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senya - Kyoshoku Dramatic

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saymun
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saymun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 1 June 2012 at 11:30:00 PM

Artist: senya
Title: Kyoshoku Dramatic
Source: Touhou
Tags: Ibuki Suika wmfchris Alace YGOKid8
BPM: 165
Filesize: 5031kb
Play Time: 03:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.94 stars, 457 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 704 notes)
  3. Normal (3.99 stars, 263 notes)
  4. Pangko (4.94 stars, 975 notes)
  5. Wmf's Taiko (4.89 stars, 1187 notes)
  6. YGOkid8's Easy (1.67 stars, 163 notes)
Download: senya - Kyoshoku Dramatic
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my very first beatmap! please have a look at it ;D
Last edited by saymun , edited 10 times in total.
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
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Nakagawa-Kanon
fdgsgejgdpajofj

saymun revived
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
my preview. btw didn't you know? if you map less than 80% of the song, you have to crop the audio. so either map more or crop \o/

EDIT: aw hell yeah i'm done. might mod this if i have time. if i do, see this post for edit.

Download: senya - Kyoshoku Dramatic (saymun) [YGOkid8's Easy].osu
wmfchris
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wmfchris
the song repeats quite a lot. Hope that it's not too boring >~<

Download: senya - Kyoshoku Dramatic (saymun) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
Alace
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Alace
easy map!

EDIT:02:59:119 (25) - i forget to add finish here, help me XD

Download: senya - Kyoshoku Dramatic (saymun) [Pangko].osu
DaxMasterix
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DaxMasterix
lololololololol Good Beatmap but Sound.. rare...

Put the Offset: 696
S o r d a
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Joined July 2009
S o r d a
request from in-game

[overall]:
  1. pangko doesn't need to be on tags
[Insane]:
  1. why volume 100% 00:00:392 ~ 01:20:756 60% 01:20:756 ~ 01:45:483 - 80% 02:08:392 ~ 02:42:210 60% 02:42:210 ~ end 80% better to me
  2. you have isnt snapped note you should resnap All note
  3. 00:00:755 (3) - Finish better to me
  4. 01:01:119 - I like this rhythm try this
  5. 01:28:027 (2) - beginning finish
  6. 01:39:664 (2) - ^
  7. 02:21:845 (7) - Add new combo
  8. 02:51:300 (6) - bit hard read? add New combo
[Hard]:
  1. 00:00:756 (3) - beginning finish
  2. other fine~
[Normal]:
  1. you have isnt snapped note
  2. other fine to me
[YGOkid8's Easy]:
  1. 02:46:574 (5,6,1) - spacing wrong
  2. 02:56:756 (4,5,6,1) - ^
nice map over all but I think Insane diff combo long
anyway good luck!
saymun
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saymun
^ fixed most of above
Cilvery
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Cilvery
saymun =3=


Suggestions!
[Insane]

00:35:664 (2) - add clap

01:24:573 (7) - ^

01:27:483 (5) - ^

01:36:209 (7) - ^

01:38:573 (3) - ^

01:39:118 (7) - ^

01:44:937 (13) - ^

02:46:028 (7) - ^

02:48:936 (7) - ^

02:54:755 (12) - ^

02:57:664 (8) - ^

03:00:574 (7) - ^

03:04:027 (2) - add finish

03:04:755 (4) - ^

Sorry..Many clap mod T.T

saymun pro ~ o3o

GOOD LUCK!!
RusselG
RusselG
[Insane]
02:20:210 (2) - to be honest, this note looks oddly placed, make it like this.

that seems to be the only thing wrong in the map, other than that, good job saymun!
saymun
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saymun
doneee
riffy
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riffy
hey!

[General]
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections D:
a bit louder hitsounds at start section ~+5-10% or use normal hitsounds (fits with song better for me)


[Easy]
01:22:210 (2) - new combo!

