hi from http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/77516
but overall this was very good. GL~
[General]
(AIBat check) Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Skystar's Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:12:360 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:12:448, ends on 01:23:743
- [SRY's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
(AIBat check) Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Skystar's Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:12:360 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:12:448, ends on 01:23:743
- [SRY's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
[Easy]
- just curious, why you use x1.2 distance snap on easy? normally ppl use =< x1.00
- 00:03:801 - a bit messed up with the next slider place, why not use this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657618
but, it'll change the first one. you can arrange it by your self again if you didn't like252,164,1860,2,0,P|324:164|388:204,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,252,3096,2,0,P|196:252|132:212,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,4684,6,0,P|212:96|228:168,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,5919,2,0,P|376:168|360:96,1,140 - 00:04:684 (1) - finish on head
- 00:10:331 - this spinner shoul start here 00:11:743
- 00:37:154 (3) - your slider pattern imo too plain, why not try to make like this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657626
228,64,36801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,137,37154,2,0,P|242:198|173:241,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,333,38566,6,0,L|384:302,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 00:42:448 - like other pattern, add circle maybe nice here
- 00:46:860 (1,2) - spacing error
- 00:50:919 (2) - why not try to make blanket like this? it's more enjoyable http://puu.sh/2j46v
97,250,50919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,168,51272,2,0,P|92:104|156:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 00:53:743 (2) - i suggest you to do blanket on this note too http://puu.sh/2j4fX
298,95,53743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
306,11,54096,2,0,P|237:16|218:85,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - need more work on the pattern. you'll find it out yourself if there's pattern should use blanket like this one 01:12:448
- 01:09:625 (1) - change this slider t repeat slider like this, it's more fit with the vocal http://puu.sh/2j4qf
- 01:20:919 (1) - ^
- 01:22:684 - a bit overlap here, wanna try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657653
316,196,84096,2,0,P|260:244|196:244,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,200,85154,2,0,P|76:144|76:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Normal]
- 00:01:860 (3) - why you no use finish on the head?
- 00:04:684 (1) - it'll be crunchy if you add finish here too
- 00:05:037 (2) - larger the length of the slider to fit the music like this http://puu.sh/2j4TW
- 00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the head
- 00:10:860 (2,3) - add finish, imo it's catchy
- 00:27:272 (1,2) - a bit strange, felt better to change it like this http://puu.sh/2j5c7
or try this one if you like:109,151,27272,6,0,P|62:166|38:221,1,100
45,269,27801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,235,28154,2,0,P|202:223|233:162,1,100
331,110,28860,1,0,0:0:0:0: - 00:35:743 - try to do same rhythm pattern like above ^
- 00:38:566 - ^
- 01:10:154 - ^
- 00:55:154 (1,2) - better flow like this http://puu.sh/2j5jY
- 00:58:860 (2) - remove this slider and place note here 00:58:860 - and 00:59:213
- 01:03:978 (1) - move the slider point to x:312 y:88 for better flow
- 01:15:801 (2) - make rhythm like this, is more better and it won't make overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657679
[SRY's Hard]
nice diff. btw
nice diff. btw
- 00:32:037 (2,3) - more wavy o.o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657688
- 00:38:566 (1) - for better flow, move to x:164 y:212
- 00:38:919 (2) - followed above, move this note to x:340 y:324
- 00:52:684 (1,2) - add clap on the tail, feels better
- 00:56:566 (4) - why no stack this under slider 00:55:507 (1)
[Insane]
- (AIBat check) Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:59:666 - snap to 00:59:654
- 00:04:684 (1,2,3) - make better flow like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657714
68,160,4684,5,4,0:0:0:0:
172,160,4860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,264,5037,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,160,5213,2,0,L|328:160,2,47.5
68,160,5566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,160,5743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,264,5919,5,0,0:0:0:0: - 00:05:566 (1) - remove NC
- 00:15:625 (8) - this tail of slider not stack properly with the head of this sliders 00:14:390 (5)
- 00:15:978 (1) - not stack properly with the slider before
- 00:19:507 - remove NC here to fit ha ha vocal and don't spent too much combo in short time
- 00:20:213 - remove this NC and put NC here 00:20:390 - cause it match with ha ha vocal imo
- 00:35:390 - ugly slider detect, change to normal slider like this 00:35:919
- 00:47:743 - remove NC, the reason was same as above
- 00:48:096 - ^
- 01:00:448 - ^
- 01:00:801 - ^
- 01:05:566 - remove one with slider point, so the slider doesn't have strange look
- 01:24:801 (5) - NC and remove NC here 01:24:978
- this diff more nice then easiest level of yours.
[Skystar's Insane]
maybe i just suggest to put more work on Easy, Normal and Skystar's Insane- 00:01:154 (1,2) - make these slider point straight
- 00:10:860 (1,1,1) - this overlap and spent too much NC
- 00:26:743 (7) - move to x:364 y:168, for more better flow
- 00:28:507 (4) - not stacked properly
- 00:33:625 (2) - stack this under first slider and rotate clock wise
- 00:34:154 (3) - move to x:248 y:164, followed above
- 00:34:948 (5) - stack this under slider 4 head
- 00:38:037 (7) - stack this upper the next slider, rotate anti-clockwise
- 00:44:213 (1) - make this slider wavy like this lol http://puu.sh/2j7e9
- 00:47:743 (1) , 00:48:096 (1) - remove NC because you spent too much
- 00:55:154 (10) - NC because follow the vocal instead
- 00:55:507 (1) - remove NC
- 00:56:566 - NC and remove the next NC
- 01:06:448 - NC here, follow the vocal
- 01:06:625 (11) - make like this? http://puu.sh/2j7tT
- 01:06:801 - remove NC
- 01:07:860 (7) - stack this head of slider with 01:06:272 (9)
- 01:10:154 - overlap and spent too much NC
but overall this was very good. GL~