Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)‬ · forum‬

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-10-25T08:21:27+00:00

Tenshichan wrote:
M4M~
Yay, To Heart 2! I love this Anime! :3

[Hardflow]

00:01:844 (1) - I think a rhythm like this fits better: http://puu.sh/1iifq No change
00:11:191 (2) - Let it go around the next slider more smoothly: http://puu.sh/1iijC Little change
00:16:844 (1) - Maybe move it more to the middle, because many players spin near the inner circle and it is frustrating if something appears outside of the spinner short after the spin I'll think about it
00:17:713 (2) - Give it a slight curve, instead of a straight line I'll think about it
00:27:061 (3) - Clap at Slider end Already clap
00:29:887 (2) - Finish sound at Slider end I can't hear finish sound. No change
00:30:757 (3) - Clap at end Already clap
I hope I could help ^^ Good luck for getting your map ranked!
+ Star

Thanks for modding :3

Hardflow

osu file format v10

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-10-25T08:56:35+00:00

Tenshichan wrote:
M4M~
Yay, To Heart 2! I love this Anime! :3

[Normal]

00:13:800 (4) - Add Finish sound? My hit sound pattern :3
00:31:409 (1) - Finish Sound on Slider start Fix
01:11:409 (1,2) - Finish instead of whistle. Goes well with the song Fixed
01:14:452 (4) - Maybe clap? Not using claps here
01:15:757 (2,3,4) - Probably make them to a repeating slider for variety - cause you stacked them like 3 times before Will consider
01:16:191 (4) - Maybe clap? Same reason
[Insane]

00:05:757 (7,8) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/1iiQe - I think it looks awesome like this ^_^ Nice
00:08:800 (1,5,7) - Those three notes three grid up, then the star looks more realistic =D Fix
00:13:365 (4,5) - CTRL + G? No, for the flow
00:27:931 - (2) and (3) are parallel while (4) and (5) aren't (if you wanted them to be parallel). To fix this just move the slider end of (5) 2 grid down Fix
00:31:409 (1) - Add finish sound Fix
00:52:278 (1,2,3) - Try to make this pattern and 00:54:018 (1,2,3) symmetrical to each other Made it, from 00:53:583 (3)
00:57:278 (1) - This spinner is a bit short, maybe make a cool slider instead And it needs a finish sound imo Well, I want a spin here
01:26:409 (4) - Finish sound at finish? =D No, it's my pattern
I love the patterns you used in the chorus!

I hope I could help ^^ Good luck for getting your map ranked!
+ Star

Thx for mod~~

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-10-25T22:56:47+00:00

Some fixes by me...

http://puu.sh/1iIGR

Kaburagi Kotetsu

903 posts

Joined September 2012

Kaburagi Kotetsu 2012-10-26T11:15:39+00:00

[General]

um.. good!

[Taris' Easy]

00:08:365 (3) - NC

00:12:278 (3) - ^
　
01:14:887 (3) - http://puu.sh/1iSAw
　
[Normal]
　
00:43:365 (4) - 슬라 뒤에 Whistle 추가

00:53:148 (3) - x196 y256
　
01:05:757 (4) - NC
　
01:06:191 (1) - NC 제거
　
[Hardflow]

00:13:365 (3) - http://puu.sh/1iSIH
　
00:44:452 (3) - 슬라 뒤에 Whistle 추가
　
[Insane]

00:44:670 (2) - 요것도 휘슬~~
　
01:18:148 (7) - NC
　

맵 좋네요 랭크시키세욤 ><

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-10-26T11:20:15+00:00

JSsky wrote:
[Hardflow]

00:13:365 (3) - http://puu.sh/1iSIH No change
　
00:44:452 (3) - 슬라 뒤에 Whistle 추가 No change

맵 좋네요 랭크시키세욤 ><

Thanks for modding

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-10-26T11:37:48+00:00

JSsky wrote:
[General]

um.. good!
　
[Normal]
　
00:43:365 (4) - 슬라 뒤에 Whistle 추가 괜찮네요

00:53:148 (3) - x196 y256 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 이런건 안잡으셔도 됩니다. Fix
　
01:05:757 (4) - NC 노트 배열에 의거하여 설정한 콤보입니다.
　
01:06:191 (1) - NC 제거
　
[Insane]

00:44:670 (2) - 요것도 휘슬~~
　
01:18:148 (7) - NC 제안 하시려면 앞부분도 해 주셨어야죠 >< 일단 deny
　

맵 좋네요 랭크시키세욤 ><

감사합니다~~

[Taris' Easy]
-- Set the same kiai times with other difficulties
-- Unused timeline : 00:41:626 and Hope you delete this time line : 01:25:213

00:03:148 (3) - Delete Whistle?
00:05:104 (3) - Delete Whistle at the Start
00:06:626 (1) - Delete Whistle
00:12:713 (4) - Start at 00:12:931, since the previous rythm is hard to follow (End at the same place)
00:31:409 (1) - Delete whistle
00:44:018 (4) - Delete Finish at the end
00:59:018 (1) - I didn't in my diff, but for your pattern, here needs a Finish
01:06:191 (2,1) - Delete Finish
01:17:713 (2) - Missed a Clap

I wish I could have a kudosu for my mod ._.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2012-10-26T17:44:52+00:00

modding upon request~
To Heart 2 >.<

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
oot havent seen an OGG file in beatmaps yet, thats a first

getting a silent sliderslide.wav would be perfect
01:30:974 is the ending for the music imo, perhaps extend the sliders on all diffs to end here?

[Easy]
AR+1 and OD-1
Tick rate 2 like other diffs?
00:01:626 (2) - add whistle to slider head
00:27:061 (1) - add finish to slider end?
00:29:887 (1) - whistle on slider head
00:41:844 (2) - this timing section is too loud imo, lower it to 60% sounds better
00:47:061 (2) - add whistle to slider head
00:54:018 (3,4) - spacing, you were using 0.8x for this section
00:57:713 (2) - add whistle to the repeat on this slider
01:14:018 (2) - remove whistle on slider end

[Normal]
00:03:148 (3) - add whistle
00:09:670 (2,1) - for the aesthetics you shouldnt overlap the head of (2) with tail of (1), make it spaced out like what you did for 00:01:626 (1,2)
00:30:757 (2) - clap on the end of this repeat slider
00:38:583 (1) - move this to 00:38:365 and add a repeat? flows better imo (some players may be tempted to hit early too)
00:41:844 (2) - same as easy
00:45:322 (1) - try adding whistle to every long white line until 00:57:496 (3), sounds better imo
00:57:496 (3) - this slider follows nothing on the start, consider moving to 00:57:278
01:11:409 (1,1) - center these
01:12:931 (1) - add finish to slider head

[Hardflow]
forgot to add video on this diff
00:12:931 (2) - add finish
00:29:670 (1) - whistle?
01:09:235 (4) - end kiai here
01:12:931 (1) - start kiai here (to keep consistent with other diffs)
01:25:322 (1) - add finish to slider head

[Insane]
00:17:061 (4) - add clap
00:30:974 (3) - ^
00:41:844 (3) - same as easy
00:45:322 (1) - same as normal
01:04:235 (7) - NC
01:18:148 (7) - ^

Nice mapset, good luck on ranking this ^_^

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-10-26T23:27:58+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Taris' Easy]
-- Set the same kiai times with other difficulties
-- Unused timeline : 00:41:626 and Hope you delete this time line : 01:25:213

00:03:148 (3) - Delete Whistle? No, Whistles sound good in these parts.
00:05:104 (3) - Delete Whistle at the Start
00:06:626 (1) - Delete Whistle
00:12:713 (4) - Start at 00:12:931, since the previous rythm is hard to follow (End at the same place) I want to keep clicking consistent... easier for beginners
00:31:409 (1) - Delete whistle
00:44:018 (4) - Delete Finish at the end No, This finish is used as a transisition to the following sv change, and it sounds good
00:59:018 (1) - I didn't in my diff, but for your pattern, here needs a Finish
01:06:191 (2,1) - Delete Finish No, I put finishes for these rhythms/parts because it feels empty without them and to be consistent to this 01:20:104 (2) -
01:17:713 (2) - Missed a Clap No? This is incosistent with my clap pattern

I wish I could have a kudosu for my mod ._.

jonathanlfj wrote:
modding upon request~
To Heart 2 >.<

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[Easy]
AR+1 and OD-1
Tick rate 2 like other diffs?
00:01:626 (2) - add whistle to slider head
00:27:061 (1) - add finish to slider end? Well for your consistency I should, but in this case I don't like the way it sounds
00:29:887 (1) - whistle on slider head
00:41:844 (2) - this timing section is too loud imo, lower it to 60% sounds better
00:47:061 (2) - add whistle to slider head
00:54:018 (3,4) - spacing, you were using 0.8x for this section
00:57:713 (2) - add whistle to the repeat on this slider
01:14:018 (2) - remove whistle on slider end

Nice mapset, good luck on ranking this ^_^

JSsky wrote:
[Taris' Easy]

00:08:365 (3) - NC No, Fine for me

00:12:278 (3) - ^
　
01:14:887 (3) - http://puu.sh/1iSAw
　

　

맵 좋네요 랭크시키세욤 ><

Thanks for your mods! Rest fixed

http://puu.sh/1j5w1

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-10-26T23:41:42+00:00

Hi ~ Sonnyc ~

As per you request ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Add 'opening' in tags.

[Insane]

00:24:452 - Add a circle,follow with music.
00:49:018 (2) - Remove this circle,sound better to me.

[Hardflow]

Missing add video to this diff.
01:26:952 (1) - Why add finish to here?

[Taris' Easy]

OD-1,AR+1 much better.
00:14:018 (1) - Remove clap.
00:17:061 (1) - Remove finish.
01:26:844 - Kiai end to here,same as other diff.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~ totally nice map but you can try make multi point slider,will be more better ^^

Good luck and fight ~

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-10-27T00:20:37+00:00

All fixed ^^

thanks Rika

http://puu.sh/1j6AR

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-10-27T04:48:52+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
modding upon request~
To Heart 2 >.<

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[Hardflow]
forgot to add video on this diff What the... Fixed
00:12:931 (2) - add finish Fixed
00:29:670 (1) - whistle? I'll think about it
01:09:235 (4) - end kiai here No change
01:12:931 (1) - start kiai here (to keep consistent with other diffs) No change
01:25:322 (1) - add finish to slider head I can't hear finish sound. No change

Nice mapset, good luck on ranking this ^_^

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Sonnyc ~

As per you request ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hardflow]

Missing add video to this diff. Already fixed
01:26:952 (1) - Why add finish to here? Mistake. Fixed!

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~ totally nice map but you can try make multi point slider,will be more better ^^

Good luck and fight ~

Thanks for modding.

Hardflow

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks:
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"TH2OP.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-10-27T14:47:14+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
modding upon request~
To Heart 2 >.<

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
oot havent seen an OGG file in beatmaps yet, thats a first Huh?? really? (maybe that's why I cant hear preview song in the web..)
getting a silent sliderslide.wav would be perfect In when? not sure about yet
01:30:974 is the ending for the music imo, perhaps extend the sliders on all diffs to end here?

[Normal]
00:03:148 (3) - add whistle Fix
00:09:670 (2,1) - for the aesthetics you shouldnt overlap the head of (2) with tail of (1), make it spaced out like what you did for 00:01:626 (1,2) Well, I think it's fine for now
00:30:757 (2) - clap on the end of this repeat slider Fix
00:38:583 (1) - move this to 00:38:365 and add a repeat? flows better imo (some players may be tempted to hit early too) Fix
00:41:844 (2) - same as easy Fix
00:45:322 (1) - try adding whistle to every long white line until 00:57:496 (3), sounds better imo Fix a bit
00:57:496 (3) - this slider follows nothing on the start, consider moving to 00:57:278 Fix
01:11:409 (1,1) - center these Changed in a different way
01:12:931 (1) - add finish to slider head That's not my pattern

[Insane]
00:17:061 (4) - add clap add
00:30:974 (3) - ^ ^
00:41:844 (3) - same as easy Fix
00:45:322 (1) - same as normal Fix
01:04:235 (7) - NC Fixing here, since its the second mension
01:18:148 (7) - ^^

Nice mapset, good luck on ranking this ^_^

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Sonnyc ~

As per you request ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Add 'opening' in tags. ok

[Insane]

00:24:452 - Add a circle,follow with music. Fixing, since its the second mention
00:49:018 (2) - Remove this circle,sound better to me. fine

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~ totally nice map but you can try make multi point slider,will be more better ^^

Good luck and fight ~

Thanks for modding

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2012-10-27T18:36:24+00:00

Hi~ from My Queue (๑╹ω╹๑)

[General]
~ kiai time:
E: #1: 00:59:018 - 01:09:235 - #2: 01:12:931 - 01:26:844
N:#1: 00:59:018 - 01:09:235 - #2: 01:12:931 - 01:26:844
H: 00:59:018 - 01:26:844
I:#1: 00:59:018 - 01:09:235 - #2: 01:12:931 - 01:26:844

they should be all same à.à fix it
[Easy]

00:30:757 - what a bout to remore this circle 00:30:974 (2) and put a slider here

[Hardflow]

00:39:887 - add a circle here
00:38:583 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - so looks better à.à just 'poligon cirle creator'

00:59:670 (2,3,4,5,1) -maybe you can do the same here too ^

[Star :3]

Himesaka Noa

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Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-10-27T19:58:05+00:00

Lally wrote:
Hi~ from My Queue (๑╹ω╹๑)

[General]
~ kiai time:
E: #1: 00:59:018 - 01:09:235 - #2: 01:12:931 - 01:26:844
N:#1: 00:59:018 - 01:09:235 - #2: 01:12:931 - 01:26:844
H: 00:59:018 - 01:26:844
I:#1: 00:59:018 - 01:09:235 - #2: 01:12:931 - 01:26:844

they should be all same à.à fix it

osu! wiki wrote:
Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense.
It is not unrankable. No change

[Hardflow]

00:39:887 - add a circle here No change
00:38:583 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - so looks better à.à just 'poligon cirle creator' No change
00:59:670 (2,3,4,5,1) -maybe you can do the same here too ^ No change

[Star :3]

Thanks for modding :3

Tari

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Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-10-28T02:32:32+00:00

No changes by me

HonDon

22 posts

Joined December 2011

HonDon 2012-10-28T08:28:48+00:00

노래 좋네요.
별 드리고 갈게요~

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-10-28T10:00:46+00:00

허헛 >w<
감사해요

Loneight

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1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2012-10-30T15:39:44+00:00

Hi~ Sonnyc >w<
M4M.

