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Iluhiwizel
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Diasios
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Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source.)
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize all the tags.)
File Size: 9,17MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

- You have to cut the mp3.


Timing: BPM: 128,01 - Offset: 3.910 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain and Overall difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks. Better.

This difficulty is too hard for be the most easier. You need an easy difficulty.


00:23:080 (4,5) - Spacing.
03:48:086 (10) - New combo.

[Hard]

01:07:085 (1) - Slider repeat is partially hidden.
01:50:004 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:27:054 (6) - New combo.
03:05:003 (1) - Remove new combo.
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Set preview point.
BPM = 128,00 (resnap all notes)


[Normal]

00:52:062 (7) - New combo
00:56:084 (6) - ^

03:03:865 = add kiai

[Hard]

03:03:865 = add kiai


Starred~
All fixed

osuplayer111 wrote:

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source.)
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize all the tags.)
File Size: 9,17MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

- You have to cut the mp3.


Timing: BPM: 128,01 - Offset: 3.910 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain and Overall difficulty by 1 or 2 ticks. Better.

This difficulty is too hard for be the most easier. You need an easy difficulty.


00:23:080 (4,5) - Spacing.
03:48:086 (10) - New combo.

[Hard]

01:07:085 (1) - Slider repeat is partially hidden.
01:50:004 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:27:054 (6) - New combo.
03:05:003 (1) - Remove new combo.

All fixed
orioncomet
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Cyril Scarlet
(☄◣д◢)☄ Boom~☆
Leorda
[General]
Source?
01:33:910 - Add some kiai here to 02:04:378

[Normal]
01:32:738 (6) - Allign with 5
03:03:910 (3) - New combo
03:05:081 (1) - No new combo

[Hard]
03:39:183 (5,6) - Move this object like my attachment (picture1)

Leorda
Greetings Madam Xen!

[General]
Source?
01:33:910 - Add some kiai here to 02:04:378

[Normal]
01:32:738 (6) - Allign with 5
03:03:910 (3) - New combo
03:05:081 (1) - No new combo

[Hard]
03:39:183 (5,6) - Move this object like my attachment (picture1)

Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel
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Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel
double post orz
al2e10
By AL2e10's & AImod:

[Hard]
01:17:269 (3,4) Too close.

[Normal]
Fine !!

[All]
The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize.
Star !!
orioncomet
At all just 'Suggestions' for you, I hope It will help your maps to be better.

orion's mod go ~

Map is fine for me when I was playing, But I have something tough..

** Baby.. Let's see your first post,, I mean on the post of Beatmaps submit. **
I know,, I was remake the BG for you,, But... some thing worng,, orz
BG Remake by orioncomet (orion hime same XD)
grrr.... 'sa'me or 'same' or anything though that you mean,, bady.. fix it!

over all - Your Mp3 too long.. Can you shorten it?

[Normal]
Oh,, Your Normal have 4.22star... Can you low it? I mean... make it too easy more this
.. Just want you to low star, only.. I know It's too Normal is normal, I guess
03:48:091 (1) - I think,, Silent hitsounds isn't good

[Hard] nazi,, I think xD
01:17:050 (4) - Too close,, If you see the combo color when you are playing.
01:21:048 (4) - Move left 1 grid?
01:34:084 (x) - add note? It sound better for me
01:36:001 (6) - new combo?
01:51:072 (x) - add note? It sound better for me
03:17:097 (1) - new combo?
03:25:000 (x) - add note?
03:26:017 (7) - new combo?
03:48:091 (9) - I think,, Silent hitsounds isn't good

I had too give my star to you already~ :3
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel
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Estelle18
star for money xD
pete2528
เพลืนดี วางโน้ทได้สวย

ดาวจ้ะ :D

ถ้า hard เลือดลดไวกว่านี้นะจะลุ้นขึ้นเยอะเลย
orioncomet
again for dude request

[Normal]
00:24:076 (4) - clap at last slider?
00:32:738 - ลองใส่เสียง finish ดู
00:56:087 (8) - พลอยว่าสไลด์มันยาวกว่าเสียงไป เอาให้สั้นลงมาจบที่ 00:57:347 แล้วใส่โน็ตที่ 00:57:581 + เสียงปรบมือ
02:02:073 (1) - ลองใส่เสียง finish ดู
03:34:847 - Stop Kiai here, If after that spinner don't have a note

