1. BG size錯了 改成1024x768吧
2. Source錯了吧 應該是 "Derivara! -deliverance of strays-" 但其實兩種Sourse在youtube查都有 到底是哪個呢... >_<
3. 這mp3音質不是很好 聽起來蠻刺耳的 我幫你找到好的了 (花了我20分鐘... QAQ ) Here is the mp3

1. 沒看出什麼 就真心覺得這spacing不配Easy 還有設定有點高 >_<

1. 01:21:072 (2) - 結尾改成finish?
2. 01:22:912 (1) - 開頭finish?
3. 01:24:201 (3) - ^
4. 01:31:747 (1) - ^

1. 00:13:526 (4) - Ctrl+R xD?
2. 01:21:256 (5) - finish?
3. 01:22:912 (1) - 開頭finish?
4. 01:24:201 (4) - ^
5. 01:31:747 (1) - ^

1. 00:40:029 (7) - 這Parttern有點長 再這NC一下吧
2. 00:53:281 (1) - 結尾finish
3. 01:01:747 (5) - 結尾加個whistle?
4. 01:21:256 (1) - 開頭finish?
5. 01:22:912 (1) - ^
6. 01:24:201 (4) - ^
7. 01:31:747 (1) - ^
8. 01:37:268 (5,6) - close一點? 加DT的在這miss 會給你很低的rate的 >_<

1. 01:21:256 (2) - 開頭finish
2. 01:22:912 (1) - ^
3. 01:24:201 (6) - ^
4. 01:31:747 (1) - ^

1. 音量改成80%吧 現在有點太大聲了

1. About the MP3.
   It's hard to see it has good quality. Can you get better one?
   It's not big problem. Maybe I'm picky. :p
2. Start point of 2nd kiai.
   01:14:446 - This point is much better for me.

ykcarrot wrote:

Haai~


[General]

1. About the MP3.
   It's hard to see it has good quality. Can you get better one?
   It's not big problem. Maybe I'm picky. :p
2. Start point of 2nd kiai.
   01:14:446 - This point is much better for me.

[DNA]
00:22:360 (1) - Add finish to head
00:34:139 (5) - ^
00:45:919 (6) - ^
00:56:962 (4) - ^ but with 50% volume
00:59:354 (8) - NC
01:26:962 (5) - Too forced jump



[Insane]
00:22:360 (1) - Add finish to head
00:34:139 (8) - ^
00:45:919 (4) - ^
00:56:962 (3) - ^ but with 50% volume



[Hard]
00:00:274 (1) - Unsnapped slider (AiMod can't find this)
00:22:360 (4) - Add finish to head
00:34:139 (1) - ^
00:45:919 (1) - ^
00:56:962 (4) - ^ but with 50% volume


[Normal]
00:21:992 (2) - Add finish to arrow
00:32:115 (4) - NC
00:32:667 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:955 (3) - NC
00:34:139 (4) - Add finish to head
00:45:919 (3) - ^
00:56:962 (1) - ^ but with 50% volume


[Easy]
00:56:409 (1) - Add finish to tail with 50% volume
00:58:066 (3) - Add finish to tail
00:59:354 (1) - I feel better when it ends at 01:01:195


They were almost hitsound mods.
Anyway good luck ;D
ofc star~*

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ request from via In-Game PM~
　

1. 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
2. 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
3. 黑 : 就單純建議

　
[ General]
　

1. BG size錯了 改成1024x768吧 //rules上寫說不超過1024x768的都行，嘛，差一點沒關係吧
2. Source錯了吧 應該是 "Derivara! -deliverance of strays-" 但其實兩種Sourse在youtube查都有 到底是哪個呢... >_< //恩，你的才是對的喔
3. 這mp3音質不是很好 聽起來蠻刺耳的 我幫你找到好的了 (花了我20分鐘... QAQ ) //非常感謝:3 Here is the mp3

　
[ Easy]
　

