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Melone (Ryoko Shintani) - Kira Kira Serenade

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__Ag
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月26日 at 23:01:49

Artist: Melone (Ryoko Shintani)
Title: Kira Kira Serenade
Source: クロスワールド -見知らぬ空のエターティア-
Tags: moonlightleaf sahuang narcissu Cross World -Mishiranu Sora no Etatia- visual novel BROCCOLI ブロッコリー
BPM: 76
Filesize: 11124kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. ErMei's Hard (3.01 stars, 571 notes)
  2. Kira (4.38 stars, 796 notes)
  3. Narcissu's Normal (1.82 stars, 308 notes)
  4. sahuang's Easy (1.01 stars, 156 notes)
Download: Melone (Ryoko Shintani) - Kira Kira Serenade
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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没人打我这个古代咸鱼的图
ErMei's Hard by moonlightleaf
Narcissu's Normal by Narcissu
sahuang's Easy by sahuang
SB by moonlightleaf
Athena Tennos
沙发!~again!~
Purist_old
:3
wantuole
:3
sherrie__fay
[General]
  1. 删掉所有蓝线书签【←看到蓝线不删会死星人
  2. 很多地方note和slider尾没对齐 绝对不止我提出来这么多 硬伤 建议自己事后再检查一遍
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:322 (2) - +clap
  2. 00:36:059 (2) - ^
  3. 00:38:428 (1) - finish
  4. 01:19:086 (4) - 这种stack读图对新手相对困难 不要遮起来比较好
  5. 01:41:586 (1) - 开头finish
  6. 02:59:743 (4,5,6,7) - 这种单点节奏对新手绝对困难 绝对不要出现
  7. 03:02:901 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  8. 03:10:007 (1) - 开头finish
  9. 03:35:270 (1) - 转盘接note太快了 easy的话起码要隔一条白线 建议把转盘换掉
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:586 (2) - 和00:25:007 (7,8) - 没有重叠好
  2. 00:38:428 (5) - 偶数折返不推荐;和后边00:39:217 (1) - 没有重叠好;开头+finish
  3. 00:51:059 - +note +finish +NC
  4. 01:03:691 (1) - 开头finish
  5. 01:25:007 (5) - 去掉 把4改成折返
  6. 01:29:546 (6) - 不要叠 放到外面来
  7. 01:30:336 (8) - ^
  8. 01:40:599 (4) - 删掉
  9. 01:41:586 (1) - 开头finish
  10. 02:06:849 (1) - ^
  11. 02:19:086 (7,8) - 建议放X轴 左右一边一个
  12. 02:32:112 (1) - 开头finish
  13. 02:44:349 (6) - 和5没有重叠好
  14. 02:51:651 - +note 和1重叠起来
  15. 02:57:967 (6) - 拿出来
  16. 02:58:757 (8) - ^
  17. 03:09:020 (4) - 删掉【复制粘贴迹象严重
  18. 03:10:007 (1) - 开头finish
  19. 03:32:112 (6) - NC
  20. 03:35:270 (1) - 开头finish
  21. 03:47:507 (7) - 拿到外面去
    *主要是这种stack排列不太好看 打起来也比较放不开 不如把stack单独拿出来做跳啊或者别的什么
  22. 04:00:533 (1) - 开头finish
  23. 04:02:112 (3) - NC
[Kira]
  1. 00:19:086 (5) - 没有对齐
  2. 00:28:855 - 这里试着加个note
  3. 00:49:480 (7) - NC
  4. 00:51:059 (12) - 有兴趣这里也可以NC
  5. 01:08:822 (7,8,9) - 8到9跳的有点突然 试着把8放到7和9的垂直平分线上
  6. 01:13:559 (8) - 拿出来不遮在7下面比较好
  7. 01:23:033 (1) - 和后面234保持等距
  8. 01:24:809 (1) - 试下这样的节奏和排列 会方便些读图
  9. 01:27:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 读图坑爆了 可以试试欣欣的那种1324-3546直线梗也许会好一点?
  10. 01:37:638 (8) - NC
  11. 01:41:586 (1) - 开头finish
  12. 02:19:480 - +note +finish +NC
  13. 02:32:112 (1) - +finish
  14. 02:38:033 (9) - 没有对齐
  15. 02:47:901 (6,7,8) - 打起来有一定难度 建议把8改成一个单向滑条
  16. 02:48:691 (1) - 也不要遮在8下面
  17. 02:59:743 (6,7,8,9) - 个人不推荐这样的跳 方形对角不是那么美观 把89和67重合做成往返跳试试?
  18. 03:10:007 (1) - 开头finish
  19. 03:19:480 (3,4,5) - 强烈建议把4摆到slider外面 而且5和slider尾也没有对齐。底下678同
  20. 03:25:007 (9) - 摆到y轴上
  21. 03:37:638 (10) - 和⑨的末尾重叠起来好了 放中间有点难看
  22. 03:41:980 (2) - 不要和1重叠 放到3上吧
  23. 03:52:441 (7) - 去掉7 把6改成折返slider
  24. 04:00:533 (1) - +finish
累死我了好歌 kirakira☆
Purist_old
刚才看了一下好像跟我最早给你的不太一样,我又重新改了下orz

sherrie__fay wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:31:322 (2) - +clap
  2. 00:36:059 (2) - ^
  3. 00:38:428 (1) - finish
  4. 01:19:086 (4) - 这种stack读图对新手相对困难 不要遮起来比较好
  5. 01:41:586 (1) - 开头finish
  6. 02:59:743 (4,5,6,7) - 这种单点节奏对新手绝对困难 绝对不要出现
  7. 03:02:901 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  8. 03:10:007 (1) - 开头finish
  9. 03:35:270 (1) - 转盘接note太快了 easy的话起码要隔一条白线 建议把转盘换掉
all fixed

:3
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
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Offset: 13171


[Purist's Normal]
HP-3(at least 2) OD-2

00:38:428 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle
01:16:322 (1) - Finish
03:33:697 (1) - Extend to 03:35:276. Then remove 03:35:276 (1,2) . (Yours is a bit difficult for beginners to read the map.)
04:06:855 (1) - Add whistle to these notes which are on the longest white ticks in this part.
04:14:355 - lower the volume to 5%


[Hard]
00:13:165 (1) - Add whistle to the start of the slider
00:28:954 (5) - Newcombo
00:39:217 (1) - Put this to other place ,ppl maybe hard read this :<
01:28:954 (5) - Add finish to the start of the slider and newcombo it.
01:40:599 (4,5) - Change the place
03:09:020 (4,5) - ^
02:17:901 (3,4,5) - Use a 1/6 slider with 3 returns instead of them
03:32:112 (6) - Newcombo
03:50:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you want to follow the vocal, try this

04:14:355 - lower the volume to 5%



[Kira]
00:38:526 (2) - Delete it
00:44:941 - Should be empty here, then you could do a jump on 00:45:138 (2)
01:48:099 - ^
03:29:151 - ^
00:49:480 (7) - Newcombo
01:28:954 (1) - This spinner makes no sense ,plz use circles and sliders map here.
01:44:447 (2) - Delete it
02:19:480 - Add a note with finish here
02:19:086 (10) - If you fix the previous, plz use whistle instead of finish.
02:43:165 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe not staight?
02:57:375 (9) - Newcombo here instead of the next.And add finish to the start of the slider
03:35:270 (1) - Finish!
03:47:901 (1) - ^
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great Mapset :3
GL ;)
Strawberry
Nazi
20:39 *Strawberry is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/186400 Shintani Ryoko - Kira Kira Serenade [Hard]]
20:39 __Ag: 好
20:41 Strawberry: 开头的部分我觉得用这个clap来2,4有点不合适诶
20:41 __Ag: 2.4不行?那应该?
20:41 __Ag: clap不行?
20:41 Strawberry: 不是说2,4不行啦
20:41 Strawberry: :333
20:42 __Ag: 瞎了,那默认whistle怎么样
20:42 Strawberry: 听起来感觉这种clap放到第三拍更好一点
20:42 Strawberry: 你试试看呢
20:43 __Ag: 那....诶?..哎....那2.4怎么办、
20:43 Strawberry: 用弱一点的whistle?
20:44 __Ag: 默认的不是很弱?
20:44 Strawberry: 反正感觉现在的24有点破坏气氛的感觉xD
20:44 Strawberry: hmm..
20:44 __Ag: 瞎了,还得re呢orzzz
20:44 Strawberry: 我试了下默认的感觉也有点吵。。
20:44 Strawberry: 可能没个人感觉不一样啦
20:45 __Ag: 啊拉啦...
20:45 Strawberry: 你要是觉得现在还好的话可以不改<3
20:45 __Ag: 嗯..
20:48 Strawberry: 02:50:664 (1) - nc?
20:48 __Ag: 好
20:49 Strawberry: 02:53:428 (6) - 这个伸出去? x:96 y:64
20:49 Strawberry: 或者直接02:53:033 (5) - 加个repeat也比stack好(个人觉得
20:49 __Ag: 好
20:50 Strawberry: 02:54:217 (8) - NC?
20:50 __Ag: 嗯
20:52 Strawberry: 02:55:007 -
20:52 Strawberry: ...突然想到这个节奏》。try try?
20:52 Strawberry: :p http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474939
20:52 Strawberry: 02:59:743 (1,2) - 感觉应该ctrl+g
20:53 __Ag: 会不会接的有点紧?
20:54 Strawberry: 感觉还好..
20:54 Strawberry: 有后面的02:55:796 (1,2,3,4) - 就不会感觉会太紧
20:56 __Ag: 这不会
20:56 __Ag: 挺好的:D
20:57 Strawberry: 03:48:296 (2) - 这个也是觉得错开好点
20:58 Strawberry: :3
20:58 Strawberry: 03:55:007 (3) - ^
20:58 Strawberry: 挺好的图我star去
star
Hsiao-Chai
star~
raririn
路过占个座
Yap
dazzling map! i will help to modding ~
KogumaX
IRCmod. fight~ >_<
dududuabc123
nice map :)
麋鹿的第一张“rank”图 顶起啊!!
power002_old
米露的圖><
前排留名 快rank吧!
NoHitter
Please only give kudosu to people who mod your map.
Topic Starter
__Ag

NoHitter wrote:

Please only give kudosu to people who mod your map.

sorry,I`m Begingger of edit map
[Mahua]
mc姥爷 后排支持0.0
XinCrin
Hi _Ag ~

[General]

The sizes of the BGS are unranked , resize to 1024x768 or 800x600
In my opinion the first BG is hentai I recommend you use another BG in diff Purist's Normal.
Use the same kiai times in your diffs , i recommend in the guest diff same.Use these:
  • •Kiai #1: Starts on 01:41:586, ends on 02:06:849
    •Kiai #2: Starts on 03:10:007, ends on 03:47:901
[Purist's Normal]

•00:38:428 (1) - Move to x:32 y:248 , Leaving the circle work area (unrankable)
•00:49:480 (1) - Add circle here , to follow the vocal
•01:08:428 (3) - CTRL+G and move to x:256 y:192 , is more beatiful.
If you do the above, fix the spacing of the following notes.
•01:12:375 (4) - Move to x:384 y:352 , If you do the above, fix the spacing of the following notes.
•01:18:691 (3) - Fix the spacing please
•01:27:375 (1) - Move to x:176 y:120 to align with this note 01:25:796 (2)
•01:37:638 (3) - Move to x:256 y:64 or move two grids left
•01:41:586 (1) - This slider is very distant from the center of the spinner, this can be very difficult
for beginners at completion of rotating the spinner. Move to x:256 y:152 and fix the spacing of the following notes.
•02:30:533 (4) - 1 Grid up for align whit (2)
157,68,150533,1,2,0:0:0

[Hard]

•00:45:336 - Add a circle here to follow the vocal
•00:47:704 (11) - Same add circle
•01:14:743 (8) - Make so , looks better:
144,128,74743,2,0,B|247:161|247:161|272:232|272:232|381:264,1,280
•01:23:033 - Add a circle here to follow the vocal
•01:27:375 (1) - Whistle in the head slider , sounds better
•01:27:375 (3) - Same whistle in head of the slider
•01:31:322 (1) - Whistle in the head of the slider
•01:42:178 - Add circle here to follow the vocal and more fun
(This is a hard so no problems putting notes in red ticks)
•01:56:586 (5) - 1 Grid right
•02:15:532 (5) - Whistle
•02:44:743 (1) - Spacing too closed , move to x:192 y:352
•03:32:112 (1,3) - Whistle in the head of the slider , sounds better
•03:38:230 - Consider adding a note here, to keep pace and vocal
•03:44:546 - Same - Consider adding a note here, to keep pace and vocal
•03:46:421 (4) - Sounds Bad and delete this circle , not follow the rhythm of music or vocal
•03:54:217 (1) - Whistle because sounds better

[Kira]

•00:19:086 (5) - Spacing too closed
•00:51:059 (1) - Move to x:256 y:208 . looks better

I don't have time for modding this diff. , Well not so bad, ask me in game any questions
you have, if I am unemployed and will gladly help you make a IRCmod this diff (Kira).
I really liked the song.


