 織田信奈xxx
16:19 kookookook: as many Japanese characters are from Chinese
16:20 kookookook: but they don't like Chinese, so change to Japanese instead
16:20 -Cloudchaser: oh, I see
16:21 kookookook: They have exactly the same meaning imo
16:21 -Cloudchaser: yep
16:21 -Cloudchaser: then add 織田信奈の野望 too because is an alternative way to write
16:21 -Cloudchaser: into tag or source
16:22 kookookook: yes
16:25 -Cloudchaser: timing is wrong, imo
16:26 -Cloudchaser: I'll ask to a friend
16:26 kookookook: wow
16:26 -Cloudchaser: D: I'm not sure
16:26 kookookook: nvm after the new mp3 every timing has to be done again XD
16:27 -Cloudchaser: Oh, true
16:27 *-Cloudchaser slaps herself
16:28 kookookook: herself 0.0?
16:28 -Cloudchaser: I'm a girl
16:28 -Cloudchaser: :<
16:28 kookookook: >v<
16:29 kookookook: let's continue~
16:29 -Cloudchaser: I don't see anything else in the normal diff
16:29 kookookook: wow you are kidding @@
16:30 kookookook: in this diff I was silly to use four points for sliders and now I don't want to change...
16:31 kookookook: I guessed four points were more precise lol
16:32 -Cloudchaser: o.o
16:32 -Cloudchaser: the sliders are okay
16:33 -Cloudchaser: 00:32:280 (6,7) - don't fit, make a round slider of 3 ticks
16:33 kookookook: another silly thins I did was that I used grid snap
16:34 -Cloudchaser: grid snap is useful but I prefer disable it when I'm making blankets
16:34 kookookook: I guess I was using blanket of 00:31:631 (5) -
16:36 -Cloudchaser: 00:21:253 (1) - move to x:386 y:317
16:38 kookookook: oh dear i want to overlap 00:21:901 (2) - and 00:19:955 (2) -
16:39 -Cloudchaser: 00:22:550 (3) - I find awkward this slider, copy 00:21:901 (2) - and flip
16:40 -Cloudchaser: ^http://i.imgur.com/yyVNgWh.png
16:41 -Cloudchaser: yep, overlap them
16:41 kookookook: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/947360 haha I found terrible when turning 20 degree more
16:42 kookookook: just 180 degree? i don't think spacing would be allowed...
16:43 kookookook: alright sounds better now http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/947362
16:43 -Cloudchaser: sweet
16:46 -Cloudchaser: 00:35:199 (3) - try this http://i.imgur.com/NwjOGD6.png
16:47 kookookook: yup
16:49 -Cloudchaser: 01:17:199 (7) - make it more blanket http://i.imgur.com/AVCH9iE.png
16:50 -Cloudchaser: let's continue with hard diff
16:51 kookookook: yes
16:53 -Cloudchaser: alright~
16:53 -Cloudchaser: flow seems good
16:53 kookookook: thanks >v<
16:55 kookookook: 00:27:415 (1,2,3) - awful imo lol
16:57 -Cloudchaser: Nah, keep it there
16:57 kookookook: XD
16:58 -Cloudchaser: 00:31:469 (2) - make blanket with 00:31:793 (3) -
16:59 kookookook: I found it difficult to make..
17:00 -Cloudchaser: http://i.imgur.com/jP6ik8c.png
17:01 kookookook: alright I guess I've fixed now
17:03 -Cloudchaser: 00:48:820 (4) - http://i.imgur.com/Ek0nmEK.png owo
17:04 kookookook: hmmm..... what's difference?
17:04 kookookook: the last circle attaching to 00:47:847 (1) - ?
17:05 -Cloudchaser: huh?
17:05 kookookook: nothing
17:06 kookookook:
17:06 kookookook: I'm sure you'll say 00:51:253 (4,5,6) -
17:06 kookookook: Am I correct? XD
17:08 -Cloudchaser: I'm not sure what to say
17:08 -Cloudchaser: I don't see anything wrong
17:08 -Cloudchaser: I mean, of that pattern
17:08 kookookook: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/947409 better flow
17:09 kookookook: i guess
17:09 kookookook: the one now seems too odd
17:10 -Cloudchaser: indeed
17:12 -Cloudchaser: 01:10:064 (10) - this slider is a bit odd there
17:13 kookookook: yeah
17:13 -Cloudchaser: change the shape of that slider
17:13 -Cloudchaser: 01:14:604 (7) - move the tail of the slider some grids up
17:14 kookookook: fixed
17:14 -Cloudchaser: that's all for now
17:14 -Cloudchaser: I'm sleepy
17:14 -Cloudchaser: xwx
17:14 kookookook: ok thanks^^
17:14 kookookook: have a good 'night'
17:15 -Cloudchaser: "night" xD lol

