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[Relaxing]
00:07:04 (4) - Whistle on reversepoint.
00:13:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:04 (1) - ^
02:20:04 (5) - New combo.
03:01:045 (x) - Add a note with whistle here.
[Challenging]
00:34:29 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are so out of place, remove them.
00:44:29 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:50:79 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:52:29 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:59:79 (1,2) - NO, remove.
01:00:29 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are so out of place, remove them.
01:15:79 (1,2) - NO, remove.
01:23:54 (1,2,3) - ^
01:44:04 (1,2,3) - ^
01:48:04 (1,2,3) - ^
01:52:29 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive, change/remove..
02:00:04 (10,1) - From 10 to 1 is too big jump, change it by putting (1) on (2)'s place and then (2) on (1)'s place.
02:02:29 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove these jumps.
02:10:29 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:17:79 (1,2) - Unintuitive, change/remove..
02:33:79 (1,2) - No.
I only noticed the bad jumps now, try to stop adding too many 1/2 jumps in your maps.
The rest of the map is fun and I like the song.
Starred *
00:07:04 (4) - Whistle on reversepoint.
00:13:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:04 (1) - ^
02:20:04 (5) - New combo.
03:01:045 (x) - Add a note with whistle here.
[Challenging]
00:34:29 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are so out of place, remove them.
00:44:29 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:50:79 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:52:29 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:59:79 (1,2) - NO, remove.
01:00:29 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are so out of place, remove them.
01:15:79 (1,2) - NO, remove.
01:23:54 (1,2,3) - ^
01:44:04 (1,2,3) - ^
01:48:04 (1,2,3) - ^
01:52:29 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive, change/remove..
02:00:04 (10,1) - From 10 to 1 is too big jump, change it by putting (1) on (2)'s place and then (2) on (1)'s place.
02:02:29 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove these jumps.
02:10:29 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:17:79 (1,2) - Unintuitive, change/remove..
02:33:79 (1,2) - No.
I only noticed the bad jumps now, try to stop adding too many 1/2 jumps in your maps.
The rest of the map is fun and I like the song.
Starred *
Relaxing:
00:18:045 (1) , remove new combo
00:32:045 (3) , new combo and 把这slider分成三拍，来回那种（i'm so sorry for my poor english :<）
01:31:545 (8) , in the end of this slider , how about change no volume ?
03:00:295 (5,6,7) , remove them
Challenging:
00:52:045 , why dont add a circle here?
01:18:045 (1) , remove new combo
01:26:045 (1) , ^
02:58:170 (2) , remove it
03:00:045 , add a circle here
03:00:295 (1,2,3) , remove them
it's just some suggestion for you , hope you will understand
and Starred
00:18:045 (1) , remove new combo
00:32:045 (3) , new combo and 把这slider分成三拍，来回那种（i'm so sorry for my poor english :<）
01:31:545 (8) , in the end of this slider , how about change no volume ?
03:00:295 (5,6,7) , remove them
Challenging:
00:52:045 , why dont add a circle here?
01:18:045 (1) , remove new combo
01:26:045 (1) , ^
02:58:170 (2) , remove it
03:00:045 , add a circle here
03:00:295 (1,2,3) , remove them
it's just some suggestion for you , hope you will understand
and Starred
mod on IRC
nice map
star and another kudosu star for you!
nice map
star and another kudosu star for you!
Topic Starter
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Topic Starter
thanks for your modding~jamesleao wrote:
Relaxing:
00:18:045 (1) , remove new combo
fixed
00:32:045 (3) , new combo and 把这slider分成三拍，来回那种（i'm so sorry for my poor english :<）
no
01:31:545 (8) , in the end of this slider , how about change no volume ?
no
03:00:295 (5,6,7) , remove them
no
Challenging:
00:52:045 , why dont add a circle here?
no
01:18:045 (1) , remove new combo
no
01:26:045 (1) , ^
no
02:58:170 (2) , remove it
no
03:00:045 , add a circle here
no
03:00:295 (1,2,3) , remove them
no
it's just some suggestion for you , hope you will understand
and Starred
thanks for your modding and KDS.breeze~>A<Breeze wrote:
mod on IRC
nice map
star and another kudosu star for you!
Yea ! My turn to mod ! I hope you don't mind me speaking english ? (typing is much faster for me )
Anyway, let's start. Note : I mod by test-playing them.
General Mod :
1. eufonius or Euphonius ?
2. Source and tag ? Or this map doesn't have one ? XD
3. Why your osb file is wonder while other osu file is Wonder ? I don't know what is this, XD, so better ask someone who knows. XD
RELAXING
Note : Let me say sorry first for the following nazi and stupid mod, but for this kind of slow map that emphasize on beauty and smoothness, I think these are necessary. You may skip this if you don't like nazi mod. XD
Other than that, I must praise you for this difficulty. It is one of the most smooth normal map that I encounter. Good job.
CHALLENGING
Nothing wrong with the difficulty. So, here goes beauty nazi mod. All are just suggestions though, feel free to ignore me.
