Kurai beat me so here is the unfinished mod
[General]
- Everything is okay here~
[Yasora's Easy]
- If you are going to use slidertick hitsounds, keep in mind that you should map to the song to the best of your ability first. Do not use them as an excuse to be able to use a different timing pattern instead of something that fits (I'll point out some problems with yours later on in the mod)
- OD+1. Let's not use OD1 on a 3 star map, please. It's uncalled for...
- This map... is 1/1 to no end. Let's make it a bit more interesting, so it's not so boring to play. I'll try to give suggestions on this.
- Consider decreasing SV. I really think that is the main problem here with the star rating... it would help a lot.
- 00:05:757 (4) - Clap on the end to match the drums
- 00:09:132 (4) - Don't end the slider on the downbeat here, it makes no sense to have the player do nothing basically on a downbeat like this. As a general rule of thumb, slider end-points should not exist on heavier beats than the start points (there are exceptions, but this is not one of them). My suggestion is the make this a circle, then use a 2/1 slider at 00:09:507 to be consistent with 00:06:507 (1).
- 00:12:507 (1) - 2/1 Slider for consistency?
- 00:15:507 (1,2) - ^?
- 00:16:632 (3,4) - Start (3) at 00:16:819 instead (fix spacing afterwards) to match the guitar and end it at 00:17:569. Then, change (4) to a circle and put it at 00:18:132. It doesn't follow anything as it is now (just your same ol' 1/1 spam).
- 00:19:257 (3) - Map to the music, don't let the slidertick hitsounds do it for you. Change 00:18:882 (2) to a 2/1 slider and add a circle at 00:20:007. This is also to follow the vocals
- 00:21:507 (1,3) - Just going to point out that I think these are okay since they are meant to follow the vocals.
- 00:29:007 (2) - Clap on both ends to match the drums.
- 00:41:007 (3) - End on the red tick before to match the background?
- 00:41:944 - Add a 1/2 slider for the same reasons as above ^
- 00:42:507 - Please slow down in slider velocity here, it would fit perfectly, then go back at 00:48:507
- 00:48:507 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't follow the music properly, how about http://puu.sh/BWox
[Normal]
- I'm sure you would rather not bother with it, but just sayin' the SV and the spacing are really high for a normal. It would be really nice if you could -at least- change your spacing to 1.0 or something because that spacing really isn't normal level at all.
- 00:14:184 (4) - There is not enough time for the player to see the second repeat, and somebody of this playing level will not expect multiple repeats like this considering you use single repeat 1/4 sliders before.
- 00:38:934 (4) - ^
- 00:43:622 (2,3,4) - Because of the huge spacing, this seems pretty hard to hit. Can you stack these or use a repeat slider?
- 01:03:497 (1) - Same here as mentioned before about the multiple repeats. I mean, you use a lot of 1/2 single-repeat sliders in the diff. How is the player supposed to predict which ones have an extra repeat as a normal-level player?
- 01:09:872 (1,2,3) - Same here as mentioned about the spacing. Stack or change (1,2) into a slider?
- 01:13:247 (2,3,4,5) - ^ (You know, these would all be okay if it wasn't for the huge spacing for a normal)
- 01:17:184 (6) - Same thing with the repeats again...
- 01:18:497 (1,2,3) - These just don't seem to fit the music very well. How about using a 1/1 repeat slider so it's easier to play?
- 01:22:059 (3,4) - Change to a slider so the player is introduced to the upbeat playing?
[H4b's Taiko]
- 01:22:997- 01:28:247 - I can see you are trying to follow the accents but its very very hard to read (some of the stuff doesn't even follow the accents properly) so I suggest just sticking to the drums here. This part is very confusing to play so I really hope you don't take this lightly. It's at the end of the song so you can imagine how much hate there would be, lol (@Miya/Kurai: I really think this is a strong issue so please allow the mapper(s) to look over this part before ranking).
[Hard]
- 00:00:497 (1,1) - Happy to see that you decided to fix this.
- 00:43:069 - 00:48:497 - It just seems weird to me that you would start using triples in a section that slows down. I would suggest sticking to 1/2 until this section ends.
- Wow that SV in Kiai is insane level...
- 00:53:944 (4,5,6) - This Kind of pattern would follow the drums much more nicely.
- 01:23:382 (2,3,4) - These triples are misplaced... If you want to follow the drums then do a triple at 01:23:184 instead
- 01:26:184 - Sounds like a triplet should be here instead of a 1/1 slider covering it up.
- 01:26:944 (4,5,6) - Again, if you want to follow the drums better and make this section less awkward to play, do the triple at 01:26:747.
- 01:27:507 (1,2,3) - ^ at 01:27:309
- Overall the outro sounds and plays very awkwardly, I suggest trying to follow the drums and accents more closely instead of your own pattern.
[D.N.Angel]
- The flow in this difficulty is... Well there is no nice way to put it: It's very poor. I'm too late to really put the time into modding this, so I guess it's getting ranked in this state. I guess not everybody cares about flow?