CDFA wrote:

Also, don't kudosu this or I will send a panda to not cuddle you, but in your source, it should be "Dream High", I'm guessing. Right now, it's "Dream high"

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q ^.^

Collab

00:29:863(5) - make this slider so http://puu.sh/Ab3f look better Oke~
00:32:225 - add note Asdasd XD
00:57:146 - ^ Oke~
01:08:367 - ^ Oke~
01:13:091 - delete this note Nope
01:15:690(8,1) - unstack this o.o?
02:11:910 - add note Nop
02:21:359 -add note with new combo Nope~
02:59:154(4,5) - correct spacing
03:13:091(1,2) - stack better Oke~
03:15:926(8) - NC bcz change speed Fixed

Normal

HD and OD -1 nope~

01:04:587 - maybe add note Nop~
01:04:823 - make this slider double nop~


Easy is good ~~ good luck ^^

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there~

Easy:

00:10:020 (1) - remove NC? Oke
00:11:438 (2) - too close to (1) Nope
00:11:910 (3) - add NC? Oke
00:20:886 (3) - too close to (2) Nope

Normal:

00:13:564 - add note? Nope
01:05:768 - add note? Nope
01:53:485 (1) - try it like this? http://puu.sh/AyV7 Oke
02:54:430 (1) - too close to (2) So?
02:58:209 (5) - add NC? Oke

Collab:

00:19:942 (6) - add whistle on end? mmm... Oke
00:57:264 (1) - 1/4 jump seems quite out of nowhere IMO, perhaps move the stream so it's spaced normally?

nice map

HelloSCV wrote:

LoL Korean song! xD I love this song because i'm korean too ♥
Frome my queue
Everything is suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Easy
00:44:036 why make break time here? vocal steal singing Nope~

Normal
00:44:036 same as Easy diff Nope~
01:53:957 (2) - add finish sound in front of slider Oke
02:48:760 (1,2) - stack perfectly Oke
02:55:375 - add whistle? Nope~
03:24:666 reduce spinner's length on this time? Oh, fine o.o


Collab
00:39:784 (5) - remove whistle sound Oke
00:45:926 (1,2) - stack perfectly Oke
00:57:146 (6,1) - this distacne is purposed? it looks so hard @.@
02:00:808 (1) - NC nop
02:10:493 (7) - ^ Oke
02:14:272 (4) - ^ nop
02:45:926 (3) - gird level 4 : 3rd slider point move 1 grid up
03:17:816 (8) - NC Oke
03:22:304 (9) - ^ Mmm... nop
03:24:666 reduce spinner's length on this time? Oke

Song and beatmap both are nice xD good luck star'd
I'll wait this song be ranked

Quiz-chan wrote:

You asked for mod, you got a mod.

[General]

See below. >.>

[Easy]

00:17:579 (5) - y=168 to y=152? Nope~
00:27:028 (2) - New combo here instead of (1)? Why?
00:57:264 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:01:044 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:08:603 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:16:162 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:33:170 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:57:737 (2) - ^ Nope~
02:01:517 (2) - ^ Nope~
03:01:989 (2) - ^ No. =_=
03:05:768 (2) - ^ No.
03:20:887 (3) - ^ No.
01:04:823 (3) - New combo? Why?
01:19:942 (3) - ^ No.
02:20:415 (3) - ^ No.
02:48:288 (4) - x=256 to x=248? No.
03:23:721 (1) - Shorten to 03:24:666. ok.

[Normal]
00:15:690 (3) - New combo here instead of (1)? *not again* ASDASDASDASDSA NO.
00:19:469 (3) - ^
00:30:808 (2) - ^
00:53:485 (2) - ^

These combo errors drive me crazy. Fix them A.S.A.P.

01:08:603 (2) - ^
01:12:146 (3) - ^
01:16:162 (2) - ^
01:27:737 (3) - ^

Soo.... many..... *_°

01:53:957 (2) - ^
02:20:414 (3) - ^
03:09:548 (2) - ^
03:13:327 (2) - ^

00:27:028 (4) - New combo here instead of following (1)?
02:15:217 (4) - ^
00:25:611 (1,4) - Revamp these sliders to perfect acres. oke
01:28:682 (5) - Move this one half beat forward (01:28:918) no
02:09:075 (3) - New combo...? nooo

[Collab]
I wasn't that harsh in Collab concerning combos.
But you can still correct them like above.

01:31:280 (5) - Move one grid up. Looks very ugly, even if it is minor. oke
02:39:312 - Consider removing "Clap" hitsound on reverse arrows.
03:03:170 (4) - This note is drown by the hit window of (2).
03:10:256 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/AU75
03:11:201 (4,5,6,7,8) - Moving in (5) and (8)?: http://puu.sh/AU7Z

That is pretty much it.


WARNING : Puush files will be erased very soon, so hurry!

Fenya wrote:

Quiz-chan wrote:

You asked for mod, you got a mod.

[General]

See below. >.>

[Easy]

00:17:579 (5) - y=168 to y=152? Nope~
00:27:028 (2) - New combo here instead of (1)? Why?
00:57:264 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:01:044 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:08:603 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:16:162 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:33:170 (2) - ^ Nope~
01:57:737 (2) - ^ Nope~
02:01:517 (2) - ^ Nope~
03:01:989 (2) - ^ No. =_=
03:05:768 (2) - ^ No.
03:20:887 (3) - ^ No.
01:04:823 (3) - New combo? Why?
01:19:942 (3) - ^ No.
02:20:415 (3) - ^ No.
02:48:288 (4) - x=256 to x=248? No.
03:23:721 (1) - Shorten to 03:24:666. ok.

[Normal]
00:15:690 (3) - New combo here instead of (1)? *not again* ASDASDASDASDSA NO.
00:19:469 (3) - ^
00:30:808 (2) - ^
00:53:485 (2) - ^

These combo errors drive me crazy. Fix them A.S.A.P.

01:08:603 (2) - ^
01:12:146 (3) - ^
01:16:162 (2) - ^
01:27:737 (3) - ^

Soo.... many..... *_°

01:53:957 (2) - ^
02:20:414 (3) - ^
03:09:548 (2) - ^
03:13:327 (2) - ^

00:27:028 (4) - New combo here instead of following (1)?
02:15:217 (4) - ^
00:25:611 (1,4) - Revamp these sliders to perfect acres. oke
01:28:682 (5) - Move this one half beat forward (01:28:918) no
02:09:075 (3) - New combo...? nooo

[Collab]
I wasn't that harsh in Collab concerning combos.
But you can still correct them like above.

01:31:280 (5) - Move one grid up. Looks very ugly, even if it is minor. oke
02:39:312 - Consider removing "Clap" hitsound on reverse arrows.
03:03:170 (4) - This note is drown by the hit window of (2).
03:10:256 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/AU75
03:11:201 (4,5,6,7,8) - Moving in (5) and (8)?: http://puu.sh/AU7Z

That is pretty much it.


WARNING : Puush files will be erased very soon, so hurry!

Ok, thanks.

mjw5150 wrote:

as your req~

[Normal]
00:16:871 (5) - why there is a 1.20x jump here lol Fixed xD
01:05:296 - you forgot your clap here~ Oops, fixed~

[Collab]
i think you should make some break for this diff like easy and normal,since the song is a little long
about the 1st kiai time,try to reduce the large jumps?seeing you have never make so many jumps across the whole mapset except here,although i can DT them easily,but i still think they are not fit this slow and relax song so much D:
00:29:154 (3,4,5) - nazi spacing,try to use shift+alt to replace 4 Oke
02:26:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - seeing you want to make a symmetry here right?but they are not symmetrical
02:34:587 (1) - remove NC here and add on the previous note? Fixed
02:53:721 (1) - why add NC on the antepenultimate note in this stream?if you think the stream is too long,i suggest putting it on 8 Fixed

have my star :3

Illumined wrote:

Requested from Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

　
[General]
None.
　
　

　
[Easy]
Good enough. Only one thing should be mentioned.
03:23:721 (1) - This spinner is with 127 BPM's 2/1 beats. I don't agree it's an acceptable length for Easy/Normal players. Oke
　
　

　
[Normal]
Some whistle suggestions, feel like lack of whistles
01:04:823 (2) - Add it at the beginning Oke
01:08:603 (2) - At the end, like 00:53:485 (2,3) - Oke
01:22:776 (4) - At the beginning nop
03:05:768 (2) - ^ Oke
03:09:548 (2) - At the end nop
03:13:800 (3) - Delete this whistle Oke

00:29:508 - Delete this section Why?
01:30:571 - Add a circle here, to match up with 01:28:682 (5) - Mmm...Oke
02:53:485 (2,1) - Spacing between these two are not equal. Just a little bit picky. Fixed

02:56:319 (3,4,1) - Spacing Oke
03:23:721 (1) - Same with Easy Oke
　
　

　
[Collab]
AR, OD both reduce by 1. AR7 is enough for overall patterns. Nop

Fenya
00:07:658 - Feel like should be something placed right here... e.e
00:21:359 (1,2,3) - I suggest to stack them up, so we can read it as a 1/4 rhythm. (Only this one) nop
00:29:863 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why none of whistle? o.o
01:40:256 (6) - Clap instead of whistle. Oke
01:48:997 (8,1) - Spacing Eh? o.o?
01:50:178 (3,4,5,6) - Rhythm :\.. is weird. Try this. Oke

02:07:658 (3,4,5) - Spacing Oke
02:09:075 (5,6) - Why none of whistle/clap? o.o?
02:21:831 (6,7,8) - Tricky one, although it's fine to me. o_o
02:24:193 ~ 02:37:186 - Just asking, do you agree for a rap-streams part for this song? I actually don't. But I'm not requesting for a remap here. Since it's the best part in this map. (Oh wow it's like bass2bass) Yep, it's the best c:

Kurisuchianu
00:42:501 (2) - Rhythm is too full on this part, suggest to remove this note. Oke
00:42:619 (3) - Plus removing whistle here Oke
00:43:564 (6) - Sliderwhistles doesn't fit this song, sounds noisy and nonsense, in my position, I'll try remove them all. Oke
00:57:264 (1) - Whistle at begining Oke
00:59:863 (2) - Whistle Oke

-Pikachu-
01:14:981 (5,6,7,8) - Feel like pattern could be changed. (Fix this spacing afterward 01:16:162 (1) - )Oke

01:18:997 (3) - Whistle Oke
01:34:351 (1,2,3,4) - 01:35:296 (1,2,3,4) - Just.. Not friendly :T

Miku
02:54:430 - Doubled sections
03:00:099 (6,7) - Oh first 3/4, nice.
03:09:548 (1) - Move this away from previous slider. Oke
03:11:910 (6,7,8) - Spacing Oke

　
　

Nice relaxing song~ Thank you for requesting

255,149,98

Suggestion..

1: 48|200
2: 96|168
3: 1st:126|120 2cnd: 112|40 3rd: 216|0 4th: 312|40 5th: 296|128

like this..

Kokatsu wrote:

Normal and Collab Mod from my queue <__<
I was quiet busy recently, that's why this mod comes so late, sorry for that~

[General]
Remove bookmarks from all diffs to make .osz smaller? Why?
I would move red timingsection to 6242 to take the opportunity (at least in collab) to set a note at 00:07:659 where the vocals actually start (if you change this, change it in all diffs pls.) Nope
Add 3rd combocolour? I would suggest this: Nope

255,149,98

Unused file "soft-hitclap.wav". If it was supposed to replace the default clap, you must change all soft timingsections to "custom1".

[Normal]
LEARN HOW TO MAKE A SMOOTH CURVED SLIDER Q__Q e.e
Normally, the kiaipart should be "more difficult" (it's a normal, i know <__<) but you are doing it vice versa. think about it
Your difficultysettings are not fitting for a normal. Decrease Drain and OD by 1-2.
Why do you start at 100% vol. and decrease it to 75% for the rest of the song? keep at 75% throughout the whole song (maybe kiaitime with 85%)
00:23:131 Remove timingsection Nope
00:29:508 Remove timingsection oke
00:08:131 (1) - 2cnd sliderpoint need to be at 160|16 1 grid, lol
00:09:548 (2) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 276|280 oke
00:11:201 (1,2,3) - this just doesn't look good. try to adapt the singlenotes to the slidertrail to get a fluent connection. oke

Suggestion..

1: 48|200
2: 96|168
3: 1st:126|120 2cnd: 112|40 3rd: 216|0 4th: 312|40 5th: 296|128

00:13:800 (1) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 268|296 So nazi, but, fixed
00:15:690 (3) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 220|72 Meh
00:16:871 (5) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 332|256 Meh
00:19:469 (3) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 152|248Meh
00:23:249 (1) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 124|224 Meh
00:32:225 (4) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 392|324 Meh
00:33:170 (6) - okay, i'm getting tired of this. Just go for gridlvl4 and make ALL CURVED SLIDERS SMOOTH q__q (and you basically have to rework 99% of the sliders) ~~
01:28:682 (5) - move to 01:28:919, remove whistle, add clap and adjust spaceing Nop
02:11:438 (6) - reverse selection and adjust spaceing. you shouldn't do this "tricks" on a normal Nop
02:21:831 (1,2) - you should use the same shape on both sliders, take 2 and copy/paste and flip it to get the shape for 1 oke
02:42:855 (1,2,3,4) - bit hard for a normal, don't you think? o__O replace 3 with a 1/2 slider and remove reverse of 4 Nop, I don't think c:

like this..