"re" is means "remove"
Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[general]

I think bookmark aren't on the line, how about re them?
I really think !!! you can more diligently to make pretty layout for your diffs of sliders >w<
Okay! Insane and Hardflow's tags is diffenert another diff >~<

[Taris' Easy]

00:25:757 (2) - x:124 y:220, it will be much pretty for me
00:29:887 (1) - last point on x:364 y:188, will be more symmetrical for me
00:41:844 (2,3) - move to x:140 y:172, much pretty for me >w<
01:05:757 (1,2) - swap NC? because I think NC should on the accent
01:09:670 (1,2) - how about change like this? will be more suitable for vocal
01:19:670 (1,2) - same as 01:05:757 (1,2)
01:23:148 (1,2) - same as 01:05:757 (1,2)

[Normal]

00:01:626 (1,2) - Don't you feel strange melody in there ;w;? how about change like 00:00:105 (1,2) ?
00:29:670 (1) - add finish in the end like Easy? because of the heavy sound
00:54:452 (1) - re NC~, I dosen't think why here have to NC >~<
01:11:409 (1) - how about follw vocal? just let it end on 01:12:063, melody will more better for me

[Hardflow]

00:01:626 - add a note in here in the end? empty here let me feel strange for melody and what you follow ;w;
00:02:713 (3,4) - I think use this rhythm will be more suitable for whether the vocal or the "ding" sound
00:29:887 (2) - use finish in the end? because of the heavy sound

[Insane]

00:20:757 (9) - I think it excess for rhythm, let it empty like 00:24:018 (10,1) ;w;?
00:30:322 (4) - use finish in the end like Easy? because of the heavy sound

good song & good luck~ :3
and sorry to my poor English

Last edited by Loneight 2012-10-30T16:23:12+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Himesaka Noa

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Himesaka Noa 2012-10-30T15:58:32+00:00

l1106188 wrote:
Hi~ Sonnyc >w<
M4M.

"re" is means "remove"
Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[general]
I think bookmark aren't on the line, how about re them?
I really think !!! you can more diligently to make pretty layout for your diffs of sliders >w<
Okay! Insane and Hardflow's tags is diffenert another diff >~< Fixed
[Hardflow]
00:01:626 - add a note in here in the end like Easy? empty here let me feel strange for melody and what you follow ;w; No change
00:02:713 (3,4) - I think use this rhythm will be more suitable for whether the vocal or the "ding" sound It is not follow vocal. No change
00:29:887 (2) - use finish in the end? because of the heavy sound I don't hear finish sound. No change
good song & good luck~ :3
and sorry to my poor English

Thanks for modding :3

Hardflow

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Tari

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1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-10-30T23:21:17+00:00

l1106188 wrote:
Hi~ Sonnyc >w<
M4M.

"re" is means "remove"
Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[general]
I think bookmark aren't on the line, how about re them?
I really think !!! you can more diligently to make pretty layout for your diffs of sliders >w<
Okay! Insane and Hardflow's tags is diffenert another diff >~<

[Taris' Easy]
00:25:757 (2) - x:124 y:220, it will be much pretty for me
00:29:887 (1) - last point on x:364 y:188, will be more symmetrical for me
00:41:844 (2,3) - move to x:140 y:172, much pretty for me >w<
01:05:757 (1,2) - swap NC? because I think NC should on the accent I think NC there is fine, note 1 is start of new vocals.
01:09:670 (1,2) - how about change like this? will be more suitable for vocal I think this follow the rhythm fine and clicking will be much easier.
01:19:670 (1,2) - same as 01:05:757 (1,2) ^ ^
01:23:148 (1,2) - same as 01:05:757 (1,2)
^

good song & good luck~ :3
and sorry to my poor English

Rest fixed thanks...

http://puu.sh/1kF08

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-11-03T17:44:33+00:00

l1106188 wrote:
Hi~ Sonnyc >w<
M4M.

[general]
I think bookmark aren't on the line, how about re them? Unsnapped Bookmarks aren't necessary lol
I really think !!! you can more diligently to make pretty layout for your diffs of sliders >w< Second opinion.. Well, I'll try
Okay! Insane and Hardflow's tags is diffenert another diff >~<
[Normal]
00:01:626 (1,2) - Don't you feel strange melody in there ;w;? how about change like 00:00:105 (1,2) ? Will consider
00:29:670 (1) - add finish in the end like Easy? because of the heavy sound Uhh, nope
00:54:452 (1) - re NC~, I dosen't think why here have to NC >~< Fix
01:11:409 (1) - how about follw vocal? just let it end on 01:12:063, melody will more better for me I want to follow melody here
[Insane]
00:20:757 (9) - I think it excess for rhythm, let it empty like 00:24:018 (10,1) ;w;? Fix
00:30:322 (4) - use finish in the end like Easy? because of the heavy sound No
good song & good luck~ :3
and sorry to my poor English

Sorry for the late reply >x< Thx for the mod

TheVileOne

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8,436 posts

Joined March 2010

TheVileOne 2012-11-11T22:43:46+00:00

My Mod

Taris' Easy
00:43:257 - Pointless green line

00:00:105 (1,2) - This is so ugly. I suggest you find a way to make these sliders work together. Aligning them would work.
00:10:104 (1,2) - Kind of rough transition. Such a drastic change between the curves.
00:40:104 (3,4,1) - 1.0 exactly?
00:59:018 (1) - Maybe add a little more curve to this. Unsure though.
01:00:757 (3) - Curve could be better. Make sure the points are equally distributed across the slider. Also about this combo, make sure the distance spacing is 1.0 and not a variant.
01:07:931 (4) - Could be better IMO. http://puu.sh/1pagl
01:11:409 (3) - not sure about this slider as well. seems it could be cleaner to me. http://puu.sh/1paiO
01:14:670 (3) - End needs to be lower to properly line up with note after.

Normal
Not much wrong.

00:00:757 (2) - A simpler curve would be better IMO. http://puu.sh/1pav2
00:11:409 (2,1) - doesn't look good. following 0.8 spacing here would be better.
00:27:061 (1,2,3) - Ugly. You just need to use slider curves that match. The proximity needs to be even .
00:37:061 (4) - Lessening this curve would be better. http://puu.sh/1paF2
01:00:974 (1) - Make symmetrical?
01:10:322 (2) - The red point makes this play weird. I would use a slider that doesn't have a red point. It would fit better.

Hardflow

00:00:105 - Those whistles are so quite. I think volume should be raised. You had 50% in the normal
00:12:278 (1,2) - Perfectly stack this. Make it 0.00. also 1 looks abnormally flat, I suggest increasing the curve.
01:02:496 (1,2) - Exactly 1.0?

Insane

Most of that slow down felt like you were trying to force difficulty. Instead of being flowing and smooth it was awkward. I wouldn't try so hard to make an easy part difficult.

00:05:974 (8,9) - Stack better.
00:19:887 (8) - I don't like this slider and suggest you use a four point slider.
00:51:409 (7,1,2,3) - I don't recommend speeding up in the middle of a slowdown. It throws people off when they have to slow down again.
00:56:409 (2,3) - You should reduce. this doesn't fit.

Himesaka Noa

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3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-11-12T00:21:11+00:00

TheVileOne wrote:
My Mod

Hardflow

00:00:105 - Those whistles are so quite. I think volume should be raised. You had 50% in the normal Okay, Changed
00:12:278 (1,2) - Perfectly stack this. Make it 0.00. also 1 looks abnormally flat, I suggest increasing the curve. Fixed
01:02:496 (1,2) - Exactly 1.0? Hmm... i think it is okay. No change

Thanks for modding :3

Hardflow

osu file format v10

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-11-12T23:03:22+00:00

All fixed somewhat o.o

http://puu.sh/1pyNR

Thanks.

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2012-11-17T14:22:40+00:00

Source: "To Heart 2" --> "ToHeart2"?

BG is so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute >.<

[Hitsounds]
imo use drum sound in the place of SC1clap maybe better
and some part of ur mapset is hard too hear...should be louder?

[Easy]
(Timeline)
41844,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
43257,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
one of them is useless.

00:17:061 (1) - del it?
00:45:322 (1) - not symmetrical

[Normal]
00:07:061 (1) - ugly to me
00:10:539 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
(About Kiai Time)
different with other diffs D:
imo OTHER DIFFS should set kiai like this diff cuz their have a weird non-kiai section.

~~00:57:713 - (drum) clap?~~ seems that drum sounds are not widey used

[Insane]
00:56:409 (2) - weird shape

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-11-18T00:36:37+00:00

Curisu wrote:
Source: "To Heart 2" --> "ToHeart2"?

BG is so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute >.<

[Hard]
(About Kiai Time)
different with other diffs D:
imo OTHER DIFFS should set kiai like this diff cuz their have a weird non-kiai section. It is not unrankable. No change

~~00:57:713 - (drum) clap?~~ seems that drum sounds are not widey used No change

Thanks for modding.

Hardflow

osu file format v10

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-11-18T02:36:38+00:00

TheVileOne wrote:
My Mod

Normal
Not much wrong.

00:00:757 (2) - A simpler curve would be better IMO. http://puu.sh/1pav2 Well, fixed
00:11:409 (2,1) - doesn't look good. following 0.8 spacing here would be better. It was my intention to make it more readable, also leading to the symmetry with (4)
00:27:061 (1,2,3) - Ugly. You just need to use slider curves that match. The proximity needs to be even. Idk.. Deleted (4) anyways
00:37:061 (4) - Lessening this curve would be better. http://puu.sh/1paF2 Made it as (5)
01:00:974 (1) - Make symmetrical? Uhh, fixed
01:10:322 (2) - The red point makes this play weird. I would use a slider that doesn't have a red point. It would fit better. Deleted, and reshaped

Insane

Most of that slow down felt like you were trying to force difficulty. Instead of being flowing and smooth it was awkward. I wouldn't try so hard to make an easy part difficult. --> Maybe you are talking about the 0.5 part? Well, since I prefer being smooth in mapping, this will be may decision..

00:05:974 (8,9) - Stack better. Fix
00:19:887 (8) - I don't like this slider and suggest you use a four point slider. I want to use the original form
00:51:409 (7,1,2,3) - I don't recommend speeding up in the middle of a slowdown. It throws people off when they have to slow down again. I'll get some more comments about this part
00:56:409 (2,3) - You should reduce. this doesn't fit. Moved

Thanks for modding~~ and sorry for the late comment,,

Curisu wrote:
Source: "To Heart 2" --> "ToHeart2"? No, I refered this from wikipedia, and I think "To Heart 2" is the right way

BG is so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute >.< :3

[Hitsounds]
imo use drum sound in the place of SC1clap maybe better Not sure about this..
and some part of ur mapset is hard too hear...should be louder? Increase your volume..? I dont think 60% and 80% sound is hard to hear

[Normal]
00:07:061 (1) - ugly to me Will consider fixes if there are more opinions in here
00:10:539 (1,2) - ^ Intention to fit in the previous sliders, and then symmetry.. Was it that weird?

[Insane]
00:56:409 (2) - weird shape Maybe it's because I've decreased (1).. Reshaped

[]
Thank you everyone!!

Birdy

5,757 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2012-11-18T03:09:07+00:00

[Easy]
00:45:322 (1) - Unsymmetrical

[Normal]
00:00:757 (2) - A bit compressed, make the curves more round (especially first curve)
00:17:496 (1,3) - Make curves more round again, please
01:11:409 (1) - Slider end x:372 y:108

[Hard]
01:18:148 (1) - Stack on the end of 01:17:278 (5)

[Insane]
Fine~

Good luck!

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-11-18T03:47:42+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
[Hard]
01:18:148 (1) - Stack on the end of 01:17:278 (5) Already stacked

Good luck!

