1. 00:22:232 (1,2,3,4) - Not a really big fan of back-and-forth pattern, to be honest >< - imo, you can place (2,3) further ((2) on x:464 y:368 and (3) on x:504 y:264) to form a square jump here, it will play more natural this way imo
2. 00:28:355 (3,4) - Err... Because the previous (1) is a 1/1 slider, I think it's better to unify these two into a 1/1 slider as well..
3. 00:30:498 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same here, back-and-forth doesn't play too natural imo - perhaps try to move (2,4) to form a fan formation here? (one thing to note: do not move (6) as it already belong to its place)
   
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4. 00:33:865 (6,...) - Hearing from how the song progresses here, using 30% volume for the S:C2 clap sounds very abrupt. Perhaps, add a crescendo here (10% -> 15% -> 20% -> ...) only for the claps?
5. 00:44:273 (1) - (optional) I'd rather CTRL+R this to make the jump on 00:44:885 (2,1) more readable
6. 00:48:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hmm, I don't think you should go put all whistles here 1/2 apart, you can go more creative with the hitsound here imo - try to put whistles only on (2) and (7), the rhythm will be more unique this way~
7. 00:53:610 (6,7) - Try to put these two more to the bottom-right, so (6) won't be overlapped by (2)'s end?
8. 00:59:885 (4,5,7,8) - (optional) This is a good place to use accelerated spacing, to be honest (:
   
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9. 01:06:161 (6,1) - This jump is too wide and sudden - it ruins the part around here's atmosphere. Perhaps you can put it stacked on 01:05:089 (4)'s start? Will be more comfortable to play this way~
10. 01:23:151 (1) - Err... Perhaps you can break your previous rhythm's consistency for a whistle here? Fits a lot imo :3
11. 01:31:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't aim for a triangle in (7,1,3) - aim for a good arc centered in (1) instead :
    
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    80,288,91416,1,8
    432,96,91722,1,8
    156,300,92028,1,4
    356,84,92334,1,4
    228,264,92640,1,8
    284,120,92946,1,8

12. 01:38:151 (7,3,3,...) - - Should the whistling be consistent every 8/1 here, on the chorus? No. It's best to put the whistles every time the melody hits high notes, such as on these three~
13. 01:50:855 (2) - Err, is this meant to encircle (7)? I can't get the curve's direction o.o
14. 02:11:365 (4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm, I think it's best to let these five's distance equal to (1):
    
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15. 02:17:028 (8) - Really sounds lacking of whistle for the ending here, orz ><

1. 00:27:130 (1) - I don't really think this should be placed slightly higher compared to your previous slider (placed perfectly beside is better imo) - plays fine though
2. 00:28:967 (5) - (optional) I think it's best to put this lower so it doesn't touch (4) (I placed this on x:288 y:192) - the jump will be more natural this way imo
3. 00:33:865 (6) - Add a slight curve downward here, to let it flow better with your next notes? Don't worry, because your approach rate is fast enough, overlap with (4)'s path won't happen~
4. 00:40:447 (3) - I don't think there's anything significant to follow on the blue tick here... Remove clap? This suggestion applies for next parts like this
5. 00:42:743 (3) - (optional) For flow, I think you can curve this upward and move (4) downward a bit, will be cute imo~
6. 00:47:028 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 after your last note instead of 1/2 - it will blend better to the music this way
7. 00:52:845 (5) - (optional) Use a manual stacking here with (5) slightly curved plays better compared to stack imo:
   
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8. 00:58:202 (4,5) - Minor adjustment here, one grid left for these two?
9. 01:02:028 (2) - Err, is it intentional to use a 3/2 slider here? Judging from your previous rhythms, it would be better to use a 1/2 slider with a note 1/4 after to keep consistent imo
10. 01:20:243 (5,6,...) - Dunno why, the notes' placement around here just seems... kinda forced. Perhaps jump like this will work better?
    
