Lissette wrote:

Normal
00:23:45 (1) - move half beat earlier Done =]
01:01:41 - add note here add finish, like this 01:04:81 (6,7) I dont think that it got cool. Sorry, but i'm not using this finishes on these parts.
Shin's Hard
01:25:50 (1,2) - remove this little space, you can down a bit (1) so ýou dont have to ruin the pattern Like this? (Did that for Shinxyn, i hope he dont mind it .__.)

Nice map, nice song!!
have a Star

Nice song~
Fun + Simple Beatmaps
You win an award =o

Maybe I'll make an insane for you =]
I map simple insane beatmaps

animask wrote:

Here it is~

animask wrote:

[Hard]
01:01:18 (5) - Add a clap at the beginning of the slider I think thats cool
01:30:96 (4) - Add a finish? hum... I do think that's cool =/
02:10:28 (2) - Add a clap I think that that's cool too =]
02:24:60 (1) - Remove clap? I think that this clap is cool .__.
02:32:10 (8) - Add a clap? ^

ouranhshc wrote:

star

Cheedar wrote:

Miku *-*
Luka *-*
Star *-*

Lizbeth wrote:

Shin's Hard
02:10:39 - add note
02:10:62 (4) - remove note hum... i think that sounds cool. Did it

Normal
00:43:68 - Inherited timing sections that change the sound normal to soft or vice versa, place it before the notes (1/2 or 1/4 beat before), not on top, cuz if you hit early you are gonna get the sound of the prev timing section. Cool, i didn't know that <o>
03:04:37 (4) - move this note 1/2 later Hum.. i don't think so ._.

Lizbeth wrote:

animask's Insane
02:06:87 - add note here Done~
02:38:69 (3) - remove this one ^
02:47:33 (1) - move ONLY the start point of the spinner and add a note here ^
03:07:90 (8) - remove this note Done~
03:08:12 (10) - same Not done
03:08:58 - add a note Done~

fartownik wrote:

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HolyBoy wrote:

^_^ i know, :/, i'm not realy a good modder yet :'(

but i will when i learn alot more ^_^...

to add to that here is a Star!



... GOOD LUCK ON THIS SONG =D

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:29:139 (1) - a slider with 1 repeat instead would be better, and delete (2) - I like your idea. fixed
2. 01:01:868 (1) - up the slider end a bit to make sure it don't be covered bu front note (6), it would be more beautiful Just a little bit .__.
3. 01:43:462 (5) - put it at 01:43:576 would be better what? oO I don't think so ._.
4. 02:22:784 (2) - 1 grid sinistrad, same to (3) Sorry but... whats sinistrad? Done
5. 02:32:784 (1) - 2 grid sinistrad to make the shape symmetrical Done here too

Breeze wrote:

[animask's Insane]

1. 00:51:413 (2,3) - put (2) to the middle, put (3) to the right would be better
2. 01:38:689 (2,3) - ^, it's just my opinion

Breeze wrote:

[Shin's Hard]

1. 00:40:958 (2) - spacing wrong Am I not allowed jumps?
2. 00:43:003 (1,2,3) - seem to a little confused, put 2 outside maybe better confusing = my design
3. 00:50:504 (2) - spacing... jump~
4. 01:05:050 (2) - ^^
5. 01:19:597 (2) - ^ orz ^ ..... oi!
6. 01:38:007 (2,3) - ^ ^ -sighhh-

Shinxyn wrote:

Breeze wrote:

[Shin's Hard]

1. 00:40:958 (2) - spacing wrong Am I not allowed jumps?
2. 00:43:003 (1,2,3) - seem to a little confused, put 2 outside maybe better confusing = my design
3. 00:50:504 (2) - spacing... jump~
4. 01:05:050 (2) - ^^
5. 01:19:597 (2) - ^ orz ^ ..... oi!
6. 01:38:007 (2,3) - ^ ^ -sighhh-

RAWR!! ;_;!! notice the "wrong spacing" are jumps! >_>

ykcarrot wrote:

wow nice map
★ 4 u ~

Wojjan wrote:

Alright, modding. It's been a while since I last modded anything.

OVERALL

BPM: 132 flat
Offset: 44
Well, shinxyn already sayid this:

Shinxyn wrote:

BPM: 131.99, a clean 132's mistimed-hits grows higher as it gets closer to the end, and 131.99 worked better for me~~ may need another opinion on this
Offset- 46

So, i don't know if I'm gonna use your BPM cuz u know, i already used one time and they sayid to change.

EASY

C'mooon, why so difficult? I don't think that is that hard at all but i sayid to Yes check it.

00:14:13 (1,1) - You don't do this in an Easy
00:20:27 (4,5) - You don't do this either
00:23:45 (3) - Nor this
00:27:09 (2) - Same.

Easy should follow the beat rather than the lyrics. This here is a NORMAL

NORMAL

Oh dear.
01:34:59 (1-10,1-10) - Too hard for normal. What? i did the same thing that i did on the other parts XD Mybe the second one is a little bit more harder, so i changed it, but the first one is pretty normal, i think o.O
02:54:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - WAY TOO HARD D: I think you are right, but how it is the last part, i really were think of making something more harder. Anyway, done~

Normal should follow the melody more vigorously than Easy, but should still widely consist of white ticks, and red ticks at certain points. This is a HARD

HARD

This is fine. Not great, but rankable nonetheless.