02:54:430 (1) - too close to previous object. You shouldn't do things like this in a normal D: So?

Mainly sliders, was too lazy to fix all of them but you know what i mean (i guess D:). Nop, I think that is so nazi c:

[Collab]
You should use the same overall vol. as in all other diffs. Keep vol. at one level, if you want, increase it at kiaitime.
01:51:949 this timingsection should be at 01:52:068 So?
02:54:430 aww, two timingsections here, remove one oke
03:23:603 this timingection should be at 03:23:721
Why do you use the same Slidervelocity as in the normal? Shouldn't the Collab be harder? (Higher velo should be part of a harder map IMO)
Fix all curved sliders in Fenya's parts, as mentioned in Normalmod e.e
00:15:217 (2,3,4,5) - this doesn't really fit to anything going on in the music. Try to follow the vocals here.
00:39:784 (5) - copy/paste and flip 4 to get the shape for 5
00:47:816 (1,2) - overlap, move 2 to 336|224 is a Hard ._.
00:49:705 (1,2) - overlap, move 2 to 160|144 ^
01:27:973 (1,2,1,2) - this pattern would look much better if you move 2 and 1 (the ones stacked on the left) to 184|288 and the last 2 to 328|272 Nope
01:34:823 (4) - a bit hard to read, consider moving it to another spot where you actually can read it D: Nope
01:35:768 (4) - ^ Nope
01:50:178 (3) - reverse selection Nope
if ^, then: 01:51:123 (5) - ctrl+j and adjust spaceing
01:52:068 (1) - if you reduce vol. here, then mute the spinner completely, this 40% thing is..meh :/
02:24:193 (1) - bit close to the slider, move to 172|112 Nope
02:25:847 (5) - curve? Nope
02:57:737 (10) - this combo is longer than other combos in the map. Maybe shorten it? Fixed
03:01:044 (1,2,3,4,5) - compressed? why? use normal snap
03:04:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:07:422 (11) - too long combo Fixed
03:19:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - compressed

That's it. GL on your way to ranked~

Fenya wrote:

Kokatsu wrote:

Normal and Collab Mod from my queue <__<
I was quiet busy recently, that's why this mod comes so late, sorry for that~

[General]
Remove bookmarks from all diffs to make .osz smaller? Why? To make the .osz smaller x__x the smaller the file the better
I would move red timingsection to 6242 to take the opportunity (at least in collab) to set a note at 00:07:659 where the vocals actually start (if you change this, change it in all diffs pls.) Nope
Add 3rd combocolour? I would suggest this: Nope

255,149,98

Unused file "soft-hitclap.wav". If it was supposed to replace the default clap, you must change all soft timingsections to "custom1".

[Normal]
LEARN HOW TO MAKE A SMOOTH CURVED SLIDER Q__Q e.e
Normally, the kiaipart should be "more difficult" (it's a normal, i know <__<) but you are doing it vice versa. think about it
Your difficultysettings are not fitting for a normal. Decrease Drain and OD by 1-2.
Why do you start at 100% vol. and decrease it to 75% for the rest of the song? keep at 75% throughout the whole song (maybe kiaitime with 85%)
00:23:131 Remove timingsection Nope
00:29:508 Remove timingsection oke
00:08:131 (1) - 2cnd sliderpoint need to be at 160|16 1 grid, lol
00:09:548 (2) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 276|280 oke
00:11:201 (1,2,3) - this just doesn't look good. try to adapt the singlenotes to the slidertrail to get a fluent connection. oke

Suggestion..

1: 48|200
2: 96|168
3: 1st:126|120 2cnd: 112|40 3rd: 216|0 4th: 312|40 5th: 296|128

00:13:800 (1) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 268|296 So nazi, but, fixed
00:15:690 (3) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 220|72 Meh
00:16:871 (5) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 332|256 Meh
00:19:469 (3) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 152|248Meh
00:23:249 (1) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 124|224 Meh
00:32:225 (4) - 2cnd sliderpoint at 392|324 Meh
00:33:170 (6) - okay, i'm getting tired of this. Just go for gridlvl4 and make ALL CURVED SLIDERS SMOOTH q__q (and you basically have to rework 99% of the sliders) ~~
01:28:682 (5) - move to 01:28:919, remove whistle, add clap and adjust spaceing Nop
02:11:438 (6) - reverse selection and adjust spaceing. you shouldn't do this "tricks" on a normal Nop
02:21:831 (1,2) - you should use the same shape on both sliders, take 2 and copy/paste and flip it to get the shape for 1 oke
02:42:855 (1,2,3,4) - bit hard for a normal, don't you think? o__O replace 3 with a 1/2 slider and remove reverse of 4 Nop, I don't think c:

like this..

02:54:430 (1) - too close to previous object. You shouldn't do things like this in a normal D: So? too close -> increase distance. Too obvious?

Mainly sliders, was too lazy to fix all of them but you know what i mean (i guess D:). Nop, I think that is so nazi c: I think it's necessary for a nice looking diff

[Collab]
You should use the same overall vol. as in all other diffs. Keep vol. at one level, if you want, increase it at kiaitime.
01:51:949 this timingsection should be at 01:52:068 So?
02:54:430 aww, two timingsections here, remove one oke
03:23:603 this timingection should be at 03:23:721
Why do you use the same Slidervelocity as in the normal? Shouldn't the Collab be harder? (Higher velo should be part of a harder map IMO)
Fix all curved sliders in Fenya's parts, as mentioned in Normalmod e.e good mapping is hard work..
00:15:217 (2,3,4,5) - this doesn't really fit to anything going on in the music. Try to follow the vocals here.
00:39:784 (5) - copy/paste and flip 4 to get the shape for 5
00:47:816 (1,2) - overlap, move 2 to 336|224 is a Hard ._.
00:49:705 (1,2) - overlap, move 2 to 160|144 ^
01:27:973 (1,2,1,2) - this pattern would look much better if you move 2 and 1 (the ones stacked on the left) to 184|288 and the last 2 to 328|272
01:34:823 (4) - a bit hard to read, consider moving it to another spot where you actually can read it D:
01:35:768 (4) - ^
01:50:178 (3) - reverse selection
if ^, then: 01:51:123 (5) - ctrl+j and adjust spaceing
01:52:068 (1) - if you reduce vol. here, then mute the spinner completely, this 40% thing is..meh :/
02:24:193 (1) - bit close to the slider, move to 172|112
02:25:847 (5) - curve?
02:57:737 (10) - this combo is longer than other combos in the map. Maybe shorten it?
03:01:044 (1,2,3,4,5) - compressed? why? use normal snap
03:04:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:07:422 (11) - too long combo
03:19:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - compressed

That's it. GL on your way to ranked~

Chewin wrote:

Hi, from my queue!

[Easy]
00:11:438 (1) - Remove NC here and add it on 00:11:910 (2) for consistency Oke
00:15:217 (1) - The same, remove nc here and add it on 00:15:690 (2) Oke
00:15:690 (2) - Spacing o.o? I don't see spacing problem. o.o
00:23:249 (1) - I would use a finish with 40% here, it sounds very good Oke
00:38:367 (2) - ^ Oke
00:56:792 (1) - Remove NC Oke
00:57:264 (2) - Add NC Oke
01:11:910 (1) - Remove NC Oke
01:12:382 (2) - Add NC Oke
01:57:265 (1,2) - The same ^ Exchange new combo Oke
02:01:044 (1,2) - ^ Oke
02:46:871 (1) - Finish with 60% volume Oke
02:52:540 (3) - Nazi but I don't like this slider. Just move the 2nd waypoint 1 grid up Oke
03:00:099 (3) - 1 grid up for a better symmetry with 02:59:627 (2,4) Oke
03:01:516 (1,2) - Again here, exchange new combo Oke
03:04:823 (1,2) - ^ Oke
03:20:887 (3) - Add finish? Oke
Good map, except for comboing

[Normal]
01:57:264 (1,2) - Still here D: Exchange new combo Oke
02:45:926 (2) - Move to x:368 y:168 to create a blanket with 02:44:981 (1)? Oke
03:09:075 (1,2) - Combo
03:20:886 (3) - Add finish? Btw this beat is unsnapped, and I dunno why AIMat doesn't say it. Snap it manually Fixed

[Collab]
Why so low Slider Velocity? <.< Since this is the hardest diff I suggest you to increase it
00:56:910 (4) - Delete this circle, it sounds bad and this part doesn't need a stream Oke
01:22:422 (4) - ^ Oke
01:35:060 you really need to add a circle here. It seems an "hole" for me Fixed
02:09:075 (5) - New combo Oke
02:12:146 (1) - Remove new combo Why?
02:21:831 (6) - If you want to place it here, you need to use New Combo. But if you want to keep the combo you should to move it elsewhere using distance snap. It's confusing Oke
03:05:532 (7) - New combo Nop
I think just this map needs more work and mod >w<

Then that's all, good luck with it :3

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~

[Collab]

00:18:997 - add whistle Oke
00:19:469 - remove Nop
00:19:942 - add whistle Oke
00:20:414 - remove Oke
00:21:359 (1) - ^ nope
00:21:595 (3) - add clap Nope
00:22:776 - ^ Nope
00:23:249 - add finishOke
00:29:863 - add whistle Oke
00:41:674 - remove whistle Oke
00:43:564 - ^ Oke
00:44:508 (3) - ^ Oke
00:45:453 (7) - ^ nop
00:48:997 - ^ nope
00:50:886 - ^ nop
01:01:044 - remove and add finish nop
01:01:516 - remove whistle Oke
01:06:595 (7) - ^ nop
01:31:280 (5) - ^ Oke
01:38:839 - remove and add finish Oke
01:50:178 - ^ nop
02:58:209 - remove nope
03:20:414 - ^ Oke

Others diffs are fine ;3

Lovelovelove this song<3 Good luck~ i hope you rank it!~

crabovan wrote:

Hello, I from my queue

General
All fine

Collab

Slider velocity too slow IMO

00:35:532 (1) - move to 00:34:587 (7) end nope
00:51:595 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - maybe make as 1 big stream?
00:57:264 (1,2) - little unsymmetry
00:59:154 (1,3) - ^^^
01:31:753 (1) - replace with symmetry to 01:31:753 (1) Eh?
01:38:839 (1,2) - little unsymmetry (0.01x) Fixed... I think...
01:47:107 (2) - replace with symmetry about axis Y^
02:26:319 (1,2) - little unsymmetry
02:39:312 (1,2,7) - claps there not in the rhythm
02:44:036 (5,3) - ^^
03:14:036 (3,4) - move little up

Normal

03:02:934 (2,3,4,5) - unfinished star? this is bad Fixed

Easy

All fine

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
"Beatmap by Fenya" try to make it fit the rhythm more

[Easy]
suggest AR+1 Nope
00:20:886 (3) - spacing So? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/351116 ?
00:44:272 - why add break at this place :< I cant understand
03:19:942 (1) - move to the below of sliders maybe better o.o?
03:20:414 (2) - spacing o.o?


[Normal]
HD-1 OD-1 Nope
Volume decrease by 10%-20% Oke
00:28:445 (1) - spacing Oke
00:44:508 - why add break at this place :< I cant understand
01:34:351 (6) - spacing Oke
01:36:949 (4) - delete finish Oke
03:07:186 (3) - spacing :< so?



[Collab]
00:13:327 (1) - spacing Oke
00:19:705 (5) - ^ o.o?
00:52:304 (1) - remove newcombo
01:06:949 (1) - ^
Nice :3
--------------------------------------------------
Great Mapset
Good Luck

SPOILER

In order to do that, just rotate (3) 45 degrees

192,240,126713,2,0,B|192:296|256:336|320:296|320:240,1,200,8|8

ouranhshc wrote:

[Collab]
00:52:304 (1) - remove new combo Oke
01:15:217 (6,8) - put these inline with (4) Fixed
01:23:249 (7) - [nazi] - one grid left Oke
01:26:556 (5,1) - put new combo on (5) instead of (1) Oke
02:05:060 (3,4) - try this inorder to improve flow? Fixed

SPOILER

In order to do that, just rotate (3) 45 degrees

02:06:477 (4) - [nazi] 1 grid up, 1 grid left Oke
02:27:028 (1) - remove new combo and place new combo here? 02:28:091 (5) - , and also remove new combo here? 02:28:445 (1) - Oke
02:34:587 (2) - new combo should be here instead of 02:34:469 (1) - Oke
02:45:926 (3) - like the following so the blanket is better? Fixed

just move the red anchor point 1 grid up Oke
02:53:367 (1,2) - new combo on (2) instead of (1) Oke
03:20:414 (6) - new combo here, and remove new combo 03:21:831 (1) - ? nope

Normal
00:19:469 (3) - extend to the next red tick? nope


Easy
00:36:005 (4) - [nazi] - 1 grid left Oke
01:35:060 (1,2,3) - can you make these blanket sliders look better D:
02:06:713 (4) - try this instead: Fixed

192,240,126713,2,0,B|192:296|256:336|320:296|320:240,1,200,8|8

Leorda wrote:

Yo


[Storyboard]
* You have a duplicate SB Mappers\Beatmap in right-side panel http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357118 I suggest you to remove the wrong one Fixed


[Easy]
02:39:312 (1) - Too soon from spinner for easy diff. It makes beginners are hard to reach this object Fixed


[Normal]
00:11:674 (3) - This slider doesn't looks symetry for me. Try to make it symetric? For me this well.
01:40:729 (6) - Move to X:256 and Y:256 for making a better pattern (Nazi) nope
01:48:760 (4) - Move 1 grid up for curve pattern (Nazi) oke
01:53:957 (2) - This slider doesn't looks symetry for me. Try to make it symetric? For me this well.
02:49:233 (2) - Stack with tail slider can be confusing for beginners.... Fixed


[Collab]
02:18:288 (5) - Remove the whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying Fixed
03:20:414 (6) - Add clap at head slider? Oke


That's all I got, good luck

-Bakari- wrote:

yo!
as requested

[General]
ticrate 2? Eh?
less loud hitsounds (i think - 5 or 7%)
make more combo colours? Nop

[Easy]
OD and HP Drain -1 Nope
for future maps: more work on shapes. i don't like some of your sliders Maybe~
01:55:375 (3,5) - overlap with hitburst. hard to read for noobs beginners Nop
02:38:839 (1) - after break this hitsound should be louder! whistle here :3 Added clap~
03:00:571 (4) - too short :/ So?