Fycho wrote:

hi ~recheck desu~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

PS：节奏和排列分开来了，所以改的时候建议节奏和排列一起看，不然回上面改了下面对不上的

[Hard]
作为最高难度的话HP+1
Tick rate =1，很多地方tick音不合适

节奏&音效

• 
  试着用这个normal-hitclap，http://puu.sh/4akRD.wav
  这个normal-hitfinish，http://puu.sh/4aldh.wav
  可以放进去听一下
  00:00:659 (1) –试试这种节奏http://puu.sh/49Egn.jpg
  00:11:037 (4) –这里建议使用1/1滑条，http://puu.sh/4almg.jpg
  00:11:523 –这里漏了一个clap
  00:12:172 (3) –滑条首加clap
  00:14:442 (1) –尾加clap
  00:15:415 (3) -^
  00:16:226 –加一个note
  00:18:172 (1) –这个建议不要折返，在00:18:658 –加note或者滑条可以把clap用上
  00:25:145 (1) –clap
  00:25:793 –加note 带clap
  00:26:280 (4) –尾clap
  00:30:496 (4) –去掉 clap
  00:35:199 (1,2) -去掉clap，这里不合适，加了有点吵
  00:35:685 (4) –拉到白线00:36:091 -
  00:37:145 –从这里往后，建议滑条减速成0.75或者0.5，有个区分度，因为节奏变缓了，音量也可以适当减小下
  00:52:064 –如果改了上面那条，这里可以恢复正常速度
  00:52:064 (6) –前移到红线开始，00:52:388 –加个note
  00:45:415 (3) –试试1/1滑条+note
  00:58:064 (3) –尾clap
  01:04:226 (7,1) –这两个可以合并为一个滑条
  01:04:712 –这些空余的白线上也可以放点note，不然略枯燥
  01:06:172 (6) –finish
  01:11:199 (4) –首+clap
  01:12:009 (7) –首clap去掉,并加finish，然后shift+E
  01:19:955 (1) –首加clap
  01:21:090 (1) –转盘从大白线开始，01:21:091 –加个note并加finish
  01:23:199 -转盘应该在这结束

排列&Flow

• 
  可以放点跳
  00:07:631 (2,3) –Ctrl+G，，因为3到4那样角度很大，绕起来不顺手，你看00:08:280 (5,6) –就做的很好
  00:11:361 (5,1) –如果上面节奏没改的话，就把1放到5的延长线上
  00:12:172 (3,4,5) –排列建议http://puu.sh/4alsw.jpg
  00:15:415 (3,4) –这两个，建议离远点，因为3和4的尾巴靠的很近读图的时候容易误读
  00:18:982 (2,3) –ctrl+G，2,3,4,5是顺时针的在6的地方变成逆时针会有点不舒服，所以前面不要顺时针
  00:18:172 (1) -http://puu.sh/4alzo.jpg
  00:20:117 (1,3) –(3)建议复制粘贴1，然后旋转180°看起来更好看
  00:27:739 (2,3) –顺着1,2的轨迹，3叠到1的尾上不顺手，http://puu.sh/4alBy.jpg
  00:28:388 (4,5) –00:29:036 (1,2,3,4) -要移动的话些随着3一起移动吧
  00:35:685 (4) –滑条拉好，一般是三点定滑条
  00:49:469 (6,7) –往中间摆点，左右对称下
  00:50:442 (2,3) –这两个可以做一个互相blanket
  01:01:145 (4,5,6) –http://puu.sh/4alNF.jpg
  01:01:955 (2,3,4) -http://puu.sh/4alQ7.jpg
  01:09:091 (7,8) –这两个凹凸方向换一下
  01:10:064 (10,1) - http://puu.sh/4alXy.jpg
  01:25:468 (2,3) –Ctrl+G

进步了很多继续加油~

[Normal]

• 
  00:07:306 (4) –用1/1滑条啊，少了个clap觉得怪怪的，不怕麻烦的话你可以用个tick音效组切换
  00:08:604 (1) -^
  00:10:712 (4) –首clap尾finish
  00:11:036 (1) –首finish
  00:14:928 (3) -^
  00:22:550 (3) –首clap
  00:23:199 (4) -^
  00:26:604 (3) –首finish
  00:34:388 (2) –尾clap
  00:35:685 (4) -^
  00:36:334 (5) –首finish
  00:44:604 (5) –http://puu.sh/4amsE.jpg
  00:46:226 –add note
  00:52:064 (5) –首finish
  00:52:550 –加个note带finish然后转盘大白线起
  00:52:550 (1) –转盘建议加个finish啊
  01:09:415 (4) –首finish？
  01:16:388 (5) –尾whistle换成finish
  01:23:685 (1,2,3,4,5) – 感觉和开头一样，不要复制站贴啊

[Easy]