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11. 01:41:212 (3,4) - (optional) Your next (1,2,3,4,5) forms a very sharp angle, and it doesn't look really good orz (I suggest to stack these two to get more freedom to place (1,2,3,4,5))
12. 01:50:089 (4) - Add whistle to both slider's start and end - you've done the same hitsounding on 01:42:743 (6), it's best to use here as well xD
13. 01:54:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well, I know what you're up to here, but (1,2,3,4) is quite hard to read - perhaps make these part's spacing more sparse between each other? (yes, this increases readability (: )
    
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14. 02:01:722 (3) - (optional) CTRL+R this so it will form a symmetrical jump along with (4)?
15. 02:15:498 (3) - Hmm, I know it's not a must, but I really recommend to add a note 1/4 and 1/2 after this note (and let the spinner start on 02:16:263) as the music still continues there

1. 00:28:355 (5) - Err, considering your next (1) is a straight short slider, I think slider shape like this fits better here:
   
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2. 00:33:253 (4) - Same with [Peaceful] about the clap progression. However, because this diff isn't too hectic, this blend isn't really necessary to be honest (but still good if done)
3. 00:41:824 (1) - (optional) I'd rather curve this encircling (4) to tidy up this part (it even flows good with your next (2)!) but this is purely optional
4. 00:45:804 (3,4) - Don't force symmetry before the spinner here - I think it's best to place these two horizontally to the right, the angle won't look forced this way
5. 00:54:987 (2,4) - Here's one fancy thing to do here: Move these two few grids down (I moved both to y:324) so (2,3,4,1) will form a great zig-zag formation ~
6. 01:02:947 (4) - I personally feel the whistle should be on (4)'s end instead of (1) due to how the melody sounds here, but it's not a must
7. 01:10:294 (3,1) - Don't force (1) to curve like that - just curve it naturally, and use (1) as a reference to curve (3) as well:
   
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8. 01:16:110 (1,2) - For sliders like this, would be nice to give more space between the two red waypoints to let it flow more naturally, for example on (1) I put the first red waypoint on x:199 y:312 and the second one on x:162 y:295
9. 01:18:559 (1) - Rather than a straight slider, I really recommend you to let this encircle (3) instead - this way, you'll get more freedom to put your next (2,3) thus building a better flow
10. 01:22:538 (2) - Won't be bad imo to start the "double whistle" pattern here by adding a whistle on slider's end (the music fits for it anyway)
11. 01:38:151 (1,2,3) - These three's pattern doesn't look really solid - why not moving (2) to y:260 instead and adjust (3) afterwards, so (1,2,3,4) will form a solid one-sided diamond?
12. 01:42:130 (3) - (optional) Make this encircle your next (1) outward instead? It will flow good with both (2) and (1)
13. 01:57:743 (1,2,3) - Why three notes here? Use a 1/1 slider like you mostly did before sounds more fitting (especially if you used tick rate 2 here)
14. 02:01:722 (3) - Same as 01:42:130 (3) here, make this encircle (1) outward?
15. 02:07:845 (2,3) - I like your idea to emphasize the bass sound here, but it doesn't mean you should stop the whistle - add whistle on both slider's start
16. 02:16:110 (2,3) - (optional) (3)'s arrangement looks quite forced for the ending imo, copy-pasted slider like this flows/plays better for the ending I think:
    
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1. 00:27:130 (2,1) - idk if a jump here is a good idea... You can simply move (2) lower and rotate it clockwise, though~
2. 00:46:722 (3) - (optional) Make this encircle (2) instead of stack? (stacking is quite hard to read for beginners, thus encircling this will play more natural imo)
3. 00:51:620 (2,3,1) - Err... I don't like how (2,3,1) goes too linear, I think it's best to let (1) encircle your next (2) and adjust the previous (2) from it. My main point is, place (3) higher than your two sliders to avoid over-linearity here:
   
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4. 00:58:967 (1) - Finish on slider's start here? The song alters around here, so it's better to put on a finish to emphasize the new part~
5. 01:03:865 (1,3) - (optional) In particular order, rotate each 55° clockwise and 55° counter-clockwise selection centre? You still have a lot of playfield above, this placement will look less forced imo :3
6. 01:21:008 (5) - Add whistle to accompany the background synth?
7. 01:32:028 (4) - Move the inherit section exactly to the slider's end - this is to prevent the slider-slide sounds not in the right place
8. 01:38:151 (1,3) - Why stopping the whistles in the chorus? I think, it's better to use a whistle consistently every 2/1 starting from here for the entire chorus
9. 01:55:906 (1) - There are many more fitting ways to shape a symmetrical slider here... Perhaps try this one instead? It fits with the song's atmosphere more imo:
   
