• • Nada encontrado

• - 00:22:756 (5) - La curva de este slider se ve algo mal,intenta mover el tick rojo un poco mas atras, si lo haces te quedaria algo asi
  - 00:25:283 (1) - Lo mismo aqui ^
  - 01:12:181 (4) - No es una buena idea agregar tanto repeats para los nuevos jugadores, quisas podrias remover los repeats

• -- Bien hecho

• -- Añadir 8 al Approach Rate no creo que sea una buena idea ya que eso podria ser en una Insane, podrias reducirle un tick?
  - 00:34:125 (5) - nazi* Podrias mover este slider en el centro, quedaria bien

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Tercer mod Chileno o3o No me esperaba esto xD

[Hard]
En el volumen creo que debes subirle mas el volumen, creo que a 50%~55% Aumentado en un 10% en todas las secciones de cada una de las dificultades

01:13:914 (4) - Deberias borrar esto ya que no entra con la cancion Decidi hacer un sonido especial para esta parte, me parece que suena bien, si alguien mas lo menciona la elimino (creo )

No encontre nada mas en esto o/

[Taiko Oni]
Como veo el volume no esta como deberia, ajustalo todo en uno y sugiero que lo dejes en 60% Agregue a 60 la mayoria menos en la parte que tenia 35%, te explico, en esta seccion de la cancion no pretendo jugar con el ritmo mas fuerte de la cancion sino que prefiero jugar con el Background ya que me sirve mas para mapear taiko, espero que lo entiendas. Esa seccion la subi hasta un 45%

00:03:809 (3) - Aqui entra mas el Big Katsu no crées? Tenes razon, hecho
00:06:335 - http://puu.sh/yEly o3o? Ok
00:08:862 - http://puu.sh/yEm5 o3o3o? En este caso prefiero dejarlo como esta
00:11:388 (2) - Ponele solo el finish Ok
00:20:862 (1) - Podrias mover esta nota a 00:21:020 ? Me gusta, hecho
00:30:809 (1,2) - Borra estas dos notas y pones una en 00:31:125 no te parece? Sipi
00:32:704 (1) - Katsu y borra estas dos 00:32:783 (2,1) Hecho lo del Katsu, pero no lo de eliminar las notas. Me gustan como entran con los drums
01:06:967 (1) - Si borras esta? Ok
01:15:809 (3) - Big Katsu? Como usted lo diga.

[Normal]
00:29:704 - Deberias agregar una nota aca Prefiero empezar con el nuevo ritmo y dejar ese stop en donde esta
01:12:967 (5) - Si esto lo dejas mas arriba? Fijate lo que quiero hacer entre el Slider (3) previo y el siguiente (1), de todos modos lo movi un poco xD

[Easy]
Todo bien o3o

Todavia no se si mis mod's son nazis o no, dime tu

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
Maybe you can add a fail BG of Captain America dying. since you have a pause-overlay of Captain America, i think it'd look nicer if you have a fail BG of Captain America dying. Maybe it's a good idea, I'll try to talk with doodley about that

[Easy]
00:05:072 (1,3) - since you have a whistle on 00:11:388, add it at the ends because i think it keep the consistencies in the whistles, and it sounds really nice. I'm not totally agree with that, the rhythm is not the same in 00:11:388, I prefer to skip that
00:22:756 (5) - if you can stack this on (1), you'll make a blanket for (4). Nah, it's ok as it's now
00:25:283 (1) - since you have claps on (2,3,4), replace the whistle for a finish to make it more effective during gameplay. Agree.
00:40:914 (1,2) - hmm idk...players might think that (1) is a circle and not a slider due to the slider length. extend this slider to where (2) is and remember to delete (2). i think it'd be easier for beginners if you do this. I think that plays well as it's now
00:42:177 (1,2) - same as above but extend this slider to a 2/1 slider to follow instrumental accurately. ^
00:46:756 (1) - maybe add a finish at the end? sounds empty without it. Added. On another hand, you didn't see that this Slider were missing a New Combo after a Spinner. Now is fixed that too.
00:48:651 (2) - you should add a whistle here. same reason as above. I'm not agree with that
00:49:283 (3) - same as 00:46:756. Agree
01:07:598 (2) - add a finish to match the instrumental. i think it fits with the song IMO. Agree
01:11:230 (2,3,4) - try to do something easier than this. beginners aren't ready to do this kind of rhythm yet. In my opinion is not hard to play really, they are sliders in 1/2, I think this is not a complication