Thanks for modding :3

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-11-18T08:18:10+00:00

Okay~ make some changes to that unsymmetrical slider. Thanks.

My Diff

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17526,31429,45342,59048,72961
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Taris' Easy
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening
BeatmapID:186015
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Behon

Elite Mapper

1,380 posts

Here since the beginning

Behon 2012-11-19T14:31:17+00:00

Taris' Easy:

00:13:800 (3): I feel it would seem "cleaner" if you got rid of the hitcircle and moved the spinner up to start in its place (Though you should still end the spinner at 00:16:191).
01:00:757 (3): Having this so soon after the previous slider end seems weird for an Easy difficulty. Consider shortening this slider and moving it forward to start at 01:00:974.
01:14:670 (3): See above.

Normal:

No problems.

Hardflow:

00:27:713 (4): Make this a new combo.
00:27:931 (1): Get rid of the new combo here.
00:39:452 (4): Move to 00:39:561.
00:39:670 (5): Move to 00:39:887.
00:40:974 (3): Why is this slider at such a slight angle? Make it straight down or more noticeably tilted.
01:08:800 (3): Same problem here.

Insane seems fine, but I'm not the best person for looking at that type of difficulty.

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-11-19T23:56:52+00:00

Behonkiss wrote:
Hardflow:

00:27:713 (4): Make this a new combo. No change
00:27:931 (1): Get rid of the new combo here. No change
00:39:452 (4): Move to 00:39:561. No change
00:39:670 (5): Move to 00:39:887. No change
00:40:974 (3): Why is this slider at such a slight angle? Make it straight down or more noticeably tilted. Okay, Fixed
01:08:800 (3): Same problem here. Fixed

Insane seems fine, but I'm not the best person for looking at that type of difficulty.

Thanks for modding :3

Hardflow

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-11-20T00:27:29+00:00

Behonkiss wrote:
Taris' Easy:

00:13:800 (3): I feel it would seem "cleaner" if you got rid of the hitcircle and moved the spinner up to start in its place (Though you should still end the spinner at 00:16:191).
01:00:757 (3): Having this so soon after the previous slider end seems weird for an Easy difficulty. Consider shortening this slider and moving it forward to start at 01:00:974.
01:14:670 (3): See above.

Insane seems fine, but I'm not the best person for looking at that type of difficulty.

No changes, The rhythm will feel broken if I remove such notes.

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-11-20T16:01:11+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
[Normal]
00:00:757 (2) - A bit compressed, make the curves more round (especially first curve) Well, I dont know exactly what you mean, but made some changes..
00:17:496 (1,3) - Make curves more round again, please Made a bit rounder
01:11:409 (1) - Slider end x:372 y:108 Uhh kind of symmetry mistake. Fixed

Good luck! // Ty~

and thank you elite mapper :3

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2012-11-20T20:38:49+00:00

Hello~ Sonnyc~
Chat Modding!
(Modding Language - Korean and English)

제가 말씀 드리는 것은 조언입니다.

굳이 수정안하셔도 좋습니다.

I'm telling you that advice.
Necessarily recommend you do not have to change.

[Taris' Easy]
Distance Snap did you use?
Does not fit the distance between the notes is expected.
00:33:148 (3) - 1/2 Slide change?
00:34:018 - Combo add? (The above changes)
01:11:409 (3) - Arrow Add?
01:25:322 (1) - NC?

[Normal]
00:17:496 (1,2) - 1/2 슬라이드로 바꿔보시는게 어떠신가요?
00:30:757 (2) - ^ (너무 짧은 슬라.,)

[Hardflow]
언플님 Hi:3
00:01:626 (4) - 1/1 슬라이드 애로우 넣어보시는게 어떠신가요?
00:13:800 (1) - 스피너 시작 00:14:018 -

[Insane]
00:22:713 (7) - NC?
00:49:452 (3) - 슬라이드넣어보시는게 어떠신가요? 00:50:104 - 끝부분
01:12:713 (7) - Clap Add?

조언드리고 싶어도 보이지가 않습니다

Ranked Hope!

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-11-21T06:54:31+00:00

-Kirito wrote:
Hello~ Sonnyc~
Chat Modding!
(Modding Language - Korean and English)

제가 말씀 드리는 것은 조언입니다.
굳이 수정안하셔도 좋습니다.

I'm telling you that advice.
Necessarily recommend you do not have to change.

[Hardflow]
언플님 Hi:3
00:01:626 (4) - 1/1 슬라이드 애로우 넣어보시는게 어떠신가요? I can't understand. but i don't change this!
00:13:800 (1) - 스피너 시작 00:14:018 - No change

조언드리고 싶어도 보이지가 않습니다
Ranked Hope!

Thanks for modding :3
Please update to this.

Hardflow

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Saten

Global Moderator

3,871 posts

Joined August 2010

Saten 2012-11-22T03:24:39+00:00

Hiii

[General]
Insane is missing opening in tags

[Insane]
00:16:844 (2,3,4) - This part is actually 1/6. should be no problem using it since the bpm is pretty low
00:30:756 (1,2,3) - this too
00:45:322 (1) - finish on start
00:58:148 - why low volume?
00:59:018 (1) - ^
01:08:583 (2,3) - this make it kinda hard to judge whenever it's the start or not. I would suggest that you make a custom stacking here. 00:50:539 (5,6,7) - this for example does this automatically
01:12:713 (7) - whistle
01:12:931 (1) - finish on start
01:18:800 (2,3) - same as before
01:22:496 (2,3) - ^
01:24:887 (3) - whistle

[Hardflow]
00:13:800 (1,1) - this is so mean
00:16:844 (1) - Would you change this to 1/6? because the song calls for it
00:30:757 (3) - same here
00:59:670 (2) - Reverse (Ctrl+G)? This could be interesting
01:10:322 (2) - ^

[Normal]
00:45:322 (1) - finish on start
00:57:278 (3) - ^
00:59:018 (1) - I think the previous object is too close to this, you should Reverse this. Also, add finish on start
01:11:409 (1,1) - same here, it's too close. And being able to see the approach circle makes it worse
01:12:931 (1) - finish on start

[Tari]
00:00:105 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - using a lower distance snap when you have sliders like this isn't really a good idea imo. 00:45:322 - this part is more accepting since it's slower and the player has already learn the rhythm by then.
00:56:626 (1) - finish on end
01:11:409 (3) - this should end 1/2 later. It feels kinda awkward when it ends on a red tick

I guess that's all
Goodluck!

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-11-22T04:15:29+00:00

Saten wrote:
Hiii

[Hardflow]
00:13:800 (1,1) - this is so mean ...
00:16:844 (1) - Would you change this to 1/6? because the song calls for it Fixed
00:30:757 (3) - same here Fixed
00:59:670 (2) - Reverse (Ctrl+G)? This could be interesting I'll think about it
01:10:322 (2) - ^ ^

I guess that's all
Goodluck!

Thanks for modding, Saten >_<

Hardflow

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-11-23T06:06:49+00:00

I didn't fix last one in kirito mod, but saten mod is all fixed, thanks

My Diff

osu file format v10

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Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-11-23T10:22:45+00:00

-Kirito wrote:
Hello~ Sonnyc~
Chat Modding!
(Modding Language - Korean and English)

제가 말씀 드리는 것은 조언입니다.
굳이 수정안하셔도 좋습니다.

I'm telling you that advice.
Necessarily recommend you do not have to change.

[Normal]
00:17:496 (1,2) - 1/2 슬라이드로 바꿔보시는게 어떠신가요? // 패턴을 해칠까봐 힘들듯요 ㅜㅜ
00:30:757 (2) - ^ (너무 짧은 슬라.,) // 비록 1/4 이지만 초보라도 잘 칠수 있을거라고 믿어요

[Insane]
00:22:713 (7) - NC? \\ 안바꿀래요,, 동일 패턴이라서요
00:49:452 (3) - 슬라이드넣어보시는게 어떠신가요? 00:50:104 - 끝부분 \\ 못생긴듯 해서 조언 대로 리맵 했습니다
01:12:713 (7) - Clap Add? \\ 음,, 클랩 안어울리는듯요 ㅜㅜ

조언드리고 싶어도 보이지가 않습니다
Ranked Hope!

Saten wrote:
Hiii

[General]
Insane is missing opening in tags \\ Uhh.. yes

[Insane]
00:16:844 (2,3,4) - This part is actually 1/6. should be no problem using it since the bpm is pretty low \\ Well, breaked into 2 1/6 sliders
00:30:756 (1,2,3) - this too \\ ^
00:45:322 (1) - finish on start
00:58:148 - why low volume? \\ Since after here, it is a blank, so I dont want the hit sound last..
00:59:018 (1) - ^ // ?
01:08:583 (2,3) - this make it kinda hard to judge whenever it's the start or not. I would suggest that you make a custom stacking here. 00:50:539 (5,6,7) - this for example does this automatically \\ I want to keep here.. I hope people will be good enough to catch here, and also I think changing this may ruin the flow what I want
01:12:713 (7) - whistle
01:12:931 (1) - finish on start
01:18:800 (2,3) - same as before
01:22:496 (2,3) - ^
01:24:887 (3) - whistle \\ Fixed whatever not mentioned :3

[Normal]
00:45:322 (1) - finish on start
00:57:278 (3) - ^ // Though the melody sounds it needs a Finish here, I want to follow the lyrics and I dont think Finish sound goes well here
00:59:018 (1) - I think the previous object is too close to this, you should Reverse this. Also, add finish on start \\ Reversed
01:11:409 (1,1) - same here, it's too close. And being able to see the approach circle makes it worse \\ Made an alternative pattern
01:12:931 (1) - finish on start

I guess that's all
Goodluck!

~_~

ririco

6,402 posts

Joined February 2011

ririco 2012-12-08T09:24:09+00:00

Hi :3 requested from My Queue ~

General:

I think you should add " eroge game visual novel" on the tag since this not an anime ><
the source should be "ToHeart 2" not "To Heart 2" ....

Taris' Easy:

00:03:583 (1) - I think this slider can be curved better imo like this? http://puu.sh/1ysCz (then dont forget to fix the spacing on the next note)
00:13:800 (3) - remove this not and then 00:12:713 (2) - let this slider end at 00:13:583 - ~
00:17:496 (2) - NC here to give nice effect with song and since the vocal started here ~
00:24:452 (1) - well why finish when there isnt one in the music o.o i suggest you to remove it and then add whistle instead~
00:30:974 (2) - it'll be better if you add finish with clap so it'll sound strong enough with music~
00:34:887 (1) - whistle instead of finish~
00:49:235 (4) - add nc here since there is new vocal~

Normal:
I think sv 1.40 is too fast for normal orz so make it 1.20 o.o

00:29:670 (1) - too much revers can be confusing since this is a normal diff, so i suggest you to change it to double sliders it'll fit better imo~
00:40:104 (4,1) - switch those nc i think it should be on the 4 not the one ~
01:00:974 (1) - well i think this slider can be better so do it like this? http://puu.sh/1yt0p
01:07:496 (2) - ^ do it like the above~
01:08:365 (3) - remove this annoying whistle on this slider and you missed to add a claps on the start and on the end ><
01:12:713 (x) - add note here with clap so it'll fit with the music~
01:15:757 (2) - remove whistle on the end and then add clap instead sounds much better to me~
01:19:670 (4) - ^
01:23:148 (4) - ^

Hardflow:
There is no video on this diff plz fix it~

00:16:844 (1) - well this slider is hard to read since it's after the spinner maybe remove it?
00:29:670 (1) - add finish here to follow the music~
00:30:757 (3) - add clap on the end ^ same reason as above ~
00:41:626 (4) - remove this clap it's break your clap consistency ><
00:44:452 (3) - remove the clap on the start of this slider it dont fit imo~
00:45:104 (4) - remove clap plz~
00:45:104 (4) - add whistle to the whole sliders but not the body and remove the clap on the revers~

Insane:

00:07:061 (1) - add finish here it's sounds better to me~
00:22:713 (7) - nc here since the combo is too long >< and there is new lyrics~
00:25:757 (8) - ^
00:29:670 (1,3) - add finish on those notes it fits good imo~
00:33:148 (7) - nc here because of the new vocal~
00:34:887 (5) - add finish here o.o/ it fits well~
00:40:104 (7) - nc here because it'll give nice effect on "egao" =w=/

Nice map and song owo/ good luck with ranking ~

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-12-08T17:55:34+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote:
Hi :3 requested from My Queue ~

Hardflow:
There is no video on this diff plz fix it~ Again?! Fixed T^T
00:16:844 (1) - well this slider is hard to read since it's after the spinner maybe remove it? Hmm... i think now is okay. No change
00:29:670 (1) - add finish here to follow the music~ Hmm... i can't hear. No change
00:30:757 (3) - add clap on the end ^ same reason as above ~ Fixed
00:41:626 (4) - remove this clap it's break your clap consistency >< Hmm... No change
00:44:452 (3) - remove the clap on the start of this slider it dont fit imo~ ^
00:45:104 (4) - remove clap plz~ ^
00:45:104 (4) - add whistle to the whole sliders but not the body and remove the clap on the revers~ ^

Nice map and song owo/ good luck with ranking ~

Thanks for modding, Sekai-nyan >_<

Hardflow

Download: http://puu.sh/1yAfs
If you can't download, use this code.

osu file format v10

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Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-12-09T12:37:02+00:00

Sorry, I have an exam next week, so any updates will be done at Friday

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-12-14T15:29:28+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote:
Hi :3 requested from My Queue ~

General:
I think you should add " eroge game visual novel" on the tag since this not an anime >< // :3 maybe I should
the source should be "ToHeart 2" not "To Heart 2" .... // I've referred from the wikipedia, an I think To Heart 2 is correct.

