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Verdisphena

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi~
Here's your requested Taiko Mod from King's Lair!

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:02:071 (1) - Add Clap? no
  2. 00:02:756 (1) - ^ no
  3. 00:02:928 (1) - Move that Note to 00:03:099 please. Its plays awful having empty space at that point if you follow the lyrics. No, i feel more comfortable how it is
  4. 00:04:299 - Add Kat, make kd combo here. I don't like how that sounds
  5. 00:04:985 (1) - Move that Note to 00:04:814 please.
  6. 00:05:328 (1) - Move that Note to 00:05:156 please. no ^
  7. 00:07:556 (1) - Add Clap? no
  8. 00:08:071 (1,1) - Move them to the right red Ticks to follow the lyrics. Same as 00:02:928 (1) -
  9. 00:09:614 (1) - Remove Finish, D D doesn't play good imo. Ok
  10. 00:22:299 (1) - Remove Clap, add Finish. I prefer k here
  11. 00:22:814 (1) - ^ ^
  12. 00:39:185 (1,1) - Delete the left (1) and add Finish on the right (1). no x.x
  13. 00:44:671 (1,1,1) - Delete surrounding notes, add Finish on the one in the middle. I don't like how this sounds
  14. 00:55:385 (61) - Remove Finish. okk
  15. 01:37:728 (1) - Add Finish, remove Clap.
  16. 01:38:414 (1) - ^
  17. 01:39:099 (1) - ^
  18. 01:39:614 (1) - ^ no to all ^^^^^^^^
Rest looks good.
Just suggesting that you Map closer to the lyrics at the beginning since there is no drum-rythm.
[Verdi's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:071 (4) - Add Clap? no
  2. 00:02:928 (6,7) - Move them to the left red Ticks. Same answer as Oni
  3. 00:04:985 (11,12) - ^
  4. 00:08:414 (20,21) - ^ ^^
  5. 00:11:156 (26) - Move that Note to the right red Tick.
  6. 01:27:956 (70,71) - Move (70) on the right red Tick, delete (71). no and no ^^
Alright thats all.
I'd just really like to see you mapping closer to the lyrics at the beginning.
Good luck and have fun mapping~
Taiko http://puu.sh/ZPsh

[quote="jonathanlfj"]Hi from my modding queue :)
Can't mod taiko orz

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Nothing to mention here

[Verdi's Easy]
00:03:956 (1) - increase the volume of the hitsound on the slider head? i think the lower volume fits the slider tail betterNo
00:21:614 (2) - this slider can look a bit better ok
00:33:099 (3,4,5) - make it like the notes before okay
01:00:185 (2) - take off the finish to match 00:49:213 (2)
01:04:299 (1) - end at 01:06:185 and use soft finish
01:44:756 (1) - center this no and no ^^^^

Easy http://puu.sh/ZPuY
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Updated.
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request

[General]
  1. You'd better change Taiko BG.png to .jpg
  2. 01:15:271 - stopped kiai here is unnecessary i suppose, and also you didn't choose to stop kiai at 01:26:242 - where the music is same to prev. So i'd like to make it to be a whole kiai, or just place a small break at 01:17:842 - for second fountain.
[Verdi's Easy]
  1. I'd like to choose Slider Velocity 1 because extra tickpoint in short sliders like 01:25:556 (3) - are not ver suitable imo.
  2. 00:42:699 (2,3) - these two slides are not looked good, make them more curved and symmetrical?
  3. 01:30:356 - add a note here to maintain your beats consistant?
  4. 01:33:099 - ^
[Normal]
  1. I may choose to reduce hp or od by 1 because it looks hard a bit as a normal diff....
  2. 00:06:014 (4) - highly recommend to remove the sliderwhislte sample on the slider.
  3. 00:17:671 (1,2) - it may too hard for new players due to the high bpm, so i'd like to remove (2) and extend (1) to redtick
  4. 00:19:556 (5,6) - ^
  5. 00:22:299 (4,5) - ^, many similar patterns later which i worry about...
  6. 00:28:471 (2) - should it be a 1/4 reverse slider? or, could it be instead by one note? still the difficulty issue ....
  7. 00:39:442 (2) - ^
  8. 00:51:442 (3,4,5) - maybe .. u can find a way to add those "missing claps" like make a clap sample as slidertick.wav and place a slider at appropriate place to fill that without a potential change of beat?
  9. 00:54:699 (4,1) - similar to above, 2/4 clap is a good choice imo, so try to fill these claps into the diff
  10. 01:00:871 (6) - remove head clap
  11. 01:15:271 (1,2) - highly recommend to choose slider due to the difficulty issue.
  12. 01:44:756 (1,2) - make one reversed slider here? difficulty issue.
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:013 (3) - highly recommend to remove sliderwhistle
  2. 00:43:042 (1,2,3,4) - may i know the reason of increasing spacing here? in my view, the music is going to low here, so reducing/consistant spacing may be better :>
  3. 00:56:071 (3) - ctrl+r for better flow? (1) is from right to left, and then (2) left to right, so make it right to left may follow the sense :>
  4. 00:56:756 (1,2) - if you agree with my suggestion above, it's better to press ctrl+h for them :D
  5. 01:34:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - just a suggestion, i may choose to use kick sliders here for the music like:

[Insane]
  1. recommend to reduce HP by at least 1 due to those long blanks where HP may reduce rapidly without restoring.
  2. 00:06:013 (6) - remove sliderwhislte?
  3. 00:22:642 (8,9) - make them away from (7) in order to avoid the misreading? just a sample
  4. 01:32:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - to be honest the flow here is weird. when i test, my intuitive feeling is
that's all, overall a good mapset, good luck with the rank :>
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Scorpiour wrote:

[General]
  1. You'd better change Taiko BG.png to .jpg Is this really necessary?
  2. 01:15:271 - stopped kiai here is unnecessary i suppose, and also you didn't choose to stop kiai at 01:26:242 - where the music is same to prev. So i'd like to make it to be a whole kiai, or just place a small break at 01:17:842 - for second fountain. This is ok as it is.


