00:09:47 (7) - move it closer to the previous one
01:08:61 (1) - ^

really looking forward to mod insane
star~*

[Normal]
00:24:68 (1) - slider is slightly bend lol
00:31:11 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - move 1 grid tiny down >.<
00:39:68 (3) - place it exactly at the end of the slider
00:43:32 (5) - hidden slider put it somewhere not behind the previous slider
01:00:14 (2) - move 1 tick later / drag slider here 01:00:256 {look timeline}
01:17:39 (1) - alignment
01:37:11 (3) - place it exactly at the end of the slider..
01:38:18 (5) - why is this behind the slider
please fix all alignment issues.. and spacing..

[Hard]
00:09:47 (7) - place this somewhere outside the slider 00:09:68 (8)
00:08:61 (5,6) - check you spacing please
00:10:97 (1) - when playing in this part you can't see the reverse arrow because of the 300/100/50 popped in 00:10:54 (10) ... so please place it somewhere else or just rotate it by dragging the endpoint somewhere.
00:09:47 (7) - spacing
00:09:68 (8) - ^
00:10:32 (9,10) - ^
00:12:68 (3,4) - spacing
00:15:04 (2) - place this hidden repeat slider somewhere not behind this slider 00:14:39 (1)
00:17:82 (1) - place it exactly behind the triplet, 00:17:18 (7,8,9) check the spacing
00:23:82 (8,9) - these should be straight.... these 00:23:39 (7,8,9) should look straight
00:25:32 (2) - spacing
00:26:61 (3) - ^
00:30:47 (7) - spacing
hmm.... you need to apply distance snapping... all of them.. its confusing...
00:31:11 (9) - new combo
00:56:18 (1,1) - remove new combo (press Q)
00:58:54 (7) - new combo
01:00:25 (11,12) - grr,,
01:19:97 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:34:11 (5) - ^
01:38:18 (9) - why is this behind the slider.. put it outside the slider.
fix alignment issues here too.

[insane]
00:19:114(14) ขยับไปข้างซ้ายอีก
00:20:399(20) ใกล้กะ(19)ไปนิด ถ้าใช้ Distance มันจะห่างกับ(19) 1ตัวโน๊ต อันนี้ห่างแค่1/2
00:25:328(2) ขึ้นหน่อยเดียว(หน่อยเดียว)
00:26:828(5) ขยับออกห่างจาก(4)อีกนิด
00:27:042(6) ขยับออกห่างจาก(5)อีกนิด
00:57:899(4) ห่างจาก(3)อีกหน่อย
01:01:542(15) ขยับออกห่างจาก(14)อีกนิด
01:01:756(16) ขยับออกห่างจาก(15)อีกนิด
01:33:899(4) ขยับออกห่างจาก(3)อีกนิด
01:33:899(5) ขยับออกห่างจาก(4)อีกนิด
01:43:114(1) ใส่เสียงจบ

ดาวนี้ให้คิวคุงและกัน บู่วแบร่ ไม่ให้คนที่เรียนหมอหรอกบ้าที่สุด!!

ขอแจมด้วยอีกระดับนึงครับ

~Normal~
ตั้งระดับ Circle Size ไว้ตรงกลาง
00:16:97 (4) - add new combo
00:26:61 (3,4,5) - ใกล้เกิน
00:34:11 (8,9,10,11,12) - ทำเป็น slider ดีกว่า
00:41:39 (6,1) - ใกล้เกิน
00:44:82 (7) - add new combo
00:46:11 - อย่าเว้นว่าง
00:56:39 (2,3) - ห่างเกิน
00:58:11 (6,1) - ใกล้เกิน
00:58:54 (1,2,1) - วางจุดเริ่มกับจุดท้ายให้ตรงกัน
01:05:39 (6) - add new combo
01:06:68 (1) - remove new combo
01:12:25 (1) - วางจุดท้ายไว้ตรง 01:15:042
01:16:11 (2,3) - ใกล้เกิน
01:18:68 (5) - วางไว้ตรง (2)
01:20:39 (5) - ^
01:39:68 (7) - add new combo
01:40:75 (1) - remove new combo
01:43:11 (1) - ย้าย hitfinish ไปไว้ตรงจุดแรกสุด (ลบอันกลางออก)