Normal:
I think sv 1.40 is too fast for normal orz so make it 1.20 o.o // o.o
00:29:670 (1) - too much revers can be confusing since this is a normal diff, so i suggest you to change it to double sliders it'll fit better imo~ // Well, I want the current one for now
00:40:104 (4,1) - switch those nc i think it should be on the 4 not the one ~ // Uhh.. not on my pattern
01:00:974 (1) - well i think this slider can be better so do it like this? http://puu.sh/1yt0p // Fix
01:07:496 (2) - ^ do it like the above~ // ^
01:08:365 (3) - remove this annoying whistle on this slider and you missed to add a claps on the start and on the end >< // No, Whistle here was my intention~
01:12:713 (x) - add note here with clap so it'll fit with the music~ // I dont think a note here will be nice for a normal
01:15:757 (2) - remove whistle on the end and then add clap instead sounds much better to me~ // I'm using Whistle~
01:19:670 (4) - ^ // ^
01:23:148 (4) - ^ // ^

Insane:
00:07:061 (1) - add finish here it's sounds better to me~ // Mm.. I dont like Finish here
00:22:713 (7) - nc here since the combo is too long >< and there is new lyrics~ // Well, ok
00:25:757 (8) - ^ // NC at 00:26:191 (9)
00:29:670 (1,3) - add finish on those notes it fits good imo~ // I don't like soft Finish
00:33:148 (7) - nc here because of the new vocal~ // fix
00:34:887 (5) - add finish here o.o/ it fits well~
00:40:104 (7) - nc here because it'll give nice effect on "egao" =w=/ // I dont see why I sould make a effect on that, well but nc to follow the pattern

Nice map and song owo/ good luck with ranking ~

Thank you ^^

Tag fixed and offset +8

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-12-17T03:55:21+00:00

Hi, Sonnyc.

[Taris' Easy]
00:17:069 (1) - Note after spinner should be new combo

[Normal]
00:05:330 (3) - New combo
00:29:678 (1) - Hmm... i think this 2 repeat slider is confusing. How about change to this?

SPOILER

00:29:678 (1) - Circle
00:29:895 (2) - 1 / 2 repeat slider

00:30:765 (2) - It is not 1 / 4. Change to 1 / 6 two repeat slider.
00:57:286 (3) - Add finish on slider head
01:10:330 (2) - Remove whistle on slider head
01:12:939 (1) - Add finish on slider head
01:18:373 (3) - New combo

[Hardflow]
- Changed offset to 113 and add tags.

Hardflow

Download: http://puu.sh/1BPYG
If you can't download, use this code.

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening eroge game visual novel
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"TH2OP.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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90112,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,10,0,0
90547,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,157,60
Combo3 : 255,136,196
Combo4 : 209,164,255

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[Insane]
- This difficulty is had unsnapped notes. Snap this notes.

00:16:960 (3) - Slider end
00:30:873 (2) - Slider end

00:16:852 (2,3) - A distance between this notes is not 1 / 8. Move 00:16:997 (3) to 00:16:997
00:30:765 (1,2) - Same as 00:16:852 (2,3). Move 00:30:873 (2) to 00:30:910

Good luck :3

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-12-17T12:43:30+00:00

Underflow wrote:

Hi, Sonnyc.

[Taris' Easy]
00:17:069 (1) - Note after spinner should be new combo

[Normal]
00:05:330 (3) - New combo // Fix
00:29:678 (1) - Hmm... i think this 2 repeat slider is confusing. How about change to this? // I think the original slider fits the music

SPOILER

00:29:678 (1) - Circle
00:29:895 (2) - 1 / 2 repeat slider

00:30:765 (2) - It is not 1 / 4. Change to 1 / 6 two repeat slider. // Actually it's quite hard to hear if this is 1/6 or not, so I think the current slider will be ok. Also, fixing to 1/6 will be too hard for a Normal. (even it's a slider)
00:57:286 (3) - Add finish on slider head // Well there's a sound like that.. but I don't want to put a hit sound here
01:10:330 (2) - Remove whistle on slider head // The Whistle is to follow the melody
01:12:939 (1) - Add finish on slider head // Mistake :/
01:18:373 (3) - New combo // I don't want a combo that short..

[Hardflow]
- Changed offset to 113 and add tags.

Hardflow

Download: http://puu.sh/1BPYG
If you can't download, use this code.

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59018
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening eroge game visual novel
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"TH2OP.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
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12286,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
14460,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15330,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
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89243,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,30,0,0
89678,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,20,0,0
90112,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,10,0,0
90547,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,157,60
Combo3 : 255,136,196
Combo4 : 209,164,255

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[Insane]
- This difficulty is had unsnapped notes. Snap this notes. // Fix

00:16:960 (3) - Slider end
00:30:873 (2) - Slider end

00:16:852 (2,3) - A distance between this notes is not 1 / 8. Move 00:16:997 (3) to 00:16:997 // Mistakes..
00:30:765 (1,2) - Same as 00:16:852 (2,3). Move 00:30:873 (2) to 00:30:910

Good luck :3

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2012-12-22T18:58:44+00:00

I forgot which ones I fixed.

But here:

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59026
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Taris' Easy
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening eroge game visual novel
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
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Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-12-24T15:17:09+00:00

Hi there

[Taris' Easy]
* AR +1?

00:17:069 (1) - New combo here, since this note follows a spinner (this is just a reminder if you forgot to add or not)

[Normal]
* In kiai time, it lacks of clap hitsound. Please add them

00:40:982 (1) - Why new combo?

[Hardflow]
00:16:852 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for player. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539973

[Insane]
00:13:808 (5) - Add finish?
00:16:634 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for player. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539973
01:04:895 (2,3) - If you do this, the player will confuse about which one is head slider and tail slider. Consider to unstack together so it makes readable

Byee now~

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2012-12-27T12:49:28+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[Hardflow]
00:16:852 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for player. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539973 Hmm... I follow by Sonnyc's decisions.

Byee now~

Thanks for modding :3

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2012-12-30T17:47:31+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[Taris' Easy]
* AR +1? // Idk, Taris will be the one to decide finally, but I think 3 is enough for an easy

00:17:069 (1) - New combo here, since this note follows a spinner (this is just a reminder if you forgot to add or not) // Fixed for Taris

[Normal]
* In kiai time, it lacks of clap hitsound. Please add them // Whistles are enough imo

00:40:982 (1) - Why new combo? // A new tempo starts, simply

[Hardflow]
00:16:852 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for player. Do the colorhax by doing this // Fix
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539973

[Insane]
00:13:808 (5) - Add finish? // No, for my consistency. Also Finishing here was quite loud
00:16:634 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for player. Do the colorhax by doing this //
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/539973
01:04:895 (2,3) - If you do this, the player will confuse about which one is head slider and tail slider. Consider to unstack together so it makes readable // Orz Finally fixed this

Byee now~

Thanks now~

Sure

4,220 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2013-01-02T22:42:12+00:00

ogg는 프리뷰 재생이 안 되는 문제가 있으니까 가능하면 mp3로 바꾸세요.

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2013-01-03T07:35:26+00:00

Mp3 File: http://puu.sh/1IQbf

Ranger

939 posts

Joined June 2011

Ranger 2013-01-04T10:43:45+00:00

as from M4M

[Easy]
01:00:112 (2) - How about change silder length from 00:59:895~01:00:547
01:01:852 (4) - ^
01:14:026 (2) - How about move silder from 01:13:808

[Normal]
00:40:982 (1,2) - 이거 두개를 슬라이더 하나로 합쳐도 괜찮을것 같아요

[Hardflow]
00:30:547 - 여기에 노트 추가해보면 어떨까요?
00:55:112 - ^
00:55:547 - ^
01:05:330 (3) - 이런식으로 만들어보는건 어떨까요?

01:12:286 (3) - 반복부분에 클랩?

[Insane]
01:06:199 (1) - 하드락모드에서 HP바에 닿아요

부족한 모딩 죄송합니다ㅠ

Love

osu! Alumni

1,267 posts

Joined August 2010

Love 2013-01-04T12:31:41+00:00

Hi, posting from my modding queue.

Red: Must be changed.
Black: Suggestion.

[General]
Nothing here.

[Taris' Easy]
00:34:895 (1) - Whistle instead of finish, there's no huge change in the song here.
00:59:026 (1) - You are missing a clap at the end of this.
01:00:765 (3) - ^
01:09:678 (1) - Whistle instead of finish, same reason as the first one.
01:11:417 (3) - You can add a whistle at the beginning of this.
01:12:939 (1) - Clap at the end of this slider.
01:14:678 (3) - ^

[Normal]
The notes are kinda squished together because of the 1.0x distance spacing, maybe try 1.1 to spread it out a little? If its too much work then don't worry about it.
00:17:504 (1) - Try following the approach circle like this, a 1.5x jump won't hurt the player. http://puu.sh/1JlQ7
00:30:765 (2) - Change this to a 1/6 slider kick instead of 1/4? Just an opinion I have. I understand that this is 1/4 so its not as hard to slider break.
01:20:982 (2,3,4) - Stack these, it looks a bit nicer this way.
01:22:722 (2,3,4) - ^

[Hardflow]
00:16:852 (1) - Add a whistle to the whole slider besides the end?
00:30:765 (3) - ^
00:45:330 - 00:55:765 Turn the volume up to 45%? Its a little to quiet here, 40% will work as well.

[Insane]
00:49:460 (2) - 1 grid to the left and up? Also switch the whistle to the end of the slider instead of the beginning.
00:55:765 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this slider.
00:56:417 (2) - ^
00:57:069 (3) - Use a clap instead of a whistle?

___________________________________________________________________________

Really nice mapset by the way.

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2013-01-04T22:26:27+00:00

[Ranger] wrote:
as from M4M

[Easy]
01:00:112 (2) - How about change silder length from 00:59:895~01:00:547
01:01:852 (4) - ^
01:14:026 (2) - How about move silder from 01:13:808
Did some rhythm changes, Hopefully its better now.

부족한 모딩 죄송합니다ㅠ

Love wrote:
Hi, posting from my modding queue.

Red: Must be changed.
Black: Suggestion.

[General]
Nothing here.

[Taris' Easy]
00:34:895 (1) - Whistle instead of finish, there's no huge change in the song here. I'm trying to be consistent on hitsounds here, So if I do that I must remove finish here too 00:38:373 (1) - plus I like the sound.
00:59:026 (1) - You are missing a clap at the end of this.
01:00:765 (3) - ^
01:09:678 (1) - Whistle instead of finish, same reason as the first one. No change on this, I hear a very strong beat here.
01:11:417 (3) - You can add a whistle at the beginning of this.
01:12:939 (1) - Clap at the end of this slider.
01:14:678 (3) - ^

___________________________________________________________________________

Really nice mapset by the way.

Rest should be fixed, Thanks for modding.

Update Diff

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59026
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17526,31429,45342,59048,72961
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Taris' Easy
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening eroge game visual novel
BeatmapID:186015
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"TH2OP.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

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Himesaka Noa

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Himesaka Noa 2013-01-05T05:35:30+00:00

[Ranger] wrote:
as from M4M

[Hardflow]
00:30:547 - 여기에 노트 추가해보면 어떨까요? Hmm.. i think what this does is just confuse people. No change
00:55:112 - ^ Also, No change
00:55:547 - ^ ^
01:05:330 (3) - 이런식으로 만들어보는건 어떨까요? No change
01:12:286 (3) - 반복부분에 클랩? I can't hear clap sound on repeat arrow. No change.

부족한 모딩 죄송합니다ㅠ

Love wrote:
Hi, posting from my modding queue.

Red: Must be changed.
Black: Suggestion.

[Hardflow]
00:16:852 (1) - Add a whistle to the whole slider besides the end? Hmm... I'll think about it.
00:30:765 (3) - ^ ^
00:45:330 - 00:55:765 Turn the volume up to 45%? Its a little to quiet here, 40% will work as well. ^

___________________________________________________________________________

Really nice mapset by the way.

Thanks for modding :3

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-01-10T03:05:38+00:00

아.. 업뎃해야 되는데..

koreapenguin

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koreapenguin 2013-01-11T03:55:31+00:00

랭크언제시켜줄꺼에요?

더플 연습해놓게여

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-01-11T04:36:35+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
랭크언제시켜줄꺼에요?

더플 연습해놓게여

노말 리매핑중 ㅜㅜ

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2013-01-26T10:00:02+00:00

Hi from the Queue!

