Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

Ruby Tuesday - Good Bye (Extended Version)

posted
Total Posts
66
show more
illuminist
376 posts
Joined March 2009
illuminist
Easier
คิดว่า Break Time นานไปนะครับ น่าจะหาโน้ทมาเพิ่มบ้าง

Hard
00:10:21 (4) - ใกล้ปลายสไลเดอร์ก่อนหน้า ให้ขยับออกเหมือนกับ combo สีชมพู
00:11:97 (4) - ^
00:11:97 (4) - ^
00:54:66 (7) - เลื่อนขวา 2ช่อง Grid Level1
00:55:32 (1) - เลื่อนขึ้น 1ช่อง ซ้าย1ช่อง Grid Level1
00:55:76 (2,3) - เลื่อนซ้าย1ช่อง Grid Level1
01:19:58 (5,6,7,8) - จัดใหม่ให้เหมือนกับ 01:17:82 (1,2,3,4)
01:24:22 (1) - ให้สไลเดอร์จบที่ 01:24:882
01:25:21 (1,2,3) - เลื่อนลงมา 1ช่อง Grid Level1
02:53:00 (6) - ให้สไลเดอร์จบที่ 02:53:117

Goodbye
00:43:41 (2,3,6) - เลื่อนลงมา 1ช่อง Grid Level2
00:54:66 (7,8,9,1) - เลื่อนขึ้น 1ช่อง Grid Level2
01:19:91 (5,6,7,8) - จัดใหม่ให้เหมือนกับ 01:17:82 (1,2,3,4)
01:48:92 (7,8) - เลื่อนTimelineไปซ้าย1/4จังหวะ อย่าลืมจัดโน้ทใหม่ด้วยนะ
01:59:36 (1) - ให้สไลด์เดอร์จบที่ 01:59:734
02:00:17 (1) - เลื่อนขึ้น 2ช่อง Grid Level1 หรือให้ทับกับ 01:59:36 (1) เลย
02:09:88 (13) - เลื่อนขึ้น 1ช่อง Grid Level1
02:10:76 (7) - ให้ลงร่องพอดี เลื่อนไปทางซ้ายนิดนึง
02:53:22 (11) - ลบตัวนี้ออก

+Star
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
ขอบคุณฮะ ^
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
hard
01:20:24 (7) - too far from (6)

goodbye
00:47:60 (10) - too far
02:00:39 (2) - move toooo 02:00:50
02:31:83 - add note maybe
02:31:94 - ^
02:53:11 (11) - new combo
02:53:77 (1) - take off new combo
03:05:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i thinkK sound is still too loud. lower by maybe 2 more ticks

easier
00:19:14 (5) - move down 1 grid so it alligns with end of slider?
00:35:91 (3) - new combo
00:52:89 (1) - too hard for easy i think. remove
00:53:33 (3) - ^
00:53:77 (5) - ^
01:18:26 (2) - clap at the end of slider at 01:18:70
01:24:88 (1) - end spinner at 01:26:20
02:20:47 (5) - align with end of (4)
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Offset: 7,240

[Hard]
00:54:66 ( ) - Add a note on here.
02:46:05 ( ) - Add a note on here.

[Goodbye]
01:26:64 (4,5,6) - Spacing.

Nice skin~
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
แหมะ :)
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
i like this song m.m
nazi mod

[Hard]
01:05:475 (4) - new combo?
01:14:519 (4) - maybe 2 more repeat is better
01:19:592 (4) - new combo?
02:19:592 (5) - ^
02:25:217 (2) - ^ (if this is a pattern same as the front)
02:45:622 (7) - this slider end of 02:45:622 better


[Goodbye]
00:34:592 (2) - maybe new combo?
01:05:475 (5) - ^
01:12:534 (5) - ^
01:19:592 (5) - ^
01:26:651 (5) - ^
01:52:681 (3) - remove new combo
02:19:592 (5) - new combo?
02:26:651 (5) - ^

star!
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
เห็นแก่ความซึนจะให้สักดาวก็ดะ =3= b

nice map~
laikung0
60 posts
Joined February 2009
laikung0
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Easier]
Raise the hitsound volume?
00:25:76 (8) - Add claps on 1st repeat and end of slider.