~Hard~
00:24:68 (1,2) - ห่างเกิน
00:30:68 (8,1) - ใกล้เกิน
00:32:39 (1) - add new combo
00:34:11 (1) - ^
00:44:82 (7) - ^
00:48:25 (1,1) - ห่างเกิน
00:49:32 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:97 (3) - add new combo
00:51:68 (1,1) - ห่างเกิน
00:52:75 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:39 (3) - add new combo
01:05:39 (10,1) - ห่างเกิน
01:05:39 (10) - remove new combo
01:06:47 (1) - add new combo
01:08:82 (10) - ^
01:33:68 (3,4,5) - ใกล้เกิน
01:34:11 (5,1) - ห่างเกิน
01:37:54 (8) - add new combo
01:39:68 (11) - ใกล้เกิน
01:39:68 (11) - add new combo
01:40:75 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:75 (1,2) - ใกล้เกิน
01:43:11 (1) - ย้าย hitfinish ไปไว้ตรงจุดแรกสุด (ลบอันกลางออก)

~Insane~
00:17:82 (10) - add new combo
00:19:11 (5) - ^
00:22:54 (7) - ^
00:25:32 (2,3) - ห่างไป
00:32:82 (8) - add new combo
00:38:82 (3,4) - ห่างไป
00:44:82 (9) - add new combo
00:49:32 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:97 (4) - add new combo
00:52:75 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:39 (4) - add new combo
01:00:25 (9) - ^
01:05:39 (12) - ^
01:06:47 (1) - remove new combo
01:08:82 (12) - add new combo
01:31:11 (5) - ^
01:34:11 (5,1) - ห่างเกิน

~illuminist's Difficulty~
00:40:97 (11) - เอาเสียง hitfinish ออก เพราะมันฟังดูแปลกๆ - -
00:47:72 (10) - เริ่มและจบที่เส้นขาว เด้ง 4 ครั้ง
01:07:00 (1,2) - ใกล้เกิน ไม่ก็แก้ 01:07:00 (1) - remove new combo _ 01:07:32 (2) - add new combo
01:29:39 >>> ระวังไม่มีคนอยากเล่น D=

This is a great song! XD

I would suggest using Soft hitsounds instead of Normal, and just increase the volume a little; It just mixes better with the song (You don't have to change if you don't want to)

Starred.

orioncomet wrote:

แจมด้วยสิ

มีSkin แถมด้วยนะ XD!!

[attachment=0:79bf3]Lin-G - I want you (vincerio) [orion's Solo].osu[/attachment:79bf3]

[attachment=1:79bf3]Skin-Iwantu.rar[/attachment:79bf3]

illuminist wrote:

Speed up has been removed.


ลบไฟล์ .png ที่ผมเคยใช้ออกด้วยนะครับทั้ง 5 ตัว แล้วก็ Full Submission

v2b wrote:

hi

Normal:
I think circle size -1 will be better
00:57:47 (3) wrong spacing,too far with the slider
01:23:82 (3) wrong spacing

Hard:
circle size and overall -1
01:23:82 (4) wrong spacing

Insane:
00:51:68 (1) wrong spacing,too near with the previous one
01:43:11 (1) why soft? Normal and Hard are normal hitsound here

illuminist's Difficult:
01:27:25 (x) maybe add a circle here?(then remove combo5's clap and add clap to this one)

orion's:
increase overall to 8?(coz other diffs have overall 8)
00:34:97 (6) add new combo and remove new combo on the next circle
01:01:97 (7) add new combo
01:03:68 (1) remove new combo
01:08:82 (11) new combo
01:09:25 (1) remove new combo
01:12:04 (1) remove new combo(and add new combo to the next one
01:25:97 (6) new combo
01:26:82 (1) remove new combo
01:27:68 (7) new combo @_@

I love this song <3

minyeob wrote:

[Overall]
Nice collab map! Also, the skin is awesome!

