Snowy Dream wrote:

http://puu.sh/MTGU
done

哇。。。这个不能给kds的....只有mod才能给...瞎了我就来看下..
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- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:298, ends on 01:17:507

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:298, ends on 01:17:507

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:298, ends on 01:17:507

- [Snowy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:298, ends on 01:17:602

kiai应该在01:17:602 结束 乃提前了1/4拍..感觉不准=-=

• fine

• the distance between notes are a little large and all notes are separated.
  consider the BPM is not so low, how about set distance snap to 0.7x or so.
  00:26:146 - nazi. how about put spinner from here to 00:28:235 ?
  00:49:501 (4) - hit at score display.

• 00:00:134 (1,2) - nazi. I don't like to put short slider at the head of song. because this map doesn't have intro, so we can't expect the speed of not only slider but also the song. how about replace these sliders with 1/1 sliders.
  00:26:146 - same as Easy.
  00:47:222 (1) - hit at score display.
  00:54:817 (5) - ^
  overall, there are a lot of 1/2 rhythm in this diff. I think it is a little difficult and want you to consider to reduce them,
  but it seems that this is the first mod of this map, so I just only say it may be difficult.

• 00:51:209 (2,3,4,5) - to put a circle on red tick after long interval seems hard to read the timing.
  how about replace them like this?
  SPOILER

  
  00:53:868 (2) - cover with HP bar a little, move to below if you can.

• 00:11:146 (2,3) - according to the previous flow, I think this jump is too large and it may cause misread of the rhythm.
  00:26:146 - how about add spinner at here like as Snowy to follow the guidline?
  00:53:298 (1,2,3) - you made the stream after the large jump, it seems hard to follow. how about put more close them? but this is Insane, so it's up to you.
  01:01:083 (3,4) - it seems hard to follow, because you make jump immediately after stream, so between them, there is less interval. also, the angle of jump and slider are different.
  how about put them closer, or rotate (4) to anti-clockwise to get better flow.
  01:02:032 (5,1) - too close imo. put them more farther
  01:08:298 (8,1) - almost same as 00:53:298
  01:17:602 (1) ~ it doesn't look like Insane. we hit almost same point at regular intervals, and it will make us bored. consider to change the placement.

h-728 wrote:

Thank you for request

[General]

• fine

[Easy]

• the distance between notes are a little large and all notes are separated.
  consider the BPM is not so low, how about set distance snap to 0.7x or so.1.0x is not very difficult,and I think 0.7x is crowd
  00:26:146 - nazi. how about put spinner from here to 00:28:235 ?Fixed
  00:49:501 (4) - hit at score display.Fixed

[Normal]

• 00:00:134 (1,2) - nazi. I don't like to put short slider at the head of song. because this map doesn't have intro, so we can't expect the speed of not only slider but also the song. how about replace these sliders with 1/1 sliders.Fixed
  00:26:146 - same as Easy.Fixed
  00:47:222 (1) - hit at score display.Fixed
  00:54:817 (5) - ^Fixed
  overall, there are a lot of 1/2 rhythm in this diff. I think it is a little difficult and want you to consider to reduce them,
  but it seems that this is the first mod of this map, so I just only say it may be difficult.

[Snowy]

• 00:51:209 (2,3,4,5) - to put a circle on red tick after long interval seems hard to read the timing.
  how about replace them like this?Try but no change,I think this is not a big problem for a hard diff
  SPOILER

  
  00:53:868 (2) - cover with HP bar a little, move to below if you can.Fixed

[Insane]