[Normal]
OD and HP Drain -1 Nop
clear

[Collab]
some beats feels like missed (example: 01:11:438 - ) :T
overall -good
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

pretty nice map. i don't really like your sliders, but whatever.. it's just me

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Use silent sliderbody hitsounds? o.o?

[Easy]
00:08:131 (1,2) - curve them to the same shape as 00:11:910 (1)? Fixed
00:25:138 (4,1,2) - ^ Nope
03:04:351 (3,1) - a little overlap Meh.

[Normal]
-1OD -1HP
03:00:808 (3,4) - change these two red tick note into a slider? Nope
03:20:886 (3,5) - a little overlap Meh

[Insane] "Collab"
00:21:359 (1,2,3) - I suggest to stack them, because player will consider them as rhythm like 00:18:288 (1,2,3) because of spacing Nop
00:40:965 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is better imo. http://puu.sh/Gfls Nop
01:59:390 (2,3) - the jump is weird since (2,3) are in same vocal Fixed
02:06:949 (1) - stack head with 02:05:768 (4)? oke
02:47:579 (3,4,5) - put in a line? Nop

That's all I can find. Star as I promised. GL~

Jebok wrote:

Mooooddd

[Easy]
02:48:760 (1) - Put middle box up 2 and drag last box 1 to the left. Nop
03:02:934 (2) - Remove, copy (1) slider here, uncombo, flick veritcally, reverse selection, distance snap and repeat. Also, how about snapping (4) up so that you can turn 90o the oval slider and put the next one in the mid of it? Like THIS Fixed

[Normal]
01:17:579 (1) - 1 grid up and 1 grid to the right oke
01:18:997 (2) - x:248 and y:112 oke
01:19:469 (3) - 1 grid up and 6 grids to the right oke
01:46:634 - Add a circle Nop
02:01:044 (1) - 2 grids to the right and 2 grids up oke
02:02:225 (2) - x:256 and y:104 oke
02:02:461 (3) - 2 up and 2 to the right oke

[Collab]
00:41:674 (3) - Repeat once. Oke
00:42:028 (4) - Remove if you repeated the slider. Oke
02:00:808 (6) - Copy (4) to here and turn vertically, snap (7) nop
02:08:367 (4) - Maybe shorten it to 1/4 and then repeat a couple of times instead of this, or change otherwise to make this part a bit more exciting?Ah?
02:15:690 - Don't think you should miss this vocals 'nu' so add a note here? Mmm ok
03:01:044 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing 1.2x like on other streams, its weird to change it near the end. nop
03:04:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ nop
03:10:493 (2) - Shorten (2) to here. Fixed
03:17:579 (7) - Adjust (6) to make (7) have the same Y as (3), (4) and (5). Fixed? xD
03:19:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing 1.2x Fixed

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

hi there, mod time via my queue and sorry for the delay lol

[General]
collaboration in tags? many map have this tag with the collab tag. Fixed

[Easy]
00:25:138 (4) - NC? if you do this, RNC on (1) and NC on (2) Oke
00:42:146 (4) - NC because in easy may not be over5 combo Oke
01:10:193 (5) - ^ Nope
01:31:753 (5) - ^ Oke
01:32:697 (1,2) - RNC (1) and NC (2) Oke
01:48:288 (5) - same reason why add NC as in 00:42:146 (4) Oke
02:42:146 (3) - don't add these sliders in easy, it's too confusing for beginners So?
02:45:926 (5) - ^ So?
03:00:571 (4) - ^ So?
03:11:438 (5) - same reason why add NC as in 00:42:146 (4) Nop
03:22:304 (5) - ^ Oke

[Normal]
HP and OD -1 please D: Nop

[Collab]
HP-1 D: Nop
Kuri, for you:
00:41:674 (3) - add clap (missed in your pattern) Oke

that's all i can find /me runs

Genshin wrote:

from modding queue:

[General]
i suggest u normal hitsounds instead of soft on kiai time

[Easy]
looks like ok, just few things:
02:39:312 (2,3) - why doing these 2 sliders with a squared bend while all of other ones are circular? Nop
03:09:548 (2,5) - ^ same Nop

[Normal]
OD 4
00:13:800 (1) - move this here 00:13:564 (1) - (timeline) Nop
00:51:123 - place a spinner from here to 00:52:304 - http://puu.sh/Ksl9 Nop
01:14:745 (7) - reduce by half this slider, stacks better with the rhythm http://puu.sh/KsmE oke
01:56:319 (5) - ^ same http://puu.sh/KsnV oke
03:05:768 (2) - move this here 03:05:532 (2) - Nop
...and add a note here 03:06:241 (3) - (something like this: http://puu.sh/Ksqr) Nop

[Collab]
AR 7 Nop
OD 7 Nop
else is ok

Good luck :3

Xin-Kun wrote:

[Easy]

00:53:485 (2) - Mmm no es muy estetico:



Asi se ve mejor un slider mas bonito :

SPOILER

01:06:241 (4) - No es simetrico
01:08:131 (1) - NC?
01:08:603 (2) - NC si haces lo de arriba
01:57:737 (1) aqui igual que en 00:53:485 (2)

[Normal]

01:16:162 (2) - iria mejor en x:256 y:264
01:17:117 (4) - iria mejor en x:256 y:112

EJM:



[Collab]

Fenya

Buen Trabajo

Kurisuchianu

Los sliders son buenos pero no son muy simetricos:

EJM:



Intenta algo asi:



-Pikachu-

01:14:508 (2) - Whistle

Kogure


02:39:666 (1) - Whistle en el reverse arrow
02:40:611 (1) - Whistle en el reverse arrow



Eso es todo Buen mapa Suerte

Good Job!!

Akashi_S wrote:

From the queue..

It has so many mods but it was in Korean, so O__O

[General]
MUSIC - OK
BG IMAGE - OK
TAGS - Seems fine

[Easy]
00:19:469 (2,3) - Spacing. These two sliders are too close.

[Normal]
00:13:327 - Add a note here?, if you do this, bring 00:13:800 (1) to 00:13:564 and add a note at 00:14:981.
^ This is just because I'm following Korean lyrics so you don't have to do it if you don't feel like it..
01:05:768 - Add a note here?
03:22:304 (5) - NC?

[Collab]
No thing that I can criticize for XP..

Good luck! And STAR STAR SHOOT!! Go for the rank

1. add "Korean Drama" and "K-POPS" tag
   BG "KBS2TV 월화드라마" ＝ "KBS2(Korean broadcasting station 2) Monday and Tuesday Drama"
   
   Artist
2. 수지(Suzy)
3. 김수현 (Kim Su hyun)
4. 우영 (Woo yeong)
5. 주 (JOO)
6. 택연 (Taeg yeon)
   
   pls fix artist name
   you have understood wrong

1. 00:21:359 (1,2,3) - looks like same rhythm to 00:18:288 (1,2,3) -. players might be confused, i hope fix this
2. 00:49:469 - add note
3. 02:00:335 - add note
4. 03:01:753 (6) - remove and add notes

1. Fine

1. Nothing to say

Wreath wrote:

sorry for late
cuz i has overseas travel

hello everyone
thx for modding

1st, im korean
2nd, but i dont know this song and drama, i will watch this drama lol

[General]

1. add "Korean Drama" and "K-POPS" tag
   BG "KBS2TV 월화드라마" ＝ "KBS2(Korean broadcasting station 2) Monday and Tuesday Drama"
   
   Artist
2. 수지(Suzy)
3. 김수현 (Kim Su hyun)
4. 우영 (Woo yeong)
5. 주 (JOO)
6. 택연 (Taeg yeon)
   
   pls fix artist name
   you have understood wrong

[Collab]

1. 00:21:359 (1,2,3) - looks like same rhythm to 00:18:288 (1,2,3) -. players might be confused, i hope fix this Ñeh
2. 00:49:469 - add note Nop
3. 02:00:335 - add note oke
4. 03:01:753 (6) - remove and add notes oke

[Normal]

1. Fine

[Easy]

1. Nothing to say

화이팅! (good luck)

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hey, Hey...

[Collab:]

• Settings:
--> El Approach Rate se siente alto, el BPM no es alto, la Velocidad de Slider es lenta, por esta razon el map se hace incomodo de jugar. Juega mucho mejor (ademas viendo que tienes Slowdown en algunas partes), si lo reducis en 1 Tick (AR-1) oke

Fen:
• 00:21:477 (2): *Empieza mi stuff acerca el Overmap* Esta Nota esta fuera de lugar, en donde pusiste la nota no actua nada de la cancion (escucha la cancion en 25% de Velocidad para estar confidente), el Overmap en los maps nunca es bueno. Asi que elimina esta Nota (Si queres poner algo en 1/4, donde debes agregar una Nota es en 00:21:713. oke
• 00:24:075 (4): (^) oke
• 00:29:863 (5): Definitivamente necesitas una Nota en el medio de este Slider para que se sienta mejor el Ritmo. Es una Hard, asi que puedes arriesgarte un poco mas con el ritmo disminuyendo este Slider hasta 00:30:099 y agregando una Nota en 00:30:335 oke
• 00:35:060 (8,9): Esto fluye mal, intenta hacer algo para que te quede (8) en la posicion que esta (9) y (9) en la posicion que esta (8) no
• 01:38:839 (1): Bueno, este Slider no sigue bien la musica porque no hay nada 'largo' que actue aca ni la voz, ni el Instrumental. Reduce este Slider en 1/2 (esto quiere decir que debes reducir el Slider hasta 01:39:075 y luego agrega una Nota en 01:39:312 oke
• 01:50:886 (4,5): Aca no seguiste el ritmo correctamente, el Slider tiene que ir sobre los Ticks rojos ya que ahi es donde actua la Vocal y luego la Nota para remarcar el Instrumental. Esto seria algo mas o menos asi: oke

SPOILER

• 02:03:170 (2,3,4,5,6): Innecesariamente Overmapped, Elimina (3,5) para evitar esto oke
• 02:06:949 (1,2): Aca que debiste usar un Slider en 1/1 usaste un Slider en 1/2 + una Nota, aca deberias usar el Slider en 1/1 como mencione porque la Vocal es larga en este caso oke
• 02:18:997 (6): No aumentes el Spacing solo para hacer un patron 'lindo' por decirlo de alguna manera, le quitas fluidez al map. Te doy una sugerencia, mueve esta Nota a x:472 y:88. Luego el aumento de Spacing entre (6,1) ni siquiera se siente, existe cambio de Combo, etc. oke
• 02:23:012 (x): Agrega una Nota, es una Hard, intenta mas variantes!! no

- Eso es todo con el Collab, se me hizo largo para ser solo una dificultad. Necesita mas trabajo el map en General, me gustaria que se coordinen mas para hacer un mpa consistente.

