Breeze wrote:

[Timing]

1. I feel offset 740 would be better

[General]

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime, check it out and fix please
2. I don't think countdown fit this song, so remove countdown of [Easy] and [Hard] diff
3. Taiko diff has a different timing

[Easy]

1. This diff lack of hitsounds, try add some drum sound during 00:31:696 - 00:49:761, you can use this custom sound as soft-clap2 during 00:11:051 - 00:31:696, and use your custom soft clap1 for climax part

[Hard]

1. The same hitsound suggestion as Easy
2. 00:31:374 (1) - Why NC this note?
3. 00:35:568 (2) - Didn't stack well under 1, and the slider shape can be improved

[Insane]

1. 00:14:922 (5) - Slow down slider, NC for a warning
2. 00:30:083 (5) - ^
3. 00:39:922 (2) - This jump is unreasonable
4. 00:49:761 (1) - No finish here, it's climax start
5. 01:04:116 (5) - Unexpected jump

[Taiko]

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary

[Insane]
Tickrate 2 fits best imo
From 00:11:062 - to 00:49:772 - lacks hitsounds. You only have a few when the snap sounds occurs. Sure it would be more acceptable if it were an Easy/Normal because it doesn't have as much objects like Hard/Insane.
The way you mapped it is just like if it was the doubled bpm. AR 7 feels really slow for this imo, I suggest you try 8
- fix,and ar8 is better
00:00:504 (1) - this one is unsnapped (use 1/8 to re-snap it properly) - fix
00:02:998 (1,2,3) - the spacing here looks unequal. I know there are more, but this was more notable imo. You should use a higher Grid level (Grid level 4) to prevent such things - fix
00:23:643 - Add a note here? it would flow better imo - i add nc here,and spacing up 00:23:320 - a little.
00:56:546 (1,2,3) - Mind spacing up these notes a bit so it feels more natural? The spacing is pretty close to chat you use as jumps
- fix

That's all I guess~
Good luck!

Saten wrote:

[Taiko]
00:06:867 (3) - Unsnapped by 2ms
00:10:738 (3) - ^
00:12:996 (1) - ^

cococanro wrote:

thank you!

http://puu.sh/1xH7n

Jerry wrote:

Fixed : http://puu.sh/1xIDI

Thanks :3

Saten wrote:

Hello~

[Hard]
The Slider Velocity is really low imo. You should've used 1,70 or something. Easy is using 1,40 which makes it even more strange.
Regular claps doesn't fit at all. I suggest you use custom ones, just like Insane. Make all sections custom
00:00:740 - Use 30% vol from here. 60% is too much imo, and it's a calm song
00:31:385 (4,5) - the overlap looks bad D:
00:49:772 - 50% here. Fits better imo
00:51:308 - What's with all the random bookmarks here? lol
00:53:643 (1,2,3) - This might be alright, but I still think it's so tight
01:02:030 (8,9,1) - I don't really like that you have this much of a gap between (9) and (1)
01:09:127 (7,8,9) - same as 00:53:643 (1,2,3) -
01:15:579 (3,4,5,6) - same here kinda
01:17:675 (8,1) - This doesn't look too well when stacking. the velocity is really low as well
01:16:062 (4) - clap on end. You skipped it
01:17:353 (7) - clap on end
01:18:804 (4) - clap on start
01:20:095 (6) - clap
01:20:740 (1) - clap on end
01:22:030 (2) - ^
01:23:321 (1) - Do the same as Insane did. 5% it

[Easy]
Please use 30% volume till you get to the kiai. 70% is really loud for this song
00:11:062 - You don't really need this green line. You can make the Red line Custom instead
00:46:546 (2) - clap on the end doesn't really fit here
01:04:288 (2) - clap on start
00:49:772 - 50% here and use custom claps here (S:C1)
01:23:320 (1) - Like the other diffs, make it 5% instead


That's all I guess~
Good luck!

SilverJetter wrote:

hey ^^

Easy: 01:08:159 (1) - i dont like the spinner here...make it longer or replace it with an slider 01:08:481 - 01:09:127 and a circle at 01:09:772 imo

Hard: 01:16:062 (4,5,6) - i think you have to place them better...like in a line
and recheck the spacings here...it looks too difficult

Insane:
looking good

sorry for this little mod but i think this maps are good ^^

1. A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty if you decide to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty.
   　
2. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508
   　
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   　
   Please check ~

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary
   　
2. 00:20:417 (1) - d
3. 00:31:707 (1) - D
4. 00:46:385 - add a d
5. 00:49:771 - D
6. 01:05:094 (4) - re
7. 01:05:256 (1) - D

Cuvelia wrote:

[Taiko General]

1. A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty if you decide to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty.
   　
2. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508
   　
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   　
   Please check ~

Cuvelia wrote:

[ Jerry's Taiko]

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary
   　
2. 00:20:417 (1) - d
3. 00:31:707 (1) - D
4. 00:46:385 - add a d
5. 00:49:771 - D
6. 01:05:094 (4) - re
7. 01:05:256 (1) - D

　
good luck .

Jerry wrote:

Cuvelia wrote:

[Taiko General]

1. A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty if you decide to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty.
   　
2. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508
   　
3. http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   　
   Please check ~

Taiko Muzukashii diff done : http://puu.sh/1EBKB
　

Cuvelia wrote:

[ Jerry's Taiko]

1. Audio lead-in seems unnecessary
   　
2. 00:20:417 (1) - d
3. 00:31:707 (1) - D
4. 00:46:385 - add a d
5. 00:49:771 - D
6. 01:05:094 (4) - re
7. 01:05:256 (1) - D

　
good luck .

Fixed Taiko Oni diff : http://puu.sh/1EBKn

Thanks for the mod :3

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Sorry for make you wait with my mod >_<

[Easy]

00:16:223 (1) - Make this slider look symmetric at 00:17:514 (2) - this

[Hard]

00:23:804 (6) - NC

[Insane]

00:45:740 (4) - Replace this slider with a beat?


No kudosu,so short mod :c realy?