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10. 02:09:987 (2,3) - (optional) I'd rather move (2) more to the left and (3) to the bottom-left of the screen to let (1,2,3,4) forms an arc, but this is purely optional

1. Boss Taiko Oni has a letter box during break while other diffs don't.Delete it for consistence.

1. AR+1?

1. 01:39:681(4) - spacing
2. 02:16:722(3) - spacing

1. 02:14:874 - This green line is Unsnapped.
2. 00:46:722(7) - up a grid(nazi)
3. 01:06:161(5) - add a clap here?
4. 01:30:804(1) - left a grid(nazi)

1. AR9 seems better?(since this diff is mapped as BPM 196)
2. 02:04:477(4) - Ctrl+R?

Hi backstep

• General
  ● change size spinner-background.png - 1023x692

• Quiet
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 01:55:906 (1) - looks a little not symmetric
  ● 02:03:865 (2) - put down on y:340? :3 symmetry to 02:01:416 (3)
  ● 02:06:314 (4) - 2 grid left on x:344 - center
  ● 02:13:661 (2) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:164 y:188...symmetry to 02:11:212 (4)
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  So relax diff

• Restful
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:24:681 (1) - not needed point on slider http://puu.sh/y2zE use this http://puu.sh/y2A5
  ● 00:29:885 (1) - previous distance 1.75...looks strange :3
  ● 01:24:681 (2) - prev distance 0.94 ^
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Not bad

• Spinboxer
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 01:26:824 (x) - ad note...or move end this slider 01:26:518 (2) - on 01:26:824 :3
  ● 01:39:987 (6) - NC
  ● 01:51:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - really hard part...maybe make it easier this?
  ● 01:54:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^ and random...it's no good = =
  ● 01:56:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  ● 02:04:630 (6) - NC
  ● 02:08:916 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too hard again = =
  ● 02:11:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
  ● 02:13:814 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ for example 02:14:273 (5) - prev distance 4.79 D:
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Looks good...and nice hitsound, but kiai is really hard...it's hard diff or insane? o.o

• Peaceful
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:28:049 (2) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:427 y:128
  ● 00:57:130 (2) - ^ x:257 y:336
  ● 01:06:161 (6) - ^ x:343 y144
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 00:10:025 (5) - add clap at start slider?
  ___________________
  Mmm...so symmetric...I like this diff

Awesome track and map Starrrrr if you revived it

a3272509123 wrote:

From the challenge queue~
[General]

1. Boss Taiko Oni has a letter box during break while other diffs don't.Delete it for consistence.

It's not have break time for Taiko, so it's unnecessary to check it out

[Quiet]

1. AR+1?

X
Really relaxing diff,nothing to be pointed out!

[Restful]

1. 01:39:681(4) - spacing
2. 02:16:722(3) - spacing

Fixed

[Peaceful]

1. AR9 seems better?(since this diff is mapped as BPM 196)
2. 02:04:477(4) - Ctrl+R?

Fixed both.
Insane diff orz

That's all!Really relax song and nice mapset~Good luck~

IchiGUN wrote:

Hi backstep

mod from Challenge Queue, so just suggestion ^^

• General
  ● change size spinner-background.png - 1023x692

Changed picture =[]='
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• Quiet
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 01:55:906 (1) - looks a little not symmetric
  Yeah, it's a little but not big problem.
  ● 02:03:865 (2) - put down on y:340? :3 symmetry to 02:01:416 (3)
  okay
  ● 02:06:314 (4) - 2 grid left on x:344 - center
  spacing other way.
  ● 02:13:661 (2) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:164 y:188...symmetry to 02:11:212 (4)
  spacing at center.
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  So relax diff

===========================

• Restful
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:24:681 (1) - not needed point on slider http://puu.sh/y2zE use this http://puu.sh/y2A5
  ● 00:29:885 (1) - previous distance 1.75...looks strange :3
  ● 01:24:681 (2) - prev distance 0.94 ^
  Fixed all (Forgot look this ;w;)
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Not bad

[/list]===========================

• Peaceful
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:28:049 (2) - grid snap and distance off...and move on x:427 y:128
  ● 00:57:130 (2) - ^ x:257 y:336
  ● 01:06:161 (6) - ^ x:343 y144
  Don't fix
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 00:10:025 (5) - add clap at start slider?
  Nope.
  ___________________
  Mmm...so symmetric...I like this diff

