1. bestz's Hard (4.6 stars, 170 notes)
2. Easy (1.02 stars, 70 notes)
3. Normal (2.82 stars, 98 notes)

-Bakari- wrote:

General
use hitsounds http://puu.sh/bW98
^ all done maybe
Hard
00:04:019 (5) - New Combo
00:10:686 (6) - ^
^Fixed
Normal
00:08:186 (1) - what? D: http://puu.sh/bW9n
00:16:103 (4) - http://puu.sh/bW9z
^huh ??
Easy
00:04:853 (5) - longer < I'think It's fine
00:14:853 (1) - ^ < ^
01:04:853 (5) - new combo < Fixed
01:05:269 (1) - delete new combo< Fixed

thenewearth wrote:

Easy:
00:54:019 <-- add note + finish hitsound < I'm not sure this note
01:00:686 <-- finish sound
01:06:519 <-- whistle sound
01:08:186 <-- whistle sound or finish sound
01:15:061 <-- remove break time
^ Fixed
01:15:686 <-- add note
01:16:519 <-- add slider till 01:17:353
01:18:186 <-- add note
^ last three am change in my style. thx for suggestion
01:27:353 <-- whistle sound (makes the sound complete)
^ Fixed
since it's an easy diff... consider reducing AR by 1 or 2 ticks
^ Fixed
Normal:
00:04:853 <-- new combo
00:06:519 <-- whistle sound
00:11:519 <-- new combo
00:28:186 <-- new combo
00:34:835 <-- new combo
00:45:686 <-- add note w/out hitsound
00:46:936 <-- new combo if you done this ^ , if not... do it at 00:47:769
00:58:186 <-- new combo
01:00:686 <-- finish sound
01:08:186 <-- new combo

consider adding 1 tick on HP drain and reducing AR by 1 tick
^ Fixed all
Hard:
00:33:603 <-- new combo
00:40:269 <-- new combo
^ Fixed all

apart from that... I see no more problems

Faust wrote:

There isn't much to suggest about this map, actually. No technical issues I could find.

Nature of the song is calm and paced, map follows as such. But I'll go over the aesthetics in any case.

Easy: << Fixed all

- 00:44:853 (1) - Pretty sure you can do better than this.

- 00:46:519 (2) - Looks better like this:

SPOILER

- 00:59:019 (1) - Minor fix:

SPOILER

- 01:01:519 (3) - Just copy and paste the previous slider I mentioned.

- 01:03:186 (4) - ^

- 01:19:436 (2,3) - Actually, these two can be centralized.

SPOILER

-01:27:353 (3) - This just looks sloppish. It's in the middle of nowhere.

Use grid-size 3 and re-make it to this:

SPOILER

Normal: << Fixed

Pretty fine, really.

- 00:11:519 (1) - I am unsure if the uneven-ness of the zig-zag is intentional, but if not you could make it appear so.

- 00:28:186 (1) - Slider-points look awry. << oh sorry I havn't idea now.I re-make it later.

- 00:53:603 (1) - Move this to - 00:53:811 -

- 01:11:103 (6) - Rather you delete this and paste the previous slider, flipped vertically and horizontally.

Hard: << Fixed all XD

Pretty clean, just a few suggestions here and there to make it prettier. A good majority of your sliders either look awkward or have terribly extended slider-ends or points. It's worth going over them and re-making.

It's strange, because the previous difficulties expressed some certain experience in slider-art.
But here it just looks amateurish.

- 00:11:519 (5) - Here's a fix for your slider:

SPOILER

- 00:28:186 (4) - Here as well:

SPOILER

- 00:48:186 (5) - Think you might want to re-make this slider. It's got unnecessary slider points.

- 00:49:019 (6) - Little fix for the slider:

SPOILER

Do the same for the other half of the blanket.

- 01:08:186 (1) - Probably should have a finish hitsound.

That's it. Not a bad map at all.