1. 00:20:740 - add a note and clap it
2. 00:26:546 - 同上
3. 00:59:449 (1) - nc拿掉
4. 01:12:998 (3) - finish拿掉,然後silder尾部clap
5. 01:14:288 (4) - finish拿掉
6. 01:14:933 - add a note and clap it
7. 01:17:514 (4) - finish換成clap
8. 01:22:030 (4) - finish拿掉

1. 00:12:352 (3) - silder尾whistle
2. 00:14:933 (2) - 來回的地方+whistle
3. 00:20:740 (5) - whistle
4. 00:23:321 (5) - whistle
5. 00:25:901 (4) - whistle
6. 00:28:482 (6) - whistle
7. 00:31:062 (3) - whistle
8. 00:31:708 (5) - silder尾whistle
9. 00:37:514 (2) - silder頭whistle
10. 00:42:675 (2) - whistle
11. 00:44:611 (5) - hidden note,換個位置
12. 00:45:256 (3) - whistle
13. 00:49:772 - 副歌開始到01:26:062 個人建議跟Insane一樣用custom1的clap,不然就是拍手的地方抓好
14. 01:01:385 (6,7,8,9) - 間距小一點
15. 01:13:965 (6) - 稍微的hidden note
16. 01:17:998 (1) - 移到x:376 y:176

Banana wrote:

Hi Banana here from my queue~

[general]
title 应该是要大写首字母的 kimi e ->Kimi e 已修改
source的问题... 而且因为这个是Lite的op 我觉得source也可以加上 于是可以这么写：Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai Lite
（Lite可以再找几个人问一下 不过不管怎么改都是每个难度都要改）
01:23:320 - 感觉这里就可以结束kiai了 （同样 改掉也是所有难度一起改）已修改
不准备用自定义combo color吗 喔對,經你一說我才想到沒有設自定義combo color,感謝提醒ww

[insane]
00:50:740 (1) - 这个间距很对的起难度名..不过为了前后的平均我还是建议把它放小一点 我能想到的一个可能位置是x:252 y:160 已修改
01:03:643 (4) - 旋转30°会看起来舒服点 已修改

[Hard]
00:13:482 (4) - nc 已修改
00:14:611 (1) - remove nc 已修改
00:30:417 (4) - ^ 已修改
00:31:707 (5) - nc 已修改
00:35:256 (1) - 既然前面都是跟着vocal的话我建议就一直跟着跟完这个难度好了 这样突然改掉会有点唐突 已修改
01:17:998 (1) - 1.5个长白线一个nc我还是第一次见到...额 感觉还是在下一个圈nc比较合适 已修改
01:20:740 (7) - 这边可以nc 已修改

[Normal]
00:49:772 (1) - 遮挡在简单难度是很容易被挑的 建议放到上面去 已修改

good luck~

1. This mapset don't have Normal. I think diff gap is a little big between Easy and Hard. This song is awesome, so I recommend add Normal diff so that to enjoy this map by many players.

1. 00:58:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about this? I feel (1)'s sound is a little strange.
   
   SPOILER

   For example
   

   328,304,58804,5,0,0:0:0
   328,304,58965,1,0,0:0:0
   416,264,59127,2,0,B|428:244|432:224,3,39.3750015020371
   440,188,59449,2,0,B|444:168|440:148,3,39.3750015020371,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   432,108,59772,2,0,B|428:91|416:71,3,39.3750015020371
   392,40,60094,1,0,0:0:0

   SPOILER

   328,332,58804,5,0,0:0:0
   328,332,58965,1,0,0:0:0
   400,296,59127,2,0,B|416:256,3,39.3750015020371
   436,184,59449,2,0,B|424:144,3,39.3750015020371,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   388,80,59772,2,0,B|360:52,3,39.3750015020371
   288,28,60094,1,0,0:0:0

2. 01:04:610 (1) - remove Newcombo
3. 01:04:933 (1) - ^
4. 01:05:256 (2) - add Newcombo
5. 01:13:643 (1) - remove Newcombo

1. 00:34:288 (5,6,1,2) - How about this? add Newcombo to (5), and change some rhythm.
2. 01:04:611 (5) - How about this?
3. 01:05:256 (6) - add Newcombo
4. 01:10:417 (1) - add clap to slider's reverse arrow.
5. 01:14:288 (1) - remove Newcombo
6. 01:15:579 (3) - add Newcombo

1. 00:16:223 (1) - remove to clap on the slider's end

terametis wrote:

from my queue

Black = suggestion.　 Blue = suggetion, but important thing for me. Red = Error Element.
These are all suggestions. so you will be able to reject them without reason.

[General]

1. This mapset don't have Normal. I think diff gap is a little big between Easy and Hard. This song is awesome, so I recommend add Normal diff so that to enjoy this map by many players.

[Insane]

1. 00:58:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about this? I feel (1)'s sound is a little strange.
   
   SPOILER

   For example
   

   328,304,58804,5,0,0:0:0
   328,304,58965,1,0,0:0:0
   416,264,59127,2,0,B|428:244|432:224,3,39.3750015020371
   440,188,59449,2,0,B|444:168|440:148,3,39.3750015020371,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   432,108,59772,2,0,B|428:91|416:71,3,39.3750015020371
   392,40,60094,1,0,0:0:0

   SPOILER

   328,332,58804,5,0,0:0:0
   328,332,58965,1,0,0:0:0
   400,296,59127,2,0,B|416:256,3,39.3750015020371
   436,184,59449,2,0,B|424:144,3,39.3750015020371,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   388,80,59772,2,0,B|360:52,3,39.3750015020371
   288,28,60094,1,0,0:0:0

2. 01:04:610 (1) - remove Newcombo
3. 01:04:933 (1) - ^
4. 01:05:256 (2) - add Newcombo
5. 01:13:643 (1) - remove Newcombo

I think Example1 is wonderful
all fix.

[Hard]

1. 00:34:288 (5,6,1,2) - How about this? add Newcombo to (5), and change some rhythm.
2. 01:04:611 (5) - How about this?
3. 01:05:256 (6) - add Newcombo
4. 01:10:417 (1) - add clap to slider's reverse arrow.
5. 01:14:288 (1) - remove Newcombo
6. 01:15:579 (3) - add Newcombo

Hard diff all fix.

[Easy]

1. 00:16:223 (1) - remove to clap on the slider's end

Fix

good luck<3

Thanks terametis~
The suggestion help a lot.

And I will try to make a normal diff soon.

