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riffy

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riffy 2012-07-27T04:58:51+00:00

yo~

[General]
make same kiais!
eh.. tickrate 2? sounds a bit better, imo

[Normal]
how about AR 4 - for easiest diff?
00:54:025 (2) - not sure. new combo?
01:00:692 (1) - easiest diff. so fast after spinner + overlapped(covered) with hitburst >.<
01:51:974 (1) - ^ same thing. but here it plays much better. :3
01:53:512 (2) - clap?
01:51:974 (1) - new combo! />.<\
02:16:589 (1) - let's discuss about this slider? it's easiest diff, right. if beginners will play it they probably will be confused with 2-repeats sllider. ;_; also this one looks like lazy-mapping D: well whatever. feel free to ignore this

02:20:179 (2) - ^ ignored? NC here

[Hard]
00:12:230 (6) - clap for slider-head? it fits better here, imo
00:49:666 (5) - whistle? ~_~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

well.. ok. Moe Andrea is Moe. Here's my

Short mod is short ;_;

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popner 2012-07-27T05:01:36+00:00

Hi ~ M4M.

Just suggestions:

[Normal]
End Kiai at 03:00:179
01:22:230 (1) - finish at end? It is similar to 01:18:640
02:48:384 (1) - finish at end?

[Hard]
00:24:025 (7,8) - maybe this? Fit the music better imo: http://puu.sh/M5pY
00:56:076 (1,2) - lower the volume of the finishs a little? a little loud here. Or change the slider end finish to whistle?
01:08:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the arrangement of this stream is a little weird..I think this is better: http://puu.sh/M5t6
01:22:487 (1) - finish at end?
02:48:897 (2) - finish at head?

That's all I can find. GL~

Last edited by popner 2012-07-27T05:13:11+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Mercurial

Mercurial 2012-07-27T05:04:07+00:00

Hi there Andrea /o/

General

Kiai Inconsistency: http://puu.sh/M5eB

Normal

Since this is the more easiest diff in this mapset, AR4 will be more consistent with the other diff settings, trust me.
00:49:922 (4) NC for consistency with the Hard diff.
01:31:204 (5,6) I'll keep telling at all the mappers, it's really hard to see in easy/normal diffs the circles when they're stacked under sliders, 'cuz they (Players) really fail to read this.
02:03:769 (5) Same as 00:49:922

Nothing what can I do on Hard Diff.

Really nice work Andrea.

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YTYuyu 2012-07-27T05:04:08+00:00

alright let me see...i hope

Bold: unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
consider adding "opening" in the tags. this is an opening in the anime.
think you can make the BG clearer? it looks a bit blurry here IMO.

[Normal]
why is the 2nd kiai continuing? the kiai should be the same unless there's a GD in the map, but since, you mapped parts of the collab, it has to be the same.
00:12:487 (1) - maybe reduce this slider by 1/2 and adding a circle at the downbeat. the circle should be a NC because the instrumental changes. the slider shouldn't be an NC because the instrumental is connected from the previous note.
00:16:589 (8) - how about replacing this for a 1/2 slider to follow every bit of the vocals in the song?
00:24:281 (7) - add a clap at the repeat arrow to give off a nice clap pattern in the map. i think it plays nicely during gameplay.
00:32:487 (5,6) - replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider to follow both the vocals and instrumental. the beginning follows the vocals and the repeat and end follow the instrumental.
00:40:692 (4) - same as 00:16:589.
00:54:281 (3) - add a whistle here to match the instrumental in the song. since you have a finish at the next note, i think adding a whistle here would fit as it matches the instrumental nicely.
00:55:307 (6) - ^
01:03:256 (4) - remove the repeat on this slider. the lyrics change at the end of this slider, which leads to a NC, so add a circle there and make it a NC for that purpose.
01:26:333 (3) - replace this for 2 circles. the end should be a NC because of new lyrics.
01:31:204 (5) - same as 00:54:281.
01:32:230 (2) - ^
02:20:435 (3) - ^
02:21:461 (6) - ^
02:52:487 (3) - same as 01:26:333.