General

Adjust the Kiai time like its on Hard, maybe make a fountain at 01:13:047 -

Easy

00:45:330 - Dont slowdown on an Easy map, the player doesnt expect this. Remove the timing point and fix the slider and spacing after
00:59:026 (1,2) - Doesnt follow the song, try making a slider till 00:59:678 - and then a second one at 00:59:895 - and then add some circles or a slider after like here

Example

01:26:852 (1) - Let the spinner end at 01:29:678 - so it ends with the vocal

Normal

00:45:330 - Again like on Normal, dont slow down since the beginner doesnt expect it
00:51:634 (1) - Remove NC
01:26:852 (1) - Like Easy

Hard

01:26:960 (1) - Like Easy and Normal

Nothing more on this

Insane

00:16:852 (2,3) - This is too hard to play and it doesnt fit the map as well, make a sliderrepeat or small stream instead
00:30:765 (1,2) - ^
00:57:069 (3) - I would place this a bit higher so it fits upwith the preview jumps
01:02:939 (3,4) - I dont think this jump fits with the pattern, try to stack it maybe onto (5)
01:16:852 (3,4) - ^
01:26:852 (1) - Like on Easy, Normal and Hard

Good luck

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-01-26T15:00:33+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi from the Queue!

General

Adjust the Kiai time like its on Hard, maybe make a fountain at 01:13:047 - // We like how it looks like currently

Normal

00:45:330 - Again like on Normal, dont slow down since the beginner doesnt expect it // I don't think this should be regarded a serious problem.. well I need more opinion
00:51:634 (1) - Remove NC // Fix
01:26:852 (1) - Like Easy // I want to let this spin until the music ends

Insane

00:16:852 (2,3) - This is too hard to play and it doesnt fit the map as well, make a sliderrepeat or small stream instead // I can't agree to you. The music is 1/6 this part,and a small stream would be more harder
00:30:765 (1,2) - ^
00:57:069 (3) - I would place this a bit higher so it fits upwith the preview jumps // Since (2) ends quite low, placing higher is quite hard to play
01:02:939 (3,4) - I dont think this jump fits with the pattern, try to stack it maybe onto (5) // Placing at (5) doesn't looks that good.. Also since (4) is placed on (1), I don't think there are problems with pattern
01:16:852 (3,4) - ^
01:26:852 (1) - Like on Easy, Normal and Hard

Good luck

Thank you~

Himesaka Noa

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Himesaka Noa 2013-01-26T17:38:45+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi from the Queue!

General

Adjust the Kiai time like its on Hard, maybe make a fountain at 01:13:047 - I don't change kiai time.

Hard

01:26:960 (1) - Like Easy and Normal This spinner is not following vocal. No change.

Nothing more on this

Good luck

Thanks for modding :3

-kevincela-

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-kevincela- 2013-01-29T17:22:54+00:00

Hey!

[Taris' Easy]

00:00:113 (1) - Please,consider shortening this by 1/2 there. As you have been following the vocals for the rest of the pattern,I suggest you this changement instead,as in the place where this slider actually finishes there is no vocal changement being played there. Shortening this slider by 1/2 would actually work really good,and it would make the transition with 00:01:634 (2) - a 2/1 quite understandable and funny to play. After having done the same on 00:01:634 (2) - you will get this:
00:03:591 (1,2,3) - This is more a personal opinion,so just fix if you want: the linear flow combined with 00:03:591 (1) - imho didn't really go that smooth,probably because it hasn't really followed 00:03:591 (1) - 's oval flow... I have a little idea there: what about reworking a bit the pattern to make the whole pattern go smooth? Curving a bit more 00:03:591 (1) - and placing the hitobjects above it would actually flow good,especially with a "3" shaped slider,which encircles 00:03:591 (1) - and makes a nice triangular pattern with 00:07:069 (2) - . Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
400,340,3591,6,0,P|340:368|248:340,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,292,4678,1,2,0:0:0
116,216,5112,2,0,P|160:176|224:200|224:200|200:124|260:80,1,250,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,160,6634,5,0,0:0:0
404,108,7069,2,0,B|432:176|420:268,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,352,8373,1,2,0:0:0
216,308,8808,2,0,B|205:228|233:160,1,150
```
00:06:634 (1) - This is a quite little thing,just fix if you want: What about moving the New Combo to 00:07:069 (2) - ? I see you are trying to follow the voice there,but instead emphatizing the synth's start there would be better,as it starts the whole guitar pattern.
00:06:634 (1) - While at 00:05:112 (3) - the whistle at the end did actually make sense,as of the synth's getting its pitch higher there,here it's just unneded,as there is really no reason to follow the vocals in the background there. What about removing it and making the whistle/finish transition as a 2/1 one? That would actually make sense.
00:31:852 (2,3,4) - Hmm... I didn't really like the transition you used between this curved slider and 00:33:156 (3) - which is almost linear. Their placements kinda breaks the flow and makes a spacing unconsistency with 00:34:460 (4) - (0.9x instead of 1.0x)... It is a little thing,although I suggest you to transform this transition with a curved slider and a wave slider. With some tweakings they would fit just PERFECTLY there and they would continue the pattern well with an arc-shaped pattern. Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
348,56,30982,1,8,0:0:0
256,96,31417,5,4,0:0:0
168,144,31852,2,0,P|112:204|168:292,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,272,33156,2,0,P|316:256|356:296|356:296|396:336|448:320,1,200
488,228,34460,1,8,0:0:0
412,160,34895,5,4,0:0:0
312,168,35330,2,0,B|260:192|200:164,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,80,36199,2,0,B|204:60|156:88,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
68,116,37069,2,0,B|60:196|180:236|169:306,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
01:10:112 (2,3,1) - This is a really minor graphical thing,just fix if you want: the current pattern is quite awkward to see and play,which is quite bad here,considering how you have deveoped your entire patterns. What about continuing here with an encircle,continuing 01:10:112 (2) - 's flow? I would actually prefer this pattern,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
500,132,69678,5,4,0:0:0
416,80,70112,2,0,P|356:88|312:164,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,276,71417,2,0,P|296:316|400:272,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,176,72939,6,0,P|224:156|144:184,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,256,74026,2,0,P|25:296|25:296|30:337|2:387,2,150,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,268,75765,2,0,P|224:272|284:248,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,204,76634,6,0,B|376:124|456:88,1,150
360,44,77721,1,2,0:0:0
272,84,78156,2,0,B|200:132|92:36|16:80,1,250,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
You have a quite nice diff there! There is nothing really major there,so sorry if I have been too much picky there! Hope I have been helpful ^^

[Normal]

00:02:721 (2) - What about adding a whistle at the end of this slider? Other than keeping your consistency it would fit pretty nice within the whistles being played there,so why not adding it? Without the whistle here the whole slider sounded kinda empty :< The same applies for 00:04:678 (2) -, 00:05:112 (3) - 's beginning,00:11:634 (2) - and 00:09:243 (3) - 's beginning!
00:07:069 (1) - What about adding a finish (a soft one,without using normal additions) at the top of this slider? Like Taris did on his diff,this does actually fit rather well,considering that the new synthesizer phrase is being started there,so emphatizing this change would actually sound good.
00:30:765 (1) - Heh,not really the kind of rhythm setting expected for a Normal diff. While it sounds pretty neat,from the other side it makes the rhythm too much complex, and not really understandable for a newbie. You have two solutions there: you could replace the slider with a 1/2 pattern,like a 1/2 slider with no repeats or 2 1/2 notes,or you could simply delete it - not mapping it would work pretty much fine there,as that "clap" isn't taking the place there
00:34:895 (x)- Heh,not following the synthesizer here is not a really good idea,imho... I understand your choice on just following the vocals,but anyways avoiding to follow the synthesizer here plays quite strange and considering you have been following it in other parts like 00:31:417 (1,3) - why don't you follow it too here by adding a note there? That would actually create a fun 1/2 pattern to play imho,so you should totally do it! Note that the same applies for 00:38:373 - !
00:56:852 (x)- As above,a note here wouldn't hurt at all,considering the fact that both the vocals and the drums start at 00:56:852 - ,1/2 before the doublet begins, so I can't really see no reason to create instead a triplet here.
00:59:026 (1,2) - This is again a really little thing,just fix if you want: as I find this transition to play not so smooth as the others do,probably because of 00:59:026 (1) - 's oval flow getting quite broken there,what about instead making a different kind of pattern,to follow that oval flow? I have a pretty much neat idea,using 00:57:286 (3) - to encircle 00:59:026 (1) - ,ans so continuing the pattern upwards--->downwards,which totally flows good with 01:00:765 (1) - . Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
452,336,59026,6,0,P|388:288|380:192,1,180,4|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0
372,136,59895,2,0,P|285:89|204:116,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,140,60765,6,0,P|148:176|168:204|168:204|172:244|136:280|84:268,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,216,61634,2,0,P|60:184|60:184|48:144|52:88|108:56,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,44,62721,6,0,P|268:36|308:56|308:56|288:100|296:148,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
01:13:808 (2) - Considering your previous pattern in which you have used this kind of hitsounds pattern,a whistle should be added on the top of this note,considering you have always followed your 1/2 whistle pattern there.
Really nice Normal diff, it flows almost perfectly and rhythm-wise is really solid!

[Hardflow]

00:03:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Oh well,I didn't really like how this pattern actally played ,probably because of the dropoff there which gets kinda broken. I would rather structure the whole pattern horizontally,with an arc-shaped pattern and some curved sliders: it would continue totally good that dropoff with 00:03:156 (4) - ! Here's what I have done,see if you like it
SPOILER
```
196,188,3591,5,0,0:0:0
272,164,3808,1,0,0:0:0
344,196,4026,1,2,0:0:0
376,268,4243,2,0,P|412:280|456:268,1,80
496,204,4678,2,0,P|460:192|416:204,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,268,5112,1,0,0:0:0
324,328,5330,6,0,P|284:337|248:325,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,200,6199,2,0,P|459:190|495:202,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,304,7069,6,0,B|260:344|192:356|140:336,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
00:16:852 (1) - I guess you missed a clap here,at the end of the whole slider? I can clearly hear the clap there,and I see you have used this on the top of other 1/6 sliders following the same chords,like 00:30:765 (3) - and so going.

00:24:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not really a big deal,but anyways what about following the vocals there using a 1/2 pattern plus a 3/2 pattern? Imho,that 1/1 slider used at 00:24:895 (3) - doesen't really follow well the vocals,as you have skipped over one of their pitch changement,and using a pattern like this would differentiate a bit the rhythm you have used as well. See if you like it!

SPOILER

312,120,24460,5,0,0:0:0
224,136,24678,1,0,0:0:0
152,84,24895,2,0,P|104:84|73:108,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,168,25330,2,0,P|100:192|88:272,2,132.00000402832
172,248,26199,6,0,B|192:304|252:336|316:332,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
313,332,26852,1,0,0:0:0
380,276,27069,2,0,B|352:240|300:244,2,88.000002685547,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,248,27721,1,0,0:0:0
464,248,27939,6,0,P|495:180|460:88,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,89,28591,1,0,0:0:0

00:59:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm,not a big fan of this pattern... I know that these "blankets" you are making here are pretty much part of your style,but here it doesen't play as fluid as it did in your other patterns,as it doesen't really go smoothly,especially with 01:00:765 (1) - . I would instead reverse 00:59:026 (1) - and continue the pattern right ahead with a 1/2 linear slider so that the pattern created does flow really good,especially with 01:00:765 (1) - . Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
335,282,59026,6,0,P|268:336|192:305,1,176.000005371094,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,252,59678,2,0,P|124:156,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,84,60112,1,0,0:0:0
244,56,60330,1,0,0:0:0
328,84,60547,1,8,0:0:0
368,164,60765,6,0,B|404:212|392:296|332:320,1,176.000005371094
```
01:07:069 (3) - What about using CTRL+R there? It's pretty much a subjective thing,but imho it flows quite good,as of the progression from the left to the right! However that's pretty much optional
01:18:156 (1,2,3) - As 00:59:026 (1,2,3,4,5) -,I did not actually really like how you have used that blanketted linear 1/2 slider with the other curved one... Using the same "tecnique" you could instead use a 1/2 slider encircling 01:18:156 (1) - 's beginning,continuing directly with 01:19:243 (3) - with a pretty good oval flow. It's a really good pattern to pla and it's quite pleasant to look too! Here's what I have done:
SPOILER
```
128,266,78156,6,0,P|196:304|272:248,1,176.000005371094
196,208,78808,2,0,P|160:176|112:176,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,204,79243,2,0,P|36:144|132:88,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,228,80112,6,0,P|304:240|372:176,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,176,80765,1,0,0:0:0
280,152,80982,2,0,B|246:70,2,88.000002685547,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
That's a quite nice difficulty you have there,nice use of blankets and nice patterns! Good work ^^

[Insane]

