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James2250

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James2250 2009-07-18T01:12:08+00:00

easy:
01:02:01 -01:07:74- this area feels kinda clustered why not separate them a bit..
01:12:38 (1) - don't have this under the slider before it

hard:
00:55:17 (2) - remove from under slider
00:58:92 (2) - remove from under notes

MX:
00:13:92 (19) - too long combo maybe?
slightly over mapped with the 2 stack things I think
01:16:02 (1) - move forward 1/4?

have a star

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-07-18T04:26:40+00:00

Offset: 10623 (I am not very good at offset though)

Easy:
00:30:69 (2) - isn't this supposed to snap to the drums a quarter note forward, if it is, there are only 2 drum beats so just make a quarter note long slider with no repeat
00:31:52 (4) - move back an eighth note
00:59:15 (2) - since there is not enough room for 4 in the pattern, make 2's spacing look like 4's
01:06:87 (6,7) - spaced too close

song felt a little repetitive with the same combo 4 times in a row or even 8 for some patterns.

Hard:
00:30:69 (2) and 00:31:52 (4) - same as easy
00:58:92 (2) - stack this under the purple 3
01:02:45 (4,1,2,3) - y is spacing smaller here
01:05:54 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - " " (or you might want to change all the larger spacings to this smaller one)

Mx:
00:31:62 (4) - move an eighth note forward
00:12:16 (9,10) - make parallel to 6,7 to form a straight line?
00:25:61 (4) - this and the repeats of this felt random because this is supposed to follow the guitar I guess, but the guitar goes on even after this stops. What is this supposed to snap to then? It just has a random start and end point in my opinion.

Nice map. Star.

tieff

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tieff 2009-07-25T22:44:05+00:00

Good map.
Decrease sample volume, please.

[Easy]
00:54:29 (3) - Remove clap from end.
01:08:41 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:13:48 (4) - Add note with clap.
00:17:23 (4) - Clap?
00:25:39 (2,3) - Spacing?
00:27:16 (2,3) - ^
00:28:92 (2,3) - ^
00:45:91 (1) - Remove clap.
00:51:20 (1) - Whistle.
00:54:29 (2) - Remove clap from end.
00:57:16 (3) - Nazi. Right a bit.
00:59:80 (3) - New combo?
01:04:66 (2) - Clap.
01:08:41 (2) - Remove clap from end.

[MX]
00:50:54 (2) - Clap.
00:54:29 (2) - Clap on start.
01:15:91 (7) - Add note.

Cool hitsounds, star!

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-08-01T01:29:44+00:00

tieff wrote:
Good map.
Decrease sample volume, please.

[Easy]
00:54:29 (3) - Remove clap from end.
01:08:41 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:13:48 (4) - Add note with clap.
- IMO, I think no clap is sounds better.
00:17:23 (4) - Clap?
- Same.
00:25:39 (2,3) - Spacing?
00:27:16 (2,3) - ^
00:28:92 (2,3) - ^
00:45:91 (1) - Remove clap.
00:51:20 (1) - Whistle.
00:54:29 (2) - Remove clap from end.
00:57:16 (3) - Nazi. Right a bit.
00:59:80 (3) - New combo?
01:04:66 (2) - Clap.
- IMO, I think no clap is sounds better.
01:08:41 (2) - Remove clap from end.

[MX]
00:50:54 (2) - Clap.
- IMO, I think no clap is sounds better.
00:54:29 (2) - Clap on start.
01:15:91 (7) - Add note.

Cool hitsounds, star!

Fixed :)

fartownik

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fartownik 2009-08-01T01:58:28+00:00

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:31:468 (4) - 1/4 back.
01:14:152 (3) - End on 01:16:137.
01:16:358 - Add a spinner end on 01:17:902.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:14:146 (1) - It's outside a screen a bit. Move it.
00:15:028 (3) - ^
00:15:911 (1) - ^
00:17:234 (4) - New combo.
00:17:675 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:56:278 (3) - Move to the left a bit.
00:56:719 (1) - Move to the right a bit.
00:57:602 (1) - ^
00:58:043 (3) - Move to the left a bit.
01:16:241 - Add a spinner. The same like in Easy.

[MX]

SPOILER

00:15:359 - Add a note.
00:30:800 - 00:31:793 - This part feels weird.
01:05:764 (3) - Delete.
01:05:984 (4,5) - Move 1/4 back.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-08-06T11:03:17+00:00

fartownik wrote:
[Easy]
SPOILER
00:31:468 (4) - 1/4 back.
01:14:152 (3) - End on 01:16:137.
01:16:358 - Add a spinner end on 01:17:902.