I'm happy about the song choice as well. All the best.

1. 00:21:103 (3) - delete this note?
2. 00:29:853 (7,8) - change to a reverse slider?
3. 00:49:019 (1) - why new combo here? = =
4. 00:50:686 (1) - and this, not necessary.
5. 00:58:186 (2) - spacing too close...

1. 00:04:853 (1) - move the 4th point to (280,64), 5th point to (336,88), last (360,152). looks better
2. 00:09:436 (4) - spacing too far...
3. 00:14:436 (1) - delete this note?
4. 00:33:186 (3) - try to grid snap off and make this stack perfect
5. 00:37:769 (1,2) - just 1 reverse slider at 00:38:186
6. 01:19:853 (6) - move the 2nd point to (256,96)
7. 01:21:103 (7) - delete this note?

1. 00:15:478 (3) - spacing? maybe move 2 end
2. 00:34:228 (4,5) - too much stack here, make a slider?
3. 00:43:811 (2,4) - not symmetrical orz
4. 00:49:853 (8) - 2grid left
5. 00:57:561 (10) - kind of hard to read this one, don't stack?

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue

nice song choice...

[Easy]

1. 00:21:103 (3) - delete this note? nope,It's ok
2. 00:29:853 (7,8) - change to a reverse slider?^ But I change in my style
3. 00:49:019 (1) - why new combo here? = = oh, Fix now
4. 00:50:686 (1) - and this, not necessary. ^
5. 00:58:186 (2) - spacing too close... ^

[Normal]

1. 00:04:853 (1) - move the 4th point to (280,64), 5th point to (336,88), last (360,152). looks better great,Fixed
2. 00:09:436 (4) - spacing too far... Fixed
3. 00:14:436 (1) - delete this note? nope,srry
4. 00:33:186 (3) - try to grid snap off and make this stack perfect I'll tihink other style
5. 00:37:769 (1,2) - just 1 reverse slider at 00:38:186 It's confused I think
6. 01:19:853 (6) - move the 2nd point to (256,96) Fixed
7. 01:21:103 (7) - delete this note?

nope

[Hard]

1. 00:15:478 (3) - spacing? maybe move 2 end done
2. 00:34:228 (4,5) - too much stack here, make a slider? 'll Do it
3. 00:43:811 (2,4) - not symmetrical orz Fixed
4. 00:49:853 (8) - 2grid left ^
5. 00:57:561 (10) - kind of hard to read this one, don't stack?^

Good luck~

• Offset 1.517, it's better to me
  Add offset 84780
  Add offset 86516
  Don't forget to resnap all elements/green lines.
  Remove letterbox during breaks. There aren't breaks in your maps.

1. 00:07:353 (6) - Move it to x368 y224
2. 00:14:019 (6) - Distance snap it
3. 00:17:353 (3) - ^
4. 00:21:103 (3) - This circle is unnecessary, remove it
5. 00:27:769 (4) - Move to x368 y336
6. 00:28:186 (5) - New combo and move it to x464 y304 so it's simmetric with 00:26:519 (3)
7. 00:31:519 (1) - Improve the shape of this slider please :\
   
8. 00:33:186 (2,3) - Improve this slider's shape and this blanked with (3). Make in this way:
   
9. 00:34:853 (4) - If you follow above, make this slider in this way moving it to x256 y288 and add new combo:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:48:186 (1) - Don't overlap with the slider. Move to x304 y112
11. 00:56:519 (1) - Remove NC
12. 00:58:186 (2) - Add NC
13. 01:19:436 (2,3) - These sliders don't follow the music. Move the (2) to 01:19:853 and delete the (3)
    
14. 01:26:519 (2) - This circle touches the HP bar, please move it.