[Normal]
  1. I may choose to reduce hp or od by 1 because it looks hard a bit as a normal diff.... Ok HP reduced.
  2. 00:06:014 (4) - highly recommend to remove the sliderwhislte sample on the slider. It sounds nice with the bass.
  3. 00:17:671 (1,2) - it may too hard for new players due to the high bpm, so i'd like to remove (2) and extend (1) to redtick This is not too hard for a Normal, remember that new players play mostly Easy diffs and not Normal xD.
  4. 00:19:556 (5,6) - ^ ^
  5. 00:22:299 (4,5) - ^, many similar patterns later which i worry about... ^
  6. 00:28:471 (2) - should it be a 1/4 reverse slider? or, could it be instead by one note? still the difficulty issue .... ^
  7. 00:39:442 (2) - ^ ^
  8. 00:51:442 (3,4,5) - maybe .. u can find a way to add those "missing claps" like make a clap sample as slidertick.wav and place a slider at appropriate place to fill that without a potential change of beat? Since Verdi has another Clap in his diff I can't use a slidertick, so I'll keep this as it is.
  9. 00:54:699 (4,1) - similar to above, 2/4 clap is a good choice imo, so try to fill these claps into the diff ^
  10. 01:00:871 (6) - remove head clap Ok.
  11. 01:15:271 (1,2) - highly recommend to choose slider due to the difficulty issue. No changes.
  12. 01:44:756 (1,2) - make one reversed slider here? difficulty issue. ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:013 (3) - highly recommend to remove sliderwhistle It sounds nice with the bass.
  2. 00:43:042 (1,2,3,4) - may i know the reason of increasing spacing here? in my view, the music is going to low here, so reducing/consistant spacing may be better :> I increased distance on Insane for this part too because it fits for me, so I'll keep this as it is.
  3. 00:56:071 (3) - ctrl+r for better flow? (1) is from right to left, and then (2) left to right, so make it right to left may follow the sense :> Ok.
  4. 00:56:756 (1,2) - if you agree with my suggestion above, it's better to press ctrl+h for them :D Ok.
  5. 01:34:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - just a suggestion, i may choose to use kick sliders here for the music like: No changes.

[Insane]
  1. recommend to reduce HP by at least 1 due to those long blanks where HP may reduce rapidly without restoring. 7 is low enough D:
  2. 00:06:013 (6) - remove sliderwhislte? No.
  3. 00:22:642 (8,9) - make them away from (7) in order to avoid the misreading? just a sample Nah, not necessary imo.
  4. 01:32:242 (2,3,4,5,6) - to be honest the flow here is weird. when i test, my intuitive feeling is Hmmm no.
Thanks for modding!
Verdisphena

Scorpiour wrote:

[Verdi's Easy]
  1. I'd like to choose Slider Velocity 1 because extra tickpoint in short sliders like 01:25:556 (3) - are not ver suitable imo. This is not very necessary imo
  2. 00:42:699 (2,3) - these two slides are not looked good, make them more curved and symmetrical? Those slider are fine
  3. 01:30:356 - add a note here to maintain your beats consistant?
  4. 01:33:099 - ^ I want to keep the rhythm how it is ^
Thanks
Quilt
i love this song xD
Chewin
Hi pro <3
Mod from my special queue :3

[General]

Add Sony, Theme, Kanae Aoki, Daisuke Achiwa to the tags and remove the 3 because it's useless.

[Verdi's Easy]

00:03:956 (1) - This finish sounds too loud and bad, remove it
00:09:956 (3,4,5) - Why are you using 40% volume here? It's pretty weird to play, really o.o Because you used 80% volume before, then..
00:11:842 (5) - The 80% volume should start on 00:12:185 (1)
00:28:985 (3,4) - Mh these 2 sliders break the map's flow D: Also to have a better blanket between 00:30:356 (4,1) you could make them more curved and flowing:
SPOILER


76,188,28985,2,0,B|140:140|208:168|232:228,1,180,8|8
352,356,30356,2,0,B|260:420|204:344|196:316,1,180,8|8
00:42:699 (2,3) - ^ you still need to improve sliders' curves here :3 Also for 00:45:099 (1,2), I improved blankets and shapes:
SPOILER



396,84,42699,2,0,B|332:52|268:72|248:144,1,180,8|8
164,292,44071,2,0,B|244:340|308:272|296:224,1,180,8|8



216,224,45099,6,0,B|156:172|52:200|44:320|108:364,1,270,6|8
164,292,46471,2,0,B|220:339|323:315|336:200|264:147,1,270,2|8
00:53:328 (1,2) - I think your intention was to make something like this:
SPOILER


116,300,53328,6,0,B|72:248|-8:248,2,135,6|8|8
164,224,54699,2,0,B|104:168|24:168,2,135,6|8|14
01:04:299 (1) - You started this spinner following the vocal then it should end on 01:06:185. 1/2 earlier
01:17:671 (3) - I'd remove whistle adding a finish to match the cymbals, it's much better IMO
01:28:985 (4) - Add new combo removing it from 01:29:328 (1)

[Normal]

- I highly suggest you to use 0.8x spacing for this map because considering the low AR for a normal diff it's enough hard to play for beginners with 1.00x
00:06:014 (4) - You should move this slider further from (3). Beginners would think it's just 1/1 since you used the same spacing of 00:04:471 (2,3)
00:53:156 (1) - There should be a circle with a finish on 00:53:328, then, what about to follow this rhythm? Adding a clap on 00:53:671 (2) too obv:

01:02:756 (2) - Wrong hitsound here? I guess yes xD Remove this whistle
01:04:299 (1,2) - Finishes on these 2 sliders' heads. They'd emphasize the cymbals in the song
01:05:156 (3,4) - ^ This time on sliders' ends tails ;P
01:06:528 (5) - New combo according to the new sound? Removing NC from here 01:07:385 (1) would be better
01:34:128 (4) - To emphasize the cymbals in the song it'd be better if you remove clap using finish instead ;3

[Verdi's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:59:328 add don
00:59:499 (174) - remove
00:59:842 (175) - don
01:00:356 (177) - don
01:01:042 (181) - remove
Following all my suggestions above
01:00:014 (175,176,177,178,179,180) - d k d k d k would sound better

[Hard]

00:07:728 (3,4) - Improve the blanket :\
SPOILER

416,116,7728,1,2
468,68,7899,2,0,B|500:104|488:152|456:176|456:176|456:204,1,140
00:20:928 (2,3,4) - Mh you should remove all claps from these sliders' starts adding finish to match the cymbals instead, it's much better
00:41:671 (1,3) - Make them with more love çç
SPOILER

196,80,41671,6,0,B|224:40|292:40|316:84,1,140,2|8
256,128,42185,1,0
316,172,42356,2,0,B|292:216|224:216|196:176,1,140,2|8
00:53:156 (1) - This slider doesn't fit the song. You should use a circle here adding a slider with finish on 00:53:328 that follows the vocal:


[Insane]

00:06:013 (6) - I think this whistle sounds too loud D: remove it?
01:32:756 (5) - I'd move this circle to x:464 y:204 to have a better triangle between 01:32:414 (3,4,5)
01:34:899 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - What about to edit this stream's shape in this way? It's more flowing to play:
SPOILER

272,260,94899,1,0
232,240,94985,1,2
216,200,95071,1,0
232,164,95156,1,2
272,144,95242,1,0
316,164,95328,1,2
364,160,95414,1,0
388,112,95499,1,10

That's it.
The taiko oni doesn't convince me enough, and I'm not so skilled to mod it sorry.
I would like to see some more mods on it before to bubble s:

Wops, good luck >w<
BeatofIke
Sweet. Less work for me! :D
Verdisphena

Chewin wrote:

[Verdi's Easy]
everything fixed

[Verdi's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:59:328 add don I'm not following the voice here
00:59:499 (174) - remove Sounds strange for me
00:59:842 (175) - don ^
01:00:356 (177) - don ^
01:01:042 (181) - remove Same as 00:59:328
Following all my suggestions above
01:00:014 (175,176,177,178,179,180) - d k d k d k would sound better Same as Same as 00:59:328, sorry :s
Thanks
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/54686592/123.rar
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Chewin wrote:

[General]

Add Sony, Theme, Kanae Aoki, Daisuke Achiwa to the tags and remove the 3 because it's useless. Added.

[Normal]

00:06:014 (4) - You should move this slider further from (3). Beginners would think it's just 1/1 since you used the same spacing of 00:04:471 (2,3) Ok.
00:53:156 (1) - There should be a circle with a finish on 00:53:328, then, what about to follow this rhythm? Adding a clap on 00:53:671 (2) too obv: Ok, sounds good.

01:02:756 (2) - Wrong hitsound here? I guess yes xD Remove this whistle Oops, my mistake, removed.
01:04:299 (1,2) - Finishes on these 2 sliders' heads. They'd emphasize the cymbals in the song Ok.
01:05:156 (3,4) - ^ This time on sliders' ends tails ;P Ok.
01:06:528 (5) - New combo according to the new sound? Removing NC from here 01:07:385 (1) would be better Added NC, but didn't remove the one from the next note.
01:34:128 (4) - To emphasize the cymbals in the song it'd be better if you remove clap using finish instead ;3 Added Finish.

[Hard]

00:07:728 (3,4) - Improve the blanket :\ Done.
SPOILER

416,116,7728,1,2
468,68,7899,2,0,B|500:104|488:152|456:176|456:176|456:204,1,140
00:20:928 (2,3,4) - Mh you should remove all claps from these sliders' starts adding finish to match the cymbals instead, it's much better I think these notes sounds good enough with Claps only.
00:41:671 (1,3) - Make them with more love çç I didn't want to use a different spacing there, but well, seems better like you did, done.
SPOILER

196,80,41671,6,0,B|224:40|292:40|316:84,1,140,2|8
256,128,42185,1,0
316,172,42356,2,0,B|292:216|224:216|196:176,1,140,2|8
00:53:156 (1) - This slider doesn't fit the song. You should use a circle here adding a slider with finish on 00:53:328 that follows the vocal: Ok.


[Insane]

00:06:013 (6) - I think this whistle sounds too loud D: remove it? It's nice following the bass, there is a whistle there in my other diffs.
01:32:756 (5) - I'd move this circle to x:464 y:204 to have a better triangle between 01:32:414 (3,4,5) I improved this pattern in a different way.
01:34:899 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - What about to edit this stream's shape in this way? It's more flowing to play: I prefer the way I did.
SPOILER

272,260,94899,1,0
232,240,94985,1,2
216,200,95071,1,0
232,164,95156,1,2
272,144,95242,1,0
316,164,95328,1,2
364,160,95414,1,0
388,112,95499,1,10
Thank you pro <3

All updated.
kanpakyin
Taiko mod here:

[Timing]
  1. I had tested the offset again and found that offset: 1209 fit the song very well as it spot on very drum spot. (I got 0~2ms late when using this offset.)
[Verdi's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:01:214 (1) - I would change this to don if I were you because the vocal pitch here is same as 00:01:556 - , so make it to kat for consistency.
  2. 00:02:928 (6,7) - I would suggest moving 00:02:928 (6) - to 00:03:099 - and then remove (7)- because I can see you are following the vocal in this part, so you can also put a note at 00:02:756 - if you like.
  3. 00:07:385 (16,17) - How about changing these to kat so that it can make a contrast with 00:01:899 (3,4) - .
  4. 00:08:414 (19) - Same as 00:02:928-
  5. 00:19:214 (x) - I would a note here sounds cool.
  6. 00:28:128 (70,71) - I would suggest dk here if you want to follow the drum sound, kd is quite weird for me.
  7. 00:28:985 (73) - A kat here?
  8. 00:30:356 (78) - ^Add a kat here if you change previous suggestion.
  9. 00:39:099 (102,103) - Same as 00:28:128
  10. 01:13:728 (28) - I think big kat here fits the song better because the pitch at 01:14:414 (29) - is lower than here, so kat here can make a contrast with (29)-
  11. 01:27:956 (70,71,72) - Please remove the finish here if poiisble because there are no any kind of finish or extremely strong emotions, so I don't think finish can fit the song well.
  12. 01:32:071 (84) - A finish could be added here because of the accent from background music.
[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:01:214 (1) - Same as muzu.
  2. 00:07:385 (1,1) - ^
  3. 00:08:928 (1,1,1) - I don't think a triplet fits the music here because there are no drum sounds present there, only have guitar's protraction is not enough for fitting the triplet.
  4. 00:11:156 (1,1,1) - Neither accent nor strong emotions present here, so remove the finish is the best way to fit the music.
  5. 00:19:728 (1,1,1,1) - d ddk here sounds nice to me.
  6. 00:28:128 (1,1) - Same as muzu, d K would be nice here.
  7. 00:42:528 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I wanna to say these triplet don't fit the music that much. I prefer simple 1/2 here.
  8. 00:44:414 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - hum, what does this stream follows? I'm sure they follow neither drums nor vocal.
  9. 01:17:671 (172) - Same as 00:11:1560- remove the finish would be nice or even change it to kat if you want.
Good luck.
Verdisphena

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[Timing]
  1. I had tested the offset again and found that offset: 1209 fit the song very well as it spot on very drum spot. (I got 0~2ms late when using this offset.)
[Verdi's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:01:214 (1) - I would change this to don if I were you because the vocal pitch here is same as 00:01:556 - , so make it to kat for consistency. Don sounds better than kat here, I'll skip this
  2. 00:02:928 (6,7) - I would suggest moving 00:02:928 (6) - to 00:03:099 - and then remove (7)- because I can see you are following the vocal in this part, so you can also put a note at 00:02:756 - if you like. okay
  3. 00:07:385 (16,17) - How about changing these to kat so that it can make a contrast with 00:01:899 (3,4) - .ok
  4. 00:08:414 (19) - Same as 00:02:928- <:
  5. 00:19:214 (x) - I would a note here sounds cool. ye
  6. 00:28:128 (70,71) - I would suggest dk here if you want to follow the drum sound, kd is quite weird for me. dk sounds strange for me
  7. 00:28:985 (73) - A kat here? no thx
  8. 00:30:356 (78) - ^Add a kat here if you change previous suggestion. ^
  9. 00:39:099 (102,103) - Same as 00:28:128 Same answer
  10. 01:13:728 (28) - I think big kat here fits the song better because the pitch at 01:14:414 (29) - is lower than here, so kat here can make a contrast with (29)- I prefer the big don here
  11. 01:27:956 (70,71,72) - Please remove the finish here if poiisble because there are no any kind of finish or extremely strong emotions, so I don't think finish can fit the song well. okay
  12. 01:32:071 (84) - A finish could be added here because of the accent from background music. Sure
[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:01:214 (1) - Same as muzu. no thanks D:
  2. 00:07:385 (1,1) - ^ ^
  3. 00:08:928 (1,1,1) - I don't think a triplet fits the music here because there are no drum sounds present there, only have guitar's protraction is not enough for fitting the triplet. Triplet deleted <:
  4. 00:11:156 (1,1,1) - Neither accent nor strong emotions present here, so remove the finish is the best way to fit the music. okay
  5. 00:19:728 (1,1,1,1) - d ddk here sounds nice to me. Ye, d ddk sounds better
  6. 00:28:128 (1,1) - Same as muzu, d K would be nice here. Sounds strange for me D:
  7. 00:42:528 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I wanna to say these triplet don't fit the music that much. I prefer simple 1/2 here. okay
  8. 00:44:414 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - hum, what does this stream follows? I'm sure they follow neither drums nor vocal. stream deleted
  9. 01:17:671 (172) - Same as 00:11:1560- remove the finish would be nice or even change it to kat if you want. sure
Good luck.
Thanks again, kanpakyin :3
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/54686592/464.rar
BeatofIke

Darksonic wrote:

No mod for me :(?
lol don't worry, my mod will appear soon. :P
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Updated.

BeatofIke wrote:

lol don't worry, my mod will appear soon. :P
Yeah I know, I'll be waiting for it :p
pieguyn
sorry for huge delay >_<

General:

-maybe copy soft slidertick and use that in place of normal slidertick? since for this song, normal slidertick seems a bit loud IMO :?

Verdi's Easy:

00:09:956 (3,4,5) - add finish on start? or do something like in Normal diff

Normal: fine

Hard:

01:15:271 (1,2,3,4) - maybe it's a bit confusing, since for (1,2) it's a 1/2 note, but for (3,4), it's not o.o
01:26:242 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:15:271 (1,2,3,4)

Insane: fine orz
sorry for such a huge delay and then such a poor mod. lol
nice map, good luck :P
Topic Starter
Darksonic

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-maybe copy soft slidertick and use that in place of normal slidertick? since for this song, normal slidertick seems a bit loud IMO :? Nah, it's ok for me.

Normal: fine

Hard:

01:15:271 (1,2,3,4) - maybe it's a bit confusing, since for (1,2) it's a 1/2 note, but for (3,4), it's not o.o I think this is not confusing in a Hard diff.
01:26:242 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:15:271 (1,2,3,4) I think this is not confusing in a Hard diff.

