CDFA wrote:

SPOILER

'BOUT TA GET RAAAAWWWW

Storyboard:
I don't like how the shadows are just cut off in the scrolling text. Try making the base image wider without changing the size of the text so the shadow isn't cut off. fix.But I not finish it now,I will update later

Overall:
02:06:306 - Really random place to add kiai. This map probably doesn't even need that much kiai I think it's not bad.So not fix

Hard:
00:17:760 (1) - This just looks awkward. Probably the best place to put it would be in the top-right quadrant somewhere. move it to stack with 00:19:396(1)
01:12:306 (1) - ^ fix
01:55:396 (4) - Add whistle on beginning of slider fix
02:35:760 (1) - Add finish fix
03:23:215 (1) - ^ fix

Normal:
00:30:306 (3) - Probably just make this into 2 notes instead of a slider. It plays weirdly. fix
00:37:942 (1,2,3) - Probably just make this into a slider or notes or something. I personally don't like the while slidernoteslider thing ;~; change to sliderslidernot
01:00:306 (2) - Don't make this curve so cramped not fix.I think it can be read
01:01:396 (3) - ^
01:49:942 (3) - Remove whistle from the slider fix.it's my fault
02:04:124 (7) - Have this go more towards the left of the screen so it doesn't overlap fix

Kawaii.

Thanks for your mod and star._.

Jesss wrote:

Request accepted from my Modding Queue

Sorry for delaying, and you're lucky because you moved your Beatmap to Pending (i was about to ignore your request).
Here comes my modding. NOTE: i use coordinates for helping in relocations (you can find them near to the Beat snap Divisor control and "Insert Break Time" button.

General

-Kiai times seems to start in a random place...i recommend to set up to start at 02:21:987 fix.start at 02:22:124
-The song needs a new difficulty. not fix.I think low bpm not needs a new diff

Normal

00:30:851 (4) - this slider needs a very subtle fix...move the end of the slider 1 grid left (lvl3) fix
00:33:033 (2) - move the end of slider 2 grids to the right (lvl4 most precise) fix
00:46:942 (2) - i suggest moving the end of slider something like this. fix

SPOILER

00:57:033 (4) - move to the following coordinate (X:396 Y:344) fix.to 392.344
01:36:306 (3) - Did you leave that circle missaligned intentionally, right? yes.so not fix
02:06:306 (1) - needs a little fix in slider modelling, because looks awkward. Take a look to 02:08:487 (2) - looks better. fix
03:10:124 (2) - i suggest a more curve slider...something like this: fix

SPOILER

Hard

00:07:942 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Looks placed randomly. I suggest this. nice

SPOILER

00:14:487 (4) - Move 4 grids down (lvl4) not fix,the(2,3,4)looks well I think
00:19:396 (1,2) - you have 2 options, align the end of slider 1 to the current position of circle 2, or viceversa. fix
00:30:305 (3) - move 2 grids up (lvl4) fix
00:30:578 (4,5,6) - ^
00:36:306 (3) - move to coordinate (X:396 Y:288)
00:36:578 (4) - ^ (X:408 Y:200)
00:43:942 (3) - ^ (X:408 Y:84)
00:48:306 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:50:215 (4) - Add new combo?
01:05:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - there's something that i don't like from items locations. Specially 01:06:851 (4,5,6) - try to make them looks more circular...
01:35:215 (6,1) - i suggest this:

SPOILER

02:34:669 (4) - i recommend putting this parallel to 02:33:578 (2) -
02:35:215 (5) - ^ 02:34:124 (3) -
03:07:942 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:09:851 (3) - Add New Combo
03:19:396 (1) - Remove New Comboall fix

Not bad mapping...and i loved the song

Good luck! i'll star this soon.

nich95 wrote:

Hi, x847606653

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Remove enable countdown in song setup>storyboarding

fix

Normal

1. 00:19:396 (1) - (nazi) Move last point to right 2 grids fix fix
2. 00:49:396 (5) - Add whistle
3. 00:51:578 (3) - ^
4. 01:04:669 (2) - ^ fix
5. 01:05:760 (2,4) - Trying to make them parallel. not fix
6. 01:09:033 (2) - Add whistle
7. 01:11:215 (2) - ^ fix
8. 01:34:124 (6,1) - (nazi) - Move to up 1 grid fix
9. 01:59:760 (6) - Move last point to down 2 grids (parallel with 01:58:124 (3) - ) fix
10. 02:01:396 (2) - Add whistle in slider begin fix
11. 02:03:578 (5) - Add whistle fix
12. 02:12:306 - Add a note, then add whistle? OK
13. 02:13:942 (2) - Same as 01:59:760 (6) - fix
14. 02:18:033 (1) - Start spinner at 02:17:896 OK
15. 02:35:215 (1) - Add finish fix
16. 02:57:033 (1,2) - Shapes are strange. Make to this be better. fix
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 03:12:578 (1) - Start spinner at 03:12:442

fix

Hard

1. 00:44:215 (1) - Start spinner at 00:44:078
2. 02:35:760 (1) - Start spinner at 02:35:351
3. 03:19:396 (6) - Add new combo?

all fix

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

1. 01:31:942 (1) - new combo?
2. 这么柔和的歌不推荐直slider..