1. 00:11:519 (6) - New combo
2. 00:33:186 (3,4) - 1 grid up, so the slider (3) overlaps with the previous slider 00:32:353 (2)
3. 00:34:853 (5) - New combo
4. 00:43:603 (5,1) - Well, I suggest you to remove the (1) and add a repeat on the slider (5). It follows better the song and so you also can set NC on the beat 00:44:853 (2):
   
5. 01:08:186 (1) - Add finish

1. 00:24:019 (1) - Remove finish, it doesn't sound good
2. 00:24:853 (3) - New combo
3. 00:27:561 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 00:28:186 (4) - Add new combo
5. 00:49:853 (8) - Move it to x184 y200 for a better blanket
6. 00:54:853 (6) - New combo
7. 00:57:769 (1,2) - Exchange new combo

Chewin wrote:

Hai, from my queue ~

General <<mostly Fixed

• Offset 1.517, it's better to me
  Add offset 84780
  Add offset 86516
  Don't forget to resnap all elements/green lines.
  Remove letterbox during breaks. There aren't breaks in your maps.

Easy << Fixed

1. 00:07:353 (6) - Move it to x368 y224
2. 00:14:019 (6) - Distance snap it
3. 00:17:353 (3) - ^
4. 00:21:103 (3) - This circle is unnecessary, remove it
5. 00:27:769 (4) - Move to x368 y336
6. 00:28:186 (5) - New combo and move it to x464 y304 so it's simmetric with 00:26:519 (3)
7. 00:31:519 (1) - Improve the shape of this slider please :\
   
8. 00:33:186 (2,3) - Improve this slider's shape and this blanked with (3). Make in this way:
   
9. 00:34:853 (4) - If you follow above, make this slider in this way moving it to x256 y288 and add new combo:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:48:186 (1) - Don't overlap with the slider. Move to x304 y112
11. 00:56:519 (1) - Remove NC
12. 00:58:186 (2) - Add NC
13. 01:19:436 (2,3) - These sliders don't follow the music. Move the (2) to 01:19:853 and delete the (3) << I'm not sure this pattern
    
14. 01:26:519 (2) - This circle touches the HP bar, please move it.

Normal<< All Fixed

1. 00:11:519 (6) - New combo
2. 00:33:186 (3,4) - 1 grid up, so the slider (3) overlaps with the previous slider 00:32:353 (2)
3. 00:34:853 (5) - New combo
4. 00:43:603 (5,1) - Well, I suggest you to remove the (1) and add a repeat on the slider (5). It follows better the song and so you also can set NC on the beat 00:44:853 (2):
   
5. 01:08:186 (1) - Add finish

Hard<< All Fixed

1. 00:24:019 (1) - Remove finish, it doesn't sound good
2. 00:24:853 (3) - New combo
3. 00:27:561 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 00:28:186 (4) - Add new combo
5. 00:49:853 (8) - Move it to x184 y200 for a better blanket
6. 00:54:853 (6) - New combo
7. 00:57:769 (1,2) - Exchange new combo

Patterns are good but you need to improve the style of them (:
Good luck then \:D/

1. Keep timing in same with all diff.and maybe you should fix offset.check this->http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39784
2. hitsound in your mapset are too loud,especially finish sound.try to use green line to reduce the volume.
3. Take good use of custom hitsound sample.
4. You have use custom hitsound sample but not sample file in your folder.At least use a silence soft-sliderbody.wav
5. I don't think use SV 2.7(Hard) is a good idea for this song.And more difficult not means high SV
6. Your Easy & Normal feels better than your Hard in my opinion.

winber1 wrote:

sorry for late reply

Hard

00:10:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi* could be a little more perfect. THe star is a litte off :/
00:12:769 (6) - *more nazi* could be position in the exact middle of 00:11:519 (5) -
00:27:561 (7,8,9,1) - *even more nazi* make into a perfect diamond
00:32:353 (3) - you could remap this into something like http://puu.sh/cwHo to match the vocals more. THe endpoint of combo 5 is directly above 00:33:811 (2)
00:38:603 (5) - you can just delete this note, copy paste 00:37:769 (4) - , then Ctrl+h
00:44:853 (6) - perfectly stack under combo 3
00:47:978 - add note? to follow vocals