1. 沒看出什麼 就真心覺得這spacing不配Easy 還有設定有點高 >_<

//哦，我下次會注意
　
[ Normal]
　

1. 01:21:072 (2) - 結尾改成finish?
2. 01:22:912 (1) - 開頭finish?
3. 01:24:201 (3) - ^
4. 01:31:747 (1) - ^

　
[ Hard]
　

1. 00:13:526 (4) - Ctrl+R xD? //這跳得不順啊而且沒打算跳，這裡有點sudden了
2. 01:21:256 (5) - finish?
3. 01:22:912 (1) - 開頭finish?
4. 01:24:201 (4) - ^
5. 01:31:747 (1) - ^

　
[ Insane]
　

1. 00:40:029 (7) - 這Parttern有點長 再這NC一下吧
2. 00:53:281 (1) - 結尾finish
3. 01:01:747 (5) - 結尾加個whistle?
4. 01:21:256 (1) - 開頭finish?
5. 01:22:912 (1) - ^
6. 01:24:201 (4) - ^
7. 01:31:747 (1) - ^
8. 01:37:268 (5,6) - close一點? 加DT的在這miss 會給你很低的rate的 >_< //真心不遠..

　
[ D.N.Angel]
　

1. 01:21:256 (2) - 開頭finish
2. 01:22:912 (1) - ^
3. 01:24:201 (6) - ^
4. 01:31:747 (1) - ^

　
[ Taiko Oni]
　

1. 音量改成80%吧 現在有點太大聲了

　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
神麻婆 渣modder跪了... 好歌呢!!
Good Luck :3

[Easy

1. 01:22:954 (1) - 讓第4個點 在x:480 y260? (我是感覺比較好看些XD)
2. 01:34:734 (1) - 讓第2個點 在x:284 y:208 (理由同上OAO)

[Normal]

1. 沒問題~

[Hard]

1. 00:06:390 (1) - 在開始的地方加個whistle ?
2. 01:14:856 (3) - 讓第2個點 在x:64 y:336 ?

[D.N.Angel]

1. 00:24:795 (3) - 讓第3個點 在x:352 y:168 ?

[Insane]

1. 沒問題~

1. Nothing major, but the bg is 1 pixel low (1023x767). It will cause a slightly black box, so i reconsider to find a BG that has size 1024x768
2. Want to use this compressed video? > http://puu.sh/usWF It's have a slight different quality, but the size of the file has been reduced by half from 15mb to just 7mb. It's always good to have such a large compression

1. 00:00:501 (1) - Sorry if it nazi, but it disrupts my vision. Could you make it more symetrical?
2. 00:07:678 (2) - You seems miss a whistle here at it's end. You always add a whistle at 00:02:709- , 00:05:654-, but not at this spot.
3. 00:34:366 (2) - I think this circle should be on here 00:34:181- because the piano sound are on that spot. And you follow the piano sound afterward. So i think this circle are not following anything in this current spot.
4. 00:43:200 (2) - I think this sldier should start here 00:43:016- and end at the same place. Both of piano, and vocal are start there.
5. 00:49:089 (2) - This slider should start here 00:48:905- but end at the same place because the piano sound are on that place. Both of vocal and piano are start there.
6. 00:54:979 (2) - This slider are also should also start here 00:54:795- but end at the same place. There are a cymbal sound at 00:54:795- so most of player will think you following the cymbal sound and the vocal.
7. 01:36:022 (1) - Maybe this spinner will be too short for begginer. I would suggest you start the spinner here 01:35:838- or here 01:35:654.

1. 00:06:022 (1) - Hmm, i feel empty at this slider repeat. Are you miss a whistle there? It seems not consistant with whistle here 00:03:445 (1,2) -
2. I don't find anything again besides that. Really good diff.