พลอยรู้สึกว่าเสียงปรบมือ มันจะขาดๆ หายๆ ยังไม่รู้อ่ะ ลองเช็คดูทีนะ
มัน.. แปลกๆ =A= ไม่ปะติ ปะต่อ ยังไงไม่รู้ แลมันห่างๆ ว่างๆไปหน่อย
แบบ.. บางช่วงเสียงหายไปเลย ไรงี้
Tanmak
D Xen~~ >.<

[Normal]

00:56:644 (7) - new combo
00:58:050 (1) - remove new combo
02:26:175 (5) - Oh..looks little ugly..@.@

[Hard]

01:58:753 (x) - Add note with clap.
03:28:753 (x) ^

or

01:58:285 (4,6,8) - Clap
03:28:285 (4,6,8) - ^
(I think this bottom list is better than top list..)

Starred~~ >w<
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel
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Breeze
Hi Xen XD
nice song~

[General]
  1. Delete osb. file, it seems not uesd
[Normal]
  1. 02:18:910 - KIAI time finish here, others looks fine
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:972 (5) - add whistle
  2. 02:18:910 - KIAI time finish here
  3. 02:34:378(1),02:35:316 (4),02:36:253 (1),02:37:191 (4),02:38:128 (2),02:40:003(1),02:40:941 (3) - claps instead of whistle is better, if you want difference, finish is better IMO
  4. 02:53:128 (2) - as to other short slider, this one doesn't symmetrical
  5. 03:19:144 (9) - new combo here, and remove the new combo of 03:19:378 (1)
Great map
star!
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel

Breeze wrote:

Hi Xen XD
nice song~

[General]
  1. Delete osb. file, it seems not uesd done.


[Normal]
  1. 02:18:910 - KIAI time finish here, others looks fine done.


[Hard]
  1. 00:17:972 (5) - add whistle done.
  2. 02:18:910 - KIAI time finish here done.
  3. 02:34:378(1),02:35:316 (4),02:36:253 (1),02:37:191 (4),02:38:128 (2),02:40:003(1),02:40:941 (3) - claps instead of whistle is better, if you want difference, finish is better IMO
  4. 02:53:128 (2) - as to other short slider, this one doesn't symmetrical
  5. 03:19:144 (9) - new combo here, and remove the new combo of 03:19:378 (1) done.
Great map
star!
Thank you Breeze :3
EEeee
Normal
01:08:831 (3) - this seems oddly spaced, fix the spacing, and then make sure the whole pattern is okay.
03:34:495 - unused timing section? delete it

Hard
03:34:495 - unused timing section? delete it
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel

EEeee wrote:

Normal
01:08:831 (3) - this seems oddly spaced, fix the spacing, and then make sure the whole pattern is okay.
03:34:495 - unused timing section? delete it

Hard
03:34:495 - unused timing section? delete it
all fixed.

Thank EEeee >w<\
Derekku
[Normal]
01:33:910 - Start kiai here (on the white tick) instead of the blue tick.
01:48:910 - ^ and end the first section on the blue tick before it or something instead of leaving a gap for (1).
*End kiai at the end of the spinner before the break, unless you WANT the notes to flash at the next section where you currently have it ending.
02:31:683 (2) - I think this should be on the red tick =x
02:33:089 (4) - ^
02:33:558 (5) - ^
02:34:730 (7) - ^ Did you change the offset and rensap? If so, always go back and check that ALL notes are back on their correct beats. The correct distance spacing when I moved the notes signals that that is what probably happened. :<
*Same kiai fixes as above
03:32:738 (1) - A kiai fountain on the end of this would be lovely, imo. Just end the last section a blue tick before the end of this.

[Hard]
*Kiai fixes
02:33:089 (3,4,5) - Nudge all of these forward to fix the snapping problem.
02:34:730 (2,3) - and these
02:48:206 (4) - The previous kick sliders in the map only have one repeat, and this one tripped me up so it's sort of a "trap". I'd remove one of the repeats on it.

I don't agree with some of the comboing, since usually new combos start on new phrases, but yours don't always. Still, it's fine.

