Lizellota wrote:

[Saten's Insane]

00:05:435 - whistle?
00:19:185 (1) - remove clap ><
00:24:185 - add a note don't know where to put it
00:55:123 (2) - clap

Nice diff :3 Awesome as always~

1. There are 2 .osb files here. Delete them and remember to full submit!

1. 00:03:144 (3) - Flip this vertically and put it at x:256 y:144. I know you are trying to make a symmetry using the grid,but by doing this the flow between the 2 sliders 00:01:060 (2,3) - will get really better!
2. 00:40:644 (1,2,3) - Not implying that this is a bad rhythm,but a rhythm that follows more the vocal here fits pretty good. This is my rhythmical suggestion here:
   
   If you want some patterns to use here,just call me: I can help you
3. 00:56:894 - Again,a note following the vocals here wouldn't be bad. It would play pretty good with 00:57:310 (1) - by placing it at x:300 y:288
4. 01:06:477 (1) - Move the new combo at 01:07:310 (3) - ,it's better to begin a new phrase here.
5. 01:19:810 (1) - If you done the thing above,do the same here.
6. 01:23:977 (1,2) - Little pattern suggestion here: you could replace these two straight sliders with instead two sliders that curve in opposite sides,like in this image. Imho,this would be a better choice,and flows really good!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   68,160,83977,6,0,B|32:104|68:48,2,120,4|2|8
   108,232,85644,2,0,B|124:272|108:312,1,80,2|4

1. 00:05:227 (3) - Since here there is the 1/8 synth that finishes later,I'd suggest you to follow that properly by adding a note at 00:05:227 - and moving the slider 1/2 later,obviously making it shorter by 1/2. If you didn't understand well,just take a look at this image:
   
2. 00:07:102 (1) - Again,I'd suggest you moving this slider backwards 1/2 to follow properly the synth: it fits really good! (obviously to make it fit properly you'll have to make it 1/2 longer)
3. 00:17:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest you to make this arc-shaped pattern a bit more curvy,so that it looks better and it flows properly:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   148,296,17310,5,4
   148,296,17519,1,0
   80,200,17935,1,0
   148,104,18352,1,0
   268,112,18769,2,0,B|336:100|400:160,1,120
   412,192,19394,2,0,B|448:248,2,60,8|0|0

4. 00:19:394 (6) - You could add a whistle here at the end to follow the synth ^^
5. 00:28:977 (1) - Move this new combo at 00:27:727 (7) - ,as the phrase should begin here.
6. 00:31:060 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is both rhythmical and structural suggestion. What do you think on using the symmetry to make a new pattern that fits better with the vocals? Here how it should come out:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   256,120,31060,5,2
   184,216,31477,2,0,B|160:244|168:292,2,60,0|0|2
   256,312,32310,1,0
   328,216,32727,2,0,B|352:244|344:292,2,60,0|0|2
   400,120,33560,2,0,B|444:160|448:232,1,120
   328,216,34394,6,0,B|224:224|184:304|84:284,1,240,8|8

7. 00:46:477 (6) - This is mostly a graphical suggestion: what do you think of using here 00:44:810 (2) - flipped horizontally and verically placed at x:320 y:336? It looks really good,instead of using a curvy slider here. Here's an example on how it should come.
8. 00:57:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Another rhythmical suggestion. Maybe I'm following too much the vocals,but this sounds really strange as now :\
   
9. 01:23:977 (1,2,3,4) - Last rhythmical suggestion here:
   

1. 00:05:019 (1) - Consider extending this until 00:05:435 - ,as the 1/8 synth finishes there (this will delete the note placed there,obviously)
2. 00:19:602 (3) - Again,put a whistle at the repeat to follow the synth
3. 00:45:644 (1,2,3,4) - Using only a triangular jump here isn't that great imho :\ I would instead use a square-shaped jump,like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   136,132,45644,5,0
   36,184,45852,1,8
   116,264,46060,1,8
   216,216,46269,1,0

4. 00:59:602 (3,4,5) - Just to clarify,this is a 1/8 drum,not a 1/4 one,so I'd suggest you to replace these instead with a 1/8 slider.