Good Luck~ and Take my STAR .
Topic Starter
__Ag

XinCrin wrote:

Hi _Ag ~

[General]

The sizes of the BGS are unranked , resize to 1024x768 or 800x600
In my opinion the first BG is hentai I recommend you use another BG in diff Purist's Normal.
Use the same kiai times in your diffs , i recommend in the guest diff same.Use these:
  • •Kiai #1: Starts on 01:41:586, ends on 02:06:849
    •Kiai #2: Starts on 03:10:007, ends on 03:47:901
[Purist's Normal]

•00:38:428 (1) - Move to x:32 y:248 , Leaving the circle work area (unrankable)
•00:49:480 (1) - Add circle here , to follow the vocal
•01:08:428 (3) - CTRL+G and move to x:256 y:192 , is more beatiful.
If you do the above, fix the spacing of the following notes.
•01:12:375 (4) - Move to x:384 y:352 , If you do the above, fix the spacing of the following notes.
•01:18:691 (3) - Fix the spacing please
•01:27:375 (1) - Move to x:176 y:120 to align with this note 01:25:796 (2)
•01:37:638 (3) - Move to x:256 y:64 or move two grids left
•01:41:586 (1) - This slider is very distant from the center of the spinner, this can be very difficult
for beginners at completion of rotating the spinner. Move to x:256 y:152 and fix the spacing of the following notes.
•02:30:533 (4) - 1 Grid up for align whit (2)
157,68,150533,1,2,0:0:0

[Hard]

•00:45:336 - Add a circle here to follow the vocal
•00:47:704 (11) - Same add circle
•01:14:743 (8) - Make so , looks better:
144,128,74743,2,0,B|247:161|247:161|272:232|272:232|381:264,1,280
•01:23:033 - Add a circle here to follow the vocal
•01:27:375 (1) - Whistle in the head slider , sounds better
•01:27:375 (3) - Same whistle in head of the slider
•01:31:322 (1) - Whistle in the head of the slider
•01:42:178 - Add circle here to follow the vocal and more fun
(This is a hard so no problems putting notes in red ticks)
•01:56:586 (5) - 1 Grid right
•02:15:532 (5) - Whistle
•02:44:743 (1) - Spacing too closed , move to x:192 y:352
•03:32:112 (1,3) - Whistle in the head of the slider , sounds better
•03:38:230 - Consider adding a note here, to keep pace and vocal
•03:44:546 - Same - Consider adding a note here, to keep pace and vocal
•03:46:421 (4) - Sounds Bad and delete this circle , not follow the rhythm of music or vocal
•03:54:217 (1) - Whistle because sounds better

[Kira]

•00:19:086 (5) - Spacing too closed
•00:51:059 (1) - Move to x:256 y:208 . looks better

I don't have time for modding this diff. , Well not so bad, ask me in game any questions
you have, if I am unemployed and will gladly help you make a IRCmod this diff (Kira).
I really liked the song.


Good Luck~ and Take my STAR .

thx for you modded :)
Topic Starter
__Ag

XinCrin wrote:

Hi _Ag ~

[General]

The sizes of the BGS are unranked , resize to 1024x768 or 800x600
In my opinion the first BG is hentai I recommend you use another BG in diff Purist's Normal.
Use the same kiai times in your diffs , i recommend in the guest diff same.Use these:
  • •Kiai #1: Starts on 01:41:586, ends on 02:06:849
    •Kiai #2: Starts on 03:10:007, ends on 03:47:901
[Purist's Normal]

•00:38:428 (1) - Move to x:32 y:248 , Leaving the circle work area (unrankable) √
•00:49:480 (1) - Add circle here , to follow the vocal √
•01:08:428 (3) - CTRL+G and move to x:256 y:192 , is more beatiful.√
If you do the above, fix the spacing of the following notes.
•01:12:375 (4) - Move to x:384 y:352 , If you do the above, fix the spacing of the following notes.√
•01:18:691 (3) - Fix the spacing please
•01:27:375 (1) - Move to x:176 y:120 to align with this note 01:25:796 (2)√
•01:37:638 (3) - Move to x:256 y:64 or move two grids left√
•01:41:586 (1) - This slider is very distant from the center of the spinner, this can be very difficult
for beginners at completion of rotating the spinner. Move to x:256 y:152 and fix the spacing of the following notes.
•02:30:533 (4) - 1 Grid up for align whit (2)√
157,68,150533,1,2,0:0:0

[Hard]

•00:45:336 - Add a circle here to follow the vocal√
•00:47:704 (11) - Same add circle√
•01:14:743 (8) - Make so , looks better:√
144,128,74743,2,0,B|247:161|247:161|272:232|272:232|381:264,1,280
•01:23:033 - Add a circle here to follow the vocal√
•01:27:375 (1) - Whistle in the head slider , sounds better√
•01:27:375 (3) - Same whistle in head of the slider√
•01:31:322 (1) - Whistle in the head of the slider√
•01:42:178 - Add circle here to follow the vocal and more fun√
(This is a hard so no problems putting notes in red ticks)
•01:56:586 (5) - 1 Grid right√
•02:15:532 (5) - Whistle√
•02:44:743 (1) - Spacing too closed , move to x:192 y:352√
•03:32:112 (1,3) - Whistle in the head of the slider , sounds better√
•03:38:230 - Consider adding a note here, to keep pace and vocal√
•03:44:546 - Same - Consider adding a note here, to keep pace and vocal√
•03:46:421 (4) - Sounds Bad and delete this circle , not follow the rhythm of music or vocal√
•03:54:217 (1) - Whistle because sounds better√

[Kira]

•00:19:086 (5) - Spacing too closed√
•00:51:059 (1) - Move to x:256 y:208 . looks better√

I don't have time for modding this diff. , Well not so bad, ask me in game any questions
you have, if I am unemployed and will gladly help you make a IRCmod this diff (Kira).
I really liked the song.


Good Luck~ and Take my STAR .
I fixed it,thank you:D
Topic Starter
__Ag

sherrie__fay wrote:

[General]
  1. 删掉所有蓝线书签【←看到蓝线不删会死星人
  2. 很多地方note和slider尾没对齐 绝对不止我提出来这么多 硬伤 建议自己事后再检查一遍
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:322 (2) - +clap
  2. 00:36:059 (2) - ^
  3. 00:38:428 (1) - finish
  4. 01:19:086 (4) - 这种stack读图对新手相对困难 不要遮起来比较好
  5. 01:41:586 (1) - 开头finish
  6. 02:59:743 (4,5,6,7) - 这种单点节奏对新手绝对困难 绝对不要出现
  7. 03:02:901 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  8. 03:10:007 (1) - 开头finish
  9. 03:35:270 (1) - 转盘接note太快了 easy的话起码要隔一条白线 建议把转盘换掉
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:586 (2) - 和00:25:007 (7,8) - 没有重叠好
  2. 00:38:428 (5) - 偶数折返不推荐;和后边00:39:217 (1) - 没有重叠好;开头+finish
  3. 00:51:059 - +note +finish +NC
  4. 01:03:691 (1) - 开头finish
  5. 01:25:007 (5) - 去掉 把4改成折返
  6. 01:29:546 (6) - 不要叠 放到外面来
  7. 01:30:336 (8) - ^
  8. 01:40:599 (4) - 删掉
  9. 01:41:586 (1) - 开头finish
  10. 02:06:849 (1) - ^
  11. 02:19:086 (7,8) - 建议放X轴 左右一边一个
  12. 02:32:112 (1) - 开头finish
  13. 02:44:349 (6) - 和5没有重叠好
  14. 02:51:651 - +note 和1重叠起来
  15. 02:57:967 (6) - 拿出来
  16. 02:58:757 (8) - ^
  17. 03:09:020 (4) - 删掉【复制粘贴迹象严重
  18. 03:10:007 (1) - 开头finish
  19. 03:32:112 (6) - NC
  20. 03:35:270 (1) - 开头finish
  21. 03:47:507 (7) - 拿到外面去
    *主要是这种stack排列不太好看 打起来也比较放不开 不如把stack单独拿出来做跳啊或者别的什么
  22. 04:00:533 (1) - 开头finish
  23. 04:02:112 (3) - NC
[Kira]
  1. 00:19:086 (5) - 没有对齐
  2. 00:28:855 - 这里试着加个note
  3. 00:49:480 (7) - NC
  4. 00:51:059 (12) - 有兴趣这里也可以NC
  5. 01:08:822 (7,8,9) - 8到9跳的有点突然 试着把8放到7和9的垂直平分线上
  6. 01:13:559 (8) - 拿出来不遮在7下面比较好
  7. 01:23:033 (1) - 和后面234保持等距
  8. 01:24:809 (1) - 试下这样的节奏和排列 会方便些读图
  9. 01:27:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 读图坑爆了 可以试试欣欣的那种1324-3546直线梗也许会好一点?
  10. 01:37:638 (8) - NC
  11. 01:41:586 (1) - 开头finish
  12. 02:19:480 - +note +finish +NC
  13. 02:32:112 (1) - +finish
  14. 02:38:033 (9) - 没有对齐
  15. 02:47:901 (6,7,8) - 打起来有一定难度 建议把8改成一个单向滑条
  16. 02:48:691 (1) - 也不要遮在8下面
  17. 02:59:743 (6,7,8,9) - 个人不推荐这样的跳 方形对角不是那么美观 把89和67重合做成往返跳试试?
  18. 03:10:007 (1) - 开头finish
  19. 03:19:480 (3,4,5) - 强烈建议把4摆到slider外面 而且5和slider尾也没有对齐。底下678同
  20. 03:25:007 (9) - 摆到y轴上
  21. 03:37:638 (10) - 和⑨的末尾重叠起来好了 放中间有点难看
  22. 03:41:980 (2) - 不要和1重叠 放到3上吧
  23. 03:52:441 (7) - 去掉7 把6改成折返slider
  24. 04:00:533 (1) - +finish
累死我了好歌 kirakira☆
抱歉,现在才知道要回这个,全部都改好了
Topic Starter
__Ag

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Offset: 13171


[Purist's Normal]
HP-3(at least 2) OD-2

00:38:428 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle
01:16:322 (1) - Finish
03:33:697 (1) - Extend to 03:35:276. Then remove 03:35:276 (1,2) . (Yours is a bit difficult for beginners to read the map.)
04:06:855 (1) - Add whistle to these notes which are on the longest white ticks in this part.
04:14:355 - lower the volume to 5%


[Hard]
00:13:165 (1) - Add whistle to the start of the slider
00:28:954 (5) - Newcombo
00:39:217 (1) - Put this to other place ,ppl maybe hard read this :<
01:28:954 (5) - Add finish to the start of the slider and newcombo it.
01:40:599 (4,5) - Change the place
03:09:020 (4,5) - ^
02:17:901 (3,4,5) - Use a 1/6 slider with 3 returns instead of them
03:32:112 (6) - Newcombo
03:50:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you want to follow the vocal, try this

04:14:355 - lower the volume to 5%



[Kira]
00:38:526 (2) - Delete it
00:44:941 - Should be empty here, then you could do a jump on 00:45:138 (2)
01:48:099 - ^
03:29:151 - ^
00:49:480 (7) - Newcombo
01:28:954 (1) - This spinner makes no sense ,plz use circles and sliders map here.
01:44:447 (2) - Delete it
02:19:480 - Add a note with finish here
02:19:086 (10) - If you fix the previous, plz use whistle instead of finish.
02:43:165 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe not staight?
02:57:375 (9) - Newcombo here instead of the next.And add finish to the start of the slider
03:35:270 (1) - Finish!
03:47:901 (1) - ^
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great Mapset :3
GL ;)