1. 00:17:215 (5) - 拉远点不要叠起后面的圈不好看
2. 00:17:760 (1) - 这什么...
3. 00:22:124 (5) - 00:22:669结束? 后面加圈, 不用变速的
4. 00:54:578 (5,6,1) - 像这样的不太好看...
5. 00:59:215 (3) - (152,332)?
6. 01:00:306 (3) - 这个做成3/4好像好点
7. 01:12:470 - 没圈?
8. 02:22:124 (4) - 不科学 完全没对称

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Normal
01:31:942 (1) - add whistle in front of slider It is already whistle
01:40:669 (1) - ^ ^
02:35:351 (1) - reduce spinner's length by this time 02:37:396 not fix

Hard
00:08:215 (5) - NC
00:09:033 (1) - delete NC
00:10:669 (8) - NC
00:24:305 (2,3) - stack perfectly fix
00:25:396 (4) - NC ( because slider's speed changing )
00:51:578 (5) - 2nd and 3rd slider point move 1 grid left and last slider point move 1 grid down fix
01:03:306 (1) - NC ( because slider's speed changing )
01:40:669 (4) - ^
02:35:351 (1) - same as Normal Diff
03:07:942 (7) - same as 01:03:306 (1) -

Good luck

1. Song Setup - Title - 「Reborn-Dr.Minchi Ni Aimashou」　⇒ If you want to do it formally, 「REBORN -Dr.Minchi ni Aimashou-」 is better
2. BPM of this map is really constant o.o? I'm sorry, I can not check BPM, and offset...orz
3. KIAI TIME end- 02:37:396 - Put in the middle of the spinner is not a good idea. i think move to 02:39:578 is better.

1. 00:09:033 (1) - http://puu.sh/Bi8s a little touch. I do not think this is a problem but it is recommended that you close to the middle. ( If the gaps between note, DS is a constant(1.0x) need not necessarily. It can say that close one is simple )
2. 00:20:760 (2) - move to x152,y344 is better ?
3. 00:37:942 (2) - add NC. ( because seems to have put it at the beginning of the song. like 00:20:487 (1) - .00:29:215 (1) - . I think it is better to unify these. ) and add whistle to end of the slider
4. 00:57:033 (4) - add NC and 00:58:124 (1) - remove NC is better imo
5. 01:09:851 (3) - add NC and 01:10:669 (1) - remove NC and 01:11:760 (3) - add NC.
6. 01:11:760 (3,4,5) - above and The one that does not do stack has good flow imo
7. 01:39:033 (2) - For the same reason 00:37:942 (2)
8. 03:22:396 (1) - Rhythm is a little hard to take. so normal, even if a spinner begins in here, I think that it is not bad.

1. 00:10:669 (4) - add NC ( same as 00:01:942 (1) - )
2. 00:33:987 - This green line is unnecessary
3. 00:34:124 - ^
4. 00:37:396 (8) - add finish instead to whistle. ( i prefer finish than whistle
5. 02:59:215 (5,6) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/BiOz I think that you should do it in the same way as other rhythm. If an interval, I think as a little lonely rhythm
6. 03:01:396 - Why does volume down from here? If you want to change, 02:57:033 is better imo
7. 03:12:306 (1) - spinner start move to 03:12:442 and add note to here. ( same as pattern 00:43:942 (3,1).02:35:215 (5,1). Why not try the same pattern x.x? )
8. 03:23:215 (1) - remove finish. When you gradually lower the sound, I think that you should not put it like normal diff .

1. 01.png - blank of the letter is strange. and This is a letter same as 24.png ( 24.png is not a problem. so I recommend that delete 01.png and change to 24.png. like↓
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"lrc\01.png",320,240　　⇒change to Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"lrc\24.png",320,240
   F,0,19942,20487,0,1
   M,0,19942,23760,18,200,18,280
   F,0,20487,23215,1
   F,0,23215,23760,1,0
2. 07.png - 「どんなことがボクら」⇒ little nazi 「どんなことでボクら」 is correct
3. 11,12.png - 「命ある限り惜し」、「まず続いてゆくんだろう」　⇒recommended split　「命ある限り惜しまず」 and 「続いてゆくんだろう」

1. 03:22:396 - 感觉从这就可以稍微降些volume了
2. add Kadokura Satoshi Kay Kimiko to tags?