[Normal]
00:05:072 (1) - do Ctrl+H to make the flow smoother in the beginning. NOO!! This has a better flow with these 3 Sliders
00:06:335 (3) - ^ ^
00:07:598 (1) - *nazi* you should stack this perfectly. it plays weird if something this this happens. Oops... Fixed
00:11:072 - add a circle to follow the drums. I prefer to follow just the Instrumental
00:11:388 (2) - since you have a clap at (1), add a finish at the end to make it more effective during gameplay. Sure
00:13:441 (2) - i think you forgot to add a clap at the end. add it to keep the consistency in claps. Yes, I forgot it. Now, Added
00:17:388 (5) - i think it'd flow a lot smoother if you can stack this on the beginning of (1). if you look closely, it'll make a triangle for this pattern. I prefer to make this pattern because makes sense with the long Slider (1), because it's in the middle of it, and looks fine to play
00:27:493 - the flow suddenly stops from here because a note is missing here. if you can add a circle here, it'll continue the flow for the song, and it'll follow the drums accurately. I'm not agree. If I add a note the players must move the mouse a bit quicly back, and THIS cause a bad flow, the pattern is good enough because are follow the instrumental
00:47:072 (3) - make this a curved slider like the other sliders on this combo. you'll make a blanket for the next note. I think that this is unecesary because I come from curve and stright Sliders
01:13:283 (1) - you should add circles and shorten the sliders. the easy diff has 2 sliders and a circle. this one however has 1 full slider. i'd find it weird that something easy like this is on a normal diff if there's something harder than this on a normal diff. if you don't understand, this is the pattern for easy and this is the pattern for normal. see how normal is easier compared to the easy diff's pattern? New Pattern Instead

[Hard]
00:07:598 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+R (2,4). the jump would look fun for players as it flows smoothly. I don't like it, sorry
00:11:388 (3) - add a finish to match the sound of the "thump" Ok
00:19:441 (2) - replace the whistle for a clap. it'll continue the clap pattern from the previous combo. [color=#FF000]This would be inconsistent with my patterns, so nope.[/color]
00:20:072 (6) - remove the clap because it ruins the claps pattern from the previous combo. Ok
00:30:809 (1) - remove this circle. it doesn't follow anything and all i hear is the long pause in the guitar. Sounds good in my opinion, make another kind of sounds here, that fit fine with all the music. I prefer to keep this note
01:04:441 (1) - to make it interesting, replace this for 2 1/3 sliders. normal has the same thing has this and i find that hard to believe. This ruin my next patterns and ti be sincere is not to elementary. It's fine as it is now

I guess that's it. GL

1. 00:11:388 (2) - Cuando selecciono esta nota me aparece como que esta en mal colocada en cuanto a spacing. Es intencional? Ah y, te sugiero que agregues un finish para ese sonido que se escucha ya que agregaste finish anteriormente cuando suena ese mismo sonido.
2. 00:38:230 (2,3,4) - No me gusta mucho esas notas en red ticks (2 y 4). Están bien, pero creo que es mejor que borres esas dos notas, y dejes este tipo de cosas para una dificultad Normal.
3. 00:39:177 (3) - El whistle en el cuerpo de este slide suena muy ruidoso y feo. Creo que suena mejor si se lo sacas.
4. 00:42:651 (2) - Un whistle aca suena bien porque ahi suena como algo agudo, y como la nota sin nada suena como rara y.. monótona, creo que no estaria de mas poner un whistle.
5. 00:52:125 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - Esta parte me decepcionó mucho. Es como si fuese una Normal. Te recomiendo que consideres arreglar esta parte usando sliders 1/1 largos como en cualquier Easy, ya sabes.
6. 01:05:704 (1,2) - (2) Suena raro porque no tiene sample. Creo que suena mejor si sacas el whistle de el final de (1) y se lo agregas a (2) en vez de que tenga un finish, porque finish suena como muy fuerte para esa parte.
7. 01:08:230 (1) - Y si hiciste lo de arriba, quedaría perfecto un finish en el comienzo de este slider.
   
   Bien como siempre. Solo me decepcionaron varios patterns como el que te nombre que me hizo sentir asi jaja, pero solo es mi opinión personal.

• 
  Entiendo que el bpm es bastante alto, pero creo la velocidad de slider de esta dificultad es algo rápida para una Normal.