抱歉,现在才知道要回这个,all fixed,谢谢
Melt
:3

[General]
  1. bg都更换成1024*768的吧
  2. 始终觉得01:03:691的时候有奇怪的声音,mp3的问题?
  3. 因为没有sb所以.osb删掉
[Purist's normal]
  1. OD-1
  2. 02:22:243(1,2)没叠好
  3. 02:59:743(4,3)whistle
[Hard]
  1. 因为和normal难度跨度较大所以可以考虑OD,AR-1
  2. slider velocity和kira难度同为1.4不科学,建议在1.0~1.2之间
  3. clap感觉用的过于频繁,尝试少用一些或者添加其他不太明显的clap音效
  4. 00:22:638(3,4)没叠好
  5. 00:25:401(8)remove finish或者再减点音量
  6. 01:11:586(3)remove whistle
  7. 01:17:901(3,4)没叠好:3
  8. 01:19:875(1,2)^
  9. 01:25:796(6,7,8)^
  10. 01:40:007(3)试试这样的节奏 后面一段同理
  11. 02:00:533(1,3)没叠好 后面有一处相似的
  12. 02:54:217(1,2,3)建议这样摆放
  13. 03:14:743(3,4)没叠好
[Kira]
  1. 同样是clap的问题
  2. 00:44:349(4,5)间距很奇怪
  3. 01:28:954(1,2)没叠好
  4. 01:46:816(5)remove note
  5. 01:48:296(2)nc
  6. 01:53:230(3,4)没叠好
  7. 02:52:243(6,7)^
  8. 02:52:638(7)nc
  9. 02:53:230(9,10)没叠好
  10. 03:00:138(5,6)^
  11. 03:05:763(7,8)remove note
大概就这么多 加油:3
Topic Starter
__Ag

Melt wrote:

:3

[General]
  1. bg都更换成1024*768的吧
  2. 始终觉得01:03:691的时候有奇怪的声音,mp3的问题?
  3. 因为没有sb所以.osb删掉
[Purist's normal]
  1. OD-1
  2. 02:22:243(1,2)没叠好
  3. 02:59:743(4,3)whistle
[Hard]
  1. 因为和normal难度跨度较大所以可以考虑OD,AR-1
  2. slider velocity和kira难度同为1.4不科学,建议在1.0~1.2之间
  3. clap感觉用的过于频繁,尝试少用一些或者添加其他不太明显的clap音效
  4. 00:22:638(3,4)没叠好
  5. 00:25:401(8)remove finish或者再减点音量
  6. 01:11:586(3)remove whistle
  7. 01:17:901(3,4)没叠好:3
  8. 01:19:875(1,2)^
  9. 01:25:796(6,7,8)^
  10. 01:40:007(3)试试这样的节奏 后面一段同理
  11. 02:00:533(1,3)没叠好 后面有一处相似的
  12. 02:54:217(1,2,3)建议这样摆放
  13. 03:14:743(3,4)没叠好
[Kira]
  1. 同样是clap的问题
  2. 00:44:349(4,5)间距很奇怪
  3. 01:28:954(1,2)没叠好
  4. 01:46:816(5)remove note
  5. 01:48:296(2)nc
  6. 01:53:230(3,4)没叠好
  7. 02:52:243(6,7)^
  8. 02:52:638(7)nc
  9. 02:53:230(9,10)没叠好
  10. 03:00:138(5,6)^
  11. 03:05:763(7,8)remove note
大概就这么多 加油:3
除了clap和BG问题全部fixed了,thx妹儿特
raririn
[General]
*我这里看到的BG尺寸是1000*651 1083*767 1056*768 这是unrankable的 不知道你改了没有 没改的话就改一下吧~

*soft-hitwhistle的大小有点不科学啊 难道是我的幻觉

[Hard]
01:26:586 (7) - 叠失误

[Kira]
*整体上NC整理一下吧 有点乱

00:40:401 (7,1) - 感觉不是很合节奏啊 不过好像也没啥问题

00:45:928 (1) - 在这里NC 不然太难读图了lol 而且最好前面的23换下位置0.0

01:22:243 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这段音乐节奏略奇葩...感觉用滑条会比较好吧!

01:24:809 (1) - ..略坑啊

01:48:888 (4) - NC?

01:51:059 (3,4,5,6) - 可能蓝线结束会比较合节奏吧~

03:10:007 (1,2) - 形状改成一样的?

03:46:914 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这里也改成串打起来舒服0.0

呜啊 好长 懒了 就这样吧 加油 star~
Strawberry
quote的时候注明哪里改了和哪里没改并且附上原因之类的会给modder跟大帮助:3 (只是提醒下,不要仅仅为了quote而quote
Topic Starter
__Ag

Strawberry wrote:

quote的时候注明哪里改了和哪里没改并且附上原因之类的会给modder跟大帮助:3 (只是提醒下,不要仅仅为了quote而quote
原来是这样的!!谢谢大草莓,以后我注意
Twice_old
[Purist's normal]

其实为什么很多modder都不太赞同这种note和slider连起来的铺面呢,主要是因为默认皮肤打出的300会严重遮挡视线导致影响读图。
虽然说现在大部分人都知道用透明300的皮肤了,但是在这种低难度的情况下个人还是不建议用这种很粘的铺面。毕竟新手不懂透明皮肤..
我给的解决办法就是使用自制皮肤,弄个比较不遮挡的300,不然就是把间距都重新调一下。

00:21:509(2) 感觉有点太下面 OWO 移到x:328 y:352如何?当然后面的note也要记得调整一下间距唷-w-
00:28:954(1) ^ x:304 y:240
00:39:217(2) 间距有点小问题0w0 估计是没有移好?
01:13:164(1) 感觉在normal里还是不要用这种比较好-w-有点误导意味?
01:28:954(3) nc
01:30:533(1) 取消nc
03:24:217(2) 个人感觉也有点太下面了-w-?建议改个地方

[Hard]

00:35:270(6) 间距问题 顺便加个nc?
00:38:428(5) nc
00:39:217(1) 取消nc
00:41:586(6) nc
00:43:164(1) 取消nc
00:44:743(4) nc
00:47:507(9) nc
00:47:901(1) 间距嘛...还是建议改一下 然后顺便取消nc
01:13:164(6) nc
01:23:033(3) 间距问题..嘛
01:40:796(4) ^
01:41:586到01:42:770 间距什么的o.o
01:57:375(7) nc
02:03:691(6) 可n可不n
02:07:638(2) 感觉是可以要用这种间距,但是我还是不建议/.\
02:10:007(1) 间距问题
02:40:401(6) @神奇的间距君
02:55:795(1) ^
02:57:375(5) nc
03:09:217(4) 一样的间距问题
03:10:796(2) ^
03:16:322(6) nc
03:16:717(1) 取消nc
03:17:901(1) ^
03:25:796(7) nc
03:36:059(2) 一样的间距问题
03:44:743(1) ^
03:56:919(6) ^

总感觉好像看到了当年自己做的第二张图_(:з」∠)_

[Kira]

00:35:270(6) 建议nc
01:23:625(4)到01:24:217(7) 感觉这个间距有点突然,可以省去
01:50:664(1)和01:50:862(2) ^

懒得看完了_(:з」∠)_剩下的就交给其他人吧! 学长只能帮你到这里了(正色
感觉mapper间距的使用还不是很熟练,嘛这东西也就自己意会吧;w; 只可意会不可言传?加油!!

我就是喜欢帮助可爱的新人:3 我是好人才不会乱喷呢 8-)
XinCrin
Go !__Ag you can rank this :)
Topic Starter
__Ag

Twice wrote:

[Purist's normal]

其实为什么很多modder都不太赞同这种note和slider连起来的铺面呢,主要是因为默认皮肤打出的300会严重遮挡视线导致影响读图。
虽然说现在大部分人都知道用透明300的皮肤了,但是在这种低难度的情况下个人还是不建议用这种很粘的铺面。毕竟新手不懂透明皮肤..
我给的解决办法就是使用自制皮肤,弄个比较不遮挡的300,不然就是把间距都重新调一下。

00:21:509(2) 感觉有点太下面 OWO 移到x:328 y:352如何?当然后面的note也要记得调整一下间距唷-w-
00:28:954(1) ^ x:304 y:240
00:39:217(2) 间距有点小问题0w0 估计是没有移好?*
01:13:164(1) 感觉在normal里还是不要用这种比较好-w-有点误导意味?
01:28:954(3) nc*
01:30:533(1) 取消nc*
03:24:217(2) 个人感觉也有点太下面了-w-?建议改个地方*

[Hard]

00:35:270(6) 间距问题 顺便加个nc?*
00:38:428(5) nc*
00:39:217(1) 取消nc*
00:41:586(6) nc*
00:43:164(1) 取消nc*
00:44:743(4) nc*
00:47:507(9) nc*
00:47:901(1) 间距嘛...还是建议改一下 然后顺便取消nc*
01:13:164(6) nc*
01:23:033(3) 间距问题..嘛
01:40:796(4) ^
01:41:586到01:42:770 间距什么的o.o
01:57:375(7) nc*
02:03:691(6) 可n可不n
02:07:638(2) 感觉是可以要用这种间距,但是我还是不建议/.\
02:10:007(1) 间距问题*
02:40:401(6) @神奇的间距君
02:55:795(1) ^
02:57:375(5) nc*
03:09:217(4) 一样的间距问题
03:10:796(2) ^
03:16:322(6) nc*
03:16:717(1) 取消nc*
03:17:901(1) ^
03:25:796(7) nc*
03:36:059(2) 一样的间距问题
03:44:743(1) ^
03:56:919(6) ^

总感觉好像看到了当年自己做的第二张图_(:з」∠)_

[Kira]

00:35:270(6) 建议nc*
01:23:625(4)到01:24:217(7) 感觉这个间距有点突然,可以省去
01:50:664(1)和01:50:862(2) ^

懒得看完了_(:з」∠)_剩下的就交给其他人吧! 学长只能帮你到这里了(正色
感觉mapper间距的使用还不是很熟练,嘛这东西也就自己意会吧;w; 只可意会不可言传?加油!!

我就是喜欢帮助可爱的新人:3 我是好人才不会乱喷呢 8-)

*的地方已修改,谢谢你的精神和帮助
Topic Starter
__Ag

XinCrin wrote:

Go !__Ag you can rank this :)

its so difficult:(,thanks
Rotte
好图~~go :)
Zero__wind
I'm here asking for m4m if you don't mind
[/color]
Remove countdown?

Normal
HDR is what you want in such a slow map like this ? :o

Hard
00:29:349 (2,4) - why there are no clpas on these two notes ?
00:34:875 (2) - weid finish sound, change back to clap
00:39:217 (2) - ^
00:39:612 (3) - and etc. if you changed the hitsound above, you may have to change a series of claps' timing
00:48:296 (2,3) - claps too close
why are there no whistles on short reverses like this01:19:086 (1,2) - and 01:34:480 (1,2) - etc.
02:17:901 (3) - add whistles ?
02:41:980 (1,2,3) - maybe move to (304,168) or so ,just let them be seperate with the latter slider (you may also change the slider a bit)
03:12:770 (5) - move the new combo from next slider to this note in order follw the vocal
03:14:743 (3) - adjust this slider's velocity to 0.75x(don't change anything else), I thought it would be nice
03:50:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - three notes before a sider, I think it's weird, players may easily tap only three times(not four) maybe consider to change the pattern here? maybe like this 3+1 http://puu.sh/1ze17 ?
04:07:638 (2,3) - CTRL+G ? just a suggestion

Kira
Nice diff, for the rhythm is not always the same speed. Faster parts and slower parts combined together makes people feel good
01:14:743 (4,5,6,7,8) - may whistle to them ? if you did, then also lower the volume of the whistles
02:05:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:33:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:46:322 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:085 (1,2) - whistles, as I already suggested in hard diff
01:31:322 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - and etc. ^
01:28:164 (5) - maybe add new combo here, too counfusing :? up to you
01:57:375 (4,5,1,2) - maybe to let these jumping slders completely the same place? maybe make 01:58:164 (1,2) - both a bit downleft or upright? It's not because of confusing, just change to feel good I think
03:56:980 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (if you did not change the placement here, then hope you neccessarily add new combo to 03:57:375 (3) - )

Ok that's all I can find
good luck, really looking forward to the Kira diff ^_^
and this is my map waiting for modding http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58412 hope you like the song
Topic Starter
__Ag

Zero__wind wrote:

I'm here asking for m4m if you don't mind
[/color]
Remove countdown?