I didn't finish test-playing this difficulty because I died too much on the constant jump. XD
Comment : The challenging difficulty is challenging lol. If you fix some beauty nazi stuff, this map could be very PRETTY and wonderful. XD
Nice map, style and song ! Star ! Good job gdeath ! I really like the Relaxing.
Nazi-ed by :
Anyway, let's start. Note : I mod by test-playing them.
General Mod :
1. eufonius or Euphonius ?
2. Source and tag ? Or this map doesn't have one ? XD
3. Why your osb file is wonder while other osu file is Wonder ? I don't know what is this, XD, so better ask someone who knows. XD
RELAXING
Note : Let me say sorry first for the following nazi and stupid mod, but for this kind of slow map that emphasize on beauty and smoothness, I think these are necessary. You may skip this if you don't like nazi mod. XD
SPOILER
Play mod :
Yes, this is very good. Nice and smooth to play. No problem in spacing, design or whatsoever. HOWEVER, there are some parts of it looks ugly, mainly the minor spacing problem... Let me point out some examples for you...
00:10:04 (5) -
00:10:79 (8) -
00:12:79 (2,3) -
00:14:79 (9) -
00:16:04 (1,2,3) -
00:17:54 (6) -
These are still ok... Sorry to be Nazi, but the following parts are really intolerable (to me at least XD)
00:48:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:53:29 (1,2,3) -
01:44:54 (3) -
01:48:54 (3) -
02:11:29 (1,2,3) -
02:25:04 (9) -
02:30:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:32:79 (8,9) -
02:38:29 (1,2,3) -
02:48:04 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:52:29 (1,2,3) -
02:52:29 (1,2,3) - This one must fix !
Actually there are A LOT of minor inconsistent spacing ugly-ness. If you want your map to be perfect and beautiful looking, I suggest you nazi your own map for 1 time and fix those minor spacing inconsistencies.
Beauty NAZI Mod :
01:38:04 (4) - Please make this slider end more beautiful.
01:56:54 (6) - Not parallel. Ugly.
02:20:29 (2) - ^
02:47:29 (5) - Arrange this properly
02:37:29 (4) - not curve enough. XD
Yes, this is very good. Nice and smooth to play. No problem in spacing, design or whatsoever. HOWEVER, there are some parts of it looks ugly, mainly the minor spacing problem... Let me point out some examples for you...
00:10:04 (5) -
00:10:79 (8) -
00:12:79 (2,3) -
00:14:79 (9) -
00:16:04 (1,2,3) -
00:17:54 (6) -
These are still ok... Sorry to be Nazi, but the following parts are really intolerable (to me at least XD)
00:48:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:53:29 (1,2,3) -
01:44:54 (3) -
01:48:54 (3) -
02:11:29 (1,2,3) -
02:25:04 (9) -
02:30:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:32:79 (8,9) -
02:38:29 (1,2,3) -
02:48:04 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:52:29 (1,2,3) -
02:52:29 (1,2,3) - This one must fix !
Actually there are A LOT of minor inconsistent spacing ugly-ness. If you want your map to be perfect and beautiful looking, I suggest you nazi your own map for 1 time and fix those minor spacing inconsistencies.
Beauty NAZI Mod :
01:38:04 (4) - Please make this slider end more beautiful.
01:56:54 (6) - Not parallel. Ugly.
02:20:29 (2) - ^
02:47:29 (5) - Arrange this properly
Other than that, I must praise you for this difficulty. It is one of the most smooth normal map that I encounter. Good job.
CHALLENGING
Nothing wrong with the difficulty. So, here goes beauty nazi mod. All are just suggestions though, feel free to ignore me.
SPOILER
00:14:79 (5,6,7,8) - Too left ? Because scoreboard will obscure this. Not recommended to put here though. XD
00:52:29 (1,2,3) - This jump and this jump 00:53:29 (1,2,3) is un-even in distance. Please make them have the same jump distance.
00:54:29 (1,2,3) - Why 1 & 2 is longer than 2 & 3 ? Uneven jump is ugly.
01:01:04 (4) - Are you trying to make a hexagon ? If so, suggest you re-positioning this to make the shape more beautiful.
01:48:04 (1,2,3) - Jump is too small compared to 01:44:04 (1,2,3) -
02:03:79 (3) - Uneven jump and triangle compared to 02:02:79 (3) -
02:04:29 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly shape and jump.
02:11:92 (4,5) - Why this is different from 02:10:92 (4,5) ?
02:39:67 (5,6) - Ugly, not parallel with 02:40:04 (1)
00:52:29 (1,2,3) - This jump and this jump 00:53:29 (1,2,3) is un-even in distance. Please make them have the same jump distance.
00:54:29 (1,2,3) - Why 1 & 2 is longer than 2 & 3 ? Uneven jump is ugly.
01:01:04 (4) - Are you trying to make a hexagon ? If so, suggest you re-positioning this to make the shape more beautiful.
01:48:04 (1,2,3) - Jump is too small compared to 01:44:04 (1,2,3) -
02:03:79 (3) - Uneven jump and triangle compared to 02:02:79 (3) -
02:04:29 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly shape and jump.