1. 00:21:385 (1,2,3,4) - Now state is fair enough, but try this.
2. 00:35:901 (5) - add clap to the slider's end.
3. 00:36:869 (7) - remove clap
4. 00:38:804 (4) - add clap to the slider's head.
5. 00:43:643 (4) - add clap to the slider's end.
6. 00:44:610 (6) - remove clap
7. 00:46:223 (4) - add clap to the slider's end.
8. 00:46:869 (1,2,3,4) - Sound is the same. But put slider start to 00:47:191, feel more good for me.
9. 00:50:094 (1) - add clap to the slider's end.
10. 00:50:740 (2) - You put clap to the slider's end, but this song don't have a clap sound. If you want to emphasize here, I recommend change to whistle.
11. 00:51:385 (3) - add clap to the slider's end.
12. 00:52:030 (4) - same as suggestion to 00:50:740.
13. 00:52:998 (2) - add clap
14. 00:53:320 (3) - If you put whistle on 00:46:869's and 00:52:030's suggestion, need to whistle to the slider's end.
15. 00:54:610 (1) - ^.
16. You can try to make pattern about after's things. :3
    
    feel free to ask me for recheck :3

terametis wrote:

no kds please

[Normal]
how to hitsounding.

1/4 heavy beat(downbeat), 2/4(backbeat) , 3/4 (downbeat), 4/4 (backbeat)

For example common pattern in osu.
1/4 heavy beat(downbeat) finish or whistle or none
2/4(backbeat) clap or none
3/4 (downbeat) whistle or none
4/4 (backbeat) clap or none

ex1) finish,clap,whistle,clap,whistle,clap,whistle,clap,whistle,clap,,,,,,
ex2) finish,clap,whistle,clap,finish,clap,whistle,clap,finish,clap,whistle,,,,

Of course, don't conform it to these patterns that is no problem, if it is fit to song. However, I recommend that you make a pattern mapping them until you can get used to the mapping.

1. 00:21:385 (1,2,3,4) - Now state is fair enough, but try this.
2. 00:35:901 (5) - add clap to the slider's end.
3. 00:36:869 (7) - remove clap
4. 00:38:804 (4) - add clap to the slider's head.
5. 00:43:643 (4) - add clap to the slider's end.
6. 00:44:610 (6) - remove clap
7. 00:46:223 (4) - add clap to the slider's end.
8. 00:46:869 (1,2,3,4) - Sound is the same. But put slider start to 00:47:191, feel more good for me.
9. 00:50:094 (1) - add clap to the slider's end.
10. 00:50:740 (2) - You put clap to the slider's end, but this song don't have a clap sound. If you want to emphasize here, I recommend change to whistle.
11. 00:51:385 (3) - add clap to the slider's end.
12. 00:52:030 (4) - same as suggestion to 00:50:740.
13. 00:52:998 (2) - add clap
14. 00:53:320 (3) - If you put whistle on 00:46:869's and 00:52:030's suggestion, need to whistle to the slider's end.
15. 00:54:610 (1) - ^.
16. You can try to make pattern about after's things. :3
    
    feel free to ask me for recheck :3

terametis wrote:

good enough for me :3
go Ranked<3

EmPao wrote:

路過 o.o

我這邊有這首歌的的video 如果有需要的話可以加上去:3

http://puu.sh/1Snrg

Natsu wrote:

Sorry this map is so good i cant mod it have a star~

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue!

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 732ms BPM: 93,00
Resnapp after and move the timing points

Easy

General
It is very low mapped, there are not many curved or action sliders which catch the eye. Make more curves!

00:13:643 (3) - Make this slider a bit curved so it gives a better flow
00:53:643 (5) - Make a reserved 1/2 slider, to bring more action into the low pattern
01:12:998 (3) - Make this one curved as well
01:15:578 (1) - Spacing mistake, you should follow the right spacing in an Easy and Normal, so move this further from the preview circle to make the spacing consistant
01:19:449 (2) - Curved again

Normal

00:49:772 (5) - NC should be here because of Kiai, new sentence and overall for consistance, ofc remove next

Hard

00:13:482 (1) - Pretty big jump here, it shouldnt be too hard in a Hard diff, and also its still the first part of the song which is soft and not jumpy, move this closer and fix this spacing
00:23:321 (5) - Isnt well stacked on preview slider, fix this
00:41:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dont think this fits at all, there is no sound in the BG or vocal or anything, i actually would say you delete this part 00:40:578 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - and add a spinner instead
00:44:611 (5) - Dont let this circle overlapp with the slider, move it to the left side of the sliderstart, fits better
00:50:740 (4,5) - It just doesnt follow the rythm, and since you try to map to the vocal you should adjust this too
01:13:965 (6) - The circle is also under the slider, move it so you can clearly see it
01:15:579 (1) - Im not friend with this, delete this and try to make a pattern like this, flows much better and fits the vocal too

Example

01:19:127 (4,5) - Here too, try to delete the circle (5) move the slider (4) to 01:19:449 - and i would repeat this slider too 01:18:804 (3) - so it would look like a pattern like this

Example

Insane

General
This is just so overmapped, and also an Insane on such a song? orz... This needs more mods, lots more

00:24:610 (3) - I would move this slider between 00:23:965 (2,4) - these distance wise, so it looks better and plays better and is consistant, move it to x336 y232
00:30:094 (1) - Remove NC, its nonsense since its still part of the preview pattern, 00:31:707 (2,1) - these also should be reserved combo wise
00:45:740 (4) - Spacing is different from the one before, fix this ( 00:44:610 (1,2,3,4) - )
00:50:578 (4,1,2) - This spacing is just so wrong, you made this only because of the preview slider u.u... Try something else and not break the spacing when its not wanted, its so forced
00:59:127 (3,4,5,6) - This.. is just so overmapped and doesnt fit at all, this is no stream map and it has no sound to it, make this different please
01:20:417 (3) - Breaks the flow too, delete this and make the slider (2) without repeat and then add a circle at 01:20:417 -
01:15:578 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 01:15:578 instead, it just doesnt fit and is only a placeholder
01:21:546 (4) - Delete this circle, there is no sound to it and only placeholder again

Yes, thats it, but still needs a lot more improvement!

ok~

I thing I need some time to fix these Problem or do some improvement~

Thanks your mod , it help a lot~

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue!

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 732ms BPM: 93,00
Resnapp after and move the timing points

Easy

General
It is very low mapped, there are not many curved or action sliders which catch the eye. Make more curves!