• 00:11:146 (2,3) - according to the previous flow, I think this jump is too large and it may cause misread of the rhythm.No change
  00:26:146 - how about add spinner at here like as Snowy to follow the guidline?Fixed
  00:53:298 (1,2,3) - you made the stream after the large jump, it seems hard to follow. how about put more close them? but this is Insane, so it's up to you.No change,this is Insane diff,so I think this jump no need to change
  01:01:083 (3,4) - it seems hard to follow, because you make jump immediately after stream, so between them, there is less interval. also, the angle of jump and slider are different.
  how about put them closer, or rotate (4) to anti-clockwise to get better flow.No change
  01:02:032 (5,1) - too close imo. put them more fartherNo change
  01:08:298 (8,1) - almost same as 00:53:298No change
  01:17:602 (1) ~ it doesn't look like Insane. we hit almost same point at regular intervals, and it will make us bored. consider to change the placement.I'll change if I find some good idea

that's all. nice maps
good luck

• 00:19:501 (1) - remove NC
  00:52:539 (1) - remove NC
  01:04:690 (4) - NC (must be fixed)
  01:12:475 - add note?
  01:12:665 (5) - add NC instead of 01:13:045 (1)

• 00:33:836 (2) - remove whistle? sounds better for me..
  00:41:146 - finish? o.o

• 00:04:690 (2) - add NC instead of 00:04:311 (1)

Lizellota wrote:

[Insane]

Mapping:

• 00:19:501 (1) - remove NCFixed
  00:52:539 (1) - remove NCFixed
  01:04:690 (4) - NC (must be fixed)Fixed
  01:12:475 - add note?No change
  01:12:665 (5) - add NC instead of 01:13:045 (1) No change

Hitsounds:No change

• 00:33:836 (2) - remove whistle? sounds better for me..
  00:41:146 - finish? o.o

[Snowy]

• 00:04:690 (2) - add NC instead of 00:04:311 (1)Fixed

Nice diffs~

That's all ><~ great map and song, i like it, star~ GL~ sorry ._.

1491625364981 wrote:

HI! 這裡是CLANNAD Modding Queue的MOD

EASY修改了Normal里提到的音量问题,其他地方没有修改

00:03:171 - 這裡加個點
00:06:209 - ^
00:12:285 - ^
01:04:311 - ^

NORMAL

與EASY相同没有修改
還有從這個難度開始
從00:47:222 - 到00:50:260 - 以及01:16:652 - 到01:17:602 - 建議音量用漸增的方式
例如隔兩個note增加5%之類的已修改~

HARD[GD]没有修改

00:25:007 - 不加點有漏拍感
01:05:070 (3,4,5) - 建議合併成滑條 會順一些
01:16:652 - 感覺漏拍

INSANE

基本上前面有得這裡也有 所以我就不多加贅述了修改了Normal里提到的音量问题


基本上這張圖我打得非常順暢 我很喜歡 在此留下我的心星

祝RANK!!

Leorda wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
* AR +1?No change

00:28:994 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. It can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read object)
Fixed

[Normal]
00:22:539 (5) - Stack under slider makes confuse for beginnersFixed


[Snowy]
* Hey! Snowy is my pet name!
* The hitsound volume is too low. I can't hear it.... Maybe max out a bit?Fixed


[Insane]No change
00:19:501 (5) - These pauses makes me confusing while gameplay...
00:52:918 (4,1) - Sudden jump is suprsing... I guess?
01:20:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spread these stacks, this stacks are lot
01:26:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^


That's all I got, hope it's help!

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, thou bad~ :3

mod here...


Easy

00:09:247 - I feel weird here. Its like a circle missing here... I don't think putting a blank here would be a good idea cause the vocal still singing. Generally, put a circle to fit in the blank...No change,this time point have nothing in music,so I think put a blank here have no problem


Normal

00:03:171 - A circle is missing here. I recommend to put a circle here to maintain the flow of the song. Same as easy diff
00:09:247 - Same the reason as above..Same as easy diff
00:12:475(1) - The slider here is not sync with the music. Just shorten it by one beat and placed it at 12:665. Try but feel strange



00:48:741(3) - Just add another repeat for slider to make the slider sounds good with the song.May be hard for beginner,so no change


Snowy

00:16:083(8) - Add a finish here, I feel it is better if finish add here. It sounds good after add it...I think there is no reason to add a finish
00:51:020 - Why don't you put a circle here, making the song not so weird when some note delayed. :3I think add a note here is weird
01:16:273(4) - I think you don't need this circle cause the circle making the beat sounds bad. Just remove it and let the circle(5) stay cause it sounds okay. No change,this note here have no problem


Insane

00:03:171 - By just adding a circle would make the whole stream sounds nice, put one. Same as easy diff
00:09:247 - Same reason as above ^
00:12:285 - Also the same reason as above^
00:50:260(1) - Add hitsound "clap" here to make it sounds nice.Fixed~


Overall, this map good, but try let others mod it to make it better.
And so, I'll take my leave...