Insane: fine orz
No changes, waiting for Verdi's answer. Thank you!
BeatofIke
Mod Request. Here's what I've found:

General
-> All clear!

Verdi's Easy
00:05:328 (2) - The finish at the end of the slider is too loud and it doesn't match the music well. Create a green timing section and reduce the finishes volume.
00:10:642 (4) - I hear a low-volume finish here. Add finish here too but with lower volume than normal.

Normal
00:28:128 (1,2) - I'm a bit iffy about this pattern. It doesn't look like a novice player would sight read that.
00:45:785 (2,3,4) - You should make these sliders equally spaced. It flows with the music better.
01:00:871 (6,1) - Bad polarity here.

Hard
-> Looks fine.

Insane
00:09:956 (3,4) - Try to see if you can blanklet this better.

That's it! Nothig much to say here.
Topic Starter
Darksonic

BeatofIke wrote:

Normal
00:28:128 (1,2) - I'm a bit iffy about this pattern. It doesn't look like a novice player would sight read that. Changed it.
00:45:785 (2,3,4) - You should make these sliders equally spaced. It flows with the music better. That's the best I can do due to the spacing.
01:00:871 (6,1) - Bad polarity here. I don't know what you mean.

Hard
-> Looks fine.

Insane
00:09:956 (3,4) - Try to see if you can blanklet this better. Done.
Thanks for modding!
Melophobia
Hi~

every placement looks ok to me, some hitsound suggestion :3

[General]
Easy and Taiko Muzukashii have different tags. please make them the same in all diffs
the size of the video file is too big. would be best if you could make it less than 10MB
also, video offset should be 300 or so

[Insane]
00:28:299 - soft finish is better here
00:33:356 (2,3,4) - claps would be great here
00:33:785 (5) - i dont think finish+clap sounds that good. it's better to remove clap
00:39:271 (2) - soft finish will fit music best
00:44:328 (2,3) - claps
00:44:756 - finish here instead of clap
00:47:842 (3,4) - looking a bit messy imo. can you make them more symmetrical?
01:01:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - soft sampleset is better here imo. refer to this diff if you like~
http://puu.sh/12Lma
01:28:642 (3) - finish

[Hard]
00:28:299 - soft finish is better here
00:33:442 - 00:33:614 - add claps
00:39:271 - soft finish here~
00:44:756 (8) - add finish here instead of clap
00:44:328 - 00:44:414 - add claps
01:01:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Insane
01:28:642 (3) - finish
01:32:071 - ^

[Normal]
HD4 works well and will be more consistent with other diffs.
00:28:299 - i'd prefer soft finish here ==/
00:33:442 (5) - clap?
00:33:785 (6) - finish~
00:36:699 (1) - ^
00:44:756 - ^
01:02:071 (1,2,3) - same as Insane
01:32:071 (1) - finish
01:34:471 (1) - ^

[Easy]
00:09:956 - finish sounds nice here
00:10:642 - ^
00:44:756 - ^
01:28:985 (4,1) - switch these newcombo due to the end of kiai time?
01:32:071 - finish
01:34:128 - ^
01:36:356 - ^
01:40:128 (1) - this spinner should start at 01:39:956 - or 01:40:299 - because it appears sooner than 01:39:956 - and may be confusing for beginners.
catchy hitsound xD but works very well and sounds good


that's it, good luck~
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Easy and Taiko Muzukashii have different tags. please make them the same in all diffs My mistake, fixed.
the size of the video file is too big. would be best if you could make it less than 10MB Hmm, I will see this later.
also, video offset should be 300 or so

[Insane]
00:28:299 - soft finish is better here Ok.
00:33:356 (2,3,4) - claps would be great here Yeah, sounds good.
00:33:785 (5) - i dont think finish+clap sounds that good. it's better to remove clap Ok.
00:39:271 (2) - soft finish will fit music best Ok.
00:44:328 (2,3) - claps Ok.
00:44:756 - finish here instead of clap Ok.
00:47:842 (3,4) - looking a bit messy imo. can you make them more symmetrical? Done.
01:01:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - soft sampleset is better here imo. refer to this diff if you like~ Yeah, sounds nice.
http://puu.sh/12Lma
01:28:642 (3) - finish Ok.

[Hard]
00:28:299 - soft finish is better here Ok.
00:33:442 - 00:33:614 - add claps Ok.
00:39:271 - soft finish here~ Ok.
00:44:756 (8) - add finish here instead of clap Ok.
00:44:328 - 00:44:414 - add claps Ok.
01:01:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Insane Ok.
01:28:642 (3) - finish Ok.
01:32:071 - ^ Ok.

[Normal]
HD4 works well and will be more consistent with other diffs. Ok.
00:28:299 - i'd prefer soft finish here ==/ I changed this pattern before you modded it, so now can't add a Finish here.
00:33:442 (5) - clap? Ok.
00:33:785 (6) - finish~ Ok.
00:36:699 (1) - ^ Sounds bad imo.
00:44:756 - ^ Ok.
01:02:071 (1,2,3) - same as Insane Ok.
01:32:071 (1) - finish Ok.
01:34:471 (1) - ^ No.
Really useful mod, thank you!
Verdisphena

pieguy1372 wrote:

Verdi's Easy:

00:09:956 (3,4,5) - add finish on start? or do something like in Normal diff Okay
@BeatofIke nothing changed, thanks

Melophobia wrote:

Hi~


[Easy]
00:09:956 - finish sounds nice here
00:10:642 - ^
00:44:756 - ^ no thanks
01:28:985 (4,1) - switch these newcombo due to the end of kiai time? na
01:32:071 - finish
01:34:128 - ^
01:36:356 - ^ no, no and no, same answer as 00:44:756
01:40:128 (1) - this spinner should start at 01:39:956 - or 01:40:299 - because it appears sooner than 01:39:956 - and may be confusing for beginners. Okay
catchy hitsound xD but works very well and sounds good
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/54686592/234.rar
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Updated.
Rotte
hi~

:arrow:General

please delete (Short ver.).


