★★★★★★★★ 

Chocopikel wrote:
[General]
HardとInsaneのMax score差が1000万以上離れてるけどどうなんだろうね
多分問題ないだろうけど俺もいまいちわかりません - 問題ないならいいかw
[Hard]
00:49:184 (1) - 前のサークルから1拍空いてるのに同じスペーシングで置くのはタブーかなー - Hardなら問題ないと思います。
00:56:345 (1) - remove new combo - no
00:59:636 (1) - ^ - no
01:03:700 (2) - 終点を01:04:378 あと次のスライダーの始点にひっつけたらいいんじゃないかな 03:18:797 (1)と同じ感じで - fixed.
03:16:474 (2) - 03:16:087 (1)をctrl+Hしたほうが見栄えがいい - fixed
03:54:797 (1) - 03:59:442で終わり soft 5%で - あまり長すぎるのも良くないと思うので。
[Insane]
00:10:861 (2) - 終点00:11:055 - no
00:43:184 (1) - remove new combo - no
00:46:474 - add note - no
00:56:345 (7,8,9,10,11) - 近いから前のスライダーの終点と続けて押してしまいそうかな - プレイ中はスライダーの真ん中に入ります。
01:10:668 (1) - しっかり重ねる ちょっとずれてる - fixed.
01:17:829 (6) - ^ - fixed.
01:28:861 (1) - remove new combo - no
01:29:248 (5) - new combo
02:11:636 - add note - no
02:14:926 (1,2) - これでいいんじゃないかなー - no, この配置と音で気に入ってるので!
02:28:281 - add note - no
03:04:281 (1) - remove new combo - no, 歌詞の「二つを一つに」これをNCと配置で表しています!
03:43:571 (1) - ^ - no
03:43:958 (5) - new combo
03:54:797 (1) - 03:59:442で終わり soft 5%で - no
thank you for modding!Chocopikel wrote:
[KSHR's Normal]
03:54:797 (1) - 03:59:442で終わり soft 5%で
Hard, Insaneとあわせるためにno changeにさせてください
K o h a k u wrote:
[Insane]
01:38:345 (1) - derete New combo - no,なんかしっくりきてるのでw
03:04:281 (1) - ^ - 歌詞を(ry
03:05:055 (3) - ^
03:41:636 (1) - ^ - no
[Hard]
ODは6の方がいいと思います - 6にするとスターレート4.52になるんです><;
00:10:861 (1) - delete New combo - fixed
03:53:442 ~ 03:54:603 add spiner ? - no,Hardで連続スピンはまずいかもと。
-Bakari- wrote:
General
i suggest you to use 1024x768 it will looks better than 800x600 bg - fixed.
Insane
00:10:087 (1) - repeat-slider here? - No.
01:36:216 (7,4) - re-shape this sliders, please. they are BORINGNo.
Hard
00:02:539 (4) - long, boooring slider - No.
00:05:636 (4) - ^
00:08:732 (4) - ^ re-shape them. it's really boring to play ><
00:24:990 (2) - can confuse players - fixed.
01:06:023 (3) - ^ - why? i cant confuse.
01:06:797 (4,2,3) - don't cross this sliders! - ^ too
01:17:249 (2,3,5) - ^
01:26:152 (3,4,5) - booooring, loooong sliders - No.
kusano wrote:
[Hard]
- 00:25:765 (-) - 個人的にここは音が欲しい
- 00:46:668 (1) - remove NC ? ^ No.
- 00:49:184 (1,2) - NCを消してctrl + Rで反転してみてはどうでしょう - fixed.
- 00:53:249 (1) - remove NC ? よほどのことがない限りは音の変化でNCをつけるのはやめたほうがいいかなと - No, スペーシングが変わっているので。
- 00:56:345 (1) - ^
- 00:59:636 (1) - ^
- 01:03:507 (1) - ^
- 01:16:474 (1) - ここみたいにリズムが変わる場所でのNCはありだと思います。むしろかなり好みです
- 01:30:797 (5,1) - switch NC (ここからスペーシングが変わるので) - fixed
- 01:36:991 (5) - add NC ? - fixed
- 02:18:410 (1) - remove NC ? ここからのパートも00:53:249~と同じ理由です - no.
