-[NYAN]- wrote:

[Easy]

00:32:060 - 加上break time --恩。。之前的版本有人说这里不要break time我就不加了
00:33:609 (1) - finish in slider's start --fixed
00:35:157 (1) - 去掉finish --fixed
00:40:964 (2) - ^ --fixed
00:42:512 - 去掉finish --fixed
00:45:996 - 加finish --fixed
00:47:544 (1) - 去掉finish和nc --fixed
00:49:093 (1,2,1,2) - 同改过的00:45:996 (1,2,1,2) - --fixed
00:52:189 (1) - 加上finish 于滑条的开始 --fixed
00:58:383 (1,1) - 两个滑条的开始处添加finish --fixed
01:03:415 (1) - clap --fixed
01:14:641 (2) - 用whistle代替吧 --这里用拍子也不是不行
01:15:415 (1) - 去掉ehistle --fixed
01:16:964 - finish --fixed
01:19:286 (2) - 去掉finish --fixed
01:20:060 - finish --fixed
01:25:480 (1,2) - easy里这种梗不要出现.. --fixed

[Normal]

OD+1 --I think OD3 is OK~

01:16:964 (3) - 用1/4滑条节奏能好些 --fixed
00:19:673 (1) - 加上finish在滑条的开始 --fixed
00:21:222 (1) - 去掉finish --fixed
00:23:931 (3) - 去掉finish --fixed
00:25:867 (1) - finish --fixed
01:25:480 (1,2) - normal最好别用这种梗...建议分开来 --fixed
从 00:19:673 -开始加finish，每隔一个大白线加一次，其余的finish去掉 结束于00:31:673 - ， 在00:31:673 -这个点不加finish --fixed

[Hard]

00:33:415 (1,2) - 这两个感觉多出来了，不符合节奏，建议删去 --这里没问题吧
00:36:706 (8,1) - 我建议节奏这样改改能好点 --fixed
--fixed
00:45:802 (1) - slider上红点完全可以去掉的，如果这里用了折返滑条，后面的00:46:383 (2,3) - 这个节奏会显得空旷 00:47:544 (1,2,3) - 这些地方的时间轴也建议填满（红线上有物件或者slider的头或者尾巴）比如
--感觉这样没问题了
00:58:286 - 不再加个note? --fixed
00:59:544 (4) - 挪到200|160 --fixed
00:59:835 - 同上 --fixed
01:03:028 (7,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 这段时间节奏和前半段整体不饱满，建议再填一填 --这里就这样吧，感觉没问题
01:11:351 - 再来个note --不用
01:12:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方做成用匀加DS的方式的跳能好点? --这样也不错
01:13:480 (6) - NC --fixed
01:13:867 (1) - 去掉NC --fixed
01:18:512 (1,2) - 这个跳有点过于突然了 --fixed，改过来了
01:20:641 - 加个note --还是别加了，这样就可以。。
01:20:835 (2,3) - 跳有点突然 --这点应该没什么吧。。
01:13:480 (6) - 换成clap --fixed
01:13:867 (1) - 加上finish在滑条的开始 --fixed
01:15:222 (4) - 去掉finish --fixed
01:20:060 (1) - 加上finish在滑条的开始 --fixed


说真的，小猫觉得EXTRA留着还不如删掉.....真的.......

lkx_shore wrote:

[Extra]
00:25:093 (1,2,3) - 为什么不取消grid snap手动对齐?(2)在x86 y232左右(3)在x89 y253左右 --fixed
00:31:480 (2) - 加个note,00:31:480放在橙色滑条上不容易路人 --感觉这里还是不要加的好
00:48:706 (13,1,2,3) - 13飞到1的轨迹非常绕,打起来会不舒服 --其实之前给几个人玩过都没注意到这点，所以最后还是考虑不变了
00:49:673 (5) - 换成这样顺手很多↓ --fixed

01:13:673 (2,3,4) - 唔...我感觉这里完全没融入节奏 --老实说我感觉这里跟的是歌词。。

[NYAN's Insane]
00:16:577 (1) - 消音比较好
00:23:351 (7) - 你整个铺面都快塞满了...这里漏一个感觉会有点不爽，在x328 y300加个note?
00:32:060 (1,1) - 白线都加上whistle吧
00:41:351 (1) - 滑条头finish
00:45:222 (8) - 加个note？
00:46:383 (3,1,2) - 很绕,1放在x132 y228,2放在x256 y288会好很多
00:49:867 (3,4) - 噗...偏点放吧?不过不改也没什么
01:06:125 (2) - 有点绕,不过不改也没什么问题