Easy

00:33:099 (3) - NC
01:28:985 (4) - NC
01:29:328 (1) - delete NC
01:39:956 (4) - spinner too close

:arrow:Normal

00:34:814 - add break time
00:37:556 -

:arrow:Hard

perfect!


:arrow:Insane

00:26:071 (2) - NC
00:37:042 (2) - NC
01:16:985 (5) - whistle
01:37:728 (3) - nc

that's all
i'm useless :?
Topic Starter
Darksonic

-[NYAN]- wrote:

:arrow:General

please delete (Short ver.). No, (Short ver.) can be used again.

:arrow:Normal

00:34:814 - add break time Not necessary since there are only 2 segs without notes.
00:37:556 - ^

:arrow:Hard

perfect!


:arrow:Insane

00:26:071 (2) - NC No, it's the same sound as before.
00:37:042 (2) - NC ^
01:16:985 (5) - whistle Doesn't fit imo.
01:37:728 (3) - nc No, it's the same sound as before.
No changes, but thanks for modding.
Verdisphena
no and no
SouthSergal
Taiko mod requested by Darksonic

:cry: TIMELINE DIFFICULT TO READ CAN'T COMPREHEND WHAT IS HAPPENING BECAUSE OF COMBO COLOURS :cry:

Muzukashii:

I don't see any problems at all! :D

Oni:

Centre Difficulty sliders.

my only complaint is the empty spaces, it's fine with the muzukashii, but here it just feels weird. consider improvisation! ^v^

but if not, it's still rankable and overall nicely mapped :)

good job~
Konei
Hai~


[Verdi's Easy]

01:15:271 (1) - Whistle sounds to loud for music to me, reducing the voulume may be better
01:16:471 (2) - ^
01:17:671 (3) - ^


[Normal]

00:12:185 (4) - the finish on end could be louder imo
00:18:871 (4) - Make it look like 1? Gives a more familar shape
01:22:814 (2) - I think you could pretty up this slider, you other sliders with this shape looks nicer~


[Hard]

00:44:756 (8) - This note is a bit hard to read due to the many hitbursts~
01:08:928 (6) - Should have the same shape as 1 imo~
01:20:414 (4) - This stack doesn't play good imo, unstacking it may be good~


[Insane]

00:06:014 (6) - reduce the volume of this whistle a bit?~
01:37:728 (3,4) - This stack is a bit irritating with hidden, maybe unstack?~


Bubble ready mapset~
Good luck for ranking!~
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Konei wrote:

[Normal]

00:12:185 (4) - the finish on end could be louder imo Sounds fine for me.
00:18:871 (4) - Make it look like 1? Gives a more familar shape Ok.
01:22:814 (2) - I think you could pretty up this slider, you other sliders with this shape looks nicer~ I rotated it a bit more to make it look nicer.


[Hard]

00:44:756 (8) - This note is a bit hard to read due to the many hitbursts~ Not a big problem imo due this is a Hard diff.
01:08:928 (6) - Should have the same shape as 1 imo~ Ok.
01:20:414 (4) - This stack doesn't play good imo, unstacking it may be good~ Ok.


[Insane]

00:06:014 (6) - reduce the volume of this whistle a bit?~ Nah, this has same volume as my other diffs.
01:37:728 (3,4) - This stack is a bit irritating with hidden, maybe unstack?~ No, fits better with the previous stacked notes.
Thanks for modding!

Edit: Verdi won't make changes on Easy so everything is updated.
Kawayi Rika
Checked map did a IRC mod and looks better now ~

