112,112,105100,6,0,B|176:120|176:176|176:176|200:232|312:232|336:176|336:176|336:120|400:112,1,390,0|2
423,208,106426,2,0,B|366:288|256:342|141:285|91:208,1,390,2|2
56,304,107752,2,0,B|-32:248|-16:124|81:96|144:136|144:136|160:168|223:148,1,390,2|2

270,168,47089,6,0,B|311:99,1,80
376,136,47420,2,0,B|328:216,1,80
400,240,47752,2,0,B|448:160,2,80,8|0|0

155,198,62503,2,0,B|198:209|218:269|198:309|160:328,1,160

437,147,105100,6,0,B|479:185|458:267|396:272,1,160

48,200,108415,2,0,B|96:200|128:238|128:238|105:269|120:312,1,160

392,45,81150,1,0
339,57,81232,2,0,B|371:43|371:139|315:139,2,110,2|0|2
279,150,81730,2,0,B|223:150|223:246|295:246,1,110,2|2
344,336,82061,1,0
168,336,82227,1,2

Easy

Normal

Hard

Insane

p3n wrote:

[General]
You don't need the SB code in every single .osu-file. Just copy the foreground layer commands to the .osb and remove those lines from the .osu-files for every diff. This is optional though and you should check it afterwards in case you missed a line or copied too much. It doesn't change the SB itself but makes the .osu-files a bit more well-arranged. having the osb code on a .osb file make the taiko diff also with sb effects, that is the why I putted the code on every single .osu file, I dont want sb effects on the taiko diffs.


[Easy]
THE SLIDERS!!! THEEE SLIIIIIIIDEEEEEEEEEEERS ♥ ovo!!!
Hitsounds are way too loud in the beginning. Maybe lower the volume to the same or even lower volume as in [Insane] ok Ill decrease the volume on all difs

Everything else is nice.


[Normal]
Again hitsounds in the beginning are way too loud. Think about reducing the volume to the same or even lower volume as in [Insane]

01:03:995 (1) - remove whistle from the beginning and the turning point, it sounds really off
01:09:299 (5) - ^same, you use a standard bar pattern for your whistles in KIAI which sounds REALLY GOOD (and the 2 sliders break that pattern...) ok!
01:45:100 (1,2,3) - maybe refine the blankets here to make them as good as the rest of your sliders: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260289 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260290
why do all the work again? use this but be careful the length of the object desctiptions might be more then one line depending on the width of your notepad:

112,112,105100,6,0,B|176:120|176:176|176:176|200:232|312:232|336:176|336:176|336:120|400:112,1,390,0|2
423,208,106426,2,0,B|366:288|256:342|141:285|91:208,1,390,2|2
56,304,107752,2,0,B|-32:248|-16:124|81:96|144:136|144:136|160:168|223:148,1,390,2|2

thanks a lot, Ill be careful >v<
02:06:315 (1) - clap on ending to match the bar pattern?
02:08:967 (1) - same as 01:03:995 (1), it doesn't match the fitting bar pattern you use in KIAI. Remove the claps from the beginning and the turning point.
all changed, wow awesome

[Hard]
Again hitsounds in the beginning are too loud for me, use the same or even lower volume as in [Insane] lowered >v<

00:42:282 (1) - minor timing error, to match the actual song better move this back by 1/2 and add a repeat (also use Ctrl+R to fix orientation): http://puu.sh/jQ0J hmm Im not actually following the song, Ill change if someone else point this
00:47:089 (1,2,3) - make the gaps consistent here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260295 k aplied too to previous pattern

270,168,47089,6,0,B|311:99,1,80
376,136,47420,2,0,B|328:216,1,80
400,240,47752,2,0,B|448:160,2,80,8|0|0

01:02:337 (1,2) - fix the blanket? http://puu.sh/jQ2R thanks, Im not good at blankets >3<

155,198,62503,2,0,B|198:209|218:269|198:309|160:328,1,160

01:04:989 (1,2) - ^same, just copy paste the slider and rotate it until it fits
01:13:442 (5,6,1) - weird timing doesn't really match the dominant parts of the song, if you want try something like this: http://puu.sh/jQ4f it follow vocals, yes
01:38:470 (1,2) - fix position and shape of (2) to make it symmetrical? http://puu.sh/jQ59 k x3 my simmetry sucks when the object is not at x,y axis
01:45:100 (1,2) - fix blanket? http://puu.sh/jQ60 thanks for the blankes

437,147,105100,6,0,B|479:185|458:267|396:272,1,160

01:48:415 (4) - again fix the blanket? http://puu.sh/jQ6c again, thanks for the blanket >v<

48,200,108415,2,0,B|96:200|128:238|128:238|105:269|120:312,1,160

[Insane]
whooo fast map and fun to play

some minor things here:

00:32:752 (8) - is clearly overmapped and does not fit. The pattern for the red combo is a bit boring compared to the rest of your map (and it is borderline unreadable with the stacks). I highly recommend removing the overmapped (8) (listen @25% speed and you'll hear there is nothing in the song to justify this note) and make the pattern less cramped. Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260275 thanks, I dont usually map at 25% D; something like that but with some stuff of my style ;3
01:21:150 (5,6,7,8,9) - minor spacing issue and a bigger flow issue: move (5,6,7) a bit higher up so (7) ends exactly between (8,9); to fix the flow break just Ctrl+R on (8,9): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260281
or use: thanks for code is better now <:!

