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Dark Fang

Joined February 2011

Dark Fang 2012-12-08T07:55:42+00:00

~~아 곡 길이 봐라~~

앙대 앙....대!

[Normal]

00:16:707 (2) - 대칭이 아니무니다 슬라이더 포인트도 이상하무니당 수정좀
00:33:739 (2) - ^
00:55:804 (2) - 3과 함께 오른쪽으로 한칸 물러주시오
01:02:384 (3) - 한 두칸올리시고 모양잡는걸 추천
01:13:997 (2) - 하하 좌표 언스냅 (296,100) 추천
02:01:998 - Break time 제거
02:03:933 (1) - (328,232) 에 두시고 02:05:868 (3) - 을 여기에 겹치는게 어떤가요? (물론 모양 잡고)
02:27:933 (4) - 위로 한칸
02:38:384 (5) - 각도 좀 아래쪽으로 기울여주세요 (4) 에 겹쳐서 보기에 안좋습니다
02:50:772 (4) - 이거 위치를 (1) 에 대칭으로 해보시는게 어떤가요
03:13:997 (3) - 왼쪽으로 한칸 물러주세요
03:29:481 (3) - (132,244) 로 옮겨주세요
03:40:707 (2) - 아래로 한칸

[Hard]

하드치고는 OD 와 HP Drain 이 너무 낮아요. 조금 높혀주시면 감사하겟소.
01:03:545 (4,1) - 대칭이 아니무니다
01:05:868 (5) - 한칸 위로 (6) 도 왠만하면 수정해주세요
01:07:804 (1) - 두칸 위로, 보기에도 좋고 DS 도 맞춰지고
01:18:449 (2) - (412,192) 에 옮기는게 DS 가 맞긴 하지만 보기엔 안좋은거 같네요. 선택은 님의 몫
01:20:384 (1) - 마지막 슬라이더 포인트 한칸 위로
01:29:287 (6) - (20,236) 으로 이동 나머진 조절
02:19:416 (4,1) - 01:03:545 (4,1) 이것과 같습니다
02:23:287 (2) - 한칸 아래로
02:23:675 (4) - (336,36) 으로 이동 나머진 조절
02:34:320 (2) - 왼쪽으로 한칸
02:34:900 (4) - (5) 와 함께 (300,160) 으로 이동
02:52:707 (2) - 한칸 아래로
03:10:900 (1) - Unsapped spinner 03:10:901 - 에 두세요
03:48:062 (1) - (368,216) 에 두는게 좋을듯

[Lunatic]

HP Drain -1
01:10:320 (1) - Ctrl + G 하시고 01:10:900 (2) - 이것도 뒤집고 노트 정리하는게 더 좋을 것 같아요
01:19:223 (1) - Ctrl + G (이건 노트 정리 안하셔도 될꺼같아요 동선이 좋게 배치되있네요)
01:55:029 (1) - 슬라이더 길이 고의로 저렇게 하신건가요?
01:56:578 (4) - 여기 Whistle 넣으셔도 될듯 이부분 너무 허전해요
02:02:771 (8) - ^
02:10:513 (3) - 슬라이더 끝에 Whistle
02:54:255 (2) - 마지막 슬라이더 포인트 한칸 왼쪽으로
03:37:224 (1) - 한칸 아래로

맵 좋네요 곡 길이만 뺴면

Last edited by Dark Fang 2012-12-08T10:58:45+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

HelloSCV

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Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2012-12-08T09:04:17+00:00

Dark Fang wrote:
~~아 곡 길이 봐라~~

~~모딩을 내놓으시지 말입니다?~~

수정 했습니다 감사해요!
Fixed~

CrestRising

163 posts

Joined October 2012

CrestRising 2012-12-09T04:00:24+00:00

An English mod. I feel so left out.

[Normal:]

01:55:611 (1) Odd spinner placement. You should probably delete this spinner.

[Hard:]

01:31:611 (1) A new combo here doesn't fit well.
01:55:804 (1) Odd spinner placement. You should probably delete the spinner.
02:01:998 (1) ^
02:26:191 (2) I think you should stack this under 6 and 1.
02:42:449 (1,2) This doesn't look right. You should switch the places of these.