1. I don't recommend using jump 1.7 or higher on hard diff since it can be very difficult for most player and almost like and insane jump. Please reconsider some jump that has 1.7 spacing or higher, especially (2.0 or higher) to reduce the spacing so people will likely to pass it. Well, except the very high jump, i think all jump are well placed and i can get 100% acc wit ease.
2. 00:00:316 (1)- You have unsnapped slider here at it's end.
3. 00:41:359 (5) - I think you miss a whistle here at the start, since i can hear the whistle is not consistant with your previous whistle rythim.
4. Hauu, i can't find anything again besides that. Really good diff. Nice

1. 00:41:359 (1) - Hmm, how about adding a whistle at this circle? i think it's not consistant with your previous whistle rythim.
2. 00:59:028- Move the timing point here to 00:59:120-. The clap sound really not consistant with your most clap rythim.
3. 00:59:948- Ouch, this little gap is really break the flow. After a long tap tap, it's suddenly stop and i can't ready the rythim again because of this gap. I really suggest you to fill the gap with circle. Just stack it on top of 01:00:501 (5) -
4. 01:01:789 (5) - Clap at it's end to cover up the drum sound at the music?

l1106188 wrote:

路過~

[Easy

1. 01:22:954 (1) - 讓第4個點 在x:480 y260? (我是感覺比較好看些XD) //唔，我是覺得都OK呢 :O
2. 01:34:734 (1) - 讓第2個點 在x:284 y:208 (理由同上OAO) fixed

[Normal]

1. 沒問題~

[Hard]

1. 00:06:390 (1) - 在開始的地方加個whistle ? //k
2. 01:14:856 (3) - 讓第2個點 在x:64 y:336 ? //no

[D.N.Angel]

1. 00:24:795 (3) - 讓第3個點 在x:352 y:168 ? //no...其實是因為我家滑鼠拖曳有問題，所以懶得改了orz

[Insane]

1. 沒問題~

圖太完美了QAQ...
射星~ //感謝評價和星星 ~
其實我是看到queue lol , 有點想說那BG圖...XD
加油!!!

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue.. but it's pretty nice orz
just some unsnapped things

Taiko
01:37:494 (1) - spinner end //fixed

Hard
00:00:316 (1) - slider end //fixed

really really sorry ._.; //it's ok

Miya wrote:

Hi, Miya is here

General

1. Nothing major, but the bg is 1 pixel low (1023x767). It will cause a slightly black box, so i reconsider to find a BG that has size 1024x768
   //I'm lazy to fix it ... I think it is fine
2. Want to use this compressed video? > http://puu.sh/usWF It's have a slight different quality, but the size of the file has been reduced by half from 15mb to just 7mb. It's always good to have such a large compression //thank you ~

Easy

1. 00:00:501 (1) - Sorry if it nazi, but it disrupts my vision. Could you make it more symetrical? //intencial
2. 00:07:678 (2) - You seems miss a whistle here at it's end. You always add a whistle at 00:02:709- , 00:05:654-, but not at this spot. //k
3. 00:34:366 (2) - I think this circle should be on here 00:34:181- because the piano sound are on that spot. And you follow the piano sound afterward. So i think this circle are not following anything in this current spot. //k
4. 00:43:200 (2) - I think this sldier should start here 00:43:016- and end at the same place. Both of piano, and vocal are start there.
5. 00:49:089 (2) - This slider should start here 00:48:905- but end at the same place because the piano sound are on that place. Both of vocal and piano are start there.
6. 00:54:979 (2) - This slider are also should also start here 00:54:795- but end at the same place. There are a cymbal sound at 00:54:795- so most of player will think you following the cymbal sound and the vocal. //uh...no,I usually make this pattern in this part,and I think the rhythm is acceptable
7. 01:36:022 (1) - Maybe this spinner will be too short for begginer. I would suggest you start the spinner here 01:35:838- or here 01:35:654.//I think it isn't too short

Normal

1. 00:06:022 (1) - Hmm, i feel empty at this slider repeat. Are you miss a whistle there? It seems not consistant with whistle here 00:03:445 (1,2) - //k
2. I don't find anything again besides that. Really good diff.