- 03:45:507 (5,1) - switch NC - fixed
- 03:53:055 (7,8) - like this - fixed,think my better
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[Insane]
- 00:43:765 (1) - remove NC - no, スペーシングの変化あります。
- 00:50:152 (1,1,1) - 少し分かりづらいかも? 最初のNC以外は外すか普通にスタックさせてみてはどうでしょうか - No
- 00:51:700 (1,2) - switch NC - fixed
- 00:55:184 (4) - add NC (前のパートと合わせるため)
- 00:58:281 (4) - ^
- 00:59:442 (1) - remove NC ? - no
- 01:01:377 (5,1) - switch NC ? - fixed
- 01:05:248 (1) - remove NC ? - fixed
- 01:12:216 (6,1) - switch NC - fixed
- 01:15:119 (5) - add NC ? - fixed
- 01:18:216 (8,1) - switch NC - no
- 01:30:797 (9,1) - ^ (Normalと同じ理由で) - no,三角の形にカンケイしてないので。
- 01:38:345 (1) - remove NC - no
- 02:26:539 (5,1) - switch NC ?fixed
- 03:04:281 (1) - remove NC - no,『二つを一つに』をNCと配置で(ry
- 03:28:087 (1) - ^ - fixed
- 03:29:829 (5) - add NC - fixed
- 03:45:507 (9,1) - switch NC - no
Midasmens wrote:
Hi~ I mod your map cause i like the song
And i'm a new modder so here is some suggestions![]()
General
Some green lines are useless...Please check it out- fixed
Use the Grid Level 4.....the slider may be more pretty - no
Insane
00:10:861 (2) - the green line make the slider no soundfix it - Sound is kept from coming out.
00:39:700 (5) - oh! this slider is really ugly- i think no problem
00:42:603 (5) - ^ you should fix like this - fixed
01:55:378 (2,3) - remove clap - no
01:59:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change the 3 notes to slider~~ it's more better than 3 notes - no, i like now
Hard diff is remaking now.
That's it~~
Deco*27 is one of my favorite musician~~- My favorite tooooooooo
Garven wrote:
[Insane]
00:48:216 (2,3) - Move down and right one grid to adjust for stacking. - fixed
01:32:732 (1,2) - Feel way too close - fixed DS1.0
02:08:926 (5,6,7,8,9) - Feels better like this: - fixed, think my better
02:27:894 (1) - This part is more accurate like this: - no
03:44:345 (6) - Compare hitsounds during this section compared to 01:29:636 (6) - no, think better now
03:47:442 (1,2) - Too close - fixed
03:53:345 (1) - End this at 03:54:410 - fixed
03:54:797 (1) - End this at 03:59:442 - (and apply this suggestion to all diffs if you do it) - fixed
[Hard] - I remake hard
You really need to keep an eye on your distance snapping. Your spacing for 1/2 notes changes -a lot-
Compare 00:15:894 (7,1) - to 00:16:861 (2,3) -
00:44:926 (1,2,3) - to 00:48:216 (2,3,4,5,6) -
etc.
03:43:958 (1) - Same hitsound change thing from the Insane.
jamxx wrote:
楽しかったです!頑張ってください~
modとまでは言えませんが気になった点のみあげておきます!
Insane
02:12:990 (1,2,3) - がスタックしてなかったので修正? - Play中に(2)が(1)の真上に落ちるようにずらしてます。
02:05:442 (6) - スライダーの終点を02:06:023の白線まで伸ばした方が曲にあっています、もしくはそこにサークル追加 - add note
最後のKIAI TIMEは2つにわけてあるのが気になりました - Kiai Timeの始まる時のエフェクトを入れているだけです。(下の両端から噴出すヤツ)
I will Fix, if pointed out about the same sound for insane as other Moderator.Agnes wrote:
[General]
I find the kiai at 02:29:636 on all difficulties a bit unnecessary to put... - fixed
[Hard]
HP Drain +1 - change it.