1. 00:03:306(5,6) - 个人感觉可以把5换成一个Slider到00:04:124 ?
2. 00:22:124(5) - 这个Slider拉得不够好 用5点重拉试试？
3. 00:24:306(2) - ^
4. 01:00:306(2) - 这种Slider出现在如此relaxing的图中略奇怪0.0
5. 01:01:396(3) - ^
6. 02:06:306(1) -reverse略显多 对于新人可能难读
7. 02:24:306(4) - ^
8. 02:32:487(1) - 拉好看点吧._.

1. 00:22:124(5) - 拉得好看些0.0
2. 00:27:306(6,7,8) - 这个三连略奇怪 把7删了?
3. 01:02:215(1) - add whistle?
4. 01:09:033(5) - 往右去些会更好看?
5. 01:35:215(6) - 加个NC,要不然player看不出来这里有变速
6. 03:07:942(7) - ^

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ x847606653

from my queue~ (sorry, for late

here my mod~

SPOILER

[General]

1. Song Setup - Title - 「Reborn-Dr.Minchi Ni Aimashou」　⇒ If you want to do it formally, 「REBORN -Dr.Minchi ni Aimashou-」 is better OK
2. BPM of this map is really constant o.o? I'm sorry, I can not check BPM, and offset...orz I'll ask somebody to check it
3. KIAI TIME end- 02:37:396 - Put in the middle of the spinner is not a good idea. i think move to 02:39:578 is better.

i move the spinner to 02:37:396 -

[Normal]

1. 00:09:033 (1) - http://puu.sh/Bi8s a little touch. I do not think this is a problem but it is recommended that you close to the middle. ( If the gaps between note, DS is a constant(1.0x) need not necessarily. It can say that close one is simple ) I will try to make 1.2 ds to map again.but not remap
2. 00:20:760 (2) - move to x152,y344 is better ?OK
3. 00:37:942 (2) - add NC. ( because seems to have put it at the beginning of the song. like 00:20:487 (1) - .00:29:215 (1) - . I think it is better to unify these. ) and add whistle to end of the slider OK
4. 00:57:033 (4) - add NC and 00:58:124 (1) - remove NC is better imo OK
5. 01:09:851 (3) - add NC and 01:10:669 (1) - remove NC and 01:11:760 (3) - add NC. OK
6. 01:11:760 (3,4,5) - above and The one that does not do stack has good flow imo change to a triangle
7. 01:39:033 (2) - For the same reason 00:37:942 (2)
8. 03:22:396 (1) - Rhythm is a little hard to take. so normal, even if a spinner begins in here, I think that it is not bad.

no change.spinner is so long

[Hard]

1. 00:10:669 (4) - add NC ( same as 00:01:942 (1) - )OK
2. 00:33:987 - This green line is unnecessary
3. 00:34:124 - ^OK of two
4. 00:37:396 (8) - add finish instead to whistle. ( i prefer finish than whistle Umm..OK
5. 02:59:215 (5,6) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/BiOz I think that you should do it in the same way as other rhythm. If an interval, I think as a little lonely rhythm becanse the rhythm is so much.Ii want to make differents
6. 03:01:396 - Why does volume down from here? If you want to change, 02:57:033 is better imo a little mistake._.
7. 03:12:306 (1) - spinner start move to 03:12:442 and add note to here. ( same as pattern 00:43:942 (3,1).02:35:215 (5,1). Why not try the same pattern x.x? ) OK
8. 03:23:215 (1) - remove finish. When you gradually lower the sound, I think that you should not put it like normal diff . OK

[SB]

1. 01.png - blank of the letter is strange. and This is a letter same as 24.png ( 24.png is not a problem. so I recommend that delete 01.png and change to 24.png. like↓
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"lrc\01.png",320,240　　⇒change to Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"lrc\24.png",320,240
   F,0,19942,20487,0,1
   M,0,19942,23760,18,200,18,280
   F,0,20487,23215,1
   F,0,23215,23760,1,0
2. 07.png - 「どんなことがボクら」⇒ little nazi 「どんなことでボクら」 is correct
3. 11,12.png - 「命ある限り惜し」、「まず続いてゆくんだろう」　⇒recommended split　「命ある限り惜しまず」 and 「続いてゆくんだろう」

all fix later

Good luck~

a3272509123 wrote:

Hi~From in-game pm

SPOILER

[General]

1. 03:22:396 - 感觉从这就可以稍微降些volume了 嘛，感觉没用渐变感，所以没有改
2. add Kadokura Satoshi Kay Kimiko to tags?