00:13:643 (3) - Make this slider a bit curved so it gives a better flow
00:53:643 (5) - Make a reserved 1/2 slider, to bring more action into the low pattern
01:12:998 (3) - Make this one curved as well
01:15:578 (1) - Spacing mistake, you should follow the right spacing in an Easy and Normal, so move this further from the preview circle to make the spacing consistant
01:19:449 (2) - Curved again

Normal

00:49:772 (5) - NC should be here because of Kiai, new sentence and overall for consistance, ofc remove next

Hard

00:13:482 (1) - Pretty big jump here, it shouldnt be too hard in a Hard diff, and also its still the first part of the song which is soft and not jumpy, move this closer and fix this spacing
00:23:321 (5) - Isnt well stacked on preview slider, fix this
00:41:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - I dont think this fits at all, there is no sound in the BG or vocal or anything, i actually would say you delete this part 00:40:578 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - and add a spinner instead
00:44:611 (5) - Dont let this circle overlapp with the slider, move it to the left side of the sliderstart, fits better
00:50:740 (4,5) - It just doesnt follow the rythm, and since you try to map to the vocal you should adjust this too
01:13:965 (6) - The circle is also under the slider, move it so you can clearly see it
01:15:579 (1) - Im not friend with this, delete this and try to make a pattern like this, flows much better and fits the vocal too

Example

01:19:127 (4,5) - Here too, try to delete the circle (5) move the slider (4) to 01:19:449 - and i would repeat this slider too 01:18:804 (3) - so it would look like a pattern like this

Example

Insane

General
This is just so overmapped, and also an Insane on such a song? orz... This needs more mods, lots more

00:24:610 (3) - I would move this slider between 00:23:965 (2,4) - these distance wise, so it looks better and plays better and is consistant, move it to x336 y232
00:30:094 (1) - Remove NC, its nonsense since its still part of the preview pattern, 00:31:707 (2,1) - these also should be reserved combo wise
00:45:740 (4) - Spacing is different from the one before, fix this ( 00:44:610 (1,2,3,4) - )
00:50:578 (4,1,2) - This spacing is just so wrong, you made this only because of the preview slider u.u... Try something else and not break the spacing when its not wanted, its so forced
00:59:127 (3,4,5,6) - This.. is just so overmapped and doesnt fit at all, this is no stream map and it has no sound to it, make this different please
01:20:417 (3) - Breaks the flow too, delete this and make the slider (2) without repeat and then add a circle at 01:20:417 -
01:15:578 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 01:15:578 instead, it just doesnt fit and is only a placeholder
01:21:546 (4) - Delete this circle, there is no sound to it and only placeholder again

Yes, thats it, but still needs a lot more improvement!

Yuki-kun wrote:

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Jerry's Taiko Muzukashii] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:26:054
- [Jerry's Taiko Oni] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:26:054

Yuki-kun wrote:

About 2 taiko diff: just a small error i found.
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:49:611 - snap to 00:49:602

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~

From my queue xD

> General <

General and Metadata Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 0
- [Insane] : 3000
- [Jerry's Taiko Muzukashii] : 0
- [Jerry's Taiko Oni] : 0
- [Normal] : 0

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:23:312
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:23:312
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:23:312
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:23:312
- [Jerry's Taiko Muzukashii] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:26:054
- [Jerry's Taiko Oni] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:26:054

Actually,I'm not sure about kiai in Taiko map so you can ignore that if you want. xD

> My Mod <

[Insane]
01:09:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Those notes seem a bit random. How about this? (just an example, i'm not good at creating flower notes like this) xD


[Hard]
[Normal]
[Easy]

Seem fine (LOL, can't find any error)

About 2 taiko diff: just a small error i found.
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:49:611 - snap to 00:49:602

Nice song. Good luck
Star~~~

Jerry wrote:

Yuki-kun wrote:

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Jerry's Taiko Muzukashii] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:26:054
- [Jerry's Taiko Oni] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:764, ends on 01:26:054

Yuki-kun wrote:

About 2 taiko diff: just a small error i found.
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:49:611 - snap to 00:49:602

Both fixed, thanks :3

Oni : http://puu.sh/23jkw
Muzukashii : http://puu.sh/23jkW

Momochikun wrote:

Yo..

General
Ok~

Easy
Many sliders doesn't match the vocal, but it's easy diff. it can;t be helped ._.
00:20:732 - I think u miss clap here.. try to finding a point to put a note now~
00:27:183 (1) - This sliders really really doesn't match the song, also the timing are confusing newbies.
00:46:538 (2) - Clap in the start ?

Normal
00:27:344 - I think a note here will fix the vocal
00:41:377 (5) - Clap

Hard
00:14:925 (5) - Miss rhtym from before
00:18:151 (6) - End this slider on red tick ?
01:08:312 - Note ? fix the vocal I think no note there well be good to hit

Insane
00:37:828 (1,2,3) - Why not stack from the triangle jump at before ?
01:00:086 (6) - Fin

"maybe" that's all..
the song is too gooood, make it harder to mod >.<

Good Luck~

• • Source: "Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai!"
  • Tags: add "Opening"
  • Taiko BGs are unrankable, remove them.

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • Flow in this diff can be improved a lot, some patterns like 00:12:344 (2,3) this one for example are weird, try to make a natural flow:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:20:732 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:40:732 (4) - Delete this circle then start a slider here and end it 1/1 later.
  • 00:54:280 (6,1) - No, this kind of spacing is too hard for beginners! Try to make spacing consistent here.
  • 01:01:699 (3,1,2) - Move (3) and (1) 1/2 later, delete (2) and add a circle at 01:04:602.
  • 01:08:151 (1) - Why a spinner? It doesn't really fit here, delete it and map this part with some circles/sliders.
  • 01:14:280 (4,1,2) - Delete these circles then start a slider at 01:14:280, end it 1/1 later and add a repeat.

• • 00:13:312 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:13:635.
  • 00:19:764 (4,5) - Move (4) 1/2 later and (5) at 00:19:764.
  • 00:26:861 (2,3,4) - I know what you're trying to do here but keep things easy, this is a Normal after all, delete (3).
  • 00:36:538 (6) - Delete this circle.
  • 00:40:409 (3,4,5) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:47:183 (1,2) - Delete (2), end (1) 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:48:151.
  • 01:03:957 (4) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:05:248 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:07:828 (x) - ^

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • 00:14:441 (4) - Add a circle here and start this slider 1/4 later.
  • 00:14:925 (5) - Unsnapped slider end, end this slider at 00:15:248.
  • 00:15:570 (6,7) - Convert these circles into a 1/2 slider with a repeat.
  • 00:18:151 (7) - You forgot a clap here.
  • 00:37:829 (3) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 00:40:570 (1) - Delete this spinner and map this part with something else.
  • 00:50:732 (1,2) - I don't like this jump, try to reduce spacing a bit? (same for all the next similar jumps)
  • 00:59:764 (3) - Convert this slider into 3 1/4 circles.
  • 01:01:054 (6) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 01:02:667 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:19:441 (4) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.