Ohh... I also did IRC mod in Easy and Normal with Fen (I started some sunday ago, and we finished today since we had more time to do so

Chatlog

22:00 Fenya: : Caqui?
22:01 mancusojuanmattos: : xD, empezemos :P
22:01 Fenya: : oke :3
22:02 mancusojuanmattos: : No me quiero poner exquisito, por eso no lo voy a mencionar sino estamos hasta mañana, pero 
22:02 mancusojuanmattos: : fijate overlaps feos y algun que otro Slider que podia ser mejor
22:02 Fenya: : okep
22:02 mancusojuanmattos: : acordate que tenes toda la pantalla para mapear :P
22:02 Fenya: : Bueno :3
22:03 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:19:469 (2)- 
22:03 mancusojuanmattos: : Elimina el Whistle del comienzo, anteriormente los Whistle seguian el Instrumental
22:03 mancusojuanmattos: : en este caso no actua tanto este, asi que es mejor que no este
22:04 mancusojuanmattos: : avisame cuando cambies (o no) las cosas :P
22:04 Fenya: : No veo la diferencia, pero bueno o3o
22:05 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:20:414 (2,3)- 
22:06 mancusojuanmattos: : No esta bien espaciado, pero bueno quizas pasa por la distancia en el Timeline
22:06 mancusojuanmattos: : :P
22:06 mancusojuanmattos: : lo dejo a tu criterio
22:06 Fenya: : Ñeh
22:06 Fenya: : Ya me lo han dicho, so, meeh
22:06 mancusojuanmattos: : lol
22:07 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:29:863 (2) -
22:07 mancusojuanmattos: : El finish al final me rompe los timpanos! xD, cambialo por un Whistle
22:08 Fenya: : Pero suena bien :<
22:08 mancusojuanmattos: : el Whistle suena mejor, si miras el resto del map hiciste bastantes cambios en los Downbeats 
22:08 mancusojuanmattos: : usando Whistle a veces y otras veces Finish
22:08 mancusojuanmattos: : en este caso quedaria mas acorde el Whistle
22:09 Fenya: : No me gusta :<
22:09 Fenya: : Pero bueno :<
22:09 mancusojuanmattos: : pero no te obligo, si no te gusta dejalo
22:10 mancusojuanmattos: : :P
22:10 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:36:005 (4)- 
22:11 mancusojuanmattos: : Siguiendo la voz, esto no es todo unido, como un 'aaaaaaaaaaaa', sino que es un 'aaa.. aaa' XD, no 
22:11 mancusojuanmattos: : se si me entendes
22:12 mancusojuanmattos: : por eso seria mejor que redujeras este Slider hasta 00:36:477- (Que por cierto es un downbeat), y 
22:12 mancusojuanmattos: : luego agregues un Reverse Arrow
22:12 mancusojuanmattos: : ademas va bien con el golpe en la bateria
22:13 Fenya: : Oke
22:13 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:44:272 (Break) -
22:13 mancusojuanmattos: : este break siempre me llamo la antencion, se ve random. No se porque, pero me gustaria verlo 
22:13 mancusojuanmattos: : mapeado. Pero es tan solo opinion personal :P
22:14 Fenya: : ~
22:15 mancusojuanmattos: : Buee... Sigamos con 00:55:375 (4)-
22:15 mancusojuanmattos: : Whistle al final?
22:17 mancusojuanmattos: : ...
22:17 Fenya: : Oke
22:17 Fenya: : Pasa algo?
22:18 Fenya: : Mancu, voy y vuelvo
15:48  *mancusojuanmattos is listening to (Dream High Cast - Dream High)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45271]
15:48  *Fenya s away: busy
15:48 mancusojuanmattos: podes?
15:48 mancusojuanmattos: y Holis :3
15:48 Fenya: CLARO QUE SEEE
15:49 Fenya: Holi :3
15:49 mancusojuanmattos: dejame ver por donde ibamos xD
15:49 Fenya: x'D
15:50 mancusojuanmattos: ahh.. si 00:55:375 (4)- Agregaste Whistle al final?
15:50 Fenya: Yep
15:52 mancusojuanmattos: 01:14:745 (4)- Whistle al final aca tambien para seguir tu patron de Whistles :p
15:52 Fenya: Ya lo tiene xD
15:52 mancusojuanmattos: no me aparece xD, pero buee
15:53 mancusojuanmattos: 01:18:997 (1)- Whistle xD
15:53 Fenya: oke
15:54 mancusojuanmattos: 01:31:753 (1)- Remove este NC, y agregalo en la siguiente Nota, sigue mejor la Voz
15:55 mancusojuanmattos: luego Remove el NC en 01:33:170-
15:55 Fenya: oe
15:55 Fenya: *oke xDç
15:56 mancusojuanmattos: no se que me pasa, pero este map sigue bien el Ritmo, no puedo encontrar otro tipo de cosa que no
15:56 mancusojuanmattos:  sea NC o Hitsounds xD 
15:57 Fenya: :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
15:57 mancusojuanmattos: eso es un punto a favor para vos
15:57 mancusojuanmattos: :3
15:57  *Fenya baila
15:58 mancusojuanmattos: 01:50:060 (T)- Se escucha bajo este Spinner, me gusta tomar como guia cuando juego un map el 
15:58 mancusojuanmattos: ruidito del Spinner :P, me gustaria que incrementaras el volumen en esta linea 10%
15:59 Fenya: oke
16:00 mancusojuanmattos: 02:00:999 (4)- Whistle al final, me gusta como los Whistle siguen el ruidito que aparece en el 
16:00 mancusojuanmattos: Instrumental :P
16:00 mancusojuanmattos: 02:04:351 (1)- Mismo que en lo anterior
16:01 Fenya: Mancu, cambiaste el offset? ._.
16:01 mancusojuanmattos: Hmm.. no
16:01 mancusojuanmattos: asdasdsa, 1ms no me jodas jaja
16:01 Fenya: asdf, np xd
16:02 Fenya: oke
16:02 mancusojuanmattos: ahh y le erre a un numero xD, era 02:00:099 (4) jaja
16:03 Fenya: Lol... Los escribes? ._.
16:03 mancusojuanmattos: me olvido que puedo hacer copy/paste con el cosito abajo
16:03 mancusojuanmattos: xD
16:04 Fenya: Aww <3
16:05 mancusojuanmattos: 02:08:603 (x)- Una Notra (con Clap) entra bien con la Vocal + New Combo en dicha Nota. El Stop es
16:05 mancusojuanmattos:  algo grande para estar en la parte del Kiai, que se supone que es lo mas interesante
16:05 mancusojuanmattos: algo asi para no tener problema con el spacing
16:05 mancusojuanmattos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425522
16:05 Fenya: notra
16:06 mancusojuanmattos: lol, Nota*
16:09 Fenya: okee_e
16:09 mancusojuanmattos: 02:19:469 (1)- Whistle
16:11 mancusojuanmattos: 02:22:186 (T)- Aumentalm le Volumen, al menos hasta (30%), Los Silence Spinners son 
16:11 mancusojuanmattos: unrankables al menos que esten en el final del map y sea realmente necesario
16:12 mancusojuanmattos: 02:24:193 (T)- En esta otra, reducilo hasta 50%, se siente alto como lo tenes ahora
16:12 Fenya: Si tiene sonido el spinner
16:13 Fenya: esta en 25% ._.
16:13 Fenya: Si estuviera en 0% te creo :B
16:13 mancusojuanmattos: yo lo tengo en 5% esa linea
16:13 Fenya: Lol
16:14 mancusojuanmattos: anyways, en 30% suena rico :P
16:14 Fenya: Suena rico :$
16:14 Fenya: okno xd
16:14 mancusojuanmattos: xD
16:14 mancusojuanmattos: bueno, sigo
16:15 Fenya: oke
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: 02:42:146 (3)- Cambia este Slider por un Simple 1/1, Remove la Repeticion y hacelo que termine en
16:19 mancusojuanmattos:  02:42:619 la Vocal da esta sensacion y Kick Sliders en 1/2 a veces son dificiles de leer para los 
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: Nuevos jugadores. Algo asi para no tener problema en el Spacing
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425527
16:20 Fenya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425531 Ya estaba hecho HAHAHAH
16:21 mancusojuanmattos: no me jodas!! D:
16:21 mancusojuanmattos: todo lo que digo ya lo tenias hecho
16:21 Fenya: No todo, pero varias cosas xDD
16:22 mancusojuanmattos: 02:45:926 (5)- Mismo que lo anterior, algo asi para no tener problemas en el Spacing
16:22 mancusojuanmattos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425532
16:23 Fenya: . . .
16:23 Fenya: Sabes que dire? xD
16:23 mancusojuanmattos: no me digas que estaba hecho porque te pego caqui
16:23 Fenya: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
16:24 Fenya: Oke xDD
16:26 mancusojuanmattos: 03:04:823 (4)- Whistle al comienzo
16:26 Fenya: oke
16:27 mancusojuanmattos: 03:22:304 (1,2)- No me gusto el ritmo que le quisiste dar, me parece que el segundo Slider se 
16:27 mancusojuanmattos: siente algo feo con la Cancion. Hace esto, Elimina (2), agregale una Repeticion a (1) y agrega un 
16:27 mancusojuanmattos: Nota en 03:24:666-
16:29 Fenya:  No me gusta :(
16:32 mancusojuanmattos: a ver esto http://up.ppy.sh/files/123456789145.jpg
16:33 Fenya: Asi si :3
16:33 mancusojuanmattos: xD
16:34 mancusojuanmattos: me olvide de una cosita antes (que seria lo ultimo en Easy)
16:34 Fenya: o.o?
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: 03:00:571 (4)- En los otros Estribillos y partes de los Kiai no tienes ningun 1/2 cuando la cancion 
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: suena como aca, asi que seria mejor que hagas este Slider de 1/1 (es decir, hacelo que termine en 
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: 03:01:044
16:35 Fenya: Mancu, no usas puush? o.o
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: nope, usaba pero no se que le paso
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: lo tengo que empezar a usar de nuevo :P
16:36 Fenya: Dale :P
16:36 Fenya: Ahora vamos con el normal? xD
16:37 mancusojuanmattos: no... me olvide de otra cosa aca...
16:37 Fenya: pff
16:37 mancusojuanmattos: jaja, nah joda. Normal!!
16:37 Fenya: GBJHFSDF XD
16:37 Fenya: Yo en 20 minutos tengo que ir a trabajar :x
16:38 mancusojuanmattos: asdsaads, apuremonos un poco entonces, igual el collab lo tengo que postear :P
16:38 Fenya: Dale
16:38 mancusojuanmattos: 00:13:327 (x)- Nota con New Combo (elimina el NC en la Nota siguiente)
16:39 Fenya: ah?
16:39 Fenya: ah
16:40 mancusojuanmattos: 00:19:469 (3)- Whistle al final en lugar de al comienzo. Suena ruidoso el triple Whistle con las 2 
16:40 mancusojuanmattos: Notas previas
16:40 mancusojuanmattos: avisame cuando cambies :P
16:41 Fenya: oye
16:41 Fenya: La que nota que tenia que agregar, le pongo whistle?
16:42 mancusojuanmattos: sin nada esta bien, pero si te gusta...
16:43 Fenya: :B
16:43 Fenya: oke, listo
16:44 mancusojuanmattos: 00:43:546 (5,6): Mejor si desapilas estas Notas, se siente mejor a la hora de jugar el map
16:44 mancusojuanmattos: 00:43:546 (5,6)-
16:44 mancusojuanmattos: asi era :P
16:45 Fenya: oke
16:46 mancusojuanmattos: 01:01:753 (x)- Agrega una Nota
16:46 mancusojuanmattos: 01:03:879 (1)- Agrega un Whistle al comienzo del Slider
16:47 Fenya: Mmmm, sobre la nota no se
16:47 Fenya: Luego me reclamaran por muchos tick rojos e_e
16:48 mancusojuanmattos: 00:54:902 - 00:57:028 - es lo mismo que ahi, y no te preocupes, conozco las Normal :P
16:48 Fenya: oke
16:48 mancusojuanmattos: el Circle Size es grande y no hay problema con agregar un par de Notas en los Tick Rojos
16:48 Fenya: oke
16:51 mancusojuanmattos: 01:49:705 (x)- Nota con Clap 
16:52 Fenya: oke
16:53 mancusojuanmattos: 02:11:438 (6)- Te olvidaste del Clap al Comienzo
16:54 Fenya: oke
16:55 mancusojuanmattos: 02:23:249 (2)- Este Slider no juega con la cancion, hace esto: Eliminalo, agrega 2 Notas (1 en 
16:55 mancusojuanmattos: 02:23:249- y la otra en 02:23:485-). Para finalizar agrega un Slider que empiece en 02:23:721- y 
16:55 mancusojuanmattos: termine en  02:24:193- 
16:58 mancusojuanmattos: 02:42:146 (6)- Whistle

No tengo mas nada para decir, solo que sigas trabajando duro y no bajes los brazos
Mucha Suerte y consulta para lo que necesites

Innocent Treasures wrote:

ya po loca, ponele weno a la wea

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mikumiku97

• 02:54:430 (1,2): Esto fluye mal, una Nota en el principio de un Slider no es del todo recomendado porque tienes que hacer el Slider y volver hacia atras rapidamente a cliquear la Nota. Si quieres Stackear, prefiero que sea al final de este Slider Yep
• 03:01:162 (2): Elimina esta Nota, es innecesaria ya que no actua nada en la Musica Yep
• 03:02:697 (2,3,4,5): Este aumento de Spacing es impredescible, me costo leer lo que habias hecho las primeras veces que jugue el map ya que la cancion no necesita aumento de Spacing en este lugar. Intenta reducirlo y mantenerlo consistente, como dije antes no intenten hacer patterns 'lindos' a la vista si fluyen mal porque al final termina siendo lo mismo Yep
• 03:04:469 (4): Elimina esta Nota, por la misma razon que siempre Yep
• 03:08:367 (3,4,5,6): Estos Sliders en 1/4 realmente juegan mal, no sigue algo logico en la cancion, sumandole que es algo dificil de seguir en una Hard. Deberias hacer algo mas simple en 1/2 solamente, todo seria mucho mas sencillo si motivo de complicacion Yep
• 03:19:705 (1,2,3,4,5): Elimina (2,4), ya que sobran en la cancion Yep
• 03:23:603 (T): Aumenta el Volumen al menos al 30%, el 5% es demasiado bajo pero la musica sigue actuando, no se corta en ese punto Yep
• 03:23:721 (Spin): Mapea este Spin, tienes buena cancion para hacerlo ademas seria mas consistente con las demas dificultades. Un Spin corto no queda muy bien aca. nop

- Eso es todo con el Collab, se me hizo largo para ser solo una dificultad. Necesita mas trabajo el map en General, me gustaria que se coordinen mas para hacer un mpa consistente.