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Hi~

在看时发现soft-hitfinish2 声音太小,放进游戏时没有起到什么效果..
可以考虑提升文件本身的音量..(我忘了什么时候下载的这图了,不知道更新文件了没
不过就当提示看下吧..没别的什么了.

Good luck!

Jebok wrote:

[Easy]

00:03:551 (1) - Okay these (1) note combos aren't really needed especially that there is one vocal verse each 2/1 or so and then a pause so I would say keep it all one combo and then change after the pause.No change
00:06:589 (1) - ^^
00:09:627 (1) - ^^
01:09:247 (2) - 5 grids down. Then distance snap the fallowing.Fixed
01:28:994 - Put (3) a bit lower so that (4) doesn't overlap the edge with (2).Fixed

[Normal]

00:03:551 (1) - As for Easy, you can easily combine the two combos together. No point of short combos.No change
00:06:589 (1) - ^^
00:09:627 (1) - ^^
00:15:323 (1) - Ok, now, do it the way you done Easy's combos? No new combo here. (And btw, 00:21:399 is not split into two combos, so it does not make sense to split the other ones into two.)Fixed
00:18:361 (1) - ^Fixed
00:24:427 (1) - ^Fixed
00:25:197 - But seems OK to new combo here.Fixed
00:55:956 (1) - No new combo here. New combo 1/4 later though. Reason: Look how you done it at 00:58:994.Fixed
01:00:893 (1) - No new combo...Fixed
01:02:412 - New comboFixed
01:03:551 (1) - No new comboFixed
01:04:311 - Seems OK to new combo here.Fixed
01:06:969 (1) - No new comboNo change
01:10:007 (1) - No new comboFixed

[Snowy]

00:19:121 (1) - No new comboFixed
01:03:551 (3) - I have a feeling this might be covered with scoreboard results, changing spacing here a bit so it fits deeper into the grid?No change

Insane looks fine to me, maybe a bit odd ending but its OK.

Good maps, good luck (:!

Thank you for request \(^^)/

Normal

Snowy

Insane

kurohana wrote:

Thank you for request \(^^)/

Normal

1. 00:26:146 (1) - Leave more space after this spinnerFixed

Snowy

1. 00:51:209 (2) - NCNo change
2. 01:28:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't stack them like this, it's really boring... For example a star?No change

Insane

1. 00:06:589 (6) - NC like you did beforeFixed
2. 00:09:627 (4) - ^Fixed
3. 00:25:956 (1) - Remove NCFixed
4. 01:17:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Really? Only stacking? Be creative and find some other way, please >.<I'll change if I have a good idea

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

I played Easy, Normal and Snowy and I didn't find nothing bad

Good job and good luck ^^
No kud plz.

Steph De Chine wrote:

From Steph's Queue
抱歉晚了些……最近作业好多的说……

Easy
00:00:134 (1,2) - Easy 有必要一开始就来这么两个吗？
00:03:171 - 这个很容易让人家对着下面的那个Slider就按下去的……加个note
00:06:209 - 同上
00:21:020 - 同上
00:24:058 - 同上
00:24:437 (2) - 这个可以把折返箭头去掉吧……新手会直接在折返那里松开的
01:01:652 (4) - 这个非要用那种对称的pattern吗？改成一个在01:02:032的点就好了啊
01:03:551 - 人家就在这里对着那个2按下去了啊啊啊……miss了啊啊啊
01:04:311 - 这里也蛮空的，01:03:931 (2) - 把这个拉成在这里结束的滑条吧
01:04:690 (3) - 这个就删了吧