392,45,81150,1,0
339,57,81232,2,0,B|371:43|371:139|315:139,2,110,2|0|2
279,150,81730,2,0,B|223:150|223:246|295:246,1,110,2|2
344,336,82061,1,0
168,336,82227,1,2

01:50:072 (5,6,7,1) - spacing should be consistent here for the 4 notes as it is almost unreadable to get the rhythm change for the red combo starting on 01:50:569 (1); if you don't want to change the pattern itself at least fix 01:50:238 (6) to make the spacing consistent like 01:51:564 (4,5,6) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/260283 ok, spaced correctly



Really nice mapset. Have this

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. ooh this song. this isnt the 1st time i heard this <:

General:
CLEAR!

Easy:
00:09:630 (1) - hmm make this a curved slider to blanket the next note?
00:17:586 (1) - this should be a 1/1 repeat slider(from the big white tick to the other). it follows the instrumental accurately.
00:22:890 (1) - ^ dont break my sliders >';
00:28:194 (3) - make this a NC because of vocals.
00:40:128 (3,1) - make (3) a NC because of vocals, but that's where the singer actually sings and remove the NC for (1) because it's still going.
00:42:779 (4) - a NC here because of new lyrics. combos based on patterns, by 4th time
01:37:807 (3) - *nazi* move this to the middle so that it'd blanket (1) properly. spacing error and put it upper makes a bad overlap, by 3rd time >v<
01:54:382 (2) - maybe get rid of the repeats and end the slider till 01:55:376. the sliderticks should follow vocals. uh?
02:12:282 (3,4) - are you sure that these sliders look the same as the other? Im pretty sure that they are not the same

Normal:
00:02:669 (3) - i don't like the shape of this slider. make it like this so that it can blanket the previous slider. remember to fix the spacing from there.
00:03:663 (1) - here too. make it like this so that it can blanket (2) sort of
00:17:918 (2) - add a clap at the beginning to start the pattern. ok, added also to [Insane]
00:45:431 (4) - add a finish? sounds nice IMO
01:06:315 (5) - same as above but at the end. not used on other diffs
01:53:719 (2) - add a whistle at the end to keep consistency. I ended the pattern previously
02:11:619 (5) - same as 00:45:431

Hard:
01:34:989 (6,7) - fix this minor spacing error here. it's at 0.85 ok =v=
Insane:
00:09:133 (1) - *nazi* curve this slider so that it can form a blanket sort of around the previous slider.
00:09:465 (2) - if you follow the suggestion above, then make this look the same as (1). screen please cant get at all >:
01:34:989 (3,4) - it'd look better if you can stack the ends. >_<
01:39:796 (4) - make this a 1/2 slider with 1 repeat and replace the end for a circle. i think that since i saw only 1 repeat on almost every 1/2 slider, players might mess up that there are 2 repeats instead of (1).
01:42:448 (4) - ^ the variation is delicious :Q

This is the best i can do. GL

ikari_kyon wrote:

Easy:

01:54:382 (2) - maybe get rid of the repeats and end the slider till 01:55:376. the sliderticks should follow vocals. uh? this



Insane:
00:09:133 (1) - *nazi* curve this slider so that it can form a blanket sort of around the previous slider.
00:09:465 (2) - if you follow the suggestion above, then make this look the same as (1). screen please cant get at all >: look at the 2 sliders and see how it's blanketing sort of (3)?

Behonkiss wrote:

Easy:
- 00:28:194 (3): Make this a new combo. changed since byakugan also pointed this D:

Normal:
- Slider speed feels waaaaay too fast for a Normal difficulty. D; come on I have a 1 star rating [Easy], there is mapsets with [Easy] diffs over 3 star rating and [Normal] with absurd high spacing
- 00:57:697 (4): Maybe start a new combo here? This one's kind of long compared to the others. D; ok

Hard & Insane:
No problems. O_o

Not much to nitpick here, very solid map overall.

1. Everything is... fine. I guess. Let's go for the diff-specific mods.

1. 00:37:476 (1,2) - Clap at the end?
2. 01:12:614 (1,2,1,2) - Uh... I dislike the shape of these four sliders, TBH

1. I sense an abuse/overuse of Whistle, especially before the first spinner and after the second one. Well...
2. 00:22:890 (1) - Clap at the end?
3. 01:12:614 (2,3,4) - Add Clap at "2" & "4", and remove Clap at "3"?

1. 00:22:227 (5) - Can't we change this slider so that it can be symmetrical with the previous ("4") slider?
2. 00:33:166 (1) - Remove NC? I think you're trying to emphasize the beat on the music, but NC isn't really needed for that, IMO.
3. 00:35:818 (1) - ^
4. 00:39:133 (4) - Shape it into a more 'normal' slider?
5. 01:38:139 (1) - Same as 00:33:166.
6. 01:53:387 (1) - Maybe a slider like this?
   

   144,280,113387,6,0,B|160:316|160:316|176:336|216:352|272:348,1,160

1. 01:00:348 (1,2,3) - Hi, anti-jump. Nice to meet ya'.
   
   But hey, I think making a short jump here is better.
2. 01:50:404 (7,1,2,3,4) - Uh... won't this stacking make the players confused?

Hinsvar wrote:

Uh... hi. hi /o/

Time to mod, I suppose?