Ohh... I also did IRC mod in Easy and Normal with Fen (I started some sunday ago, and we finished today since we had more time to do so

Chatlog

22:00 Fenya: : Caqui?
22:01 mancusojuanmattos: : xD, empezemos :P
22:01 Fenya: : oke :3
22:02 mancusojuanmattos: : No me quiero poner exquisito, por eso no lo voy a mencionar sino estamos hasta mañana, pero 
22:02 mancusojuanmattos: : fijate overlaps feos y algun que otro Slider que podia ser mejor
22:02 Fenya: : okep
22:02 mancusojuanmattos: : acordate que tenes toda la pantalla para mapear :P
22:02 Fenya: : Bueno :3
22:03 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:19:469 (2)- 
22:03 mancusojuanmattos: : Elimina el Whistle del comienzo, anteriormente los Whistle seguian el Instrumental
22:03 mancusojuanmattos: : en este caso no actua tanto este, asi que es mejor que no este
22:04 mancusojuanmattos: : avisame cuando cambies (o no) las cosas :P
22:04 Fenya: : No veo la diferencia, pero bueno o3o
22:05 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:20:414 (2,3)- 
22:06 mancusojuanmattos: : No esta bien espaciado, pero bueno quizas pasa por la distancia en el Timeline
22:06 mancusojuanmattos: : :P
22:06 mancusojuanmattos: : lo dejo a tu criterio
22:06 Fenya: : Ñeh
22:06 Fenya: : Ya me lo han dicho, so, meeh
22:06 mancusojuanmattos: : lol
22:07 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:29:863 (2) -
22:07 mancusojuanmattos: : El finish al final me rompe los timpanos! xD, cambialo por un Whistle
22:08 Fenya: : Pero suena bien :<
22:08 mancusojuanmattos: : el Whistle suena mejor, si miras el resto del map hiciste bastantes cambios en los Downbeats 
22:08 mancusojuanmattos: : usando Whistle a veces y otras veces Finish
22:08 mancusojuanmattos: : en este caso quedaria mas acorde el Whistle
22:09 Fenya: : No me gusta :<
22:09 Fenya: : Pero bueno :<
22:09 mancusojuanmattos: : pero no te obligo, si no te gusta dejalo
22:10 mancusojuanmattos: : :P
22:10 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:36:005 (4)- 
22:11 mancusojuanmattos: : Siguiendo la voz, esto no es todo unido, como un 'aaaaaaaaaaaa', sino que es un 'aaa.. aaa' XD, no 
22:11 mancusojuanmattos: : se si me entendes
22:12 mancusojuanmattos: : por eso seria mejor que redujeras este Slider hasta 00:36:477- (Que por cierto es un downbeat), y 
22:12 mancusojuanmattos: : luego agregues un Reverse Arrow
22:12 mancusojuanmattos: : ademas va bien con el golpe en la bateria
22:13 Fenya: : Oke
22:13 mancusojuanmattos: : 00:44:272 (Break) -
22:13 mancusojuanmattos: : este break siempre me llamo la antencion, se ve random. No se porque, pero me gustaria verlo 
22:13 mancusojuanmattos: : mapeado. Pero es tan solo opinion personal :P
22:14 Fenya: : ~
22:15 mancusojuanmattos: : Buee... Sigamos con 00:55:375 (4)-
22:15 mancusojuanmattos: : Whistle al final?
22:17 mancusojuanmattos: : ...
22:17 Fenya: : Oke
22:17 Fenya: : Pasa algo?
22:18 Fenya: : Mancu, voy y vuelvo
15:48  *mancusojuanmattos is listening to (Dream High Cast - Dream High)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45271]
15:48  *Fenya s away: busy
15:48 mancusojuanmattos: podes?
15:48 mancusojuanmattos: y Holis :3
15:48 Fenya: CLARO QUE SEEE
15:49 Fenya: Holi :3
15:49 mancusojuanmattos: dejame ver por donde ibamos xD
15:49 Fenya: x'D
15:50 mancusojuanmattos: ahh.. si 00:55:375 (4)- Agregaste Whistle al final?
15:50 Fenya: Yep
15:52 mancusojuanmattos: 01:14:745 (4)- Whistle al final aca tambien para seguir tu patron de Whistles :p
15:52 Fenya: Ya lo tiene xD
15:52 mancusojuanmattos: no me aparece xD, pero buee
15:53 mancusojuanmattos: 01:18:997 (1)- Whistle xD
15:53 Fenya: oke
15:54 mancusojuanmattos: 01:31:753 (1)- Remove este NC, y agregalo en la siguiente Nota, sigue mejor la Voz
15:55 mancusojuanmattos: luego Remove el NC en 01:33:170-
15:55 Fenya: oe
15:55 Fenya: *oke xDç
15:56 mancusojuanmattos: no se que me pasa, pero este map sigue bien el Ritmo, no puedo encontrar otro tipo de cosa que no
15:56 mancusojuanmattos:  sea NC o Hitsounds xD 
15:57 Fenya: :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
15:57 mancusojuanmattos: eso es un punto a favor para vos
15:57 mancusojuanmattos: :3
15:57  *Fenya baila
15:58 mancusojuanmattos: 01:50:060 (T)- Se escucha bajo este Spinner, me gusta tomar como guia cuando juego un map el 
15:58 mancusojuanmattos: ruidito del Spinner :P, me gustaria que incrementaras el volumen en esta linea 10%
15:59 Fenya: oke
16:00 mancusojuanmattos: 02:00:999 (4)- Whistle al final, me gusta como los Whistle siguen el ruidito que aparece en el 
16:00 mancusojuanmattos: Instrumental :P
16:00 mancusojuanmattos: 02:04:351 (1)- Mismo que en lo anterior
16:01 Fenya: Mancu, cambiaste el offset? ._.
16:01 mancusojuanmattos: Hmm.. no
16:01 mancusojuanmattos: asdasdsa, 1ms no me jodas jaja
16:01 Fenya: asdf, np xd
16:02 Fenya: oke
16:02 mancusojuanmattos: ahh y le erre a un numero xD, era 02:00:099 (4) jaja
16:03 Fenya: Lol... Los escribes? ._.
16:03 mancusojuanmattos: me olvido que puedo hacer copy/paste con el cosito abajo
16:03 mancusojuanmattos: xD
16:04 Fenya: Aww <3
16:05 mancusojuanmattos: 02:08:603 (x)- Una Notra (con Clap) entra bien con la Vocal + New Combo en dicha Nota. El Stop es
16:05 mancusojuanmattos:  algo grande para estar en la parte del Kiai, que se supone que es lo mas interesante
16:05 mancusojuanmattos: algo asi para no tener problema con el spacing
16:05 mancusojuanmattos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425522
16:05 Fenya: notra
16:06 mancusojuanmattos: lol, Nota*
16:09 Fenya: okee_e
16:09 mancusojuanmattos: 02:19:469 (1)- Whistle
16:11 mancusojuanmattos: 02:22:186 (T)- Aumentalm le Volumen, al menos hasta (30%), Los Silence Spinners son 
16:11 mancusojuanmattos: unrankables al menos que esten en el final del map y sea realmente necesario
16:12 mancusojuanmattos: 02:24:193 (T)- En esta otra, reducilo hasta 50%, se siente alto como lo tenes ahora
16:12 Fenya: Si tiene sonido el spinner
16:13 Fenya: esta en 25% ._.
16:13 Fenya: Si estuviera en 0% te creo :B
16:13 mancusojuanmattos: yo lo tengo en 5% esa linea
16:13 Fenya: Lol
16:14 mancusojuanmattos: anyways, en 30% suena rico :P
16:14 Fenya: Suena rico :$
16:14 Fenya: okno xd
16:14 mancusojuanmattos: xD
16:14 mancusojuanmattos: bueno, sigo
16:15 Fenya: oke
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: 02:42:146 (3)- Cambia este Slider por un Simple 1/1, Remove la Repeticion y hacelo que termine en
16:19 mancusojuanmattos:  02:42:619 la Vocal da esta sensacion y Kick Sliders en 1/2 a veces son dificiles de leer para los 
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: Nuevos jugadores. Algo asi para no tener problema en el Spacing
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425527
16:20 Fenya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425531 Ya estaba hecho HAHAHAH
16:21 mancusojuanmattos: no me jodas!! D:
16:21 mancusojuanmattos: todo lo que digo ya lo tenias hecho
16:21 Fenya: No todo, pero varias cosas xDD
16:22 mancusojuanmattos: 02:45:926 (5)- Mismo que lo anterior, algo asi para no tener problemas en el Spacing
16:22 mancusojuanmattos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425532
16:23 Fenya: . . .
16:23 Fenya: Sabes que dire? xD
16:23 mancusojuanmattos: no me digas que estaba hecho porque te pego caqui
16:23 Fenya: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
16:24 Fenya: Oke xDD
16:26 mancusojuanmattos: 03:04:823 (4)- Whistle al comienzo
16:26 Fenya: oke
16:27 mancusojuanmattos: 03:22:304 (1,2)- No me gusto el ritmo que le quisiste dar, me parece que el segundo Slider se 
16:27 mancusojuanmattos: siente algo feo con la Cancion. Hace esto, Elimina (2), agregale una Repeticion a (1) y agrega un 
16:27 mancusojuanmattos: Nota en 03:24:666-
16:29 Fenya:  No me gusta :(
16:32 mancusojuanmattos: a ver esto http://up.ppy.sh/files/123456789145.jpg
16:33 Fenya: Asi si :3
16:33 mancusojuanmattos: xD
16:34 mancusojuanmattos: me olvide de una cosita antes (que seria lo ultimo en Easy)
16:34 Fenya: o.o?
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: 03:00:571 (4)- En los otros Estribillos y partes de los Kiai no tienes ningun 1/2 cuando la cancion 
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: suena como aca, asi que seria mejor que hagas este Slider de 1/1 (es decir, hacelo que termine en 
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: 03:01:044
16:35 Fenya: Mancu, no usas puush? o.o
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: nope, usaba pero no se que le paso
16:35 mancusojuanmattos: lo tengo que empezar a usar de nuevo :P
16:36 Fenya: Dale :P
16:36 Fenya: Ahora vamos con el normal? xD
16:37 mancusojuanmattos: no... me olvide de otra cosa aca...
16:37 Fenya: pff
16:37 mancusojuanmattos: jaja, nah joda. Normal!!
16:37 Fenya: GBJHFSDF XD
16:37 Fenya: Yo en 20 minutos tengo que ir a trabajar :x
16:38 mancusojuanmattos: asdsaads, apuremonos un poco entonces, igual el collab lo tengo que postear :P
16:38 Fenya: Dale
16:38 mancusojuanmattos: 00:13:327 (x)- Nota con New Combo (elimina el NC en la Nota siguiente)
16:39 Fenya: ah?
16:39 Fenya: ah
16:40 mancusojuanmattos: 00:19:469 (3)- Whistle al final en lugar de al comienzo. Suena ruidoso el triple Whistle con las 2 
16:40 mancusojuanmattos: Notas previas
16:40 mancusojuanmattos: avisame cuando cambies :P
16:41 Fenya: oye
16:41 Fenya: La que nota que tenia que agregar, le pongo whistle?
16:42 mancusojuanmattos: sin nada esta bien, pero si te gusta...
16:43 Fenya: :B
16:43 Fenya: oke, listo
16:44 mancusojuanmattos: 00:43:546 (5,6): Mejor si desapilas estas Notas, se siente mejor a la hora de jugar el map
16:44 mancusojuanmattos: 00:43:546 (5,6)-
16:44 mancusojuanmattos: asi era :P
16:45 Fenya: oke
16:46 mancusojuanmattos: 01:01:753 (x)- Agrega una Nota
16:46 mancusojuanmattos: 01:03:879 (1)- Agrega un Whistle al comienzo del Slider
16:47 Fenya: Mmmm, sobre la nota no se
16:47 Fenya: Luego me reclamaran por muchos tick rojos e_e
16:48 mancusojuanmattos: 00:54:902 - 00:57:028 - es lo mismo que ahi, y no te preocupes, conozco las Normal :P
16:48 Fenya: oke
16:48 mancusojuanmattos: el Circle Size es grande y no hay problema con agregar un par de Notas en los Tick Rojos
16:48 Fenya: oke
16:51 mancusojuanmattos: 01:49:705 (x)- Nota con Clap 
16:52 Fenya: oke
16:53 mancusojuanmattos: 02:11:438 (6)- Te olvidaste del Clap al Comienzo
16:54 Fenya: oke
16:55 mancusojuanmattos: 02:23:249 (2)- Este Slider no juega con la cancion, hace esto: Eliminalo, agrega 2 Notas (1 en 
16:55 mancusojuanmattos: 02:23:249- y la otra en 02:23:485-). Para finalizar agrega un Slider que empiece en 02:23:721- y 
16:55 mancusojuanmattos: termine en  02:24:193- 
16:58 mancusojuanmattos: 02:42:146 (6)- Whistle

No tengo mas nada para decir, solo que sigas trabajando duro y no bajes los brazos
Mucha Suerte y consulta para lo que necesites

AkagamiNamikaze wrote:

Buenas--

Overall

El BPM de la canción es de 127. Las velocidades de slider no terminan de serme placenteras. Te recomendaría experimentar con 0,80x en Easy y 1,20x en Normal... implicando que Collab es una diff pensada para ser Hard, no Insane, claro.