[illuminist]
01:07:00 (10) - I think this circle is overused. Remove it please~

Star Combo!

v2b wrote:

hi

illuminist's Difficult:
01:27:25 (x) maybe add a circle here?(then remove combo5's clap and add clap to this one) That's a good idea. Thank you

I love this song <3

minyeob wrote:

[Overall]
Nice collab map! Also, the skin is awesome!

[illuminist]
01:07:00 (10) - I think this circle is overused. Remove it please~ This note follows song's sound, so i don't remove it yet.

Star Combo!

Xen wrote:

:orion's Solo:

increase hitvolume < no. i want too low volume. (ตอนแรกจะปิดเสียงด้วยซ้ำ)
00:07:542 (3) clap < no. it no too Rock.
00:08:399 (2,6) ^ < no
00:10:971 (2,2) ^ < no
00:14:399 (2,6,2) ^ < no
00:17:828 (1,5) ^ < no
00:21:042 (14) remove note (แล้วแต่) < no. this's "orion's "Solo""
00:21:256 (1,5,11) clap < no
00:24:685 (1,5) ^ < no
00:26:828 (12) ^ (แล้วแต่) < no
00:28:114 (1,5,9,13) ^ < no
00:31:542 (4,3) ^ < no
00:34:971 (1,5,1) ^ < no
00:37:542 (2) ^ < no
00:38:399 (1,6,10,14) ^ < no
00:41:828 (2,7,11,15) ^ < no
00:45:256 (3,7) ^ < no
00:46:971 (3) ^ < no
01:31:542 (4) ^ < no
01:32:399 (1) ^ < no
01:34:114 (1,5,10) ^ < no
01:36:685 (2,5) ^ < no
01:38:399 (3) ^ < no
01:40:114 (3,8) ^ < no

:Normal:

00:16:971 (1,2,3) whistle? (ใส่แต่clap น่าจะดีกว่า)
00:56:399 (2) จัดให้มันสวยกว่านี้
00:58:114 (6,1) spacing
01:40:756 (5) align with 4

:Hard:

00:12:254 (2,3,4) bad spacing (ถ้าต้องการให้เป็นโน้ตโดด ใช้ Distance spacing 1.5 แล้วลองจัดแบบนี้)
^
ขยับนิดหน่อยแต่ไม่ได้เป๊ะตามรูปนั้นนะ..
00:31:968 (4) new combo
01:14:825 (1) Whistle? (เอาออกน่าจะดีกว่า)


:Insane:

Please decrease HP Drian Rate by 1 or 2 (ลดซัก1-2ขีดกำลังดี-3-)

00:07:542 (3,7) clap
00:07:971 (5) move it 1/4 backward (ถอยมา 1/4)
00:12:256 (3,4,5) Spacing? (ถ้าจะเอาโน้ตโดด ลองทำตามแบบระดับHard)
00:19:542 (3) clap
00:20:185 (6) remove clap
00:26:399 (3,7) clap
00:28:114 (1,5,) ^

x3ns0r wrote:

I WANT to star this

animask wrote:

( Overall )
Try to remove some claps...it feels like clap spam sometimes

[Normal]
01:03:25 (1) - Remove New Combo

[Hard]
00:46:54 (1) - Maybe a finish instead?

[Insane]
00:41:18 (10) - Remove clap
00:41:39 (11) - Add clap here
00:46:54 (1) - Maybe a finish instead?
01:43:11 (1) - I don't really like the finishes here...

[illuminist]
This one is nice~

[orion]
00:20:82 (13) - Add a finish or a clap
00:34:54 (5) - Add a finish
01:36:25 (13) - Add a clap?