[Lunatic:]

00:13:998 (5,6,7) I think this triplet of circles doesn't sit well with the rhythm. You should delete 6.

Sorry for the small mod. I thought this was a fantastic map even though it was a bit longer than I would've preferred. Good luck.

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-09T04:45:52+00:00

there are no Small Mod

it was helpful for my map! thank you for you mod and star both~

B2IN

B2IN 2012-12-10T05:05:31+00:00

Hi~ HelloSCV :3
from korea modreq
시간 관계상 루나틱밖에 못 봐드릴것 같아요.

[Lunatic]
00:12:642 (1,2) - 지워주세요. 없는게 훨씬 나아보여요.
00:23:481 (2) - 노래 흐름상 변속이나 점프를 넣어주면 더 재밌어질 것 같아요.
00:30:642 (1,3) - 1번 슬라이더랑 3번 슬라이더 안 닿게 해주세요.
00:31:997 (5) - 여기 피니쉬가 왜 들어 갔는지 잘 모르겠네요..
00:56:965 (1,2,3,4) - 배치 이렇게 바꿔보세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/521604
01:13:997 (4,1) - 지금처럼 가사 맞춰서 하는것도 괜찮지만, 앞에 님이 사용하셨던 01:12:449 (4) - 이거 패턴이랑 관련성 있게 똑같이 01:14:578 (1) 이거 지우고 01:13:997 (4) 를 반복 슬라이더 1개 추가하는것도 나쁘지 않아보여요.
01:14:771 (2) - 만약에 위에대로 하셨으면 여기 뉴콤보 해주세요.
01:19:804 (2) - 직선 슬라이더 안 써도 될거같아요.
01:22:513 (1,2) - 각 슬라이더 시작부분에 피니쉬 추가. 여기도 강조되는 부분이라 생각해요.2번 슬라이더 끝부분 피니시는 제거.
02:00:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - 제대로 된 오각형으로 만들어주세요.
02:13:223 (2,3) - 두개가 별로 안 어울려요. 아니면 3번째 포인트를 x108 y276으로 ? 그리고나서 02:14:191 (4) - 리스페이싱
01:28:707 (1,2) - 01:22:513 (1,2) 참고
01:34:900 (1,2,3) - ^
02:38:384 (1,2) - ^
01:41:094 (1,2) - ^
02:44:578 (1,2) - ^
02:50:771 (1,2,3) - ^
02:56:966 (1,2) - ^
03:15:933 (4) - 반복화살표 가리는거 비추.
03:32:384 (6,7) - 두개 슬라이더가 평행하면 더 좋을 거같아요. 이런식으로http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/521618
03:41:868 (1,2) - 01:22:513 (1,2) 참고
03:48:062 (1,2) - ^
03:54:255 (1,3) - ^
04:00:449 (1) - 피니쉬

GL

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-10T09:03:37+00:00

일부분 수정했습니다 감사합니다!

Lucyii

588 posts

Joined March 2012

Lucyii 2012-12-14T19:14:58+00:00

M4m~ (Sorry for my shitty english lol)

[Normal]
00:40:708 (3) - Remove a reverse and add a beat stacked with the end of the slider
00:53:094 (3) - ^
01:10:126 (1) - Remove NC
01:10:513 (2) - Add NC
01:22:514 (4) - straight
02:03:933 (1) - Remove NC
02:04:320 (2) - Add NC

[Hard]
00:30:642 (4) - Straight
01:32:772 (1) - Straight
02:01:998 - Remove this break
02:52:901 (3) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526700
03:41:868 (4,5) - Not stacked with 03:40:707 (3)
03:46:320 (2) - Ctrl+g?
04:01:030 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526708

[Lunatic]
00:14:385 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526710
00:14:771 (2) - ^
00:15:158 (3) - ^
01:02:771 (2) - Add NC
01:18:449 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526714
02:36:256 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526718
02:57:546 (2) - Remove this slider and add a beat
02:58:127 (3) - The stream should start at 02:57:740
03:14:772 (4) - Nearest to 03:14:965 (1)

Nice map, good luck for ranking~

Kanari

1,311 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanari 2012-12-14T23:39:38+00:00

Haaii ~
Mod4mod ~

[General]
- This song came from the album Tonic Triangle, Halozy is the circle and Night Sakura of Dead Spirits is the orginal so add them all to the tags.
- Add Yuyuko to the tags as well ~
- Maybe try these combo colors ?