Normal
00:03:171 - 这个很容易让人家对着下面的那个Slider就按下去的……加个note
00:06:209 - 同上
00:12:475 (1) - 这个不应该是00:12:285开始的吗？
00:51:969 (1) - 这个也是应该在白线上的吧00:51:779
00:53:868 (2,3) - 换成Slider吧……大坑啊Fixed~
可能我对你的思路不大清楚……好像这些都不是Vocal rhythm一样的……那就忽略掉一些吧……

Hard & Insane
水平有限，就提点General一点的意见吧……
那个……单独的一堆圈圈叠在一起的样子不好看啊……考虑把一些拉开吧，弧会好些
成直线分布的圈圈们……要增加难度还可以搞成花形或者五角星之类的啊
最后，好好利用下slider，用那些1/2或1/4加一长串折返的代替单调的圈圈，会好很多在想到更好的方法之前,我会保留现在的排列方法

加油吧……虽然我可能不是蛮喜欢这类音乐……

1. 我感觉soft音效有些太轻了…………不要考虑normal么

1. 00:03:171 - 这里空的感觉有点没理由……
2. 00:06:209 - ^，都是在vocal最重的一拍上……
3. 00:09:247 - ^
4. 00:12:285 - ^，这一段我不反对利用空拍来做一些节奏的变化，但是感觉上空在downbeat而且还是有vocal重音的downbeat上怎么都有点违和…………

1. 00:03:171 - 这些空拍的建议和easy一样
2. 00:12:475 (1) - 另外像这种我可能会把节奏做成这样的吧：
   

1. 01:29:564 - 不应该是结束在这里么……

1. 00:03:171 - 依然和Easy一样的建议，看不到空拍放在长白线上的理由
2. 00:04:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嗯……我仅仅是给一个我自己会倾向于选择的节奏思路——没有让你要去改现在的意思，只是告诉你以后遇到类似的话你也许可以有更多一点的选择思路
   
3. 00:08:678 - 这里，一样是节奏建议
   
   总的来说就是——感觉上作为Insane难度你现在的节奏有些空了……
4. 00:18:171 - 考虑加note？
5. 00:57:665 - ^
6. 01:22:159 (5,6,7,8,9) - 之前IRC聊到的，给你几个参考的排版变化～～角度，尺寸什么的自己去做就好
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   总之可以变化的排版就太多了……按照自己的想法来吧

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request~

[General]

1. 我感觉soft音效有些太轻了…………不要考虑normal么试过normal音效,声音有点太清脆了,个人觉得还是soft合适

[Easy]

1. 00:03:171 - 这里空的感觉有点没理由……
2. 00:06:209 - ^，都是在vocal最重的一拍上……
3. 00:09:247 - ^
4. 00:12:285 - ^，这一段我不反对利用空拍来做一些节奏的变化，但是感觉上空在downbeat而且还是有vocal重音的downbeat上怎么都有点违和…………
   这里的空拍纠结了很久,最后还是决定不加note,感觉空着比较有节奏感 ,其他难度的理由一样

[Normal]

1. 00:03:171 - 这些空拍的建议和easy一样
2. 00:12:475 (1) - 另外像这种我可能会把节奏做成这样的吧：
   

Easy和Normal没什么好说的，很扎实的做工

[Snowy]

1. 01:29:564 - 不应该是结束在这里么……

[Insane]

1. 00:03:171 - 依然和Easy一样的建议，看不到空拍放在长白线上的理由
2. 00:04:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嗯……我仅仅是给一个我自己会倾向于选择的节奏思路——没有让你要去改现在的意思，只是告诉你以后遇到类似的话你也许可以有更多一点的选择思路
   
3. 00:08:678 - 这里，一样是节奏建议
   
   总的来说就是——感觉上作为Insane难度你现在的节奏有些空了……不太习惯塞满,留点喘息空间不是很好么?
4. 00:18:171 - 考虑加note？
5. 00:57:665 - ^
6. 01:22:159 (5,6,7,8,9) - 之前IRC聊到的，给你几个参考的排版变化～～角度，尺寸什么的自己去做就好已经改成我认为比较满意的样式了
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   总之可以变化的排版就太多了……按照自己的想法来吧

