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Buono! - Lotta Love!

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fartownik
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 października 2009 at 04:57:30

Artist: Buono!
Title: Lotta Love!
Source: Shugo Chara
Tags: Shugo Chara Rottara Lotta Love Metruzero Beatmap Project Ending
BPM: 176
Filesize: 9961kb
Play Time: 02:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,49 stars, 327 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 486 notes)
  3. Normal (3,2 stars, 107 notes)
Download: Buono! - Lotta Love!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Metruzero's Shugo Chara project. 5th ending of Shugo Chara.
Lokamp
... Buono? what a curious name...

[General] a soft timing period would be fine from 01:31:84 to 01:41:400 (maybe adding some soft whistles, too...)

Normal

[00:01:160] (1, 2, 3) finish here (and on the sliders's end)
[00:03:890] (1, 2, 3) like upper
[00:11:390] (spinner) pretty strange, isn't it? try to change it with a slider or three beats (starting from 00:12:070)
[00:25:710] is this combo series too tricky for a normal?
[01:06:450] (3) place this beat on the previous slider's end
[02:06:960] (1, 2) end the 1st slider on 02:07:300 and make it further from the next one
[02:09:690] (1, 2) same thing (end the 1st slider on 02:10:040)

Hard

[00:01:160] (1, 2, 3) finish here
[00:03:890] (1, 2, 3) ^

I think it's all! ^.^ Star'd.
Matma Rex
Fajne, ale brakuje Easy.

"Wrong" powinien być na missie, na 50 daj może "Bad"?

Znalazłem innego pasującego fonta (nazwa: Elegance), paczka z tekstem:Download: recomp.rar

Zrobiłem dość spory rozmiar literek, jak mają być mniejsze, to mów - wygenerowanie tego od nowa to kwestia jednego kliku i kilkunastu sekund.
Jak coś jest nie teges z tekstem, to też mów.
Jak inna czcionka, to też mów, tylko powiedz, jaka ;)
Mafiamaster
I didn't see anything wrong~
Except for 02:06:96 (1,2) and 02:09:69 (1,2) which Lokamp already explained~

Nice job!
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Timing]
BPM: 88,000, (fine)
Offset: 1 150.
Resnap all notes.
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:91 (1) - 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2,
  2. I don't like those slient hitsound, i'd like to delete them all :P.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:58 (8,1) - Stack ends manually,
  2. 00:55:35 (4) - Move end's tick 1 to right.
Topic Starter
fartownik

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Timing]
BPM: 88,000, (fine)
Offset: 1 150. Fixed
Resnap all notes.
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:91 (1) - 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2, Fixed
  2. I don't like those slient hitsound, i'd like to delete them all :P. I like them.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:58 (8,1) - Stack ends manually, Fixed
  2. 00:55:35 (4) - Move end's tick 1 to right. Fixed
TeHaIks.
Symbolic
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
fartownik

Symbolic wrote:

[Normal]
00:51:26 (5,1) - This jump is too big for [Normal], remove it. - Fixed.
Kudosu only for this advice :P
Sleep Powder
Can I get in and make a difficulty for this?
Topic Starter
fartownik
Yeah, it would be nice.
mrtn
try offset 1127

i'd like to see a difficulty easier than normal

[kiai time]
kiai time can only be toggled once for every minute of beatmap. So the maximum for this map is 2 (certainly no more than 3).

[normal]
01:06:60 (1,1) - i find this recovery time too short
01:40:18 (1,1) - ^
don't really like the end point...

[hard]
00:08:30 (7,8) - i don't like this jump
00:11:03 (7,8) - ^
00:22:11 (3,4) - ^
00:22:79 (6,1) - ^
00:33:02 (2,3) - jump is not logic considering the spacing of (3,4)
00:36:94 (2,1) - out of place jump
don't really like the end point...
minyeob
[Overall]
It is true that we can use 1 kiai time per 1 minute.
If you want to emphasize some part, using kiai bit more than standard rule(1 kiai per 1 minute) is OK.
But this map's kiai fountain is overused, as mrtn said
Map looks fine.

[Normal]
0:48:98(kiai) - Remove this kiai time, please.
1:57:86(kiai) - Remove this kiai time, please.

[Hard]
0:48:98(kiai) - Remove this kiai time, please.
01:49:21 (4,5) - I think this jump is very hard to read :o
1:57:86(kiai) - Remove this kiai time, please.
Breeze
hi fartownik
awesome map!
and awesome skin XD!

here's some suggestions :

blue :arrow: it's just my personal opinion, fixed it or not both OK, it depends on you
red :arrow: it's strongly recommened that you fixed it

Overall

  1. 00:46:08 KIAI timing section - as a rule, kiai time should start on the hit you intend the fountain to be on,so, start it at 00:46:150 (and all of your kiai sections have this problem)
  2. Place a Preview Point. How to? Go to 00:46:150, click on "Timing" in the toolbar and choose "Set Current Position as Preview". Do this on every difficulty. This makes the song start from the chorus when you select it on the song selection screen
  3. as mrtn said, I'm expect a EASY diff. too XD
[Normal]

  1. 01:15:638 spinner - end at 01:18:025 or 01:18:195 would be better
  2. 02:19:559 spinner - end at 02:21:945 would be better
[Hard]