• 
  00:11:523 (1) –首clap，漏clap的说不动了;w;
  00:14:766 (6,7) –不要叠在一起，新手不会读图的
  00:21:577 –add note这样空着节奏不顺啊0.0
  00:22:874 -^
  00:24:172 -^
  00:27:415 (1) –不要whistle
  00:44:118 (3) –缩短到红线结束，跟人声
  00:44:766 (3,4) –节奏参考http://puu.sh/4amCd.jpg
  00:50:118 (4) –在00:50:604 –结束
  00:50:928 –add note
  00:51:253 (5,2) –这两个包包好，不要感觉像一边歪的=.=
  01:01:469 (2,3) –不要stack，用其他节奏试试
  01:06:496 (4) –首clap -。-
  EASY的话在鼓点平稳地带少用红线就行

加油：3

Raose wrote:

Hi! As requested~

General

combo colors 3 & 4 looks really similar and might throw off people. Either change the colors or change their order fixed
00:57:739 - consider making this a red line instead of a green line to reset the metronome fixed
your finishes during kiai should be louder! it would enhance the map and make it much more epic
Please listen to each diff carefully for inconsistencies in hitsounds! Typical 2/4 claps work nicely here, and you do use them, but sometimes they sound off 01:26:442 (1) - silence the end of the spinner? for all diffs fixed

Hard

maybe raise the OD by 1 to balance diff settings fixed
00:00:659 - why not raise this section's volume by about 10% or so? It's hard for me to hear what's going on ): fixed
00:07:631 (2,3) - switch the claps here fixed
00:09:253 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I am iffy about this section, even with AR8 some objects look hard to read due to the hitbursts, and imo, the music doesn't really call for this sort of pattern. fixed
00:16:388 (1,2,3,4) - woah this pattern looks a bit messy D: the overlaps and inconsistent spacing, please consider reworking it >< fixed
00:17:685 (5) - how about moving this so it makes a nice triangle with the previous pattern? and adjusting the curve for better flow:

SPOILER

fixed
00:35:685 (4) - a regular 3 point slider would be able to better blanket 00:35:199 (1) if thats' what you're aiming for fixed
01:00:658 (1) - remove clap, doesn't fit with your hitsound patterns fixed
01:01:145 (4) - ^ fixed
- not sure if intentional, but you're breaking off from your established hitsound pattern here XD remove claps from 3 & 4, and place them on head of 5 instead
01:04:226 (7,1) - how about making this a 1/1 slider instead to better fit vocals fixed
01:11:199 (4,5,6) - does not really flow well due to the direction of the slider :/ not sure how you can fix it without changing the next few sliders too haha or adding jumps. This is something I would do, maybe it can give you some ideas ?_? I drew some arrows in case you're confused!

SPOILER

fixed. thanks^^
01:18:009 (1,2) - not perfectly symmetrical L O L lol fixed
01:19:955 (1) - for tidiness and to make this pattern look better, i suggest moving it up some so that the tail does not touch the previous slider fixed
01:20:442 (2,3) - how about moving these down some so they'd make a nice triangle pattern with 1? fixed


Normal

00:07:306 (4) - remove clap? inconsistency with hitsounds fixed
00:10:226 (5) - to make the pattern look slightly less cluttered, move it some and adjust the curve:

SPOILER

fixed
00:16:388 (1,2) - would sound better to me if you placed the clap on tail of 1, remove from head of 2 fixed
00:27:415 (1,2) - try this to better fit vocals:

SPOILER

fixed

Easy

Bring AR down by 1 to balance diff settings, it'd also bring a nice difficulty progression to Normal, which has AR 5 fixed
The 1/2 rhythms and 1/2 repeating sliders may be a bit hard for the easiest difficulty of the set
00:05:848 (1) - maybe too soon after the spinner fixed

goodluck with the map! (b'-')b

waxman wrote:

sorry for late (´･ω･`)

[Hard]

00:07:631 (2) - add Clap. fixed
00:07:793 (3) - delete Clap. fixed
00:13:145 (1) - add Clap on returning of slider. fixed
00:12:172 (3) - add Clap. fixed
00:12:820 (5) - ^ fixed
00:18:172 (1) - I think this slider looks like doesn't match with sounds. fixed
00:25:793 () - add a circle and Clap. fixed
00:26:280 (5) - add Clap on the end of slider. fixed
00:31:307 (1) - NC fixed
00:31:793 (3) - Delete NC fixed
00:55:307 (4) - NC fixed
01:12:009 (7) - delete finish on the start of slider. fixed
01:21:091 (1) - the end of the spinner is at 1:23:199 fixed
01:23:361 () - add a circle fixed


[Normal]
　
00:07:306 (4) - delete Clap. fixed
00:55:307 (1) - NC (suggestion) I'm afraid I don't want too much NC
00:55:793 (2) - ^ ^
00:56:280 (3) - ^ ^
01:00:009 (1,2) - ^
01:15:577 (4) - NC fixed
　

[Easy]
　
00:00:659 (1) - it ends at 5:361 I guess the distance between spin and object for easy should be larger
00:13:145 (3,4) - bad spacing a bit. Oh yeah fixed
01:11:361 () - add a circle. fixed
01:21:091 (1) - it ends at 1:23:199 Same^^

Sorry for poor modding. (´･ω･`) You are so good in modding >v<

I think you really need a DRUMMER. I can't make some sounds like Whistle, Finish and Clap as well.