PM me or message me in-game when you've made changes and I'll protobubble. :)
termerys
nice map
but overall difficulty is little too much.
Get my star
illuminist
For Xen's Translation request

Derekku Chan wrote:

[Normal]
01:33:910 - เริ่มต้น kiai ตรงนี้ บนขีดขาว แทนที่บนขีดน้ำเงิน
01:48:910 - ^ และให้ช่วงแรกจบบนขีดฟ้าก่อน หรืออะไรก็ได้แทนที่จะทิ้งช่องว่างไว้สำหรับ (1)
*ให้จบ kiai ตรงที่ spinner เสร็จ ก่อนที่จะ break เว้นเสียว่าคุณอยากให้โน้ทกระพริบอยู่บนช่วงต่อไปที่คุณตั้งให้จบตรงนั้นhave it ending.
02:31:683 (2) - ฉันคิดว่านี่น่าจะอยู่บนขีดแดง =x
02:33:089 (4) - ^
02:33:558 (5) - ^
02:34:730 (7) - ^ เพิ่งเปลี่ยน offset แล้ว resnap? ถ้างั้นกลับไปดูโน้ททั้งหมดให้อยู่ในจังหวะที่ถูกต้อง ระยะห่างที่ถูกต้องตอนที่ฉันย้ายโน้ทนั้นพร้อมกับ distant snaping ก็คือสิ่งที่น่าจะเกิดขึ้น :<
*ปรับเปลี่ยน kiai time เหมือนข้างบน
03:32:738 (1) - kiai fountain ตอนจุดจบนี้ก็ดูดีอยู่ ลองให้จบช่วงสุดท้ายบนขีดฟ้าก่อนที่จะจบตรงนี้ดู

[Hard]
*Kiai fixes
02:33:089 (3,4,5) - ย้ายทั้งหมดนี้ไปข้างหน้าหน่อยเพื่อที่จะปรับปรุงปัญหาการ snapping
02:34:730 (2,3) - และนี่ด้วย
02:48:206 (4) - slider ก่อนหน้านี้ซ้ำแค่ครั้งเดียว และตัวนี้ก็หลอกให้ฉันคิดว่ามันคือกับดัก ฉันน่าจะลดการซ้ำลงทีนึงThe previous

ฉันไม่เห็นด้วยเกี่ยวกับการตั้งคอมโบ ในเมื่อปกติคอมโบใหม่จะเริ่มต้นที่ช่วงใหม่ แต่ของคุณนั้นไม่เป็ฯอย่างสม่ำเสมอ แต่ก็ยังใช้ได้อยู่

PM หรือคุยกับฉันในเกมตอนที่คุณเปลี่ยนแปลงเพลงแล้ว และฉันจะ protobubble ให้ :)
แปลยาก"สาด"

Song itself is above of fine. I stared it ;)
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel
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Derekku
Thanks for the translation, but Xen still missed a few things after updating. ;~;

*Kiai looks better now <3
*Suggestion: Disable letterboxing during breaks on both difficulties. The black boxes cutting off the singer's head/feet looks odd.

[Normal]
02:31:683 (2) - Move forward to the red tick

[Hard]
02:02:738 (1) - End kiai at the end of this spinner like in [Normal].
02:34:730 (2) - Move forward to the white tick.
02:34:964 (3) - Move forward to the red tick.
02:48:206 (4) - Remove one slider repeat from this.

OH also: Remove all tags on both difficulties. They're not needed because they would already be searched from the artist and title fields. Thanks!
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel

Derekku Chan wrote:

Thanks for the translation, but Xen still missed a few things after updating. ;~;

*Kiai looks better now <3
*Suggestion: Disable letterboxing during breaks on both difficulties. The black boxes cutting off the singer's head/feet looks odd.

[Normal]
02:31:683 (2) - Move forward to the red tick

[Hard]
02:02:738 (1) - End kiai at the end of this spinner like in [Normal].
02:34:730 (2) - Move forward to the white tick.
02:34:964 (3) - Move forward to the red tick.
02:48:206 (4) - Remove one slider repeat from this.