Normal

00:03:603 (5) - it would just look more clean if you followed the same spacing instead of having this jump
00:08:186 (1) - this note is almost offscreen ._. There shouldn't be a need to place this note so low.
00:53:811 (1,2) - the notes look better like this, and is probably a little easier to read for beginners. http://puu.sh/cwMN4
01:08:603 (2,3) - spacing

Easy

--delete the red timing sections at the end as they seem useless
--you need to resnap these notes.
01:08:183 - the kiai time here is off by 3 ms

00:14:853 (1,2,3,1) - there is no need for such spacing. I would use more equal and consistent spacing here.
00:48:186 (1,2,3,4) - make a diamond shape
00:59:019 (1) - remove combo
01:24:853 (1) - there's really no need to place the note that low, move up a few grids?

Good luck :3

AoiX wrote:

um...need more hard work,so I'll just do a quick check

Keep timing in same with all diff.and maybe you should fix offset.check this->http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39784
hitsound in your mapset are too loud,especially finish sound.try to use green line to reduce the volume.
Take good use of custom hitsound sample.
You have use custom hitsound sample but not sample file in your folder.At least use a silence soft-sliderbody.wav
I don't think use SV 2.7(Hard) is a good idea for this song.And more difficult not means high SV
Your Easy & Normal feels better than your Hard in my opinion.

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

request from queue~

[General]
lol high SV + low BPM~ reminds me about ouendan 2 level lol~
Slider Tick 2 feels like 1 for me lol~ it's ok~ < lol It's same 1 tick

[Timing]
> add 300ms to AudioLeadIn, to make around 2000ms delay for player before clicking the first object
{ 2nd red timing } hmmm i don't sure about this, it feels a little off
{ new red timing} 01:26:501 , 71bpm < added

[Easy]
> whoa high settings, CS -1
00:17:353 (3) - surprise jump for me lol~
01:19:415 (2) - unsnapped note?
^ All Fixed
[Normal]
> hmmm Drain lower by 1?
00:53:811 (1,2) - overlapped? i think this is not really good... maybe..
01:26:501 (3) - try this http://up.ppy.sh/files/temp-12.png << Try hard for symmetrical orz

[Hard]
> i know you like star pattern in this diff << in concept
00:03:186 (4) - make it further.. 0.1x
00:04:228 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid (smallest size) left, to make it symmetrical star pattern,
i hope 00:04:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - is crossing star pattern lol
00:12:769 (6) - did you follow the piano? if you follow the vocal , then shrink this slider by 1/4 and add 1 repeat~ <<follow by piano, do you think ? lol ,, Fixed it
01:11:067 (9) - distance 0.0x (turn off grid snap, then lower distance snap to 0.0x)<<minimum distance I try is 0.1x
01:12:543 (5) - holding mouse part ? remove this slider and add 4 circles with jump?<< Fixed

nice map~ here star~

Heming James wrote:

Really a nice song, I like it
Here just some suggestion on your map

[Easy]

00:17:353(3) Too far from the previous object
00:37:769(1) Don't stack
01:19:415(2) Not snapped
^All Fixed
[Normal]

HP Drain Rate is too high, better 2 level less
Overall Difficulty better 1 level less
You should test this diff on AIMod, there're some spacing warnings in this diff
^Fixed
00:59:418 These three notes are too difficult as a normal diff < nope, It's ok I think


[Hard]

00:58:168 A new combo here
01:11:293 This jump is a little bit strange during playing
^Fixed all

Anyway, I like this map. Good luck!