[Hard]
00:23:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - replace this for a multiple 1/4 kick sliders to make the diff interesting for players. they might practice in alternating in this map IMO.
00:28:769 (2,3) - unstack these circles. it'll look consistent with the previous patterns.
00:40:948 (4) - maybe a clap for a nice clap pattern?
00:43:256 (1) - remove the NC for this. the vocals are connected from the previous note.
00:43:769 (2) - if you follow the suggestion above, make this a NC. the lyrics change from here.
00:44:794 (4) - put this below (2) like you did on (1,3). the pattern would make sense during gameplay. i looks odd seeing something like that during gameplay IMO.
01:01:461 (1) - remove 1 repeat. it doesn't fit with the song at all. made me feel uncomfortable hitting that slider.
01:16:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:23:256.
02:21:204 (5) - follow the DS for this. it looks oddly spaced out.
02:42:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same as 00:23:256.

I guess that's it. GL

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-07-27T05:08:16+00:00

#27

star! Good luck ~

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-27T05:10:58+00:00

Thanks everyone for modding and for the stars

Updated.

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ririco 2012-07-27T05:15:25+00:00

Random Mod o.o

General:
Nothing~ good.

Normal:

00:07:358 (3) - Move this one grid down, so it'll be lined with the (1), don't forget to fix the spacing on 00:07:871 (4) - after words~
00:14:794 (4) - make it like this will looks more better to me~
SPOILER
00:17:102 (1) - I guess this looks much better to me o.o
SPOILER
00:22:230 (3) - move it one grid down so it lined with the (2)

Nothing else nice and clean diff~ o.o

Hard:
Nothing =3=

Nice and good Map as always Andrea :< so moe~ and small mod ;w;

tiper

tiper 2012-07-27T05:38:32+00:00

Hey, nyAndrea~!

[Normal]

I think that AR&HP Drain are too big. It is easiest diff in mapset o_O
00:07:615 (4) - maybe you can do like this? it is well suited to this music
SPOILER
00:14:538 (3,4,5) - i think that this looks better
SPOILER
00:19:153 (5) - mb nc? like in 00:11:974 (6,7,1) -
01:00:692 (1,3) - mb delete it? because 1\1 beat after spinner in easiest diff looks not good imo
01:03:256 (4) - nc?
01:29:410 (3) - ^
02:20:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mb you can place it down to few grids?
02:26:846 (1,3) - delete it if you deleted 01:00:692 (1,3)
02:29:410 (4) - nc?
02:55:564 (3) - ^

[Hard]

00:25:692 (4,5) - mb unstack it? like (1,2,3)
00:24:794 (8,3,4) - replace it to 264:332
00:39:025 (4,5) - unstack?
00:39:025 (4,5,6,7) - less spacing?
02:36:974 (2,3) - unstack?

Funny song and funny mapset. GL with it

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-27T06:20:54+00:00

Updated, thank you both!

tiper

tiper 2012-07-27T06:21:58+00:00

star

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Chewin 2012-07-29T22:31:22+00:00

Ciao niubbo ♥

[General]
Aggiungi "Tsukihi" e "Araragi" nelle tag

[Normal]
00:25:820 (2) - Tocca l'hp bar:

00:58:128 (1) - Riduci di 1/1 visto che questo spinner sta seguendo la voce. E aggiungi un circle in 01:00:179. Anche se dubito che lo seguirai visto che romperebbe la simmetria, ma scorre molto meglio secondo me.
01:19:666 (2) - Finish
01:22:230 (1) - Aggiungi finish alla fine visto che l'hai usato qui 01:26:333 (3)
01:23:769 (3) - ^
01:27:871 (5) - ^
02:24:282 (1) - Visto che è copy e past, stessa cosa di sopra
02:45:820 (2) - Finish
02:48:384 (1) - ^ alla fine
02:49:923 (3) - ^
02:54:025 (5) - ^
Aggiungi i finish che ci stanno da dio o non ti stupro più ç_ç

