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Jouhou Shoribu - Se-no! (TV Size)

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neurosis
508 posts
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neurosis
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, March 29, 2014 at 21:16:39

Artist: Jouhou Shoribu
Title: Se-no! (TV Size)
Source: Yuyushiki
Tags: 2013 spring op fuwariP ookubo rumi tsuda minami taneda risa
BPM: 174
Filesize: 14639kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.95 stars, 260 notes)
  2. Muffinsane (5 stars, 317 notes)
  3. Normal (3.95 stars, 121 notes)
Download: Jouhou Shoribu - Se-no! (TV Size)
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i just want to have fun
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Last edited by neurosis , edited 32 times in total.
kisata
521 posts
Joined September 2012
kisata
tags: touhou

well, OK
neurosis
508 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
neurosis

apaffy wrote:

tags: touhou

well, OK
i dont know what you're talking about!!
kisata
521 posts
Joined September 2012
kisata
this map sucks please improve
neurosis
508 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
neurosis

apaffy wrote:

this map sucks please improve
i dont know what you're talking about!!
Park-Hyun
81 posts
Joined May 2011
Park-Hyun
Random mod~

General
Most of your new combos are wrongly placed. You need to fix this. Try adding them on downbeats and keep consistent spacing.

apaffy's Normal
00:23:185 (1) - This is not very interesting. I suggest the following ---> http://puu.sh/49Wpj
00:31:461 (2) - Sounds offbeat. Try a slider like this ---> http://puu.sh/49Xlw
00:36:634 (1) - Same problem as above. Here's my suggestion ---> http://puu.sh/49XXf, http://puu.sh/49XYy
00:54:737 (1) - The slider is too long. Make it start at 00:54:909 ---> http://puu.sh/49YAi
01:09:737 (1) - Make this slider end at 01:10:254
01:10:772 (2) - Move at 01:10:599
01:11:116 (1) - Start at 01:10:944, end at 1:11:461 (suggestion for the 3 above comments ---> http://puu.sh/4a0AP)
01:12:496 (1) - End at 01:13:013
01:13:530 (2) - Move at 01:13:358
01:13:875 (1) - Start at 01:13:703, end at 01:14:220 (suggestion for the 3 above comments ---> http://puu.sh/4a0Bu)
01:23:530 (1) - End at 01:24:247
01:24:565 (2) - Move at 01:24:392
01:24:909 (3) - Move at 01:24:737 (suggestion for the 3 above comments ---> http://puu.sh/4a0C0)

Hard
01:06:806 (1) - Move to x:216, y:152
01:28:013 (1) - Maybe you can use a reverse slider (---> http://puu.sh/49ZG7)

Insane
00:39:392 (7,8) - Delete
00:39:565 (7) - Move at 00:39:392
00:39:909 (1) - Move at 00:39:737
00:40:082 (2) - Move at 00:39:909
00:40:944 (4) - Delete
00:40:427 (3) - Move at 0:40:599 and add 2 circles at 00:40:254 and 0:40:427, position x:436, y:344 (---> http://puu.sh/4a1RG)
00:55:772 (6,7) - A triplet is better here (add circle at 00:55:944)


I hope that it helps.
Good luck!
neurosis
508 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
neurosis

Park-Hyun wrote:

Random mod~

General
Most of your new combos are wrongly placed. You need to fix this. Try adding them on downbeats and keep consistent spacing.
i think the more ambiguous combos on the hard and insane are creating less confusing patterns with a little more impact, but i'll see


Hard
01:06:806 (1) - Move to x:216, y:152 sorry, i like it here
01:28:013 (1) - Maybe you can use a reverse slider (---> http://puu.sh/49ZG7) ^ :<

Insane
00:39:392 (7,8) - Delete
00:39:565 (7) - Move at 00:39:392
00:39:909 (1) - Move at 00:39:737
00:40:082 (2) - Move at 00:39:909
00:40:944 (4) - Delete
00:40:427 (3) - Move at 0:40:599 and add 2 circles at 00:40:254 and 0:40:427, position x:436, y:344 (---> http://puu.sh/4a1RG)
00:55:772 (6,7) - A triplet is better here (add circle at 00:55:944)

done everything~

I hope that it helps.
Good luck!
thank you!
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