其实我感觉用ar9也不错的

[Hard]
00:33:415 (1,2) - 去掉whistle --fixed
00:33:609 (3) - 滑条头whistle --fixed
00:33:996 (4,5) - 滑条头whistle换成尾巴whistle --fixed
00:35:157 (1) - 去掉whistle --fixed
00:42:706 (1) - 不合节奏... --这里没问题
00:44:060 (3) - 放x168 y204吧 --fixed
00:45:802 (1) - 大白线whistle,尾巴的whistle去掉 --fixed
00:48:706 (4,5,6,7) - 去掉whistle --fixed
00:49:093 (1) - 滑条头whistle --fixed
00:49:867 (3) - 头whistle --fixed
00:58:964 (4) - 不合节奏 --没问题
01:00:512 (4) - ^ --同上
01:04:576 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉有点丑... --还好吧。。。
01:12:512 (2,3,4,5) - 这间距在hard里是不是有点太难了,这间距我怎么看都得用ar8...加个nc吧 --咦？长白线不是NC了么O3O
01:19:286 (6,7,8,9) - ^ --同上，持保留意见

[Normal]
00:21:609 (2) - 头的finish去掉，要加就在前面的大白线加 --fixed
00:58:383 (1) - 尾巴的whistle和finish去掉 --fixed
00:59:544 (3) - finish移到大白线上 --fixed
OD+1? --Normal的话我个人还是不倾向于AR OD相同啦。。

[Easy]
其实我觉得这和normal感觉好像...
HP-1 --fixed

Good luck

lkx_shore wrote:

[NYAN's Insane]
00:16:577 (1) - 消音比较好 嗯，这个不错
00:23:351 (7) - 你整个铺面都快塞满了...这里漏一个感觉会有点不爽，在x328 y300加个note? 我试过了，如果加了note感觉有点过于满，所以我决定还是不加
00:32:060 (1,1) - 白线都加上whistle吧 嗯好
00:41:351 (1) - 滑条头finish 好的
00:45:222 (8) - 加个note？ 直接搞成9 stream了
00:46:383 (3,1,2) - 很绕,1放在x132 y228,2放在x256 y288会好很多 换了一种排列，谢谢提醒啦
00:49:867 (3,4) - 噗...偏点放吧?不过不改也没什么 这个没管
01:06:125 (2) - 有点绕,不过不改也没什么问题 换了排列

其实我感觉用ar9也不错的 我的这个要是AR9下面的那个ex就没意义了吧...

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

01:12:512 (2,3,4,5) - 这间距在hard里是不是有点太难了,这间距我怎么看都得用ar8...加个nc吧 --咦？长白线不是NC了么O3O
01:19:286 (6,7,8,9) - ^ --同上，持保留意见 大跳加nc提示.这样好点

Flower wrote:

好老公你要的re-mod

[General]
原标题是「流星Lovers」，所以应当在tag里加上Ryuusei，或者把标题改成Ryuusei Lovers然后在tag加Meteor
然后麻烦把Jam Project和你自己的名字从tag里移掉……这个没必要 改了


[nyan]
00:39:609 (1,2) - 交换NC 这个我感觉我的挺好啊
00:45:415 - 00: 45:415 00:45:512 觉得这两处可以加上note，或者把00:45:609 (1) - 改成1/8并且渐强音量（30-80 Normal）光改了音效
00:49:867 (3) - 建议问一下XAT这个程度的reversearrow遮挡可不可以 KPY说能行
01:09:222 (1) - 没有鼓点节奏的话我觉得这里用切分音比较和谐 原先的更符合音乐


LAO GONG JIA YOU > <

Flower wrote:

好老公你要的re-mod

[General]
原标题是「流星Lovers」，所以应当在tag里加上Ryuusei，或者把标题改成Ryuusei Lovers然后在tag加Meteor --fixed
然后麻烦把Jam Project和你自己的名字从tag里移掉……这个没必要 --不是我说拿掉了我没法做user page

[Easy]
话说这回怎么感觉E跟N一样难了……
00:18:899 (1,2) - 可以交换 比较有flow（虽然我不知道flow是什么） --fixed
00:30:512 (1) - 往右下角移一点因为尾端碰到前面的00:28:964 (1) - 了 --fixed
00:32:060 - 只是建议：你可以放一段soft sample的长滑条 ---因为这是easy我想想还是别堆满的好
00:38:254 (1) - 我好像有提过这个转盘的问题 太短了而且后面的note也太近了 --fixed
00:44:447 - 同00:32:060 - --想想这是easy还是算了吧
00:55:286 (1) - 在00:57:609 - 结束 --fixed
01:07:673 (1) - 只是考虑一下在01:09:996 - 结束的可能性，可选 --fixed
01:24:706 - 完全可以一个N Finish敲上去的，而且听不见声音新手容易miss，建议考虑 --fixed