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler. your avatar is gold? O_o? sorry dont know the source

>General

1. Everything is... fine. I guess. Let's go for the diff-specific mods.

>Easy

1. 00:37:476 (1,2) - Clap at the end? oh I forgot those >v<
2. 01:12:614 (1,2,1,2) - Uh... I dislike the shape of these four sliders, TBH sorry /.\

>Normal

1. I sense an abuse/overuse of Whistle, especially before the first spinner and after the second one. Well... I love whistles ♥~
2. 00:22:890 (1) - Clap at the end? dont sounds good with the incoming patterns >v<
3. 01:12:614 (2,3,4) - Add Clap at "2" & "4", and remove Clap at "3"? simmetrical with 01:16:260 (5)

>Hard

1. 00:22:227 (5) - Can't we change this slider so that it can be symmetrical with the previous ("4") slider? nu /o/
2. 00:33:166 (1) - Remove NC? I think you're trying to emphasize the beat on the music, but NC isn't really needed for that, IMO. symmetrical with 00:30:514 (1) and ↓
3. 00:35:818 (1) - ^
4. 00:39:133 (4) - Shape it into a more 'normal' slider? ok you dont like my sliders >.>
5. 01:38:139 (1) - Same as 00:33:166.
6. 01:53:387 (1) - Maybe a slider like this? >:
   

   144,280,113387,6,0,B|160:316|160:316|176:336|216:352|272:348,1,160

>Insane

1. 01:00:348 (1,2,3) - Hi, anti-jump. Nice to meet ya'. ;D
   
   But hey, I think making a short jump here is better. I like this way <:
2. 01:50:404 (7,1,2,3,4) - Uh... won't this stacking make the players confused? are you serious?

Well... I think I should end my mod now. Can't stretch this for too long. Oh, and the music was great.

Good luck on the way

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ ikari_kyon ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Setting a PreviewTime pls.

my preview time is "0" ovo! I like how the song start with that ~♫ caramelldansen ♫~ and then the characteristic sound of ryu*

[Insane]

1. 00:14:934 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here. O_o I didnt know that something like this can happen, can you explain me more about this bug?
2. 00:36:813 (3) - Maybe add new combo. yes maybe
3. 00:51:564 (6) - Add new combo,spacing. I think the symmetry let read this very well
4. 02:04:824 (6,7) - Try symmetry with 02:03:829 (1,2).

oh thanks

[Hard]

1. HP-1
2. 02:08:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - Using same spacing.

this has moved by some reason D; that I dont know why

[Normal]

1. 00:45:763 (1,2,3) - Using same spacing.

yeah it was moved by some reason D;

That's all ~ OMG,This SB my eyes T_T. ;D nara-chan is happy

Good luck ~ ← Edit: now is better
I preffer a star instead of a cirno xD dont like tou*ou =v=

anthonyyy0 wrote:

So this is definitely going to be ranked, right? Awesome map you have here. :3

Your map is so moe~ it's hard for me to mod deeply, so I just mod it normally, sorry .
I also excluded the Combo and hitsound part of the mod, since you seem to be annoyed about it.

-There's no OSB file. How are you storyboarding then?
-I don't like your drain rates on hard or insane difficulties.
-Otherwise, there is nothing wrong with your map in general.

BeatofIke wrote:

Your map is so moe~ it's hard for me to mod deeply, so I just mod it normally, sorry . >v< its ok
I also excluded the Combo and hitsound part of the mod, since you seem to be annoyed about it.

[General]
-There's no OSB file. How are you storyboarding then? I included the sb code on each .osu file, excluding the [Taiko] diff cuz the sb effect may looks bad with the kuroneko-shi bg x3
-I don't like your drain rates on hard or insane difficulties. should I decrease it or increase it?
-Otherwise, there is nothing wrong with your map in general.

[Easy]
-Very Moe~ silders you got there. >v<
-01:35:818 (2,3,1) - This looks pretty sloppy. any suggest?
-01:59:686 (3) - Make this silder parallel with 01:58:360 (1). ovo?¿?
-00:09:796 (1) - Insert Break time after spinner? spinner? D:

[Normal]
-00:29:188 (4) - Make this slider identical to 00:28:194 (2). ok.jpg everyone is saying about this
-00:09:796 (1) - Insert Break time after spinner? the drained life is not even 1/5 of total, when the drain comes 1/2 Ill add a break

[Hard]
-HP Drain (-1). One slider miss drains 1/3 of your drain meter. As for Insane it drains 1/2 of your drain meter. A bit too harsh don't you think? That's up you you though. Not my map. uh wich slider drain 1/3 of the life?
-00:09:796 (1) - Insert Break time after spinner?

[Insane]
I skipped the Insane mod. Map is just TOO HARD! It's hard for me to mod this difficulty. Prehaps a more experienced player/modder can assist you.

HellDawn wrote:

01:17:255 (1,2)- ugly slider any suggest?

It would be better if some sliders move to center wich ones?

wmfchris wrote:

try avoid posting everying single word in bolded font? lol [stress] this boy BeatofIke =v=

anyway let's mod >A< (performing caramelldensen dance) /o/

[Taiko]
01:00:183 - add a D here so that the sudden break-sudden start feeling can be highlighted k
01:02:586 - consider to add one here becoz there's 1 triplet everybar in this stream? k
01:22:227 - kkdkk sounds a bit odd here, I prefer kkd D nice <:
01:27:199 - K D K k

- Nice diff! : D thanks ;3;
- Very nice song!!!! >w< Ryu* is awesome ;3
- Very very nice BG TAT give me the full taiko BG > : 3
↓↓↓

SPOILER

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

It needs to be emphasized that you break the 1st rule of my queue - 1.I mod Japanese & Chinese songs ONLY. So I mod only 1 diff of your map. Next time please read the rules carefully before post.
I posted on your queue because of Ryu* is a japenese dj be moar specific on your rules I always read all rules and dont make spam post, if you dont want arrangements of japenes artist put that on your queue

Just suggestions:

[Insane]