正愁没东西加><


[Normal]
感觉CS+1更好些？真的好么。。

1. 00:03:306(5,6) - 个人感觉可以把5换成一个Slider到00:04:124 ?不好听
2. 00:22:124(5) - 这个Slider拉得不够好 用5点重拉试试？搞定了
3. 00:24:306(2) - ^ +1
4. 01:00:306(2) - 这种Slider出现在如此relaxing的图中略奇怪0.0 lol，中意，暂时没改
5. 01:01:396(3) - ^
6. 02:06:306(1) -reverse略显多 对于新人可能难读 未改，可读性好可以吧
7. 02:24:306(4) - ^ +1
8. 02:32:487(1) - 拉好看点吧._.哦

[Hard]
AR+1

1. 00:22:124(5) - 拉得好看些0.0嗯
2. 00:27:306(6,7,8) - 这个三连略奇怪 把7删了? 好吧
3. 01:02:215(1) - add whistle? 嗯
4. 01:09:033(5) - 往右去些会更好看? 嗯
5. 01:35:215(6) - 加个NC,要不然player看不出来这里有变速 嗯
6. 03:07:942(7) - ^ 嗯

That's all~祝好运~

Illumined wrote:

SPOILER

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

　
[General]

1. Storyboard elements 28.png: アーティスト Should be like this http://puu.sh/BtlS (Or use 歌(uta) instead).

change to vocal
　
　

　
[Normal]
01:12:306 - Spinner here? (Until 01:14:487 - ) no change
　
　

　
[Hard]
Reduce HP to 5 or 6. It drains too fast :\ no change
00:11:487 (3,4) - Make a jump here I think it's not neccessary

00:14:351 (3) - Delete, those 1/8 sliders are misleading to read as 1/8 beat here. Plus music is blank here. no change
00:43:942 (3) - Sounds like glass smashes with whistle+finish, remove one of them remove whistle
01:02:215 (4) - Why speed changes D: it's fit for rhythm
02:21:851 (2,3,4) - Fix the spacing due to speed changes no change
　

　

Crok425 wrote:

SPOILER

Hi. From mod queue. First of all, I couldn't find anything wrong or to be fixed except maybe one thing, so I apologize for this. Even so, I'll give your map a star because I love the song.

[Hard]
03:01:260 Maybe delete that circle. That part of the song has 2 notes, so I recommend it to delete it.OK
___________________

Yes... that's it, I'm really sorry, but I wish you the best of luck to get this ranked.

Thanks for your mod and star._.

Katty Pie wrote:

SPOILER

hi from our Q ^.^

Hard

00:24:306(2,3) - stack better ....it's all (256.284)
00:32:487 - maybe add note here not neccessary
01:02:896 - this note is superfluous and not sound here remove OK
01:35:078 - add note here it has speed change,so not add
02:31:396(4) - maybe make this slider so http://puu.sh/BLyv OK
02:59:760 - i think here note will be sound good
03:07:942(1,2) - stack better

Normal

Circle Size better put 3 bcz in this case Normal replaces Easy.

AR - 1 it's a normal.so no change

00:21:851 - remove this note no change
00:22:124 - make this slider shorter and double on white ticks i try it.but it's don't fit for rhythm
00:30:033 - remove note no change
00:30:578 - ^ ^
01:02:760 - replace this slider on 2 notes in white ticks ^
01:42:851(3,1) - unstack this >.< beginners can get confused fix (if you not want change it stack better >.<)
becanse it's normal diff,not a easy,i don't remove some notes

It's all for me) nice song and map good luck~~

Thanks for your mod._.

KersiTyan wrote:

SPOILER

Hi~ from my queue~

[Hard]

00:13:396 - remove whistle
00:13:669 - add whistle
00:53:215 (1,4) - ^
01:45:578 - ^
01:46:669 (3) - ^
01:54:306 - ^
01:59:760 - ^

[Normal]

01:04:669 (2) - add whistle

all no change

Nice song, good luck~

Thanks for your mod._.

No_Gu wrote:

你去偷个响指的音效过来当hitclap绝对效果绝佳 虽然没有用clap，我去试试

[normal]
其实我觉得用1.5正好不overlap看起来更整齐啊 看起来间距太大@.@
00:03:578 (6) - 建议降音，第一次听以为是没音的地方硬下的 降了10%应该够了
00:11:760 (4) - 结尾同^
00:48:306 (4,2) - 这种歌放这种slider不是很奇怪吗 嗯，那再改改
01:43:942 (1) - whistle OK
01:54:578 (2) - 头whistle OK
02:06:306 (1) - 换个circle可能比较好 好多人提了，那就改吧

[hard]
00:01:260 (4) - 这里没音啊。。去掉的话，总感觉少了点什么，因为后面的slider感觉有点空
00:32:760 (1,2) - 都hard了我不喜欢叠上 overlap有这么讨厌么lol完全叠上了
01:39:033 (1,2,3) - 丑 我再想想
[/color]03:22:396 (1) - 这里应该是在03:22:124，我推荐在03:22:124拉个slider到03:22:396然后结尾静音 OK,总感觉哪里不对劲
SV换的时候要注意是不是能反映过来。。你现在变的还有排列感觉太随意了 图本身不快，反应0.75没问题。排列的话额TUT

Mio_chan wrote:

大部份只是建議啦 @@

[General]
Offset 應是270左右 不過我也不太肯定...去找timing check吧 timing听了几遍，应该是没错，我再去找下别人
我覺得在hard slider起角不太好看...不過你覺得可以的就不用理會了 lol
hard可以再多一點spacing上和形狀上的變化 嗯

[Normal]
00:01:906 (3) - NC? OK
01:43:906 (1) - 不要放在01:42:815 (3)下面 normal有一些stack的地方应该是没问题
01:46:088 - 加note? 感觉没必要
02:03:542 (5,6) - 改成1個slider? 或是unstack? ^
02:22:633 (2) - ctrl+R ? (改了後記得要留意距離有沒有出現問題) OK
02:30:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 改成跟02:12:815 (1,2)差不多的sliders? 寻求一点变化，未改


[Hard]
AR + 1? 一个简单的h决定ar6够了
00:10:124 (3) - 不要放在 00:09:578 (2) 下面 我觉得适当用些stacking不错呀。。。
00:32:760 (1,2) - 改成與 00:33:033 (2,3)的間距一樣? ^
00:47:487 (3,4) - 這個有點怪怪的...我以為它是1/4 未改
00:57:033 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我建議改成這個樣子，但隨你吧: lol,未改

SPOILER

01:03:033 (5) - 這個間距不太好看 果然还是应该stack
01:09:851 (1,2) - 移到x:56 y:72? OK
01:49:669 (6,7) - 和00:47:487 (3,4)一樣 未改
02:04:124 (6) - 離02:03:578 (5)遠一點? OK
02:09:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 放成這個樣子? NICE

SPOILER

star一個~加油喔~

iroseka wrote:

iroseka's modding from tha queue

先说下杂项好了……建议把背景图转成JPG的以节省空间，质量9的和PNG在游戏中看不出什么差别
歌词太靠边了会被排名榜挡住 放在右边比较好
总之我很喜欢歌……也很喜欢做的声音 希望我的mod能有所帮助吧

[Normal]
声音很好 排列要加强
间隔没有问题 但是有些地方需要重排（或许干脆增加Distance Spacing让note分开）
比如：
00:01:942 (3,4,5,6) - 这里我觉得比较别扭
00:11:215 (3,4) - 这里建议用两个一样的滑条（加上旋转180°）
00:39:306 (3,1) - 这个转折可以重新安排
00:54:851 (2,3) - 我不认为这里用这种角度的折线比曲线更好 排列没改，我也不知道怎么改才好/o\



声音：
00:15:578 (5) - 可以用Finish 两个finish连着感觉不好
00:19:396 (1) - 滑条尾建议用finish，感觉比较有回韵（打死我吧 就是因为有回声？才没用
00:20:760 (2) - 滑条尾建议加上whistle 如果你要用这个长白线whistle的梗的话就用下去 我觉得挺好 OK
00:22:124 (5) - 滑条尾建议用finish 未改
00:40:669 (2) - 滑条头finish
01:07:942 (1) - ^
01:29:760 (1) - ^
01:31:942 (1) - ^
01:40:669 (1) - ^ （我巨蠢……似乎这个finish用的多一些也没什么问题）
01:55:942 (4) - ^ all OK
02:12:851 (1) - 滑条尾建议finish 未改


[Hard]
Finish怎么变少了……建议把原来Normal的Finish和我建议的Finishing都加上比较好 因为normal空音比较多，
00:33:033 (2) - 间隔问题 stack
00:47:760 (4) - ^ fix
00:50:487 (2) - ^ ^
01:49:942 (7) - ^ stack
01:55:942 (5) - ^ fix
02:22:124 (3) - ^ fix
02:33:578 (2,3,4,5) - 建议用新功能修改一下做成完美的方形 新功能不会用/o\

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue. Sorry for the long wait.

General
-> Nothing found.

Normal
01:33:033 (2,3) - Make these sliders more vertically symmetrical. Right now, it's a bit assymmettically curved to the left . fix
03:02:487 (3) - Add whistle at start of this slider, since it's consistent with this slider at 03:10:124 (2).Hard
-> Nothing found.

Good Map indeed! Good Luck!

STAR~

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi~
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's go

[General]

why don't you use Finish?
00:37:942 ~ add Clap follow bass drum cuz not enough use whistle for hightlight bass drum
remve whistle but don't add clap
[Normal]

SPOILER

03:25:942 - unused inherited point removed

[Hard]

SPOILER

HP -1
AR +1 OK
03:25:942 - unused inherited point^

Can't find problem
GL~

Have a good time

1. 01:47:760 (3,4) - You could create a blanket here,it's a good place to do it :3
2. 02:11:760 (2,3) - 3 grids down to fix the blanket with 02:10:669 (1) -
3. 03:18:851 (1) - ^