[Hard]
00:16:333 (7) - New combo visto che parte il vocal? Io l'aggiungere anche per evitare la combo così lunga con 11 elementi çç
00:30:435 (3) - CTRL + R? Secondo me la fine di questo slider scorre molto meglio con 00:31:204 (4,1)
00:45:820 (3) - Finish? Insieme a 00:47:871 (3)?
01:00:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oddio questa può sembrare una GROSSA cazzata ma selezionali e spostali 2 grid su così 01:01:204 (5) copre la luna del BG ♥ *fugge da andrè*
01:26:076 (5) - Leva sto whistle che sta male o.o
02:23:769 (4) - Non c'è bisogno di overlapparlo con il 02:21:717 (7). Spostalo in x:256 y:344
02:26:333 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Oddio squares. ._.
02:52:999 (2) - So ugly slider, usa questo code. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386473

160,332,172999,2,0,B|108:324|68:284|72:224|92:184,1,190,4|8

02:54:025 (4) - ^ Copy and past

Aou, ♥

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-29T22:42:24+00:00

Thank you Chewin, fixed some stuff

B2IN

B2IN 2012-07-29T22:53:48+00:00

'v' ☆

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-31T08:32:18+00:00

Thank you B2IN and Nagisawa for the stars

EDIT: Added little SB, please redownload!

EDIT2: Thank you Kawayi Rika for the mod >w<

SPOILER

15:42 Kawayi Rika: : ok ><
15:42 Kawayi Rika: : add opening in tags? ><
15:43 Kawayi Rika: : Hard
15:43 Kawayi Rika: : 00:12:487 - remove clap more fit here?
15:44 Kawayi Rika: : 00:20:692 - ＾
15:45 Andrea: : I actually like it >_<
15:45 Kawayi Rika: : ok :3
15:46 Andrea: : :3
15:49 Kawayi Rika: : 01:26:076 -
15:49 Kawayi Rika: : remove whistle
15:50 Andrea: : 02:48:128 (6) - I used it here too ><
15:50 Andrea: : I think it fits :3
15:50 Kawayi Rika: : 01:21:974 -
15:50 Kawayi Rika: : but here no whistle
15:51 Andrea: : added :3
15:52 Kawayi Rika: : 01:34:281 (6) - Add new conbo since new jump and vocal :3
16:01 Andrea: : done
16:01 Kawayi Rika: : I guess that's all ~ nice map :3
16:01 Andrea: :
16:01 Andrea: : upload then
16:02 Andrea: : done =w=
16:02 Kawayi Rika: : k
16:03 Kawayi Rika: : no kd ~ but post log is fine

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Kawayi Rika 2012-07-31T14:12:21+00:00

IRC check map ~ everything looks fine now ~

Moe :3

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-31T14:34:47+00:00

Thank you Rika :3

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rickyboi 2012-07-31T15:12:12+00:00

Why did you cut out the "DISCO~" part? ;A;

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dkun 2012-07-31T18:57:46+00:00

actually, strike this post

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-31T19:28:10+00:00

dkun wrote:
would you mind explaining the tags?

I mean, unless these individuals actually take part in your mapset, they shouldn't be in it, no?

"Saten Saten-san Vicho-kun"

Take a look at the Hard difficulty, it's a Collab.

There are the SB Names on that difficulty.

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those 2012-07-31T19:28:16+00:00

Two things:

[General]

Switch ComboColour2 with ComboColour3, unless you have a specific reason. ComboColour3 and ComboColour4 look fairly similar to the colourblind player.

[Hard]

01:08:384 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Phrasing this as 6/4, 6/4, 4/4 doesn't work. You either use 4/4, 4/4, 4/4, 4/4, or 8/4, 8/4. The music doesn't suggest a new section at 01:09:153 (4) - and it doesn't matter if your combo pattern fits with the music; the pattern itself has to, also.

Completely unrelated: anyone else notice 02:01:461 - sounds like mother chode?

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2012-07-31T19:30:41+00:00

Andrea wrote:
dkun wrote:
would you mind explaining the tags?

I mean, unless these individuals actually take part in your mapset, they shouldn't be in it, no?

"Saten Saten-san Vicho-kun"
Take a look at the Hard difficulty, it's a Collab.

There are the SB Names on that difficulty.

You should probably indicate that its a collab on the map description, jeez a suggestion.