00:04:907 (4) - 1/4 tick shorter and move to 00:04:989? Im following perfectly the song with this blue tick
00:20:570 (5) - stack it with 00:18:912 (1) spacing becomes unconcistant...
00:31:177 (2) - I think it's better to make it horizontal and stack its end with end of 00:30:514 (6) maybe, if someone else point this Ill change it but maybe
01:14:603 (1) - move further from 01:14:271 (10)? Im setting a low spacing here because of we have a huge jump previously

GL~

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi Ikarin!! >w<"

[General]
Nothing to said.... Except That SB is really nice.. I like it. XD

[Easy]

Hitsounds :
01:35:818(2) = add finish
01:38:470(1) = add finish.
01:41:122(2) = ^ Im not using finish on the other diffs
01:45:100(1) = ^ thanks I forgot to add this to other diffs x3! I have it on [Insane]

[Normal]

Timing :
HP Drain - 1 dont know, decreased drain

Map :
01:33:829 - 01:43:774 = hmm... there's no more hitsound?? nope >v<
01:50:404(2) = add finish not present on other diffs
01:55:708(1) = ^ added also on [Insane]

[Taiko]

Map/Hitsounds :
00:01:674(1) = Big don XD there is no support for this finish >3< a finish should be used when a bass effect is on the song or on some special parts
01:40:956(x) = add note ~ following vocals >_<

[Hard]

Song Setup :
HP Drain - 1 ok.jpg

[Insane]

Hitsounds :
00:04:907(4) = remove whistle. Im following the change to blue tick, also present on the song
00:17:586(1) = add finish removed from [Normal] >3<
01:57:034(6) = remove whistle here. o;

Okay.. All seems fine to me now.. Ganbatte Ikarin!! >w<"
Star!!!

Mythol wrote:

Mod request from our queue.

[General]
Oh my God this SB. Tone it down ._. I didnt made the sb and dont mind about change something although there is really unrankable or due a major error
NC's should really follow the song, atleast in the lower diffs. >< by 8th time, I dont mind

[Easy]
Drain -1. are you serious?
01:37:807 (3) - Center this please. Also adjust spacing on the next slider. by 7th time my sliders have moar symmetry priority
01:41:785 (3) - Sounds better shortened to the previous white tick. sounds bad currently? are you listening the song?
01:43:774 - Maybe some notes/sliders from here to follow her voice. =_= I wanna skip that voice, also the next circle follows very good that bass

[Normal]
Reduce SV? by 3rd time why?
00:06:978 (1) - I think this sounds better extended to the next white tick. sounds horryble xD
00:20:238 (5) - Sooo ugly x.x http://puu.sh/md1o meh there is no a significative difference
00:45:431 (4) - NC here instead. I dont mind
00:50:735 (6) - ^ ↑
00:46:757 (3) - ctrl + h, and a 120 degree clockwise rotate, and make it blanket the 2? http://puu.sh/md44 <- could look prettier but you get the idea xD no o:
01:16:923 - I think there should be a note here, with a clap? Im not sure
02:11:619 (5) - NC should be here instead.
02:14:271 (4) - ^
02:15:597 (1) - Remove NC

[Hard]
Drain -1.
00:44:271 - A slider from here to where 5 is sounds alot better.is exactly the same sound
01:53:387 (1) - Really ugly ._. http://puu.sh/mdis or something like this~ cant see a significative difference

[Insane]
OMGWTFBBQSV. Lower D:< O_o dont get mad
Drain and OD could use -1 if you're gonna keep the SV ._. why?, there is a problem with slider velocity?
00:04:907 (4) - Doesn't fit. Put on white tick, and shorten. by 4th time it follows the sounds, play at 25%
00:05:652 (1) - Replace with repeat from here to 00:05:984. ?
01:03:995 (2) - NC here instead.

Good luck~

Mythol wrote:

the map is just troll.

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

[Insane]
crazy patterns with most of them are symmetrical ^^
whoa this diff is really too fast for me >.<

p3n wrote:

[Insane]
whooo fast map and fun to play

Behonkiss wrote:

Hard & Insane:
No problems.

Not much to nitpick here, very solid map overall.

BeatofIke wrote:

[Insane]
I skipped the Insane mod. Map is just TOO HARD! It's hard for me to mod this difficulty. Prehaps a more experienced player/modder can assist you.

ikari_kyon wrote:

O_O thanks for your interest xavier
but I like that users plays the map with their own preffered skin
is a nice skin though, about "ranking-graph.png" and "ranking-panel.png" those sprites are not visible when you end to play the map even if you are using the default skin
Ill add your skin elements at beatmap description though, thanks a lot again

1. fine

1. 00:17:586 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. It is the turning point of the song, and thinks that had better put the finish to emphasize.
2. 00:34:824 (3) - symmetrically with 00:33:498 (1). grid move to x368,y192
3. 00:35:487 (4) - add NC and 00:37:476 (1) - remove NC and 00:38:802 (2) - add NC ?
4. 00:40:128 (3) - add finish. For the same reason 00:17:586 (1)
5. 00:56:039 (3) - add NC and 00:56:702 (1) - remove NC is better imo
6. 01:35:818 (2,3,1) - Suggestion of the form: ↓ If you use this, please follow the after note
   

   128,64,95818,2,0,B|176:32|176:32|208:92|256:100|304:92|336:32|336:32|384:64,1,320,0|8
   256,168,97807,1,8
   120,252,98470,6,0,B|164:324|256:344|348:324|392:252,1,320,0|0

7. 01:54:382 (2) - add NC ?