Hard

1. I don't recommend using jump 1.7 or higher on hard diff since it can be very difficult for most player and almost like and insane jump. Please reconsider some jump that has 1.7 spacing or higher, especially (2.0 or higher) to reduce the spacing so people will likely to pass it. Well, except the very high jump, i think all jump are well placed and i can get 100% acc wit ease.
2. 00:00:316 (1)- You have unsnapped slider here at it's end. //fixed
3. 00:41:359 (5) - I think you miss a whistle here at the start, since i can hear the whistle is not consistant with your previous whistle rythim. //k
4. Hauu, i can't find anything again besides that. Really good diff. Nice

Insane

1. 00:41:359 (1) - Hmm, how about adding a whistle at this circle? i think it's not consistant with your previous whistle rythim.//I always don't add whistle here because it is my setting
2. 00:59:028- Move the timing point here to 00:59:120-. The clap sound really not consistant with your most clap rythim. //fixed
3. 00:59:948- Ouch, this little gap is really break the flow. After a long tap tap, it's suddenly stop and i can't ready the rythim again because of this gap. I really suggest you to fill the gap with circle. Just stack it on top of 01:00:501 (5) - //I think it is fine
4. 01:01:789 (5) - Clap at it's end to cover up the drum sound at the music? //added 50% clap

Sorry, i don't mod your extra diff, it's out of my modding policy
Well, that's all from me. This is really good map. But since you have so many star, i won't give you any star >.< uh...11 stars
Good luck~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[Normal]
01:34:734 (6) - New combo for your combo pattern?


[Yia's Taiko]
01:37:494 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)


[Hard]
00:00:316 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider (thanks to AIBat)

all fixed


sorry for my poor mod

-Sekai- wrote:

Hi DNA >w</

Easy

OD -1? to make it more easier and nicer to play o.o //k

1. 00:07:678 (2) - it's dont look really good to me o.o maybe chenge it to somthing like this it's much nicer.
   
   SPOILER

   
   //I think mine is better ><
2. 00:10:071 (3) - if you move it one grip up to line up with 00:09:335 (1) - it'll be better at playing ~ it is to be symmetrical
3. 00:12:280 (1,2,3) - this triangle notes dont look really good so move the (3) one grip down, to make it better ~ //uh...I can't do that because of the distance snap
4. 00:16:513 (3) - this slider shape is not good so maybe make more nicer o.o like this? sorry,I think mine is better ><
   
   SPOILER

   

Normal

1. 00:22:034 (2) - curving this slider will make it look better o.o at least it is to me //it is to flow well

Nice diff o.o/ >w<

Hard

1. 00:45:224 (2) - add note here it'll sound better ._. so maybe add it? //no

D.N.Angel and Insane looks good to me so yeah :3

Nice maps as always DNA =w=/ good luck with Ranking <3

BeatofIke wrote:

Just so you know, your offset is way too late. Try 451 for better timing.

Hi DarknessAngel

• General
  ● One question: why video file named "Vedio" ?

• SakiK's Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Nice easy...I can't see any promlem

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:51:666 (4) - maybe better end slider on 00:51:850 (red tick) and add note on 00:52:218 - red tick again?
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Really nice mapset

• Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Perfect...I can't find any problem again

• D.N.Angel
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Oh common...You must be kidding?

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:41:543 (2) - yey \:D/ spacing prev 1.8...use next 1.8 again ^^ it's more better...or move (2) on x:289 y:153 (1.9)
  
  >Hitsounds
  ● Good
  ___________________
  All is good again

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
offset用-971，因为第一条红线前面不能有note

[Easy]
红线note有些多，其他没什么问题。

[Normal]
00:25:163 (3) - 不太好看。。
00:42:832 (3,4) - 这里节奏不太好判断，把00:43:384 (4) 改成00:43:568的一个note吧

[Hard]
00:00:316 (1) - 没snap
00:05:838 (3) - Hard放这种跳有些难了吧
00:17:249 (2,3) - ^ 距离和这个1/1差不多了 00:18:169 (1,2)
01:01:237 (1) - 这里我觉得可以不用放转盘，用一个多次折返滑条

[Insane]
00:02:709 (4,1) - 对称？
00:16:513 (4) - 不是很好看，做个包围00:16:145 (2)的圆弧？
00:56:635 (2) - ctrl+r?