[Hard]
Raise the hitsound volume?
00:41:65 (4) - End the slider with a finish
00:46:28 (1) - Finish

[Goodbye]
00:59:73 (8,9,10) - Add whistles?
01:11:65 (4) - Add a finish
01:13:41 (4) - ^
01:25:76 (4) - ^
01:27:53 (4) - ^
02:18:71 (4) - ^
02:20:47 (4) - ^
02:53:12 (1) - Add a whistle?

I like the song~
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
I say good bye~ :3
hi orioncomet
sorry for my late mod

here's some suggestions :

[Easier]

  1. slider tick rate : 1
  2. 00:23:563 (4) - make it overlapping with the end of (3), how to? cancel distance snap and hold Alt on to move it, that would be more beautiful
  3. 00:59:298 - add a note ?
  4. 01:01:614 - add break
  5. 01:04:592 (2,3) - make it overlapping with the end of front slider
  6. 01:11:651 (2,3) - ^
[Hard]

  1. 01:31:504 (1,2) - a little confused, as for a [Hard] diff. anyway, it's OK
[Goodbya]

  1. 00:09:445 - add a note ?
  2. 00:11:210 - ^
  3. 00:16:474 - ^
  4. 00:18:269 - ^
  5. 00:25:769 (10) - new combo ?
  6. 00:26:431 (11) - new combo ?
  7. 03:05:916 - this KIAI is unwanted IMO
great map
star and another kudosu star for you!
GolGate
102 posts
Joined May 2009
GolGate
[Easier]
These are suggestions.
01:56:65 (1) - I suck so much that I see this as a bit hard for Easy. Well in fact no, I just suck.

[Hard]
Maybe decrease Overall Difficulty by a tick or two.
Also, these are suggestions.
01:02:38 (1) - This looks somewhat 'what'.
01:50:47 (5) - This also looks like 'what'.
01:54:00 (3,4) - Maybe move these 1/4 beat before.
03:05:91 (1,1) - This looks like an instant kill for me, but I'm not sure because I cannot succeed any map beyond 4.5 ._.

[Goodbye]
None here :S

I also have a star for you Ploy~
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
._. thx my friend

i know that are suggestions.
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
Hey, would you mind ASKING me before you copy paste from my map? You didn't even credit me anywhere.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet

Cyclone wrote:

Hey, would you mind ASKING me before you copy paste from my map? You didn't even credit me anywhere.
Sorry so much, i forgot it ._.
i hope, u not angry me, if you angry me. i will remove this if you want it.
and SORRY again.
Last edited by orioncomet , edited 2 times in total.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Normal~
01:54:11 (3,4) - Move these 1/4 of a tick back so it's synced with the little sounds.

Goodbye~
01:10:10 (1) - Move this farther from 13.
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone

orioncomet wrote:

Cyclone wrote:

Hey, would you mind ASKING me before you copy paste from my map? You didn't even credit me anywhere.
Sorry so much, i forgot it ._.
i hope, u not angry me, if you angry me. i will remove this if you want it.
and SORRY again.
It's fine. I honestly didn't plan on finishing mine for some time, and with this i won't have a need to. Though right now there needs to be a normal, which is the same exact thing my map was lacking.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
okay, i know. now, you are my sensei is teaching something i don't know and forgot. :oops:
Thank you for your honestly and my mistake
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
[Easier]
00:19:15 (5) - New combo.
00:53:12 (7) - ^
02:04:59 (3,4) - Spacing.
02:19:59 (4,5) - Spacing.

[Hard]
00:14:07 (9) - Add note?

[Goodbye]
All cool.

Good map and skin, star for now.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet

tieff wrote:

[Easier]
00:19:15 (5) - New combo. < done
00:53:12 (7) - ^ < done
02:04:59 (3,4) - Spacing. < done
02:19:59 (4,5) - Spacing. < done

[Hard]
00:14:07 (9) - Add note? < done

[Goodbye]
All cool.

Good map and skin, star for now.
Thank you for mod and Star <3
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
I'll look at this again later. And maybe give you bubble.
heartnetkung
54 posts
Joined March 2009
heartnetkung
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet

tieff wrote:

I'll look at this again later. And maybe give you bubble.
0.0 Oh okay, Thank you*
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
I don't know why but i'm not downloading the difficulties correctly. Try a full upload please.