1. 00:17:586 (1) - same easy diff
2. 00:22:890 (1,2) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/nkNI ↓code
   

   256,296,22890,6,0,B|200:324|200:324|120:280|120:280|228:192|120:104|120:104|200:60|200:60|256:88,1,520,8|0
   256,192,24547,2,0,B|312:208|384:192,1,130,8|0

3. 00:26:868 (1) - remove NC and 00:28:194 (2) - add NC. ( same as 00:32:172 (3) )
4. 00:40:459 (1) - remove note. note after the spinner to come in too fast in normal diff.
5. 01:03:332 (3) - grid move to x336,y104 ?
6. 01:41:785 (2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nkOU Fit the end of the slider is 01:43:608. but, if you do not use the red line, is more fit 01:43:442 than now imo.
7. 01:47:752 (3) - add NC and 01:49:078 (1) - remove NC and 01:50:404 (2) - add NC and 01:51:398 (1) - remove NC
8. 02:04:989 - add green line. S vol 80%. I think sound a little too big here
9. 02:14:271 (4) - add NC and 02:15:597 (1) - remove NC is better
   
   fine but SV is very fast in normal

1. 00:02:503 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nkZy I think fit better put a note in 00:03:000
2. 00:05:155 (1,2) - ^ same suggestion
3. 00:17:586 (1) - remove clap to start of the slider. and same easy diff suggestion
4. 00:33:166 (1) - I think the DS is too close. it is better to use DS0.9x
5. 00:37:973 (1) - remove NC and 00:38:636 (2) - add NC
6. 01:18:912 (4,5,1) - why do not use the same pattern here 01:13:442 (5,6,1)? It would be better to use the same pattern
7. 01:37:973 (x) - add note. and add whistle ?
8. 02:00:183 (1) - remove NC. ( because you do not put NC here 01:57:199 (3,4,5) )
9. 02:04:989 - same normal diff
10. 02:06:315 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
11. 02:07:310 (1) - remove NC and 02:07:641 (2) - add NC and 02:08:304 (1) - remove NC and 02:08:967 (3) - add NC is better imo
12. 02:10:128 (4) - add NC and 02:11:122 (1) - remove NC and 02:11:619 (3) - add NC and 02:12:282 (1) - remove NC and 02:12:779 (2) - add NC

1. 00:03:000 (4) - add note. for the same reason Hard diff.
2. 00:04:907 (4) - Does not match the rhythm. start 00:04:989. or If you want to really put it, better put a note. http://puu.sh/nlsd
3. 00:05:818 (2,3) - spacing too close. 00:05:652 (1,2) - DS are the same here, but the rhythm is different. This can be confusing. If there wants to be you as it is, the NC is necessary by all means
4. 00:17:586 (1) - same easy diff
5. 00:56:039 (6) - ^
6. 01:03:829 (1) - remove NC and 01:03:995 (2) - add NC. and Suggestion of the form: 01:03:829 (1,2) - Reversing the position.(Ctrl+R)
7. 01:06:647 (6) - add NC and 01:07:476 (1) - remove NC
8. 01:09:299 (7) - add NC and 01:09:796 (1) - remove NC
9. 01:10:459 (5) - add NC
10. 01:30:514 (1,1,2) - The one that put a sound on a drum is easy to take rhythm imo. so suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nlCk
11. 01:57:697 (2) - remove note ?
12. 02:04:989 (7) - remove whistle. I think here is better fit with a quiet
13. 02:06:315 (1) - add whistle to end of the slider
14. 02:14:271 (5) - add NC

1. Does not match the sound a little to me 　↓

kosiga wrote:

hi~ ikari_kyon hi <:

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. fine

[Easy]

1. 00:17:586 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. It is the turning point of the song, and thinks that had better put the finish to emphasize. hmm maybe but it sounds so exagerated to my ears
2. 00:34:824 (3) - symmetrically with 00:33:498 (1). grid move to x368,y192 k
3. 00:35:487 (4) - add NC and 00:37:476 (1) - remove NC and 00:38:802 (2) - add NC ?
4. 00:40:128 (3) - add finish. For the same reason 00:17:586 (1) added to [Normal] too since was present on the hardest diffs
5. 00:56:039 (3) - add NC and 00:56:702 (1) - remove NC is better imo
6. 01:35:818 (2,3,1) - Suggestion of the form: ↓ If you use this, please follow the after note add a screen also please, maybe I dont want to change and change the code is unreversible, or I should re-udpate and Ill lost many changes
   

   128,64,95818,2,0,B|176:32|176:32|208:92|256:100|304:92|336:32|336:32|384:64,1,320,0|8
   256,168,97807,1,8
   120,252,98470,6,0,B|164:324|256:344|348:324|392:252,1,320,0|0

7. 01:54:382 (2) - add NC ?

[Normal]

1. 00:17:586 (1) - same easy diff same
2. 00:22:890 (1,2) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/nkNI ↓code hmm is not a significant change, just for put a note on centre of playfield, players are not going to open the editor and say hey! I want that note on centre
   

   256,296,22890,6,0,B|200:324|200:324|120:280|120:280|228:192|120:104|120:104|200:60|200:60|256:88,1,520,8|0
   256,192,24547,2,0,B|312:208|384:192,1,130,8|0

3. 00:26:868 (1) - remove NC and 00:28:194 (2) - add NC. ( same as 00:32:172 (3) )
4. 00:40:459 (1) - remove note. note after the spinner to come in too fast in normal diff. any suggest to keep the flow?
5. 01:03:332 (3) - grid move to x336,y104 ? ok.jpg
6. 01:41:785 (2,3) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nkOU Fit the end of the slider is 01:43:608. but, if you do not use the red line, is more fit 01:43:442 than now imo. play at 25% you may listen the bass on (2) and at the start and repeat of (3) then you may listen the "Caramelldansen" vocal on the end of (3)
7. 01:47:752 (3) - add NC and 01:49:078 (1) - remove NC and 01:50:404 (2) - add NC and 01:51:398 (1) - remove NC
8. 02:04:989 - add green line. S vol 80%. I think sound a little too big here are you serious?
9. 02:14:271 (4) - add NC and 02:15:597 (1) - remove NC is better
   
   fine but SV is very fast in normal yes, I have an [Easy] diff though

[Hard]