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KuronumaSawako 2012-07-31T19:40:43+00:00

Moe BG <3

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-31T19:41:44+00:00

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
You should probably indicate that its a collab on the map description, jeez a suggestion.

p/1691420

I already did it here :3

Anyway changed colours, bubble popped by myself ;w;

Mercurial

Mercurial 2012-07-31T19:48:49+00:00

Andrea wrote:
yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
You should probably indicate that its a collab on the map description, jeez a suggestion.
p/1691420

I already did it here :3

Anyway changed colours, bubble popped by myself ;w;

Maybe...

Tags: Collab Collaboration

Try to avoid all the problems and stay calm with other users

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-31T19:51:22+00:00

I'm totally calm ><

Anyway added tags, thanks :3

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Mercurial 2012-07-31T19:54:23+00:00

I'm not talking about you, I'm talking about those people who get rage in everything you do.

Also, good luck with this one.

Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-31T19:55:01+00:00

Oh yeah I see, thank you for the support

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2012-07-31T20:13:40+00:00

Mercurial wrote:
I'm not talking about you, I'm talking about those people who get rage in everything you do.

Also, good luck with this one.

Who's raging? Lol I just suggested he put that hard is a collab in the map description o.O

Mercurial

Mercurial 2012-07-31T20:20:58+00:00

I'm not talking about you, I'm talking about the haters.

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Kawayi Rika 2012-07-31T22:15:37+00:00

Rebubbled ~!

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those 2012-08-01T02:47:29+00:00

Andrea wrote:
Anyway changed colours, bubble popped by myself ;w;

[Colours]
Combo1 : 112,255,104
Combo2 : 255,140,247
Combo3 : 53,255,240
Combo4 : 249,255,121

Looks unchanged to me, Andrea (that is, Combo3 and Combo4 still look largely similar to me). If you changed the individual colours instead of swapping them, then I guess you changed them, but I argue they're still too similar.

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Sakura 2012-08-01T02:55:42+00:00

I can confirm that im getting this for both difficulties:

So colours arent really changed.

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Ephemeral 2012-08-01T03:33:46+00:00

i've verified this with sakura - the version being sent out for download is indeed the unchanged version. (binary equal with kdiff3) could you try resubmitting your map with the changes again?

your submission may be failing, or there might be some insidious issue with the BSS that needs fixing.

this map has a weirdly pleasant spread as well.. normal-hard is quite unusual to see. what's stopping you from including an insane?

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Yuukari-Banteki 2012-08-01T03:57:59+00:00

[Normal]
ahh your map makes me dizzy going around in circles every combo

[Hard]
00:12:230 (6) - why is this jump here?
00:43:769 (2,4) - why is the height difference here the opposite of that between 1 and 3?
01:51:204 (1) - this note follows fairly shortly after the spinner's end and may force some players to stop spinning before the spinner actually ends
02:13:769 (4) - centering this at the top of the sliders instead of the bottom gives a better distance snap: http://puu.sh/NxbK
02:26:333 (1) - same spinner timing issue as 1:51

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Andrea 2012-08-01T04:05:41+00:00

Seems like there's a submission mistake, since I actually changed the colours, gonna fix that again.

Also, this song doesn't call for an Insane, BPM is too low to make it.

EDIT: Thanks for the mod SFG!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Normal]
ahh your map makes me dizzy going around in circles every combo

[Hard]
00:12:230 (6) - why is this jump here? Fixed.
00:43:769 (2,4) - why is the height difference here the opposite of that between 1 and 3? It's perfectly spaced.
01:51:204 (1) - this note follows fairly shortly after the spinner's end and may force some players to stop spinning before the spinner actually ends It's fine imo, BPM is slow so there's enough time to get to it.
02:13:769 (4) - centering this at the top of the sliders instead of the bottom gives a better distance snap: http://puu.sh/NxbK Fixed.
02:26:333 (1) - same spinner timing issue as 1:51 Same as I mentioned above.

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Yuukari-Banteki 2012-08-01T05:01:13+00:00

[Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
00:47:358 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - forgot to mention this earlier but this is really well done, one of my fav patterns in the entire map

Bubbled. if you need to resubmit to fix the update thing tell me and ill rebubble.

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