GOOK LUCK!

Mercusheigan wrote:

from my modding queue~

General

I liked the song also the flow is pretty good overall


Easy

00:12:172 - Y = 88? fixed
00:18:009 - Y = 336? fixed
00:52:550 - this slider is ending somewhat lower than it started (not symmetrical; intentional, maybe?) fixed
01:03:253 - Y = 160? fixed

Normal

00:14:928 - this slider is not symmetrical. 1st point = X = 384/Y = 96; 2nd point = X = 256 Y = 32; 3rd point = X = 120 Y = 104 fixed
00:57:253 - is this slider intended to go just a bit up? fixed
01:14:280 - i loved this l0l

Hard

00:21:901 - Y = 248? fixed
00:49:307 - X = 248 Y = 176? fixed
01:14:604 - line up the middle tick with the main Y line fixed

that's pretty much all I can say!

sorry for a poor modding. best luck!

EmingK wrote:

Hi ._.
Mod req from forum PM~

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[General]
昨天晚上下的图，今天一update发现timing错乱……全图更新之后才发现换mp3了
所以请务必在creater's word里醒目标注“Please redownload if you downoladed before 27/8/2013”

[Easy]
感觉kiai往后有点难，赶上normal水平了
00:00:253 (1) - 这一整个乐句在00:05:117 - 处结束，建议把转盘也拉到这里并加finish 好的
01:20:685 (1) - 和上一个类似，乐句结束于此01:22:955 - 好的
00:14:522 (7) - 尾finish？ 好的
00:31:874 (3) - 头clap 好的
01:07:712 (1) - finish 好的
01:26:036 (1) - 最后这个转盘尾部没有鼓点可接，使用soft音效吧，减小一些音量 好的

[Normal]
00:00:253 (1) - 同easy 好的
01:20:685 (1) - 同easy 好的
00:33:982 (2,3) - 没包好 才不是想包...哼! 弄好點了
00:53:928 (1) - 这个note离转盘比较近，应该放得离转盘中心近一些 normal就算了吧.__.
00:15:982 (1) - 头finish 好的
00:23:603 (5) - 折返点加clap 好的
00:24:739 (1) - 头clap 好的
00:25:225 (2) - 头尾clap，可以试听一下 好的
00:57:820 (2) - clap 好的
01:26:036 (1) - 同easy 好的

[Hard]
00:02:847 (1) - 同上 好的
01:20:684 (1) - 同上 好的
00:26:198 (5) - 诶尾巴上的红色控制点在卖萌？ 是的~ 改好了
01:16:468 (2) - y坐标减1，没全盖上 好的
00:10:955 (5) - 折返处clap 好的
00:14:036 (1) - 尾clap 好的
00:15:009 (3) - clap 好的
00:15:333 (4) - 尾clap 好的
00:24:900 (2) - 尾clap 好的
00:30:090 (4) - 移除尾clap 好的
00:33:982 (3) - 尾clap 好的
01:26:036 (1) - 同easy 好的

good luck!

1. 00:06:901 (1,4) - 感觉滑条有点扭曲过头
2. 00:10:631 (4) - 这里不要让滑条尾巴在大白线结束啊，没打击感
3. 00:32:522 (7,10) - 不好看
4. 01:25:224 (3) - 为什么在这下clap

1. 00:16:631 (2) - 漏clap?
2. 00:46:793 (2) - 滑条尾巴加finish？

1. 00:58:955 (3,4) - 放在easy感觉不是很好，有点难读
2. 01:23:279 (1,3) - 组合起来看不好看

1. 为什么你做了一个比较难的hard不去做insane呢?...
2. Goodluck

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Here is your requested mod, I'm sorry it took me so long T_T

General:
It seems like there is a problem with your second timing section, please get someone to check it.