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:14:146 (1) - It's outside a screen a bit. Move it.
00:15:028 (3) - ^
00:15:911 (1) - ^
00:17:234 (4) - New combo.
00:17:675 (1) - Delete new combo.
00:56:278 (3) - Move to the left a bit.
00:56:719 (1) - Move to the right a bit.
00:57:602 (1) - ^
00:58:043 (3) - Move to the left a bit.
01:16:241 - Add a spinner. The same like in Easy.
[MX]
SPOILER
00:15:359 - Add a note.
00:30:800 - 00:31:793 - This part feels weird.
01:05:764 (3) - Delete.
01:05:984 (4,5) - Move 1/4 back.

Fixed

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-08-07T02:22:45+00:00

Go go MoonFra!

[MX]
00:17:45 ( ) - Add a circle on here.
01:02:45 (5,6) - Make 1/4 beat slower (Later)

I'm charging my kudosu points so I can't give it now
First, here's a regular user-star.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-08-07T16:40:27+00:00

minyeob wrote:
Go go MoonFra!

[MX]
00:17:45 ( ) - Add a circle on here.
01:02:45 (5,6) - Make 1/4 beat slower (Later)

I'm charging my kudosu points so I can't give it now
First, here's a regular user-star. ;)

Fixed. Thank U :D

vincerio

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vincerio 2009-08-22T06:08:29+00:00

>w< b really love this song~

star~

WyndII

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WyndII 2009-08-26T17:35:05+00:00

[Easy]
totally fine..

[hard]
Song Setup:
HP drain rate : Adjust > or = 6
Overall diff: The song is fast... Increase a bit.

[MX]
Song Setup:
HP drain rate : Adjust > 6
Overall diff: The song is fast... Increase a bit.
00:53:85 (5) - new combo
00:54:07 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:29 (2) - new combo
00:55:065 - 01:07:749 = needz moar hitzound
01:08:962 - 01:15:800 = ^
note that the combos change when you change the first.
Also, that's all. lol. xD

SteRRuM

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SteRRuM 2009-08-26T19:38:36+00:00

Hi!
[Easy]

01:16:13 (1) - Maybe make silent hitsound?.

[Hard]

00:27:16 (2,3) - 1 grid down,
01:16:13 (1) - Maybe make silent hitsound?.

[MX]

01:16:13 (1) - Maybe make silent hitsound?,
Also, need nazi.

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2009-08-26T22:27:42+00:00

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MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-08-27T09:23:00+00:00

Fixed

Sleep Powder

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Sleep Powder 2009-08-27T18:00:23+00:00

[MX]
01:07:96 (x) - Add a Note here?
01:08:18 (1) - Or move this away from the previous combo (1)
01:11:38 (7) - Remove?
01:11:49 (7,8,9) - Move 7 to the previous white tick.
01:11:94 (10,11) - Move to previous white tick.

The other difficulties were perfect to me.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-08-28T07:06:29+00:00

Fixed :)

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-09-04T09:11:13+00:00

Ruby ~ <3

Jeffro

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Jeffro 2009-09-05T15:22:12+00:00

Don't place offsets exactly on the first note pl0x, i recommend setting offset back 1 white tick.

[Easy]
00:42:60 (1,1,1,1) - remove claps

[Hard]
00:24:73 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern at all. Doesn't fit the song.

[MX]
00:09:29 (1) - wut, spinner before offset? Don't do that!
00:24:73 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, I don't like this section.

Other then that. Good job! Starred.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-09-05T16:01:39+00:00

Fixed :) thx u :D

ignorethis

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ignorethis 2009-09-30T13:06:21+00:00

<Easy>
01:04:66 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - A bit confusing as they overlap.

<Hard>
Circle size +1.
00:24:73 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ...I can't see the relation between these notes and the music?
Needs a bit improving.

<MX>
Overall set to 8 plz.
00:24:73 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Remap plz.\

Other than that this map's pretty decent. Keep up the good work.

v2b

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v2b 2009-09-30T13:29:47+00:00

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MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-09-30T13:38:09+00:00

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Tanmak

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Tanmak 2009-09-30T16:08:37+00:00

[Easy]

00:58:20 - This Slide note whose length is strange.

I will give you star~

Good luck~~

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-10-01T03:31:04+00:00

Fixed :) thank you :D

panic_on

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panic_on 2009-10-01T14:04:07+00:00

star~~~~

EEeee

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EEeee 2009-10-02T12:38:29+00:00

Easy
Too easy, in a good way, nothing wrong here

Hard
01:07:96 (5) - add new combo here, remove from the next note, this is to keep the pattern neat, since u have most of em ending with 4

Mix
00:17:895 - fix break
00:29:36 (4) - new combo, helps the jumpish pattern

That's all ^^, why did u give me maps without a lot of problems, nice mapping

*star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-10-02T13:33:29+00:00

EEeee wrote:
Easy
Too easy, in a good way, nothing wrong here

Hard
01:07:96 (5) - add new combo here, remove from the next note, this is to keep the pattern neat, since u have most of em ending with 4