• • There's no video in this diff, add it.
  • 00:09:925 (1) - Delete this spinner and map this part with something else, try this for example:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:14:925 (1) - Why 0,50x slider velocity? Keep it 1,00x like you did at 00:25:248 (4).
  • 00:40:570 (4) - Start this slider 1/4 later, end it at 00:41:054 and add a repeat, then add a circle at 00:40:570 and another one at 00:41:699.
  • 00:59:119 (3,4,5,6) - Try this:

mingmichael wrote:

SPOILER

hey leon let me help you on taiko diffs

General
all structures and designs on all maps are good >w< i like it~

here the mods~
i hope my mods quite help you >,<//

Muzukashii
00:59:442 (1) - i think it's better k than K, because it's not high sound there or not something
01:04:281 (1,2) - k k (i think those are not good if those use K K @_@, the sounds will be not harmonious)
01:04:926 (3) - d (before the big D on 01:05:248 (1) - i think it's better put d than k)

Oni
00:27:828 (4) - add d ( after "watashi wa koko..." , put some note to make it more harmonious it will be better)
00:30:732 (1) - k (it will be more harmonious (that's my opinion))
00:47:506 (2) - put k (as a piano sound, it's better use k)
00:48:474 (3,1,2) - ddk (piano sound appear on 00:48:797 (2) - so, it's better change the 00:48:474 (3) - with 00:48:797 (2) - )
00:49:441 (2) - add d (before the climax on 00:49:765 (1) - , it's better put some notes to give more sensation )
01:01:700 (4) - k (the singer sound "KOnaI". it's better use K on the bold words that i write)
01:04:926 (3) - d ( same like 00:49:441 (2) -)
01:14:281 (2) - k (the singer song "saaaaa.... SE~TE", so i think it's better use k on there)
01:14:441 (3) - k (i think it's better when i combine with these 01:14:603 (4,1,1,2) - d k d d)

Fixed everything.
Thanks alot for the mod, it helped alot. >w<

Muzu : http://puu.sh/2Nf1m.osu
Oni : http://puu.sh/2Nf1z.osu

mingmichael wrote:

hey leon let me help you on taiko diffs

General
all structures and designs on all maps are good >w< i like it~

here the mods~
i hope my mods quite help you >,<//

Muzukashii
00:59:442 (1) - i think it's better k than K, because it's not high sound there or not something
01:04:281 (1,2) - k k (i think those are not good if those use K K @_@, the sounds will be not harmonious)
01:04:926 (3) - d (before the big D on 01:05:248 (1) - i think it's better put d than k)



Oni
00:27:828 (4) - add d ( after "watashi wa koko..." , put some note to make it more harmonious it will be better)
00:30:732 (1) - k (it will be more harmonious (that's my opinion))
00:47:506 (2) - put k (as a piano sound, it's better use k)
00:48:474 (3,1,2) - ddk (piano sound appear on 00:48:797 (2) - so, it's better change the 00:48:474 (3) - with 00:48:797 (2) - )
00:49:441 (2) - add d (before the climax on 00:49:765 (1) - , it's better put some notes to give more sensation )
01:01:700 (4) - k (the singer sound "KOnaI". it's better use K on the bold words that i write)
01:04:926 (3) - d ( same like 00:49:441 (2) -)
01:14:281 (2) - k (the singer song "saaaaa.... SE~TE", so i think it's better use k on there)
01:14:441 (3) - k (i think it's better when i combine with these 01:14:603 (4,1,1,2) - d k d d)

Jerry wrote:

mingmichael wrote:

SPOILER

hey leon let me help you on taiko diffs

General
all structures and designs on all maps are good >w< i like it~

here the mods~
i hope my mods quite help you >,<//

Muzukashii
00:59:442 (1) - i think it's better k than K, because it's not high sound there or not something
01:04:281 (1,2) - k k (i think those are not good if those use K K @_@, the sounds will be not harmonious)
01:04:926 (3) - d (before the big D on 01:05:248 (1) - i think it's better put d than k)

Oni
00:27:828 (4) - add d ( after "watashi wa koko..." , put some note to make it more harmonious it will be better)
00:30:732 (1) - k (it will be more harmonious (that's my opinion))
00:47:506 (2) - put k (as a piano sound, it's better use k)
00:48:474 (3,1,2) - ddk (piano sound appear on 00:48:797 (2) - so, it's better change the 00:48:474 (3) - with 00:48:797 (2) - )
00:49:441 (2) - add d (before the climax on 00:49:765 (1) - , it's better put some notes to give more sensation )
01:01:700 (4) - k (the singer sound "KOnaI". it's better use K on the bold words that i write)
01:04:926 (3) - d ( same like 00:49:441 (2) -)
01:14:281 (2) - k (the singer song "saaaaa.... SE~TE", so i think it's better use k on there)
01:14:441 (3) - k (i think it's better when i combine with these 01:14:603 (4,1,1,2) - d k d d)

Fixed everything.
Thanks alot for the mod, it helped alot. >w<

Muzu : http://puu.sh/2Nf1m.osu
Oni : http://puu.sh/2Nf1z.osu

same , sorry for slow cheek........

Thanks ~

And Upload~

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• • Source: "Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai!"
  • Tags: add "Opening"
  • Taiko BGs are unrankable, remove them.

Easy

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • Flow in this diff can be improved a lot, some patterns like 00:12:344 (2,3) this one for example are weird, try to make a natural flow:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:20:732 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:40:732 (4) - Delete this circle then start a slider here and end it 1/1 later.
  • 00:54:280 (6,1) - No, this kind of spacing is too hard for beginners! Try to make spacing consistent here.
  • 01:01:699 (3,1,2) - Move (3) and (1) 1/2 later, delete (2) and add a circle at 01:04:602.
  • 01:08:151 (1) - Why a spinner? It doesn't really fit here, delete it and map this part with some circles/sliders.
  • 01:14:280 (4,1,2) - Delete these circles then start a slider at 01:14:280, end it 1/1 later and add a repeat.