Awesome track and map Starrrrr if you revived it
Good luck for rank

mjw5150 wrote:

from challenge queue~

[General]
2 insane+1 normal+1 easy
where is hard lol

[Quiet]
00:30:804 - add whistle here like other slider?
02:11:212 (4,1,2,3,1) - move 1 grid left with all objects?looks better
Fixed.
[Restful]
fine~

[Spinboxer]
fine~

[Peaceful]
01:11:212 (7,1,2) - a little confused for me,even though this is an insane diff,the spacing changed so suddenly and large
I think it's fine.
good luck~

Miya wrote:

Hey, from challange queue. Because you win the challange queue, i will mod this map.
See you, later~

1. It seems good.

1. No spinner? Why? I think you can add spinner in this diff by following normal example at 00:46:722- 00:49:171. No spinner will cause player have same score in ranking list, and this will make angry player that got same score but have lower ranking in the ranking list.
2. 01:16:110 (1) - How about remove a new combo here? I think it's more consistant for your combo consistencies.
3. 01:53:457 (1) - Remove new combo here too. Doesn't consistant imo.
4. 01:55:906 (1) - You miss clap at both of this slider start and end. It's breaking your clap consistencies.

1. Circle size -1? It will make circle size distribution even throught the mapset.
2. 00:53:151 (2) - You miss a clap here at slider repeat.
3. 01:18:559 (1) - You miss a clap again at this slider end.
4. 01:33:253 (3) - How about a new combo here for the ending finish sound?
5. 01:47:028 (4) - Orz, you miss a clap again at this slider repeat.
6. 01:55:294 (5,1) - I think you should switch new comboes here for consistencies.
7. 01:57:743 (1) - You miss a clap again at the slider end.
8. 02:11:518 (3,1,2,3) - The pattern is a bit crumpled. How about make it like this? > http://puu.sh/zVoI

1. 00:57:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Orz, this 1/4 spaced stream is surprise me. Really. It's too hard for hard diff it self. You should lower the spacing of this stream to decrease it dificultness and can be more playable. Plus it doesn't consistant with your next rythim at 01:08:151 (5,6,7,8) -
2. Omg, the jump at the kiai time is really hard to play. It's more appropiate for insane diff. And this is make the gap between normal and hard become large . Really, the jump at kiai time is almost like an insane. And i agree with Roodie about 01:54:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , that pattern is really hard to read for hard diff.

1. This diff doesn't have a spinner too. ._. . It's better to change this jump into spinner 00:48:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2. 00:45:957- Delete this timing point and then 00:46:110 (3) - change the hitsound at this slider start to clap. Hitsound here doesn't consistant. Delete timing point 00:46:263- too if you do this.
3. 00:57:743 (5) - You miss a clap again here at this slider end.

Miya wrote:

Orz, sorry sorry for late mod. I'm bussy with school stuff etc and causing me didn't have a mood for mod. ;_;

General

1. It seems good.

Quiet

1. No spinner? Why? I think you can add spinner in this diff by following normal example at 00:46:722- 00:49:171. No spinner will cause player have same score in ranking list, and this will make angry player that got same score but have lower ranking in the ranking list.
2. 01:16:110 (1) - How about remove a new combo here? I think it's more consistant for your combo consistencies.
3. 01:53:457 (1) - Remove new combo here too. Doesn't consistant imo.
4. 01:55:906 (1) - You miss clap at both of this slider start and end. It's breaking your clap consistencies.

Restful

1. Circle size -1? It will make circle size distribution even throught the mapset.
2. 00:53:151 (2) - You miss a clap here at slider repeat.
3. 01:18:559 (1) - You miss a clap again at this slider end.
4. 01:33:253 (3) - How about a new combo here for the ending finish sound?
5. 01:47:028 (4) - Orz, you miss a clap again at this slider repeat.
6. 01:55:294 (5,1) - I think you should switch new comboes here for consistencies.
7. 01:57:743 (1) - You miss a clap again at the slider end.
8. 02:11:518 (3,1,2,3) - The pattern is a bit crumpled. How about make it like this? > http://puu.sh/zVoI

Peaceful

1. This diff doesn't have a spinner too. ._. . It's better to change this jump into spinner 00:48:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2. 00:45:957- Delete this timing point and then 00:46:110 (3) - change the hitsound at this slider start to clap. Hitsound here doesn't consistant. Delete timing point 00:46:263- too if you do this.
3. 00:57:743 (5) - You miss a clap again here at this slider end.