  1. 00:03:877 (1) - a little spacing wrong, anyway, it's not a problem
  2. 00:21:604 (1) - ^
  3. 00:34:388 (1) - this spacing is confused, 'cause from front note is 1/4 and from next note is 1/2,but... same spacing?
  4. 00:37:115 (1) - ^
  5. 00:46:661 (3) - a little spacing wrong
  6. 01:23:990 (5) - ^
  7. 01:31:490 (4) - ^
  8. 01:42:400 (4) - ^
  9. 01:46:320 (5) - ^
  10. 01:49:388 (5) - this jump is unexpected, too sudden
  11. 02:00:127 (8) - this jump looks good...
  12. 02:19:388 spinner - end at 02:21:945 would be better
nice map!
star and another kudosu star for you!
Echo
Looks fine to me!

peppy
Change BPM of all difficulties to 176, halve the slider velocity to make up for it.

[Easy]
I think this could be renamed to normal to follow the changes below? But it does feel less than normal.
Also increase overall difficulty by 1? It feels way too low in a confusing way.
00:51:60 (1,1,1) - Overlaps are ugly.

[Normal]
Too hard for a normal (rename to hard).

[Hard]
Too hard for a hard (rename to insane).

Not sure how echo was okay with this....

Back to the drawing board for ye.
Topic Starter
fartownik
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
peppy
Please do a full submission. The osz is not up-to-date.
Topic Starter
fartownik
I've already done full submission... What's going on?
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
Metruzero
Ok, i redownloaded it, and...I can see hard and easy... no insane or normal. Please look into that.
kino77
Very good~
Star~
Mafiamaster
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Topic Starter
fartownik
~Doneman
Mafiamaster
Talk to me for some tiny fixes in IRC when you get on.
Afterwards, I'll bubble.

Edit: Bubbled~
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Normal]

00:24:33 (3,4,5) - Just need to move this row of notes 1 small notch to the right. This will also line up (5) with 00:25:69 (1) as well.
00:38:30 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The stacking of these notes looks messy in play mode. You may want to consider moving some notes around.
00:28:42 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing is not even here. 00:28:42 (1,2) looks a bit too close together while 00:29:10 (2,3,4) appears to be more appart and then 00:30:46 (4,5) looks like its too close together as well.
00:39:33 (1,2,3,4) - The cross figure with these sliders are not neatly lined up. (4) Stands out the most as well.
00:47:85 (3) - Maybe a slight push upwards to even out the spacing between the row of notes?
00:50:58 (3) - Maybe a slight push downwards to even out the spacing between the row of notes?
01:19:55 - You have about 18 inherited timing points not being used after the map ends here.

Double check into the spacing on this difficulty.

[Hard]

01:23:64 (1,2) - Intentionally not lined up with 01:22:79 (8)?
01:33:53 (7,8,9) - Compared to 01:32:85 (4,5,6), they looked bunched up.
01:44:78 (1,2,3,4,1) - The notes got bunched up a bit here as well.
01:46:32 (3,4) - Looks a bit too close together when you compare it to 01:43:59 (3,4).
01:47:85 (3,4,1,2) - The notes got slightly bunched up here as well.

Double check into those spacing fluctuations.

[Insane]

01:53:30 (4,1) - Too close together unless it was really intentional.

There seems to be some spacing fluctuations in this map as well. Make sure to check all of the spacing to see that it is reasonable.

Overall: The map seems good, but needs some touch ups and fixes. The spacing was off in some places but if you try using alt + shift in editor, you can adjust the rate to smaller levels to make it easier to fix the spacing and keep it more consistant. You also have 3 .osb files in the song folder (Screen Shot) . I also notice the most that was mapped was up to 02:21:60 out of 03:56:27. The .mp3 could be cut down some to save some space since you're not going to map that far into the song (though it is optional in this case, it would still help to reduce the file size). Once the fixes are done, send a forum PM to remind me on rechecking the map for a bubble.

Oh and one more thing, since you're using a custom skin for the map, make sure to set Preferred Skin to Default in editor.

DJPop
Delete unused files
- Buono! - Lotta Love Lotta Love! (fartownik).osb
- Buono! - Rottara Rottara! (fartownik).osb


I don't like jumps in Insane ;__;
Otherwise fine.

+Star
whymeman
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
whymeman
The beatmaps looks good now and the spinner is much better than before. Bubble for you then.
RemmyX25
popping bubble.

why is the background 1955 x 1425 ? Please resize this to a maximum of 1024x768

Im not too fond of the skin, especallly the Yeah! and stuff replacing 300s etc. This however is personal bias and you can take it however you want. Im not forcing anything with that.

I really like spinner-metre, but the spinner itself looks ugly as a spinner. Its just a stationary image going in circles, and looks terrible as such.

This however, must also be fixed: The combo burst is too wide. Please scale it so it has a width of 500px.
RemmyX25
Bumping for attention, it just occurred to me that you have a count down skinned, but not used in the map. Either get rid of the countdown in the folder, or turn on the countdown in the map (my suggestion would be the first). Otherwise, it is just a waste of space.


Spinner looks much better, imo.
Topic Starter
fartownik
Yeah, fixed.
Topic Starter
fartownik
~When?
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