Normal
HDR is what you want in such a slow map like this ? :o

Hard
00:29:349 (2,4) - why there are no clpas on these two notes ?
00:34:875 (2) - weid finish sound, change back to clap
00:39:217 (2) - ^
00:39:612 (3) - and etc. if you changed the hitsound above, you may have to change a series of claps' timing*
00:48:296 (2,3) - claps too close
why are there no whistles on short reverses like this01:19:086 (1,2) - and 01:34:480 (1,2) - etc.
02:17:901 (3) - add whistles ?
02:41:980 (1,2,3) - maybe move to (304,168) or so ,just let them be seperate with the latter slider (you may also change the slider a bit)
03:12:770 (5) - move the new combo from next slider to this note in order follw the vocal
03:14:743 (3) - adjust this slider's velocity to 0.75x(don't change anything else), I thought it would be nice
03:50:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - three notes before a sider, I think it's weird, players may easily tap only three times(not four) maybe consider to change the pattern here? maybe like this 3+1 http://puu.sh/1ze17 ?*
04:07:638 (2,3) - CTRL+G ? just a suggestion

Kira
Nice diff, for the rhythm is not always the same speed. Faster parts and slower parts combined together makes people feel good
01:14:743 (4,5,6,7,8) - may whistle to them ? if you did, then also lower the volume of the whistles
02:05:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:33:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:46:322 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:085 (1,2) - whistles, as I already suggested in hard diff
01:31:322 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - and etc. ^
01:28:164 (5) - maybe add new combo here, too counfusing :? up to you
01:57:375 (4,5,1,2) - maybe to let these jumping slders completely the same place? maybe make 01:58:164 (1,2) - both a bit downleft or upright? It's not because of confusing, just change to feel good I think
03:56:980 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (if you did not change the placement here, then hope you neccessarily add new combo to 03:57:375 (3) - )

Ok that's all I can find
good luck, really looking forward to the Kira diff ^_^
and this is my map waiting for modding http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58412 hope you like the song
除了打*我没fix其他都fix了,英文我真的无力了,虽然有些没看懂,大概意思是明白了...吧...谢谢你的mod,你的图我稍后去看看
Mei_coN
Hi~ request from PM

很水的mod不要介意233,觉得有用就改吧=w=

话说Source没有么0 0

Normal:
00:48:691(1)- slider尾add clap
00:49:480(2)- slider头add whistle尾add clap,感觉整首歌都可以1whistle3clap这样加,有些地方只有whistle没有clap可以补上.
01:13:164(1)- 跟前一个note距离太近了,normal还是最好按着DS排
01:17:112(2,3,4)- 这里也是间距问题
01:18:691(3)- 去掉note在 01:18:296- add一个1/2slider
01:35:664- 折返去掉clap
01:54:217(1)- add finish(可以考虑降音量)
03:22:638(1)- ^
03:35:270(1)- ^
03:58:954(1)- ^
04:06:849(1,2,1,2,1,2)- 补上音效...


Hard:
圈圈大小-1(个人意见)
2,4clap音效并不适合这歌,像normal的1whistle3clap更好,没人声的地方1,3whistle
00:25:796(1)- add finish(降低音量)
00:31:717(7)- 去掉finish?
00:36:849(1,2,3,4)- 可以做个音量渐变加大
00:38:428(1)- slider头add finish(降低音量)
01:27:375(1,2,3,4)- 可以做个音量渐变加大
01:32:112(1)- 去掉finish?
01:40:007(3,4,5)- 可以做个音量渐变加大
01:41:191(5)- finish换到下一个slider的头
01:54:217(1)- slider头add finish
01:55:007(3,4,5,6)- 左右对称比较好
02:17:901(3)- 减少1个折返
02:55:796(1,2,3,4)- 可以做个音量渐变加大
03:00:533(1)- 去掉finish?
03:08:428(3,4,5)- 同 01:40:007(3,4,5)-
03:09:612(5)- 同 01:41:191(5)-
03:22:638(1)- 同 01:54:217(1)-
03:24:217(3,4,5,6)- 同 01:55:007(3,4,5,6)-
03:51:059(3)- 去掉note,把后一个slider拉到这时间然后加多一个折返


Kira:
音效方面还是不适合24clap,可以在1whistle3clap基础上再添加新的加法,具体我会給例子你参考下,还有slider最好静音
00:25:007(5,6)- 放到正中,前面的1,2,3,4可以适当调调位置
00:36:849(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- 音量渐变加大,可以做个间距渐变加大的跳
00:38:428(1)- add finish
00:39:217(4)- 去掉finish
00:45:138(1)- 可以考虑跟前面的6重叠
01:09:612(1)- 对齐中线
01:27:375(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)- 音量渐变加大
01:40:007(6,7,8,9,10,1)- ^
01:41:191(1)- finish换到后一个slider头
01:48:296(1,2,3,1,2,3)- 可以做个渐变大的三角跳
01:54:217(1)- add finish(减低音量)
02:07:638(5)- NC
02:12:375- add note
02:13:954(4)- NC
02:45:536(4)- NC
02:48:296(8)- slider换成1个note
02:55:796(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- 音量渐变加大
02:59:743(3)- NC
03:01:914(6)- NC
03:08:428(4,5,6,7,8,9)- 音量渐变加大,9去掉finish
03:22:638(1)- add finish
03:29:349(2)- NC
03:34:875(8)- 去掉finish?
03:54:612(2)- NC
04:03:691(8)- NC
04:04:678- add note?

感觉排列还可以整洁一些,这里就不具体mod了,射个星星 ;)
Topic Starter
__Ag

Mei_coN wrote:

Hi~ request from PM

很水的mod不要介意233,觉得有用就改吧=w=

话说Source没有么0 0 因为不知道出处是哪里,就没填了

Normal:
00:48:691(1)- slider尾add clap
00:49:480(2)- slider头add whistle尾add clap,感觉整首歌都可以1whistle3clap这样加,有些地方只有whistle没有clap可以补上.
01:13:164(1)- 跟前一个note距离太近了,normal还是最好按着DS排*
01:17:112(2,3,4)- 这里也是间距问题
01:18:691(3)- 去掉note在 01:18:296- add一个1/2slider
01:35:664- 折返去掉clap
01:54:217(1)- add finish(可以考虑降音量)
03:22:638(1)- ^
03:35:270(1)- ^
03:58:954(1)- ^
04:06:849(1,2,1,2,1,2)- 补上音效...


Hard:
圈圈大小-1(个人意见)*
2,4clap音效并不适合这歌,像normal的1whistle3clap更好,没人声的地方1,3whistle
00:25:796(1)- add finish(降低音量)
00:31:717(7)- 去掉finish?*
00:36:849(1,2,3,4)- 可以做个音量渐变加大
00:38:428(1)- slider头add finish(降低音量)
01:27:375(1,2,3,4)- 可以做个音量渐变加大
01:32:112(1)- 去掉finish?*
01:40:007(3,4,5)- 可以做个音量渐变加大
01:41:191(5)- finish换到下一个slider的头
01:54:217(1)- slider头add finish
01:55:007(3,4,5,6)- 左右对称比较好*
02:17:901(3)- 减少1个折返
02:55:796(1,2,3,4)- 可以做个音量渐变加大
03:00:533(1)- 去掉finish?*
03:08:428(3,4,5)- 同 01:40:007(3,4,5)-
03:09:612(5)- 同 01:41:191(5)-
03:22:638(1)- 同 01:54:217(1)-
03:24:217(3,4,5,6)- 同 01:55:007(3,4,5,6)-*
03:51:059(3)- 去掉note,把后一个slider拉到这时间然后加多一个折返


Kira:
音效方面还是不适合24clap,可以在1whistle3clap基础上再添加新的加法,具体我会給例子你参考下,还有slider最好静音
00:25:007(5,6)- 放到正中,前面的1,2,3,4可以适当调调位置
00:36:849(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- 音量渐变加大,可以做个间距渐变加大的跳*
00:38:428(1)- add finish
00:39:217(4)- 去掉finish
00:45:138(1)- 可以考虑跟前面的6重叠
01:09:612(1)- 对齐中线
01:27:375(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)- 音量渐变加大*
01:40:007(6,7,8,9,10,1)- ^*
01:41:191(1)- finish换到后一个slider头
01:48:296(1,2,3,1,2,3)- 可以做个渐变大的三角跳
01:54:217(1)- add finish(减低音量)
02:07:638(5)- NC
02:12:375- add note
02:13:954(4)- NC
02:45:536(4)- NC
02:48:296(8)- slider换成1个note*
02:55:796(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- 音量渐变加大*
02:59:743(3)- NC
03:01:914(6)- NC
03:08:428(4,5,6,7,8,9)- 音量渐变加大*,9去掉finish
03:22:638(1)- add finish
03:29:349(2)- NC
03:34:875(8)- 去掉finish?
03:54:612(2)- NC
04:03:691(8)- NC
04:04:678- add note?*

感觉排列还可以整洁一些,这里就不具体mod了,射个星星 ;)

*的地方我保留了,其他都fixed了,感谢你的mod2333
Midasmens
小米來看圖~
Request in-game

拖了好久真對不起~ >.<

General
強烈建議加一個無聲的soft-sliderslide音效~感覺整首曲子應該是比較安靜的~
其它還好~

Purist's normal
00:25:796 (1) - 考慮加一個30%的finish~很明顯的哦~
00:35:270 (1) - 不明白爲什麽要降低音量
00:39:217 (2) - 去NC吧~ 這裡沒有NC強調的必要哦~
00:51:059 (3) - 40% imo.
01:03:789 - (吐槽)這裡怎麼有個”哔“ 囧
01:12:375 (4,1) - 這裡spacing不怎麼好要不重疊起來~要不分開一點~新手遇到這裡可能會早按的
01:31:322 (3) - 再折返一次~長白縣上有個音的說
01:38:428 (1) - 再一次意義不明的降低了音效
01:41:586 (1) - 首先這裡跳躍好大~對於normal有點難呢~~其次就是遮擋問題了~新手會因為spinner最後出現的”押忍“擋住了slider的頭部而苦惱~這個在hard和insane里面可以無視~但是在最低難度就要注意了哦!02:19:480 - 02:51:454 這段的NC很混亂~沒有理由為折返單獨NC吧 總之最好改一下~ 下面是小米的NC列表~ 經供參考啦 >.<
SPOILER
02:22:243 (1) - 去NC
02:22:638 (2) - NC
02:28:559 (1) - 去NC
02:28:954 (2) - NC
02:34:875 (1) - 去NC
02:35:270 (2) - NC
02:41:191 (1) - 去NC
02:41:586 (2) - NC
02:47:507 (1) - 去NC
02:50:664 (1) - 去NC
02:57:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 你看你這裡就沒有把折返NC嘛~就應該如此的說
03:22:638 (1) - 尾巴被前面的slider尾部遮擋了~~前面的slider如果打出”激“這個slider會對新人有視覺障礙的吶~
04:11:586 (1) - 這個spinner最好開頭也靜音哦~
Normal就這些吧~~排列還不錯 音效似乎有待加強呢~總之不錯啦 :P
~~~~~~


Hard
00:25:796 (1,2,3,4) - 是想做對稱麽~~ 如果是的話這裡往右邊歪了
00:29:349 (2) - 歪了~ 調到x:331,y:131
00:36:750 - 如果是小米的話~~這裡會用30%音量後面依次增加10%
00:48:296 (2) - 怎麽clap不見了~ 加在開頭?
00:49:086 (4) - ^
01:14:743 (3) - 這裡spacing不可取~~打破了一定跳躍的規律呢
01:27:276 - 和前面同理哦~
01:38:428 (1,2,3) - 這裡spacing又感覺不對了呢~~分開放置來點跳躍
01:49:480 (3) - 去掉NC
01:54:217 (1) - 結尾的finish太吵了
02:51:454 - 加個音
03:06:849 (1,2,3) - 和之前同理
03:52:441 - 加個音
03:59:349 (5) - 移到 03:59:546 如何?然後再同6曡在一起?
04:08:033 (3,4) - 都最後了~這個跳有點突然~也沒有跳的價值呢
04:12:178 (1) - spinner完全消音
典型的新手圖哦~~按照spacing然後很機械的排列起來~~
(吐槽)clap音效沒錯~~不過機械的放置很破壞曲子的整體氛圍呢~ 要加強音效
~~~~~~