1. 00:19:810 (3) - I would add a clap at the end of the slider: that 1/2 clap pattern fits pretty good there!
2. 00:20:227 (1) - Move this new combo at 00:21:269 (2) - ,imho it fits better to follow the vocals there!
3. 01:12:935 (1,2,3,4,5) - Instead of using a zig-zag pattern here,I'd suggest you to make another kind of pattern,for example,this could fit pretty good
4. 01:40:019 (4) - Again,clap here?
   orz,sorry for this short mod >_<

Kin wrote:

Saten's Fate :

00:28:769 (5,2) - http://puu.sh/19JuZ

1. Do SBer's name should add in tags? if yes, add "Sun Rainbow", "Sun_Rainbow" into tags o.o
2. I got 2 osb, delete useless osb and full submit :3

1. 00:50:644 (1) - Try to use some sliders to instead, this is to short imo, and it's not a good part to place the spinner D:
   Nothing to say, awesome!

1. 00:07:310 (1) - finish to fit with song?
2. 00:43:977 (1,2) - Spacing? lol
3. 00:59:602 (1) - Weird part imo, you shouldn't add anything at 00:59:602 - ,so delete this slider and put a note at 00:59:810 - ?It's more fit with the rhythm and song imo lol
4. 00:59:602 (1) - again here, if you don't except^, remove nc then nc at 01:00:644 (7) -
5. 01:27:310 (7) - finish? (nazi)

1. 00:17:935 (3,4,5) - I have an idea when I mod this diff now (but every diff have these parts D:), add whistle? There's sound but you don't add any sound on. If you except, do it on every diff :3
2. 01:26:894 (6) - finish (end)? (nazi again)
3. 01:37:935 (3,4,5) - Same as 00:17:935 (3,4,5) - (do it on every diff again)

1. 01:27:310 (1) - finish?
   Well made!

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

I couldn't find anything but please accept this star for good work on your map

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Saten's Insane Fate]
00:30:227 (3) - maybe a stack on the beginning of (1) for a smoother transition to the diff? done, made some additional adjustments as well
01:12:102 (1,2,3,4) - i'm feeling Ctrl+J for this combo because i think going around in circles looks boring and it might be hard to hit the notes again at the same spot during gameplay IMO. it should look like this. I actually find the current pattern quite interesting
01:40:019 (4) - add a clap here. you did it at the previous claps to match the drums, so doing it here would look consistent since they match the drums in this part of the song. not sure, I only add claps and such when I can hear resembles in the actual music.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Kosiga's Easy Fate]
00:16:060 (2) - maybe Ctrl+H so that this slider blankets (1)? i think the flow would look smoother during gameplay IMO. hmm.. I used a symmetrical here. http://puu.sh/1ellt ctrl+H: http://puu.sh/1elni I think this is it is more beautiful than the form of the Ctrl+H ==
00:33:560 (4) - perhaps you can un-stack this so that it'd be easier for beginners?　I put the stack at several locations in this map. I think that all these are simple stack. and I think that these rarely confuse a play. I do not want to change it if possible >.<;
00:45:644 (2) - i find this finish too distracting because there's no cymbals and it sounds unfitting. you can do 2 things. remove the finish or add a timing point to reduce the volume of the finish to make it less distracting for other people. ok. reduce the volume to -20%(50%)
01:00:227 (4) - same as 00:33:560. same ==!
01:10:227 (6) - ^ ^

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Saten's Fate]
00:13:560 (1) - maybe a whistle at the repeat to show emphasis in the instrumental? I don't think a single whistle hitsound would do any good
00:20:227 (1) - add a timing point at the repeat and reduce the volume to 50%. same reason as hard. I love strong sounds though, and 50% is a bit low imo
00:46:894 (7,8) - add a clap at (7) and remove it on (8) to show emphasis in the drums. the clap on (8) was a mistake due to reversing (7,8)
01:36:269 (8) - i feel that this kick slider doesn't belong here because the transition from this note to the next plays awkwardly for me...i think it'd flow smoother if you can replace for a stacked stream. I'd rather not use 1/6 streams