Here you go :3


IRC Log
10:02 Kawayi_Rika: let me did you a irc mod and go to bed orz ;w;
10:03 Darksonic: fine :3
10:03 Kawayi_Rika: really tired ;w;
10:03 Kawayi_Rika: Insane :
10:03 Kawayi_Rika: 00:06:013 (6) -
10:03 Kawayi_Rika: why not move to center?
10:04 Darksonic: do you think seems better in the center?
10:04 Kawayi_Rika: yep
10:05 Darksonic: ok let me see
10:05 Kawayi_Rika: http://puu.sh/15RcD
10:05 Kawayi_Rika: try
10:06 Darksonic: what about this? http://puu.sh/15RdX
10:07 Kawayi_Rika: hmm, down 1-2 grid?
10:07 Darksonic: okay
10:08 Kawayi_Rika: 00:23:842 - add break time
10:08 Kawayi_Rika: 00:26:585 - ^
10:08 Kawayi_Rika: 00:34:814 - ^
10:08 Darksonic: o.o
10:08 Kawayi_Rika: 00:37:556 -
10:09 Darksonic: are you sure that break time will fit only in two seconds?
10:09 Kawayi_Rika: high hp will kill with HR player
10:09 Darksonic: well
10:10 Darksonic: fine
10:10 Kawayi_Rika: :3
10:10 Kawayi_Rika: 00:28:299 - this finish sound werid to me
10:11 Kawayi_Rika: change to clap?
10:11 Darksonic: finish fits better for me there
10:11 Darksonic: than clap
10:12 Darksonic: orz
10:12 Kawayi_Rika: ok
10:13 Kawayi_Rika: 00:47:842 - remove whistle
10:13 Darksonic: hmm
10:13 Darksonic: ok
10:14 Darksonic: done
10:14 Kawayi_Rika: 00:47:328 (5,6) - 256.308?
10:14 Kawayi_Rika: 00:47:328 (5) -
10:14 Kawayi_Rika: *
10:15 Darksonic: sure
10:15 Kawayi_Rika: 01:00:013 (4) - ctrl+r flow much better
10:16 Darksonic: hmm
10:16 Darksonic: do you think so?
10:17 Kawayi_Rika: yep ~ following DS boring
10:17 Darksonic: welld
10:17 Darksonic: done
10:18 Kawayi_Rika: 01:14:413 (3) - this too
10:18 Darksonic: hmm
10:18 Darksonic: that's almost the same DS with ctrl+r
10:19 Darksonic: but ok
10:19 Kawayi_Rika: yep
10:20 Kawayi_Rika: 01:27:956 - add whistle
10:21 Darksonic: sure
10:22 Kawayi_Rika: 01:38:414 (5) - Add new combo ~ because new vacal and parttern
10:23 Darksonic: okay ;w;
10:23 Darksonic: fits better I think
10:23 Kawayi_Rika: :3
10:23 Kawayi_Rika: 01:39:956 -
10:23 Kawayi_Rika: add a circle and spinner start to blue tick?
10:23 Darksonic: hmmmm
10:23 Darksonic: with finish=
10:23 Darksonic: ?
10:24 Kawayi_Rika: yep :D and center circle
10:24 Darksonic: well
10:24 Darksonic: sure ^^
10:25 Kawayi_Rika: going Hard
10:25 Darksonic: go :3
10:27 Kawayi_Rika: you know add break time all diff
10:28 Kawayi_Rika: 00:23:842 - likes here ><
10:28 Darksonic: yup sure
10:29 Kawayi_Rika: 00:46:985 (3,4) -
10:30 Kawayi_Rika: I guess should on 00:47:156 -
10:31 Darksonic: o.o
10:31 Darksonic: what should I do?
10:32 Darksonic: I didn't understand
10:32 Kawayi_Rika: http://puu.sh/15RCz
10:33 Kawayi_Rika: 00:54:699 (6) -
10:33 Kawayi_Rika: http://puu.sh/15RDA looks better
10:34 Darksonic: yep
10:34 Darksonic: true
10:35 Darksonic: done :D
10:35 Kawayi_Rika: 01:14:413 (3,4,5) - werid spacing orz
10:36 Kawayi_Rika: so add new combo 01:14:928 (4) - here
10:36 Kawayi_Rika: 01:15:271 (1) - Remove nc
10:37 Kawayi_Rika: 01:15:442 (2) - remove this circle and 01:15:785 (3) - add new combo
10:37 Kawayi_Rika: much better :D
10:38 Darksonic: ok I added NC, but didn't remove in 01:15:271 (1) -
10:38 Darksonic: 2 beats is not a problem I think
10:39 Kawayi_Rika: 01:15:442 (2) - i mean remove this
10:39 Darksonic: oh yes
10:39 Darksonic: I mean that
10:39 Darksonic: doesn't fit, because there is a guitar sound
10:40 Darksonic: so if I remove that will be empty D:
10:40 Kawayi_Rika: hmm,i just hope make easy playble here :D
10:40 Kawayi_Rika: Well, if you don't like
10:40 Darksonic: >w<
10:40 Kawayi_Rika: 01:25:899 (4,1) -
10:40 Kawayi_Rika: NC change
10:41 Darksonic: done
10:41 Kawayi_Rika: 01:31:042 (3,4,5,6) -
10:42 Kawayi_Rika: looks ugly try this http://puu.sh/15RNM
10:42 Darksonic: yep
10:42 Darksonic: I just did the same lol
10:43 Kawayi_Rika: 01:39:956 - same as insane
10:44 Darksonic: done
10:44 Kawayi_Rika: going Normal
10:45 Kawayi_Rika: 00:53:156 (1,2,3) - spacing error
10:46 Darksonic: oops
10:46 Darksonic: lol
10:47 Darksonic: fixed
10:49 Kawayi_Rika: 01:21:785 -
10:49 Kawayi_Rika: how about add circle to here?
10:50 Darksonic: maybe it will be hard with a circle there :o
10:50 Darksonic: buuuut...
10:50 Kawayi_Rika: well if you want
10:50 Darksonic: yeah a circle with clap sounds good
10:50 Darksonic: no no it's ok
10:50 Darksonic: I added
10:51 Kawayi_Rika: yep :D
10:51 Kawayi_Rika: Going Easy
10:51 Darksonic: yup
10:52 Kawayi_Rika: 00:28:128 (1) - Remove this?
10:52 Kawayi_Rika: 00:39:099 (1) - ^
10:53 Darksonic: sounds empty, maybe I can remove hitsound
10:53 Darksonic: it sounds loud
10:53 Kawayi_Rika: ok
10:54 Kawayi_Rika: 01:06:185 - mute here is too bad..
10:54 Darksonic: ok
10:54 Darksonic: increased volume
10:55 Kawayi_Rika: 01:06:528 - end to here and add finish
10:55 Darksonic: done x)
10:56 Kawayi_Rika: 01:28:985 (4,1) - Change NC
10:56 Darksonic: done
10:57 Kawayi_Rika: hmm, and are you sure this song have full ver?
10:57 Darksonic: it has :3
10:57 Darksonic: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xTkJ9tG4k-Q
10:57 Kawayi_Rika: yep :3 fine last check taiko
10:58 Darksonic: you can mod taiko too? :o
10:58 Kawayi_Rika: i just check taiko unrankble
10:58 Darksonic: ah sure
10:58 Kawayi_Rika: also change AudioLeadIn to 1250
10:58 Kawayi_Rika: better
10:58 Darksonic: taiko diffs?
10:59 Kawayi_Rika: all
10:59 Darksonic: ok
11:00 Darksonic: done ^.^
11:01 Kawayi_Rika: update pls
11:01 Darksonic: changed many things
11:01 Darksonic: nice mod :3
11:01 Kawayi_Rika: :3
11:02 Darksonic: okay updated
11:02 Darksonic: remember to post log
11:02 Kawayi_Rika: yep,i'll recheck first
11:02 Kawayi_Rika: wait a bit
11:02 Darksonic: sure :3
11:03 Kawayi_Rika: dl slow :<
11:04 Darksonic: orz baka net x.x
11:04 Kawayi_Rika: x.x
11:11 Kawayi_Rika: 00:46:985 (3,4,5) - no fix this? hard
11:12 Kawayi_Rika: 01:15:785 (3) - add new combo here and remove 01:15:271 (1) -
11:13 Darksonic: no fix on first
11:13 Darksonic: and the other...
11:13 Darksonic: hmm
11:14 Kawayi_Rika: 01:26:242 (1) - Remove nc
11:14 Darksonic: well
11:14 Darksonic: okay then
11:14 Kawayi_Rika: not fixed nc too?
11:14 Darksonic: let me done
11:14 Darksonic: let me do it*
11:14 Kawayi_Rika: yep
11:14 Darksonic: yes, i'll do that
11:15 Darksonic: 01:27:442 (1) -
11:15 Darksonic: Is NC ok here?
11:16 Kawayi_Rika: 01:39:442 (7,8,1) -
11:16 Kawayi_Rika: http://puu.sh/15SoM
11:17 Darksonic: o.o
11:17 Darksonic: not in the center?
11:17 Kawayi_Rika: looks bad in hard diff
11:17 Kawayi_Rika: center
11:18 Kawayi_Rika: 01:21:956 (1) - Remove NC > Normal
11:19 Darksonic: wait, look
11:19 Darksonic: http://puu.sh/15SrP what about this? :3
11:20 Darksonic: and done in normal
11:20 Kawayi_Rika: submit pls let me check
11:21 Darksonic: done :3
11:22 Kawayi_Rika: 01:39:956 (1) - no need nc
11:22 Darksonic: ORZ
11:23 Kawayi_Rika: stuff is fine :D
11:23 Darksonic: little detail orz xD
11:24 Darksonic: ok finally it's done x.x
11:24 Kawayi_Rika: yep let me finally recheck
11:28 Kawayi_Rika: hmm,sorry one thing again
11:28 Kawayi_Rika: 01:44:756 (1,2,3,4) -
11:28 Darksonic: orz
11:28 Darksonic: what diff
11:28 Kawayi_Rika: ctrl+j
11:28 Darksonic: o.o
11:28 Kawayi_Rika: hard
11:29 Darksonic: hmm ok o.o
11:29 Kawayi_Rika: http://puu.sh/15SBR
11:29 Kawayi_Rika: because of this :<
11:29 Darksonic: oh I see o.o
11:29 Darksonic: didn't notice that
11:29 Darksonic: nothing more?
11:30 Kawayi_Rika: 01:44:756 (1,2) -
11:30 Kawayi_Rika: THIS too
11:30 Kawayi_Rika: normal
11:30 Darksonic: yup
11:30 Kawayi_Rika: ok... i guess that's all
11:30 Darksonic: ok :3
11:31 Darksonic: check now :3
11:31 Kawayi_Rika: yep
11:34 Kawayi_Rika: ok ~ all fine now
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Thank you Rika <3
Kuria
gimme a needles XD
NatsumeRin
..oh it's already bubbled.