Easy:
00:25:145 (3) - the beginning of the slider is not loud enough, I would add soft whistle fixed
00:47:199 (2) - I think this is too short and fast for beginners, try to use a simple slider: http://puu.sh/4bbEI.jpg - the big beats are on the white tick, so it will fit I guess that's fine
00:57:253 (5) - it is a little bit confusing and also doesn't fit so much if you start the kiai with a slider ending, so I would suggest you to do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/949252
remove (5), put (1) earlier (where the kiai starts) fixed
00:59:361 (2,3) - the next thing is the short reverse sliders that come after (1), you should try it like I did on the picture, make them longer (the picture is above ^) fixed
01:00:658 (1,2) - it would be easier if you made (1) one long slider, because it is hard to hit (2) and (3), they come too quickly after each other, so try to make it easier by making one long slider: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/949253 fixed
01:07:145 (5) - I think you should remove the reverse and make it a simple slider, it would fit better to the vocals, and I don't think it's a problem if players have some time before 01:08:118 (1) - fixed
01:08:442 (2) - remove hit circle, it is too hard for an Easy diff, it would be nice to have a hit circle then a little empty space before (2) comes on the big beat: http://puu.sh/4bcko.jpg It seems odd...
01:14:280 (2) - I would put this 1/2 later 01:14:442 - it feels better while playing, and "shiiiii" start at the white tick, so it would fit better to the lyrics too fixed
01:15:577 (1,2,3) - I think these are too fast for an Easy, it would be enough if you emphasized the bigger beats with either 2 hit circles (instead of the 2 short sliders), or a slider: http://puu.sh/4bcqq.jpg and remove 01:17:037 (3) - fixed

Normal:
00:12:172 (2) - it would flow better like this: http://puu.sh/4bm7L.jpg fixed
00:17:037 (2) - try this for better flow: http://puu.sh/4bm9r.jpg also add clap to the end of the slider fixed
00:29:360 (5) - put this 00:29:360 - this is the place where I can hear the big beat fixed
00:30:333 (2) - make it a long slider, it feels too monoton using 1/1 sliders throughout the whole difficulty and it also fits to the lyrics because she sings in a long way fixed
00:31:225 (5) - add new combo since 7 might be a little bit much for normal and it sounds like she sings in a higher voice or how to explain...so it would fit fixed
00:38:684 (3) - this is quite short, and the song here is quite slow, so you should only use a 1/1 slider: http://puu.sh/4c7Lf.jpg I cannot ignore the musci at the repeat... it's loud
00:39:657 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could work on this part, the rythm on picture feels better and not as monoton as before: fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951400
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951404
(you can also see an example, so that it won't be troublesome to change it because of the distance)
01:06:739 (6,7) - you should remoev (6) and place (7) earlier, like this: http://puu.sh/4c8kS.jpg it is better to play because the short reverse slider fits the lyrics fixed
01:24:738 (4) - add clap to the end of the slider fixed
01:25:387 (5) - remove clap fixed

Hard:
As you can see the colour melts into the background, so it would be nice if you swapped it fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951445 --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951449
00:00:739 (2,5) - this overlap is quite ugly, but (2) almost disappears by the time we can see (5): http://puu.sh/4c8Gy.jpg - so if you don't want to change it at least make it nicer: http://puu.sh/4c8JG.jpg fixed
00:10:955 (5) - it would play better if you removed the reverse and added a hit circle instead: http://puu.sh/4c90p.jpg fixed
00:14:036 (1,2) - this doesn't really flow well so ctrl+g on this 00:14:522 (2) - and you could also somehow improve the pattern if you made nicer blankets fixed
00:17:603 (6) - it might flow better if you replaced it: http://puu.sh/4c980.jpg fixed
00:31:387 (3,4) - a slider would work better intead of two hit circles, because she sings in a long way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951494 fixed
00:38:847 (7,8,9) - I think it would be better if you made (7) and (8) one slider, removed the repeat from (9) and added a hit circle: http://puu.sh/4c9pT.jpg feels better to click on a slider then clicking on two hit circles fixed
00:49:712 (1) - this flows better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951509 fixed
01:13:387 (4) - this is too close, put it further from the middle fixed
01:25:062 (2) - add clap fixed
01:25:224 (3) - remove clap fixed

Good luck!

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:06:901 (1,4) - 感觉滑条有点扭曲过头 好的
2. 00:10:631 (4) - 这里不要让滑条尾巴在大白线结束啊，没打击感 好的
3. 00:32:522 (7,10) - 不好看 好的
4. 01:25:224 (3) - 为什么在这下clap 好的 改了

[Normal]

1. 00:16:631 (2) - 漏clap? 好的
2. 00:46:793 (2) - 滑条尾巴加finish？ 本身已有finish?