1. 00:11:388 (2) - Como te dije en la Easy, un finish al comienzo queda bien porque en ese sonido que se siente ya habias agregado finish anteriormente, despues sacas ese whistle y podrias agregarselo al repeat.
2. 00:40:914 (1,2) - No quiero ser como cierto modder que ya sabés pero estas notas quedan todas tapadas por el spinner-osu y eso hace que sea dificil de ver para los beginners.
3. 00:54:335 (2,3,4,5,6) - Con ese sonido de fondo podrias agregar unos finishes para dar enfasis. Seria bueno si son soft finishes. Digo porque justo habias cambiado con una linea verde los samples a normal.
4. 01:01:283 (3) - No se bien como estas usando whistles pero creo que un whistle en el repeat de este slider suena bien.
5. 01:06:177 (2,3) - Para dar enfasis otra vez, creo que suena bien si agregas finish al comienzo de estos dos sliders.
6. 01:08:230 (1,2,3) - ^ Y a estos 3 tambien.
7. 01:10:756 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 01:14:546 (1) - ^
   
   Great.~

1. 00:07:125 - Se que arruinaria tu simetría pero estaría bueno que agregues una nota aca. Queda bien y queda como un stream mas largo, lo que tambien es bueno porque no tenés Insane.
2. 00:12:651 (1) - Te falto un finish me parece, porque como ya dije en otras diffs, cuando suena este ruido de la canción, agregas finish en notas anteriores.
3. 00:25:125 - Una nota queda bien. La razón de esto y todo es mismo que te dije al principio hehe.
4. 00:29:072 (4) - Para seguir mas ese ruido agudo del fondo, seria mejor si terminas este slider mas adelante, en el tick blanco (00:29:704).
5. 00:31:756 - Como no tenes insane y estarian buenos algunos streams, te recomiendo agregar una nota aca.
6. 00:32:388 - ^ Y aca.
7. 00:34:125 (5) - Este slider suena muy mal a mi gusto porque el repeat esta en un tick azul. Creo que es mejor si lo haces en un slider con 1 repeat, que sea 1/2, y que despues agregues una nota en 00:34:598.
8. 00:36:651 (4) - Finish por las razones de siempre?
9. 00:37:125 - El sample normal aca no suena muy bien, suena como random. Creo que queda mejor un whistle soft.
10. 00:45:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A esta parte le faltan claps. Deberías agregar algunas porque suena vacío y raro.
11. 01:02:704 (3,4) - En mi opinión, suena mejor con la música si reemplazas estas notas con un slider.
12. 01:06:177 (2,3) - Finishes en el comienzo de estos sliders para dar énfasis?
13. 01:08:704 (2,3) - ^
14. 01:11:230 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (Finishes a todos estos menos a (6). A (6) te recomiendo agregarle un whistle).
15. 01:13:283 (1) - ^ Otro finish mas?
    
    En general, es genial. :3

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hola Mancu :3

General

1. Te falta la imagen score-comma.png para completar el set de Números (o como se llame xD)

Oops... Hablare con Doodley acerca de estoEasy

1. 00:58:441 (2) - Presiona shift y bajalo un poco, quedaran totalmente rectos (un tip mio para mapear simetricamente xD) Eso no lo sabia. Cada dia se aprende algo nuevo hahah. Arreglado
2. 01:00:020 (1) - Me parece o intentaste hacerlos como estos http://puu.sh/z2tO ?, sino quedaria mejor algo asi http://puu.sh/z2v0 o como los tuyo pero mejorados http://puu.sh/z2wJ Para ser sincero no cambia mucho, pero lo considerare
3. 01:02:546 (2) - Haz lo mismo que arriba por lo que es una copia del anterior (?) ^
4. 01:13:283 (1) - Cmabia o agrega finish al final, creo que va bien con la instrumental y los finish song los adecuados para esta cancion

Okie DokieNormal

1. 00:27:177 (4) - Muev esta nota a 00:27:493 (4) - y agregale clap, creo que donde esta suena como sin ritmo (arregla el espacio despues de esto) En mi humilde opinion, no suena mal
2. 00:42:651 (1) - Hazlo mas curvo o intenta algo asi http://puu.sh/z2LQ ,se creativo Roddie (por ejemplo) no tuvo problemas con ese tipo de Slider, considerado a futuro de todas maneras
3. 00:58:441 (2) - Stackea bien el final de ese slider con 00:57:177 (3) , nazi haha... Ok
4. 01:14:546 (1) - Curvalo mas o has uno mas creativo

Mismo que el anterior Slider parecido a esteHard

1. Me gusto como agregaste claps seguidos en algunas notas me gustaria escuchar eso tambien en 00:45:493 (1) hasta 01:04:441 (1) se escucharia bien (si se puede) Agregue algun que otro mas
   
2. 01:00:020 (2) - Agrega clap al final, para mantener la consistencia en los claps

Se me habia pasado, Agregado Muy bueno el mapa, nada que resaltar ^^, te mereces mi estrella

Buena Suerte ! y Estrella !