Kira
00:14:743 (4,5,6,7) - 梗不錯~不過略感覺不適合往返呢 ~囧~
00:16:322 (3,4,5,6) - 太緊了~~這是Insane吧~應該要自由發揮了
00:23:822 (4) - flow感突然不見了~
00:36:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不如來兩個星星~~還能做到營造夜空星星的氛圍感~ 做到”點題“的目的
00:40:796 (1,2,3,4) - 跳躍的不夠~
01:23:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 漸近變換比較好~~現在感覺好奇怪哦
01:29:743 (3) - 如果是我的話~會用一個變數slider填掉後面的空擋~~現在這裡突然頓住了
01:39:612 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 有星星的意圖~~好樣的~排的再好看一點吧
02:08:428 (1) - 去NC
02:08:822 (2) - NC
02:14:743 (1) - 去NC
02:15:138 (2) - NC
02:38:033 (9) - 這裡明顯要跳~
02:40:007 (1) - 這裡應該不要跳吧~ 囧
02:45:336 - 爲什麽停頓?
03:35:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 對稱了
04:12:178 (1) - 靜音
總體來説是施展不開來~體現不了insane的感覺~~原因是作圖經驗不夠~分寸的把握還不熟練
應該能做些跳躍的地方卻擠在一起~~會不好的說~
~~~~~~


優點是能玩~~缺點是不好玩啦~ (亮點有點少呢)
不過這是個好的開頭哦~~第一次做圖要鼓勵啦~從每張圖里面體會學習一些東西~~慢慢的就會好的
加油!


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ShiroiYume
Hi! Thnxs for asking me for modding, but I think that your map is perfect. (just take out the "3,2,1,go" thing)
Topic Starter
__Ag

Midasmens wrote:

小米來看圖~
Request in-game

拖了好久真對不起~ >.<

General
強烈建議加一個無聲的soft-sliderslide音效~感覺整首曲子應該是比較安靜的~
其它還好~哭了,这个就无视了好不好QAQ

Purist's normal
00:25:796 (1) - 考慮加一個30%的finish~很明顯的哦~*
00:35:270 (1) - 不明白爲什麽要降低音量不太明白
00:39:217 (2) - 去NC吧~ 這裡沒有NC強調的必要哦~*
00:51:059 (3) - 40% imo.
01:03:789 - (吐槽)這裡怎麼有個”哔“ 囧就当是槽点吧Orzzz
01:12:375 (4,1) - 這裡spacing不怎麼好要不重疊起來~要不分開一點~新手遇到這裡可能會早按的
01:31:322 (3) - 再折返一次~長白縣上有個音的說*
01:38:428 (1) - 再一次意義不明的降低了音效
01:41:586 (1) - 首先這裡跳躍好大~對於normal有點難呢~~其次就是遮擋問題了~新手會因為spinner最後出現的”押忍“擋住了slider的頭部而苦惱~這個在hard和insane里面可以無視~但是在最低難度就要注意了哦!02:19:480 - 02:51:454 這段的NC很混亂~沒有理由為折返單獨NC吧 總之最好改一下~ 下面是小米的NC列表~ 經供參考啦 >.<
SPOILER
02:22:243 (1) - 去NC
02:22:638 (2) - NC
02:28:559 (1) - 去NC
02:28:954 (2) - NC
02:34:875 (1) - 去NC
02:35:270 (2) - NC
02:41:191 (1) - 去NC
02:41:586 (2) - NC
02:47:507 (1) - 去NC
02:50:664 (1) - 去NC
02:57:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 你看你這裡就沒有把折返NC嘛~就應該如此的說
03:22:638 (1) - 尾巴被前面的slider尾部遮擋了~~前面的slider如果打出”激“這個slider會對新人有視覺障礙的吶~
04:11:586 (1) - 這個spinner最好開頭也靜音哦~
Normal就這些吧~~排列還不錯 音效似乎有待加強呢~總之不錯啦 :P
~~~~~~
GD的用意我还是先保持沉默好了

Hard
00:25:796 (1,2,3,4) - 是想做對稱麽~~ 如果是的話這裡往右邊歪了*
00:29:349 (2) - 歪了~ 調到x:331,y:131*
00:36:750 - 如果是小米的話~~這裡會用30%音量後面依次增加10%
00:48:296 (2) - 怎麽clap不見了~ 加在開頭?*
00:49:086 (4) - ^*
01:14:743 (3) - 這裡spacing不可取~~打破了一定跳躍的規律呢*
01:27:276 - 和前面同理哦~*
01:38:428 (1,2,3) - 這裡spacing又感覺不對了呢~~分開放置來點跳躍*
01:49:480 (3) - 去掉NC*
01:54:217 (1) - 結尾的finish太吵了*
02:51:454 - 加個音*
03:06:849 (1,2,3) - 和之前同理
03:52:441 - 加個音*
03:59:349 (5) - 移到 03:59:546 如何?然後再同6曡在一起?*
04:08:033 (3,4) - 都最後了~這個跳有點突然~也沒有跳的價值呢
04:12:178 (1) - spinner完全消音*
典型的新手圖哦~~按照spacing然後很機械的排列起來~~
(吐槽)clap音效沒錯~~不過機械的放置很破壞曲子的整體氛圍呢~ 要加強音效
~~~~~~


Kira
00:14:743 (4,5,6,7) - 梗不錯~不過略感覺不適合往返呢 ~囧~
00:16:322 (3,4,5,6) - 太緊了~~這是Insane吧~應該要自由發揮了我实在不敢发挥了,之前被喷成翔了
00:23:822 (4) - flow感突然不見了~
00:36:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不如來兩個星星~~還能做到營造夜空星星的氛圍感~ 做到”點題“的目的*
00:40:796 (1,2,3,4) - 跳躍的不夠~
01:23:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 漸近變換比較好~~現在感覺好奇怪哦
01:29:743 (3) - 如果是我的話~會用一個變數slider填掉後面的空擋~~現在這裡突然頓住了*
01:39:612 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 有星星的意圖~~好樣的~排的再好看一點吧
02:08:428 (1) - 去NC*
02:08:822 (2) - NC*
02:14:743 (1) - 去NC*
02:15:138 (2) - NC*
02:38:033 (9) - 這裡明顯要跳~*
02:40:007 (1) - 這裡應該不要跳吧~ 囧
02:45:336 - 爲什麽停頓?别人mod了说的
03:35:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 對稱了*
04:12:178 (1) - 靜音*
總體來説是施展不開來~體現不了insane的感覺~~原因是作圖經驗不夠~分寸的把握還不熟練
應該能做些跳躍的地方卻擠在一起~~會不好的說~
~~~~~~[/color]


優點是能玩~~缺點是不好玩啦~ (亮點有點少呢)
不過這是個好的開頭哦~~第一次做圖要鼓勵啦~從每張圖里面體會學習一些東西~~慢慢的就會好的
加油!


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Zweib
irc mod
16:02 Zweib: yo
16:02 Zweib: 要搞rank了
16:02 __Ag: 嘛....
16:02 __Ag: 总觉得不甘心
16:02 Zweib: 加油吧
16:02 __Ag: re一下
16:30 __Ag: 求mod
16:36 Zweib: 01:21:059 (4) - 这个是不是出界了
16:36 __Ag: 等一下
16:36 __Ag: 我要回公司了
16:36 __Ag: 晚上
16:36 Zweib: 。。
16:42 __Ag: 好的,我又回来了
16:42 __Ag: 又不用去了
16:42 Zweib: 01:21:059 (4) - 这个是不是出界了
16:43 __Ag: 占到边上算出接?
16:44 Zweib: .不知道怎么定义的
16:44 Zweib: 感觉有超过一半捅出去了吧..
16:44 Zweib: 01:39:612 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这个跟之前难度设定不同啊
16:44 Zweib: 还是均匀DS比较好...不摆整个圆,摆大半个圆...环屏,感觉效果不错w
16:45 __Ag: 等一下
16:46 __Ag: 这里我不改
16:46 __Ag: 就这样
16:49 Zweib: 02:43:164 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个是不是没摆好
16:49 __Ag: 不直?
16:50 Zweib: 嗯.故意的?
16:50 __Ag: 没
16:50 __Ag: 歪了
16:51 Zweib: 03:54:217 (1) - 这个不要NC
16:51 Zweib: 不对..
16:51 __Ag: ..
16:52 Zweib: 算了NC我也不动
16:52 Zweib: 不懂
16:52 __Ag: 2333
16:53 Zweib: 00:21:454 (5,6) - 这个clap音不是应该在5上面吗
16:53 __Ag: 嘛...刚才调整了这里没注意到
16:53 Zweib: 00:37:243 (3) - 少个clap
16:54 Zweib: 01:23:822 (5,6) - 5的clap
16:55 __Ag: 嗯
16:55 Zweib: 01:28:954 (1) - 少clap
16:56 Zweib: 01:41:191 (1) - 少音效了
16:56 Zweib: 01:58:164 (1,2) - 2的clap
16:57 Zweib: 02:34:875 (5,6) - 5
16:58 Zweib: 03:09:612 (9) -
17:00 Zweib: 04:12:178 (1) - 这里加个note然把spinner拖后一格吧。。
17:01 __Ag: 嗯
17:03 Zweib: 00:37:441 (4) - 上移一点到(320,280)
17:06 __Ag: 可以rank了么?
17:06 Zweib: ;w;问妹儿特
17:06 Zweib: 我又没rank过图
17:06 __Ag: ...
17:07 __Ag: 还没mod完啊
17:08 Zweib: 01:08:822 (7) - (232,204)
17:08 Zweib: 我也只是挑挑小毛病。。。
17:08 __Ag: 嘛
17:10 Zweib: 总体还好,
17:10 __Ag: 哎...
17:10 Zweib: 打起来有时候会觉得右下角有点空的感觉
17:10 __Ag: 还有hard,normal
17:10 Zweib: 可能是我的错觉
17:11 Zweib: 你这么会搞基,rank应该没问题
17:11 __Ag: 真像你这么说的话我早就rank了
17:11 __Ag: 玛德
17:12 Zweib: 那是,
17:12 Zweib: 主要现在
17:12 Zweib: 如过这图放到10年,11年
17:12 Zweib: 如果*
17:13 Zweib: 真是早就rank了
17:13 __Ag: 别说这些
17:13 Zweib: hard
17:13 Zweib: 00:28:954 (1,2,3,4) - 歪
17:13 __Ag: 没啊
17:13 __Ag: 都是1.03
17:14 Zweib: 哦我还没更新。、
17:16 Zweib: 玛德琪琪还会做这么善良的图
17:16 __Ag: 玛德
17:16 __Ag: 因为这图迟迟没有rank所以我后期才.....
17:16 __Ag: 这图之前我真心弱弱萌萌
17:18 Zweib: 节奏都可以
17:18 Zweib: 排列我就不挑什么了
17:18 __Ag: 快去po
17:18 __Ag: post
17:19 __Ag: 我给你两个苦豆酥
17:19 Zweib: 00:39:217 (2) - 去掉clap
17:20 Zweib: 01:23:033 (3) - clap
17:20 Zweib: 这些小毛病都改了试着去找些熟一点的bat问问看rank还需要什么
17:20 __Ag: bat
17:20 __Ag: 是什么?
17:20 Zweib: 01:25:401 (5) - clap
17:21 Zweib: 你妹。。。
17:21 __Ag: 我连bat是什么都不知道你让我找熟一点的?
17:21 Zweib: 去找权限问问看
17:22 Zweib: 01:40:007 (3) - 这里要不要音效?
17:22 __Ag: added
17:23 Zweib: 02:51:454 (3) -
17:23 Zweib: 02:53:033 (5) -
17:23 Zweib: 02:54:217 (1) - 这里是不是忘了
17:24 Zweib: 02:59:743 (1,2) - 24白线下clap也给我坚持到底呀混蛋;w;
17:24 Zweib: 03:08:428 (3) -
17:24 __Ag: 不是那样的啊
17:25 __Ag: 应该是以前人们mod有些让remove的
17:25 Zweib: 唔。。那就不好办了
17:25 __Ag: 没关系没关系
17:26 Zweib: 总之尽量统一
17:26 Zweib: 不加的话如果有相对应的乐句,也不要加
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
aimod提示normal/hard没关ocuntdown

[insane]
01:39:612 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 不好 不够良心
02:55:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:51:059 (3) - 建议 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735448

[hard]
00:47:704 (2,1) - 不科学 建议去掉2
02:35:270 (6) - newcombo
02:51:454 (3,1,2) - 不科学
03:44:546 (7) - x440 y264
03:51:059 (3) - 不好
03:52:638 (7,8) - 两个都ctrl+g下就好了

[normal]
01:20:270 (1) - 间距不对

..这么业界良心我都不知道怎么mod了orz
Zero__wind
鬼挖坟?
一定是我打开的方式不对
Jemmmmy
hard
01:05:270 (3,4,5,6) - 调整成水平,有点歪
03:51:059 (3) - 折返滑条尾换成note?

insane
01:50:664 (1,2,3) - 间距相等
04:11:586 (6) - 不美观。。。
Strawberry
不RANK真的对不起GD和SP了
Zero__wind
吓尿了
sahuang

Zero__wind wrote:

吓尿了
可以的
Hanazawa Kana
吓尿了
Narcissu
重音應該推遲一節。如果你想要把紅線插在很前面的地方也就是00:00:531 - 。建議插在00:13:164 - 因為這樣NC Mod後的鼓點會正常的多。改完之後你就會發現重音全部都位於長白線了,按流行的New Combo 習慣是按段落分組,也許你可能要改動不少

BPM應該是76
Topic Starter
__Ag

Narcissu wrote:

重音應該推遲一節。如果你想要把紅線插在很前面的地方也就是00:00:531 - 。建議插在00:13:164 - 因為這樣NC Mod後的鼓點會正常的多。改完之後你就會發現重音全部都位於長白線了,按流行的New Combo 習慣是按段落分組,也許你可能要改動不少

BPM應該是76
可以,改好了
moonlightleaf
不是很懂你们76BPM, 我做要152BPM啊
sahuang
Preview 01:41:386 - ?