[Easy]

1. 00:58:955 (3,4) - 放在easy感觉不是很好，有点难读 好的
2. 01:23:279 (1,3) - 组合起来看不好看 好的

[Other]

1. 为什么你做了一个比较难的hard不去做insane呢?... 我不懂insaneXD
2. Goodluck

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

接触mod/map不久，没发现出来什么问题，请见谅

总体：感觉将全部难度都提升一个级别比较好，3.08星的easy，4.20星的normal，5.00星的hard，我还是第一次见。至于一个更简单的难度，看你喜欢了（不过还是希望有一个真正的easy难度，尽量将难度控制在2.7以下）。 呵呵 我懶得再做圖了

难度：Easy
00:14:360 (6,7)，01:00:252 (1,2)，01:08:036 (2,3)，01:16:631 (3,4)，01:19:549 (1,2) - 对于新手来说半拍应该比较难反应过来 節奏上迫不得以啊

难度：Normal
感觉hp、od跟easy相差太小，跟hard相差很大 好的 改了一下
note方面没什么问题

难度：Hard
note方面没什么问题

加油

CET 6 wrote:

刚开始mod 如有冒犯请见谅~

General

上楼的modder也说了，感觉每个难度都应该是下一个级别的，可能是因为bpm比较高的原因


Easy

00:14:522 (7) 这个或许可以调整一下 使后半部分与00:15:982 (1) 的形状更一致些 好的
00:24:090 (2) 或许可以调整一下位子 被00:24:739 (3) blanket（包一下） 好的
01:11:279 (2) 这里有点奇怪 或许可以用01:11:117-01:11:441放个滑条取代这个 好的

没什么大问题，但个人觉得作为最低的一个难度，排版有点乱了（现在还是比较流行工整的排版


Normal

00:09:495 (4) 形状或许可以调整和00:10:630 (1) 相对应 好的
00:16:631 (2) clap好像漏了 加了
00:18:900 (1,2,3,4) 个人感觉这样的排版有点乱 嗯...
00:41:603 (4) 包好00:42:252 (1) 好的
01:12:576 (1) 或许可以用01:11:603 (5) 包一下 好的


Hard

00:01:550 (5) 或许可以nc 好的

感觉有些重复，都在白线和红线上下节奏有些单调，可以试试在一些 蓝线 上下节奏


大概就这样~
Good luck ！

DnJeiser wrote:

General
Use Aimod

Easy
00:14:522 (7) - drag it to the white teak fit music more, I guess
00:56:198 - better to make a slider will be too complicated
01:16:631 (3) - move here 01:16:468 - fit vocal more

Normal
00:10:306 (5) - make a hitcircle 00:10:468 - both start and end are strong beats... can't be ignored sorry

Hard
00:32:360 (6) - NC fixed
00:42:252 (1,2,3) - I would have reduced the distance I guess it's fine to have consistent spacing (1.20x)
01:08:685 (7) - NC fixed

KevinKang wrote:

我不太会mod啊只能提点自己的看法>.<
[Easy]
00:14:522 (7) - slider的尾剪到前一条白线 紅線有拍...無視那拍有點怪怪的...
00:43:712 (3) - slider的尾可以剪短到前一条红线 同上... 不過我覺得之後的拍子怪怪的 一會兒改下
00:57:333 (1) - 我觉得也可以剪短到前一条白线啊 跟人聲啊
总体上我感觉节奏有点拖啊 我也覺得是 一會兒改一下 :3
[Normal]
00:16:631 (2) - 我觉得把clap放到slider的尾更好~跟下一个鼓音之间就契合了 好的
00:26:198 (3) - 我觉得clap更好，凸显了下一个finish的音效 我覺得連clap不是太好...
01:25:387 (5) - 来个clap吧 同上
[Hard]
这个HP设定好凶残啊>.<（第一次玩直接挂了）
我觉得打得很爽
挑不出刺
[General]
slidertick建议可以用静音或者可以在某些地方用鼓音试试
加油!!!（渣mod啊 ）

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi there!~ Soz for the late mod, I was on Holiday
This mod is for you since you passed the challenge round I guess....Anyways~

General:
~CLEAN :3

Easy:
~00:00:659 (1) - The spinner end doesn't really fit anywhere... Can you remove the spinner and let play start at 00:05:848 cuz that's where the strong beats come in.
~00:10:226 (4) - Add clap.
~00:10:550 (5) - Remove clap and add finish to head and end of slider.
~00:25:145 (3) - Add clap on head.
~00:28:388 (2) - In the whole pattern, why is there only 1 of these? Either change all to W shape or all curve. 0.o
~00:32:280 (3) - Add clap on head.
~00:33:577 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I dun really get what u r following here. It might be confusing if you were following the drums to vocals to bass..The switch in between is too quick for beginners to react. Try following 1 thing instead. @@
~00:47:199 (2) - Distance snap.
~Snap everything behind of course.
~00:57:739 - You've actually skipped alot of white ticks where the important beats are in Kiai. I suggest you remap Kiai with more rhythm on the white ticks.
~00:55:307 (1,2,3,4) - I dun think beginners could understand this rhythm. Try a simple slider instead. http://puu.sh/4bgcx.jpg
~01:26:442 (1) - I suggest you to map this instead of putting a slider, cuz it feels awkward since u've made a pattern for the music, why not finish it with notes and sliders instead of using a spinner which doesn't really fit in my opinion. DX