差不多就这样了，和之前相比进步蛮大的，加油的说

wantuole wrote:

来自我的队列
[General]
nothng
[easy]
个人推荐两条长白线一个new combo更好已修改~
fine for me
[Nor]
00:51:969 (1,2,3) - 多个这种衔接在nor来说有点难了感觉并不是太快,所以没有改
[Snowy]
01:21:779 (4) - 这个4不堆叠更好感觉没什么不好的,所以决定保持原来的排列
good job
[Insane]
00:14:564 (5) - 再来点 ，做个三连 还是这么空洞的梗不适合insane还是决定不改了,本来也没打算做得太难

00:38:488 (3) - 用 1/4的slider required更好感觉略违和啊
00:39:247 (3) - ^^
00:40:007 (3) - 这个不改更好

就这些了，中秋快乐and star~

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Insane]
00:13:425 (3) - Please move this beat to the bottom. (~20 grid down) 0.50x speed then 1x + antijump = not so goodFixed

Only this. Sorry for my poor mod

1. 00:24:058 - feels empty, add a circle here?
2. 00:38:868 (2) - 2grid down to be centered from 1
3. 01:28:994 (4) - add 1 more arrow?

1. 00:47:982 (2) - stretch it, and copy/paste 3 from 1 for symmetry?

1. 00:43:045 (7,8,9,10) - replace with 2 sliders? will be easier to read imo

1. 00:03:171 - feels too empty, add a circle plz
2. 00:06:209 - ^
3. 00:09:247 - ^
4. 01:17:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could make more actice notes with them
5. 01:23:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[Easy]

1. 00:24:058 - feels empty, add a circle here?Fixed
2. 00:38:868 (2) - 2grid down to be centered from 1Fixed
3. 01:28:994 (4) - add 1 more arrow?I think follow the voice will be easier for beginners,so no change

[Normal]

1. 00:47:982 (2) - stretch it, and copy/paste 3 from 1 for symmetry?Fixed

[Snowy]

1. 00:43:045 (7,8,9,10) - replace with 2 sliders? will be easier to read imotry but no change,I don't think it's hard to read

[Insane]

1. 00:03:171 - feels too empty, add a circle plzFixed
2. 00:06:209 - ^^
3. 00:09:247 - ^^
4. 01:17:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could make more actice notes with themI will keep this way
5. 01:23:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^^

Good luck with rank

-[NYAN]- wrote:

thou bad~~好啊
首先说一句，你的图对于小猫来说就是个神图，我基本上就找不出什么问题，就easy看到了个很小的问题，算了，不说了，对于我一个新手来讲，找不到槽点啊

杀了你yooooo


Easy

01:28:994 (4) - 再折返一次？感觉这里再折返一次不太好，还是跟着歌词走吧，所以就不改了



就这一点点了....
不给星说不过去啊

Twice wrote:

[Easy]

AR-1? 感觉更符合easy一点owo找了几张图对比了一下，感觉easy的话AR3应该可以接受

[Normal]

跟easy一样的建议理由同上
00:43:804(4)总感觉normal用这个不太妥owo?这种程度的遮挡应该没什么问题

[Snowy]

=w=这个我喜欢

[Insane]

01:04:406(2)(3) x136 y272已修改
01:22:159(5) 我觉得nc会更好耶/w\ 更清楚？如果纯粹为了增加难度就算了已修改
01:28:235(5) ^已修改


莫名的带感

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
offset=124(-10) is better imofixed
the video size is too large(1024x576), you'd better to use a smaller onefixed (800x448)
lead-in=2500 is better imofixed

nice map
call me back then

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[Snowy]
OD+1, or the setting is kinda lowfixed
the claps in this diff sound really odd to me, 00:00:134 - 00:13:804 - this part is no need to use claps, after 00:13:804 - , other part's claps should be at 3rd white beat line(2/1 beat after long white line). I think you need to remap the clapsfixed

wcx19911123 wrote:

fine now
bubbled

narakucrimson wrote:

Interesting mapset, at first I thought that hitsounds were very low, but I then somehow I convinced myself about them

Ranked!