MoonFragrance wrote:

This is my diff (MoonFragrance's Easy is so long, so i wrote M.F.'s Easy)
And i shape some sliders like I want U, I Need.

orioncomet wrote:

= = แค่join map ไม่ต้องให้kd ก็ได้มั้ง ไม่งั้นก็ให้พลอยด้วยสิ =P

Mafiamaster wrote:

Cute BG <3 (The drawing~)

M.F.'s Easy~

1. Redo the first break. It will shorten.

Breeze wrote:

hi vincerio

[M.F.'s Easy]

1. 00:31:114 (1) - sepreat end to start more obvious so that we can know which side to go
2. 01:43:114 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing, and 2 grid up

WyndII wrote:

[illuminist's Difficult]
00:12:25 (8) - new combo I put the combos in 8 beats (8 white ticks) like the next one and the before.
00:13:97 (1) - finish
00:17:39 (1) - ^
00:37:32 (9) - clap again
00:40:75 (10) - ^
00:41:39 (13) - finish
01:01:756 start clapping here u!
<3 this diff

WyndII wrote:

[DJPop's Technika]
01:13:64 (1,17) - erase this notes then new combo, do you need to start 1/4 if it sounds better to star in a white tick >.<
Nah, that's original DJMAX style.
While playing this map, some parts are just noise >.<
:<

orioncomet wrote:

[DJPop's Technika]
00:34:114(4) - spacing
NP.

MoonFragrance wrote:

Fixed

Sorry to late for uploading D:
I was TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO busy to visit osu because of school fest.

WyndII wrote:

Mod:

[M.F.'s Easy]
00:31:11 (1) - where to start this? actually some people will drag it to the left instead to the right cause they think that the slider was made that way but no, which means the slide is confusing o.o

[Normal]
00:14:39 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - flip this vertical, the slider is behind a slider, >.>
^ No
00:25:32 (2) - not straight
00:10:97 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:21:25 (1) - This note is not centered
00:24:25 (9) - finish
00:58:00 (4,5,6) - copy the previous triplets : 00:57:47 (1,2,3) - and paste it here 00:57:899 , then try to ds them by holding the first note =)
^ No
01:04:75 (7,9) - remove clap

[illuminist's Difficult]
00:12:25 (8) - new combo
00:13:97 (1) - finish
00:17:39 (1) - ^
00:37:32 (9) - clap again
00:40:75 (10) - ^
00:41:39 (13) - finish
01:01:756 start clapping here u!
<3 this diff
-------------------------------------
the following are purely suggestions
01:02:39 (5,1) - clap
01:03:89 (6) - end of slider clap
01:04:97 (11) - add a note and clap
01:05:82 (3) - clap
01:05:39 (1,3,5) - finish
01:07:54 (2,6) - clap
01:08:18 (5) - ^
01:08:82 (8) - finish
01:10:11 (1) - clap
01:10:97 (3) - ^
01:11:61 (3,4) - clap
01:39:04 (8) - clap

[DJPop's Technika]
01:13:64 (1,17) - erase this notes then new combo, do you need to start 1/4 if it sounds better to star in a white tick >.<
While playing this map, some parts are just noise >.<

[orion's solo]
00:12:68 (6,7,8) - try to put whistle hitsound here =)
00:24:25 (12) - finish
00:28:32 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is so confusing, can't you stick with < > < > < > and not < > < > > < > , lighting makes it really confusing, really.
00:52:54 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this part is confusing when kiai ^
00:55:64 (4,5,6) - ^
I enjoyed playing this map =3

gdeath wrote:

nice~nice map and skin.
starry*\(^o^)/

GolGate wrote:

For great justice.

Also, this needs BATs already!

Symbolic wrote:

[DJPop's Technika]

00:39:89 (5) - New combo here.
00:40:32 (1) - Remove new combo here.
Fixed.
00:49:11 (1) - ^
00:50:18 (1) - ^
00:51:47 (1) - ^
00:52:11 (1) - ^
00:52:54 (1) - ^
00:53:61 (1) - ^
00:54:04 (1) - ^
00:54:25 (1) - ^
00:54:47 (1) - ^
00:55:54 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:55:97 (1) - ^
00:57:04 (1) - ^
00:57:47 (1) - ^
00:58:11 (1) - ^
00:58:32 (1) - ^
00:58:97 (1) - ^
00:59:39 (1) - ^
01:00:68 (1) - ^
01:00:89 (1) - ^
01:01:43 (1) - ^
01:01:64 (1) - ^
01:01:86 (1) - ^
I want to remove following points in that part.
01:24:04 (9) - Whistle.
01:25:75 (9) - ^
01:27:47 (9) - ^
01:29:18 (9) - ^
Added.