That's all I can find. GL~

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[Easy]
00:00:501 (1) - 來拉正點
00:07:678 (2) - ^
00:15:224 (1) - 我偏向于在這個位置加個clap （後面系統亦是如此
00:32:893 (1) - ^(以下各種注意點細節grid就不說了
00:56:451 (1,2,3) - 考慮還是加點clap
01:12:648 - 爲什麽kiai停在這裡了 還不如兩噴泉 (all diff


[Normal]
00:19:089 - 這位置可以來個clap
00:22:034 - ^
01:05:286 (1) - 因為節奏很緊密這裡這個長slider略顯得不合適
01:14:120 - finish提前到這
01:29:764 - 同前面理由

其他看了沒什麽大問題 音效部份建議通用(懶得打了

IchiGUN wrote:

BeatofIke wrote:

Just so you know, your offset is way too late. Try 451 for better timing.

I don't think so...conversely I think need more increase offset (511~521) :3

Hi DarknessAngel

just suggestion ^^

• General
  ● One question: why video file named "Vedio" ?

===========================

• SakiK's Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Nice easy...I can't see any promlem

===========================

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:51:666 (4) - maybe better end slider on 00:51:850 (red tick) and add note on 00:52:218 - red tick again?
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Really nice mapset

===========================

• Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Perfect...I can't find any problem again

===========================

• D.N.Angel
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● Good
  
  >Hitsounds
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Oh common...You must be kidding?

===========================

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:41:543 (2) - yey \:D/ spacing prev 1.8...use next 1.8 again ^^ it's more better...or move (2) on x:289 y:153 (1.9)
  
  >Hitsounds
  ● Good
  ___________________
  All is good again

Sorry for poor mod, but I can't find more problems ^^
Good luck

Arithmetic Underflow wrote:

Hi, DarknessAngel.
From Underflow's Newbie Modding Queue.

[General]
- Background image size recommend 1024 * 768.

[Normal]
- 00:06:022 (1) How about this?


- 00:10:991 (4) How about this?


[D.N.Angel]
- 01:24:243 (6) New Combo

Sorry, very short..

I like this song & movie. Stared.
Good luck

spboxer3 wrote:

:idea: general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. timing請用負值 因為你的第一個object在第一條offset的前面...

Easy

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:12:280 (1,2,3) - 仔細看了一下 如果要使2在1,3的正中間 你必讓3需要往右移1個grid (size 4)
2. 00:24:795 (1,2) - 你把1用垂直對稱看一下 會發現1,2不在同位置上 是否把這個pattern往下移一些 讓1,2呈現垂直對稱?
3. 00:38:047 (3,4,1) - 這個並不是正三角形 如果你是要做正三角的話就需要改一下

Normal

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:25:163 (3) - 並沒有完全對稱的圖形 將尾巴的node往上移動1 grid (size 4) 就可以對稱了
2. 01:13:752 (5,1,2) - [suggest] 我會建議你把這三個點作成個直角三角形. 這樣看起來會比較好看些~當然的 如果你改了 後面的排列也要跟著一起移動

Hard

• 
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:00:316 (1) - slider結尾處並沒有對上節奏
2. 00:02:709 (2,3,4) - 並沒有作出等間距. 我是建議做出等間距~不過這個看你自己的感覺了
3. 01:18:353 (4,2) - 這兩個並沒有完全stack到 我認為你應該可以把這個stack上去
4. 01:29:580 (3,4,5,1,2) - 這個排列中間距並不一致~你可以去check一下 建議是改掉比較好

Insane

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:02:893 (4) - [suggest] 放到x:220,y:272的位置感覺會比較好. 這是對應前面00:01:789 (5,1,2,3) - 的排法所作出的建議
2. 00:42:832 (2,6) - 沒有完全的stack 讓這個覆蓋好些吧 看起來也比較好看些 不然感覺很像殘影
3. 01:10:991 (3,4,5) - 3,4的y軸位置不同 導致這個pattern看起來有些歪掉...