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~<< Fixed
Resnap all notes
00:56:085 (2) - fix the spacing


~Normal~<< Fixed
00:02:353 (3) - move right & up 1 grid (tiny)
00:39:436 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:853 (1) - too close to previous slider
00:47:353 (4) - move right 3 grids (tiny)
00:54:019 (1,2) - remove these notes and put a circle on red timing section
01:15:668 (1,2,3,4) - make them more symmetry, for better looks

~Hard~<<Mostly Fixed
Resnap all notes
00:01:520 (1,2,3) - spacings are too much different, very confused
00:04:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - notes shouldn't be covered by slider << no idea now , 'll fix later
00:07:978 (7) - add new combo
00:08:188 (1) - remove new combo
00:14:436 (8) - add new combo
00:14:855 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:355 (7) - move right 1 grid (tiny)
00:17:771 (8) - add new combo
00:18:605 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:313 (7) - add new combo
00:31:521 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:105 (8) - add new combo
00:41:521 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:896 (6,7) - don't start at the same position of slider, also fix the spacing
01:06:501 (6) - add new combo
01:09:626 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:067 (1) - ^
01:11:293 (2) - add new combo
01:11:501 (1) - remove new combo
01:14:001 (4,5,6) - fix the spacing

SPOILER

352,304,28186,6,0,B|408:304|448:244|412:176|356:176,1,200,2|0

SPOILER

152,172,34853,6,0,B|132:104|180:68|240:52|296:120,1,200,2|0

SPOILER

SPOILER

256,156,79626,5,0
308,196,79835,2,0,B|372:192|376:120,1,100
348,76,80460,1,0
288,48,80668,2,0,B|225:51|223:109,1,100

B2IN wrote:

#modreqs

[Hard]
00:25:478 (2) - up . 1gird (third dot)
00:28:186 (1) - how about this one ?

SPOILER

352,304,28186,6,0,B|408:304|448:244|412:176|356:176,1,200,2|0

00:33:811 (7,8) - completely stack
00:34:853 (1) - how about this one?

SPOILER

152,172,34853,6,0,B|132:104|180:68|240:52|296:120,1,200,2|0

00:38:186 (2,3,4) -

SPOILER

01:17:751 (1,2,3) - make.same as 01:18:585 (1,2,3)
01:19:626 (1,2,3,4) - how about this ?

SPOILER

256,156,79626,5,0
308,196,79835,2,0,B|372:192|376:120,1,100
348,76,80460,1,0
288,48,80668,2,0,B|225:51|223:109,1,100

01:24:834 (4) - it's not symmetry

^Fixed

Good luck >ㅅ<

2nnt wrote:

Hello~

Easy:
00:18:186 (1) - Remove new combo? << Fix This
00:26:519 (3,4,5) - Move one square right?
01:06:501 (4) - Finish?
01:09:001 (1) - Clap or whistle?
01:10:668 (3) - ^
01:11:501 (1) Slider end - ^
01:14:001 (3) - ^
01:15:668 (1,2) - ^

Normal:
01:10:668 (5) - Clap or whistle?
01:15:668 (1) - ^
01:17:335 (3) - ^
01:19:001 (5) - ^

Hard:
00:18:603 (2) - Copy first slider and rotate 180 degrees (by selection centre)
01:06:501 (1) - Finish?
01:12:335 (3) - Clap or whistle?
01:14:001 (4) - ^
01:15:668 (3) - ^
01:16:918 (1) - Finish or whistle?
01:17:335 (3) - Clap or whistle?
01:19:002 (3) - ^
01:27:346 (6) - Not too pretty, so you might want to try making it prettier << right fix it

Goodbye~

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
Put a 500 audio lead-in for all diffs. < Fixed

[Hard]
AR 8 may reduce the case of overlapping... << too fast
00:05:894 (2,3,4,5) - try not to hide notes behind slider -- that's not easy to read. Also (4) has different spacing with others.
00:10:478 (6) - ^, covered by (4)
00:17:353 (9) - whistle here I guess, otherwise the whole combo is too quiet < in 00:16:519 I forgot
00:43:811 (6) - place somewhere at (400,128) so that (4,5,6,7) forms a curve
00:54:436 (4,5,6) - make a regular heaxgon, (4,5,6) look distorted.
01:18:168 (3) - put (3) symmetrical to (2) along the x-axis
01:19:002 (3) - ^
Other than notes with hitsounds, the rest are really too soft, and the hitsound don't come really often... < I'm no idea in hitsound.This map are very relax,I think.