1. 00:00:578 (2) - Slightly curve this on the left,just to make a blanket with 00:01:124 (3) -
2. 00:01:942 (1) - Move the new combo on 00:02:487 (2) -
3. 00:27:442 (7) - This note really doesen't follow anything,I suggest you to delete it since it doesen't have much sense as now to put a note there
4. 02:25:396 (3,4) - Hmm,I think a pattern like this would suit better this part
5. 03:11:215 (4,5,6) - Make this a symmetric pattern by moving 03:12:306 (6) - at x:316 y:300

-kevincela- wrote:

SPOILER

Hi~

[Normal]

1. 01:47:760 (3,4) - You could create a blanket here,it's a good place to do it :3 OK
2. 02:11:760 (2,3) - 3 grids down to fix the blanket with 02:10:669 (1) - move right 3 grids and fix 02:10:669 (1) -
3. 03:18:851 (1) - ^ fix

[Hard]

1. 00:00:578 (2) - Slightly curve this on the left,just to make a blanket with 00:01:124 (3) - OK
2. 00:01:942 (1) - Move the new combo on 00:02:487 (2) - no change
3. 00:27:442 (7) - This note really doesen't follow anything,I suggest you to delete it since it doesen't have much sense as now to put a note there I deleted it before,but I add it yestoday...OK,delete
4. 02:25:396 (3,4) - Hmm,I think a pattern like this would suit better this part make a change at02:25:396 (3) - but don't move it
5. 03:11:215 (4,5,6) - Make this a symmetric pattern by moving 03:12:306 (6) - at x:316 y:300 OK.

Good work,as now this is absolutely worth a bubble. Good luck for ranking your map ^^

Thanks for your mod._.

Lincolm wrote:

SPOILER

Hi, from Fransniko Modding Queue

Please remember that what I'm post is a Sugestion

Normal :

No need changes. I like it.

Hard :

I don't think you need beat snap divisor 1/4 for make this. No need change it, just telling. umm,It's some rhythm

00:48:306 - Add green time line with 0,75x slider velocity , end 00:52:669 no change,use too many 0.75x slider velocity will make somebody bored I think
00:48:715 - Add note no change becanse not use 0.75x in 00:48:306 (5) -
00:49:260 - Add note ^
02:54:851 (1) - Finish sound no change.It's start rather than end
03:04:396 (6) - Whistle sound no change 13 whistle:D
03:12:442 (1) - Finish sound no change,03:16:124 (1) - ,It has finish two finish sounds not good
03:22:396 (1) - Whistle sound no change
03:23:215 (1) - Finish sound no change

Oh the custom sound just perfect with the song. It's so lovely. <3

I like how you map it. It just perfect. Love the song too. Giving you a star.

Thanks for your mod and star._.sorry for ignoring so much...

1. 可以的话BG最好还是用jpg格式的
2. 感觉combo colour 3的颜色还是和背景有点太接近了………………
3. 感觉上前奏段的clap的音量可以再降一点……

1. 00:19:396 (1) - 开头的这个clap不好听……
2. 00:22:124 (5) - 恩。。试试用双描点把形状弄的再圆滑些？
   
3. 00:24:306 (2) - 同上。。如果要用三描点的话，左右两侧的描点应该再靠外一些会比较好看，比如
   
4. 00:25:942 (3,4) - 如果是我的话应该会把这两个换下位置，然后和(2)的尾巴做成一个等边三角形
5. 00:28:124 (1) - 依然是不好听的clap
6. 00:36:851 (1) - ^
7. 00:45:578 (1) - ^
8. 00:46:669 (1,2) - 这里感觉用两个1/2slider会更舒服点？
9. 01:06:578 - 这里的空拍感觉有点无理……建议用slider来做这儿
10. 01:07:942 (6) - NC建议
11. 01:12:033 (5,6) - 建议换位置然后把三角形做成正的:<
12. 01:34:124 (3) - 直觉告诉我这个没做好对称…………
13. 01:37:942 (1) - 去clap。。。
14. 01:41:760 (2) - 考虑把拐角做的平滑一些？
    
15. 01:46:669 (1) - 去clap。。。。。。
16. 01:47:215 (2,3,4) - 然后这里突然放了clap后面怎么又不放了……我的建议是干脆都别用……
17. 01:54:033 - 这个空拍也是建议用slider尾补上……
18. 02:06:306 (1,3) - 依然是不好听的clap.....后面clap也是各种不建议用………………
19. 03:05:215 (1) - 继续clap.....
20. 03:16:124 (1) - ^，后面clap继续建议全部拿掉……或者说这曲子我都觉得不适合clap...
21. 03:22:396 (1) - 很容易miss的节奏呢（对于新人而言）

1. 好吧继续如我在Normal所说。。我觉得这个曲子真的不适合default clap。。。
2. 另外整体而言，太过频繁的slider变速会让你的flow变的凌乱……
3. 00:34:124 (3) - (nazi)其实中间那个描点不需要的……
4. 01:31:942 (1) - 要不要考虑把这种很直的slider做出弧线呢？因为这个曲子本身是很软的。。感觉上避免这种很生硬的slider会比较好，比如说：
   