00:34:028 (7) - new combo
00:35:665 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:665 (5) - too close to offscreen
01:06:210 (3) - nazi:x280 y168
01:07:665 (4) - almost touches hp-bar. can confuse beginners
01:25:119 (4,6) - please, avoid crossing at easiest diff ~_~

[Normal]
00:36:937 (2,3,4,5) - a bit hard for normal.
02:43:301 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - not bad. i would like to see this pattern on INSANE diff, not Normal
03:00:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - let's stop and DRUM! please unstack some

[Hard]
00:09:846 (1,1) - remove new combo?
meh. New Combos seems to be a bit overused >3<

that's all for Hard diff

[Pangko]
maybe this?
Big Katu a bit overused IMO

[Wmf's Taiko]
maybe this?

[Insane]
from start to 00:12:300 - use claps instead of whistles?
nothing to say. nice one

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hm.. nice map o.o

Edit: i should be faster >3< someone nija'd my 2 kudosu, lol
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8

-Bakari- wrote:

[Easy]
01:22:210 (2) - new combo! right

00:34:028 (7) - new combo doing so breaks consistency
00:35:665 (1) - remove new combo ^
00:51:665 (5) - too close to offscreen not offscreen, so it's fine
01:06:210 (3) - nazi:x280 y168 i don't see why it's needed
01:07:665 (4) - almost touches hp-bar. can confuse beginners being close to hp bar confuses at all?
01:25:119 (4,6) - please, avoid crossing at easiest diff ~_~ it's only once, should be fine
Download: senya - Kyoshoku Dramatic (saymun) [YGOkid8's Easy].osu
saymun
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Topic Starter
saymun

-Bakari- wrote:

[General]
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections D: Fixed
a bit louder hitsounds at start section ~+5-10% or use normal hitsounds (fits with song better for me) Increased the start by 10%

[Normal]
00:36:937 (2,3,4,5) - a bit hard for normal. My friend(can only play normal, and very little hards) can play this part perfectly so i think its fine ^^
02:43:301 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - not bad. i would like to see this pattern on INSANE diff, not Normal Same as above
03:00:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - let's stop and DRUM! please unstack some Left the first two, changed the last two. They've been moving the mouse around the screen for a long time, they may need a little rest you know ;)
pieguyn
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pieguyn
hi there~

YGOkid8's Easy:

00:51:665 (5) - this is quite close to the bottom of the screen, perhaps move it up a bit?
02:20:937 (2) - start it 1/2 later? after all the other 1/1 sliders this would probably throw beginners off a bit...
02:26:756 (2) - ^

Normal:

00:49:483 - add note?
00:55:301 - ^
01:01:119 - ^
01:06:937 - ^

Hard:

00:38:028 (9) - reverse arrow hidden by (7)
00:53:483 - add note?
01:40:574 (8) - remove note? IMO it plays better and is a bit easier to read...
01:42:028 (8) - ^
02:23:937 (2) - remove note?
02:53:846 (3) - maybe put a 2/1 slider like before?
03:01:847 (7,8) - maybe change it into a 1/2 slider?

Insane:

00:14:209 (2) - maybe put it on the other side of (3)? http://puu.sh/z47E plays a bit better IMO...

Wmf's Taiko: fine

Pangko: fine

nice map~
GiNa
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GiNa
[General]
-You can add "Pangko" in your Tags :3 since there are so many ranked maps have it.

[YGOkid8's Easy]
00:32:756 (5) – maybe NC here to show the rhythm changes
00:38:574 (5) – ^
00:44:392 (5) – ^
00:51:665 (5) – curve this up, the position of this is quite low now
01:36:756 (5) – NC here would help beginners read it easier too
01:44:028 (5) – ^

[Normal]
01:17:119 (1,2,3,4) – I think unstack them would be better, seems a little crowded right now
01:21:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – beautiful pattern, but might confusing
02:43:665 (2,4,2,4) – don’t use grid and stack them better
02:54:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – I think stack 7 circles together is too much, at least turn some of them to sliders … I tried sth like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343882
02:56:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – ^

[Hard]
01:25:483 (4,5,6) – this doesn’t fit here, maybe try this, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343884
01:44:028 (1) – I would say this fits and sounds more correct, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343887. Btw, I added finish on 6
02:46:938 (5,6,7) – same as 01:25:483 (4,5,6)
03:05:483 (1) – same as 01:44:028 (1)
I like this diff here

[Insane]
00:39:664 (6) – why not stack this perfectly ?
01:23:845 (3,4,5,6,7) – the star here can be improved more imo
Good diff too

Good luck !
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