00:01:634 (1,2,3) - The combination of these 2 1/1 sliders actually felt kinda "meh" to me ,as the curves there definitely were unpleasing to play. I would instead suggest you to use a pattern composed by two 1/1 opposed sliders with a note on the left to make the whole pattern as smooth to play as possible. By modifying 00:03:591 (1,2,3) - you could obtain a pretty good to play pattern along with this pattern. Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
440,40,1634,6,0,B|320:8|208:48,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,148,2286,1,2,0:0:0
224,252,2504,2,0,B|344:284|456:244,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
500,152,3156,1,0,0:0:0
500,152,3373,1,0,0:0:0
308,88,3591,5,0,0:0:0
256,176,3808,1,0,0:0:0
204,88,4026,1,2,0:0:0
```
00:05:982 (8,9) - Why are you using this rhythmical setting? Considering that the only instrument being played here is the synth,and considering that you are totally skipping over its pitch changement which happens at 00:06:199 - ,I would totally suggest you to exchange the note and slider's position in the timeline: by doing that, you will totally follow that pitch changement,so I highly recommend you to do that:
00:08:373 (6,7) - Uhm... Why are you keeping your whistle pattern 4/1? As the whole song here gets a bit more active,I did actually expect a couple of whistles to be played at 00:08:373 (6) - 's beginning and at 00:10:112 (7) - . What about adding them to make the whole whistle pattern a 2/1 one?
00:09:026 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - There's not really any problem there,but imho after 00:07:939 (5,6) - , the note 00:08:808 (1) - totally breaks 00:08:373 (6) - 's oval flow. What about trying with a different combination,always using this penthagon pattern? Making the whole pattern start to the center to go in a anti-clockwise turn would actually solve that,other than being a pretty good pattern to play. Here's what I have done:
SPOILER
```
256,144,8808,5,0,0:0:0
152,124,9026,1,0,0:0:0
200,240,9243,1,2,0:0:0
312,240,9460,1,0,0:0:0
360,124,9678,1,0,0:0:0
256,40,9895,1,0,0:0:0
152,124,10112,1,0,0:0:0
```
00:13:373 (4,5) - This is more a personal thing, so just fix if you want: What about inverting the position of these two notes? I do believe that a zig-zag there would totally play good!
00:24:895 (3,4,5) - This triplet is totally overmapped. There is no sound/instrument in the middle of 00:24:895 (3,5) - ,therefore there is no need of having notes such as 00:25:004 (4) -,so imho you should totally delete it. The same applies for 00:38:808 (3,4,5) - !
00:29:678 (1,2,3,4) - This is not really an issue or anything,however instead of that triangular pattern,I would see there better a cross-jump pattern,as it clearly follows 00:29:243 (5) - 's dropoff,other than being quite fun and fitting there pretty good. Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
388,228,29678,5,0,0:0:0
184,336,29895,1,2,0:0:0
328,336,30112,1,2,0:0:0
124,228,30330,1,2,0:0:0
304,224,30765,6,0,P|284:264,1,36.6666666666667
```
00:31:634 (2) - Have you misplaced this whistle? There's nothing to be followed there,and it really breaks the consistency kept there... Consider deleting it,as it doesen't really match with any of the instruments there.
00:35:112 (1,2) - This jump could be symmetric and all you want,but this jump is TOTALLY big aund unfitting for the vocals,as there's pretty much nothing to emphatize here. Please,consider lowering this jump,as in its current state it's totally unfitting and exhagerated. You could use a triangular pattern encircling 00:34:678 (4,5) - ,which imho works really well
SPOILER
```
416,152,35112,5,0,0:0:0
220,172,35330,1,2,0:0:0
280,336,35547,2,0,P|376:352|440:256,1,220
332,224,36199,1,2,0:0:0
144,256,36417,1,0,0:0:0
200,76,36634,1,0,0:0:0
```
00:51:852 (2) - What about adding a whistle here as well? Skipping the dominant beat there does not really make sense,as the synth here is continuing progressing
00:55:765 (1,2,3) - Well, the dropoff between the first 2 sliders does not really catch good... What about instead using another pattern by splitting 00:56:417 (2) - into 2 1/2 sliders? That would actually work really well there! See if you like it:
SPOILER
```
208,320,55765,6,0,P|256:344|304:320,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,268,56417,2,0,P|388:256|420:256,1,55
448,360,56852,2,0,P|420:346|404:328,1,55,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,192,57286,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,57395,12,0,58156,0:0:0
```
01:04:895 (2,3,4) - This is almost identical to 00:05:982 (8,9) -, infact the issue is the same: again,consider reverting 01:05:112 (3,4) - in the timeline to avoid this skip,which does not fit there at all. I made a pattern too here,using a zig-zag pattern,which plays quite good: here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
172,348,64895,1,2,0:0:0
348,256,65112,1,0,0:0:0
172,128,65330,2,0,P|256:188|340:128,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
Remember that the same applies to 01:18:808 (2,3,4) - ,as it's copy-pasted and flipped from the previous kiai time!

~~Orz,I have already to go >_< Tomorrow I will hopefully complete the mod,I hope I have been helpful in the meantime!~~
Well,that's all. Most of the diffs themselves are pretty good,the only thing which makes me worry a bit is the Insane diff. Try asking some people for a mod in your Insane diff,and then call me back for the recheck! I hope I have been helpful in the meanwhile ^^

Last edited by -kevincela- 2013-02-01T19:34:36+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Tari

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1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2013-01-30T01:04:06+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
Hey!

[Taris' Easy]
00:00:113 (1) - Please,consider shortening this by 1/2 there. As you have been following the vocals for the rest of the pattern,I suggest you this changement instead,as in the place where this slider actually finishes there is no vocal changement being played there. Shortening this slider by 1/2 would actually work really good,and it would make the transition with 00:01:634 (2) - a 2/1 quite understandable and funny to play. After having done the same on 00:01:634 (2) - you will get this: Personally, it follows fine to me, Both slider start nicely on the vocals and both end in the appropriate spot if you listen carefully to the little soft whistles in the background.
00:03:591 (1,2,3) - This is more a personal opinion,so just fix if you want: the linear flow combined with 00:03:591 (1) - imho didn't really go that smooth,probably because it hasn't really followed 00:03:591 (1) - 's oval flow... I have a little idea there: what about reworking a bit the pattern to make the whole pattern go smooth? Curving a bit more 00:03:591 (1) - and placing the hitobjects above it would actually flow good,especially with a "3" shaped slider,which encircles 00:03:591 (1) - and makes a nice triangular pattern with 00:07:069 (2) - . Here's what I have done,see if you like it! I changed the slider, but I don't want to change the position of note 1, the transition between 1 and 2 need to stay smexy
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I don't mind changing the slider.
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00:06:634 (1) - This is a quite little thing,just fix if you want: What about moving the New Combo to 00:07:069 (2) - ? I see you are trying to follow the voice there,but instead emphatizing the synth's start there would be better,as it starts the whole guitar pattern. I think this spot is fine for new combo, and if you look at the other similar parts I put NC, you can tell they fit well. Plus, if I add it there I have to add it here : 01:20:113 (2) - and other parts like it, so sorry I don't agree on this
00:06:634 (1) - While at 00:05:112 (3) - the whistle at the end did actually make sense,as of the synth's getting its pitch higher there,here it's just unneded,as there is really no reason to follow the vocals in the background there. What about removing it and making the whistle/finish transition as a 2/1 one? That would actually make sense. I agree, removed.
00:31:852 (2,3,4) - Hmm... I didn't really like the transition you used between this curved slider and 00:33:156 (3) - which is almost linear. Their placements kinda breaks the flow and makes a spacing unconsistency with 00:34:460 (4) - (0.9x instead of 1.0x)... It is a little thing,although I suggest you to transform this transition with a curved slider and a wave slider. With some tweakings they would fit just PERFECTLY there and they would continue the pattern well with an arc-shaped pattern. Here's what I have done,see if you like it! Okay, I try this.
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01:10:112 (2,3,1) - This is a really minor graphical thing,just fix if you want: the current pattern is quite awkward to see and play,which is quite bad here,considering how you have deveoped your entire patterns. What about continuing here with an encircle,continuing 01:10:112 (2) - 's flow? I would actually prefer this pattern,see if you like it! I did what you said, but I kinda reversed slider note 3.
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You have a quite nice diff there! There is nothing really major there,so sorry if I have been too much picky there! Hope I have been helpful ^^
Orz,I have already to go >_< Tomorrow I will hopefully complete the mod,I hope I have been helpful in the meantime!

Thank you for the mod kevin ><

My Diff

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Artist:Nakayama Arisa
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Creator:Sonnyc
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Source:To Heart 2
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Sonnyc

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Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2013-01-31T06:06:27+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
Hey!

[Normal]
00:02:721 (2) - What about adding a whistle at the end of this slider? Other than keeping your consistency it would fit pretty nice within the whistles being played there,so why not adding it? Without the whistle here the whole slider sounded kinda empty :< The same applies for 00:04:678 (2) -, 00:05:112 (3) - 's beginning,00:11:634 (2) - and 00:09:243 (3) - 's beginning! // All fixed
00:07:069 (1) - What about adding a finish (a soft one,without using normal additions) at the top of this slider? Like Taris did on his diff,this does actually fit rather well,considering that the new synthesizer phrase is being started there,so emphatizing this change would actually sound good. // I think this part of the song is too calm for a Finish. Even a soft.
00:30:765 (1) - Heh,not really the kind of rhythm setting expected for a Normal diff. While it sounds pretty neat,from the other side it makes the rhythm too much complex, and not really understandable for a newbie. You have two solutions there: you could replace the slider with a 1/2 pattern,like a 1/2 slider with no repeats or 2 1/2 notes,or you could simply delete it - not mapping it would work pretty much fine there,as that "clap" isn't taking the place there // Deleted..
00:34:895 (x)- Heh,not following the synthesizer here is not a really good idea,imo... I understand your choice on just following the vocals,but anyways avoiding to follow the synthesizer here plays quite strange and considering you have been following it in other parts like 00:31:417 (1,3) - why don't you follow it too here by adding a note there? That would actually create a fun 1/2 pattern to play imo,so you should totally do it! Note that the same applies for 00:38:373 - ! // Fix
00:56:852 (x)- As above,a note here wouldn't hurt at all,considering the fact that both the vocals and the drums start at 00:56:852 - ,1/2 before the doublet begins, so I can't really see no reason to create instead a triplet here. // Uhh.. Changed but idk if this is the perfect placement.
00:59:026 (1,2) - This is again a really little thing,just fix if you want: as I find this transition to play not so smooth as the others do,probably because of 00:59:026 (1) - 's oval flow getting quite broken there,what about instead making a different kind of pattern,to follow that oval flow? I have a pretty much neat idea,using 00:57:286 (3) - to encircle 00:59:026 (1) - ,ans so continuing the pattern upwards--->downwards,which totally flows good with 01:00:765 (1) - . Here's what I have done,see if you like it! // Thank you~
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01:13:808 (2) - Considering your previous pattern in which you have used this kind of hitsounds pattern,a whistle should be added on the top of this note,considering you have always followed your 1/2 whistle pattern there. // Fix

Really nice Normal diff, it flows almost perfectly and rhythm-wise is really solid!
[Insane]
00:01:634 (1,2,3) - The combination of these 2 1/1 sliders actually felt kinda "meh" to me ,as the curves there definitely were unpleasing to play. I would instead suggest you to use a pattern composed by two 1/1 opposed sliders with a note on the left to make the whole pattern as smooth to play as possible. By modifying 00:03:591 (1,2,3) - you could obtain a pretty good to play pattern along with this pattern. Here's what I have done,see if you like it! // Didn't got much sense of flow, when I mapped this. Kinda fixed a bit from your suggestion.
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00:05:982 (8,9) - Why are you using this rhythmical setting? Considering that the only instrument being played here is the synth,and considering that you are totally skipping over its pitch changement which happens at 00:06:199 - ,I would totally suggest you to exchange the note and slider's position in the timeline: by doing that, you will totally follow that pitch changement,so I highly recommend you to do that: // I wonder why I mapped like this x.x Fixed

00:08:373 (6,7) - Uhm... Why are you keeping your whistle pattern 4/1? As the whole song here gets a bit more active,I did actually expect a couple of whistles to be played at 00:08:373 (6) - 's beginning and at 00:10:112 (7) - . What about adding them to make the whole whistle pattern a 2/1 one? // Fix
00:09:026 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - There's not really any problem there,but imho after 00:07:939 (5,6) - , the note 00:08:808 (1) - totally breaks 00:08:373 (6) - 's oval flow. What about trying with a different combination,always using this penthagon pattern? Making the whole pattern start to the center to go in a anti-clockwise turn would actually solve that,other than being a pretty good pattern to play. Here's what I have done: // k
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00:13:373 (4,5) - This is more a personal thing, so just fix if you want: What about inverting the position of these two notes? I do believe that a zig-zag there would totally play good! // Uhh.. I want to keep this now. I didn't want a zigzag here
00:24:895 (3,4,5) - This triplet is totally overmapped. There is no sound/instrument in the middle of 00:24:895 (3,5) - ,therefore there is no need of having notes such as 00:25:004 (4) -,so imho you should totally delete it. The same applies for 00:38:808 (3,4,5) - ! // uh.... yes
00:29:678 (1,2,3,4) - This is not really an issue or anything,however instead of that triangular pattern,I would see there better a cross-jump pattern,as it clearly follows 00:29:243 (5) - 's dropoff,other than being quite fun and fitting there pretty good. Here's what I have done,see if you like it! // Fixed
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00:31:634 (2) - Have you misplaced this whistle? There's nothing to be followed there,and it really breaks the consistency kept there... Consider deleting it,as it doesen't really match with any of the instruments there. // Placed at (3). Yeah, maybe this was a mistake
00:35:112 (1,2) - This jump could be symmetric and all you want,but this jump is TOTALLY big aund unfitting for the vocals,as there's pretty much nothing to emphatize here. Please,consider lowering this jump,as in its current state it's totally unfitting and exhagerated. You could use a triangular pattern encircling 00:34:678 (4,5) - ,which imho works really well // Sorry, I didn't like your suggestion.. Did something symmetry to avoid unfitting jump
SPOILER
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00:51:852 (2) - What about adding a whistle here as well? Skipping the dominant beat there does not really make sense,as the synth here is continuing progressing // idk.. I like how it sounds currently. I'll get some opinions
00:55:765 (1,2,3) - Well, the dropoff between the first 2 sliders does not really catch good... What about instead using another pattern by splitting 00:56:417 (2) - into 2 1/2 sliders? That would actually work really well there! See if you like it: // I agree this isn't a perfect flow. But.. not changing for now x.x
SPOILER
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01:04:895 (2,3,4) - This is almost identical to 00:05:982 (8,9) -, infact the issue is the same: again,consider reverting 01:05:112 (3,4) - in the timeline to avoid this skip,which does not fit there at all. I made a pattern too here,using a zig-zag pattern,which plays quite good: here's what I have done,see if you like it! // Thanks for the nice pattern :3
SPOILER
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Remember that the same applies to 01:18:808 (2,3,4) - ,as it's copy-pasted and flipped from the previous kiai time!
Orz,I have already to go >_< Tomorrow I will hopefully complete the mod,I hope I have been helpful in the meantime!