5. 01:50:487 (1,2) - 考虑弄平行了？
6. 01:52:396 (2,4) - 这两个也是感觉折角太大了影响美观～
7. 02:03:578 (5) - ctrl+r并且和前面(4)做平行了？
   
8. 02:09:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在(4,5,6)那里突出来的尖角导致整个combo形状看起来怪怪的……

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~M4M

[General]

1. 可以的话BG最好还是用jpg格式的 忘传了，早改了。。。
2. 感觉combo colour 3的颜色还是和背景有点太接近了……………… 已删除
3. 感觉上前奏段的clap的音量可以再降一点…… 降低10%试试

[Normal]

1. 00:19:396 (1) - 开头的这个clap不好听…… clap觉得没什么问题，当然是因为没传lol
2. 00:22:124 (5) - 恩。。试试用双描点把形状弄的再圆滑些？ 都改成了两点:3
   
3. 00:24:306 (2) - 同上。。如果要用三描点的话，左右两侧的描点应该再靠外一些会比较好看，比如
   
4. 00:25:942 (3,4) - 如果是我的话应该会把这两个换下位置，然后和(2)的尾巴做成一个等边三角形 改成了向上的
5. 00:28:124 (1) - 依然是不好听的clapclap未改
6. 00:36:851 (1) - ^
7. 00:45:578 (1) - ^
8. 00:46:669 (1,2) - 这里感觉用两个1/2slider会更舒服点？跟着vocal走的，未改
9. 01:06:578 - 这里的空拍感觉有点无理……建议用slider来做这儿 用1/2slder感觉不跟vocal，用note来填的话，后面的01:07:669 - 也要加上感觉太挤
10. 01:07:942 (6) - NC建议 OK
11. 01:12:033 (5,6) - 建议换位置然后把三角形做成正的:< 位置没换，做成了正的
12. 01:34:124 (3) - 直觉告诉我这个没做好对称………… 我会告诉你其实123都没对称么
13. 01:37:942 (1) - 去clap。。。
14. 01:41:760 (2) - 考虑把拐角做的平滑一些？ fix
    
15. 01:46:669 (1) - 去clap。。。。。。
16. 01:47:215 (2,3,4) - 然后这里突然放了clap后面怎么又不放了……我的建议是干脆都别用…… 这里去掉了
17. 01:54:033 - 这个空拍也是建议用slider尾补上…… 加了个note，对应后面的
18. 02:06:306 (1,3) - 依然是不好听的clap.....后面clap也是各种不建议用………………额
19. 03:05:215 (1) - 继续clap.....
20. 03:16:124 (1) - ^，后面clap继续建议全部拿掉……或者说这曲子我都觉得不适合clap...
21. 03:22:396 (1) - 很容易miss的节奏呢（对于新人而言）尝试了很多种节奏后，还是感觉这样比较好

[Hard]

1. 好吧继续如我在Normal所说。。我觉得这个曲子真的不适合default clap。。。/o\
2. 另外整体而言，太过频繁的slider变速会让你的flow变的凌乱…… 我觉得还不错。。
3. 00:34:124 (3) - (nazi)其实中间那个描点不需要的……不要的话，中心会凹进去一点。。
4. 01:31:942 (1) - 要不要考虑把这种很直的slider做出弧线呢？因为这个曲子本身是很软的。。感觉上避免这种很生硬的slider会比较好，比如说： 这个好
   
5. 01:50:487 (1,2) - 考虑弄平行了？ 对称啊对称
6. 01:52:396 (2,4) - 这两个也是感觉折角太大了影响美观～ fix
7. 02:03:578 (5) - ctrl+r并且和前面(4)做平行了？ OK
   
8. 02:09:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 在(4,5,6)那里突出来的尖角导致整个combo形状看起来怪怪的……未改

恩差不多就这些了～加油的说～

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

mod~！

Hard

SPOILER

00:59:215 (7) - 其实吧我觉得放在6尾巴上更好看点 fix
01:12:306 (1) - 这个吧我觉得可以改成转圈这里01:14:487停止 感觉不太好，所以没改
其余的挺好的了

Normal

SPOILER

00:17:760 (1) - 其实吧我觉得放在中心比较好 OK
01:12:306 这里也是可以加转圈的 同样的未改
03:18:851 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个可以排成一个大五星~！额，这里只有四个note呀，后面那个太远了@。@，而且大五角星的话，没spacing了
背景好有feel啊~！QwQ

好啦继续加油~！

Ryu wrote:

SPOILER

I like song/sb :3/

[Normal]
00:53:215 - 00:54:306 - slider 1 repeat I think it's sounds so bored D:
00:54:033 - remove no change,and it's is at 00:54:306
01:45:578 - 01:46:124 - slider make full 1/1 sounds bored
01:47:215 - nc
01:49:124 - ^
01:51:578 - ^ no change

[Hard]
Size Circle = 2 (just suggestion) Umm,Size Circle is not 2/.\

Good luck !!

