1. Hard (4.67 stars, 396 notes)
2. Normal (2.85 stars, 209 notes)

kajiyatta wrote:

hi, M4M from your queue
General
consider to add whistle more positively since this song has nice piano music.
Easy
Placement
I suppose you should use distant snap with all notes since there is no Easy diff.
02:05:731(1) remove NC and spacing error
02:48:017(1) to follow the flow for newbie, I suggest this direction

SPOILER

02:59:445(1) spacing error...
Rhythm
00:23:731 add a note here since back instrumental hears strongly
00:59:731 blank is a bit weird because of beginning of vocal and piano, so this is an example here.

SPOILER

01:08:874 ^
Hit Sonud
00:01:160(1) consider to add whistle at head since this is a first note and player will expect some heard
00:10:302(1) add finish at head
00:48:588(2)^
01:06:302(1)^
01:28:017(1)^
02:02:302(1)^
03:01:731(1)^
02:10:302(2) add finish at end

Hard
Placement
02:32:874(2) stack seems weird since this might stop of the flow, and at 02:33:017 I can hear some instrumental, so put like this?

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:16:017(3) I can just hear something at 01:16:445, so make stream?

SPOILER

01:17:731 please pick this finish up!

SPOILER

02:40:017 ^
03:09:017 add a note better because of vocal and to be consistence to the next notes.
Hit Sonud
00:53:731(1) add finish at head
01:32:588(1)^
02:02:302(1)^
01:14:017(5) add finish at reverse
02:36:302(5)^

overall fine for me, good luck and star~

LQA20Ans wrote:

m4m~


[Normal]
-01:12:017 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬 사운드만 50으로 낮춰주세요. 60은 노래에서 좀 튀는감이 있는듯...

-01:16:588 (1) - 가운데 부분 피니쉬 사운드 40으로 낮춰주세요.

-01:38:302 (2) - 슬라이더 시작부분 피니쉬 사운드만 70으로 줄여주세요.

-01:39:445 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬 넣어주시고 사운드 그부분만 60으로 줄여주세요.

-02:11:445 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬

-02:20:588 (1) - x : 248, y 296으로 이동

-02:38:874 (1) - 끝부분 1절이랑 똑같이 음량 -10만 내려주세요.

-02:40:874 (4) - 그냥 리듬 제안입니다만... 이걸 지우고 02:39:731 - 여기에 노트 넣어보시는건 어떠신지...

-03:00:588 (2,1) - 마찬가지로 1절이랑 똑같이 각각 70, 60으로 낮춰주세요.

-03:17:731 (1) - 슬라시작부분에 작게 피니쉬 들리는거 같네요. 음량 40정도로 하시고 피니쉬 넣어주세요.


[Hard]

노말이랑 힛사 제안 드리는게 거의 겹치네요 lol

-00:17:160 (5) - 개인적으로 휘슬 빼는게 더 좋을것 같네요.

-01:14:017 (5) - 가운데 피니쉬 음량 -10

-01:17:160 (2) - 노말이랑 똑같이 해주세요 ㅇㅂㅇ

-01:38:302 (3,1) - ^

-01:41:160 (5) - 피니쉬 제거

-02:39:445 (2) - 노말이랑 동일

-02:39:445 (2,3,4) - 갠적인 의견입니다만... 노트 꺾이는게 왠지 많이 꺾이는 기분이랄까요...
꺾이는 각도를 좀 줄였으면 하는 바램이 있네요.

-02:54:874 (1) - 피니쉬 추가

-03:00:588 (3) - 처음부분이랑 끝부분 노말이랑 동일

-03:18:159 (2) - x : 192, y : 80

-03:18:302 (3) - x : 172, y : 116



가드님맵은 언제나 변태스러울정도로 퀄이 높네요... 허허;;;
스타쏘고 갑니다.

• [Normal]
  

  1. Try this long slider it's nice to have some long sliders here and there for here 00:42:302 (3,4) cirlce 4 x:260 y:256
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  2. 00:56:017 (1) press CTRL + SHIFT + R and rotate by 1 to give it a little nice blanket look for the next note.
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     00:58:302 (1) y:248 x:160
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     01:36:588 (1) remove this and maybe add that.