01:03:700 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this into a short return slider? (suggestion) - no.
03:18:797 (1,2,3) - ^ - ^
[Insane]
00:05:442 (4) - This return slider feels out of place... - why..? i think that sound are not bad.
00:39:700 (5) - Turn the red anchor into a normal white anchor, then fix it up like this: http://puu.sh/pQEC - fixed
00:46:281 (1,2) - This double feels out of place... - 00:05:442 (4) too.
02:58:861 (4) - Feels out of place. - ^
Guy wrote:
[General]
● SBは不使用と思われるので、.osbファイルは削除していいかと。 - fixed. 復活しちゃいますよねw今は一応消さなくてもいいみたいです!
[Insane]
● 00:22:474 (1) - 1grid up
● 00:22:861 (3) - 1grid right
● 00:23:055 (4) - 1grid up - all fixed.
上記のように移動すると見栄えが良いと思います。↓参考に ● 00:57:894 (3) - 00:57:119 (1) のスライダーをCtrl+Rで使ったほうがいいと思います。 - fixed.(3)のほうはmissかな・・?
● 01:33:507 (2) - ^ 01:32:732 (1) と微妙に形が違います。 - Ctrl+Rでみたところ合ってました!
● 02:16:861 (1),(2),(3) - ここも微妙に形が違うので気になりました。 - fixed.
● 02:22:281 (1),(2),(3) - (2)をセンターラインに合わせるようにすると綺麗です。(1)をコピーして(3)を同じ形に - fixed.
したほうが良いかもしれません。↓参考に ● 03:47:442 (1),(2) - スライダーの形が気になります。 - fixed.
[Hard]
● 01:05:055 (x) - Add note? - not add.
● 03:15:700 (1)~(4) - (1)と(3)をCtrl+Hして、中心との距離を同じにしましょう。 - fixed
blackabyss wrote:
[General]
-please delete the OSB file if you don't use it. - fixed.
-i just suggest you to not use volume under 30% - no, I would like to mainly hide the sound of Spinner.
-just suggestion, i think the Kiai time at 00:12:990 until 00:13:039 is unnecessary - no, I want the effect which blows off from the bottom.
[Hard]
00:10:668 add a circle? - no.
02:12:603 ^^ - no.
just suggestion, you can add circle, or sliders 03:53:636 to 03:54:410 - no.
[insane]
00:24:797 (3) moved to x:176, y:64 ? - no. It has placed in parallel with 00:24:990 (1,2)
Envi wrote:
General:
Delete the .osb file from the song folder, since you're not make/use any SB in this mapset. - fixed.
The kiai time on the Insane difficulty are on the different timing points than the others diff, fix it since the kiai time should be same on all diff. - I think not different.
Hard:
I think this one is pretty good enough, just some suggestion for here and there:
00:53:249 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern are bit confusing to me, not because the pattern itself, but because it was start at the upper part then down( 1, 3 are on top, and 2 on the down), my suggestion is, if you make it reversed (1,3 on down part, and 2 on upper part),I think it would make less confusing for the player (well, it's not really confusing anymore for the rest-similar pattern)
If you did my suggestion above, then you should fix'd the rest-similar pattern too, for the consistency. - fixed.
Insane:
00:43:184 (1) - remove the NC here - No.
00:47:055 (4) - i think it was better if you make this one a reversed slider, it's flow nicely with the song beats. - fixed.
00:50:345 (1,1) - i think it was not really necessary to put the NC for these two, remove it. - Not change.
01:20:732 (6) - fix the curve - fixed.