1. 00:02:503 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nkZy I think fit better put a note in 00:03:000 Im not following the bass here if you base your suggest on that
2. 00:05:155 (1,2) - ^ same suggestion
3. 00:17:586 (1) - remove clap to start of the slider. and same easy diff suggestion same as [Easy]
4. 00:33:166 (1) - I think the DS is too close. it is better to use DS0.9x current distance x0,88 O_ó
5. 00:37:973 (1) - remove NC and 00:38:636 (2) - add NC
6. 01:18:912 (4,5,1) - why do not use the same pattern here 01:13:442 (5,6,1)? It would be better to use the same pattern variety?
7. 01:37:973 (x) - add note. and add whistle ? ok
8. 02:00:183 (1) - remove NC. ( because you do not put NC here 01:57:199 (3,4,5) )
9. 02:04:989 - same normal diff
10. 02:06:315 (1) - add finish to start of the slider I forgot this o.o
11. 02:07:310 (1) - remove NC and 02:07:641 (2) - add NC and 02:08:304 (1) - remove NC and 02:08:967 (3) - add NC is better imo
12. 02:10:128 (4) - add NC and 02:11:122 (1) - remove NC and 02:11:619 (3) - add NC and 02:12:282 (1) - remove NC and 02:12:779 (2) - add NC

[Insane]

1. 00:03:000 (4) - add note. for the same reason Hard diff. same
2. 00:04:907 (4) - Does not match the rhythm. start 00:04:989. or If you want to really put it, better put a note. http://puu.sh/nlsd play at 25% you may listen the sound Im following
3. 00:05:818 (2,3) - spacing too close. 00:05:652 (1,2) - DS are the same here, but the rhythm is different. This can be confusing. If there wants to be you as it is, the NC is necessary by all means first one that point this
4. 00:17:586 (1) - same easy diff same
5. 00:56:039 (6) - ^
6. 01:03:829 (1) - remove NC and 01:03:995 (2) - add NC. and Suggestion of the form: 01:03:829 (1,2) - Reversing the position.(Ctrl+R)
7. 01:06:647 (6) - add NC and 01:07:476 (1) - remove NC
8. 01:09:299 (7) - add NC and 01:09:796 (1) - remove NC
9. 01:10:459 (5) - add NC
10. 01:30:514 (1,1,2) - The one that put a sound on a drum is easy to take rhythm imo. so suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/nlCk sorry, what?
11. 01:57:697 (2) - remove note ? that would break my pattern, also in that case I should delete the next (5) too
12. 02:04:989 (7) - remove whistle. I think here is better fit with a quiet
13. 02:06:315 (1) - add whistle to end of the slider ok
14. 02:14:271 (5) - add NC

[SB]

1. Does not match the sound a little to me 　↓

SPOILER

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"blac.png",320,240
F,0,60348,60514,1,0
F,0,60514,60680,0,1
F,0,60680,60846,1,0
F,0,60846,61011,0,1
F,0,61011,61177,1,0
F,0,61177,61343,0,1

my suggestion　↓
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"blac.png",320,240
F,0,60348,60514,0.8,0.1
F,0,60514,60680,0.1
F,0,60680,60846,0.8,0.1
F,0,60846,61011,0.1
F,0,61011,61177,0.8,0.1
F,0,61177,61343,0.1

Ill make know this to nara-chan, notice that this is his second SB

That's all ~ . sorry, long mod =v=

Good luck~

Leorda wrote:

Hey~

[Easy]
00:17:586 (1) - I think it's better if repeating slider is snapped at long white tick for following rhythm
00:22:890 (1) - ^ lets see what I can do, someone has already pointed this sliders
01:43:774 (x) - Add note here for following vocal? hmm Im not sure at all if I add a note there means Im following the vocals right? then I should add moar notes to incoming vocals


[Normal]
* AR +1? are you sure?

00:40:790 (2,3) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, and it's makes hidden for players ctrl+j =v=
00:48:083 (1) - Don't let this hitcircle touch the sliderborder (Nazi) is not touching it O_o
01:33:829 (1) - Same issue as 00:40:790 (2,3) same =v=
02:04:989 (4) - Change this hitsound from Normal to Soft, since it place it at calm part of song I think Im covering enough the "calm" part with current softened circles


[Hard]
00:33:166 (1) - Remove this and add slider at 00:33:000 and end it at 00:33:166 for following "wa" sound can you please play at 25% this part? 00:32:172 (3,4), follows the uwa uwa u~ just like 00:34:824 (3,4), you havent pointed this one
01:18:912 (5) - Move to 01:19:078 for rhythm? ok since kosiga also pointed this
01:38:139 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:33:166 (1) I made some changes based on kosiga's mod, is different now


[Insane]
01:05:238 (6) - I think it's better if you remove this circle to make sounds good k, revised on 25%
01:32:006 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts, so the players can't see where the object should be start on hmm, I saw you are givin this kind of suggest, but I may disagree with this, put a circle on the centre and overlap it with hitburst is an intuitive place, since many [Insane] maps have the circle on the centre of playfield with a circle incoming, also the aproach circle is clearly visible, this type of suggest may apply to the easiest diffs, [Easy] and [Normal]; that I also disagree with overlap/stack notes on them

Nice one~

yuugeki1234 wrote:

Hi~! like this map and SB! good works this one.

from #modreqs~

[General]
nothing~

[Easy]

00:02:669 - this slider needs curve? i think no ploblem a straight line it for beginners. Ill curve the previous slider for make a bit moar concistant

[Normal]

00:37:973 - can u 1 grid move right?