Normal

• • 00:13:312 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:13:635.
  • 00:19:764 (4,5) - Move (4) 1/2 later and (5) at 00:19:764.
  • 00:26:861 (2,3,4) - I know what you're trying to do here but keep things easy, this is a Normal after all, delete (3).
  • 00:36:538 (6) - Delete this circle.
  • 00:40:409 (3,4,5) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:47:183 (1,2) - Delete (2), end (1) 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:48:151.
  • 01:03:957 (4) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:05:248 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:07:828 (x) - ^

Hard

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • 00:14:441 (4) - Add a circle here and start this slider 1/4 later.
  • 00:14:925 (5) - Unsnapped slider end, end this slider at 00:15:248.
  • 00:15:570 (6,7) - Convert these circles into a 1/2 slider with a repeat.
  • 00:18:151 (7) - You forgot a clap here.
  • 00:37:829 (3) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 00:40:570 (1) - Delete this spinner and map this part with something else.
  • 00:50:732 (1,2) - I don't like this jump, try to reduce spacing a bit? (same for all the next similar jumps)
  • 00:59:764 (3) - Convert this slider into 3 1/4 circles.
  • 01:01:054 (6) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 01:02:667 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:19:441 (4) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.

Insane

• • There's no video in this diff, add it.
  • 00:09:925 (1) - Delete this spinner and map this part with something else, try this for example:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:14:925 (1) - Why 0,50x slider velocity? Keep it 1,00x like you did at 00:25:248 (4).
  • 00:40:570 (4) - Start this slider 1/4 later, end it at 00:41:054 and add a repeat, then add a circle at 00:40:570 and another one at 00:41:699.
  • 00:59:119 (3,4,5,6) - Try this:

1. remove Letter box during breaks
2. why the title is ''口口口'' ?
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768244

1. OD -2 ,6 is to high for muzu
2. 00:35:893 - add d and 00:35:248 - remove to follow 00:31:699 (1,1,1,2,1) -
3. i think this diff is similar to Futsuu

1. OD-1 ,6 is too high
2. 00:08:151 - change k? there is high pitch
3. 00:12:667 - remove and 00:13:312 - add kk and 00:15:248 - remove because 00:12:667 - the vocal here is not powerful
4. 00:17:990 - add d and 00:18:473 - add kd,because there have vocal sound
5. 00:23:796 - add k and 00:25:570 - remove
6. 01:05:248 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - i think this part need more different pattern ,like this:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768322

That's all~
Good Luck~

qoot8123 wrote:

Taiko mod~

[General]

1. remove Letter box during breaks
2. why the title is ''口口口'' ?
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768244

[Muzu]

1. OD -2 ,6 is to high for muzu
2. 00:35:893 - add d and 00:35:248 - remove to follow 00:31:699 (1,1,1,2,1) -
3. i think this diff is similar to Futsuu

[Oni]

1. OD-1 ,6 is too high
2. 00:08:151 - change k? there is high pitch
3. 00:12:667 - remove and 00:13:312 - add kk and 00:15:248 - remove because 00:12:667 - the vocal here is not powerful
4. 00:17:990 - add d and 00:18:473 - add kd,because there have vocal sound
5. 00:23:796 - add k and 00:25:570 - remove
6. 01:05:248 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - i think this part need more different pattern ,like this:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768322

That's all~
Good Luck~

qoot8123 wrote:

SPOILER

Taiko mod~

[General]

1. remove Letter box during breaks
2. why the title is ''口口口'' ? Fix here , mistake ....... Thanks ~
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768244

[Muzu]

1. OD -2 ,6 is to high for muzu
2. 00:35:893 - add d and 00:35:248 - remove to follow 00:31:699 (1,1,1,2,1) -
3. i think this diff is similar to Futsuu

[Oni]

1. OD-1 ,6 is too high
2. 00:08:151 - change k? there is high pitch
3. 00:12:667 - remove and 00:13:312 - add kk and 00:15:248 - remove because 00:12:667 - the vocal here is not powerful
4. 00:17:990 - add d and 00:18:473 - add kd,because there have vocal sound
5. 00:23:796 - add k and 00:25:570 - remove
6. 01:05:248 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - i think this part need more different pattern ,like this:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768322

That's all~
Good Luck~

Jerry wrote:

SPOILER

qoot8123 wrote:

Taiko mod~

[General]

1. remove Letter box during breaks
2. why the title is ''口口口'' ?
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768244

[Muzu]

1. OD -2 ,6 is to high for muzu
2. 00:35:893 - add d and 00:35:248 - remove to follow 00:31:699 (1,1,1,2,1) -
3. i think this diff is similar to Futsuu

[Oni]

1. OD-1 ,6 is too high
2. 00:08:151 - change k? there is high pitch
3. 00:12:667 - remove and 00:13:312 - add kk and 00:15:248 - remove because 00:12:667 - the vocal here is not powerful
4. 00:17:990 - add d and 00:18:473 - add kd,because there have vocal sound
5. 00:23:796 - add k and 00:25:570 - remove
6. 01:05:248 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - i think this part need more different pattern ,like this:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768322

That's all~
Good Luck~

All fixed! Thanks for the mod >w<

Oni : http://puu.sh/2Y4MZ.osu
Muzu : http://puu.sh/2Y4MP.osu

Thanks :3 ~~

Update ~

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
Jerry diffs IRC mod~ :33

SPOILER

14:51 ReySHeL: 00:28:796 - 
14:52 ReySHeL: add d?
14:52 Jerry: hmm...
14:52 Jerry: okay
14:53 ReySHeL: 00:31:377 - 
14:53 ReySHeL: add d
14:53 ReySHeL: the sound of the beat
14:54 Jerry: ok :3
14:56 ReySHeL: 00:49:441 (2) - k?
14:58 ReySHeL: if you follow the drum
14:58 Jerry: hard decision because both sounds good x_x"
14:58 Jerry: but i think i'll go with kat :3
14:58 Jerry: changed
14:58 ReySHeL: okay
15:02 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - k
15:03 ReySHeL: 01:10:248 - add d
15:03 Jerry: haha was waiting for someone to change that =w=
15:03 Jerry: ok added
15:04 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - no change?
15:04 Jerry: changed that one already owo
15:04 ReySHeL: oh ok owo
15:06 ReySHeL: 01:12:828 - add k?
15:06 ReySHeL: the sound of the drum is heard
15:07 Jerry: ok >w<b
15:07 ReySHeL: okay, thats all~ >w<
15:09 Jerry: thanks :3
15:09 ReySHeL: wait..
15:09 ReySHeL: 00:58:474 (2,1,2) - dkd?
15:10 ReySHeL: its better sound
15:11 Jerry: ermm.. sorry but i prefer it with kdd ><"
15:12 ReySHeL: kk
15:12 ReySHeL: good luck!
15:13 Jerry: oh wait ._."
15:13 Jerry: i realized 01:12:828 (2) - is dkd lol
15:13 Jerry: okok changed hahaha >////<
15:14 ReySHeL: ok >///<
15:15 ReySHeL: post ok?
15:15 Jerry: etto.. muzukashii diff? (@_@)
15:16 ReySHeL: oops, ok ok 
15:16 Jerry: ><
15:16 ReySHeL: i forgot sry
15:16 Jerry: nah it's okay :3
15:19 ReySHeL: 00:47:184 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - k d k k d d k?
15:19 Jerry: ok
15:21 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - k same with Oni
15:22 Jerry: okay
15:23 ReySHeL: thats all!
15:24 Jerry: oh okay >w<
15:24 ReySHeL: good luck <3
15:24 Jerry: thanks for the mod, it helped a lot :3
15:24 Jerry: thanks ><
15:24 ReySHeL: np >.<!

good luck!