D.N.Angel

• 
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:02:157 (1,2,3) - 讓這個排列作出等間距 就是1,2之間的間距和1,3之間的間距是一樣的
2. 00:03:445 (8) - NC/reNC 應該是在這 這邊才是段落的開頭 而不是00:03:813 (1) -
3. 00:06:390 (4,1) - ^ 同樣狀況
4. 00:18:169 (6) - ^
5. 00:36:942 (6,7,8) - 並不是正三角形~同樣的 我會建議你改掉 因為改了真的比較好看
6. 00:54:059 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 看起來和星形差了點 原因應該在2的位置吧~ 仔細看一下

無限亂跳lol

Taiko

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  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. 建議刪除video
2. 建議加個Taiko BG
3. 100%的聲音實在太吵了 改成60~70%之間吧

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:00:501 (2,3) - 這兩個音音調是一致的 我覺淂這兩個應該用k k
2. 00:01:789 (6) - k
3. 00:03:813 (12) - k
4. 00:05:654 (18,19) - k k ?
5. 00:07:678 (24) - k
6. 00:08:599 (27,28) - k k ?
7. 00:10:991 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - d k d k k d k d?
8. 00:29:396 - 加個d 然後00:29:580 (149) - 改成k?
9. 00:54:243 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - D d k D ddk D?
10. 01:07:126 (125,126,127,128,129) - ddkkd/ddkdd? (通常聲音不會再1/4轉調... 這個地方就是沒轉調的 所以我建議改掉)
11. 01:25:899 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263) - 同前段loop...
12. 01:37:494 (1) - 你不能因為spinner可以打很快就把他放到歌曲最終點阿= = 還是要符合原則的...

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

以前那個可以讓我打出一整面的的D.N.Angel不見了._.
現在只剩下可以建議的部份
但是還是很不喜歡你的大跳...急煞車+迴轉的slider大跳...
嘛...沒什麼了 good luck了~

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

[General]
bg size is 1023x767 o.o (make 1024x768)

[Hard]
00:00:316 (1) - unsnapped o.o
00:07:310 (3,4) - this?
00:48:353 (2,3) - IMO they shuld be in the middle of playfieldfor better looking
01:00:132 (3) - x2.46 distance? overjump :O
01:07:310 (3) - just curve end point a bit more for better covering (4)
01:08:231 (1) - curve a bit more!
01:30:501 (2) - 2.84 distance total overjump

i think you shouldn't make INSANE jumps at hard diff ~_~

[Insane]
00:01:421 (4) - in this way
00:48:905 (4) - i think it shoild cover (1) somehow looks nice. isn't it?
00:53:323 (1) - remove white point ~_~
01:26:267 (2) - move somewhere to keep jump pattern

[D.N.Angel]
looks confusing for me. you have 2 insane diffs ~_~
01:01:789 (5) - end point: 2 grids right
this one is awesome

[Normal]
00:25:163 (3) - i think you need red dot in the center of slider
00:47:617 (1,2) - not looks good http://puu.sh/vwcq
01:26:820 - i want something here