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 0,164,242
Combo3 : 168,226,255
Combo4 : 255,198,226
Combo5 : 255,128,192

- Bookmarks can be removed.
- Sliders blackets can be better ~
- During the chorus, increase the volume by 10%
- For all diffs, at 03:06:256 add a spinner and end at 03:09:353 with a finish.

[Normal]
00:20:578 (3) - Place at x:328 y:260
00:24:546 - Break is too short, remove this break.
00:44:578 (4) - Move 2 grids to the left on the last point.
00:48:449 (1) - Place at x:360 y:132
01:02:384 (3) - Place at x:288 y:236
01:00:836 (2) - Last point at x:328 y:324
01:15:643 - Break is too short.
02:31:514 - ^

[Hard]
- Overall Difficulty +1
01:55:708 - Break is too short, remove it.
02:01:901 - ^
02:11:094 (3) - Maybe place where 02:09:352 (5) was ?
03:25:610 (3) - Slider end stack.
03:32:771 (6) - Move to 03:32:966
03:32:772 - Add a circle.

[Lunatic]
- Overall difficultly +1
02:48:642 (1) - Slider end stack.
03:50:965 (1) - Stack.

Well mapped!
Good luck ~

HelloSCV

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Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2012-12-15T00:12:51+00:00

Fixed almost in both modding!
thx~

Rotte

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Joined October 2011

Rotte 2012-12-15T14:00:55+00:00

From M4M o.o/

[General]

offset + 5 is well

[Normal]

00:24:643 - remove this time break
00:41:095 - whistle?
01:01:998 - ^
01:16:320 - add a note?
02:17:869 - whistle?
02:32:191 - add a note?

[Hard]

00:24:255 (4,5) - 1/8 slider is well
00:54:255 (1) - This slider 3rd nazi to 304|308 .

01:36:836 (2) - ctrl+g
01:39:352 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - move to 304|32

[Insane/Lunatic]

You're better use 1.0 ds to re-arrange some place...

AR-1

00:17:869 - to 00:19:030 - Should be use stream in music,because stream is the music's rhythm
00:22:126 (1,2) - I recomand use 1/8 slider
00:42:256 (3) - This slider is not beautiful.

you can refer to this example

00:44:772 (2,3) - exchange time

01:25:416 (1,2,3,4,1) - 1,2,3,4 and 1,DS should be equal
01:44:191 (1) - ctrl+g
01:44:578 (2) - ctrl+g
01:50:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think it's a good idea of mapping.

you can refer to this example

02:19:610 (2,1) - spacing
02:23:481 (3,4,5) - this jump (3,4) is not good.because 3,4,5 ds is equal,however,time not equal.
02:36:062 (7) - 212|256 is well
02:46:513 (2) - ctrl+g
02:46:902 (3,4,5) -

you can refer to this example

02:51:545 (3) - this slider is close to HP bar
02:53:287 (4,5) - ctrl+g
03:48:642 (2) - ctrl+g
03:49:611 (1,2) - Symmetric with 2

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-16T01:09:05+00:00

Fixed some! thx~~

Quilt

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Joined May 2010

Quilt 2012-12-16T05:04:24+00:00

wow same BG xDD http://osu.ppy.sh/s/44346

P o M u T a

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Joined December 2010

P o M u T a 2012-12-16T05:38:49+00:00

hello your queue M4M
General
192kps http://puu.sh/1BqFe Use it if good

Lunatic
Bookmarks Delete ? 12818

01:27:546 (3,4,5) - Add finish ?

01:21:353 (3,4,5) - ^

01:33:740 (3,4,5) - ^

01:39:933 (3,4,5) - ^

02:37:224 (3,4,5) - ^

02:43:417 (3,4,5) - ^

02:49:611 (3,4,5) - ^

02:55:804 (3,4,5) - ^

03:40:708 (3,5) - (3) slider start and end and (5) add finish.

