alright let's get started...mod requested on my queue.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.
[General]
aww Rorona kawaii~ <3333
if this is from beatmania, consider adding "Komani" since they're the developers of beatmania, and "Benami" in the tags because it's Konami's music video game division.
you have no breaks, so disable the letterbox during breaks for all diffs.
[Normal]
00:13:058 - maybe add a circle to keep that 1/1 rhythm, not to mention it'll follow the bass?
00:13:658 (3,4,1) - consider adding whistles to match the bass in the song. i think it'll be consistent with the green combo colors at the beginning of the song IMO.
00:19:358 (5) - reduce the volume to 50%. i feel that doing this would emphasize the instrumental in this part of the song. if you do this, raise the volume back to 70% for (1) to represent a new pattern.
00:31:358 (4,5) - i think it sounds a lot better if the whistle is at the beginning of the slider and not at the circle. i find the whistle at the circle unfitting with this part of the song IMO.
00:36:158 (3,4) - ^
00:38:558 (6) - that finish is too loud and it might distract players during gameplay. i suggest reducing the volume to 40 or 50% to match the cymbals in the song.
00:52:658 (5) - same as above but at the end.
01:05:258 (3) - do Ctrl+H instead. the slider should be blanketed for this part. like this if you don't know.
01:24:458 (4,5) - flip these sliders around like this. i feel that doing this would make the flow smoother during gameplay.
01:26:858 (1) - maybe replace the whistle for a finish to emphasize the vocals and to represent a new pattern?
01:34:058 (4,5) - i think it sounds nice if you can add whistles at the end of (4) and the beginning of (5). basically adding a whistle at (5) would emphasize the vocals, and (4) would follow it up.
01:40:958 (5) - replace the finish for a whistle. it'll be consistent with 01:21:758 since it has a whistle-finish pattern.
01:55:658 (1) - i feel that the spinner's end should be silenced since the instrumental dies down here.
[Hard]
00:38:258 (6) - same as normal but at the end.
00:53:258 (1) - add a finish at the beginning for consistency with the normal diff.
01:53:258 (1) - remove the NC for this. same reason as above.
01:55:958 (1) - same as the last suggestion on normal.
other than that, this is a nice diff.
I guess that's it. Star and GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.
[General]
aww Rorona kawaii~ <3333
if this is from beatmania, consider adding "Komani" since they're the developers of beatmania, and "Benami" in the tags because it's Konami's music video game division.
you have no breaks, so disable the letterbox during breaks for all diffs.
[Normal]
00:13:058 - maybe add a circle to keep that 1/1 rhythm, not to mention it'll follow the bass?
00:13:658 (3,4,1) - consider adding whistles to match the bass in the song. i think it'll be consistent with the green combo colors at the beginning of the song IMO.
00:19:358 (5) - reduce the volume to 50%. i feel that doing this would emphasize the instrumental in this part of the song. if you do this, raise the volume back to 70% for (1) to represent a new pattern.
00:31:358 (4,5) - i think it sounds a lot better if the whistle is at the beginning of the slider and not at the circle. i find the whistle at the circle unfitting with this part of the song IMO.
00:36:158 (3,4) - ^
00:38:558 (6) - that finish is too loud and it might distract players during gameplay. i suggest reducing the volume to 40 or 50% to match the cymbals in the song.
00:52:658 (5) - same as above but at the end.
01:05:258 (3) - do Ctrl+H instead. the slider should be blanketed for this part. like this if you don't know.
01:24:458 (4,5) - flip these sliders around like this. i feel that doing this would make the flow smoother during gameplay.
01:26:858 (1) - maybe replace the whistle for a finish to emphasize the vocals and to represent a new pattern?
01:34:058 (4,5) - i think it sounds nice if you can add whistles at the end of (4) and the beginning of (5). basically adding a whistle at (5) would emphasize the vocals, and (4) would follow it up.
01:40:958 (5) - replace the finish for a whistle. it'll be consistent with 01:21:758 since it has a whistle-finish pattern.
01:55:658 (1) - i feel that the spinner's end should be silenced since the instrumental dies down here.
[Hard]
00:38:258 (6) - same as normal but at the end.
00:53:258 (1) - add a finish at the beginning for consistency with the normal diff.
01:53:258 (1) - remove the NC for this. same reason as above.
01:55:958 (1) - same as the last suggestion on normal.
other than that, this is a nice diff.
I guess that's it. Star and GL