^other all fixed

[Normal]
OD 4 might work, 2 is far too low.
00:10:269 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289834
00:16:103 (4,5) - (4): the last slider point up 1 grid so that it is symmetrical, move (5) up 1 grid to stack on (1)
00:33:186 (3,4) - you may want to stack their end with (1,2) perfectly
00:37:353 (7) - spacing
01:04:001 (3) - stack with the coming slider (2)
01:19:001 (5) - new combo
*well try to avoid overlapping of sliders (especially the start and the end), they may create difficulty for normal players.
^yep,Fixed All
[Easy]
why this OD is higher than normal lol, put it at 2.
*not much problem, though spacing can be refined by grid level 3 or 4, and try to avoid overlapping like 00:09:853 (3,4,5) - .
^Done
good luck with your map :3 ~

1. ลบ .osb เเล้ว Full Submit
2. เอา Display storyboard in front of combo fire ออกซะ ใน Setting เพราะไม่ได้ใช้อะไรเลย
3. รู้สึกว่า Offset จะช้าไป ลองไปให้ MAT ไม่ก็ BAT เช็คดู ไม่ก็โพสในนี้ http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/13795
4. Unstack Greenline

1. AR -1
2. 00:04:853 (5) - NC.
3. 00:28:186 (5) - ^
4. 00:51:519 (1) - ปรับเสียงให้เหลือ 5 เเล้วลองใส่ finish ดู
5. 01:07:335 (5) - ^
6. 01:07:335 (5) - สไลด์ท้ายเพลงให้ใช้ soft-hitfinish แทน
7. 01:09:001 (1) - Remove NC.

1. 00:01:936 (2,3) - ลบโน๊ตตรงนี้เเล้วเปลี่ยน (1) ให้เป็นสไลด์ 1/1 ยาวถึง 00:02:353 นี่
2. 00:24:019 (1) - โน๊ตตัวนี้เอาให้มันใกลัตรงกลางหน่อยจะได้ง่ายขึ้น
3. 00:44:853 (1) - ใส่ reverse เข้าไป
4. 00:51:519 (1) - เหมือนกับอีซี่
5. 00:59:418 (2,3,4) - โอ้วจอร์จมันห่างกันเกินไป ใช้ซัก 0.8 ก็พอนะ
6. 01:01:501 (1) - ใส่ reverse เข้าไปเเล้วลบ 01:03:168 (2) - ออกเเล้วมาใส่ตรง 01:03:585 เเทน
7. 01:06:918 (3,4,5) - Sounds weird ใช้ เสียง Normal แทนจะฟังรื่นหูกว่า
8. 01:08:168 (1) - Like อีซี่

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1. Spacing

[TimingPoints]
1520,833.333333333333,4,2,1,40,1,0
24436,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
24644,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
53186,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
53394,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
54835,833.333333333333,4,2,1,40,1,0
68168,-100,4,2,0,40,0,1
68272,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
81501,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
86501,845.070422535211,4,2,1,40,1,0

2nnt wrote:

Could I get my kudosu for the previous post?