00:24:449 (3) - little slip. Let's stack it well.　(DS0.00) (x:185 y:300)

00:39:159 (1) - slider End 00:39:546 sound better ;3

01:23:095 (2) - slider end 01:21:740 stack better. (x:132 y:152)

02:03:546 (10) - Add whistle ? good sound. I entrust you

02:25:611 (4) ~ 02:25:998 (1) - 5 stream (1/4) sound better :3 but keep better :3 both better

02:48:643 (1) - slider head stack with 02:48:062 slider end :3 because looks beautiful (x:393 y:154)

03:14:772 (4) - move 03:14:772 sound better. because example 03:20:772 this fine.

03:24:449 (3) - Add finish great :3

03:50:579 (4) - (x:151 y:192) better, because 03:50:966 (1) - end (x:151 y192) New slider end is little slip

Hard
Book Mark Delete ? 12818,166689

00:36:837 (4) - (x:131 y:120) better. because 00:35:869 (1) - end (x:131 y:120)

02:25:224 (3) - 1 grid left. because (1) The central target nature. (x:132 y236)

Normal
Book Mark Delete ? 12818

01:33:740 (2) - Add clap slider end ?

maybe and whistle?

01:42:256 (5) - Add clap?

02:40:320 (1) - Add clap slider end ?

maybe and whistle?

02:58:127 (5) - Add clap?

04:01:611 (5) - ^

that's All !!
good luck ;3

HelloSCV

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Topic Starter

HelloSCV 2012-12-16T06:18:44+00:00

Fixed little thx!

69653863

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Joined January 2012

69653863 2012-12-17T02:45:05+00:00

Mod request from our queue ヽ( ・∀・)ﾉ

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Normal

Use DS 1.0 plzzz. DS 0.8 just feels unmatching with the speed of the SV, this might create awkward flow. So that's why
00:18:256 (5) - You should avoid sliders with more than 1 repeats like this, especially because this is Normal.
00:40:708 (3) - X:152 y:84 for better flow plz. Don't forget to change the next notes after it
00:51:546 (1,3) - Better blanket?
02:14:772 (3,4) - ^

Oh wow, so flawless @@ nice job!

Hard

AR +1?

hOlY wOw this mapset was also flawless and spotless, another nice job! I love the flow and the patterns!

Illuminatic

No problems at all ┐(´ー｀)┌

This mapset was much more than just ready so that's why
(╯ ´ ・ω ・`)╯ 彡 ☆

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-17T10:02:40+00:00

Fixed all thank you for great mod!

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2012-12-19T13:46:11+00:00

hi hi M4M here , thanks for taking a look my map :3

General
seems fine ! but the bg in this map was already used in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/44346
not a big deal to be changed but it would be better if you are willing to change
since this song is eurobeat genre , you can add "eurobeat" to your tag as well

Normal
01:20:191 (1) - I would start this slider on 01:20:579 (1) - instead of this and use a single note here 01:20:191, will do follow song and play better with this slider 01:21:739 (2) - imo

SPOILER

01:41:095 (4) - finish on the head slider would be a great idea since it is almost the end of the kiai and music sounds well here
02:21:739 (4) - no, if you want follow the vocal , you should end this slider at 02:22:320 (5) - and remove 02:22:514 (5) -
a gap between them is 1 beat so it doesn't make harder so please fix it
02:56:965 (4) - finish the head , reason is alike
03:25:610 (2,3) - follow this , it's better
first , shorten this slider 03:25:610 (2) - end at 03:25:804 and move this slider 03:26:384 (3) - start at 03:26:191

SPOILER

03:39:546 (1,2) - swap rhythm here , again , as I mentioned before << 01:20:191 (1) -

Hard
oh wait , this AR is too fast

, AR-1 and OD+1 the best
01:41:094 (5) - finish head , like normal diff
03:42:836 (6) - finish because you added in Insane diff

Lunatic
AR-1 , since your map is not jumpy map, and bpm is not high , it would work if you mapped jumpy more than this
01:04:707 (3) - this slider doesn't work well, extend this slider to 01:04:998 and move 01:04:998 (4) - to 01:05:095 (4) - for more being intuitive
01:10:900 (2) - ^ it should be extended to 01:11:191 and move 01:11:191 (3) - to 01:11:288 (4) - instead

looks fine , hope this help : ) Good Luck HelloSCV

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-19T13:58:30+00:00

Fixed almost thank you for great mod !
and hope my mod can help you too xD

DaxMasterix

Former osu!catch Champion: 2013

1,562 posts

Joined February 2010

DaxMasterix 2012-12-19T22:13:17+00:00

Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
Yuyuko can eat me if she want..