[Normal]
全曲哔哔哔的哨声让我有点想哭
建议你戴上耳机调大音量然后自己看 然后找LKs之类的人看下 我有点不会吐槽
00:33:609 - 00:44:447 - 这段降低音量到40%或者改成S之类的
00:45:996 - 00:55:286 - 这段调到50%
00:39:415 - clap --fixed
00:40:189 (1,2) - 往右调整一点避开遮挡 然后00:40:576 (2) - 这形状可以调整下…… --fixed
01:24:706 - 同EZ --fixed

[Hard]
音效问题见Normal 对照修改
这跳的难以直视……你确定一般的玩家能随手FC么
00:33:222 - 不要消音 实在是不能再说 --我。。这里本来没啥音乐啊O3O。。。
00:36:415 (6) - 这里三连摆在白线相当难听 我知道你肯定持相反意见 不过我的意见是删掉这个note --不愧是老婆就是了解我不过还是fixed了
00:45:609 - 不要消音 我就不写理由了 --这里还是消了好毕竟我也不是用自定义音效的233
01:09:512 - 01:09:512 - 01:09:512 - 太空了，可以在指定的三个地方加上note --下面还有个I呢。。
01:20:835 (2) - 突然来个Anti-Jump立刻就挂了。摆远一点，或者在01:20:641 - 加note --fixed

[nyan]
00:39:609 (1,2) - 交换NC
00:45:415 - 00: 45:415 00:45:512 - 觉得这两处可以加上note，或者把00:45:609 (1) - 改成1/8并且渐强音量（30-80 Normal）
00:49:867 (3) - 建议问一下XAT这个程度的reversearrow遮挡可不可以
01:09:222 (1) - 没有鼓点节奏的话我觉得这里用切分音比较和谐

[ExTrA]
00:31:673 (1) - 你没回我mod我也不知道你什么理由。这里还是那句，建议旋转180度放到对面，不然间隔不同不好读图
然后剩下的基本都是我在前面的mod里吐槽过然后你又没改的。麻烦这次你回一下我上次的ExTrA的mod。

[Taiko]
你问我的评价是什么，虽然我上次mod过了我觉得还是remap plz比较好。至于为什么，主要是节奏太乱，不是很整齐，kiai的节奏反而放的更散了，打起来也不是很爽。kiai完全可以用二四白线来下蓝，或者红线下蓝来体现热烈的感觉。



LAO GONG JIA YOU > <

Flower wrote:

Hi~ qq request~

[Extra]
叫Extra多没意思……而且也不是真的有那么难 换个名字多好 Suicidal啦Deadly啦Heroic啦Legendary啦
而且遮挡太乱 有时间最好remap一下对比一下梗然后再remap第三次（好吧当我没说）
00:21:028 (1,1) - 遮挡丑 往下移 --下面？再下面没地方了
00:25:093 (1,2,3) - 很难读而且没有什么梗 建议向左下至少偏移两格 --fixed
00:25:093 (1,4) - 交换NC --fixed
00:27:802 (3,4,5,7) - 移到上面去 00:27:802 (3) - 的位置大致是x=328 y=68 其他顺移，这样可以不让00:28:964 (1) - 被遮挡 --这里挡住也没什么不好吧
00:28:964 (1) - 建议略微顺时针旋转以使滑条尾对准00:29:544 (2) --可以这样
00:31:673 (3) - 间距一样不好读图 建议旋转180放到对面 --我个人认为能打这种难度的多数难不倒他了况且这都是滑条。。
00:51:802 - 可加个note，一般这种二连有点讨厌 --这样不是正好对上节奏么，不用了
00:54:318 (10,11) - 敢放开点么>_< --fixed
00:59:157 (4) - 挡住略难看 要么叠在00:58:189 (15) - 下面 --就这样吧。。
00:58:189 (15) - 这么明显一个finish还用我说么…… --fixed
01:01:480 (3) - reverse arrow被挡住了 nuke --fixed
01:16:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放到01:16:189 - 好听些，但是01:16:770 - 01:16:867 - 还是要加note --这个就这样。。
01:16:964 (5) - NC --fixed
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这什么……1/4滑条摆满都好听一些 或者删掉01:27:544 (6) ，在01:27:415 - 01:27:609 - 各加一个1/4滑条
01:30:802 - 虽然别人也这么摆但建议在01:30:899 - 结束 因为最后转盘声音会突然降低 --转盘的话fixed，其他的保留





Good luck~

Pokie wrote:

General

1. 新Guest diff的Tags還沒弄好

--这个我看了，的确没弄好现在更正

Hard

• 
  00:30:899 (1) - 建議改成2連+1/4 slider來回 (記得補上音效)
  
  
  --fixed
  00:33:996 (4,5) - 這裡節奏nooooooooo, remap前我不記得有這種問題…改成這樣吧 (同記得補音效)
  --fixed
  