Overall, work on mapping the white ticks in any song since they are the strongest beats in an song. Furthermore, focus on following more on 1 thing at a time eg. Vocal and not follow a few things at once, which really confuses beginners. Also for Easy diffs , try to minimize the usage of red ticks on either start or finish, as newbies will get confused and loosen flow during play. So try to make a map for beginners to play and play again cuz it's fun and not confusing. Keep working at it.

gideon5504 wrote:

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi there!~ Soz for the late mod, I was on Holiday
This mod is for you since you passed the challenge round I guess....Anyways~

General:
~CLEAN :3

Easy:
~00:00:659 (1) - The spinner end doesn't really fit anywhere... Can you remove the spinner and let play start at 00:05:848 cuz that's where the strong beats come in. fixed
~00:10:226 (4) - Add clap. fixed
~00:10:550 (5) - Remove clap and add finish to head and end of slider. fixed
~00:25:145 (3) - Add clap on head. fixed
~00:28:388 (2) - In the whole pattern, why is there only 1 of these? Either change all to W shape or all curve. 0.o fixed
~00:32:280 (3) - Add clap on head. fixed
~00:33:577 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I dun really get what u r following here. It might be confusing if you were following the drums to vocals to bass..The switch in between is too quick for beginners to react. Try following 1 thing instead. @@ fixed
~00:47:199 (2) - Distance snap. fixed
~Snap everything behind of course.
~00:57:739 - You've actually skipped alot of white ticks where the important beats are in Kiai. I suggest you remap Kiai with more rhythm on the white ticks. fixed
~00:55:307 (1,2,3,4) - I dun think beginners could understand this rhythm. Try a simple slider instead. http://puu.sh/4bgcx.jpg fixed
~01:26:442 (1) - I suggest you to map this instead of putting a slider, cuz it feels awkward since u've made a pattern for the music, why not finish it with notes and sliders instead of using a spinner which doesn't really fit in my opinion. DX fixed

Overall, work on mapping the white ticks in any song since they are the strongest beats in an song. Furthermore, focus on following more on 1 thing at a time eg. Vocal and not follow a few things at once, which really confuses beginners. Also for Easy diffs , try to minimize the usage of red ticks on either start or finish, as newbies will get confused and loosen flow during play. So try to make a map for beginners to play and play again cuz it's fun and not confusing. Keep working at it.

Here is the rest of the mod:

Normal:
~00:16:631 (2) - Remove clap from head. fixed
~00:20:847 (1,2,1,2,1) - I think you followed the vocals too early there. Try this pattern. http://puu.sh/4dLRQ.jpg fixed
Ofcs check the distance snap after changing pattern.
~00:35:279 (4) - Add finish on head and end. fixed
~00:37:063 - 00:45:495 - Change all the clap sounds into whistles? Sounds better in that part. This suggestion goes to all diffs. fixed
~00:46:793 (2) - Move the reverse arrow to X: 80 Y: 272 for better flow. too fa away I guess
~00:48:414 (5) - Too long. If u are trying to follow the vocal, reduce it to the previous white tick. fixed
~00:48:901 (6) - ^Snap slider to the red tick after the previous slider's end. fixed
~Here I will suggest a pattern for the rest. Starting from 00:49:549 - http://puu.sh/4dMjv.jpg fixed
~00:59:603 (1,2) - Doesn't follow anything. Follow the vocals like you've did b4. fixed
~01:01:711 (5) - Shorten it by 1/2 to keep consistent with 01:02:360 (1,2,3) fixed
~01:13:874 (3) - I dun recommend making long slider here, cuz you've skipped the most important beat (downbeat). fixed
~01:16:631 (3) - Move this to white tick and distance snap it. Cuz it matches the vocals. fixed
~01:24:090 (2,3,4,5,6) - You could try to re-position the notes, as it now looks very randomly placed as well as obviously copy and pasted. fixed

Hard:
~00:00:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not just use spinner to keep consistency with other diffs? fixed
~00:11:441 - From here, why not just use the pattern you've created earlier with 2 circles and 1 slider? Like these 00:06:901 (1,2,3,4) to keep some consistency since the drum beats are still the same as the pattern u've made earlier. will be too boring...
~00:26:685 (6) - Add clap. fixed
~00:42:576 (2) - Doesn't sound right, even if it's intentional I suggest removing this clap. fixed
~00:58:063 - Add note for triplet? fixed
~This diff I like. :3

That's all from me ^^ Overall I think ur hard was the best diff Just remember to keep patterns consistent and try ur best to not skip important beats as I've mentioned b4. Keep working harder!! So good luck!