[General]
plz consider to remove those short breaks. You're trying to stress the drum sound, not there should be a break...

[Normal]
00:33:956 - add a note?
01:06:528 (1) - http://puu.sh/15UQF ? now it feels strange

[Hard]
HP-1
00:33:099 (4) - http://puu.sh/15USk now from the curve to the end is too short, plus you're stacking notes, it may be a bit ugly.

[Insane]
01:05:842 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/15UTJ maybe. this is similar with the previous group, i don't see the need to totally change the direction...
01:17:842 & 01:17:928 - add notes?
Topic Starter
Darksonic

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
plz consider to remove those short breaks. You're trying to stress the drum sound, not there should be a break... Ok...

[Normal]
00:33:956 - add a note? Hmm I think there isn't a sound that would fit with a note, and also makes it a little Hard for a Normal, so I prefer to don't add it.
01:06:528 (1) - http://puu.sh/15UQF ? now it feels strange Changed.

[Hard]
HP-1 Ok.
00:33:099 (4) - http://puu.sh/15USk now from the curve to the end is too short, plus you're stacking notes, it may be a bit ugly. Changed it a bit.

[Insane]
01:05:842 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/15UTJ maybe. this is similar with the previous group, i don't see the need to totally change the direction... Seems bored imo if it's following the same direction, so I prefer to keep this as it is.
01:17:842 & 01:17:928 - add notes? Can't hear something that can fit with notes here D:
Thank you :3
NatsumeRin
Ranked.
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Thank you so much Rin <3
ririco
Gratz <333
Melophobia
gratz!
Frostmourne
Gratzzz darksonic :3 !!!!
Kuria
grats bruno XD
Colin Hou
congratz!
[Yue]
Congratz! Bruno!!!!!
Gamu
(o'д')ノ☆゚*。Congratu★lations。*゚☆ヽ('д'o)
Sure
congrats Bruno :D
Kawayi Rika
Congratz! Bruno ><
Quilt
congratz xD
Andrea
Gratz Bruno :)
mancuso_JM_
Felicitaciones Bro!!! :3
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Thank you all guys :3
Buccakazu
:)
Mercurial
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Y Bruno se ha autoproclamado el mejor mapper de Argentina.

Congratz.
Verdisphena
o:
Mafiamaster
da da dada SHINING STAR ♪

This song starts when you start playing the game, then it replays every time you go to the world map.

Can't unhear it... but thanks for mapping this song!
-Nanase-
Good map
8.7,Why so low :(
I think this map is very funny :)
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Mafiamaster wrote:

da da dada SHINING STAR ♪

This song starts when you start playing the game, then it replays every time you go to the world map.

Can't unhear it... but thanks for mapping this song!
Haha, I really enjoyed mapping this ^^

-Nanase- wrote:

Good map
8.7,Why so low :(
I think this map is very funny :)
Well, trolls or haters that rate 1 to the map, you know. Thanks, glad you like it :3
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