  00:35:157 (1,2,3) - 這三個的間距我看不太懂…前面雖然也有這種情況, 勉強可以算是隨音樂變化弄的…但這邊就沒原因要弄不相等間距 --fixed，已经改成等距了
  00:40:770 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這部份突然就成Insane了, 至少得把連打的間距降低, 然後(6,7)的間距放大一點
  
  
  --fixed
  00:42:706 (1,2) - 節奏noooooooo, 放slider時應該多考慮一下到底有沒踩中vocal/鼓點…否則就像現在這樣各種off-beat
  將(1,2)後移1/2拍, 空出的位置加個circle吧
  --fixed
  
  00:45:802 (1) - 中間兩個紅點看不懂…但主要問題是00:46:383 (2) - 這個要移除, slider應該後移1/2, 結尾加clap --fixed
  00:47:544 (1,3) - clap錯位了, 倒是可以選擇加在00:47:931 (2,3,4) - --fixed
  00:50:254 (4) - 目測很多不刪300的人, 或HD玩家要淚流滿面…換一個比較容易看見的地方? (雖然我這建議的也不是好位置2333)
  
  
  --fixed
  
  00:51:222 (5) - 疊好? --fixed
  00:52:964 (4,5) - 00:53:738 (7,1) - 別這樣! 這兩組的間距為什麼差這麼遠(runs, 解決方案:
  
  
  --fixed
  
  01:09:222 (1) - 不放正中嗎, 反正都會被combo burst擋的 --fixed
  01:13:093 (5,1) - 間距開大一些 --fixed
  01:18:899 (4) - clap --fixed
  01:20:641 (2) - 移到 01:21:222 - , 01:20:835 (3) - 前移1/2拍 (記得修音效)
  --fixed

目測我不說你也看的出來, 間距的問題挺嚴重的…不是要求整張圖都要依照distance snap來弄, 而是間距要下的合理
非特殊idea的情況下, 比如說前一combo開的1.2左右, 接下個note只有0.6的話…就會很獵奇的

Easy

• 
  00:39:802 (1) - 移到這邊?
  
  
  --这里的话从中间开始对新手比较友好吧
  
  00:39:802 (1,2,1,2) - clap錯位了 --fixed
  00:50:641 (3) - 漏刪的whistle? --fixed
  01:06:899 (3) - ^ --fixed
  01:25:480 (1,2) - 建議移到屏幕中下方的位置, 因為會被spinner-clear/osu擋到
  
  
  --fixed

mod完才發現這個不是Normal, 再點進N看了眼覺得E跟N長的好像…

Normal

• 00:58:383 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 節奏微妙的違和, 整段改成這樣: (00:59:157 - 01:00:706 - clap / 00:59:544 - 01:01:093 - finish)
  --fixed
  
  01:04:576 (1) - 刪一下new combo --fixed
  01:04:964 (5) - new combo --fixed
  01:12:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - clap錯位 --fixed
  01:25:480 (1,2) - 同Easy --fixed

Guest I就交給別人挑了>_< 做的還是可以的, 不過有幾個地方需要改進一下…不過略沒動力寫了(喂

Mythol wrote:

[General]
Add whistle on the last spinner for all diffs! I used 50% volume's normal-finish.

[Insane]
00:18:899 (1,2) - Remove 1 repeat from both I don't like this rhythm...
00:32:060 (1) - Ctrl + G not mod it
00:32:835 (1) - ^ changed
00:34:964 (4) - Try 284/204? okey
00:36:706 (2) - NC here instead of previous slider fixed
01:07:673 (1) - Ctrl + G not mod it
01:08:060 (2) - ^ not mod it
01:09:222 (1) - Make this repeat on 01:09:512 It's a syncopation.....
I like this insane thank you~ ><


gl~

Mythol wrote:

[General]
Add whistle on the last spinner for all diffs! --fixed

[Easy]
00:35:931 (2) - Remove clap --fixed
00:41:738 (2) - Remove the clap on repeat and change the finish to clap on tail -fixed
00:48:318 (4) - Remove clap --fixed
00:51:415 (4) - ^ --fixed
00:55:286 (1) - Remove finish --fixed
01:03:802 (2,3,1) - Try
2 = Finish
3 = Clap
1 = Finish (head) --fixed
01:07:673 (1) - Finish + clap? sounds good o: --fixed
01:14:641 (2) - Remove clap --fixed

[Normal]
00:21:609 (2) - Fix claps starting from here they are on 1+3 beats --fixed
00:39:415 (3) - Remove all claps on this slider --fixed
00:40:189 (1) - Clap --fixed
00:51:028 (2) - Remove clap on end --fixed
00:51:802 (3) - Clap --fixed
Don't forget to re add claps
00:58:383 (1,2,3,1,2) - This will play better and follows vocals better
--oh,I think now it is well
01:03:415 (1) - Fix claps from here, they became every 1+3 beats again.. --fixed
01:04:576 (4) - Replace clap with finish --fixed
01:15:415 (1) - This is more accurate if you make the slider repeat on 01:15:706 but I guess current one is also fine.. ---Ummm...