Easy

Boring 1/1 mapping :v No sé, podías haber mapeado 1/2 al menos UNA vez, en stack, para que los newbies vayan mejorando... (?)
De resto, lindo map, 0 errors found, intuitivo, buen trabajo.

Normal

Muy bien hecho. Mis felicitaciones.

Collab

00:57:028 (4) - No concuerda con el spacing usado normalmente en esta sección... ¿Qué tal separarlo un poco? Ñeh, no le viene

02:02:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing inconsistente. Si todas las notas del tuvieran la misma distancia que 02:03:642 (4,5) - sería genial. No porque sea hard hay que poner jumps por todos lados, so, no le viene tantos jumps a la cancion en esa parte.

02:39:312 (1) - En ésta y en todas las notas parecidas, ningún instrumento o sonido en la canción original va a 1/3 (y no cuadra con las voces gracias a fue mapeado con reverse sliders) así que ¿por qué eso está mapeado a 1/3? Se escucha extraño y no termina de encajar. Sería mejor un remap de esa parte, siguiendo el violín... just saying. Ñeh

02:53:603 (1) - ¿Para qué el New Combo? :v Fixed

03:08:603 (3) - Aquí sí iría un NC. oke

03:14:508 (4,5) - Spacing inconsistente con las demás notas del combo... Arreglado~

Los errores son mínimos (si no inexistentes). Ya debería tener la burbuja al menos :v
Y me gustó la canción, so... *le da una estrella que no tiene) /runs

EDIT: Star ftw. (:

Static Noise Bird wrote:

Hi~

[Easy]
00:20:886 (3) - Move the second sliderpoint 1 left x:224 y:312 Nop
00:25:138 (1) - Just copy the next slider and flip or make curve better in other way Oke
00:57:264 (1) - Move second sliderpoint to x:296 y:64, and third to x:312 y:136 Nop
03:05:768 (1) - You could make this curve prettier Nop
03:13:327 (1) - ^ Nop

[Normal]
00:11:674 (3) - Move third sliderpoint to x:200 y:-16 Oke
00:53:485 (2) - Move second sliderpoint to x:152 y:80 Oke
01:02:934 (6,1,2) - Overlap, move so they won't be too close to each other Oke
01:36:949 (4) - Move third sliderpoint to x:432 y:16, and the last point a little bit up Oke

1. Slider Tick Rate 2 fits here much better. Check it with 25% playback and you will hear

1. -Pikachu- - 01:09:784 (4) - this slider feels off for me. personally i'd like to play somrthing like this (5) moved 1/2 left and added reverse. It fits much better
2. 01:11:674 (4,1) -Pikachu-- NC swap to follow vocals? It will give more reasonable comboing which is important for mapper
3. 02:03:642 (4,5) - Fenya - 02:03:642 (4,5) - don't you think that placing jump here is off music? It also looks like 1/1 beats. I strongly recommend you to place jump between 02:04:115 (6,1) - because it fits better
4. - K o g u r e - 02:30:099 (1) - are you sure about this new combo? It's nazi but i think this new combo is extra. It also feels off music

1. OD and HP Drain -1 - it's more common for normal diffs and plays better, imo. (and HP Drain 5 is a bit too fast)
2. replace some 1/2s with sliders? It will make diff easier. I want you to do it because Normal is a bit too hard now :<
   otherwise i have nothing to say about this diff. It's neat and well mapped.

1. 00:08:131 (1,2,3,1) - i don't like these spacing changes. They're hard to read/understand for beginners. Try to make spacing consistent
2. 00:20:886 (3) - same as above. at least try to point those spacing changes with new combos if you don't want to use consistent spacing.
3. 01:53:957 (2) - start of kiai section should have new combo! THis is best part of the song. And it starts really loud. Try to place new combo here, somehow
4. 1/1 notes almost non-stop. It may be a bit hard for beginners but since your bpm is quite low - i think it's ok.

Sample,36005,2,"soft-hitclap.wav",80

-Bakari- wrote:

Hello there. Quick mod because M4M with mancuso

[General]

1. Slider Tick Rate 2 fits here much better. Check it with 25% playback and you will hear

[Collab]

1. -Pikachu- - 01:09:784 (4) - this slider feels off for me. personally i'd like to play somrthing like this (5) moved 1/2 left and added reverse. It fits much better Oke
2. 01:11:674 (4,1) -Pikachu-- NC swap to follow vocals? It will give more reasonable comboing which is important for mapper nop
3. 02:03:642 (4,5) - Fenya - 02:03:642 (4,5) - don't you think that placing jump here is off music? It also looks like 1/1 beats. I strongly recommend you to place jump between 02:04:115 (6,1) - because it fits better oke
4. - K o g u r e - 02:30:099 (1) - are you sure about this new combo? It's nazi but i think this new combo is extra. It also feels off music Fixed

[Normal]

1. OD and HP Drain -1 - it's more common for normal diffs and plays better, imo. (and HP Drain 5 is a bit too fast) Fixed
2. replace some 1/2s with sliders? It will make diff easier. I want you to do it because Normal is a bit too hard now :<
   otherwise i have nothing to say about this diff. It's neat and well mapped Ñeh :c.

[Easy]

1. 00:08:131 (1,2,3,1) - i don't like these spacing changes. They're hard to read/understand for beginners. Try to make spacing consistent Ñeh
2. 00:20:886 (3) - same as above. at least try to point those spacing changes with new combos if you don't want to use consistent spacing. oke
3. 01:53:957 (2) - start of kiai section should have new combo! THis is best part of the song. And it starts really loud. Try to place new combo here, somehow oke
4. 1/1 notes almost non-stop. It may be a bit hard for beginners but since your bpm is quite low - i think it's ok.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

hope it helps o3o

Mythol wrote:

From m4m queue~

[Easy]
01:22:776 (4) - remove whistle on head? doesn't really fit here imo oke
01:45:453 (1) - whistle on head nope

[Normal]
OD -1? rhythm is a little difficult for this song
00:57:028 (3) - Add repeat here and delete 00:57:737 (4,1)? I know it's a lot to fix.. but maybe worth it! Fixed
01:01:753 (3,4,5) - I don't really like this note spam.. try adding repeat slider that starts 01:01:753 and ends 01:02:697 Fixed
01:10:729 (5) - Not sure why this note here.. remove? Nop
01:11:674 (1,2,3) - Change these for short repeat slider? I think normal diff with so many notes is not good.. Fixed
01:27:737 (3,5) - Remove them! Oke
01:30:335 (3,4) - Remove these for repeat slider that ends 01:31:280? Fixed
01:35:768 (2) - Remove this? Nop
01:40:256 (4,5,6) - Replace these with repeat that goes from 01:40:256 ~ 01:41:201 follows drum nicely :3 Eh?
01:48:524 (3) - remove? oke
01:49:705 (5) - Remove this and add repeat on 4! (don't forget clap on end) No
02:20:414 (3) - Add repeat? Nop
02:48:288 (5) - Remove this to map higher pitch instrument? Nop
03:05:768 (2,3) - If this spacing isn't intentional.. please fix~ Sorry, but is intentional~
2nd half was mapped much better ^^

[Hard]
OD 6 here for sure
00:46:634 (2,3,4) - Move 3 further away from 2.. this current setup makes rhythm hard to read this part :/ Fixed
01:27:737 and 01:28:445 should have notes.. I think you should map that instrument like you did here 01:29:390 (1) Fixed
02:03:879 (5) - This is veeeeeeeery bad! x.x please don't random spacing jump like this Fixed
02:35:060 - Note here to map the higher pitch instrument oke
02:39:312 (1,2) - Remove the claps on these repeats? Doesn't sound good at all to me.. same with the rest Nop
03:08:367 - Add triplet here on the slider Nop
03:20:178 - Add note o.o? if this is intentional, I really hate it :< Fixed

kpop is so nice <3

BeatofIke wrote:

Greetings Fenya! This is a Mod 4 Mod Request from your friend's modding queue! Be sure to thank him in advance.

[General Criteria]
-> All Clear. You're okay here.

[Easy]
-> Suggestion: Increase Approach rate +1? This is just my preference in setting the Approach rate to 3 on Easy difficulties XD. You don't have to change it if you prefer AR2, this is just optional. Nope
00:36:005 (4) - Why not add a clap at the start and the end of this slider? Was this intentional? You're using claps on every 2 and 4 white ticks and then stopped here all of the sudden. Keep the rhythms consistient until there is a change of rhythm in the music. Fixed
00:44:036 (3) - To be honest, I would prefer a 1/1 spinner (ending it at 00:45:926.) here instead of the circle. The break time here doesn't really fit here without this spinner I suggested imo. I also suggest to move the "Beatmap by Fenya" storyboard at 00:49:705 instead. oke
01:18:997 (1) - Move this circle 1 grid right, so it blanklets with the prevoius slider. Oke
01:35:060 (1,2,3) - I perfer a blanklet pattern here. Like this: Nope

SPOILER

288,136,95060,6,0,B|348:136|372:180,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,232,96477,1,8,0:0:0
304,328,96949,2,0,B|240:332|200:280|200:236,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:38:839 (1) - A whistle sounds better here imo. Consider replacing it or just reduce the volume of this finish. It's a bit too loud imo.Fixed
01:45:453 (1) - Same as suggested above, but it the end of this slider. no
01:50:178 (1) - A whistle at the end of this spinner doesn't sound too bad either. It helps emphasizes the bass.Oke

[Normal]
-> Decrease Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate -1. It's a bit too high for a normal difficulty. Although in older maps, I discoverd the HP5 and OD5 were pretty common in normal difficuties. I still recommend to reduce it though XD. Fixed
00:13:800 (2,3,4) - At least make this pattern blanklet each other symmetically >.< Eh?
00:35:060 (2,3,4) - Same as above. ^
00:44:036 (3) - Same as I suggested on Easy. Fixed

[Collab]
-> Pretty good collab. I like it.

[Map Comments]
-> Good map but there is one thing I like to point out: Why is your hitsound patterns different in the 2nd and 3rd kiai sections from the first kiai time? There is no change of rhythm compare to the first kiai time. I suggest you make the hitsounds in your 2nd and 3rd kiai sections the same as your first kiai time. That way, your hitsounds will be more consistent thoughout the song.

JauiPlaY wrote:

Okay, come for m4m. xP
They are just suggestions.

[General]
A .png file for bg may be a little big (1.2 mb), I've made a .jpg one for you. They looks same but the .jpg is smaller (752 kb). http://puu.sh/1hJnU

[Easy]
00:19:469 (2) - Ends on 00:20:178. Nope
00:22:776 - Add a note.^
00:29:863 (2) - Remove the whistle. Oke
00:36:005 (4) - Where are the claps? :< Fixed
The first break is a weird break part. Imo 01:24:193 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) should be a pretty nice part for break, but meh. Ñeh

[Normal]
00:22:776 - My suggestion is still: add a note here. Or it feels empty here. Nop
00:54:666 - Add a note. ^
00:57:973 - ^ ^
01:28:682 (5) - Move to 01:28:918. Nop
01:36:949 (4,1,2) - Spacing looks bad. :I
02:00:808 - Add a note. Nop
03:20:178 - ^ Yep

[Collab]
00:24:430 (4) - Ctrl+G and more fun. Yay :3
00:41:674 (3,4) - Remove (4) and let (3) reverse for more 2 times. Nop
00:45:808 - Add a note. Nop
02:03:642 (4,5) - Why here a jump? Fixed
03:09:075 (2) - Ctrl+G and more fun. Oke
03:20:296 - Add a note...you need to. Nop
03:23:721 (1) - Too short and not good for a spinner here. Consider to use some sliders or circles here. ñeh :c

Collab is pretty nice, much better than Easy and Normal. They are okay though.
Good luck. :3

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Fenya~

[Collab]
00:36:005 (0) - maybe you can add //Storyboard Sound Samples here. Storyboard Audio
You should just copy the soft-hitclap.wav from the templateskin, and paste in your map document (you don't need to change the hitsound) Nope

Sample,36005,2,"soft-hitclap.wav",80

This is just a suggestion, so you can ignore it.
02:33:052 (x,x) - add two note behind (7) (follow the lyric) oke
02:35:060 (x) - add a note (follow the music) oke
02:59:863 (2,3) - not so pretty Nazi, but, fixed

SPOILER

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470785

03:20:296 (4) - add a note here, xx_xx is a common mapset Nop

[Normal]
00:44:036 (6) - To break here is really strange. If you wanna show "Beatmap by Fenya",you can set break at 00:23:249 - 00:38:367. Nop
01:01:989 (4) - move to 01:02:225 Nop
01:06:241 (1) - I dont like this spinner, 1) it is a bit closed to the next note; 2) before it, there is no note at Downbeat. So, remove it, and map. Fixed
01:50:178 (1) - end at 01:52:068 Oke

[Easy]
00:36:005 (4,1) - spacing Fixed
00:44:036 (3) - like [Normal] Nop

I love this song~

wantuole wrote:

fromthisqueue
for M4M
I‘m late, so only say some easy find in your map
[General]
Collab have double line at start,00:08:131,remove green line Nop
[Collab]
00:11:674 (3,4) - no follow music Fixed

last kiai’s NC？I don't know why use so more,if you no sure,use NC at long white line.