Easy
http://puu.sh/phm1O/d4497bff85.osu
Binguo
你吓到我了 赔钱

NM

[给皇]
00:16:320 (3) - 00:17:110 - 这两处塞圈 用滑条突出这段音乐00:17:899 - 如果改了后面也改吧....
03:10:005 (1) - 去掉红点

[水仙]
00:17:899 (2) - 感觉尾部这个音效有点多余
01:19:084 (3) - 这个音效好响不降降音量吗
01:38:032 (3,2) - 间距修一下
02:25:794 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这样的节奏太多了吧 不变一下吗 柑橘有点小无聊
04:11:584 (5) - 别叠起来

[二妹妹]
00:44:741 (1,1) - 去掉音效
01:18:294 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:30:334 (4,1) - 叠起来
01:38:820 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:39:215 (3) - 同上
01:40:202 (2,3) - 没必要下音效.
02:55:597 (4,1) - 你懂的

水的一笔
我好困啊 射个星得了
Pata-Mon
M4M:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/461008

[Easy]
  1. 全程1/1塞满有什么好说的……嘛虽然很安全,不过还是希望以后ez这类歌适当用用一拍半折返和两拍滑条什么的,要不然太无聊了……
[Normal]
  1. 04:10:794 (3,4,5) - 感觉还是会出事,别这么放了吧
  2. 还是没啥说……
[Hard]
  1. 00:37:044 (2,3) - 考虑到两个鼓点,这里节奏要不要反过来
  2. 00:44:347 (1,1) - 这里音效怎么回事,感觉其他类似的地方没有啊
  3. 03:07:241 (1,2,3) - 2和3最好再远点,视觉ds感觉会很近
  4. 03:17:899 (5) - nc?
  5. 03:44:741 (1,2) - 感觉放高点好看
GL~
Saki
m4m
草泥马4 years ago

[ermei]
00:29:544 (2,3) - blanket请认准缩圈法后面不提了
所以hard有什么好提的嘛,完全看不出有什么问题

[Narcissu]
fine

[sahuang]
fine

[kira]
没做完摸你妈,草烦死了你们这种没做完就四处要摸的
一拳打爆琪老板

8888888 no kd plz
moonlightleaf

Binguo wrote:

你吓到我了 赔钱

NM


[二妹妹]
00:44:741 (1,1) - 去掉音效 --好
01:18:294 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:30:334 (4,1) - 叠起来
01:38:820 (2) - Ctrl+G
01:39:215 (3) - 同上
01:40:202 (2,3) - 没必要下音效. ---有的 :)
02:55:597 (4,1) - 你懂的

水的一笔
我好困啊 射个星得了

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/461008

[Hard]
  1. 00:37:044 (2,3) - 考虑到两个鼓点,这里节奏要不要反过来
  2. 00:44:347 (1,1) - 这里音效怎么回事,感觉其他类似的地方没有啊 --上面改了
  3. 03:07:241 (1,2,3) - 2和3最好再远点,视觉ds感觉会很近 ---不近了, 也是1.2 x ds
  4. 03:17:899 (5) - nc? --好
  5. 03:44:741 (1,2) - 感觉放高点好看 ---倒是能小跳,不过不会太高,懒得改了
GL~

Vert wrote:

m4m
草泥马4 years ago

[ermei]
00:29:544 (2,3) - blanket请认准缩圈法后面不提了 ---额 这个比较明显,改了, 其他差不多233

所以hard有什么好提的嘛,完全看不出有什么问题

[kira]
没做完摸你妈,草烦死了你们这种没做完就四处要摸的
一拳打爆琪老板 ----垃圾Ag=aji

8888888 no kd plz
no reply = keep

thank you all :)

我不能连puush ,qq传你吧 顺带把 sb糊完了= = :)
Mei
雷猴啊

[narcissu]

  • 声音可以小一点

[Kira]

  • 没做完摸你妈,草烦死了你们这种有女朋友的线虫
    一拳打爆琪老板



[2Mei]
  1. 00:16:913 (2) - 我觉得whistle可以加在滑条头上
  2. 00:21:057 (1) - 这个滑条中间有音
  3. 00:50:268 (3,1,1) - 这3个用一个nc就行
  4. 怎么break里面也有绿线,很迷
  5. sb倒是做完啊!强迫症要犯了
  6. 02:00:926 (1) - 可以不要nc

讲道理,这有啥好摸的啊,简单到爆炸的图
倒是这个bg画风好老,能不能来个新的啊
Eir_DELETED
Hi~ req from chat in game.

[Genaral]
  1. Nothing
[sahuang's Easy]
  1. Good :)
[Narcissu's Normal]
  1. 00:14:741 (3,4) - Sliders is a little nonparallel. 03:41:583 (1,4) - ^
[ErMei's Hard]
  1. 00:44:347 (1,1,1) - Can you do same distance? I feel like not same distance.
  2. 01:29:347 (2) - Move to x:403 y:287 ,and 01:29:741 (3,4) move to x:457 y:130.
  3. 03:09:215 (3,4) - Put these sliders vertically each other, so look like more beautiful.
    If you fix the above, 03:10:005 (1,2,3) Move to same distance.
[Kira]
  1. 00:27:077 (7) - 周りの音とりと合わせる形でいいと思います、なのでこれ外しませんか
  2. 01:40:794 (8) - 01:40:597 (7)の向きの直線状に置きませんか 03:09:215 (8) - ^
  3. 02:43:162 (1) - ストリームの始まりだけずれているのがとても汚く見えるので、直線ストリームにすることをすすめます。
[SB]
I'm not SB player, but I found spelling mistakes of Japanese lyrics
   False    →   True
どこまでも远く → どこまでも遠く
离れたとしても → 離れたとしても
たったひとつの言叶 → たったひとつの言葉
あなたの梦を叶えられますか? → あなたの夢を叶えられますか?
あなたの后ろを歩くことができるでしょう? → あなたの後ろを歩くことができるでしょう?
安らぎを赠りたい → 安らぎを贈りたい
见知らぬ空の下 → 見知らぬ空の下
あなたの笑顔を见られますか? → あなたの笑顔を見られますか?
わたしを见つめて → わたしを見つめて
わたしだけ见つめて → わたしだけ見つめて
最后のひとことーー → 最後のひとことーー
たったひとつの笑颜 → たったひとつの笑顔
あの顷のわたし → あの頃のわたし

references: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M6fOD3nXRMc

The map look good! GL!
moonlightleaf
sorry , i can't find which font of the lyrics i used ,
since it is a little long after i done that ,
i miss all most of my font ,
if i remember that , i will change it , if no , no diea , only delete (no font , how fix , orz

diff mod will done soon , just wait

Mei wrote:

雷猴啊

[2Mei]
  1. 00:16:913 (2) - 我觉得whistle可以加在滑条头上
  2. 00:21:057 (1) - 这个滑条中间有音 ---没事,这种滑条全图很多
  3. 00:50:268 (3,1,1) - 这3个用一个nc就行
  4. 怎么break里面也有绿线,很迷
  5. sb倒是做完啊!强迫症要犯了
  6. 02:00:926 (1) - 可以不要nc

讲道理,这有啥好摸的啊,简单到爆炸的图
倒是这个bg画风好老,能不能来个新的啊

joker- wrote:

Hi~ req from chat in game.

[ErMei's Hard]
  1. 00:44:347 (1,1,1) - Can you do same distance? I feel like not same distance.
  2. 01:29:347 (2) - Move to x:403 y:287 ,and 01:29:741 (3,4) move to x:457 y:130.
  3. 03:09:215 (3,4) - Put these sliders vertically each other, so look like more beautiful.
    If you fix the above, 03:10:005 (1,2,3) Move to same distance.
[SB]
I'm not SB player, but I found spelling mistakes of Japanese lyrics
   False    →   True
どこまでも远く → どこまでも遠く
离れたとしても → 離れたとしても
たったひとつの言叶 → たったひとつの言葉
あなたの梦を叶えられますか? → あなたの夢を叶えられますか?
あなたの后ろを歩くことができるでしょう? → あなたの後ろを歩くことができるでしょう?
安らぎを赠りたい → 安らぎを贈りたい
见知らぬ空の下 → 見知らぬ空の下
あなたの笑顔を见られますか? → あなたの笑顔を見られますか?
わたしを见つめて → わたしを見つめて
わたしだけ见つめて → わたしだけ見つめて
最后のひとことーー → 最後のひとことーー
たったひとつの笑颜 → たったひとつの笑顔
あの顷のわたし → あの頃のわたし
// lyrics working
references: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M6fOD3nXRMc

The map look good! GL!

Misure wrote:

宇宙无敌琪老板
这图不太会摸... 因为挺多梗看上去都是有想法的, 那就大概点几个test不太舒服的吧 也就是个人认为有一点过了的地方 比较主观

[ErMei's Hard]
  1. 00:20:070 (4,1) - 贴到滑条尾有点不美观 逆时针15°试试? ---不要紧
  2. 00:50:070 (2,3) - 296|180的位置感觉好一些
  3. 01:58:557 (4,1) - 有点远 而且这个滑条的形状flow是向下 所以这里就成了锐角跳的感觉 有点急 要不这样的?随意参考...
  4. 02:53:426 (3) - 这样感觉好一些
  5. 02:58:162 (3,4,1) - 调整一下让两个滑条间距也是那么多?
  6. 03:06:057 (3) - NC?
  7. 顺便SB如果有的话 写“二妹”真的好么,通常应该亮ID的吧 ---当日文看吧,233 先放, 前面歌词还有要整
yeye
Good luck啊 :)
no reply = fix , thank you all :)
Misure
宇宙无敌琪老板
这图不太会摸... 因为挺多梗看上去都是有想法的, 那就大概点几个test不太舒服的吧 也就是个人认为有一点过了的地方 比较主观
[Kira]
  1. 00:15:334 (4,5,6,1) - 45接起来可能还行虽然有点卡flow 但是561这个角度太锐又很远 移动感觉不是很好 建议这里1 ctrl+G
  2. 00:18:294 (3,4,5) - 34有点远 移动感顿一下这里感觉不是很好 flow大概还好
  3. 00:23:031 (2,3,4) - 拐的角度有点急
  4. 00:26:584 (5,6,7) - 这个三连其实我不太理解它的意义...7应该是后面那个1/8吧
  5. 00:31:320 (5,6,1) - 这个flow感觉不是很好 虽然空了一拍但是这里间距体感上还是比较大又是钝角就有点明显了 个人偏向1在靠右下的位置
  6. 00:34:478 (5,6,7,1) - 接前面角度感觉有点急
  7. 00:43:162 (1) - 108|100 感觉好一点点
  8. 00:47:702 (5) - 172|228 感觉好一点点
  9. 00:58:952 (1) - 往上点?
  10. 01:04:873 (6,7) - 有一点点远了
  11. 01:08:031 (5,1) - 感觉不适合stack 原因说不好 大概节奏衔接不是很紧密
  12. 01:19:084 (1,1) - 这组和后面几组比 有点近了吧 前一个滑条反向之后距后面只有1.68x 后面有一组同理
  13. 01:20:662 (1) - ctrl+G? 离太近打的时候基本感觉不到滑条的感觉 缺点移动感..
  14. 01:27:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个间距相对于整张图来说也是有点过了...尤其对比02:55:794 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 太明显了 顺便NC也不一样
  15. 01:36:847 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里比划了好几次感觉还是提出来吧 有点不舒服 具体就是滑条切flow
    有点急了
  16. 01:40:794 (8,9) - 改成1/2或者 note离远一些...移动感觉有点尴尬现在
  17. 02:12:768 (6,1) - 有点远
  18. 02:17:109 (4,5,6) - 保持一样的间距?短条有点突然
  19. 02:40:400 (3,4,5) - 角度有点急 前面那个钝角接过去感觉就不错
  20. 02:53:820 (5,1) - 容易断kick
  21. 03:22:241 (5,1) - 感觉有点不适合stack
[ErMei's Hard]
  1. 00:20:070 (4,1) - 贴到滑条尾有点不美观 逆时针15°试试?
  2. 00:50:070 (2,3) - 296|180的位置感觉好一些
  3. 01:58:557 (4,1) - 有点远 而且这个滑条的形状flow是向下 所以这里就成了锐角跳的感觉 有点急 要不这样的?随意参考...
  4. 02:53:426 (3) - 这样感觉好一些
  5. 02:58:162 (3,4,1) - 调整一下让两个滑条间距也是那么多?
  6. 03:06:057 (3) - NC?
  7. 顺便SB如果有的话 写“二妹”真的好么,通常应该亮ID的吧
[Narcissu's Normal]
  1. 00:28:952 (1) - ctrl+G?
[sahuang's Easy]
  1. 为什么不用cs3...
yeye
Good luck啊 :)
Narcissu
除了排版都改了……