Good map. But the hard diff is really like insane diff, thus making the diff spread is not balanced. ;_;
I just give you a star for now.
Good luck~

Miya wrote:

Orz, sorry sorry for late mod. I'm bussy with school stuff etc and causing me didn't have a mood for mod. ;_;

Spinboxer

1. 00:57:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Orz, this 1/4 spaced stream is surprise me. Really. It's too hard for hard diff it self. You should lower the spacing of this stream to decrease it dificultness and can be more playable. Plus it doesn't consistant with your next rythim at 01:08:151 (5,6,7,8) -
   It's not "Hard" diff orz... It's a Hyper diff. also."Plus it doesn't consistant with your next rythim at 01:08:151 (5,6,7,8) - " It's 01:26:977 (3,4,5,6,7,1) -
2. Omg, the jump at the kiai time is really hard to play. It's more appropiate for insane diff. And this is make the gap between normal and hard become large . Really, the jump at kiai time is almost like an insane. And i agree with Roodie about 01:54:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , that pattern is really hard to read for hard diff. diff spread issue :<

SPOILER

Sprite,Foreground,TopLeft,"SB\pole.png",10,0
 F,0,0,153391,1,1 

Niva wrote:

Pole SB fix (as you requested) :

SPOILER

Sprite,Foreground,TopLeft,"SB\pole.png",10,0
 F,0,0,153391,1,1 

Also please revive this as soon as you finish your Hard diff and resize fail-background.png to 1024x768 >_<

1. 00:19:783 (1) - Starting this slider from ~x:86 y:133 (and keeping the endpoint unchanged) gives a better flow imo, but of course it's purely optional~
2. 00:22:232 (1) - For flow again, perhaps add a very slight curve downward here? Looks cuter with (3,4,5) xD
3. 00:29:273 (7,1) - Uhm, idk why you placed (1) directly beside (7) here, it kills the arc imo... imo it's better to stack (5) to (3) and readjust the curve with less narrow angle, so it will fully form an arc:
   
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4. 00:34:477 (1) - (optional) Curving this downward instead will greatly increase the flow imo (instead of curving upward) - also perhaps try to use more space for the straight line:
   

   308,300,34477,6,0,B|340:311|371:300|371:300|400:300,1,89.9999952316285,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 00:42:130 (1) - Missing clap on slider's end, is this intentional?
6. 00:42:743 (2,3) - Ah, I much prefer to fully keep symmetry like this here, it'll look less forced imo:
   
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7. 00:42:743 (2,3) - Also with this slider, actually you can select both and then CTRL+G for a variative jump, but it could be too tricky... Your choice though (:
8. 00:45:192 (2,3) - Here, I really recommend to CTRL+G either (2) or (3) (don't both), small jump like that plays fancy before the spinner actually xD
9. 00:54:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - Err, what happened to the pentagon here (especially (3,4,5)) orz >_<
   

   419,27,54069,5,4,0:0:0
   498,109,54375,1,0,0:0:0
   446,211,54681,1,8,0:0:0
   336,190,54987,1,0,0:0:0
   314,74,55294,2,0,B|294:96|222:48|182:76,2,134.99998882413,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 01:03:865 (1) - Minor stuff, move to ~x:449 y:197 to avoid overlap?
11. 01:14:273 (2,3,4) - The jump on (3,4) looks extremely forced here imo, I suggest something like this (with 120° rotation) instead, (3)'s end is stacked to (1) and (4) will also flow much better to your next (1) xD
    
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12. 01:22:538 (4) - (optional) Uhm, don't really like the sudden linear slider here personally... Slight bezier curve (pointing to (3)'s end) flows better imo >_<
13. 01:37:538 (1,1) - Placing these two lower to form a triangle avoids clustering imo:
    
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14. 01:37:538 (1,1) - Also with these two, actually you can also play with manual stacking here, it feels dramatic (:
15. 01:45:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - (optional) A soft anti-jump arc like this flows much better compared with your current sharp jumps imo: (also the new combo is already intuitive enough on this point)
    