[Yue] wrote:

Me gustaria ayudarte Fenya pero aun soy muy noob modeando ;______;
pero.. I give two stars! Hehe, no importa yue, gracias por tus estrellitas n.n

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

General
The break between 00:45:926 - 00:53:012 - on Normal and Easy is unnecessary, doesn't fit the music and breaks the flow of the map. Fixed later e_é

Collab
00:40:493 (6,7,8) - This stream is at the wrong time, it should be at 00:40:375 - , so delete 00:40:611 (7) - and add note at 00:40:375 - if you really want stream. Nop
01:28:682 (1) - Remove new combo. oke
02:33:406 (1) - Delete this slider and add note at 02:33:637 - to match the song please. Nop
02:35:296 (1) - Remove new combo, 02:35:532 (2) - add new combo. oke
02:54:430 (1,2) - Stack better please. oke
03:08:603 (1) - Remove new combo. nop
03:16:162 (1) - Remove new combo, 03:16:871 (3) - add new combo. nop
03:17:816 (1) - Remove new combo. nop

Normal
01:50:178 (1) - Add whistle to make consistent with Easy. oke

Easy
01:53:957 (1) - This new combo is kinda useless, you know. Fixed

Good luck!

Sonnyc wrote:

Kdrama <333 (Will mod this some day)

Btw, Dream High Cast for an artist is,, well I'm not sure about that.
In fact, writing all "Suzy & Kim Soohyun & Wooyoung & Joo & Taekyoun" may be a bit long though..

grotle09 wrote:

Eres de chile asi que no creo que tengas problemas con el español
Easy:
01:01:044 :el slider(1) sonaria mejor si no fuera con reversa
01:55:847 : ^^ slider(4)

normal
01:29:863 :es una sugerencia podrias agregarle otra reversa al slider(2) si lo haces tendras que mover el slider de 01:30:808
01:50:178 :quitar sonido whistle y poner sonido finish al spinner
02:48:760 :slider de 1/4 de ttiempo con 1 reversa

collab:
01:30:335 en vez de los 5 circulo por que no un slider que vuelva todas esas veces


Creo que eso es todo esta muy bien echo el beatmap espero que sea rankeado pronto!

Sonnyc wrote:

Dream high :3

General:

-- I prefer checking "Letter box during break". Any special reasons you've untoggled it? Fixed

Easy:

-- Volume 100% at the first part.. Consider reducing it Fixed

00:19:469 (2) - Missed a Whistle here? Fixed
00:20:886 (1) - Maybe ctrl+G? Such a close distance here will be confusing Nope
00:29:863 (2) - Delete Clap at the end What clap?
00:32:697 (1,1) - Whistle here sounds odd Mmm... Oke, I delete it
01:11:910 (6) - I think this distance has too much gap Fixed
01:19:942 (3) - 1 Grid down Oke
01:55:375 (3) - A jump? Fix it.. This is an Easy Oh... o_o Fixed xD

Normal:

-- Volume 90% also sounds quite loud Fixed
-- I caught a RED break here. 00:22:068 Since you cant delete by right click, drag your note here to delete this Fixed

00:44:745 (3) - Distance check
01:13:800 (3,4,5) - 1 Grid Right and down, to put (3) in the center of (2) Oke
01:19:469 (3) - Use the same slider with 01:17:579 (1) Oke
01:40:020 (3) - Distance check (maybe 1 grid up?) oke
01:46:871 (5) - The distance with the next note seems quite close Nop
02:53:485 (2) - ^ Eh, no e_é
03:19:942 (1,2,3) - x0.87 here? Huh?

Collab:

-- Considering the Slider velocity from Normal is 1.40, using the same one feels quite slow to me.. Nvm now >:I

00:29:154 (3,4) - Note, slider will fit the song better
00:33:642 (3) - Check distance Fixed
00:53:367 (2) - Deleting this may look better Oke
01:20:178 (2,3) - I dont think this is a good place to jump :I
01:22:186 (2) - Just.. check the distance Fixed
01:28:918 (4) - Delete this? Why?
01:54:430 (2) - Check distance Fixed
01:58:209 (5) - Sounds weird. Try using two notes instead Fixed
02:04:115 (6,1) - Neither here doesnt seem to fit a jump :I
03:19:705 (1) - Delete Whistle? oke

Good luck Kpop~~

1. 00:33:642 (3) - Move this slider a bit higher, and give it a curve, looks better than straight
2. 00:35:540 (3) - Move this note 1 or 2 grid down so they aren't in a straight line
3. 01:36:949 (3) - Make this curve more nice, like this
4. 01:57:737 (1) - Maybe make it go around the previous note? Looks better imo
5. 02:14:272 (2,3,4,5) - This looks so blocky in comparison to the rest of the map, perhaps move (4) a bit down and give it a curve, or move (2) a bit to the right
6. 02:45:453 (4) - One grid down and one grid right

1. 00:18:997 (2) - 1 grid down
2. 01:15:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Perhaps everything 1 grid right to have a bit symetry
3. 02:39:312 (1,2) - something like this looks a lot better imo
4. 02:46:871 (1) - From here on the next patterns look all so blocky, maybe alternate a bit in between

1. 02:03:879 (5) - 2 grid left and 1 grid up so it fits into the pattern more
2. 02:09:784 (2) - Move this slider a bit up, that it isn't so close to the previous one? Might just be me, but I don't like them so close together D:
3. 02:14:272 (4) - 1 grid up? Looks plain in a straight line

1. 02:36:713 (4) - like this?

Tenshichan wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:33:642 (3) - Move this slider a bit higher, and give it a curve, looks better than straight oke
2. 00:35:540 (3) - Move this note 1 or 2 grid down so they aren't in a straight line oke
3. 01:36:949 (3) - Make this curve more nice, like this I don't know how make this :I
4. 01:57:737 (1) - Maybe make it go around the previous note? Looks better imo oke
5. 02:14:272 (2,3,4,5) - This looks so blocky in comparison to the rest of the map, perhaps move (4) a bit down and give it a curve, or move (2) a bit to the right oke
6. 02:45:453 (4) - One grid down and one grid right Why?

[Normal]

1. 00:18:997 (2) - 1 grid down Why?
2. 01:15:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Perhaps everything 1 grid right to have a bit symetry oke
3. 02:39:312 (1,2) - something like this looks a lot better imo Nope
4. 02:46:871 (1) - From here on the next patterns look all so blocky, maybe alternate a bit in between :I

[Collab]

Fenya

1. 02:03:879 (5) - 2 grid left and 1 grid up so it fits into the pattern more oke
2. 02:09:784 (2) - Move this slider a bit up, that it isn't so close to the previous one? Might just be me, but I don't like them so close together D: Eeer... ok
3. 02:14:272 (4) - 1 grid up? Looks plain in a straight line oke

Kogure

1. 02:36:713 (4) - like this? Nop

I usually don't like Kpop that much, but this song was so relaxing and nice, I had much fun modding it :3
Good luck with your map! :3

tutuhaha wrote:

[Collab]
00:27:973 (6,7) - maybe too close this space Fixed
00:42:146 (4,1,2,3) - make those notes look more smooth? Fixed
00:47:579 (X) - maybe need add note Nope
00:52:304 (5,6,7) - move to x336 y128 Nope
00:52:776 (8,9,10) - move to x392 y232 Nope
00:53:249 (1) - move to x504 y280 Nope
00:53:485 (2) - NC begin there Fixed
01:01:280 (4) - +NC oke
01:10:256 (1) - move 1 to there and add note on 01:10:729 (X) - oke
01:14:036 (1) - move 1 to there Oke
01:17:816 (X) - add note? oke
01:30:335 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/475572 oke
01:41:201 (9) - move to x464 y256 Why?
01:44:745 (3) - move to x296 y24 Why?
01:51:949 (1) - spinner begin there? ñeh
02:21:595 (X) - add note? Nope
02:23:012 (X) - ^ oke
02:33:406 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - look too crowded :I
02:35:060 (4) - move to x256 y240 oke
03:04:115 (1,2,3) - move to x128 y288 oke
03:10:256 (2) - mobe to x232 y96 oke
03:19:942 (2,3,4) - move to x408 y344 oke

[Noraml]
03:23:957 (2) - feel no good when I play this rhythm
no more problem but try to make some slider look more smooth Meh :c

[Easy]
01:17:579 (3) - move to x360 y147 Mmm... Just "x360"
01:18:997 (1) - move to x312 y88 oke

Maybe you need add diff between normal adn collab because now maximum score in collab is 9,545,014 and normal just have 1,972,490
will be more better if you add a new diff

Lally wrote:

Hi from My Queue :3

[General]

[Easy]
just smal spacing problems

00:35:060 (1,2,3) - do better spacing use distance spacing and hold shift for do a perfect line :O nop
01:11:438 (5,6,1) - spacing owo?
01:21:359 (1,2,3) - little spacing problem (do a perfect line) Fixed
01:24:193 (1,2,3) - use distance spacing + shift to have a correct line oke
01:26:556 (2,3) - here too oke
02:14:272 (2,3,4,5) - here too (i know are the little things but it will look better :V) nope
02:48:760 (1,2,3) - here too Oke

[Normal]

02:11:438 (6) - revesearrow slider sounds better nope


[collab]

00:27:973 (6,7) - - to close Fixed
00:53:485 (2) - new combo oke
01:29:390 - try this : oke

From our queue \( ^_^)/

1. Use a muted soft-sliderslide here is strongly recommended (:

1. 00:09:548 - Add note here?
2. 00:10:020 (2,3) - Spacing
3. 00:17:107 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:19:469 (2,1) - ^
5. 00:44:508 (4) - Add clap on slider start?
6. 00:53:485 (2) - Better blanket please. Try 2 sliderpoints here
7. 01:28:445 (4,1) - Stack?
8. 01:36:949 (3) - Better blanket ?

inverness wrote:

From our queue \( ^_^)/

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

why kpop ><

[General]

1. Use a muted soft-sliderslide here is strongly recommended (: Oke c:

[Easy]

1. 00:09:548 - Add note here? Fixed
2. 00:10:020 (2,3) - Spacing Fixed
3. 00:17:107 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:19:469 (2,1) - ^ Nop
5. 00:44:508 (4) - Add clap on slider start? Fixed
6. 00:53:485 (2) - Better blanket please. Try 2 sliderpoints here :I
7. 01:28:445 (4,1) - Stack? Is a Easy~
8. 01:36:949 (3) - Better blanket ? :I

That's all.

[Normal & Insane]
Umm, clean diff! Just make sure you guys make the sliders, placements, and blankets look nicer and it's done owob

Good luck Fenya!

1. 01:09:548 (3,4,5,6) - Mueve este pattern 1 Grid hacia la Izquierda [Grid lvl: 3]
2. 01:35:060 (1,2,3) - Etto.. Estimo que lo he ''Fixeado'' No se si te gustara.. Peero.. He aqui el codigo por si quieres cambiarlo.

   296,152,95060,6,0,B|352:144|376:200,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   288,248,96477,1,8,0:0:0
   328,344,96949,2,0,B|208:352|176:232,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. En esta diff vi muchos Sliders con algunos Problemas simetricos.. Yo creo que sabras arreglarlos, No por el hecho de la consistencia del Pattern en donde se Encuentren si no por su forma, Intenta cambiar la mayoria a Slider con forma de Semi-Circulos.. Muchos parecen ''Cuadrados'' Y en lo personal no son ni tan lindos ni tan jugables~ Pero es todo Superficial.. Asi que CalmDown :33

1. Nothing Here For me x:

DaxMasterix wrote:

Etto.. No se que mas quieres que Modee/Fixee xD Peero.. Justo lo que necesitaba, no lo modeaste, pero no importa <3

[Easy]

1. 01:09:548 (3,4,5,6) - Mueve este pattern 1 Grid hacia la Izquierda [Grid lvl: 3] Listo
2. 01:35:060 (1,2,3) - Etto.. Estimo que lo he ''Fixeado'' No se si te gustara.. Peero.. He aqui el codigo por si quieres cambiarlo. oke, lo arregle un poco, quedo mejor que antes, gracias :3

   296,152,95060,6,0,B|352:144|376:200,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   288,248,96477,1,8,0:0:0
   328,344,96949,2,0,B|208:352|176:232,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Normal]

1. En esta diff vi muchos Sliders con algunos Problemas simetricos.. Yo creo que sabras arreglarlos, No por el hecho de la consistencia del Pattern en donde se Encuentren si no por su forma, Intenta cambiar la mayoria a Slider con forma de Semi-Circulos.. Muchos parecen ''Cuadrados'' Y en lo personal no son ni tan lindos ni tan jugables~ Pero es todo Superficial.. Asi que CalmDown :33 SASFFASFAFA para eso te llame ;_;

[Collab]

1. Nothing Here For me x:

Okay xD Thats is all.. Buena suerte!