• Normal

1. 00:46:588 (3) - NC should be here instead of 00:46:874 (1) -, vocal starts here
2. 03:12:588 (2) - NC too, different vocals
3. 00:46:588 (3) - Same as above
4. 01:16:017 (2) - NC?
5. 01:36:588 (3) - ^
6. 01:39:445 (4) - Remove NC here
7. 02:05:445 - Add note here?
8. 02:18:302 (4) - Remove NC
9. 02:20:017 (5) - NC should be here instead
10. 02:34:302 (3) - Remove NC
11. 03:02:874 - I feel that the Kiai should end here orz
12. 03:03:445 (1) - Remove NC here, start NC at 03:04:017 (2) - instead
13. 03:10:874 (1) - same as above, remove NC here, start NC at 03:12:588 (2) - instead
14. 03:17:731 (4) - Remove NC
15. 03:17:731 (4) - seems cuter like this lol

• Hard

1. 00:34:874 (4) - NC here?
2. 00:44:302 (3) - Remove NC
3. 00:47:445 (1) - Remove the NC here, Start NC at 00:48:302 (2) - instead
4. 02:05:160 (1) - same as above, remove NC here, start NC at 02:06:588 (3) - instead
5. 02:58:874 (1) - NC should be here, remove the NC at 02:59:445 (2) -

1. ...128 kbps mp3? I'm sure enough there are 320 kbps mp3s laying around for this song; you just need to convert them to 192 kbps.

1. 00:01:160 - 00:17:159 - Uh... I'm confused with the combo pattern in this section. It looks really random compared to later sections (an NC every one stanza). Make them consistent please.
2. 00:21:731 - 00:37:731 - Add whistles every first and fourth white tick + second red tick every stanza? This section sounds far better that way, IMO.
3. 00:37:731 - Finish is clearly needed.
4. 00:40:017 - 03:17:731 - Add whistles every first white tick of a stanza? Fits the song far better that way. Feels empty without them, for me.
5. 00:53:731 - A finish is clearly needed here...
6. 01:00:302 (3) - A new stanza in the middle of a slider is extremely not recommended here. The song does not support it, and by that I mean the slider will feel really weird to play because there's a loud sound on the music, worthy of a whistle (and even finish!) hitsound, in the middle but you're not hitting anything, just holding the slider. If you don't understand what I mean, try to play that part by yourself. If you don't find anything wrong... Well...
7. 01:04:874 (3) - ^
8. 01:09:445 (3) - ^
9. 01:14:017 (3) - ^
10. 01:39:445 - Add Finish? The sound on the song's instrument is loud enough there to guarantee one.
11. 01:41:731 - ^
12. 02:18:302 - ^
13. 02:22:588 (4) - Same as 01:00:302 (3).
14. 02:27:159 (3) - ^
15. 02:31:731 (4) - ^
16. 02:36:302 (3) - ^
17. 02:57:159 - Finish? It's clearly "demanded" by the song.

1. ...See my mod on the Normal diff. Most of them applies for this diff too.
2. 00:03:445 (1,2,3) - This pattern feels kinda forced. What are these sliders following on the song is not clear...
3. 01:05:731 (6,1) - Swap NC? Should be obvious why (although it would be better if you change 01:04:874 (5)...)

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi, mod here.

Sorry for coming here really late ._.

Note: *Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General

1. ...128 kbps mp3? I'm sure enough there are 320 kbps mp3s laying around for this song; you just need to convert them to 192 kbps.

>Normal

1. 00:01:160 - 00:17:159 - Uh... I'm confused with the combo pattern in this section. It looks really random compared to later sections (an NC every one stanza). Make them consistent please.
2. 00:21:731 - 00:37:731 - Add whistles every first and fourth white tick + second red tick every stanza? This section sounds far better that way, IMO.
3. 00:37:731 - Finish is clearly needed.
4. 00:40:017 - 03:17:731 - Add whistles every first white tick of a stanza? Fits the song far better that way. Feels empty without them, for me.
5. 00:53:731 - A finish is clearly needed here...
6. 01:00:302 (3) - A new stanza in the middle of a slider is extremely not recommended here. The song does not support it, and by that I mean the slider will feel really weird to play because there's a loud sound on the music, worthy of a whistle (and even finish!) hitsound, in the middle but you're not hitting anything, just holding the slider. If you don't understand what I mean, try to play that part by yourself. If you don't find anything wrong... Well...
7. 01:04:874 (3) - ^
8. 01:09:445 (3) - ^
9. 01:14:017 (3) - ^
10. 01:39:445 - Add Finish? The sound on the song's instrument is loud enough there to guarantee one.
11. 01:41:731 - ^
12. 02:18:302 - ^
13. 02:22:588 (4) - Same as 01:00:302 (3).
14. 02:27:159 (3) - ^
15. 02:31:731 (4) - ^
16. 02:36:302 (3) - ^
17. 02:57:159 - Finish? It's clearly "demanded" by the song.