P A N wrote:

hi :3

[Hard]

00:17:766 (1) - this slider doesnt fit imo and it make the clap hitsound disappear too maybe change it fixed
continue the note until 01:27:171 and start the spinner at 01:27:252 is more fit imo fixed
01:13:549 (4) - forget finish on arrow fixed
01:14:198 (7) - forget finish on head fixed
01:16:144 (1) - forget finish on arrow fixed

[Normal]

00:06:576 - this rhythm is better and add clap on tail fixed
00:14:036 (2,3) - 408|136 and 384|96 are better imo fixed
after do above ^ move 00:15:982 (1) to 256|168 and itll be perfect fixed
00:59:117 (5) - clap on arrow fixed
00:59:603 - try this rhythm and add clap on white tick fixed
01:26:036 - same as Insane, continue the note

[Easy]

00:14:036 - let's try this it'll easier for easy don't forget to add clap on tail fixed
00:58:631 (2,3,4,1) - hmm stack like this, the beginner will confuse for sure please consider fixed
01:03:495 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
01:26:036 - same as Insane

good luck XD

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

Oda Nobuna daisuki!!
I will use different colors to show how I want you to make the change
you can accept it or had better follow my idea
Of course,these are all my own opinion
Easy
*00:14:360 (6,7) - change into a spinner fixed
*00:21:495 (4) - nc fixed
*00:54:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - change into a spinner,afterall,red line objects are difficult for real green hands fixed
*01:25:712 add a note here fixed
Normal
*00:10:306 (5) - nc,and do not cancel the nc of 00:10:630 (1) - fixed
*00:56:847 (5) - nc fixed
*01:10:306 (2) - rotate by -45 and also makes some changes to nearby objects fixed
*01:17:928 (2,3) - all nc is not a bad idea~ fixed
Hard
*00:01:550 (5) - nc fixed
*00:08:198 (7) - nc fixed
*00:09:495 (1,2,3,4) - why not try another arrangement? fixed

like this

*00:51:658 (6) - nc, and using flip horizontally&moving to the right side fixed
*01:06:739 (2,3,4,5) - It`s better to make them in four corners of a square fixed
*01:24:089 (4) - nc fixed
*01:25:711 (5,6) - move to (354,287) fixed

I wonder how long I haven`t use English in my modding career,and sorry for my poor English 其實我看得明中文的?...

smallboat wrote:

嗨 mod req~ 久等@@y

[General]

沒什麼問題 只是最低難度要3以下 再減一些圈代替長條吧

有想要作Insane嗎?


[Easy]

如果要減少難度的話 下面可參考 斟酌使用
00:58:955 (3,4) - 應該能換成單個note? 好的
01:00:414 (1) - 後面長條放這? 前端+clap 尾端01:00:901 好的

[Normal]

00:56:847 (5) - 尾端應該可以給00:57:333 (1) - 包住? 較美觀。(blanket) 其實包不到...不過改好點了
01:06:739 (6) - 尾端finish 好的
01:24:738 (4) - 可分兩種情況(下面解說)
1.前端去掉clap 如果沒去掉會聽得有點怪˙-˙ 突然兩個鼓聲.. 好的
　　
2.如果這邊要加的話 01:25:387 (5) - 建議加一下clap 這樣末端都打鼓聲來結束比較合理


[Hard]

00:35:279 (4) - 前端應該能用finish加強? 好的
00:38:198 (5,6) - 5的尾端要不要用6包住? 改好點了
00:48:414 (4) - 尾端clap? 好的
00:58:631 (4) - 前端可用f加強 好的
00:59:279 (7) - f 自己斟酌 好的
01:03:171 (5) - 前端f蠻不錯的.. 好的
01:07:063 (4) - f也不錯 好的
01:09:009 (2) - ^ 好的
01:14:198 (7) - 前端可用f加強 好的

OK~,祝早日Rank,蠻不錯聽的歌!

leon1341414 wrote:

Hi ~ as request~
sorry for late

[General]

1. PreviewTime: 57171 好的
2. AudioLeadIn: 2000 (in Notepad 修改) 好的

[Easy]

1. 01:08:036(2,3) - easy難度不要讓note重疊 好的
2. 01:11:441(2,3) - ^ 好的
3. 01:16:631(3,4) - ^ 好的
4. 01:25:712(5) - 我想這邊漏了一個clap 是的

[Normal]

1. 01:00:252(2,3,4,5) - 1/2滑條和1/2拍note交錯的這個梗對normal玩家有點難了lol , 建議修改下 好的

[Hard]

Hard 1 PC play

1. 這個diff有些地方單個的circle連續放得有點多 , 加上185 BPM其實也不低 , 感覺超過Hard的難度了 , 建議用slider取代一些
   好的EX:
   00:08:522 - 00:10:468 -
   00:12:414 - 00:13:874 -
2. 00:57:982(1,2,3) - 這邊建議不要重疊Note , 剛進kiai time , 分開這些note會更有動力感:3 好的

沒什麼大問題 , 純指出一些建議供參考

\耶這首終於有standard map了/

Great job ! and good luck ~