OH also: Remove all tags on both difficulties. They're not needed because they would already be searched from the artist and title fields. Thanks!
All fixed
Derekku
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DJPop
~Normal~
00:20:316 (2) - move up and right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:566 (5) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:04:847 - end Kiai here
03:34:847 - ^

~Hard~
01:45:394 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:331 (5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:566 (6) - move up 1 grid (Lv2)
02:02:386 (10,11) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:04:847 - end Kiai here
02:20:081 (1) - remove new combo
03:25:238 (2,3,4,5,6) - move up and left 1 grid (Lv3)
03:26:410 (8) - new combo
03:27:581 (1) - remove new combo
03:28:285 (4) - new combo
03:29:456 (1) - remove new combo
03:30:160 (2) - new combo
03:34:847 - end Kiai here


+Star
Derekku
[General]
You ended kiai at the beginning of the first spinner instead of at the end for both difficulties, but it's fine, I guess. :?
Letterboxing is still on, but it was just a suggestion. :o

[Normal]
02:26:175 (5) - I don't like how this is hidden under (6,7). Can you move it and the following slider around like....

this? I moved (5) over and then rotated (6,7) so that it would still connect to the next blue slider.


Other than that, I think everything is fine. I'll pubble after you make DJPop's changes.

No kudos needed for this post.
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:20:316 (2) - move up and right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:566 (5) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:04:847 - end Kiai here
03:34:847 - ^

~Hard~
01:45:394 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:331 (5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:46:566 (6) - move up 1 grid (Lv2)
02:02:386 (10,11) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
02:04:847 - end Kiai here
02:20:081 (1) - remove new combo
03:25:238 (2,3,4,5,6) - move up and left 1 grid (Lv3)
03:26:410 (8) - new combo
03:27:581 (1) - remove new combo
03:28:285 (4) - new combo
03:29:456 (1) - remove new combo
03:30:160 (2) - new combo
03:34:847 - end Kiai here


+Star
All Fixed

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
You ended kiai at the beginning of the first spinner instead of at the end for both difficulties, but it's fine, I guess. :?
Letterboxing is still on, but it was just a suggestion. :o

[Normal]
02:26:175 (5) - I don't like how this is hidden under (6,7). Can you move it and the following slider around like....

this? I moved (5) over and then rotated (6,7) so that it would still connect to the next blue slider.


Other than that, I think everything is fine. I'll pubble after you make DJPop's changes.

No kudos needed for this post.
All Fixed

Thank you DJPop & Derekku Chan ~*
Nightscream_old
get a try *o* and star throwing~
Derekku
fountains ;~; letterboxing ;~;

Pubbled!
Lizbeth
Hard
00:23:714 (5) - i think this triple doesnt fits here, remove this note, and add one at 00:23:949 -
00:29:339 (9,1) - same here, move it 1/4 later
01:11:527 (7,8) - same
01:33:910 - you got an inherited section here for the kiai time on top of the note, thats cool.. but the thing is you also change it to Normal hitsounds, so you have to add another 1/4 earlier so when you hit earlier you get the sound you want.
Keep the green line for the kiai, and add a new one for hitsounds changes.
01:53:714 (6,7) - move it 1/4 later
02:37:308 (5,6) - same
03:30:511 - add note

Normal
All good

im popping this Pubble for the inherited section problem.
When you fix it, send me a PM and i ll re-pubble

nice map n.n
vincerio
Here you star~

really nice song =w= b
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel

Lizbeth wrote:

Hard
00:23:714 (5) - i think this triple doesnt fits here, remove this note, and add one at 00:23:949 -
00:29:339 (9,1) - same here, move it 1/4 later
01:11:527 (7,8) - same
01:33:910 - you got an inherited section here for the kiai time on top of the note, thats cool.. but the thing is you also change it to Normal hitsounds, so you have to add another 1/4 earlier so when you hit earlier you get the sound you want.
Keep the green line for the kiai, and add a new one for hitsounds changes.
01:53:714 (6,7) - move it 1/4 later
02:37:308 (5,6) - same
03:30:511 - add note

Normal
All good

im popping this Pubble for the inherited section problem.
When you fix it, send me a PM and i ll re-pubble

nice map n.n
All Fixed
laikung0
+star *v*]V
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Add the source of this song.
2. Add some tags.