General:

You can add to tags ''Ten Desires'' o3o

Normal:

Nothing here~ Congratulation.. you win a Kdstar.

Hard:

00:21:739 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:44:965 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:03:545 (4) - Move the last Sliderpoint to x:80|y:292 [Grid lvl: 4] I think looks better :33
02:19:416 (4) - move the last Sliderpoint to x:360|y:112 [Grid lvl: 4] I think looks better.. yep xD
02:20:384 (2,3) - Move these objects to x:352|y:292 [Grid lvl: 4]
03:36:836 (3) - Move the last Sliderpoint to x:276|y:188 [Grid lvl: 4] I think.. eyup.. looks better xDDD

Insane:

00:38:771 (1,2) - Move these sliders 2 grids to the left [Grid lvl: 4]
01:02:384 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Err.. Are you sure?.. only Suggestion.. But this is a honey for Haters.. I recommend move the (1) and (2) :I
01:03:739 (2) - Move this object 1 Grid down [Grid lvl: 4]

Well... The map in general is absolutely Good.. You win a kdstar because I can't find anything wrong in the diff Normal..xD Good luck! I wanna see this ranked!

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-20T08:58:44+00:00

Fixed little thanks for your mod~

Tenshichan

602 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2012-12-21T19:09:16+00:00

M4M From my queue~

[Normal]

00:23:482 (3,4) - Probably try this
00:30:643 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - You always used sliders here maybe replace one of them with 2 notes so it is more varied
01:05:869 (4) - Imo a slider like this is better because you mostly use curved sliders
02:23:675 (3) - Let it go a bit better around (1) like this
02:56:966 (4) - I would suggest an S-Shaped Slider here
03:10:901 (1) - The spinner is maybe a bit too short for normal? Ever thought of replacing it with a slider?
03:46:514 (2,3) - Looks better imo

[Hard]

00:18:643 (4) - CTRL + G?
00:21:740 (3) - ^? (I noticed you did this quite often, so it might be ok though )
01:07:804 (1) - this Looks a bit better I think
01:31:611 (6) - I think it looks better with the slider curve on the opposite side
01:38:966 (1) - CTRL + G for better flow at this point
02:00:449 (1) - fits better
02:19:030 (3,4) - Would be better with a consistent spacing
03:25:998 (4) - Spacing (nazi)
03:51:159 (6,7) - Weird spacing, please fix

[Lunatic]

00:17:095 (5) - Move it in a perfect line with (4) and (1)
00:27:159 (2) - x:208 y:120 maybe?
00:27:933 (5) - Why not shape it like (1) and (3)?
01:00:062 (7) - curve to new combo
01:08:966 (2) - 1 grid right
03:41:869 (1,2) - Probably avoid this overlap? Imo its better without
03:46:320 (5,6) - ^

wow ... the song ... awesome

touhou and eurobeat best mix this was like porn for my ears
And very well mapped good luck for rank!

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-21T23:42:47+00:00

Fixed! thank you for mod~~

RikiH_

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RikiH_ 2012-12-22T18:01:38+00:00

Ohai, m4m after a long time lol

Normal

00:25:224 - I'd add a note here
00:51:159 - Same
00:54:643 (1) - Finish?
01:16:320 - Add a note?
02:04:320 (2,3) - Uhm, I'm sre you can blanket them somehow
02:16:708 (2) - This hits HP bar, change it!
02:32:191 - Add a note
02:41:288 (3) - Start this slider here because the vocal starts here
02:46:901 (2) - Please change it, it hits HP bar and it's also bad blanketted

Hard

00:12:837 (1,2) - Ugly overlap
00:17:095 - It feels empty, add a note D:
00:18:643 (4,1) - Overlap
00:27:933 (4) - ctrl + g?
00:34:127 (4) - Same
01:41:675 (6,1,2) - Why don't you put 6 in this way and 1,2 in the center?