>Hard

1. ...See my mod on the Normal diff. Most of them applies for this diff too.
2. 00:03:445 (1,2,3) - This pattern feels kinda forced. What are these sliders following on the song is not clear...
3. 01:05:731 (6,1) - Swap NC? Should be obvious why (although it would be better if you change 01:04:874 (5)...)

Uh, that's it I guess.

Good luck on the way

Tari wrote:

Hi

[General]

• Fine

[Normal]

1. 00:28:322 (4) - I think new combo should be here , it seems to be more consistent with the rhythm and the way you put your notes / rhythm , its to be consistent with other combo's more , maybe you should change the rhythm here too >< something like this? http://puu.sh/2T54N.jpg it flows better with map imo. No change this beat piano sound here
   
2. 00:58:322 (1) - Hi , I don't think this is really good to do here, this note is signal of new music change , so don't do same slider rhythms as previous parts. instead try something like this : http://puu.sh/2T5fr.jpg , http://puu.sh/2T5gV.jpg , if you do this you can have much more opportunity for adding hitsounds and it fits with most beats here. ok fix
3. 01:07:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^ for consistency. ok fix
4. 02:22:322 (3,4,5) - ^ ok fix
5. 02:31:465 (3,4,5) - ^ If you don't do any of these at least make the 3rd note stack in each part. ok fix
6. 02:31:465 (3,4,5) - ^ ok fix
   
7. 01:38:322 (2,3,1) - Please, oh please make this symmetrical , its very much possible to do so, something like this http://puu.sh/2TE3U.jpg , its boring to keep seeing similar patterns and such in maps, I recommend you try somemething new and add some symmetry in from time to time. hmm.. i think you suggest flow is bad.. no change
   
8. 01:41:179 (2) - Fix this note's spacing if you do the above lol ok fix lol
   
9. 02:26:322 (2,3,4) - Repetitive pattern , as said before you can try to make the patterns look more different , http://puu.sh/2TEdI.jpg there are many possibilities to change this. hmm.. why? i think not problem here no change
   
10. 02:56:037 (2,1,2,3,1) - ? Why isn't there symmetry , it really threw me off because this whole thing was suppose to look symmetrical because the notes 1 2 and 3 make it possible and the pattern look very structured.

ok fix


[Hard]

1. 00:01:180 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - For this part , you could of added some triplets or extra note where they fit with the piano sound T_T , it wouldn't be a bad idea since this song has low BPM. They just felt really missing in some parts, (Here are some places you can add them :
   00:02:179 00:05:608 00:07:894 etc) but its your choice. This is beat all iyric here.. you listen this part sound.. no change
   
2. 00:29:465 (4) - Perhaps you missed a whistle here , for consistency with 00:27:179 (2) - I suppose. ok fix
3. 00:34:037 (3) - ^ ok fix
4. 00:37:751 (4) - This position doesn't seem to flow right , due to sudden movement down with the cursor , I think its better if you make this go in a straight line , it feels much better. Here is an image of what I mean : http://puu.sh/2UiYj.jpg (:O I didn't notice there was jump there , but I guess it works either way) ok fix
5. 00:58:322 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very boring , rhythm this gets repeated several times throughout the map , but I guess its not your fault and more of the songs fault . but its good to offer some variety , like change the last slider in the note from replacing the reverse with note to make the map more fun. No
6. 01:26:894 (3) - I think it makes more sense to make this a reverse slider rhythm? something like this : http://puu.sh/2UjBT.jpg , it just seems to fit with your rhythm better. why..? i don't understand you suggest beat.. this sound lyric here. no change
7. 01:35:751 (2) - I think it makes much more sense , to make this note stack under this slider : 01:37:179 (1) - your already dissing distance snap at this part , so increasing spacing just a little bit won't be an issue, Something like this : http://puu.sh/2Ujz2.jpg (Just move this note to x:284 y:256) No
8. 02:19:894 - I think your missing a note here , I think there was the intention of putting a stream here , you did so in the last section , but not here which makes it feel odd. why? no change
9. 02:19:751 (5) - If you do the above, make sure you add an NC here. ok fix
10. 02:38:894 (1) - I think Ctrl+G fits better here , since your adding NC's in a fortuitous rate , it would make sense to add an jump in this part of the music , something like this : http://puu.sh/2Ujme.jpg ok fix
11. 03:07:322 - I think note here fits , not neccessary fits with the vocals but it definetely fits with the instruments (particularly the piano sound in this part of the song) No
12. 03:12:188 - ^ do the same here , if you do the above.

^

Nice job on this map Gloria Guard! , everything looks pretty consistent.