Mix
00:17:895 - fix break
00:29:36 (4) - new combo, helps the jumpish pattern - Oh, it was spacing wrong O_o (not a jump) thank you >w<

That's all ^^, why did u give me maps without a lot of problems, nice mapping

*star

Thank you >A</

Lokamp

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Lokamp 2009-10-08T17:01:25+00:00

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Azure_Kite

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Azure_Kite 2009-10-08T21:24:46+00:00

Here's my mod ^^

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
00:24:73 (1,2) - I would probably move these two forward to the red ticks, because where they are may make it difficult for beginners when starting from a break. Also, possibly consider changing (2) into a slider which ends at 00:26:49 (1)'s position.
00:54:29 (3) - End this on the white tick

[Hard]
00:17:01 - New note?
00:17:23 (1) - Move forward 1/4 tick?
00:52:08 - Maybe a note here?
00:52:96 - ^
00:53:85 - ^
00:56:05 (2) - Move 1/4 beat forward
00:56:27 (3) - Move to 00:56:49.
00:56:71 (1) - Move forward 1/4 Beat
00:56:94 (2,3) - Move forward half a beat
00:57:82 (4) - Move back 1/4 beat

[MX]
No Problems Found

Overall, a good map, although some of it isn't mapped to my taste, you've done a lot of good work on it, and it plays well.

Starred

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-10-09T07:52:26+00:00

Azure_Kyte wrote:
[Hard]
00:17:01 - New note?
00:17:23 (1) - Move forward 1/4 tick?
00:52:08 - Maybe a note here?
00:52:96 - ^
00:53:85 - ^
00:56:05 (2) - Move 1/4 beat forward
00:56:27 (3) - Move to 00:56:49.
00:56:71 (1) - Move forward 1/4 Beat
00:56:94 (2,3) - Move forward half a beat
00:57:82 (4) - Move back 1/4 beat

Umm... i think our mapping style is different.
i foucus on drum sound and melody.
but i think your style is focus on vocal.

sorry, i don't want to change my style ;w;
but others are fixed :)

Remco32

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Remco32 2009-10-10T17:07:19+00:00

Easy
01:02:45 (3) - Move one lvl3 grid to the left.

Hard
01:16:13 (1) - Raise the hitsound volume, so you can hear the Finish hitsound (a little)

Nice map, have a star.

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2009-10-21T17:50:20+00:00

MX -

00:30:80 (1) - feels kinda weird to me ;-;

easy -

00:48:11 (1,2,1,2) - parts like this are so boring! maybe try-
00:48:55 - add note
00:49:44 - make slider ending at 00:50:32
00:49:88 (1) - erase

01:07:30 (5) - spacing
01:07:96 (x) - note
01:08:19 (1) - delete

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2009-10-21T18:10:27+00:00

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MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-10-22T01:47:13+00:00

fixed :) thank you >w<

Mashley

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Mashley 2009-10-24T08:56:45+00:00

Perfect. Have an imaginary bubble.

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-10-24T16:59:24+00:00

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All is fine.

[Easy]

I suggest to use 1 tick rate for this diff.

00:48:11 (1) - A note too early after the spinner is too hard for an easy difficulty.

[Hard]

00:30:02 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:30:80 (2) - New combo.
01:12:38 (1,2,3,4) - This change of snap divisor can confuse. Try to change it.

[MX]

01:15:90 (1) - Remove new combo.

Armin

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Armin 2009-10-25T07:54:55+00:00

Good map! Starred.

[Easy]

Perfect <_<

[Hard]

00:24:734 Clap
00:26:499 ^
00:28:264 ^
00:30:028 Clap+ finish
00:54:293 Whistle at the start
01:08:411 ^

[MX]

00:13:592 Remove this hitcircle, I think it doesn't follow the rythm.
00:15:357 1/4 back
00:26:276 (5,6,7) Make a straight line. (move the (1) one square above)
00:28:261 As above ( move the (1) one square down)
00:34:438 Clap
00:35:320 ^
00:41:497 ^
00:42:379 ^

Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2009-10-25T17:20:32+00:00

suggestions

Hard
00:31:46 (3) - move 1/4 earlier
00:48:77 (3) - same
00:48:99 - add note here, and remove next slider
01:09:18 (1,2,3,4) - move 1/4 earlier

MX
00:40:06 (1) - extend to the next tick, and remove the circle
00:55:06 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 earlier

Easy
00:30:91 (1,2,3) - this is hard to catch for a beginner... try placin note at: 00:30:91 - 00:31:35 - 00:31:79
01:07:74 (7,1) - turn this two into a spinner... just ssuggestion XD

nice map
star!

La Valse

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La Valse 2009-10-26T12:36:50+00:00

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