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16. 01:57:130 (1) - Minor stuff, move to ~x:246 y:207 to make it perfectly in the center of the square
17. 02:02:334 (3) - Whistle on slider's start, and finish on slider's end here?
18. 02:15:804 (1,2,3) - Uhm, idk why you're using this rhythm orz... Hearing from the piano's progression this one is much more intuitive imo (maybe you can make a small pentagon jump here with this rhythm) :
    
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-[NYAN]- wrote:

hi~

Spinboxer

02:14:874 - This green line is unsnapped.
Fixed.
Peaceful

AR-1
I see other player said about this, so changed.
00:44:273 (1) - Ctrl+G ,if you use previous slider,the jump is suddenly.
okay
00:59:885 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't think this queue is a good choice,because this cast is not fit this song.
I think it's okay (make player to some new rhythm pattern)
01:17:181 (3) - This jump is too suddenly.
01:39:069 (1,2,3) - This jump is suddenly.
01:37:691 (4) - clap
01:37:232 - to 01:36:926 (8) - you can add green line to gradual changed volume.
01:42:436 (4) - Ctrl+G, it's more fit in this songs.
01:57:130 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:58:661 (1,2,3) - This jump is suddenly.
About jump, I want to keep it >3
other diff find nothing

• • The metadata don't have the TitleUnicode and ArtistUnicode, you have to fix this problem

• - 01:03:253 (x) - I would like to see a note here to keep your rhythm

• - 01:58:661 (x) - Add a note here to keep your rhythm too?

• - 00:27:130 (4) - New combo to follow your combo pattern

• - 01:28:967 (2) - This sounds a little off in my opinion, I suggest to remove this note and move this slider here 01:28:967, something like this

• -- Lol'd, patterns <3

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi.

General

• • The metadata don't have the TitleUnicode and ArtistUnicode, you have to fix this problem

Quiet

• - 01:03:253 (x) - I would like to see a note here to keep your rhythm

X
Restful

• - 01:58:661 (x) - Add a note here to keep your rhythm too?

okay
Tranquil

• - 00:27:130 (4) - New combo to follow your combo pattern

forgot it, so changed
Peaceful

• -- Lol'd, patterns <3

lol

Cool.

Wataru wrote:

' ')/


01:05:702 - ผมว่าตรงนี้สลับด้านให้เริ่มที่ด้านซ้ายดีกว่านะครับ เพราะมันไหลมากกว่า

01:40:140 - เพิ่มโน๊ตตรงนี้ดีมั้ยกว่า เพราะเพลงมันรัว

โชคดีครับ เพลงเพราะ แมพเยี่ยม

+1 star

Nichiyouki wrote:

สวัสดีครับ

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

Tranquil

1. 00:37:845 (2,3,4) - ลองลงไปสัก 1 ช่อง มันจะสวยมากขึ้น
   จัดไป
2. 00:44:885 (1) - จังหวะนี้ ควรจะใส่เสียง clap นะครับ
   ลืม lol
3. 00:45:804 (3) - ^ โดยใส่ที่ช่วงเริ่มของ slider และอีกอย่างคือที่นี่กับ (2) ไม่สมมาตรกัน น่าจะย้ายลงไปอยู่ที่ x:360 y:296
   แก้ละจ้า
4. 01:12:436 (5) - น่าจะควรใส่ NC ไว้ที่นี่นะครับ
   ดูแล้วไม่จำเป็นนะ เพราะยังเห็นโน้ต (6) ชัดเจนอยู่ -...-
5. 02:02:334 (3) - ควรใส่ finish ที่ช่วงสิ้นสุดของ slider
   จัดไปจ้า
6. 02:04:738 (6,1) - ใส่ finish ที่ช่วงสิ้นสุดของ slider ใน (6) แต่เอา finish ที่อยู่ใน (1) ออก

โอเช =w=
ไม่ต้องให้ kd นะครับ เพราะผมเคยได้มาแล้ว

ผมจะส่งดาวไปให้ และขอให้โชคดีนะครับ

1. sliderfollowcircle.png is more thicker than hitcircleoverlay.png , looks strange...