[Easy]
too fast for easy diff. anyway, other fings looks clear

~~~~~~
gl

Melophobia wrote:

Hi

[Genera]
no custom taiko BG?

[Easy]
* slider tick hitsounds are louder than normal one, so it'd be better to reduce volume by 10% for them

00:03:813 (1,2) - sounds weird and doesnt fit here
move them to 1/1 earlier
00:06:390 (1) - 3 whistles are too much imo. remove it from repeat of this slider please
00:07:678 (2) - hmm how about whistle at the end of this?
00:32:893 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is kinda hard for beginner imo.
try something like this to make it easier please
http://puu.sh/vwjb
00:45:777 (2) - CTRL+J?
00:47:617 - it would be better use lower volume than 00:12:280 -
00:53:507 (1) - add finish at the beginning?
00:59:396 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier?

[Normal]
00:32:709 (2) - not only follow vocal, try follow the downbeat at the middle of this slider
00:47:617 - same as Easy
01:29:764 (3) - looks better if you use same shape as (1)

[Hard]
00:00:316 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:03:261 (4) - delete this note and rhythm will be much better imo
00:08:415 (2) - in my opinion, this huge spacing is destroying your nice flow. it would be better to use DS here
00:18:169 (1) - i felt spacing was too close after huge jumps
00:40:071 (1) - try this~
http://puu.sh/vwIb
00:31:421 (1) - 2 gird down? spacing between (1) and (4) will look same as between (1) and (4)
00:43:568 (2) - looks nice, but it would be better to place this at x:12 y:280 because the current one changes direction suddenly
00:47:617 - same as Easy

[D.N.Angel]
00:23:415 - add note
00:47:617 - same as Easy
01:25:899 (1) - use same direction as 01:25:899 (1) - ?
http://puu.sh/vwD5

[Insane]
00:13:568 (5) - *nazi* move 2nd waypoint to 1grid left
00:15:224 (1) - ^
00:23:323 - start next stream here?
00:47:617 - same as Easy


really nice. star
good luck~

BeatofIke wrote:

FINALLY I PASSED! God damn. -_-

wow ~ well done

EmPao wrote:

來射個星 :3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ DarknessAngel ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Pls Re-size BG for 1024*768,I think you are missing 1 pixels.

[Insane]

1. 01:00:138 (3) - Add new combo.

That's all ~ Nice song and pretty nice mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

192,96,34187,2,0,B|128:48|40:52,1,160,4|0
272,160,35292,1,2
192,96,35476,1,8

wmfchris wrote:

~

[DNA]
00:34:187 (5,5,6) - placement suggestion (so that the notes are placed in "equal spacing" apparently)

192,96,34187,2,0,B|128:48|40:52,1,160,4|0
272,160,35292,1,2
192,96,35476,1,8

//...I changed the code,but it didn't change anything..
//奇怪的是放上去卻沒有改動..
01:25:169 (8) - looks ugly when stacked with (1) and don't really fit the music. Try to put it around (236,56).
//It looks good for me,and it fits the song
//有挺多人都用這種排列啊lol，話說這裡原本就有明顯的5個1/8鼓聲
[Hard]
00:00:322 (1) - remove whistle at beginning as you've done in the rest of the diff
//oh ! fixed
01:00:138 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/332749 //fixed

[normal]
00:49:832 (5) - removing the whistle to produce a contrast with the clap at the end //fixed

[Easy]
01:36:028 (1) - spinner might be too short //I think beginner can get 300 score at least
//而且這難度中的轉盤差不多就這長度(1/4拍的差距)，我覺得OK

[Taiko]
since the diff is streamy is covers the music quite a lot. consider N65%
00:32:439 - duplet sounds odd as you didn't put them in other parts of the song. Triplets may even work better here
00:39:341 - d kkddk according to music
00:44:494 - vocal starts at the white tick so ddkkkkd is preferred
01:16:703 - k kkd
01:37:500 (1) - stop at the position where solo diffs stop.

This diff may need some improvements, in particular reducing some repeated ddk ddk ddk ddk which makes the diff a bit boring. More 1/2 patterns can be used instead.

Call me when it's fixed. If possible, find a bit more taiko mod before finding me again.

wmfchris wrote:

taiko diff looks much better and the rest would be ok as well.

rebubbled