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Title:Kira Kira Serenade
TitleUnicode:きらきらセレナーデ
Artist:Melone (Ryoko Shintani)
ArtistUnicode:メローネ(新谷良子)
Creator:__Ag
Version:ErMei's Hard
Source:クロスワールド -見知らぬ空のエターティア-
Tags:moonlightleaf sahuang narcissu Cross World -Mishiranu Sora no Etatia-, visual novel, BROCCOLI, ブロッコリー, etc.
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S,0,114217,114317,0.75,1
R,0,114217,114317,0,0.5
R,0,114317,115217,0.5,1.8
F,0,114417,115317,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",471,134
F,0,115007,115107,0,0.75
S,0,115007,115107,0.75,1
R,0,115007,115107,0,0.5
R,0,115107,116007,0.5,1.8
F,0,115207,116107,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",283,318
F,0,115796,115896,0,0.75
S,0,115796,115896,0.75,1
R,0,115796,115896,0,0.5
R,0,115896,116796,0.5,1.8
F,0,115996,116896,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",208,353
F,0,116586,116686,0,0.75
S,0,116586,116686,0.75,1
R,0,116586,116686,0,0.5
R,0,116686,117586,0.5,1.8
F,0,116786,117686,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",353,343
F,0,117375,117475,0,0.75
S,0,117375,117475,0.75,1
R,0,117375,117475,0,0.5
R,0,117475,118375,0.5,1.8
F,0,117575,118475,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",470,260
F,0,118164,118264,0,0.75
S,0,118164,118264,0.75,1
R,0,118164,118264,0,0.5
R,0,118264,119164,0.5,1.8
F,0,118364,119264,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",483,188
F,0,118954,119054,0,0.75
S,0,118954,119054,0.75,1
R,0,118954,119054,0,0.5
R,0,119054,119954,0.5,1.8
F,0,119154,120054,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",207,142
F,0,119743,119843,0,0.75
S,0,119743,119843,0.75,1
R,0,119743,119843,0,0.5
R,0,119843,120743,0.5,1.8
F,0,119943,120843,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",215,302
F,0,120138,120238,0,0.75
S,0,120138,120238,0.75,1
R,0,120138,120238,0,0.5
R,0,120238,121138,0.5,1.8
F,0,120338,121238,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",215,318
F,0,120533,120633,0,0.75
S,0,120533,120633,0.75,1
R,0,120533,120633,0,0.5
R,0,120633,121533,0.5,1.8
F,0,120733,121633,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",363,401
F,0,121322,121422,0,0.75
S,0,121322,121422,0.75,1
R,0,121322,121422,0,0.5
R,0,121422,122322,0.5,1.8
F,0,121522,122422,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",455,170
F,0,122112,122212,0,0.75
S,0,122112,122212,0.75,1
R,0,122112,122212,0,0.5
R,0,122212,123112,0.5,1.8
F,0,122312,123212,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",294,310
F,0,122901,123001,0,0.75
S,0,122901,123001,0.75,1
R,0,122901,123001,0,0.5
R,0,123001,123901,0.5,1.8
F,0,123101,124001,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",143,154
F,0,123691,123791,0,0.75
S,0,123691,123791,0.75,1
R,0,123691,123791,0,0.5
R,0,123791,124691,0.5,1.8
F,0,123891,124791,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",183,298
F,0,124480,124580,0,0.75
S,0,124480,124580,0.75,1
R,0,124480,124580,0,0.5
R,0,124580,125480,0.5,1.8
F,0,124680,125580,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",315,326
F,0,125270,125370,0,0.75
S,0,125270,125370,0.75,1
R,0,125270,125370,0,0.5
R,0,125370,126270,0.5,1.8
F,0,125470,126370,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",523,262
F,0,125862,125962,0,0.75
S,0,125862,125962,0.75,1
R,0,125862,125962,0,0.5
R,0,125962,126862,0.5,1.8
F,0,126062,126962,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",547,350
F,0,126059,126159,0,0.75
S,0,126059,126159,0.75,1
R,0,126059,126159,0,0.5
R,0,126159,127059,0.5,1.8
F,0,126259,127159,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",415,226
F,0,126454,126554,0,0.75
S,0,126454,126554,0.75,1
R,0,126454,126554,0,0.5
R,0,126554,127454,0.5,1.8
F,0,126654,127554,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",347,394
F,0,126849,126949,0,0.75
S,0,126849,126949,0.75,1
R,0,126849,126949,0,0.5
R,0,126949,127849,0.5,1.8
F,0,127049,127949,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",247,178
F,0,190007,190107,0,0.75
S,0,190007,190107,0.75,1
R,0,190007,190107,0,0.5
R,0,190107,191007,0.5,1.8
F,0,190207,191107,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",211,370
F,0,190796,190896,0,0.75
S,0,190796,190896,0.75,1
R,0,190796,190896,0,0.5
R,0,190896,191796,0.5,1.8
F,0,190996,191896,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",311,415
F,0,191586,191686,0,0.75
S,0,191586,191686,0.75,1
R,0,191586,191686,0,0.5
R,0,191686,192586,0.5,1.8
F,0,191786,192686,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",539,394
F,0,192375,192475,0,0.75
S,0,192375,192475,0.75,1
R,0,192375,192475,0,0.5
R,0,192475,193375,0.5,1.8
F,0,192575,193475,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",575,234
F,0,193164,193264,0,0.75
S,0,193164,193264,0.75,1
R,0,193164,193264,0,0.5
R,0,193264,194164,0.5,1.8
F,0,193364,194264,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",279,230
F,0,193954,194054,0,0.75
S,0,193954,194054,0.75,1
R,0,193954,194054,0,0.5
R,0,194054,194954,0.5,1.8
F,0,194154,195054,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",282,133
F,0,194743,194843,0,0.75
S,0,194743,194843,0.75,1
R,0,194743,194843,0,0.5
R,0,194843,195743,0.5,1.8
F,0,194943,195843,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",271,358
F,0,195533,195633,0,0.75
S,0,195533,195633,0.75,1
R,0,195533,195633,0,0.5
R,0,195633,196533,0.5,1.8
F,0,195733,196633,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",383,298
F,0,195928,196028,0,0.75
S,0,195928,196028,0.75,1
R,0,195928,196028,0,0.5
R,0,196028,196928,0.5,1.8
F,0,196128,197028,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",465,284
F,0,196322,196422,0,0.75
S,0,196322,196422,0.75,1
R,0,196322,196422,0,0.5
R,0,196422,197322,0.5,1.8
F,0,196522,197422,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",222,229
F,0,197112,197212,0,0.75
S,0,197112,197212,0.75,1
R,0,197112,197212,0,0.5
R,0,197212,198112,0.5,1.8
F,0,197312,198212,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",226,77
F,0,197901,198001,0,0.75
S,0,197901,198001,0.75,1
R,0,197901,198001,0,0.5
R,0,198001,198901,0.5,1.8
F,0,198101,199001,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",159,266
F,0,198691,198791,0,0.75
S,0,198691,198791,0.75,1
R,0,198691,198791,0,0.5
R,0,198791,199691,0.5,1.8
F,0,198891,199791,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",319,266
F,0,199480,199580,0,0.75
S,0,199480,199580,0.75,1
R,0,199480,199580,0,0.5
R,0,199580,200480,0.5,1.8
F,0,199680,200580,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",251,222
F,0,200270,200370,0,0.75
S,0,200270,200370,0.75,1
R,0,200270,200370,0,0.5
R,0,200370,201270,0.5,1.8
F,0,200470,201370,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",319,266
F,0,201059,201159,0,0.75
S,0,201059,201159,0.75,1
R,0,201059,201159,0,0.5
R,0,201159,202059,0.5,1.8
F,0,201259,202159,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",467,334
F,0,201849,201949,0,0.75
S,0,201849,201949,0.75,1
R,0,201849,201949,0,0.5
R,0,201949,202849,0.5,1.8
F,0,202049,202949,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",453,210
F,0,202243,202343,0,0.75
S,0,202243,202343,0.75,1
R,0,202243,202343,0,0.5
R,0,202343,203243,0.5,1.8
F,0,202443,203343,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",303,258
F,0,202638,202738,0,0.75
S,0,202638,202738,0.75,1
R,0,202638,202738,0,0.5
R,0,202738,203638,0.5,1.8
F,0,202838,203738,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",313,178
F,0,203428,203528,0,0.75
S,0,203428,203528,0.75,1
R,0,203428,203528,0,0.5
R,0,203528,204428,0.5,1.8
F,0,203628,204528,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",519,154
F,0,204217,204317,0,0.75
S,0,204217,204317,0.75,1
R,0,204217,204317,0,0.5
R,0,204317,205217,0.5,1.8
F,0,204417,205317,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",312,178
F,0,205007,205107,0,0.75
S,0,205007,205107,0.75,1
R,0,205007,205107,0,0.5
R,0,205107,206007,0.5,1.8
F,0,205207,206107,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",399,273
F,0,205796,205896,0,0.75
S,0,205796,205896,0.75,1
R,0,205796,205896,0,0.5
R,0,205896,206796,0.5,1.8
F,0,205996,206896,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",343,358
F,0,206586,206686,0,0.75
S,0,206586,206686,0.75,1
R,0,206586,206686,0,0.5
R,0,206686,207586,0.5,1.8
F,0,206786,207686,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",191,342
F,0,207375,207475,0,0.75
S,0,207375,207475,0.75,1
R,0,207375,207475,0,0.5
R,0,207475,208375,0.5,1.8
F,0,207575,208475,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",258,174
F,0,208164,208264,0,0.75
S,0,208164,208264,0.75,1
R,0,208164,208264,0,0.5
R,0,208264,209164,0.5,1.8
F,0,208364,209264,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",375,249
F,0,208559,208659,0,0.75
S,0,208559,208659,0.75,1
R,0,208559,208659,0,0.5
R,0,208659,209559,0.5,1.8
F,0,208759,209659,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",414,177
F,0,208954,209054,0,0.75
S,0,208954,209054,0.75,1
R,0,208954,209054,0,0.5
R,0,209054,209954,0.5,1.8
F,0,209154,210054,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",331,282
F,0,209743,209843,0,0.75
S,0,209743,209843,0.75,1
R,0,209743,209843,0,0.5
R,0,209843,210743,0.5,1.8
F,0,209943,210843,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",271,142
F,0,210533,210633,0,0.75
S,0,210533,210633,0.75,1
R,0,210533,210633,0,0.5
R,0,210633,211533,0.5,1.8
F,0,210733,211633,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",127,230
F,0,211322,211422,0,0.75
S,0,211322,211422,0.75,1
R,0,211322,211422,0,0.5
R,0,211422,212322,0.5,1.8
F,0,211522,212422,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",307,306
F,0,212112,212212,0,0.75
S,0,212112,212212,0.75,1
R,0,212112,212212,0,0.5
R,0,212212,213112,0.5,1.8
F,0,212312,213212,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",254,377
F,0,212901,213001,0,0.75
S,0,212901,213001,0.75,1
R,0,212901,213001,0,0.5
R,0,213001,213901,0.5,1.8
F,0,213101,214001,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",190,238
F,0,213691,213791,0,0.75
S,0,213691,213791,0.75,1
R,0,213691,213791,0,0.5
R,0,213791,214691,0.5,1.8
F,0,213891,214791,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",355,234
F,0,214283,214383,0,0.75
S,0,214283,214383,0.75,1
R,0,214283,214383,0,0.5
R,0,214383,215283,0.5,1.8
F,0,214483,215383,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",427,178
F,0,214480,214580,0,0.75
S,0,214480,214580,0.75,1
R,0,214480,214580,0,0.5
R,0,214580,215480,0.5,1.8
F,0,214680,215580,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",511,278
F,0,214875,214975,0,0.75
S,0,214875,214975,0.75,1
R,0,214875,214975,0,0.5
R,0,214975,215875,0.5,1.8
F,0,215075,215975,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",371,330
F,0,215270,215370,0,0.75
S,0,215270,215370,0.75,1
R,0,215270,215370,0,0.5
R,0,215370,216270,0.5,1.8
F,0,215470,216370,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",179,310
F,0,216059,216159,0,0.75
S,0,216059,216159,0.75,1
R,0,216059,216159,0,0.5
R,0,216159,217059,0.5,1.8
F,0,216259,217159,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",242,73
F,0,216849,216949,0,0.75
S,0,216849,216949,0.75,1
R,0,216849,216949,0,0.5
R,0,216949,217849,0.5,1.8
F,0,217049,217949,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",179,310
F,0,217638,217738,0,0.75
S,0,217638,217738,0.75,1
R,0,217638,217738,0,0.5
R,0,217738,218638,0.5,1.8
F,0,217838,218738,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",310,385
F,0,218428,218528,0,0.75
S,0,218428,218528,0.75,1
R,0,218428,218528,0,0.5
R,0,218528,219428,0.5,1.8
F,0,218628,219528,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",438,210
F,0,219217,219317,0,0.75
S,0,219217,219317,0.75,1
R,0,219217,219317,0,0.5
R,0,219317,220217,0.5,1.8
F,0,219417,220317,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",335,238
F,0,220007,220107,0,0.75
S,0,220007,220107,0.75,1
R,0,220007,220107,0,0.5
R,0,220107,221007,0.5,1.8
F,0,220207,221107,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",106,214
F,0,220796,220896,0,0.75
S,0,220796,220896,0.75,1
R,0,220796,220896,0,0.5
R,0,220896,221796,0.5,1.8
F,0,220996,221896,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",159,370
F,0,221191,221291,0,0.75
S,0,221191,221291,0.75,1
R,0,221191,221291,0,0.5
R,0,221291,222191,0.5,1.8
F,0,221391,222291,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",79,354
F,0,221586,221686,0,0.75
S,0,221586,221686,0.75,1
R,0,221586,221686,0,0.5
R,0,221686,222586,0.5,1.8
F,0,221786,222686,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",367,326
F,0,222375,222475,0,0.75
S,0,222375,222475,0.75,1
R,0,222375,222475,0,0.5
R,0,222475,223375,0.5,1.8
F,0,222575,223475,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",559,278
F,0,223164,223264,0,0.75
S,0,223164,223264,0.75,1
R,0,223164,223264,0,0.5
R,0,223264,224164,0.5,1.8
F,0,223364,224264,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",439,302
F,0,223954,224054,0,0.75
S,0,223954,224054,0.75,1
R,0,223954,224054,0,0.5
R,0,224054,224954,0.5,1.8
F,0,224154,225054,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",351,318
F,0,224743,224843,0,0.75
S,0,224743,224843,0.75,1
R,0,224743,224843,0,0.5
R,0,224843,225743,0.5,1.8
F,0,224943,225843,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",371,230
F,0,225533,225633,0,0.75
S,0,225533,225633,0.75,1
R,0,225533,225633,0,0.5
R,0,225633,226533,0.5,1.8
F,0,225733,226633,0.75,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\flower.png",351,318
F,0,226322,226422,0,0.75
S,0,226322,226422,0.75,1
R,0,226322,226422,0,0.5
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
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Misure wrote:

宇宙无敌琪老板
这图不太会摸... 因为挺多梗看上去都是有想法的, 那就大概点几个test不太舒服的吧 也就是个人认为有一点过了的地方 比较主观
[Kira]
  1. 00:15:334 (4,5,6,1) - 45接起来可能还行虽然有点卡flow 但是561这个角度太锐又很远 移动感觉不是很好 建议这里1 ctrl+Gfixed
  2. 00:18:294 (3,4,5) - 34有点远 移动感顿一下这里感觉不是很好 flow大概还好
  3. 00:23:031 (2,3,4) - 拐的角度有点急
  4. 00:26:584 (5,6,7) - 这个三连其实我不太理解它的意义...7应该是后面那个1/8吧
  5. 00:31:320 (5,6,1) - 这个flow感觉不是很好 虽然空了一拍但是这里间距体感上还是比较大又是钝角就有点明显了 个人偏向1在靠右下的位置
  6. 00:34:478 (5,6,7,1) - 接前面角度感觉有点急
  7. 00:43:162 (1) - 108|100 感觉好一点点fixed
  8. 00:47:702 (5) - 172|228 感觉好一点点fixed
  9. 00:58:952 (1) - 往上点?fixed
  10. 01:04:873 (6,7) - 有一点点远了
  11. 01:08:031 (5,1) - 感觉不适合stack 原因说不好 大概节奏衔接不是很紧密
  12. 01:19:084 (1,1) - 这组和后面几组比 有点近了吧 前一个滑条反向之后距后面只有1.68x 后面有一组同理fixed
  13. 01:20:662 (1) - ctrl+G? 离太近打的时候基本感觉不到滑条的感觉 缺点移动感..
  14. 01:27:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个间距相对于整张图来说也是有点过了...尤其对比02:55:794 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 太明显了 顺便NC也不一样
  15. 01:36:847 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里比划了好几次感觉还是提出来吧 有点不舒服 具体就是滑条切flow拉近了
    有点急了
  16. 01:40:794 (8,9) - 改成1/2或者 note离远一些...移动感觉有点尴尬现在fixed
  17. 02:12:768 (6,1) - 有点远fixed
  18. 02:17:109 (4,5,6) - 保持一样的间距?短条有点突然
  19. 02:40:400 (3,4,5) - 角度有点急 前面那个钝角接过去感觉就不错
  20. 02:53:820 (5,1) - 容易断kick
  21. 03:22:241 (5,1) - 感觉有点不适合stack

joker- wrote:

Hi~ req from chat in game.
[Kira]
  1. 00:27:077 (7) - 周りの音とりと合わせる形でいいと思います、なのでこれ外しませんかここには音があると思ってます
  2. 01:40:794 (8) - 01:40:597 (7)の向きの直線状に置きませんか 03:09:215 (8) - ^fixed
  3. 02:43:162 (1) - ストリームの始まりだけずれているのがとても汚く見えるので、直線ストリームにすることをすすめます。fixed
The map look good! GL!
no reply=keep it,thank you
sahuang
...please state your reason why you keep them when you respond to mods.
Usually ppl use no reply = fixed
Mafumafu
[General]
(部分来源于modding assistant)
四个难度timing没统一

这些音效似乎没用到?
soft-hitfinish22.wav
soft-hitwhistle2.wav
soft-sliderslide2.wav
soft-slidertick2.wav

现在最好不要用ogg文件
soft-hitnormal11.ogg
soft-hitnormal22.ogg
soft-hitnormal33.ogg

音效不足100ms长
soft-hitwhistle11.wav 28.46ms
soft-hitwhistle22.wav 28.46ms

有大于5毫秒的delay需要减掉
soft-hitfinish22.wav
soft-hitwhistle11.wav
soft-hitwhistle22.wav

AIMod似乎有很多关于storyboard丢失文件的错误提示

hitnormal声音有点太小了,几乎要听不见了,虽然是很安静的歌曲。。。

[ErMei's Hard]
02:47:507 (5,1) - 似乎没有1/8

[Kira]
不是很同意1/8结尾的滑条
00:16:320 (1,2,3,4) - 1和2是1/8但是间距却大于 3 4这个1/4 再加上3和4的重叠 这个比较难读1 2也没有理由用这么大的间距
00:26:584 (5,6,7) - 打起来好难受
00:37:636 (5) - 明显是1/4哪里有音为什么要1/8
01:40:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hard 1/4单点都没有很多 这里突然有这么长的连打,显得spread有点不好。况且音乐也没有这么多1/8吧

前三个难度没什么问题,最高难度我大概不太觉得可以。。。。
Good luck!
Topic Starter
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sahuang wrote:

...please state your reason why you keep them when you respond to mods.
Usually ppl use no reply = fixed
你说得在理
sahuang

Regraz wrote:

前三个难度没什么问题,最高难度我大概不太觉得可以。。。。
Good luck!
咕王争霸赛现在开始!
moonlightleaf

Regraz wrote:

[General]
(部分来源于modding assistant)
四个难度timing没统一

这些音效似乎没用到?
soft-hitfinish22.wav
soft-hitwhistle2.wav
soft-sliderslide2.wav
soft-slidertick2.wav

现在最好不要用ogg文件
soft-hitnormal11.ogg 换成了 .wav
soft-hitnormal22.ogg ^
soft-hitnormal33.ogg ^

音效不足100ms长
soft-hitwhistle11.wav 28.46ms
soft-hitwhistle22.wav 28.46ms

有大于5毫秒的delay需要减掉
soft-hitfinish22.wav
soft-hitwhistle11.wav
soft-hitwhistle22.wav

AIMod似乎有很多关于storyboard丢失文件的错误提示

hitnormal声音有点太小了,几乎要听不见了,虽然是很安静的歌曲。。。

[ErMei's Hard]
02:47:507 (5,1) - 似乎没有1/8 ---不要紧的


前三个难度没什么问题,最高难度我大概不太觉得可以。。。。
Good luck!
另外的 01:12:768 (4) - 帮我叠好一下

sahuang wrote:

Regraz wrote:

前三个难度没什么问题,最高难度我大概不太觉得可以。。。。
Good luck!
咕王争霸赛现在开始!+1
BeatofIke
We only fixed a few things on Kira difficulty.
This mapset has an interesting mapping style and it's something I like for everyone to experience while playing this map :3
Doyak

(Don't blame Wafu, it's me who asked for some help lol, just for some opinions)

Anyways I think the hitsounds are really problmetic so I'm gonna pop the bubble for now.

[General]
* Okay let me ask the GD'ers: What's the point of using hitsounds? I'm talking about the hitnormal sounds on the GDs. I first thought they were muted, since they're way too quiet. Even with 100% effect / 60% music, I still couldn't really hear anything. We use hitsounds to give feedback to players. Therefore, they should be clearly audible for all clickable objects. I know this song calls for very soft hitsounds, but you went too much. So please increase them into reasonable volume. This is the current volume of hitnormal 11, 22, 33:


and the whistle is like this:


So even because of the large difference between them, hitnormal sound is even less noticeable. Same for 17th sampleset ofc.

* Also this


Wafu will give you a better mp3, so you might as well want to replace it, and you can fix the tags.

* You all can integrate the map's end. This seems more like gathering random difficulties rather than a 'mapset'.

* I also think the difficulty gap can be improved, but I wanna listen to the GD mappers' opinions too. So here's my opinion. This song can be mapped like double-bpm style, and Hard and Kira diff are doing that, using 1/4 beats on their base. But Easy/Normal diff don't. They're still being a raw-bpm style, where Easy has 1/1 beats as its base which feels more like 2/1 beats, and Normal has 1/2s which feels more like 1/1 beats. So to say, it's like having Beginner-Easy diff and Hard-Insane diff, while Normal diff is missing. Personally I think Easy could introduce some 1/2 beats (not just reverse arrows), and Normal should introduce some 1/4 beats for this double-bpm style mapset, because Hard diff is entirely mapped like they're just 1/2 beats.

* ;)


[Easy]
* Assuming you don't add significantly more beats, even lower AR would work better. It's literally 1 or 2 objects on the screen now. So maybe try AR1.

[Normal]
* This diff isn't any different with a 152bpm Easy diff, so without any 1/4 beats AR5 is too high, so maybe try AR4.

[Hard]
* 00:24:215 (1) - 00:17:899 (4) - NC consistency?
* 01:14:741 (1) - This shape felt a bit weird, it can be more clean if the 1st-2nd dots' segment is parallel with 3rd-4th segment.
* 01:29:741 (3,4) - I get your intention but this can be a bit confusing because there were no such a long/complicated gaps before (nor after), so maybe it's better to just fill 1/2s out here.

[Kira]
* 00:37:636 (5,6) - Can I ask you why this scale is so small compared to 00:36:847 (1,2,3,4) - ? The music is getting intense imo.
* 00:51:847 (5) - hmm I don't get what this does. It ignores 00:52:044 - this significant beat and there's no dragging sound there.
* 00:55:695 (5) - Seems overmapped. I don't care much about triplets for emphasis, but I think they should be avoided on these quiet parts. Hope you reconsider about that, and all similar things.


* :lol:

Same for 01:14:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:05:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 02:43:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 03:08:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 03:33:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 03:46:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I guess
* 02:00:136 (5,1) - 03:15:926 (5,1) - This looks badly overlapped because of the stack leniency.
* 02:42:374 (3,1) - Stack leniency made this stream really weird, please fix this.

I need to check hitsounds after fixing the volume. Anyways call me back.
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