Thanks :3 Once again >w<

Last edited by Sonnyc 2013-02-03T16:39:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Himesaka Noa

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Himesaka Noa 2013-02-01T19:31:37+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
Hey!

[Hardflow]
00:03:591 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Oh well,I didn't really like how this pattern actally played ,probably because of the dropoff there which gets kinda broken. I would rather structure the whole pattern horizontally,with an arc-shaped pattern and some curved sliders: it would continue totally good that dropoff with 00:03:156 (4) - ! Here's what I have done,see if you like it Changed to other pattern.
SPOILER
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00:16:852 (1) - I guess you missed a clap here,at the end of the whole slider? I can clearly hear the clap there,and I see you have used this on the top of other 1/6 sliders following the same chords,like 00:30:765 (3) - and so going. Fixed
00:24:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not really a big deal,but anyways what about following the vocals there using a 1/2 pattern plus a 3/2 pattern? Imho,that 1/1 slider used at 00:24:895 (3) - doesen't really follow well the vocals,as you have skipped over one of their pitch changement,and using a pattern like this would differentiate a bit the rhythm you have used as well. See if you like it! Changed to other pattern
SPOILER
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00:59:026 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm,not a big fan of this pattern... I know that these "blankets" you are making here are pretty much part of your style,but here it doesen't play as fluid as it did in your other patterns,as it doesen't really go smoothly,especially with 01:00:765 (1) - . I would instead reverse 00:59:026 (1) - and continue the pattern right ahead with a 1/2 linear slider so that the pattern created does flow really good,especially with 01:00:765 (1) - . Here's what I have done,see if you like it! I like now pattern. No change.
SPOILER
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01:07:069 (3) - What about using CTRL+R there? It's pretty much a subjective thing,but imho it flows quite good,as of the progression from the left to the right! However that's pretty much optional I agree. Changed.
01:18:156 (1,2,3) - As 00:59:026 (1,2,3,4,5) -,I did not actually really like how you have used that blanketted linear 1/2 slider with the other curved one... Using the same "tecnique" you could instead use a 1/2 slider encircling 01:18:156 (1) - 's beginning,continuing directly with 01:19:243 (3) - with a pretty good oval flow. It's a really good pattern to pla and it's quite pleasant to look too! Here's what I have done: Hmm... Some changed
SPOILER
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That's a quite nice difficulty you have there,nice use of blankets and nice patterns! Good work ^^ Thanks
Orz,I have already to go >_< Tomorrow I will hopefully complete the mod,I hope I have been helpful in the meantime!

Thanks for modding :3

Hardflow

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osu file format v11

[General]
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Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:Nakayama Arisa
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening eroge game visual novel
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-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-02-01T19:37:36+00:00

Well,mod finished!
It has taken me quite longer than expected,I hope I have helped you anyways ^^

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2013-02-02T02:17:53+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
Well,mod finished!
It has taken me quite longer than expected,I hope I have helped you anyways ^^

Thank you very much ^o^

B2IN

B2IN 2013-02-03T17:01:41+00:00

o.o

Wreath

435 posts

Joined February 2012

Wreath 2013-02-03T18:15:55+00:00

thank you for request via in-game~
and you've request Insane only, so i will modding Insane only

Red : Must be fix
Blue : Should be fix
Black : Just opinion

[General]

Hitsound "Echo-Clap (soft-hitclap)" 추가 http://puu.sh/1WVNS
(다른 난이도에서 SC1 박수를 쓰고있다면 Echo-Clap을 soft-hitclap2로 바꾸시고 soft-sliderslide2(무음)을 추가해주세요)

[Insane]

00:01:634 (1) - 이 점프는 알기 힘듭니다
글구 00:02:504 (3) - 여기도 같은 리듬인데 왜 점프 시키지 않으세요?
그냥 이렇게 하시는게 나알것 같습니다
00:16:852 (2) - 시작점에 "에코 박수" 추가+ 볼륨 -5~10%정도
00:16:997 (3) - 끝점에 ^ + 볼륨 +5~10% 정도
00:30:765 (1) - in the same way as 00:16:852 (2) -

00:43:373 (1) - 상하 균등이 아니라 예쁘지 않습니다

208,200,43373,2,0,P|108:156|208:112,1,275,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,112,44678,1,2,0:0:0

00:57:286 (1) - 이런 빠른 스핀은 이 곡 분위기에 맞지않다고 생각합니다, 그냥 서클이나 슬라이더로 하시는게 좋은것 같습니다
00:16:997 (3) - same as 00:16:997 (3) -
01:06:199 (1) - 슬라이더가 화면 밖으로 나가 있습니다, 수정해주세요
01:25:330 (1,2,3,4,1) - 왜 여기하고 00:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 패턴이 다르세요?
통일성이 없어 보입니다, 이렇게 하시는게 좋다고 생각합니다

이상입니다~

화이팅!!

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2013-02-04T09:20:11+00:00

Wreath wrote:
thank you for request via in-game~
and you've request Insane only, so i will modding Insane only

Red : Must be fix
Blue : Should be fix
Black : Just opinion

[General]
Hitsound "Echo-Clap (soft-hitclap)" 추가 http://puu.sh/1WVNS
(다른 난이도에서 SC1 박수를 쓰고있다면 Echo-Clap을 soft-hitclap2로 바꾸시고 soft-sliderslide2(무음)을 추가해주세요) // 음.. 이 시점에서 굳이 새 커스텀 사운드를 추가하고 싶지는 않습니다. 죄송합니다 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ
[Insane]
00:01:634 (1) - 이 점프는 알기 힘듭니다
글구 00:02:504 (3) - 여기도 같은 리듬인데 왜 점프 시키지 않으세요?
그냥 이렇게 하시는게 나을것 같습니다 // 네
00:16:852 (2) - 시작점에 "에코 박수" 추가+ 볼륨 -5~10%정도
00:16:997 (3) - 끝점에 ^ + 볼륨 +5~10% 정도
00:30:765 (1) - in the same way as 00:16:852 (2) - // 음.. 일관성 위해 바꿨어요
00:43:373 (1) - 상하 균등이 아니라 예쁘지 않습니다 // 네
208,200,43373,2,0,P|108:156|208:112,1,275,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,112,44678,1,2,0:0:0
00:57:286 (1) - 이런 빠른 스핀은 이 곡 분위기에 맞지않다고 생각합니다, 그냥 서클이나 슬라이더로 하시는게 좋은것 같습니다 // 음.. 인세인이라서 그냥 넣어봤어요
01:06:199 (1) - 슬라이더가 화면 밖으로 나가 있습니다, 수정해주세요 // 음.. 네
01:25:330 (1,2,3,4,1) - 왜 여기하고 00:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 패턴이 다르세요? // 음.. 앞의 패턴은 멜로디?에 스핀을 맞춰 시작했고, 뒤는 굳이 따를 멜로디가 없어서 가사에 따라봤습니다.
통일성이 없어 보입니다, 이렇게 하시는게 좋다고 생각합니다
이상입니다~

화이팅!!

감사합니다~

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2013-02-05T18:17:29+00:00

뭔가 신경쓰이는게 있어서 살짝 질문겸 말해보겠습니다.

[Insane]
01:25:765 - 여기에 원래 노트 있지 않았나요? 의도적인지는 모르겠지만, 있는쪽이 더 나아보이네요.

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2013-02-08T07:15:09+00:00

Hi~ sorry I'm late
Request from In-game (only recheck Insane).

"re" is means "remove"
Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[Insane]

00:05:112 (6) - I think the distance can be further increased, the place is a bit uncomfortable and strange for me, because 00:04:026 (3,4,5) - you use jump in there, but 00:03:808 (2) - suddenly use 0.9x distance, I think there also can use jump
00:41:852 (3) - NC, because 00:41:852 (3,4) - distance like 00:40:982 (1,2) - and also like 00:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm
00:50:547 (3) - I suggest there NC because there suddenly appear 00:50:547 (3,4) - a 2.45x jump, a little hard to read the jump
01:24:243 (2) - why there not same as 01:09:678 (1) - ? try to ctrl+G
00:25:112 (4) - NC there to have symmetry with 00:26:199 (1,2,3) - or 00:26:199 (1,2,3) - re NC because I think it dosen't need to NC

some 1/2 distance like 1/4 distance, but anyway, they still can read, good diff :3 ~~I just think some slider can be much pretty (run~~

good luck ~ that all >w<

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2013-02-08T11:21:34+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi~ sorry I'm late
Request from In-game (only recheck Insane).

"re" is means "remove"
Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[Insane]
00:05:112 (6) - I think the distance can be further increased, the place is a bit uncomfortable and strange for me, because 00:04:026 (3,4,5) - you use jump in there, but 00:03:808 (2) - suddenly use 0.9x distance, I think there also can use jump // Well, Done a NC since this follows a different part of the song.
00:41:852 (3) - NC, because 00:41:852 (3,4) - distance like 00:40:982 (1,2) - and also like 00:12:286 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm // k
00:50:547 (3) - I suggest there NC because there suddenly appear 00:50:547 (3,4) - a 2.45x jump, a little hard to read the jump // k
01:24:243 (2) - why there not same as 01:09:678 (1) - ? try to ctrl+G // At least, I wanted to avoid ctrl cv here :3
00:25:112 (4) - NC there to have symmetry with 00:26:199 (1,2,3) - or 00:26:199 (1,2,3) - re NC because I think it don't need to NC //Done something~~
some 1/2 distance like 1/4 distance, but anyway, they still can read, good diff :3 ~~I just think some slider can be much pretty (run~~

good luck ~ that all >w<

Thanks~

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2013-03-08T17:23:55+00:00

Hi ~ Sonnyc ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Use japanese artist : 中山愛梨沙

[Insane]

00:27:939 (2,5) - Use same sliders stuff?
00:12:069 - These finish sound a bit noisy to me,reduce volume to 45% is better.
00:41:852 - ^
01:25:112 - ^
00:59:026 - Same as above,60% is better.
01:12:939 - ^
00:58:156 - Why silenced to here? sound weird to me,try change to normal hitsound with 50% volume.

[Hardflow]

00:13:808 (1) - The spinner should start on 00:14:026 - .

[Normal]

00:12:286 - Same as Insane.
00:41:852 - ^
01:25:112 - ^
00:59:026 - ^
01:12:939 - ^
00:16:199 - Change to normal hitsound to here,follow with drum.
00:30:982 - Add a note to here,follow with clap.
00:58:156 - Use normal hitsound to here,same as Insane.

OK ~ Not bad map,since this is your old map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2013-03-08T22:32:19+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Sonnyc ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Use japanese artist : 中山愛梨沙 Changed

[Hardflow]

00:13:808 (1) - The spinner should start on 00:14:026 - . Added note on 00:13:808 and moved spinner to 00:14:026

OK ~ Not bad map,since this is your old map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Thanks for modding :3

Hardflow

Download: http://puu.sh/2ekIE
If you can't download, use this code.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59026
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:中山愛梨沙
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening eroge game visual novel Tari
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"TH2OP.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
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12286,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
14460,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
15330,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
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90112,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,10,0,0
90547,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 255,157,60
Combo3 : 255,136,196
Combo4 : 209,164,255

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Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2013-03-09T06:23:25+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Sonnyc ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

[General]

Use japanese artist : 中山愛梨沙 // k

[Insane]

00:27:939 (2,5) - Use same sliders stuff? // Fixed.
00:12:069 - These finish sound a bit noisy to me,reduce volume to 45% is better. // I will do it with 50%.
00:41:852 - ^
01:25:112 - ^ // 70 here.
00:59:026 - Same as above,60% is better. // This part is a kiai, and there is an actual increase of the volume in the song, imo. I think 80 will fit.
01:12:939 - ^
00:58:156 - Why silenced to here? sound weird to me,try change to normal hitsound with 50% volume. // Since there aren't any beat after this spin, I made it nearly silent.