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/537079

02:54:256 (6) - Ctrl + g?
03:54:837 (6) - More curved to improve blanket with 5

Insane

00:19:611 (2) - 1 grid down because it's not symmetric with 1
00:42:837 (4) - 1 grid right (turn off distance snap)
00:49:030 (4) - The same
00:55:998 (6) - More curved?
02:02:772 (8,9,10) - I'd delete these or replace with a silenced spinner
02:23:675 (4) - x:144 y:60 for making this pattern symmetric
02:41:869 (2,3) - Bastard jump, maybe swap these notes
03:14:772 (4) - x:60 y:40 for spacing

Good map, please someone rank this D:

phaZ

739 posts

Joined October 2011

phaZ 2012-12-22T20:21:56+00:00

[Normal]
01:55:611 - remove whistle so it sounds more quiet (better lead-in in this part)
02:56:965 (4,5,6) - move them to 452;164
[Hard]
01:36:836 (2) - move it to x=448 so it is on the same line like (1)
01:37:223 (3) - unstack and lower distance you first did a 2,00 jump and then a stack (0,00). i know from experience (im a hard-player D';) that you will click too early the slider (3) if they are stacked... or at least unstack http://puu.sh/1E0RH
01:37:416 (4) - if u did ^ move to 372;296
01:38:965 (1) - o.o? why?
01:55:611 - remove whistle so it sounds more quiet~
02:07:417 (1,2) - that waypoints...http://puu.sh/1E0Xw, http://puu.sh/1E0Z1
02:25:901 - add circle
02:42:449 (1) - move it to 208;72 to lower distance
02:48:642 (1) - change it to circles because it plays weird on the red tick (you also can change it at 02:36:256 and 02:42:449 but its ok there idk why :O - dont forget hitsounds
02:54:836 (1) - ^
03:52:126 (1) - ^
[Insane]
00:25:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think 1/2-slider would be much moar awesome to play here
01:54:546 - really missing a beat here D: damn! but if there is one, it plays ugly
02:24:449 (1,2,3) - because of the finishes (+in the music) i think the anti-jumps doesnt fit here

nice map and bg

*star*

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-23T02:06:44+00:00

Fixed some! thank you for taking my M4M request and star!!

Ushiro T

240 posts

Joined October 2010

Ushiro T 2012-12-23T03:25:08+00:00

자신있게 M4m을 외친 초보의 모딩이 왔습니더 ㅎ,ㅎ

Normal

00:44:578 (4) - 앞에 00:43:804 (3) - 랑 박자 같게하는게 나은거같아여

01:41:095 (4) - 음.. 이렇게 넣는것 나쁘지안네염 http://puu.sh/1EaCv 물론 박자만

01:57:739 (1,2,3) - 한번 슬라이더2개로 처리해보세여

Hard

으으.. 딱히 지적할부분이 보이질않아요 ;ㅅ;

Lunatic

02:53:675 (1) - 여기 앞에 02:52:707 (2,3,4,5) - 여기 모양에맞춰 오각형 맞춰보세여

03:14:773 (4) - 뒤에 03:14:965 (1,2,3) - 랑 디스턴스 똑같이하는게 보기좋네여

04:01:320 (4,6) - 요고 두개 삭제해보니까 더 나은거같아요

헤헤 아직 실력이부족해서 너그럽게 봐주시길

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-23T03:30:07+00:00

약간 수정했습니다 감사합니다~
Fixed little thx~

phaZ

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Joined October 2011

phaZ 2012-12-23T11:54:20+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
...thank you for taking my M4M request...!!

:O did i?

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-23T12:05:08+00:00

phaZ wrote:
:O did i?

Haha i said to Riki xD but it doesn't mean only thanks for riki's mod both mods were helpful enough for me

creampuff

438 posts

Joined August 2012

creampuff 2012-12-23T23:34:05+00:00

Yo, mod request from my queue. Thanks for modding my map~

My turn.

General

Good~

Normal
02:46:901 ~ 02:47:675 (2, 3) Fix the spacing

Nice diff~

Hard
01:17:482 (1) Finish here?
01:29:869 (7) Add finish
01:36:062 (7) ^
02:39:546 (7) ^
02:45:740 (7) ^
02:51:933 (7) ^
02:56:966 (5) Add finish to slider head
02:57:546 (6) ^
03:43:030 (7) Add finish
03:49:224 (3) ^
03:55:417 (7) ^
04:01:030 (2) Add finish to slider head

That's it. Good diff~

Lunatic
It's good.