[Normal]
00:25:706 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:26:410 (2) - Add finish.
00:32:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]
01:17:503 (5) - Add clap at the beginning. Remove clap at the end.
01:26:175 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:41:410 (2) - ^
01:47:035 (7) - Add finish at the whole of the slider.
01:54:769 (5) - Add clap at the beginning.
01:56:410 (4) - Add finish.
02:02:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]
02:48:910 (4) - Add finish.
02:55:706 (1) - Add finish at the end.
03:11:410 (2) - Add finish.
03:26:410 (4) - ^
03:32:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]

[hard]
00:32:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]
01:56:410 (8) - Add finish.
02:02:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]
02:40:238 (2) - Add whistle at the end.
02:48:675 (5) - Add finish at the end.
03:26:410 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
03:32:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]
Star.

EDIT: sorry for the *give kudos* notice. it's absolutely not for you. i just forgot to remove the notice from the previous mod. once again, sorry.
Lokamp
Normal
01:03:910 (2) - try to move it 4 squares down and 4 squares right

Hard
[General] The mode was very fine, but make the Hp Drain Rate more Insane for this mode!

Except for some marginal spacing errors, this map follows the rhythm very well with spacing and hitsounds.
Just, add the Source of this song in Song setup! (like the album which has this song)
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[notice][General]
1. Add the source of this song.
2. Add some tags.

[Normal]
00:25:706 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.no
00:26:410 (2) - Add finish.
00:32:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]no
01:17:503 (5) - Add clap at the beginning. Remove clap at the end.
01:26:175 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:41:410 (2) - ^
01:47:035 (7) - Add finish at the whole of the slider.
01:54:769 (5) - Add clap at the beginning.
01:56:410 (4) - Add finish.
02:02:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]no
02:48:910 (4) - Add finish.
02:55:706 (1) - Add finish at the end.
03:11:410 (2) - Add finish.
03:26:410 (4) - ^
03:32:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]no

[hard]
00:32:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?] no
01:56:410 (8) - Add finish.
02:02:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]no
02:40:238 (2) - Add whistle at the end.no
02:48:675 (5) - Add finish at the end.
03:26:410 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
03:32:738 (1) - Reduce one or two 1/4 ticks. [?]no
Star.

EDIT: sorry for the *give kudos* notice. it's absolutely not for you. i just forgot to remove the notice from the previous mod. once again, sorry.

Lokamp wrote:

Normal
01:03:910 (2) - try to move it 4 squares down and 4 squares right no

Hard
[General] The mode was very fine, but make the Hp Drain Rate more Insane for this mode! no

Except for some marginal spacing errors, this map follows the rhythm very well with spacing and hitsounds.
Just, add the Source of this song in Song setup! (like the album which has this song)
Derekku
I'll repubble this tomorrow after double checking the tags/source. :?
Derekku
Source is incorrect. Change it to just Celebration

first sight isn't needed in tags since it's already the title. =X

The song features another artist, Ryohei, who should be included either in the artist field or tags. Personally, I'd change the artist to Kagami Seira feat. Ryohei, but if you decide to do that, you MUST follow the instructions HERE so that you do not accidentally submit a duplicate, broken map. But if you want to do the easy thing, just add Ryohei to tags.

Going ahead and repubbling this, though, for ya~ :P
champpanda
โยน ๆ :D
fartownik
Your audio file dissapears~
It's only 8,9kb.
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel

fartownik wrote:

Your audio file dissapears~
It's only 8,9kb.
Ok. Re uploaded

Thank you fartownik.
Northnroro
Nice map~
I like it!
Here's your star.
[DBF]
i can't find seriosly problems, good job dude, star~
poypk

pete2528 wrote:

เพลืนดี วางโน้ทได้สวย

ดาวจ้ะ :D

ถ้า hard เลือดลดไวกว่านี้นะจะลุ้นขึ้นเยอะเลย
อ่า.......อย่าเลยเดี๋ยวโป้ยตายเร๊ว oTL
8-) star~
Topic Starter
Iluhiwizel
Thank Northnroro [DBF] poypk O/
Derekku
Saving from graveyard. *-* Also,

peppy wrote:

Source is not for album.
So, please remove "Celebration" from Source and move it to tags on all diffs, please.

PS: No kudos for this post :P
SUBSTAC9
please re-mapping ;)
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