ReySHeL wrote:

SPOILER

hi~
Jerry diffs IRC mod~ :33

[spoilerbox]

14:51 ReySHeL: 00:28:796 - 
14:52 ReySHeL: add d?
14:52 Jerry: hmm...
14:52 Jerry: okay
14:53 ReySHeL: 00:31:377 - 
14:53 ReySHeL: add d
14:53 ReySHeL: the sound of the beat
14:54 Jerry: ok :3
14:56 ReySHeL: 00:49:441 (2) - k?
14:58 ReySHeL: if you follow the drum
14:58 Jerry: hard decision because both sounds good x_x"
14:58 Jerry: but i think i'll go with kat :3
14:58 Jerry: changed
14:58 ReySHeL: okay
15:02 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - k
15:03 ReySHeL: 01:10:248 - add d
15:03 Jerry: haha was waiting for someone to change that =w=
15:03 Jerry: ok added
15:04 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - no change?
15:04 Jerry: changed that one already owo
15:04 ReySHeL: oh ok owo
15:06 ReySHeL: 01:12:828 - add k?
15:06 ReySHeL: the sound of the drum is heard
15:07 Jerry: ok >w<b
15:07 ReySHeL: okay, thats all~ >w<
15:09 Jerry: thanks :3
15:09 ReySHeL: wait..
15:09 ReySHeL: 00:58:474 (2,1,2) - dkd?
15:10 ReySHeL: its better sound
15:11 Jerry: ermm.. sorry but i prefer it with kdd ><"
15:12 ReySHeL: kk
15:12 ReySHeL: good luck!
15:13 Jerry: oh wait ._."
15:13 Jerry: i realized 01:12:828 (2) - is dkd lol
15:13 Jerry: okok changed hahaha >////<
15:14 ReySHeL: ok >///<
15:15 ReySHeL: post ok?
15:15 Jerry: etto.. muzukashii diff? (@_@)
15:16 ReySHeL: oops, ok ok 
15:16 Jerry: ><
15:16 ReySHeL: i forgot sry
15:16 Jerry: nah it's okay :3
15:19 ReySHeL: 00:47:184 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - k d k k d d k?
15:19 Jerry: ok
15:21 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - k same with Oni
15:22 Jerry: okay
15:23 ReySHeL: thats all!
15:24 Jerry: oh okay >w<
15:24 ReySHeL: good luck <3
15:24 Jerry: thanks for the mod, it helped a lot :3
15:24 Jerry: thanks ><
15:24 ReySHeL: np >.<!

good luck![/spoilerbox]

Jerry wrote:

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
Jerry diffs IRC mod~ :33

SPOILER

14:51 ReySHeL: 00:28:796 - 
14:52 ReySHeL: add d?
14:52 Jerry: hmm...
14:52 Jerry: okay
14:53 ReySHeL: 00:31:377 - 
14:53 ReySHeL: add d
14:53 ReySHeL: the sound of the beat
14:54 Jerry: ok :3
14:56 ReySHeL: 00:49:441 (2) - k?
14:58 ReySHeL: if you follow the drum
14:58 Jerry: hard decision because both sounds good x_x"
14:58 Jerry: but i think i'll go with kat :3
14:58 Jerry: changed
14:58 ReySHeL: okay
15:02 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - k
15:03 ReySHeL: 01:10:248 - add d
15:03 Jerry: haha was waiting for someone to change that =w=
15:03 Jerry: ok added
15:04 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - no change?
15:04 Jerry: changed that one already owo
15:04 ReySHeL: oh ok owo
15:06 ReySHeL: 01:12:828 - add k?
15:06 ReySHeL: the sound of the drum is heard
15:07 Jerry: ok >w<b
15:07 ReySHeL: okay, thats all~ >w<
15:09 Jerry: thanks :3
15:09 ReySHeL: wait..
15:09 ReySHeL: 00:58:474 (2,1,2) - dkd?
15:10 ReySHeL: its better sound
15:11 Jerry: ermm.. sorry but i prefer it with kdd ><"
15:12 ReySHeL: kk
15:12 ReySHeL: good luck!
15:13 Jerry: oh wait ._."
15:13 Jerry: i realized 01:12:828 (2) - is dkd lol
15:13 Jerry: okok changed hahaha >////<
15:14 ReySHeL: ok >///<
15:15 ReySHeL: post ok?
15:15 Jerry: etto.. muzukashii diff? (@_@)
15:16 ReySHeL: oops, ok ok 
15:16 Jerry: ><
15:16 ReySHeL: i forgot sry
15:16 Jerry: nah it's okay :3
15:19 ReySHeL: 00:47:184 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - k d k k d d k?
15:19 Jerry: ok
15:21 ReySHeL: 01:04:926 (3) - k same with Oni
15:22 Jerry: okay
15:23 ReySHeL: thats all!
15:24 Jerry: oh okay >w<
15:24 ReySHeL: good luck <3
15:24 Jerry: thanks for the mod, it helped a lot :3
15:24 Jerry: thanks ><
15:24 ReySHeL: np >.<!

good luck!