INSANE

This difficulty is great, I really enjoyed it.

Takuma wrote:

Insane:
00:25:95 (5) - Feels like a badly placed jump to me, and it's unexpected.

It's all I can complain about. ┐('～`；)┌

Larto wrote:

Have a pop.

Skin: (That will take a few longer, but I'll make it =])
Either force default skin
or
Add following images:
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
spinner-clear.png
approachcircle.png

Timing
BPM: 132.00 Ok

Normal-Hard:
00:22:09 (1,1) - I suggest combining these spinners so they are one. Those spinners are a bit fast for a Normal/Hard. Ok =]
00:25:72 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:47:77 (1) - Make this one a bit longer please Now ending at 01:49:136
03:07:78 (1) - ^ Now ending at 03:09:136

Larto wrote:

approachcircle.png U mean SPINNER-aproachcircle, right? o.O

Yes wrote:

Easierrr?

Lol_boy wrote:

Cool song
easyt is enogh for me xP

kingcobra52 wrote:

It's a really flashy map (especially with kiai on), but I didn't find any issues. Bubbled.

Osu-Killer wrote:

yo, gabriel o/
É o Dark aki!
Só to em outra conta.

Beatmap muito maneiro cara. Só me pergunto se o spinner está muito claro. Da pra escurecer um pouquinho não?

mikhe wrote:

Good song and good maps, you have a star! :3

xxheroxx wrote:

Easy:

00:49:367 (5) = make this slider perfectly horizontal Since it's just a little thing, I did it for Yes ^^

Insane:

02:37:318 (1) = i don't like this slider D: Did it a little bit cuter :3 See if you like it now:

SPOILER

I love the song <3
starred

Wojjan wrote:

Great, it eveolved a lot since last time! It scans out pretty well, and Yes' diff is now a little more fitting the name.
Special star

PicoLo wrote:

~Star.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
rename as such Did it. Sorry Wojjan ._.
00:38:68 (1,1) - stacking is really awkward over spaces that long Ok =/
00:57:77 (1) - too soon after spinner Done =]
01:09:13 (1) - hitsound the start Finish Add
02:17:77 (1) - too soon after spinner Done =]
02:32:31 (1) - ^ ^:D

popped

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[animask]
01:44:81 (1) - too soon after spinner end (for a noncentered note) Centered the (1). I hope it's cool enough for animask

popped

Linox wrote:

~Star

Gens wrote:

The whole beatmap set feels good while playing, great job (all of you)!

However, I feel something need to be addressed before ranking. Oh right, the skin!

- star2.png it's a little too big. People might give lower rating because of this... (Especially, [Normal] 01:20:04 (1) it's covered by the Kiai fountain, and that's something people dislike) (FYI this has been the 2nd case where it actually bothers me... Most of the time I don't notice Kiai in a map, really.) I'll try to make it tinyer. Thanks for the tip
- The spinner (more like, the WHOLE SCREEN) gets totally white when you get clear+bonus (If you have shader effects enabled of course). It's fine by me, but I'm just thinking about what other people might think about it. (What if they're using fullscreen? That'd hurt my eyes!) I'll take a look about that =]
- Maybe add some alpha to the "pause-overlay.png" image? Feels abit unecessary IMO. Sorry, but... what is alpha? ._.

Also, a storyboard thingy: Would you add it's respective mapper's name to each difficulty? You have on each diff "Created by roxkyuubi", while you only made one difficulty... Also, it'd avoid confusion while someone is recording a video of this beatmap. You are really right. I'll make it at this moment =O

[animask's Insane]
02:52:54 (x) - I actually felt a beat was missing here.

It is all optional though, do what you want with these suggestions.
Hope it gets ranked soon. Thanks

EDIT: Oops, I forgot to say this. I'm sorry if someone already pointed these things out and got rejected, and if I'm only wasting your time... I normally read through the whole thread before start modding, but this thread is of 7 pages! And I was kinda tired.Don't worry about that. They already sayid that the map is pretty "flashy" but no as a bad thing. But we gotta see all the points, right?

1. Star2: Lowered 25% of the sprite size.
2. Spinner: Sorry I didn't change this one :/ Use sun-glasses XD (kidding, really kidding )
3. Pause-overlay: I'll change it soon. I'm a little out of time for now. U know what? Took it off!
   Too unecessary.
4. Storyboard: Did it! One logo for each one .

m980 wrote:

Make Star2.png transparent (50%?)
I couldn't even recognize the spinner until I saw the X. Maybe make it more.. recognize-able?

...


Yeaaaaaah..

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Yes]
mmk

[Normal]
ok now that i look at this a little closer...the kiai stars, as m980 said, are so bright and opaque as to obscure parts of the map during kiai time. please tone them down a lot... Did it ^^ See if now is good =]

[Shin]
the comboburst too, when the notes are this close together gets kinda hard to read...increase spacing, maybe? God, that would be really hard to Shynxyn, right? o.o Since Shinxyn change the whole spacing it would make almost a new diff .__. But sent this Pm to Shynxyn and now I'm waiting for his answer ^^

[animask]
yeah just those two comments and ill bubble

Takuma wrote:

For the SB, you spelled "Shinxyn" wrong. I will rank when you fix. Hmm, maybe the 300's and stuff are a little distracting too..

sesito71 wrote:

Great!!! =D

I love this map ^^

Well job!