[Hard]
00:34:189 (5) - Move this clap to previous note --fixed
00:38:835 (2,3) - Like this~
--all right~fixed
00:43:480 (2,3) - Same ^ --fixed
00:58:964 (4) - Change to this!
--fixed >A<
01:00:512 (4,5) - ^ --fixed
01:20:641 (2) - Remove clap on end --fixed
01:21:222 (3) - Clap --fixed



[Extra]
00:20:447 (7) - Add NC here to make this rhythm easier to read --fixed
00:23:738 (4) - Move this to 00:23:544 and fix spacing (I suggest 304/256) --not mod it
00:26:641 (5) - Extend to 00:26:931 --not mod it
00:29:931 (4) - Move to 00:30:028 (296/16) ---not mod it
00:45:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - Wow lol I'm not sure if this is rankable.. --no problem...
00:51:706 (10) - Remove this note, and make 5 note stream starting 00:51:802 --not mod it
01:13:673 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is not good.. change to this
--OK,fixed
01:26:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really not good ._. --no mod it

gl~

1. Untick "Letterbox during breaks" in all standard diff. There's no breaks & you've added a video
2. Rotte's Insane has different Preview Time, please change to 58251 (Current 58189)
3. Remove "Jam Project" from tags since that's the title of the song

1. 00:16:638 (1) - Move this spinner end at 00:18:574 - (1/4 later) to make consistent with other diff
2. 00:25:735 (1) - I don't think reserve at downbeat is a great idea. 感覺重音缺少打擊感... use note + 1/2 slider instead
3. 00:29:026 (1) - Remake this slider please, it's so ugly imo lol 扭的這麼奇捌有意義? Try this
   
   
4. 00:30:380 (1,1,1) - Please make their spacing consistent. 前兩個中間有空拍 後兩個中間沒空拍可是spacing卻一樣想害誰
5. 00:46:058 (5) - NC to prove this is different to 00:45:671 (1,2,3,4) -
6. 01:09:574 (2,3) - NC since SV change, so make an attention will make the pattern more readable
7. 01:24:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - change the rhythm to this, your rhythm is hard to read & unfit with songs imo
   
   This diff needs more work on the flow/placement imo.

1. 00:22:058 (2,3,4,5,6) - I feel your flow is a bit awkward, maybe try smf like this?
   
   
   

   212,88,22058,1,0,0:0:0
   111,48,22251,1,0,0:0:0
   43,132,22445,1,0,0:0:0
   102,223,22639,1,0,0:0:0
   206,195,22832,2,0,P|240:228|248:280,2,90

2. 00:32:122 (4,1) - You use soft-sound at (4), so swap their NCes to make an attention to the player
3. 00:46:832 (1,2) - This jump appears so soon, and the flow is not good at all, consider reduce the spacing (put at x:296, y:328)
4. 01:19:929 (6) - Why you change the spacing here? There's no reason to make a jump after somewhere should use same spacing. (3,4,5,6)這裡的音樂都一樣 沒有特別起伏 所以用同樣spacing然後在(6,1)做個跳感覺好一點

1. 00:21:477 (2,3) - I have no idea why you add jump like this. (3) should be place with 1.0 DS. Anyway put (3) to x:248, y:80 to make a better flow
2. 00:34:058 (4) - missing clap or serious?
3. 00:34:445 (6) - Remake this by a random curve slider or something please, current is so ugly
4. 00:34:445 (6,1) - why anti-jump here? makes me feel it's a 1/2 part actually. Use 1.0 DS to replace this please
5. 00:39:090 (3) - Why change spacing? A mistake? lol Use 1.0 DS to place this please since I don't see any reason to change spacing here
6. 00:39:864 (1,2) - I'd use 1/1 slider to change these objects, like you did at 00:41:413 (1) -
7. 01:12:768 (3) - 我覺得要做跳就做大一點 1.2跟1.0看起來差距真的不大 但是就變的很醜 不然就是都統一用1.0就好了

1. 00:53:413 (3) - I'll use 2 notes instead this slider because the downbeat is at sliderend. 這裡的音樂感覺就是前面跟後面不同句 用slider串在一起變的超違和
2. 01:17:026 (3,1) - Swap nces is better imo. That's your nc rule...
3. 01:25:542 (1,2) - (有夠nazi)這兩個對稱嘛 (2)ctrl+H過去跟(1)沒完全重合

1. 00:22:445 (2) - clap instead finish to make consistent with other diff. Finish here is soooooo unfit D:
2. 01:15:477 (1) - (end) remove finish

Flask wrote:

好久的圖 好像很厲害的樣子

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. Untick "Letterbox during breaks" in all standard diff. There's no breaks & you've added a video --fixed
2. Rotte's Insane has different Preview Time, please change to 58251 (Current 58189) --fixed
3. Remove "Jam Project" from tags since that's the title of the song

--fixed

[ ExTrA Collab]

1. 00:16:638 (1) - Move this spinner end at 00:18:574 - (1/4 later) to make consistent with other diff --fixed
2. 00:25:735 (1) - I don't think reserve at downbeat is a great idea. 感覺重音缺少打擊感... use note + 1/2 slider instead --no mod it
3. 00:29:026 (1) - Remake this slider please, it's so ugly imo lol 扭的這麼奇捌有意義? Try this
   
   
   --不，这很符合我的美学
4. 00:30:380 (1,1,1) - Please make their spacing consistent. 前兩個中間有空拍 後兩個中間沒空拍可是spacing卻一樣想害誰 --no mod it
5. 00:46:058 (5) - NC to prove this is different to 00:45:671 (1,2,3,4) - --fixed
6. 01:09:574 (2,3) - NC since SV change, so make an attention will make the pattern more readable --fixed
7. 01:24:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - change the rhythm to this, your rhythm is hard to read & unfit with songs imo
   
   This diff needs more work on the flow/placement imo.

--no mod it


[ Hard]

1. 00:21:477 (2,3) - I have no idea why you add jump like this. (3) should be place with 1.0 DS. Anyway put (3) to x:248, y:80 to make a better flow --fixed I put to x:244,y:100
2. 00:34:058 (4) - missing clap or serious? --no mod it
3. 00:34:445 (6) - Remake this by a random curve slider or something please, current is so ugly --fixed
4. 00:34:445 (6,1) - why anti-jump here? makes me feel it's a 1/2 part actually. Use 1.0 DS to replace this please --fixed
5. 00:39:090 (3) - Why change spacing? A mistake? lol Use 1.0 DS to place this please since I don't see any reason to change spacing here --fixed
6. 00:39:864 (1,2) - I'd use 1/1 slider to change these objects, like you did at 00:41:413 (1) - --no mod it
7. 01:12:768 (3) - 我覺得要做跳就做大一點 1.2跟1.0看起來差距真的不大 但是就變的很醜 不然就是都統一用1.0就好了

--change 1.3 DS

[ Normal]

1. 00:53:413 (3) - I'll use 2 notes instead this slider because the downbeat is at sliderend. 這裡的音樂感覺就是前面跟後面不同句 用slider串在一起變的超違和 --fixed
2. 01:17:026 (3,1) - Swap nces is better imo. That's your nc rule... --fixed
3. 01:25:542 (1,2) - (有夠nazi)這兩個對稱嘛 (2)ctrl+H過去跟(1)沒完全重合

--fixed

[ Easy]

1. 00:22:445 (2) - clap instead finish to make consistent with other diff. Finish here is soooooo unfit D: --fixed
2. 01:15:477 (1) - (end) remove finish

--fixed

加油!

Flask wrote:

好久的圖 好像很厲害的樣子

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. Untick "Letterbox during breaks" in all standard diff. There's no breaks & you've added a video
2. Rotte's Insane has different Preview Time, please change to 58251 (Current 58189)
3. Remove "Jam Project" from tags since that's the title of the song

[ Rotte's Insane]

1. 00:22:058 (2,3,4,5,6) - I feel your flow is a bit awkward, maybe try smf like this? I changed it with others ways
   
   
   

   212,88,22058,1,0,0:0:0
   111,48,22251,1,0,0:0:0
   43,132,22445,1,0,0:0:0
   102,223,22639,1,0,0:0:0
   206,195,22832,2,0,P|240:228|248:280,2,90

2. 00:32:122 (4,1) - You use soft-sound at (4), so swap their NCes to make an attention to the player ok~
3. 00:46:832 (1,2) - This jump appears so soon, and the flow is not good at all, consider reduce the spacing (put at x:296, y:328) I changed it with others ways
4. 01:19:929 (6) - Why you change the spacing here? There's no reason to make a jump after somewhere should use same spacing. (3,4,5,6)這裡的音樂都一樣 沒有特別起伏 所以用同樣spacing然後在(6,1)做個跳感覺好一點 同样也是用其他办法改的

加油!