02:11:92 (4,5) - Why this is different from 02:10:92 (4,5) ?
02:39:67 (5,6) - Ugly, not parallel with 02:40:04 (1)
I didn't finish test-playing this difficulty because I died too much on the constant jump. XD
Comment : The challenging difficulty is challenging lol. If you fix some beauty nazi stuff, this map could be very PRETTY and wonderful. XD
Nice map, style and song ! Star ! Good job gdeath ! I really like the Relaxing.
Nazi-ed by :
Hi!
[Timing]
Offset: 6 293? It sounds better for me then.
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.
[Relaxing]
[Timing]
Offset: 6 293? It sounds better for me then.
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.
[Relaxing]
- 00:09:79 (4) - Too nazi but, stack it manually on (3)s end,
- 00:24:04 (3) - Too nazi but, stack it manually on (2)s end.
- Fine.
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Heya!
Your map is lovely. Really nicely done.
[Relaxing]
It's flawless!
Here a star.
Your map is lovely. Really nicely done.
[Relaxing]
- · Just perfect.
- · 00:52:295 (1,2) - This doesn't have the same distance as 00:53:295(1,2) and (1,2,3,4,5) then.
· 00:59:295 (6) - How 'bout a clap there?· 02:58:295 - Maybe add a note there? If so, rearrange (4) or put new combo in it.
It's flawless!
Here a star.
Topic Starter
alvisto<<---pretty nice mod!fixed some parts^^
SteRRuM<<---i think my offset is no problem.thanks for your modding^^
Lissette<<---00:49:29 - i need add whistle here.if i fix it as your favouite,no note is here and i can not add hitsound in this point.so i dont fix it.really thanks for your modding^^
nullPointLOL<<---nice mod!all fixed^^
SteRRuM<<---i think my offset is no problem.thanks for your modding^^
Lissette<<---00:49:29 - i need add whistle here.if i fix it as your favouite,no note is here and i can not add hitsound in this point.so i dont fix it.really thanks for your modding^^
nullPointLOL<<---nice mod!all fixed^^
Topic Starter
thank you,tearsMystearica wrote:
Good map~ I was fine with all of it.
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Topic Starter
all fixed.thanks for your modding~v2b>O<v2b wrote:
challenging
00:51:29 (3) - offscreen
02:42:04 (3) - ^
I like soft soft song >A<
<Relaxing>
you add toooooooo much extra claps i suggest remove all claps
because you already use the custom sound in those parts which claps fit
example
before 00:35 claps don`t fit (only soft whistles fit)
00:42:29 (1,2,3) - soft-whistle or finish
01:07:54 (1,2,3) - clap clap clap XD
01:32:29 (1,2,3,4) - XD
try to remove all claps anyway
usually too many hitsounds don`t sound better
<Challenging>
I think you should follow Relaxing`s hitsounds
Relaxing`s hitsounds are much better
00:37:04 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part is good normalhit+clap fit
Normal whistle wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww (don`t use it in this song plz)
It`s up to you anyway
btw
01:36:29 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - omg Mystearica mapped this i guess wwwwww
<Relaxing>
you add toooooooo much extra claps i suggest remove all claps
because you already use the custom sound in those parts which claps fit
example
before 00:35 claps don`t fit (only soft whistles fit)
00:42:29 (1,2,3) - soft-whistle or finish
01:07:54 (1,2,3) - clap clap clap XD
01:32:29 (1,2,3,4) - XD
try to remove all claps anyway
usually too many hitsounds don`t sound better
<Challenging>
I think you should follow Relaxing`s hitsounds
Relaxing`s hitsounds are much better
00:37:04 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part is good normalhit+clap fit
Normal whistle wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww (don`t use it in this song plz)
It`s up to you anyway
btw
01:36:29 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - omg Mystearica mapped this i guess wwwwww
star~
Topic Starter
Alace sensei>A<Alace wrote:
I like soft soft song >A<
<Relaxing>
you add toooooooo much extra claps i suggest remove all claps
because you already use the custom sound in those parts which claps fit
example
before 00:35 claps don`t fit (only soft whistles fit)
00:42:29 (1,2,3) - soft-whistle or finish
01:07:54 (1,2,3) - clap clap clap XD
01:32:29 (1,2,3,4) - XD
try to remove all claps anyway
usually too many hitsounds don`t sound better
<Challenging>
I think you should follow Relaxing`s hitsounds
Relaxing`s hitsounds are much better
00:37:04 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This part is good normalhit+clap fit
Normal whistle wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww (don`t use it in this song plz)
It`s up to you anyway
btw
01:36:29 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - omg Mystearica mapped this i guess wwwwww
so pro.all fixed.i think it sounds much better than before\(^o^)/
satosid <<---thank for your star ^^
Though [Relaxing] difficulty has 4.5 stars, but IMO it isn't that hard since notes are equally placed, star kious sometimes anyway.
Awesome work, Bubbled.
Awesome work, Bubbled.
STAR ~