For my difficulty, i would say do the following:

Increase hitsound volume by a little bit

00:25:76 (1) - Shorten by a single point, making it have 4 point total.
00:27:53 (3,4,5,6,7) - For these 5 notes, remove all hitsounds and place these: (3,6): None (4,5): Clap (7): Finish
00:32:60 (9) - Move forward by 1/2 beat and shorten by 1 point (4 points total)
00:39:88 (1) - Shorten by a single point, making it have 4 point total.
00:41:65 (4,5,6,7,8) - For these 5 notes, place these: (4,7): None (5,6): Clap (8): Finish
00:47:60 (10) - Add a Finish
-I have to finish here for the moment. There's more to come, but something just came up and i gotta go. I'll be back later.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
when i full upload, it not finish
it is upload, stop and fail ;-;
i don't know why..

---- >_< okay! i can full upload now
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
[Easier]
00:12:53 (1) - i think it should be ended on 00:14:29?
00:37:68 (1) - i think it should be ended on 00:39:44?
00:59:73 (1) - i think it should be ended on 01:02:38?
01:31:50 (1) - i think it should be ended on 01:31:83

[Orion's Hard]
01:14:51 (3) - reduce 4 repeats


Nice map. Starr'd :D


By the way, could I make normal diff?
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
taka1235
609 posts
Joined February 2009
taka1235
nice map~~ >O<
pete2528
412 posts
Joined March 2009
pete2528
ดาวดวงน้อยๆดวงนี้ให้ด้วยเธอมีความพยายาม ให้ด้วยใจ ให้ด้วยรัก ให้ด้วย บล่าๆๆๆๆ


/me เน่าพอยัง XD เหมือนละครหลังข่าวแล้ว 555


star+
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
try offset 7226

[easier]
all fine

[orion's hard]
01:32:61 - reinsert break
02:32:17 - ^

[cyclone's goodbye]
all fine


fix the minor things and i'll bubble =)
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by orioncomet , edited 1 time in total.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
this is my diff :)

Download: Ruby Tuesday - Good Bye (Extended Version) (orioncomet) [M.F.'s Normal].osu
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
> MoonFragrance
thx, and i fixed your offset.
illuminist
376 posts
Joined March 2009
illuminist
[M.F.'s Normal]
It seem nothing to be fixed. It's fine for me, and also for AImod :D
Estelle18
219 posts
Joined March 2009
Estelle18
มาแจก ดาวให้พลอยจัง >W<~

สู้ สู้ นะงิ (ดาวสีชมพูสวยจัง :3)
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
> Symbolic
Thank you ~ >O<
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet

gdeath wrote:

modding time!
skin is nice! i'm very like it^_^
[Easier]
00:40:76 (1) - Try making the slider start & end align in a straight vertical line. < done

[M.F.'s Normal]
01:31:50 (1,2) - how about add whistle?

[Orion's Hard]
decrease 1 overall diff < nah~
00:24:66 (7) - one level 1 grid to the up < done
00:24:66 (7) - new combo < done
01:50:47 (5) - ^ < done
01:26:65 (1) - ^ < done
01:30:62 (1) - ^ < done

[Cyclone's Goodbye]
01:15:84 (1) - new combo < done
02:15:84 (9) - ^ < done
02:29:96 (1) - ^ < done

nice map.star*
thank you ~
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
Just for the record, I've been doing work on my difficulty, and this should not be ranked yet. It'll still take me some time. I'll post a .osu when i'm done.
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
Here you go. A great number of changes has been made. I tried to stick to what you had while changing the stuff i absolutely did not agree with.

A couple other things i might add that i did not put in mine.

I think this needs about a -5 ms offset change.
I think the pink hitcircle color should be removed.

I'll look at the other difficulties later and provide modding and input.

Download: Ruby Tuesday - Good Bye (Extended Version) (orioncomet) [Cyclone's Goodbye].osu
Iluhiwizel
408 posts
Joined May 2009
Iluhiwizel
เหอะๆ ไม่รู้ว่ามีเพลงไหม่ = =

เอาดาวไปละกัน
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Fuck yeah~ I'm happy to play this song as Osu :)

[M.F.'s Normal]
Those spinner spams.... It makes people tired.....