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]
00:58:445 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it's hidden for beginners while gameplay --fixed,move up
01:10:832 (1) - ^ (hitbursts are also overlap this too) --fixed,move right


[Normal]
00:18:961 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden due to blend w/ default spinner. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553078 --fixed,change blue
01:10:832 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it's hidden for beginners while gameplay --fixed,move up
01:17:800 (2) - Why finish? --fixed,remove finish now
01:18:187 (3) - Clap? --fixed,add clap now


[Hard]
00:21:090 (4) - Why finish? --fixed,remove finish
00:25:542 (4) - ^ --fixed,remove finish
00:34:058 (4) - Clap? --fixed
00:34:445 (6) - Clap at tail slider? --fixed
00:40:832 (4) - Why finish? --fixed
01:25:542 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden due to blend w/ default spinner. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/553078 --fixed,change pink colour


[ExTrA Collab]
* If this collab, please name the part with SB elements inside this map --fixed


Once you done, in-game PM me

1. Obviously the artist has to be "JAM Project"
   
   SPOILER

   
2. The original title of this song is "流星Lovers (Ryuusei Lovers)" 流星 translates into "meteor", but I think it's best to use original one. or at least add "ryuusei" into tags so that people can seach for this song with the original title.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. The source is also wrong; you should add subtitle as well. it should be "Super Robot Wars OG2 -The Inspector-".
   
   SPOILER

   

Melophobia wrote:

[General]

1. Obviously the artist has to be "JAM Project" --fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. The original title of this song is "流星Lovers (Ryuusei Lovers)" 流星 translates into "meteor", but I think it's best to use original one. or at least add "ryuusei" into tags so that people can seach for this song with the original title. --fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. The source is also wrong; you should add subtitle as well. it should be "Super Robot Wars OG2 -The Inspector-". --fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

I'm sorry that I have to pop this ><

BakaHuang wrote:

再不rank我儿子都要出生了

ExTrA

毛夫人的排版太让人蛋碎了..又是个那么固执的人 哎

00:18:415(1)-spinner还是到这里结束比较合适 ---最后想了想还是结束在原地比较好。。

前奏应该比较适合多加点clap

00:20:060(5,7)-add clap
00:21:609(2,4,7)-^ --综合前面的节奏感觉还是不要加了
00:22:577(1,2,3)-把(1)换成note 然后把(2)的折返去掉 00:22:770-这里拉条slider

SPOILER

--fixed
(1)头上加个whistle (2)头上加个clap 尾上加个whistle (3)的whistle去掉 --最后考虑下whistle和clap都不加了
00:24:318(3,4)-add clap (3)只要头上就可以了 --no mod it
下面这图是我觉得这样放比较合适 如果你觉得这么改比较好的话 改完来问我音效的加法

SPOILER

--这一段的地方还行，保留原来的吧
反正前奏部分你就往24白线上加clap 合适就保留 不合适就删 whistle也不用加太多 参考我上面的就行 不然会有点喧嚣
00:45:996(5)-add NC --fixed
00:48:512(12)-remove clap --fixed
这部分的clap加在二四白线上就可以了 太多 也吵

水梦部分我就不看了 放心

• --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--

1. None!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:55:348 (3) - i'd prefer to add a circle here and put it after slider(2) with finish, after that, shorten and delay the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 tick
   2. 01:07:735 - same pattern as above..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:25:929 (1) - umm~~ sounds like there should be a finish on that start~~ i can heard the vocal with "A~~~" , and finish is very suitable imo. :p
   2. 01:14:703 (2) - 也加个finish? 很燃喔.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:55:348 - 这里和easy一样，下面的就不讲了.
   2. 01:23:219 - 这里也是~
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:15:477 (1) - clap on that end.
   2. 01:20:122 (1) - 这么燃不加个finish嘛 :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 对了，还是提一句滑条前加circle的那个梗，如果别的diff都加了这里也改改吧~ 个人觉得很适合这首歌。
   2. 00:31:638 (6) - 这里听起来节奏理当是个四连啊~ 试试这样的节奏?~ 铺面基本不用变 去掉repeat就好了~
      Click me

      
   3. 01:20:122 (1) - 这个叠在原地打起来有点别扭。。前面刚是一个往返，觉得打这里的时候下意识的要继续往回走，所以干脆把这个滑条往下移，像这样？
      Click me

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. clear~!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:20:800 - 这里不连打不性福!!
      Click me

      
   2. 00:23:413 (5) - 不能理解这里为什么空一拍。。感觉一空把前面烘托出来的一点东西都扔掉了。。塞个circle放在x:224 y:312吧。
   3. 00:39:768 - add a circle and stack with (1,2)? plays fine and sounds better imo.
   4. 01:25:542 (9) - 果断要加两个repeat啊！~~或者再加两个然后spinner后移1/4也可以。现在觉得缺东西..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. clear..!~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. clear.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:42:961 (4) - sounds wired.. how about remove the clap or change it to finish?~ :3
   2. 01:03:864 (2) - move the clap which on that slider's repeat to end? sounds a bit wired in red tick..
   3. 01:25:058 (4,7,11) - add whistles on these circle?~ sounds pretty. :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:20:413 - add a not here?
   2. 01:11:219 - sounds like there should be added a k.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:20:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you followed the thing i said in suggestions of design, dddkd is much more suitable imo.
   2. 00:29:026 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try d ddk ddk ddk ?
   3. 00:31:735 (2) - 感觉用D的话更燃诶 :3
   4. 00:44:509 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - dddkd kdk kk
   5. 00:50:703 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dddkd kd sounds much more better and plays fun imo.
   6. 01:07:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - dddkd k kddkd k ?
   7. 01:12:671 (4) - k
   8. 01:25:155 (6) - ^
   9. 01:25:929 (1) - D