01:33:166 - remove finish and add clap. i dont care put clap here. just new start music position here from break times.

[Hard]

02:04:824 - 1 grid point up ? Ill copy paste the previous slider if you mean that I need a simmilar inclination with previous one

[Insane]

00:06:647 - This circle can jump point anywhere i think. not good? I like anti-jump Ovo!
01:19:575 - ^ ^
um, intentionally mapping? if that sorry~

well mapping ! cant pick up ploblem point...
all a suggestion.

Katty Pie wrote:

hi^^ from my mod Q

Insane

00:21:895(3,4) - unstack this sliders 00:22:393 (4,5) - are covered by (3) on a simmilar way, blanketing (4) would leave (4) on a weird location, also check 00:23:221 (2) - is stacked on reverse of (4)
00:39:465(3,4) - between this notes you should make bigger distance bcz the previous notes honor at the same distance it is a jump and here not the vertical distance leave to player see the 00:39:796 (4) - incoming clearly, although the spacing is the same the 1/1 difference between this 2 notes (and inocming (5)) leave read it clearly
00:53:387(1,3) - better develop ends of sliders http://puu.sh/uDpI bcz reverse of slider 1 hides reverse of slider 3 00:54:050 (3)'s reverse arrow is not covered by a hitburst, also is clearly visible since the snapping distance (1) and (3) is 2/1, remember what the rules says, if the reverse arrow is hidden by a hitburst
01:19:409(3,4) - unstack this notes why?
01:34:658(1,2,3) - make identical spacing between this notes symmetry, also supported by vocal changes
01:56:039(2,3) - you should put slider 3 in other place bcz locked reverse slider 3 check out the complete combo01:55:708 (1,2,3,4) - also there is no reverse arrow on (3) o.o

Hard

00:18:912(4,1) - correct spacing hmm ok, also I blanket a bit better (3) and (1)
00:38:967 - add note I can listen that bass, but the pattern here looks very easy, Ill add it if someone else point this again
00:41:619 - make so http://puu.sh/uDtJ sound better hmm, dont like how sounds 00:42:116
01:38:139 - put in 1 line http://puu.sh/uDuD <_<

Normal

00:08:967 - add note gimme a why
00:22:558 - ^ ↑
01:53:719 - replace this slider on note here 01:54:050 why? its not the same?¿


It's all for me)) good luck ^^

kazumikos wrote:

Hey~ from Shulin's queue where is shulin, he died?

[General]

1. SB.. erm I guess it's no use to complain lol =/ but you know, your SB + AR 9 has brought the mapset to a whole new level of unreadability
   1.- I dont want to delete the awesome work of my friend
   2.- You really cant read any note of this map?
   3.- I wish you can give me your "failed" test play
   4.- p3n saw it was funny, so I though he can read it pretty enough
   5.- I can play it even not being asian
2. volume 100% is too high, reduce to 80%? (85% => 65%?) the song itself is pretty high, and Im using 100% volume to emphase the major bass effects on some parts, maybe your general sound settings?

[Insane]

1. 00:14:934 (1,2,3) - finish? the "extension" effect of the finish~ sounds horrible on this circles, Im using finishes here on [Taiko] diff cuz the effect is different and cuz it plays pretty nice
2. 00:16:592 (4) - finish a reverse and the end? simmilar as up, we have a silent part here, with a "remix" vocal that I want to leave as moar clean as possible
3. 00:17:586 (1) - finish at start not significant difference, also not used on other standard diffs
4. 00:42:282 (1,2,3) - clap? no, listen to 00:43:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - you may notice the sound on the song that Im following
5. 00:46:094 (6,8) - according to this whistle pattern, next whistle should be at 00:47:420 < this is time is no a half of a slider, cant put hitsound here - 00:47:918 (3) - (the end) and 00:48:746 (4) - remove whistle at 00:47:752 (2,2) - plz the whistle pattern change is really soft here
6. 01:05:321 (6,2) - are 1/4 beats here following anything? there are some drums on background and this are not streams are just bouncing sliders, count as 1/1 hits
7. 01:14:437 - add note or fix spacing issue at 01:14:271 (10,1) - we have a huge jump on 01:14:105 (9,10), dont think that player needs at least a tiny rest? plust that is the why of new combo
8. 01:22:061 (8,9) - clap double clap pattern finished on 01:19:409 (3,4), incoming silence will sounds weird
9. 01:50:569 (1) - move to 01:50:735
10. 01:51:895 (6) - move to 01:52:061 no, Im following a common Ryu* rhythm here, and red ticks fits absolutelly ok, damn my ice cream has melt >_<
11. 02:00:846 (6) - 02:00:846 (6) - double speed here is inappropiate imo, use normal speed with 1/8? the repeat arrow will got hidden cuz this
12. 02:06:315 (1) - to the end : add clap to this part? i have no clap pattern on last kiai....