Netsukawa wrote:

เนี๊ยะฮ่าๆๆๆๆๆ

Taken from #modreqs

[General]

1. ลบ .osb เเล้ว Full Submit
2. เอา Display storyboard in front of combo fire ออกซะ ใน Setting เพราะไม่ได้ใช้อะไรเลย
3. รู้สึกว่า Offset จะช้าไป ลองไปให้ MAT ไม่ก็ BAT เช็คดู ไม่ก็โพสในนี้ http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/13795
4. Unstack Greenline

[อีซี่]

1. AR -1
2. 00:04:853 (5) - NC.
3. 00:28:186 (5) - ^
4. 00:51:519 (1) - ปรับเสียงให้เหลือ 5 เเล้วลองใส่ finish ดู
5. 01:07:335 (5) - ^
6. 01:07:335 (5) - สไลด์ท้ายเพลงให้ใช้ soft-hitfinish แทน
7. 01:09:001 (1) - Remove NC.

[นอมอล]

1. 00:01:936 (2,3) - ลบโน๊ตตรงนี้เเล้วเปลี่ยน (1) ให้เป็นสไลด์ 1/1 ยาวถึง 00:02:353 นี่
2. 00:24:019 (1) - โน๊ตตัวนี้เอาให้มันใกลัตรงกลางหน่อยจะได้ง่ายขึ้น
3. 00:44:853 (1) - ใส่ reverse เข้าไป
4. 00:51:519 (1) - เหมือนกับอีซี่
5. 00:59:418 (2,3,4) - โอ้วจอร์จมันห่างกันเกินไป ใช้ซัก 0.8 ก็พอนะ
6. 01:01:501 (1) - ใส่ reverse เข้าไปเเล้วลบ 01:03:168 (2) - ออกเเล้วมาใส่ตรง 01:03:585 เเทน
7. 01:06:918 (3,4,5) - Sounds weird ใช้ เสียง Normal แทนจะฟังรื่นหูกว่า
8. 01:08:168 (1) - Like อีซี่

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1. Spacing

เอาเสียง custom ไปใส่ใหม่นะเเล้วก็ใส่ตามดิฟที่ให้ไปด้วย =w="

นี่ Timing ลบใน .osu เเล้วก๊อปวางเลยก็ได้

[TimingPoints]
1520,833.333333333333,4,2,1,40,1,0
24436,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
24644,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
53186,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
53394,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
54835,833.333333333333,4,2,1,40,1,0
68168,-100,4,2,0,40,0,1
68272,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
81501,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
86501,845.070422535211,4,2,1,40,1,0

bestz2541 wrote:

ok >w<
my hard diff is finish

Netsukawa wrote:

bestz2541 wrote:

ok >w<
my hard diff is finish

DO NOT GIVE KUDOSU TO GUEST DIFF MAKER
เดี๋ยวก็โดน BAT MAT ว่าหรอก , รีบไปตาม MAT BAT มาลบเร็ว

SUBSTAC9 wrote:

Done

ตามเช็คให้ด้วยนะเน็ต

Netsukawa wrote:

จะให้เช็คอะไรอะ ?

Ayu wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Easy]
00:46:519 (3) - Touches the HP bar. lower it.
00:49:019 (2) - Touches edge of the window
00:54:835 (1,3) - Would be better as just normal sliders instead of elbows.
01:11:501 (1) - no.

^ Fixed
[Normal]
00:04:853 (1) - Could be better < Style or Pattern ?
00:28:186 (1) - ...what? < nope, I don't fix it
00:34:853 (5) - ^
01:19:835 (2) - style of the slider doesn't fits here. < Fixed

[Hard]
00:42:561 (3) - Looks ugly. < ?