Thanks for your mod.-.

eikkaleyd wrote:

SPOILER

一阵子没来，这图就进步这么大了LoL?

[General]
我似乎收到一个PIXIV里的图……png格式的……？如果你还有14546207.png的话是不是要删掉 应该已经删掉了呀，我这里没有XD
顺便帮你检查了一下歌词~！如果之后有MAT来说要找个会日语的查歌词你就拉我充数吧= = 歌词的话，来自网络

[Hard]
00:30:851 (5) - 这个还没拉好 fix
00:37:124 (7,8) - 唔，要么让4-7这两堆构成直线，和下面的123平行，要么这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/361598 换成了对称
00:44:215 (x) - 这里歌手的往上滑音很不错，你用spin盖掉了就没体现出来，我还是推荐这里放个circle，spin后移 好专业@.@fix
00:48:306 (5) - x52 y208 fix
01:01:396 (1,2,3) - 试试和前面粉色的slider尾部一起摆个弧度 fix
01:11:760 (7) - 第一个点往上一格……歪掉了 fix
01:48:851 (4,5) - 选中这两个往左下移动一下，4在x116 y200左右，让它们和23对称 fix
01:54:306 (2) - 这种vocal，应该放个circle，slider放到后面红线上更合适 fix
02:01:124 (1) - ^ slider放到后面白线上（iro的发音是 i ro-，i占一条红线，ro占了一条白线到红线） 嘛，加了一个1/1的slider
03:00:033 (6) - ^ ^
02:11:215 (1) - 拉弯绕着2似乎更好看 fix
02:20:487 (5) - 没拉好 fix
02:25:396 (3,4) - 咦间距？！ fix
03:09:033 (2) - stack没对好fix. 不行，太2了/0\

[Normal]
00:20:487 (1,2) - 个人觉得保持和34一样，slider-circle组合更好 fix
01:34:124 (3) - 往上拉，让头部和2的尾部在同一纵坐标 fix
02:05:215 (1,2) - 换和前面7一样的反弹一次的slider fix
02:34:124 (2,3) - 不仅间距太大而且还遮盖！这太坑爹，把2拉出来，放到13中间 额，遮挡未改，间距改小了/o\
中间很多很难的stack，间距也很大。要不是你经常句与句之间空白，星数应该超了……这低难度没法让新人好好听歌，最好再弄简单点…… 我再想想办法lol

好了~做的很不错XP

潇子。——。

Leorda wrote:

SPOILER

Hi there


[Normal]
01:01:396 (3) - Make a same slider as 01:00:306 (2) to make a symetry pattern fix
01:43:942 (1) - Stack under slider can confuse for beginners....no change
02:21:578 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for them. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/364304 no change


[Hard]
* AR -1? no change


That's all I got, sorry

Thanks

Jebok wrote:

SPOILER

Hi! Mod from my queue. Very nice song

[Normal]
01:11:215 (3) - Do one more repeat. Technically should be one more as you did have that beat there at about 02:02:487.no change
03:06:306 (1) - This combo should be less cramped so how about turning it 90o clockwise and snapping it x:344 and y:112, then distance snapping the rest? Maybe use half the whole grid for this combo and half for the other, so the next combo should start more to the left. fix some parts
03:23:351 - Start the spinner here fix

[Hard]
00:05:760 (5) - Distance snap 0.50x and make sure it is the same y as (3) and (4). no change
01:00:715 (3) - Remove. no change
01:12:169 - Add a note no change
02:04:533 - ^ no change
02:04:669 (8) - Make new combo no change
02:05:215 (1) - No new combo. no change
02:53:760 - Add a note no change
03:23:351 - Start the spinner herefix

I really like the look of this, gogo

Thanks for your mod._.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ x847606653 ~

M4M for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. 00:44:351 (1) - Add whistle sound better to me.

[Normal]

1. AR-1 much better play with beginner.
2. 01:02:760 (4) - Add new combo,vocal start to here.

That's all ~ I can't find more issue ~ nice map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

wmfchris wrote:

[SB]
- generally move them lower? Some of them are blocked by the HP bar. I move it right
- Some of them has quite a lot of transparent pixels...Just mention it here and if you like you can crop it.以前因为截取少了阴影，所以后来就多截了点，下次会注意._.

[Hard]
02:02:487 (4,5,6) - try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/388027 ? OK
02:19:669 (3) - remove clap? clap is corresponding to 02:19:396 - which is empty as in (1).OK

In such a peaceful song and consider the usage of instrument, clapping, for me, is sometime excessive and even whistle and none is all enough for the song, this happens around kiai where claps might be a bit loud for me. The rest is all fine and ready.I try to remove some clap