Symbolic wrote:

[M.F.'s Easy]

00:21:25 (1,2,3,4) - Put these 1 level 3 grid to the left.
00:58:54 (1) - Let the start- and endpoint overlap less.
01:43:54 (2,3) - Space these notes with d-snap.


[Normal]

00:15:25 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:11 (1) - ^
00:57:47 (3) - Space this with d-snap so that the spacing of (2,3) is consistent to the spacing of (3,4,5,6).
00:58:54 (1) - Bad spacing, change the pattern of 00:57:47 (3,4,5,6) to fix the spacing.
01:28:11 (1) - Clap on endpoint.


[Hard]

00:37:11 (1,2,3) - Move these down 1 level 3 grid.
00:48:04 (TIMING SECTION) - Put Kiai Time on here.
01:15:47 (TIMING SECTION) - Kiai Time doesn't fit here, turn it off.
01:32:61 (10,1) - Put these 1 level 3 grid to the left for better pattern.


[illuminist's Difficulty]

Put Circle Size 1 larger please.

01:12:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:13:32 (1) - ^
01:15:04 (1) - ^


[orion's Solo]

00:20:18 (8) - New combo.
01:16:54 (1,2,3) - Ridiculous jump, it's unintuitive and too big imo, remove it.
01:23:39 (3,4,5) - ^


Very fun map,
Starred *

osuplayer111 wrote:

[M.F. Easy]

00:04:97 (1) - Spinner too short for an easy.
00:19:54 (1) - ^

[Normal]

00:34:11 (8) - Finish on slider end.

[Hard]

00:49:32 (1) - Remove new combo.

[illuminist's difficulty]

01:22:54 (1) - Finish.

[DJPop's Technika]

Fine.

[orion's Solo]

Fine.

Tapdancingmetroid wrote:

Illuminist's difficult:

Use Kiai in only one chorus, not both (since there's only about 10 seconds between the two).
Actually, this applies to all of the difficulties that use kiai at every chorus.

Orion's Solo:

The combo at 00:24:685 could probably be split into two combos.
Also, turning off and on kiai within a few seconds (the first chorus) is typically considered bad.

On a completely different note, M.F.'s Easy doesn't have all of the custom skinned stuff.

Anyway, this seems like a good map otherwise, so I'll star it for now.

1. I don't like how the backgrounds aren't the same for all difficulties...

1. Hmmhm, pretty cool, I say. The only thing that bothered me out is the lightning.png, especially with Kiai. Look at this: "300.png + Stack leniency low + lightning.png + Kiai = a complete mess. I noticed this while playing [orion's Solo]... Be careful.

1. To be honest, this looks more like a normal. Also, maybe put MoonFragance instead of M.F.'s? It'd be better.

1. This is a bit harder than normal for me, but not much.

1. Now, now... This is easier than what a hard should be! For me anyways.

Gens wrote:

[Overall]

1. I don't like how the backgrounds aren't the same for all difficulties...

[Skin]

1. Hmmhm, pretty cool, I say. The only thing that bothered me out is the lightning.png, especially with Kiai. Look at this: "300.png + Stack leniency low + lightning.png + Kiai = a complete mess. I noticed this while playing [orion's Solo]... Be careful.

[M.F.'s Easy]

1. To be honest, this looks more like a normal. Also, maybe put MoonFragance instead of M.F.'s? It'd be better.

[Normal]

1. This is a bit harder than normal for me, but not much.

[Hard]

1. Now, now... This is easier than what a hard should be! For me anyways.

[orion's Solo]
Yes~

[illuminist's Difficult]
Awesome~

[DJPop's Technika]
It's-a DJPop~

~ ~ ~

Cool beatmap. :3