02:12:216 (4) - ^ - fixed.
02:16:861 (1,2,3) - a bit weird-shaped slider imo, why you not just make it curved like the others? - a play should be made fun.
02:27:507 (5) - fix the curve here too - fixed.
03:04:281 (1) - remove NC here? - no
03:06:216 (1) - ^ - no
Midasmens wrote:
KSHR's Normal
01:16:474 (5) - change the slider to note? if you like it![]()
01:28:861 (5) - ^
03:18:797 (4) - ^
03:31:184 (5) - ^
03:43:571 (5) - ^
sry, i dont like them very much.. so no change![]()
blackabyss wrote:
[KSHR's Normal]
00:10:668 add a circle? nah
00:15:894 (4) just suggestion, slider start at 00:16:087 -> 00:16:474 ^
00:54:023 add a circle? fixed
00:57:120 ^^ ^
01:05:249 (2) end at 01:05:636 ? nah
02:09:120 add a circle? ^
02:16:087 ^^ fixed
02:19:184 ^^ ^
02:25:378 ^^ ^
02:42:023 remove NC nah
03:34:281 add a circle? ^
Envi wrote:
KHSR's Normal:
00:05:636 (3) - this slider seems a bit weird to me, why you not making the 2, 3 and end pintpoint a bit down? So it would make S/Z like shape.
most of sliders i use are smooth. so i wanna use others because to use only them is not fun i think. if other modders say this, ill try to change
00:14:926 (3,4) - seems confusing to play for first try/average player, since the time for click at that part are suddenly faster, I suggest that you make (4) slider a bit smaller, and make some clicking space between (3) and (4).
Please let me suspend
00:48:216 (6) - same as 00:05:636 (3), looks a bit odd to me o.o
same as 00:05:636 (3)
00:59:055 (2) - why this one are a bit curving than the previous slider, I suggest that you copy paste the previous slider for the (2) slider.
oops.. my mistake ty!
AcceleratorRUS wrote:
[KSHR's Normal]
03:53:055 (4) - add finish already added
00:24:216 (4) - ^ end slider fixed
01:34:668 (1) - ^ i think clap is better. added it
02:15:700 (1) - remove finish 02:16:087 (2) - add finish fixed
02:22:281 (2) - add finish ^
02:25:378 (7) - ^ ^
02:26:539 (3) - ^ beginer slider ^
02:35:829 (1) - ^ nah
02:38:926 (1) - ^ end slider? fixed
03:19:184 (1) - miss finish? fixed
AcceleratorRUS wrote:
[Hard]
00:11:055 (1) - remove finish 00:13:378 (1) - add fnish - fixed
00:23:829 (5) - add finish - fixed
01:35:055 (3) - ^ beginer slider - no
02:14:926 (1) - ^ end slider 02:15:313 (2) - remove finish 02:15:507 (3) - add finish 02:15:700 (4) - remove fiinish - no
02:28:087 (3) - add finish - fixed
02:29:636 (1) - remove finish 02:35:829 (1) - add finish - no
02:54:410 (1) - miss finish? - add finish
03:41:442 (x) - add note - no
03:45:894 (1) - remove finish 03:46:281 (2) - add finish 03:47:055 (4) - add finish 03:47:442 (1) - add finish end slider and remove whistle 03:48:216 (2) - remove finish beginer slider and add finish end slider and remove whistle (i think its sound better) - fixed
03:49:378 (1) - add finish - no
03:49:765 (3) - ^ beginer slider - no
03:53:055 (4) - miss finish end slider? - not change.
[Insane]
00:11:055 (1) - remove finish 00:13:378 (1) - add finish - fixed
00:23:829 (7) - add finish Beginer slider - fixed
00:25:765 (7) - add finish - fixed
00:39:700 (5) - make more beautifull - i think not bad now.
00:48:216 (2) - miss stack? - no, in game play perfect stack.