Well, beatmap wasn't bad. Good luck~

Underflow wrote:

Hi, SUBSTAC9.
From Underflow's Newbie Modding Queue

[General]
- Not use newbg.jpg. Remove newbg.jpg

[Easy]
- 01:11:501 (4) New Combo
- 01:23:168 (5) New Combo
- 01:24:834 (1) Remove New Combo

[Normal]
- 00:34:853 (5) New Combo
- 00:48:603 (5) New Combo < nope
- 01:06:918 (3) New Combo

[Hard]
- 00:04:436 (5) New Combo
- 00:11:103 (6) New Combo
- 01:06:918 (7) New Combo
- The distance between 01:17:751 (1,2,3) and 01:18:585 (1,2,3) is too far. < X

Good luck

bestz2541 wrote:

Where my Diff modding ? XD

1. Easy, Normal, and Hard have three red timing points, while bestz's Hard has two. Fix this inconsistency, please.

1. 00:35:894 (2,3,4,5) - I don't see anything that would justify a formation of four 1/4 circles here.
2. 00:43:603 (4,5,6,7) - ^. Removing (5) and (7) would be better. Also, make 00:44:644 (8) go 1/4 beat earlier if you removed those notes. Also, move the new (5) (previously (6)) to (372,160). Will look like this.

1. 00:29:853 (5,6) - This slight overlap looks bad, IMO.

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

>bestz's Hard

1. 00:29:853 (5,6) - This slight overlap looks bad, IMO.

- Move it to left 1 bit

You know what, aside from one major problem (the red/uninherited timing point), everything looks good (including Easy and Normal). Also, the song is nice.

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. Easy, Normal, and Hard have three red timing points, while bestz's Hard has two. Fix this inconsistency, please.

- Fixed

>Hard

1. 00:35:894 (2,3,4,5) - I don't see anything that would justify a formation of four 1/4 circles here.
2. 00:43:603 (4,5,6,7) - ^. Removing (5) and (7) would be better. Also, make 00:44:644 (8) go 1/4 beat earlier if you removed those notes. Also, move the new (5) (previously (6)) to (372,160). Will look like this.

- Fixed

>bestz's Hard

1. 00:29:853 (5,6) - This slight overlap looks bad, IMO.

You know what, aside from one major problem (the red/uninherited timing point), everything looks good (including Easy and Normal). Also, the song is nice.

Good luck on the way

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi~



[Easy]
AR - 3 here
01:11:519 (1) - clap tail
01:21:519 (4) - reduce volume here, its a bit loud



[Normal]
AR-6 is too high for N diff for such calm song reduce it plz
00:19:436 (4,5,6) - this is very confusing for N diff
00:24:436 (2) - remove this slider and add note 00:24:853
00:49:436 (6) - wrong spacing here
01:21:519 (4) - reduce volume for this finish
01:21:623 (1) - mute slider end



[Hard]
00:53:811 (1) - this is unrankable, you must add NC manually
01:08:186 (5) - NC here because Kiai starts




Good luck~

1. KIAI time ends at different time in 3 diff.s not a big deal though, better to make them the same
2. Hard has an extra red line "00:54:835 BPM:72"

1. 00:24:436 - Unused timing section
2. 01:08:168 - Unsnapped KIAI start
3. 01:08:186 (5) - Slider end, add finish, and maybe remove finish on the reverse point? It sounds not that good
4. 01:12:769 (2) - Whistle sounds bad here imo, maybe remove it?
5. 01:21:501 - Unsnapped KIAI end
6. 01:14:019 (3) - ^
7. 01:20:686 (3) - No whistle and clap on this slider sounds better imo, since background music here is quiet

1. 00:24:436 - Unused timing section

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. KIAI time ends at different time in 3 diff.s not a big deal though, better to make them the same
2. Hard has an extra red line "00:54:835 BPM:72"

[Easy]

1. 00:24:436 - Unused timing section
2. 01:08:168 - Unsnapped KIAI start
3. 01:08:186 (5) - Slider end, add finish, and maybe remove finish on the reverse point? It sounds not that good
4. 01:12:769 (2) - Whistle sounds bad here imo, maybe remove it?
5. 01:21:501 - Unsnapped KIAI end
6. 01:14:019 (3) - ^
7. 01:20:686 (3) - No whistle and clap on this slider sounds better imo, since background music here is quiet

[Normal]

1. 00:24:436 - Unused timing section

Others seems good
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