[Normal]

00:12:286 - Same as Insane.
00:41:852 - ^
01:25:112 - ^
00:59:026 - ^
01:12:939 - ^
00:16:199 - Change to normal hitsound to here,follow with drum. // fix
00:30:982 - Add a note to here,follow with clap. // added.
00:58:156 - Use normal hitsound to here,same as Insane. // fix

OK ~ Not bad map,since this is your old map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Ty~

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2013-03-09T15:56:04+00:00

After rechecked via IRC, fixed some hitsound ~

Looks much better ~ Here you go :3

grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2013-03-13T06:57:38+00:00

I have to point out some important things before it gets ranked.

— General

Remove "Tari" from tags since it already appears in "Taris".
Remove "game" from tags since it already appears in Genre.

Insane

01:08:591 (2,3) - Here the player can be confused because it's hard to understand where the slider start is. I first thought that slider starts from left. You should manually stack the circle on the slider end to make it clear:
01:22:504 (2,3) - Same here.

Hardflow

I suggest you to use same kiai settings as other diffs. It's more reasonable and adds another fountain at 01:12:939 - , where the second chorus starts.
00:14:026 (1) - Even though this is a Hard difficulty, I still think that the object after the spinner is too close to it. Additionally, spinner's end doesn't make sense, it doesn't end on a noticeable sound, it just ends at a random spot. And next object is even a repeating slider, so it will be even easier to break combo because of a one-second-confusion. I'd end the spinner here: 00:15:330 - , and mapped few circles on sounds like 00:15:982 - and 00:16:199 -
00:25:330 (4) - To follow vocals better, I suggest you to change rhythm to this, try it:
00:39:243 (3,4,5) - Here it's better to place a 3/4 slider to follow vocals:
00:40:982 (3,4) - Here you should try same rhythm as above.
00:45:330 - I almost can't hear following hitsounds, you should raise up volume at least to 40%. Hitsounds should be audible.
00:51:634 - 00:51:852 - Add whistles at these points, background music obviously asks for it.
00:54:460 (2) - Add whistle here and remove from 00:54:460 -

Normal

00:40:982 (1,2) - These two sliders are placed really inaccurately and they look quite ugly. You should tidy this up:

Screenshot

Code

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01:12:069 - According to vocals, the slider should end here. Optionally, you can add a circle at 01:12:286 - to keep rhythm similar to previous.
01:15:547 (2) - It touches HP Bar just a bit. Move it down.

Tari's Easy

00:12:721 (2) - You should move this slider to 00:12:939 - , it will fit the finish sound at 00:12:939 - and vocal at 00:13:808 -
00:17:069 (1) - Since it's an Easy diff, such additional sounds should not be emphasized. It's better to keep general rhythm without following small details. I'd just remove this circle.
00:28:808 (3,1) - This rhythm is a bit complicated, the longer slider ends at barely noticeable sound while it misses a loud sound at 00:29:678 -
My suggestion:
01:20:113 (2) - To make this rhythm more understandable, remove the circle and add one repeat to the slider:

Call me for a rebubble when you've fixed stuff.

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2013-03-13T07:52:20+00:00

grumd wrote:
I have to point out some important things before it gets ranked.

Hardflow
I suggest you to use same kiai settings as other diffs. It's more reasonable and adds another fountain at 01:12:939 - , where the second chorus starts. I don't like kiai fountain. No change.
00:14:026 (1) - Even though this is a Hard difficulty, I still think that the object after the spinner is too close to it. Additionally, spinner's end doesn't make sense, it doesn't end on a noticeable sound, it just ends at a random spot. And next object is even a repeating slider, so it will be even easier to break combo because of a one-second-confusion. I'd end the spinner here: 00:15:330 - , and mapped few circles on sounds like 00:15:982 - and 00:16:199 - Moved spinner to 00:13:917 ~ 00:16:199 and Add note on 00:16:634 and Change some timing.
00:25:330 (4) - To follow vocals better, I suggest you to change rhythm to this, try it: Changed.
00:39:243 (3,4,5) - Here it's better to place a 3/4 slider to follow vocals: Changed.
00:40:982 (3,4) - Here you should try same rhythm as above. Hmm... i think now is better. No change.
00:45:330 - I almost can't hear following hitsounds, you should raise up volume at least to 40%. Hitsounds should be audible. Change volume and Remove next green line.
00:51:634 - 00:51:852 - Add whistles at these points, background music obviously asks for it. Changed.
00:54:460 (2) - Add whistle here and remove from 00:54:460 - No change.
Call me for a rebubble when you've fixed stuff.

Thanks for modding :3

Hardflow

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nakayama Arisa - Heart To Heart.OGG
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59026
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:中山愛梨沙
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Hardflow
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening eroge game visual novel Tari
BeatmapID:184526
BeatmapSetID:56756

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2013-03-13T07:58:11+00:00

grumd wrote:
I have to point out some important things before it gets ranked.

— General
Remove "Tari" from tags since it already appears in "Taris". // In case for searching in web, both Tari and Taris will be necessary.
Remove "game" from tags since it already appears in Genre. // k
Insane
01:08:591 (2,3) - Here the player can be confused because it's hard to understand where the slider start is. I first thought that slider starts from left. You should manually stack the circle on the slider end to make it clear: // Ehh,, ok
01:22:504 (2,3) - Same here.
Normal
00:40:982 (1,2) - These two sliders are placed really inaccurately and they look quite ugly. You should tidy this up: // Fix
Screenshot
Code
476,108,40982,6,0,P|460:68|424:40,2,90,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,186,41852,2,4,B|422:176|402:148|397:115|397:115|374:97|345:90|318:92,1,180
01:12:069 - According to vocals, the slider should end here. Optionally, you can add a circle at 01:12:286 - to keep rhythm similar to previous. // Fix
01:15:547 (2) - It touches HP Bar just a bit. Move it down. // 1 grid downed.
Call me for a rebubble when you've fixed stuff.

Thanks~

grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2013-03-13T12:12:39+00:00

00:54:460 (2) - Add whistle here and remove from 00:54:460 - No change.

Oh god, that's so funny

Sorry for the miss-copy, I meant add at 00:54:678 - and remove from 00:54:460 -. Bell sound in the music sounds there.

Himesaka Noa

osu! Alumni

3,315 posts

Joined February 2012

Himesaka Noa 2013-03-14T02:11:52+00:00

grumd wrote:
00:54:460 (2) - Add whistle here and remove from 00:54:460 - No change.
Oh god, that's so funny

lol

grumd wrote:
Sorry for the miss-copy, I meant add at 00:54:678 - and remove from 00:54:460 -. Bell sound in the music sounds there.

Okay. Changed :3

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grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2013-03-14T08:56:02+00:00

Okie, I'll recheck it soon! Taking this post as a placehoolder.

Edit: Is Tari going to apply any changes?

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2013-03-14T16:12:56+00:00

grumd wrote:
Okie, I'll recheck it soon! Taking this post as a placehoolder.

Edit: Is Tari going to apply any changes?

idk~ Waiting for him :3

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2013-03-15T00:45:13+00:00

grumd wrote:
I have to point out some important things before it gets ranked.

Tari's Easy
00:12:721 (2) - You should move this slider to 00:12:939 - , it will fit the finish sound at 00:12:939 - and vocal at 00:13:808 - Done
00:17:069 (1) - Since it's an Easy diff, such additional sounds should not be emphasized. It's better to keep general rhythm without following small details. I'd just remove this circle. Removed the circle.
00:28:808 (3,1) - This rhythm is a bit complicated, the longer slider ends at barely noticeable sound while it misses a loud sound at 00:29:678 -
My suggestion: Rhythm changed.
01:20:113 (2) - To make this rhythm more understandable, remove the circle and add one repeat to the slider: I think rhythm at its current state is good o3o, its rhythmically consistent with the other parts like 01:05:765 (1,2) - where rhythm is generally similar.
Call me for a rebubble when you've fixed stuff.

Changed most things :> Thanks!

Updated Diff

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:Heart To Heart (Short Ver.)
Artist:Nakayama Arisa
ArtistUnicode:中山愛梨沙
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Tari's Easy
Source:To Heart 2
Tags:Underflow kusugawa sasara leaf Taris opening eroge game visual novel Tari
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168,264,4678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,188,5112,2,0,B|164:148|224:176|224:176|268:128|344:148,1,250,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,6634,5,0,0:0:0:0:
476,108,7069,2,0,B|504:176|492:268,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,328,8373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,292,8808,2,0,B|253:212|281:144,1,150
140,92,10112,6,0,B|92:72|32:96,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,14026,12,0,16199,0:0:0:0:
268,76,17504,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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444,248,18808,2,0,B|480:300|464:364,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,312,19678,2,0,B|320:356|208:348|168:296,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,244,20982,5,4,0:0:0:0:
184,176,21417,2,0,B|276:112|384:180,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,332,24460,6,0,B|196:360|104:328|80:256,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,208,25765,2,0,P|8:144|20:100,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,160,26634,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,64,27069,6,0,B|176:28|232:36,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,220,28808,2,0,P|296:312|392:292,1,200
444,164,30330,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,56,30982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,112,31417,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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448,228,34460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,136,34895,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,152,35330,2,0,B|260:176|200:148,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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68,116,37069,2,0,B|60:196|180:236|169:306,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,330,38373,5,4,0:0:0:0:
343,283,38808,2,0,B|332:236|452:196|444:116,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,53,40112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,44,40547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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140,172,41852,2,0,B|116:252|152:328,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,42939,2,0,B|216:228|240:180,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,64,44026,2,4,B|372:136|324:224,1,150,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,308,45330,6,0,B|312:344|256:316|256:316|192:348|140:312,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,276,47069,2,0,B|132:228|120:148,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,96,48373,2,0,B|224:68|280:76,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,100,49243,6,0,B|352:184|320:268,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,312,50547,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,316,50982,2,0,B|180:244|212:148,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,52286,6,0,B|252:84|296:88,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,80,53591,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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208,184,55330,2,8,B|272:168|316:204|372:192,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,228,56634,6,0,B|452:300|360:352,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,328,57721,2,0,B|208:328,2,50,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,224,59026,6,0,B|138:153|210:121,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,152,61852,2,0,B|332:200|316:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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236,160,84678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,236,85330,6,0,B|132:316|228:316,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-03-15T10:48:59+00:00

k, uploaded~

grumd

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grumd 2013-03-15T17:50:44+00:00

Insane:
01:07:939 (1) - Overlap with HP Bar. Select 01:06:852 (2,3,4,1) - and move 2 grids down for the easiest fix.

Other diffs are fine now.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-03-16T13:11:22+00:00

grumd wrote:
Insane:
01:07:939 (1) - Overlap with HP Bar. Select 01:06:852 (2,3,4,1) - and move 2 grids down for the easiest fix. // Fixed with 4 grids actually, for distance stuffs. Also applied with the copy-pasted parts.

Other diffs are fine now.

Some other changes were made :

Added "mys" to tags, which indicates the shorten letter of the genre of the game.
Fixed Normal-Finish hit sounds to Soft sampleset, and Normal addition for a softer sound.

grumd

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grumd 2013-03-17T09:04:38+00:00

I don't really get what does "mys" mean, google can't help me, I asked some people and they don't get it either

I'd really want you to remove it if it's not that necessary.
But more importantly (thanks to Colin Hou) you must change the source. Remove spaces there, it should be "ToHeart2"
"To Heart 2" is an alternative title, not the original one, according to http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclo ... hp?id=5821

Okay, stuff fixed, and now...
Rebubbled!

Himesaka Noa

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Himesaka Noa 2013-03-17T18:33:53+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
미연시다 미연시

왠지 이 말이 이상하게 들린다...

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-03-18T07:34:28+00:00

Ranked!

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scanter 2013-03-18T07:35:43+00:00

1st! Gratz sonnyc-chan >~<

MineC24

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MineC24 2013-03-18T07:36:35+00:00

Gratz

ㅊㅊ ~

Himesaka Noa

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Himesaka Noa 2013-03-18T07:55:17+00:00

Congratz >_<

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-03-18T07:59:15+00:00

Thanks all~~~

especially Tari and Underflow

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blackabyss 2013-03-18T09:04:45+00:00

gratz sonnyc \:D/

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-03-18T09:31:14+00:00

올ㅋ랭크 축하드려요~

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Nichiyouki 2013-03-18T10:09:31+00:00

Congrats Sonnyc

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-kevincela- 2013-03-18T12:20:21+00:00

Oh well, I was planning on modding this today,but it seems you were faster than me :p
Congratulations!

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