00:56:345 (4,5,6,7,8) - fix spacing - no, taht is in game play bitween sliders.
01:01:378 (1) - add finish beginer slider - no
01:37:378 (2) - maybe 1 grid down? - no
02:13:378 (2,3) - not good stack witch 02:12:990 (1) - in game paly perfect stack.
02:15:119 (2) - add finish 02:15:313 (3) - remove finish 02:15:507 (4) - add finish 02:15:700 (5) - remove finish - no
02:26:539 (1) - add finish - no
02:28:087 (2) - ^ - no
02:28:668 (6) - ^ - no
02:35:829 (1) - ^ - no
02:54:410 (1) - ^ - fixed
03:45:894 (1) - remove finish 03:46:281 (2) - add finish 03:47:055 (4) - add finish 03:47:442 (1) - add finish end slider and remove whistle 03:48:216 (2) - add finish end slider and remove whistle (i think its sound better) - fixed
03:49:378 (1) - add finish and remove whistle 03:49:571 (2) - add finish end slider 03:50:152 (4) - remove whistle (i think its sound better) - no
03:53:248 (6) - miss finish? - not change.
all fixed! thank you for modding, 鈍器!!Suzully wrote:
[ハゲNormal]今はもうフサフサしてるけど?????
- 00:33:313 (3) - Add finish since there is same sound in the back as 00:30:216 (3) and 00:36:410 (4).
- 03:50:152 (2) - Consider to add finish to the top.
Suzully wrote:
[Hard][Insane]
- 01:03:700 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think the stream shouldn't be used in this map because it's a hard diff and the map seems easy overall so the stream is too difficult if comparing with other stuff. I strongly recommend you to change a pattern, like...changing (7,8,9) to a repeat-slider? - fixed.
- 03:53:055 (4) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, it seems better to add finish to the end. - fixed.
- 00:10:861 (2) - This slider should be ended at 00:11:055. And start a next spinner from 00:11:249. - 個人的ですが、このタイミングがきもちいので、Not change.
- 00:39:700 (5,1) - Switch new combos. Looks better to me. - fixed.
- 00:50:152 (1,1,1,1,2,3) - It's kind of hard to read this quick triple(00:50:732 (1,2,3)) after anti-jump. I recommend you to change a pattern. (refer to 02:15:119 (2,3,4,5)) - fixed.
- 00:55:571 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider to move (2,3) futher from (4-8). In current pattern, the stream looks touching (3) even if stack leniency works correctly, so perhaps some players will misread (3-8) as stream. - fixed.
- 01:29:248 (5) - Add new combo. - fixed.
- 01:59:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda overmapped since here is a slow part. How about removing (2,5)? - I like now it. Not change.
- 02:06:023 (7) - Consider to add whistle. - fixed.
- 03:04:281 (1) - Remove new combo. - fixed.
- 03:19:958 (1,2) - Switch new combos. - No.
- 03:22:474 (6) - Add new combo. - fixed.
- 03:43:958 (5) - ^ - fixed.
- 03:53:248 (6) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, it seems better to add finish. - fixed.
All fixed!Garven wrote:
[Hard]
01:53:636 (1) - Remove whistle from sliderslide
[Insane]
00:44:249 - Add a note
00:44:345 - Add a note
01:57:507 (1) - remove whistle from sliderslide
02:09:410 - Add a note
03:17:249 (5) - It'd be cool if you could center this like you did in the Hard.
thank you for modding!Garven wrote:
[Normal]
00:13:378 (1) - This is... really soon after a spinner, even for a Normal. It'd be hard to move things around without compromising your rhythm though. You might be best off mapping through the spinner.
add 2 sliders instead of this spinner
00:54:797 (7) - Maybe delete to continue pattern from 00:51:700 - ? Applies to later parts as well.
fixed!
02:35:829 (1) - Again, too soon after a spinner.
fixed with shortening this spinner. if you recheck and feel odd, I'll try to change as 00:13:378 (1)