Thanks for modding Tari

jonathanlfj wrote:

From my modding queue
i see ur a big fan of fripside arent u

Black is suggestion
Blue is highlt recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
did u horizontally compress the bg? it looks a bit distorted...here is a properly resized one:

SPOILER

During the softer parts, you should raise the volume from 40-50% to 50-60% since i can't hear the hitsounds sometimes with the strong piano tones in the music yay ~ fix

[Normal]
00:17:322 (1) - end this at 00:20:608 and add whistle? it makes more sense with the strong piano tone and is easier to play for a normal diff fix
00:30:322 (4) - add finish? fix
00:37:894 (1) - add clap fix
01:02:894 (1,2,3,4) - plays better with this rhythm:

SPOILER

fix
01:18:894 (1) - add finish and whistle on slider start fix
02:00:037 (1) - add clap why?
02:25:179 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:02:894 (1,2,3,4) fix
02:59:465 (1) - add finish on slider start? fix

[Hard]
00:05:179 (4) - place this so 00:04:608 (3) forms a good blanket around it fix
00:30:322 (5) - add finish? fix
00:37:894 (1) - add clap Normal same
00:40:037 (1) - the extension to blue line doesnt make alot of sense here, shorten this to the red line to match the vocals No this is beat song sound beat here not lyric this beat
01:22:037 (4,5) - since you did a stack triplet right before, i was tempted to hit this as a triplet also (it is in fact present in the music); its better if you remove the stack to avoid possible confusion no change because it's clear pattern and testplay this not problem
02:00:037 (1) - add clap Normal same
02:28:608 (3) - spacing variation intentional? I was thinking a triangle with equal spacing looks better here fix
02:53:751 (4) - blanket better on 02:54:608 (5) fix
03:09:179 (2) - start this at 03:09:037 to follow the vocals? or just add note at 03:09:037 fix

Thats all, great mapset! Have a star and good luck in ranking~

1. Song folder - soft-sliderslide2.wav - I was not able to find a place where you are using this in map. maybe this does not need it. if so plz remove it~
2. KIAI TIME - 01:18:894~01:41:751 - Why does only hard not have this kiaitime? It is most suitable for hard. so I think it should be unified as normal.
3. Song folder - 03 everlasting.mp3 - I felt fade-out to be late a little. Because even if map ends it, volume does not change that much. 03:22:322~about03:26:894 I thought that it was most suitable to fade-out. just thought

1. 00:17:322 (1) - i suggest this spinner end 00:20:608. The spinner begins in piano and finished in piano. It fits also vocal.
2. 00:27:751 (3,1) - add whistle to start of the slider. along with a sound of piano :3 just suggest
3. 00:34:608 (3) - ^ start and repeat
4. 00:36:322 (2) - ^ end
5. 00:37:179 (3) - ^ start
6. 00:56:037 (1) - add finish instead whistle to start of the slider. Because it has finish sound there so I thought that it fit than the whistle.
7. 00:58:322 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. ( Same pattern as 02:20:608 (1) -
8. 01:07:465 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. sound that it is outstanding than 01:06:894. so I think that you put it in the same way is better~ and add clap to end of the slider?
9. 01:08:322 (2) - add whistle?
10. 01:08:894 (3) - add clap for your pattern?
11. 01:09:179 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider?
12. 01:18:894 (1) - add clap to repeat of the slider.
13. 02:18:322 (1) - same as 00:56:037 (1)
14. 02:28:037 (5) - add clap
15. 03:12:608 (2) - add finish to start of the slider? It has a finish sound. It is a similar pattern to other
16. 03:17:751 (1) - hmm.. volume is different from the hard(80%). so I think that you should unify it in either.
    
    just hitsound nazi. very neat map, I say nothing about rhythm and form.

1. 00:01:180~00:10:322 - I'd prefer put whistle to 1,3 than 2,4. It will let a sound of piano be outstanding most. but whistle of 2,4 is not bad, too. so I suggest you put a whistle both. ( i mean put the whistle to white tick of all )
2. 00:17:322 (1) - reason same as Easy. for ex: http://puu.sh/2WDpn.jpg , http://puu.sh/2WDul.jpg ( This is how to match the finish ) and If you change, 00:19:465 - finish here , 00:20:608 - whistle here, Please do not forget.
3. 00:34:894 (4,5,6,7) - hmm... have a sound to be outstanding unlike 00:25:751 (4,5,6,7) - 00:30:322 (5,6,7,8) - here. so I suggest that you do not put the stream here. for ex: http://puu.sh/2WDVh.jpg ( Design image and 00:34:894 - put a whistle with clap ) It will be able to emphasize the sound than the stream.
4. 00:49:751 (2) - design suggest : http://puu.sh/2WEcN.jpg x112,y268. It may break DS to next note. but I preferred the appearance than it
5. 01:21:179 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider. to emphasize the vocal. ( 01:24:608~ It has been already put after it
6. 01:22:322 (5) - ^
7. 01:23:465 (1) - ^
8. 01:27:465 (4) - add finish? It has a finish sound. It is a similar pattern to other
9. 02:16:037 (1) - add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider. it has finish sound there so I thought that it fit than the whistle.
10. 02:19:179 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider. and remove whistle to end of the slider. along with a sound of piano.
11. 02:40:037 (3) - add finish to start of the slider. 02:38:894 (1,2) - If you put a finish here, I think that you should put in the same way as 01:16:608 (1,2,4) -
12. 02:49:751 (4) - same as 01:27:465 (4)
13. 03:17:751 (1) - add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider.