Thanks for the mod, Rey! :3

Muzu : http://puu.sh/33x22.osu
Oni : http://puu.sh/33x2d.osu

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. Audio Lead-in所有难度都设成2000
   
   Easy
2. 00:11:054 (1) - 开头whistle，后面的长白线上都可以whistle就不列举了（一直放到00:31:699 - 或00:49:764 - 或你喜欢的地方，只要适合音乐就好）
3. 00:36:861 (1) - delete finish
4. 00:42:022 (1) - 这里开头可以finish，这样可以和00:40:732 (4) - 搭配上，结尾可whistle
5. 00:44:602 (3) - delete finish
6. 00:45:248 (1) - 开头whistle
7. 01:08:151 (1) - 这里加转盘有点不太理解- -并不是长音……这里可以很简单的就用circle和slider填上不是么
   
   Normal
8. 00:11:054 (1) - 同Easy diff
9. 00:42:344 (2) - 结尾whistle
10. 00:44:925 (1) - 开头whistle
11. 01:04:280 (4) - clap-clap
    
    Hard
12. 00:11:054 (1) - 同Easy diff
13. 00:16:861 (3) - delete clap
14. 00:21:700 (2) - ^
15. 00:27:183 (2) - ^
16. 00:29:119 (3) - 单独一个whistle在这里很奇怪- -就像我之前所说的在这之前的长白线上都加whistle
17. 00:31:699 - 从这里开始可以2w4c或者24clap……啥，你说00:34:925 - 没有note……加个SB音效就好了
18. 00:35:571 (5) - delete clap
19. 00:53:635 (1,2,3) - 太~远了:> <:
20. 01:11:054 - 建议加个SB音效clap
21. 01:18:473 (2,3) - 太~远了>_<
    
    Insane
22. 00:11:054 (1) - 同Easy diff
23. Fine
    
    Muzukashii
24. 有点单调？节奏不错
25. 00:49:602 - 无用的绿线
    
    Oni
26. 00:21:055 (1) - d
27. 00:29:119 (1,2,3,1,1) -
    改成这样

    中间的蓝1在00:29:119 -
28. 00:31:699 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - 会不会空了点？
29. 00:36:861 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,1) - ^
30. 00:42:023 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) -
    改成这样

    中间的蓝1在00:42:667 -
31. 00:44:926 (3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ 或者稍微变一下
32. 00:49:602 - 无用的绿线
33. 00:53:151 (2) - d
34. 01:15:893 (3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4) -
    改成这样

    中间的蓝1在01:17:506 -
35. 01:22:990 (1) - k

OniJAM wrote:

Mod req from my queue~

• Muzukashii

1. 有点单调？节奏不错
2. 00:49:602 - 无用的绿线 ok
   
   Oni
3. 00:21:055 (1) - d sorry, 没有改变
4. 00:29:119 (1,2,3,1,1) - ok
   改成这样

   中间的蓝1在00:29:119 -
5. 00:31:699 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - 会不会空了点？ 没有改变 ><
6. 00:36:861 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,1) - ^ ^
7. 00:42:023 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - 没有改变
   改成这样

   中间的蓝1在00:42:667 -
8. 00:44:926 (3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ 或者稍微变一下 ok, 但是 00:45:409 的 kat 没有放
9. 00:49:602 - 无用的绿线 ok
10. 00:53:151 (2) - d 没有改变
11. 01:15:893 (3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4) - ok, 但是... 01:17:183 至 01:20:086 没有改变
    改成这样

    中间的蓝1在01:17:506 -
12. 01:22:990 (1) - k 没有改变

OniJAM wrote:

SPOILER

Mod req from my queue~

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. Audio Lead-in所有难度都设成2000
   
   Easy
2. 00:11:054 (1) - 开头whistle，后面的长白线上都可以whistle就不列举了（一直放到00:31:699 - 或00:49:764 - 或你喜欢的地方，只要适合音乐就好）
3. 00:36:861 (1) - delete finish
4. 00:42:022 (1) - 这里开头可以finish，这样可以和00:40:732 (4) - 搭配上，结尾可whistle
5. 00:44:602 (3) - delete finish
6. 00:45:248 (1) - 开头whistle
7. 01:08:151 (1) - 这里加转盘有点不太理解- -并不是长音……这里可以很简单的就用circle和slider填上不是么
   
   Normal
8. 00:11:054 (1) - 同Easy diff
9. 00:42:344 (2) - 结尾whistle
10. 00:44:925 (1) - 开头whistle
11. 01:04:280 (4) - clap-clap
    
    Hard
12. 00:11:054 (1) - 同Easy diff
13. 00:16:861 (3) - delete clap
14. 00:21:700 (2) - ^
15. 00:27:183 (2) - ^
16. 00:29:119 (3) - 单独一个whistle在这里很奇怪- -就像我之前所说的在这之前的长白线上都加whistle
17. 00:31:699 - 从这里开始可以2w4c或者24clap……啥，你说00:34:925 - 没有note……加个SB音效就好了
18. 00:35:571 (5) - delete clap
19. 00:53:635 (1,2,3) - 太~远了:> <:
20. 01:11:054 - 建议加个SB音效clap
21. 01:18:473 (2,3) - 太~远了>_<

全部修改完成
這些Diff 我部分remap過頗多次,有些Hitsound的地方沒有加上,感謝
謝謝mod

Oyatsu wrote:

SPOILER

Hi, M4M ^^

[Easy]
00:21:377 (1) - 1 slider not balance. I think you should change place of 3 point.
00:23:957 (3) - ^
00:40:732 (4) - not sensible when finish here. I feel dissonant
[Normal]
00:25:248 (4) - try move to 152/192 to balance.
00:26:538 (1,2,3) - Wrong distance
00:29:441 (2,3) - Make as: http://puu.sh/3lihE.jpg
01:07:828 - Add circle
01:08:796 (3,4) - Try change into slider as vocal
[Hard]
00:21:700 (2) - 436/64 to balance
00:24:602 (3) - Remove NC. Why must NC?
00:49:119 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you use a shorter distance? It is too long about place I just not fix here. I made a speed felling here.
[Isane]
Nice! I can't find anything
------------------------------------------------------------
Nice map~ Good luck!

UnderminE wrote:

SPOILER

General
01:00:086 - end kiai here, and start it again at 01:05:248 - here. So you won't have a long-ass kiai

Easy
00:34:280 - whistle
00:35:570 - whistle
00:38:151 - whistle
00:39:441 - whistle
00:48:473 - whistle
00:51:054 - whistle
00:52:344 - whistle
00:54:925 - whistle
00:57:506 - whistle
01:00:086 - whistle
01:01:377 - whistle
01:02:344 - whistle
01:06:538 - whistle
01:07:828 - whistle
01:09:764 - clap
01:09:441 - whistle
01:10:409 - whistle
01:11:699 - whistle
01:12:990 - whistle
01:14:280 - whistle
01:18:151 - whistle
01:20:732 - whistle

Normal
00:57:506 (3) - use this slider for 00:58:796 - here too?
Same hitsound suggestions in Easy

Hard
00:54:925 - NC here
00:55:409 - remove NC
Same hitsound suggestions in Easy

insane
it lacks hitsounds. Try adding some hitsounds like how i showed in Easy diff. Soft whistles are the best choice for a song like this.

Good luck