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:18:559 (1,2,3,4) - Make a great square looks better ( Move circle 4 up 2 grids and left 2 grids to make a square)
   2. 01:23:457 (1,2,3) - I would like to make a change on this pattern , try this? Use slider 3 encircle circle 01:26:518 (4) - looks really great
      
      Picture

      
   3. 01:28:967 (1,2,3) - Right angle here is not give the pattern a nice flow , try to make them more radians?
   4. 01:38:304 - Unused Green Timing Section , remove it
   5. 01:43:661 (1,2) - Hmm... This flow ... , I prefer something else like this , The flow is not fit me at all >~<
      
      Picture

      
   6. 01:55:906 (1) - This slider is not symmetrical correctly , I make a symmetrical one for you! here is my code
      
      Code

      184,376,115906,6,0,B|200:348|232:348|232:348|236:324|256:316|256:316|276:324|280:348|280:348|312:348|328:376,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   7. 02:06:314 (1) - Same as above , I make a symmetrical one for you~ :3
      
      Code

      336,168,126314,2,0,B|316:120|256:100|196:120|176:168,1,199.999980926514,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   8. 02:16:110 (1) - This New Combo is not needed in my opinion , Remove it?
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:24:681 (1,2) - Hmm... The sliderslide sound is not good for me , silence it sounds better
   2. 01:38:151 (1) - Add a whistle here is not a bad idea , sounds great

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections , leave one and remove one , this is unrankable , because both sections option is different
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:50:702 (3,4) - Bad Flow >~< the flow is very bad between 00:50:396 (2,3) - , Probably try my arrengement?
      
      Picture

      
   2. 01:02:947 (4) - Curve this slider to the other side can get a better flow
   3. 01:07:232 (2) - Same suggestion as above
   4. 01:23:457 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - About these the same slider , I would suggested you make more changes , a bit boring while playing >~<
   5. 01:38:304 - Unused Green Timing Section~
   6. 01:47:947 (1) - Wave slider will make the flow much better ~
      
      Picture

      
   7. 01:57:130 (4,1) - These two objects are a bit orderless in my opinion , Use a circular slider is enough ~
      
      Picture

      
   8. 02:15:804 (1,2,3,4) - Looks very very crowded , try to make them more comfortable ~
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nothing to say~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections here , please remove one
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:42:743 (2,3) - Move slider (2) 1 grid right , and (3) 1 grid left looks better
   2. 01:29:885 (5) - Curve this slider a bit ?
   3. 01:57:130 (1) - I would like you move this circle to x:418 y:348 , the flow is fitting me very well , I don't know what other players think about though :p
   4. Not much to say , this diff is great
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:07:232 (4) - Add a finish end?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. Nothing! Really great difficulty!!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. None!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections here , please remove one
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:53:763 (7,8) - Move these two up 2 grid together , make the same spacing
   2. 01:45:191 (10) - Roteta this slider by 30 ?
   3. Amazing jumps!!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nothing~

Taiko BG

1. sliderfollowcircle.png is more thicker than hitcircleoverlay.png , looks strange...

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:18:559 (1,2,3,4) - Make a great square looks better ( Move circle 4 up 2 grids and left 2 grids to make a square)
      okay changed.
   2. 01:23:457 (1,2,3) - I would like to make a change on this pattern , try this? Use slider 3 encircle circle 01:26:518 (4) - looks really great
      
      Picture

      
      okay
   3. 01:28:967 (1,2,3) - Right angle here is not give the pattern a nice flow , try to make them more radians?
      fixed.
   4. 01:38:304 - Unused Green Timing Section , remove it
      oops!! remove it >3
   5. 01:43:661 (1,2) - Hmm... This flow ... , I prefer something else like this , The flow is not fit me at all >~<
      
      Picture

      
      fixed.
   6. 01:55:906 (1) - This slider is not symmetrical correctly , I make a symmetrical one for you! here is my code
      
      Code

      184,376,115906,6,0,B|200:348|232:348|232:348|236:324|256:316|256:316|276:324|280:348|280:348|312:348|328:376,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

      thanks >w<
   7. 02:06:314 (1) - Same as above , I make a symmetrical one for you~ :3
      
      Code

      336,168,126314,2,0,B|316:120|256:100|196:120|176:168,1,199.999980926514,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

      same as above lol
   8. 02:16:110 (1) - This New Combo is not needed in my opinion , Remove it?
   removed it.
   
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:24:681 (1,2) - Hmm... The sliderslide sound is not good for me , silence it sounds better
      nope.
   2. 01:38:151 (1) - Add a whistle here is not a bad idea , sounds great

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections , leave one and remove one , this is unrankable , because both sections option is different
   fixed.
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:50:702 (3,4) - Bad Flow >~< the flow is very bad between 00:50:396 (2,3) - , Probably try my arrengement?
      