Usa~ Nice map! GL on rank.

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-24T00:04:26+00:00

Fixed little~ thank you for mod my map too!

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2012-12-24T08:02:46+00:00

Just suggestions, feel free to ignore it :3

[Lunatic]
00:14:094 (6) - remove the note here and add a note at 00:14:288 - , sounds better imo.
00:24:449 (4) - stack better
00:26:384 (5) - NC
00:27:353 (3) - this looks better?

SPOILER

00:35:385 (2) - delete the note here and add a note at 00:35:579
00:37:416 (3) - can be changed like this?

SPOILER

01:02:385 (1,2) - A little hard to read. why not change it to a jump
01:03:545 (1) - remove nc
01:53:772, 01:53:966 - add notes
02:13:610 (3) - fix the shape, make it better with 02:13:223 (2) -
03:37:224 (1,2,3) - how about making a better triangle
03:50:771 (5) - x24 y172
03:52:126 (1) - ctrl+G?

[Hard]
00:42:255 (2) - fix the shape
00:55:223 (3) - ^
01:55:804 - something should be there imo
02:02:191 - ^
02:10:126 (1) - stack better
02:42:449 (1) - ctrl+G?
03:58:320 (1) - ^

Why not use a drum hitsound as clap and do some 24clap. maybe sounds better

nice beatmap and sorry for my poor mod. GL for rank

edit: if it's helpful to u, could u mod my map as well? here's the map link. thanks :3

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-24T08:41:11+00:00

Thank you for mod and i'll mod your map as soon as possible

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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BeatofIke 2012-12-26T02:27:56+00:00

Map is good. I'm going to star!

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-26T04:44:04+00:00

Thank you for saying so ;D, and thank you for star tooooooooooooo! xD

wcx19911123

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Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2012-12-28T17:18:16+00:00

from my queue

[General]
did you used the custom soft-hitclap? I can't hear it. if you didn't use the hitsound plz remove the file from song folder

[Normal]
01:13:030 (1) - try to move it down a bit plz, it touched HP bar
03:54:449 - move this whistle to the start of the sldier sounds better imo

[Hard]
00:15:739 (1,2,3) - hope you can move this slider right and down a bit, cuz the spacing is wrong when playing due to the stacking circles
00:36:836 (4) - change this slider's direction to make it line up with 00:36:642 (3) - ? will looks better imo
00:54:642 (2,3,4,5) - please move this part up a bit, or 00:55:224 (3) - the slider is nearly out of screen
02:07:223 (3,1) - the spacing is wrong, you should use 0.8x spacing here cuz the slider (1)'s speed is faster now

not bad, call me back then

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-29T04:47:26+00:00

Fixed all with out soft-hitclap :p i using custom clap on this song you may hear on kiai time?

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-12-29T16:20:41+00:00

bubbled

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-29T17:04:21+00:00

lol bubbled!! ;D thank you!

Breeze

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Breeze 2012-12-30T14:55:31+00:00

[Hard]

03:31:029 (1) - Add finish here sounds good, there is a finish sound in background music
03:44:965 (5) - Hmm, I feel this jump is unexpected, there is a pause in music but you used continuous notes, maybe you could make 03:44:966 this beat empty? or ctrl+G this slider?

[Lunatic]

03:31:029 (1) - Add finish here sounds good, there is a finish sound in background music
01:58:707 (4,5) - Sound a bit odd, I mean the end of 01:58:707 (4) and the head of 01:59:287 (5), if it's just a slider start at 01:58:707 and end at 01:59:482, that would be better Or a slider start at 01:58:707 (4) and end at 01:59:288 then a note at 01:59:482 ?

All suggestions, change them only if you want, call me back for a recheck when you have reply

B2IN

B2IN 2012-12-30T15:05:17+00:00

랭크 미리 츅하해요~

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2012-12-30T15:29:51+00:00

Fixed all thank you!!

랭크다 랭크!

Breeze

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