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Gloria Guard

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]

1. Song folder - soft-sliderslide2.wav - I was not able to find a place where you are using this in map. maybe this does not need it. if so plz remove it~
2. KIAI TIME - 01:18:894~01:41:751 - Why does only hard not have this kiaitime? It is most suitable for hard. so I think it should be unified as normal.
3. Song folder - 03 everlasting.mp3 - I felt fade-out to be late a little. Because even if map ends it, volume does not change that much. 03:22:322~about03:26:894 I thought that it was most suitable to fade-out. just thought

[Normal]

1. 00:17:322 (1) - i suggest this spinner end 00:20:608. The spinner begins in piano and finished in piano. It fits also vocal.
2. 00:27:751 (3,1) - add whistle to start of the slider. along with a sound of piano :3 just suggest
3. 00:34:608 (3) - ^ start and repeat
4. 00:36:322 (2) - ^ end
5. 00:37:179 (3) - ^ start
6. 00:56:037 (1) - add finish instead whistle to start of the slider. Because it has finish sound there so I thought that it fit than the whistle.
7. 00:58:322 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. ( Same pattern as 02:20:608 (1) -
8. 01:07:465 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. sound that it is outstanding than 01:06:894. so I think that you put it in the same way is better~ and add clap to end of the slider?
9. 01:08:322 (2) - add whistle?
10. 01:08:894 (3) - add clap for your pattern?
11. 01:09:179 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider?
12. 01:18:894 (1) - add clap to repeat of the slider.
13. 02:18:322 (1) - same as 00:56:037 (1)
14. 02:28:037 (5) - add clap
15. 03:12:608 (2) - add finish to start of the slider? It has a finish sound. It is a similar pattern to other
16. 03:17:751 (1) - hmm.. volume is different from the hard(80%). so I think that you should unify it in either.
    
    just hitsound nazi. very neat map, I say nothing about rhythm and form.

[Hard]

1. 00:01:180~00:10:322 - I'd prefer put whistle to 1,3 than 2,4. It will let a sound of piano be outstanding most. but whistle of 2,4 is not bad, too. so I suggest you put a whistle both. ( i mean put the whistle to white tick of all )
2. 00:17:322 (1) - reason same as Easy. for ex: http://puu.sh/2WDpn.jpg , http://puu.sh/2WDul.jpg ( This is how to match the finish ) and If you change, 00:19:465 - finish here , 00:20:608 - whistle here, Please do not forget.
3. 00:34:894 (4,5,6,7) - hmm... have a sound to be outstanding unlike 00:25:751 (4,5,6,7) - 00:30:322 (5,6,7,8) - here. so I suggest that you do not put the stream here. for ex: http://puu.sh/2WDVh.jpg ( Design image and 00:34:894 - put a whistle with clap ) It will be able to emphasize the sound than the stream.
4. 00:49:751 (2) - design suggest : http://puu.sh/2WEcN.jpg x112,y268. It may break DS to next note. but I preferred the appearance than it
5. 01:21:179 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider. to emphasize the vocal. ( 01:24:608~ It has been already put after it
6. 01:22:322 (5) - ^
7. 01:23:465 (1) - ^
8. 01:27:465 (4) - add finish? It has a finish sound. It is a similar pattern to other
9. 02:16:037 (1) - add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider. it has finish sound there so I thought that it fit than the whistle.
10. 02:19:179 (4) - add whistle to start of the slider. and remove whistle to end of the slider. along with a sound of piano.
11. 02:40:037 (3) - add finish to start of the slider. 02:38:894 (1,2) - If you put a finish here, I think that you should put in the same way as 01:16:608 (1,2,4) -
12. 02:49:751 (4) - same as 01:27:465 (4)
13. 03:17:751 (1) - add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider.

Relaxing map =v= anyway good :3 star☆~

about hitsound is almost... sorry, orz

Good luck~