      Picture

      
   2. 01:02:947 (4) - Curve this slider to the other side can get a better flow
   3. 01:07:232 (2) - Same suggestion as above
   4. 01:23:457 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - About these the same slider , I would suggested you make more changes , a bit boring while playing >~<
   5. 01:38:304 - Unused Green Timing Section~
   6. 01:47:947 (1) - Wave slider will make the flow much better ~
      
      Picture

      
   7. 01:57:130 (4,1) - These two objects are a bit orderless in my opinion , Use a circular slider is enough ~
      
      Picture

      
   8. 02:15:804 (1,2,3,4) - Looks very very crowded , try to make them more comfortable ~
   fixed all restful diff orz ._. (old beatmap = old style)
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nothing to say~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections here , please remove one
   fixed again ._.　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:42:743 (2,3) - Move slider (2) 1 grid right , and (3) 1 grid left looks better
   2. 01:29:885 (5) - Curve this slider a bit ?
   3. 01:57:130 (1) - I would like you move this circle to x:418 y:348 , the flow is fitting me very well , I don't know what other players think about though :p
      disagree about this suggest, I feel weird when change it orz ._.
   4. Not much to say , this diff is great
   I think this diff is great too... (it's 2012 beatmap style lol)
   
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:07:232 (4) - Add a finish end?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections here , please remove one
   fixed again and again ._.
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:53:763 (7,8) - Move these two up 2 grid together , make the same spacing
      okay
   2. 01:45:191 (10) - Roteta this slider by 30 ?
      fixed with 30 anti-clockwise
   3. Amazing jumps!!
   it's crazy jumps lol
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nothing~

Taiko BG

Tweelon wrote:

Y U Graveyard fckin awesome peaceful map moreover with awesome dj. Well I really like it.

Frostmourne wrote:

hi !

General
inconsistent .osu file version,this can be fixed by editing something in every diffs , just to make some changes
also inconsistent TitleUnicode ArtistUnicode so you have to add them manually in .osu files
Tips : U know, It's can make it easy with press F4 on edit mode (it will fill Title & Artist Unicode atomatically) my mistake

Quiet
01:24:681 (3) - miss clap at repeat point here
Oh god, i forgot xD

Restful
AR-1 ? , it feels too fast for this diff
01:06:008 (5) - whistle here as it sounds similar to 01:04:783 (2) - (tik tik)
01:15:498 (3) - ^ tail of this slider , quite similar reason
01:20:702 (4) - ^
01:25:600 (7) - ^
01:29:579 (2) - last point only ^
01:57:743 (1) - miss clap at the tail
02:16:722 (3) - maybe clap with S:C2 is good enough for the very end here
Agree with your idea, so fixed all.

Tranquil
AR-1 ? quite fast imo , like Restful diff
00:35:396 (2) - move left and up both 2 grid (will be x:452 y:252) it will balance spacing better
02:02:334 (3) - head of slider here , normally you use whistle for cymbal sound in the drum but this point , it sounds awkward so it better be drum with S:C2
same idea
02:07:232 (4) - head slider with S:C2 clap again orz...
Nice idea for this diff, fixed.

Spinboxer
fine but.. don't forget to update the version , titleunicode and artist unicode after being done this !

Peaceful
00:48:100 (1) - is this intentional? , this spinner is too fast and suddenly followed by a slider so maybe shorten this spinner 1/4 beat ?
intentional ?, yes coz it must have at least spinner on this diff. But it shorten spinner, so delete some note to make longer spinner.
01:23:151 (1) - clap ?
forgot LOL
01:33:253 (1) - from this note to 01:36:926 (8) - , maybe reduce volume for this section to 30-40% ? and gradually increase its volume to 70 at the end of the part (01:36:926 (8) - ) as the song sounds like a slow part before the chorus so it might be a great idea to gradually increase the volume inside this section (something like 30->35->40->45->50 on the volume)
Nice idea, fixed.
02:06:773 (6) - add new combo here , will automatically shape a star and easier to read
okay
Taiko diff is fine but you should make an update (maybe move one note > update , and then move back to the old version > update)
Call me in-game when you are done !

Frostmourne wrote:

cool SB !

Royston wrote:

Lol, naming the hardest difficulty "Peaceful". What a troll.

Nice map by the way.