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ mancusojuanmattos ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Remove unused file 'applause' and full submit pls. Noo... This is not unused. After to play the map, if you finish it, it's going to appear this sounds instead of the common applause. Try to finish a difficulty and you will notice that.

[Hard]

1. 00:47:388 (7,1) - Make a symmetry imo. Ok
2. 01:13:283 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I like how to play as it's now, I prefer to keep that as it's now
3. 00:57:809 - Missing add clap here. Sure

[Normal]

1. 00:05:704 (2) - Move 1 grid left looks better. Ok
2. 00:54:335 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 00:53:072 (1). Sure

[Easy]

1. AR-1 much better play with beginner. Oops... I'm agree
2. 01:15:809 (1) - Remove this circle and 01:14:862 (2) - move to 01:15:177,make more easy playble. Ok

That's all ~ Nice music and mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

The TaikoBG... is unnecesary.

1. Consider adding Steven Rogers in the tags. Steven Rogers is Cap's real name. Also, add Steve in the tags too because a few super heroes that know Cap's real name, call him Steve in short you know?

1. 01:11:230 (2, 3)-Adding both finishes on the end of those sliders would sound quite fitting really.

1. 00:27:493 (x)-Consider adding a note and a clap here. From my point of view, I wouldn't leave this empty. lol
2. 00:37:914 (1, 1)-The 1st note after the spinner would come out as a surprise if you left it on the 1/2 tick. It's a bit discouraging in my opinion, no offense. Here's what you can do to improve this. Go to the spinner that is on 00:37:914 and move the end of the spinner on 00:40:125. Next, delete the 1st note that is on 00:40:914. Then, add a slider starting from 00:40:441 to 00:40:914. Also one more thing, you can add a finish on the beginning of that slider that can be created on 00:40:441. Here is a screenshot of how it should look.
3. 00:42:651 (1)-A whistle here would sound perfect here because this would follow the song very well. Try this out and see.
4. 01:12:651 (4)-A finish sounds better than a clap.

1. 00:34:914 (8, 9)-Forgot to use the Normal Sampleset for these two notes?
2. 00:42:967 (1)-A whistle would sound perfect here really.

Roddie wrote:

Hey now! Hey !

General

1. Consider adding Steven Rogers in the tags. Steven Rogers is Cap's real name. Also, add Steve in the tags too because a few super heroes that know Cap's real name, call him Steve in short you know? Sure, all added

Easy

1. 01:11:230 (2, 3)-Adding both finishes on the end of those sliders would sound quite fitting really. Ok

Normal

1. 00:27:493 (x)-Consider adding a note and a clap here. From my point of view, I wouldn't leave this empty. lol I decided to make this Stop to remark the change in the Instrumental, I think that works fine if you look at this way. I prefer to keep that as it's now
2. 00:37:914 (1, 1)-The 1st note after the spinner would come out as a surprise if you left it on the 1/2 tick. It's a bit discouraging in my opinion, no offense. Here's what you can do to improve this. Go to the spinner that is on 00:37:914 and move the end of the spinner on 00:40:125. Next, delete the 1st note that is on 00:40:914. Then, add a slider starting from 00:40:441 to 00:40:914. Also one more thing, you can add a finish on the beginning of that slider that can be created on 00:40:441. Here is a screenshot of how it should look. All fixed on this point
3. 00:42:651 (1)-A whistle here would sound perfect here because this would follow the song very well. Try this out and see. There is a Whistle here already, maybe you want to said me at the end of this Slider. If you wanted to say me that, I'm agree
4. 01:12:651 (4)-A finish sounds better than a clap. Agree, the Clap sounds a bit alone around a lot of Finishes and Whistles.

Taiko Oni
Looks alright.

Hard

1. 00:34:914 (8, 9)-Forgot to use the Normal Sampleset for these two notes? Whoops... Fixed
2. 00:42:967 (1)-A whistle would sound perfect here really. Okie!

And that's about it. Give me a call back when you're done looking through my mod. I always thought that you were going to mod the map before to said you about the pop

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Easy]

01:15:177 (2) - This slider looks ugly. Fixed a bit. I made a blanket with 5 Sliderpoints, works better now

[Normal]

00:40:441 (1) - Too soon after spinner for a Normal. I reduce the Spinner in 1/1. Fit with the music and the Spacing (in timeline) it's ok now I guess

[Hard]

01:15:809 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's unnecessary. Okie!

That's all, fix and I'll rank =3