Strawberry wrote:

[ Aoiko]

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:20:413 - add a not here? fixed
   2. 01:11:219 - sounds like there should be added a k. Add it.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:20:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you followed the thing i said in suggestions of design, dddkd is much more suitable imo. not really ,ddddd is moe~
   2. 00:29:026 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try d ddk ddk ddk ? ddk ddd ddk is well
   3. 00:31:735 (2) - 感觉用D的话更燃诶 :3 还是保留以前的吧...
   4. 00:44:509 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - dddkd kdk kk ok这个不错
   5. 00:50:703 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dddkd kd sounds much more better and plays fun imo. however,ddddd is not bad
   6. 01:07:735 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - dddkd k kddkd k ? not mod it
   7. 01:12:671 (4) - k ok
   8. 01:25:155 (6) - ^ fixed
   9. 01:25:929 (1) - D okey

　
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神图lol 燃成渣了。~ Good luck with ranking~

Strawberry wrote:

[ General]
　

1. None!

　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:55:348 (3) - i'd prefer to add a circle here and put it after slider(2) with finish, after that, shorten and delay the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 tick --fixed
   2. 01:07:735 - same pattern as above..
   --fixed
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:25:929 (1) - umm~~ sounds like there should be a finish on that start~~ i can heard the vocal with "A~~~" , and finish is very suitable imo. :p --fixed
   2. 01:14:703 (2) - 也加个finish? 很燃喔.

--fixed
　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:55:348 - 这里和easy一样，下面的就不讲了. --fixed
   2. 01:23:219 - 这里也是~
   --fixed
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:15:477 (1) - clap on that end. --fixed
   2. 01:20:122 (1) - 这么燃不加个finish嘛 :3

--fixed
　
[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 对了，还是提一句滑条前加circle的那个梗，如果别的diff都加了这里也改改吧~ 个人觉得很适合这首歌。
   2. 00:31:638 (6) - 这里听起来节奏理当是个四连啊~ 试试这样的节奏?~ 铺面基本不用变 去掉repeat就好了~
      Click me

      
      --fixed
   3. 01:20:122 (1) - 这个叠在原地打起来有点别扭。。前面刚是一个往返，觉得打这里的时候下意识的要继续往回走，所以干脆把这个滑条往下移，像这样？
      Click me

      
   --fixed
   　
   
   
   　
   [ ExTrA Collab]
   　
   
   1. Unrankable stuff
      ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
      
      1. None!
      　
   2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
      ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
      
      1. clear.
      　
   3. Hitsounds
      ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
      
      1. 00:42:961 (4) - sounds wired.. how about remove the clap or change it to finish?~ :3 --fixed
      2. 01:03:864 (2) - move the clap which on that slider's repeat to end? sounds a bit wired in red tick.. --ok remove and add clap at end of silder
      3. 01:25:058 (4,7,11) - add whistles on these circle?~ sounds pretty. :3

--fixed


　
　
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神图lol 燃成渣了。~ Good luck with ranking~

Leorda wrote:

Before bubble





[Rotte's Insane]
01:18:574 (1) - Add clap at end slider? fixed
01:20:509 (2) - Add clap? fixed


Call me again when you're done

Leorda wrote:

Before bubble

[General]
* Taiko BG are now unrankable (proof)
--fixed delete now

[Easy]
00:41:413 (1,2) - Make the same timing pattern as 00:39:864 (1,2)? For following vocal? --fixed,now the same pattern as 00:39:864 (1,2)
00:58:445 (1) - Why finish at end slider? ---fixed


[Normal]
00:32:122 (1) - This slider must not have more than one slider, because i'll confuse beginner who play this diff --fixed
01:07:348 (3) - Stack under slider are confusing for beginners --fixed


[Hard]
00:21:090 (5) - Why finish? --fixed
00:25:735 (7) - ^ --fixed
01:21:864 (3) - Why finish at head slider? --fixed



Call me again when you're done

popner wrote:

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超过1 month价格面议。
图片价格是文字两倍。

Frostmourne wrote:

1st rankeddddddddd

gratz

Melophobia wrote:

congratz

Philippines wrote:

Your username is on tags. Anyway, congrats!!

Philippines wrote:

Your username is on tags. Anyway, congrats!!