Saten wrote:

Hiii


[Collab]
00:39:784 (5) - remove whistle from repeat oke
00:42:855 (3,4) - weird spacing imo :I
01:41:201 (9,1,2) - fix the spacing here Fixed
00:53:485 (1) - change this back to auto (additions) Fixed
01:07:540 (5) - whistle Fixed
01:07:658 (6) - remove whistle Fixed
01:07:894 (7) - whistle Fixed
01:21:831 (1) - whistle on end Fixed
01:22:186 (2) - whistle Fixed
01:29:863 (3) - random drum Fixed
02:04:115 (6,1) - unexpeccted jump? Fixed
03:19:705 (1) - 1 grip up Fixed
02:37:422 (1) - this spinner is kinda loud if you compare with 01:52:068 (1) - :I
03:08:367 - something is missing here Fixed

[Normal]
02:48:052 (4,5) - I wouldn't stack these after a little chain of notes Fixed
02:50:650 (1,2) - avoid stacking like this Fixed
02:56:319 (3,4,1) - fix the spacing between these notes Fixed
03:07:186 (3,4,5) - too close imo :I

[Easy]
01:38:839 (1) - finish Fixed
02:00:099 (4,5,1) - obvious spacing error Fixed


that's that
Good luck~

lkx_shore wrote:

[Collab]
AR7→8
00:08:131 - 100% is noisy...plz use 80%

[Normal]
02:54:430 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ooGs

good,but i think easy is more hard than normal ._.

good luck to you

Gabe wrote:

Hi there Fenya, Cristan, -Pikachu-, Kogure, Mikumiku97

General

Just by hearing the song with the objects, I think the offset should be looked at.
02:35:532 - For the storyboard of Easy and Normal... Shouldn't this be at the beginning like the Collab difficulty? Fixed

Easy

•00:27:028 (3) - For the vocal, you should add a new combo here. It seems to follow more the vocal and because of this suggestion, I also recomment to remove the new combo at 00:29:390 (1) - . ok
•00:29:863 (2) - This is actually a comment: I really like what you did there with the slider's form and the two previous circles. It flows really much. Thanks c.
•00:44:036 (3) - As you can see on your previous combos, they all have (or most of it) has three objects per combos. Since the vocal stops on the previous object, it would be good to add a new combo here. nop
•00:48:288 (4) - Hm, a new combo should be added here because it seems to be a bit long right now. ok
•01:16:162 - A finish sounds way more better than a whistle here o_o yup, fixed
•01:20:414 (4) - I am sure you can make a better blanket here with the previous circle. Right now, the way it's placed, the next circle is overlapping the last circle. So to make a better blanket, move the slider one grid to the left and move the next circle to x:264 y:168. After that, just re-arrange your next objects. Fixed
•01:22:304 (3,4) - It doesn't sound really good the way it is, to be honest. The song doesn't fit with these objects. My suggestion here, is to reverse these objects, like this. By doing this, the slider will sound better because before, it sounded like it was late. Fixed
•01:52:068 - On the previous spinner (before the first kiai time), you had a finish. Why does this one has a whistle? Because the finish sound bad for me :I
•02:39:312 - A finish will sound way more better than a whistle, to be honest. Since you're restarting after the break time, it would be great if this slider's beginning starts with a finish. oke
•02:44:981 (3) - A new combo should be added here to keep the consistency with your previous combos. As you can see, these previous combos are formed with three objects. So this one should have a new combo. Fixed
•03:01:044 - You should maybe delete this whistle to fit with 02:57:264. oke
•03:07:658 - Seems like you have forgot to add a whistle here. Add one to keep the consistency with your finish/whistle on the downbeat. oke
•03:19:942 (1,2,3) - Highlight these circles and move it to x:184 y:168 to make a better flow with your previous slider. oke

Normal

•00:12:619 - Add a whistle here, it seems to be quiet with anything. Fixed
•00:15:690 (4) - To follow the vocal, a new combo will be good here. Also, the combo seems to be long, so a new combo fits pretty well here. Fixed
•00:32:225 (4,5,6) - Highlight these objects and move them one grid to the left. It will be more centered. Fixed
•01:59:627 (3) - Can you move it somewhere else? Right now, it's obviously overlapping the last slider. Fixed
•02:53:485 (2,1) - They are both overlapping each others, which is a bit odd and ugly to see. Fixed

Collab

Fenya
•00:08:839 (2) - This circle will flow better with the previous slider if you move it to x:168 y:48. Fixed
•00:10:256 (2,3,4) - Same thing as said previously, but these circles should be placed that way. Fixed
•00:10:493 - This whistle should be deleted and add a whistle to the next circle. In that way, it sounds way more better and it focus on the vocal. Fixed
•00:11:438 (2) - Same reason as the one above. Delete this whistle, it doesn't sounds pretty good and it has a whistle to the next object, which is alot. Also, you could add a whistle to 00:12:619, it will follow the vocal. Fixed
•00:28:445 (1) - Seems like you have alot of 1/1 objects and this one could be easily be deleted to follow the vocal and song. At this place, there's no vocal, so why adding an object here? Fixed
•00:34:587 (7) - Add a new combo here, the combo is too long and it doesn't fit the vocal. After that, remove the new combo to 00:35:532 (1) - and add a new combo to the next object. Fixed
•01:56:792 - This circle should be deleted since there's no vocal and it's like an extra circle which is a bit useless. Fixed
•01:58:682 - This circle should be moved at 01:58:918. It will sound better and also, with the whistle, it sounded awkward. nop
Cristian
•00:45:217 (5,6,7,8,9) - Is this stream neccesary? It seems to be overmapped if you keep it..
-Pikachu-
•01:14:036 (1) - What do you think on adding a whistle here? To be honest, it sounds pretty good if you are trying to follow the vocal. Fixed
Mikumiku97
•03:10:256 (2) - I think this slider should be in the other way. Like this. It won't be the same as the previous slider and it will be more better in the esthetic. Fixed
•03:12:146 (7,8) - As previously said on Easy, these objects should be reversed. In that way, it will be more focused on the vocal. Here's what I meant: http://puu.sh/1qRKe Fixed
•03:16:162 - to keep the consistency with your two previous whistle, I think a whistle will sound pretty good here. Fixed

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy
Nothing but polish issues.

00:20:886 (1) - Use a three point slider instead? Nope
00:19:469 (2,1) - 0.7 snap has a better flow than 0.6. What is the difference?
00:33:642 (3,1) - Spacing? Nop...
00:38:367 (2) - Looks better with the curve opposite. What do you think? Yup, looks better
00:44:508 (4,1) - Spacing? No...
01:08:603 (2,3,4,5) - Is there a good reason why this pattern is like this? I would prefer a more perfect shape. Fixed
01:25:138 (4,1,2) - Make spacing more perfect? I think is fine o3o
01:29:390 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing and form of this shape could be better. Try to make it perfect with grid snap off. Nop
01:35:060 (1,2) - Blanket isn't perfect. http://puu.sh/1wUT2 I don't know you mean
01:42:619 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
01:57:737 (1) - Not perfectly wrapping around 5. Maybe add a couple extra points to try to make a better blanket. Fixed
02:15:218 (4,5,1) - Spacing. ?
02:41:201 (1,2,3) - Bring the spacing closer to 1.0. Why?
02:45:926 (3) - Slider looks imperfect. Angle also seems not right. I prefer this kind of angle instead http://puu.sh/1wV8d Make sure it works with your patterns though. Fixed
03:00:099 (3,4,5) - Imperfect spacing. Why?

Normal

00:18:524 (1,2,3) - Make spacing equal. Fixed.
00:19:469 (3,4) - These could be made better. Fixed
00:26:556 (3,4) - Needs to be exactly 0.8. Maybe slider could be nicer looking too. Fixed
00:53:485 (2,3) - Looks bad IMO. Fixed
01:45:926 (4,5,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing. It plays better all 0.8. ok
02:39:312 (1,2) - I would rather see forward flow here :/ nop
02:56:319 (3,4,1) - Spacing. nop
03:03:879 (4,5,1) - ^ nop
03:23:957 (2) - Is this supposed to be lopsided? nop

Collab

00:29:154 (2,3,4,5) - Why is this spacing larger than the other notes spacing? Nop
00:30:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1.15 spacing is sort of sluggish compared to 1.2 IMO. I'll leave it up to you if you want to fix. nop
00:40:965 (1,2,3) - Make exactly 1.3 here. The spacing is off. Fixed
00:42:146 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - you shouldn't have inconsistent spacing segments in your map. This is the only 1.4 section you have. 1.3 plays a lot better. (I know the spacing changes more later and i'll get to that) Fixed
00:47:816 (1,2) - Doesn't look as good as 00:49:705 (1,2) - . Perhaps you could do something about it. Looks fine for me
00:52:540 (7,8) - Make 1.7 like the rest of the pattern? Fixed
00:53:249 (11,1) - Jump does not play good to me. It's too sudden. IMO it should be 1.7 like the previous combo. Fixed
00:54:902 (1,2) - Exactly 2.0. yup
00:57:028 (4,1) - Too large IMO. nop
00:57:973 (2,3,4,1) - Keep spacing consistent and not above 2.0 please. Nop
01:00:099 (3,1,2) - ^ nop
01:07:894 (7,8,9) - Ugh... plays badly after such large jumps. This is not the place to decrease the spacing. My suggestion: 01:07:658 (6,7) - needs to be 1.8. 01:07:894 (7,8,9) - also 1.8. 01:08:367 (9) - Stack this on 1 instead. 01:08:485 - Add note, stack it too. Fixed
01:12:146 (6) - Place at x 217 y 256 If you end up moving the slider after, just make sure it has equally spacing between the notes.Fixed
01:13:091 (2,3,4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed
01:33:170 (1,2,3,4) - More curve to this would look better if you can solve the overlap problem. Fixed
02:33:997 (4) - You should delete. It looks better. Fixed
02:58:445 (4,5,6) - Exactly 1.7 or 1.8 ok
03:05:532 (2,3) - 1.2? ok
03:12:146 (7,8,1) - Make spacing equal? Fixed


Conclusion

Good song, good luck on getting this ranked. It's definitely worth it.

rezoons wrote:

I didn't see that it was a graveyard map. Oh well, since i'm stupid i mod it so here is my mod even if it has no purpose:

[Easy]
Slider Tick Rate +1? Nop
00:27:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Combo too long for an easy diff. Fixed
01:09:548 (3,4,5) - Move evrything 2 frid left and 1 grid up like this: Nop

01:28:445 (4) - Maybe a slider here? Because the violon play the same from 01:28:445 to 01:28:918 than from 01:27:501 to 01:27:973. nop
01:50:178 (1) - Why not a finish here? Ok, fixed
01:27:264 (5,1) - The blanket isn't beautiful. ?
02:08:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Combo too long for an easy diff. Fixed
02:46:871 (1,2,3) - The alignement isn't good. Fixed

[Normal]
Slider Tick Rate +1? nop
01:33:170 (4) - It would be better if you'd move the second slider point one grid right then one grid down. fixed
01:36:005 (3) - Ctrl+H then move it where it was. It's prettier like this. yup, fixed

01:42:146 (2) - Same as 01:33:170 (4). just one grid right
01:50:178 (1) - Finish? ok, fixed
02:08:839 - add a note? unnecessary
02:15:926 (6) - Shouldn't the NC be here instead of 02:16:624? fixed
03:09:548 (1) - CTRL+J then put it where it was. Like this the transition between this slider and the following note will be better to play. Fixed

[Collab]
00:27:501 (5,6,7) - Why a jump here? The song is still quiet then it's rather surprising to see a sudden jump. For me it's fine
00:39:075 (3) - If you decide to increase the distance snapping. Be constant! Then this note should be further from 2 than it is. Fixed
00:47:816 (1,2) - Try avoiding the overlapping. Fixed
00:49:705 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:57:028 (4,1) - The jump is very unexpected and hard to see imo. You should put 00:57:028 (4) in the middle of 00:56:792 (3) and 00:57:264 (1). Nop
01:22:540 (4,7) - They aren't at the same high. Fixed
01:29:390 (1,2,3,4) - Another suggestion of placement:

01:34:587 (5) - It's not exactly at the end of the slider. Fixed
01:49:942 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:41:201 (3) - Move it to x=256 y=240 to keep the symmetry. Nop
03:13:091 (1) - Move the end point to x=448 y=320. Then, the blanket is better. Fixed

(Yes, i'm THAT stupid)