[Hard]
AR+1? I though that max recomendable ar for [Hard] diff was 7, so Ill keep it
may be add more whistle to this diff? like Insane? I covered all with clap cuz some whistles didnt sound so good

1. 00:07:227 (2) - move this to 00:07:310? cant you listen the bass effect?
2. 00:14:934 (1,2) - finish
3. 00:15:597 (3) - finish at start
4. 00:16:757 (6,7) - finish?
5. 00:17:586 (1) - finish at start same as [Insane] finishes dont fit to this part
6. 00:33:000 - add note cant listen the uauauu~ ?
7. 01:37:973 (1) - whistle the vocal on this is lower than next one, so..
8. 01:40:956 - note? listen to this part on [Insane] please

[Normal]

1. 00:14:934 (1,2) - finish?
2. 00:15:597 (3) - finish at start
3. 00:17:586 (1) - finish ~ read [Hard], [Insane]
4. 00:40:459 (1) - hmm remove this note? a bit hard for a normal diff hard? is a constant 1/1
5. 01:12:282 (1) - clap non constant claping here,
6. 01:17:918 (2) - ^
7. 01:20:569 (2) - ^

[Easy]

1. 00:17:586 (1) - finish at start see other diffs~
2. 01:35:818 (2,3) - try this? dont get mad but that looks horrible D:

good luck ^^

ikari_kyon wrote:

Hey~ from Shulin's queue where is shulin, he died?

SPOILER

[General]
SB.. erm I guess it's no use to complain lol =/ but you know, your SB + AR 9 has brought the mapset to a whole new level of unreadability
1.- I dont want to delete the awesome work of my friend
2.- You really cant read any note of this map?
3.- I wish you can give me your "failed" test play
4.- p3n saw it was funny, so I though he can read it pretty enough
5.- I cant play it even not being asian
volume 100% is too high, reduce to 80%? (85% => 65%?) the song itself is pretty high, and Im using 100% volume to emphase the major bass effects on some parts, maybe your general sound settings?
[Insane]
00:14:934 (1,2,3) - finish? the "extension" effect of the finish~ sounds horrible on this circles, Im using finishes here on [Taiko] diff cuz the effect is different and cuz it plays pretty nice
00:16:592 (4) - finish a reverse and the end? simmilar as up, we have a silent part here, with a "remix" vocal that I want to leave as moar clean as possible
00:17:586 (1) - finish at start not significant difference, also not used on other standard diffs
00:42:282 (1,2,3) - clap? no, listen to 00:43:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - you may notice the sound on the song that Im following
00:46:094 (6,8) - according to this whistle pattern, next whistle should be at 00:47:420 < this is time is no a half of a slider, cant put hitsound here - 00:47:918 (3) - (the end) and 00:48:746 (4) - remove whistle at 00:47:752 (2,2) - plz the whistle pattern change is really soft here
01:05:321 (6,2) - are 1/4 beats here following anything? there are some drums on background and this are not streams are just bouncing sliders, count as 1/1 hits
01:14:437 - add note or fix spacing issue at 01:14:271 (10,1) - we have a huge jump on 01:14:105 (9,10), dont think that player needs at least a tiny rest? plust that is the why of new combo
01:22:061 (8,9) - clap double clap pattern finished on 01:19:409 (3,4), incoming silence will sounds weird
01:50:569 (1) - move to 01:50:735
01:51:895 (6) - move to 01:52:061 no, Im following a common Ryu* rhythm here, and red ticks fits absolutelly ok, damn my ice cream has melt >_<
02:00:846 (6) - 02:00:846 (6) - double speed here is inappropiate imo, use normal speed with 1/8? the repeat arrow will got hidden cuz this
02:06:315 (1) - to the end : add clap to this part? i have no clap pattern on last kiai....

[Hard]
AR+1? I though that max recomendable ar for [Hard] diff was 7, so Ill keep it
may be add more whistle to this diff? like Insane? I covered all with clap cuz some whistles didnt sound so good
00:07:227 (2) - move this to 00:07:310? cant you listen the bass effect?
00:14:934 (1,2) - finish
00:15:597 (3) - finish at start
00:16:757 (6,7) - finish?
00:17:586 (1) - finish at start same as [Insane] finishes dont fit to this part
00:33:000 - add note cant listen the uauauu~ ?
01:37:973 (1) - whistle the vocal on this is lower than next one, so..
01:40:956 - note? listen to this part on [Insane] please

[Normal]
00:14:934 (1,2) - finish?
00:15:597 (3) - finish at start
00:17:586 (1) - finish ~ read [Hard], [Insane]
00:40:459 (1) - hmm remove this note? a bit hard for a normal diff hard? is a constant 1/1
01:12:282 (1) - clap non constant claping here,
01:17:918 (2) - ^
01:20:569 (2) - ^

[Easy]
00:17:586 (1) - finish at start see other diffs~
01:35:818 (2,3) - try this? dont get mad but that looks horrible D:

Leorda wrote:

Hi again hi hi hi <:

[Easy]
01:33:829 (1) - While the default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this possible hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343579 changed to blue
02:02:337 (3) - New combo yeah, long space
02:12:282 (3) - ^ I though same reason as up


[Normal]
00:20:238 (5,1) - Swap new combo? k
00:40:459 (1) - While the default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this possible hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343579 pinked
01:33:829 (1) - ^ I think blue colour is pretty visible


[Hard]
01:33:829 (1) - Spacing error o:? cant get the problem here


[Insane]
00:43:277 (5,6) - Not stack correctly with head slider (look at test mode) Actually this is an auto stack leniency bug, Ill try to fix it with manual stacking
02:04:989 (7) - Remove this note?? its for follow the incoming silence, keep for now


I'm not sure if this was fit to my bubble criteria. In OP, it said "4 months old" in upper-right, not sure if this right....

Leorda wrote:

I'm not sure if this was fit to my bubble criteria. In OP, it said "4 months old" in upper-right, not sure if this right....