DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:18:719 (1) - use only 1 white dot
00:27:879 (1) - add finish
00:36:124 (2) - add finish at the end
00:46:200 (3) - make a pure U slider (don't use red dot) sorry :S
01:21:009 (1) - add finish at start
01:42:994 (1) - ^
01:53:986 (2) - use only 1 white dot
01:55:818 (4) - ^
03:01:315 (1) - move to 56:184
02:56:276 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - move them right to the center of screen
03:31:086 (1) - use only 1 white dot
04:00:399 (1) - remove new combo
04:02:231 (1) - ^

~Hard~
00:29:711 (1) - add finish at start
02:56:276 (1) - ^ (normal one)

~Taiko~
- Unsnapped notes

Lizzehb wrote:

[Easy]
00:15:055 (1,2,1) and 00:30:628 (1,2,3) - These are the exact same note patterns but spaced differently. Umm, change? Because differen slider shapes.
03:28:337 (1) - This HAS to have some kind of hitsound, I can't hear it if it does, so turn it up a little more. (Unrankable btw) %30^^


Also, can you make an insane? Technically you only mapped 1 and 1/2 of a difficulty....no

Xgor wrote:

Xgor's bubble checking time!

[Easy]
00:30:628 (1) - Add new combo here. Unless you have a really good reason for using no new combo after a spinner you should always have a new combo after a spinner.

Better fix that before it gets ranked x.x everything else seems to check out fine though.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
boring but decent

[Roddie]
nice etnas

[Taiko]
funky but good

[Hard]
no offense but 1. this is definitely Insane 2. the whistles sound random
00:54:902 (3) - line this up horizontally with 1 NO !
01:43:223 (1) - too soon after a spinner I think its good for me
03:29:482 (1) - ^ ^


Contact me back when you are ready to be rebubbled

NotShinta wrote:

For whatever reason, you informed me that you wouldn't like a bubble from SFG, so here you go. This is not a return to modding maps, but I consider these special circumstances with help and the amount of people involved etc. <3

Hard:
- Concerning 'Hard' difficulty title: within the spread, calling this 'Insane' would imply a higher difficulty jump than what's there. I also consider the notes after spinner to be appropriate to the difficulty.
-- However, I agree that some of the whistles can seem a bit random. Hope to speak to Niva, but they do work perfectly in the chorus.
-- I'd stack differently placed notes on slider ends... well, differently, but nobody else seems to have a problem with playability.

Roddie's Normal:
04:05:895 (3) - Maybe raise volume to about 25% here? Still has that ending effect, without the awkward almost-silenceness.

Easy:
-- Lots of inter-combo symmetry errors that could be fixed to stop relentless ugliness. Give a shout if you want them fixed (recommended).
00:48:490 - I'd personally add a note here, to fill an awkward gap.
01:50:322 (1) - Try shortening this to 01:52:154 (Scale by -> ~0.66, if you prefer) and adding notes on the 1/1s following. Goes on a bit too long and awkwardly in my opinion as/is.
-- Good difficulty otherwise!

I'd still like to talk to Niva first, but if you can get another few reliable, supported opinions about the whistles, I'd happily bubble this while I'm here.

1. Offset +7

1. 00:15:055 (1,1) - These sliders are ugly.
2. 03:01:773 (1) - Extend to 03:03:605 and remove 03:04:063 (1).
3. 03:09:101 (4) - Short multiple repeat sliders are very hard to read for beginners. This would be better off as a longer, single repeat.

1. AR +2
2. OD +1
3. HP +1
4. 02:56:734 (3,4) - Unstack these
5. 03:11:162 - Map this break. It's mapped on all the other difficulties, why not this one?

1. 00:18:605 - Add circle. More consistent and readable.
2. 01:18:948 (6) - This is too close to the edge.
3. 03:58:795 - Add a circle and make the next sliders circles.

Charles445 wrote:

Roddie's Normal

1. AR +2 I'll just increase this by one. No need to make the Approach Rate any higher honestly. lol
2. OD +1 Sure.
3. HP +1 ^
4. 02:56:734 (3,4) - Unstack these Okay.
5. 03:11:162 - Map this break. It's mapped on all the other difficulties, why not this one? I pretty much decide on which parts I'd like to map on or not. Although, I do try to keep the draining time approximately the same like every other osu! standard difficulty. I'll leave it as it is.

1. 03:04:528 (1) - This is missing a new combo.

1. 00:18:612 (5) - Move this so it stacks with the next slider.

1. Audio Lead-in isn't needed because the diff starts 15 seconds in.

fartownik wrote:

Welcome.

[Hard]

00:41:856 (6) - Could've been done prettier. Move the center tick to the left so it's nice and symmetrical. NO
03:09:108 (1,2) - A suggestion - why not to delete 1 repeat from (1) and put a 1/4 slider after it so it fits the music? Sounds far better than how it is right now.FIXED
03:17:123 (2,3,4) - I quite don't like these offbeat sliders. They should start on the following white tick, not the red tick. The sliders should follow the beginning of the lyrics, not end at the beginning of them as it's in your case. I would move 3 of them 1/2 forward and add a note before (2) at 03:17:123. Sounds better. FIXED
If you use this, fix the jump in the following pattern as well.

[Easy]

01:10:024 (1) - It's symmetrical but these sliderticks ruin everything. Try to manage them to be symmetrical? It's easily doable. fıxed

L_P wrote:

look at your SB...
helldawn = lady gaga XD

-Athena- wrote:

Congrats, really catchy song and nice beatmap, sad that it isn't getting the attention and ratings it deserves.