It is hard to see a map without a crazy Insane. Nice to have a relaxing map.
I love the spinner, but can we use the Cyclone's DJMax skins to replace some osu default skins? Better to fill with DJMax skins if the song is from DJMax if you can.

A star for a nice map to play in multiplayer :)
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
some spinners are changerd :)

Download: Ruby Tuesday - Good Bye (Extended Version) (orioncomet) [M.F.'s Normal].osu
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
O.O Why? a star on my map it be lost :<
mtmcl
mtmcl
Hey! The diamond patterns before the chorus in MF's Normal (01:00:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2), occurs again later) are a little difficult to read, but not too bad.

That's really my only complaint. Do what you will with it. I'll bubble this. If you decide to change that any and it pops the bubble, tell me :3
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
i think that track is like some obstacle to clear this diff.
it means, i intended to make this track to confuse the player :)

if it is too difficult to clear, i'll fix it :)
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easier]
ok i guess...


[m.f.]
00:59:73 (3,1,2) - highly misleading spacing
01:58:41 (1) - note comes really fast after spinner


[Hard]
02:39:19 - kill the kiai
03:05:91 - ^


[Cyclone]
cooool

popped until bolded comments are fixed
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
fixed :)

Download: Ruby Tuesday - Good Bye (Extended Version) (orioncomet) [M.F.'s Normal].osu
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easier]
ok i guess...


[m.f.]
00:59:73 (3,1,2) - highly misleading spacing
01:58:41 (1) - note comes really fast after spinner


[Hard]
02:39:19 - kill the kiai
03:05:91 - ^


[Cyclone]
cooool

popped until bolded comments are fixed
fixed :D
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
[M.F.'s Normal]
01:00:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Jumps on normal?
01:31:49 (1,2) - ^
01:58:41 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
Too many spinners. T__T

Fix and I'll bubble.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
fixed :)

Download: Ruby Tuesday - Good Bye (Extended Version) (orioncomet) [M.F.'s Normal].osu
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
>O<~ ykcarrot ~ ~ ♪ ♪
Thankyou <3
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Bubbled.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet
Thankyou ~
mtmcl
mtmcl
And ranked away!
Iluhiwizel
408 posts
Joined May 2009
Iluhiwizel
rank แล้ว ดีใจด้วย ><
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
I really wanted to like this map, and i do like
but 01:59:029 (1) - this is BS, hit's hidden in play, it's really, really, not easy to see, i was hoping someone would've pointed this out by now, maybe it was allow in their opinion(cyclone's diff btw)
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi

EEeee wrote:

I really wanted to like this map, and i do like
but 01:59:029 (1) - this is BS, hit's hidden in play, it's really, really, not easy to see, i was hoping someone would've pointed this out by now, maybe it was allow in their opinion(cyclone's diff btw)
i don't get it, i saw it fine. no slider overlaps the return sliders sign.

01:59:029 (1) = 01:59:293 (1) -
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
orioncomet

EEeee wrote:

I really wanted to like this map, and i do like
but 01:59:029 (1) - this is BS, hit's hidden in play, it's really, really, not easy to see, i was hoping someone would've pointed this out by now, maybe it was allow in their opinion(cyclone's diff btw)
I saw it fine too 0.0\
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
I knew exactly what this was without even having to load the song.

i don't get it, i saw it fine. no slider overlaps the return sliders sign.

01:59:029 (1) = 01:59:293 (1) -
It's covered by all the "explosions" from hitting the previous slider repeats: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250

EEeee wrote:

I really wanted to like this map, and i do like
but 01:59:029 (1) - this is BS, hit's hidden in play, it's really, really, not easy to see, i was hoping someone would've pointed this out by now, maybe it was allow in their opinion(cyclone's diff btw)
I didn't see this as a problem when I first played it..or when I went on edit and looked at it. But oh well.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
meh, well it's hidden imo, in edit, yea u can see it due to no explosions(or w/e when it rebounds) and i did hit it on first try, but it's still hidden
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
1,975 posts
Joined July 2008
Cyclone
Not trying to ignore your point, since it's a valid point, but if i were to stop and complain about every thing that i found that was hidden (or any of my other countless complaints about maps) then i'd never end up actually playing anything.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
2 / 66