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Done.Seibei4211 wrote:
Normal
01:12:00 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Looks like this stuff got shifted 1/4 beat in the wrong direction. Move it over 1/2 beat to the right.
Everything else looks pretty good. I just hope the next mod doesn't get too anal about the stuff I left alone.
Fixed all.Seibei4211 wrote:
Normal
00:09:75 (1,1) - Move this one so it's the same distance as that combo, just so it's a smoother transition from the different spacings.
01:02:50 (3,1) - I still think that's a big jump, and since it's the only jump like that in the map, it might as well be shortened. Not to mention it's Normal.
Hard
02:24:50 (1) - This is the only slider shorter than the other similar sliders using that beat pattern, so make it match by adding 1/4 beat to it.
02:34:25 (3) - New combo because the slider speed shouldn't change in mid-combo. That's just confusing. At least with a new combo, anything can happen.
02:41:88 (2) - New combo.
I'm surprised the max score on Hard isn't over 10 million. So I guess that's not an issue at all. By the way, there's a big lack of hit sounds in this map. I strongly suggest putting more in. Starred.
Yeah. I was a bit over-zealous with the sounds. The only comment I have isSeibei4211 wrote:
Hit Sound Mod
Normal
00:05:25 (1,2,3,4,1) - A little too much whistle.
00:22:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - No, no, no.
00:46:00 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Did you really think that sounded good when you put those whistles there like that?
01:04:50 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Aaall whistles? Make this not so. Make sure none of the sliders are.
02:22:00 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Remove whistles from these sliders, man. Piercing my ears.
02:39:50 (1) - This one, too.
03:59:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blah.
04:09:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For these and any other quadruplets like them, make the clap noises every other note i.e. 1,3.
Hard
00:22:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Nooo.
00:46:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh dear, my ears.
01:05:00 (1,2,1) - Whistles on these long sliders and any other long slider is just painful.
01:45:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why?
01:47:63 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:52:00 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think these are appropriate.
02:53:25 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:07:00 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Claps really overpower this song in general. Especially these.
Normal Mod
Hard
01:12:50 (1) - This is suddenly ending on an 8th.
02:09:00 (1,1) - I don't approve. This was changed.
04:14:50 (1) - I don't really like how this sounds.
Added the suggested sound additions.Seibei4211 wrote:
00:36:00 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1, etc...) - Just a hit sound suggestion, but I think this section and others like it sound good with hit sounds placed on the synth hits with the pattern like "Synth, 1 1/2 beat, synth, 1 1/2 beat, synth, 1 beat, synth" That's just what I'd do. It's not an unrankable offense.
Looks close to a bubble. I'm getting so sick of modding this bigass song, man. Get it ranked already!
Oops. My bad. I've added them in now.Seibei4211 wrote:
AUGH! You forgot to put hit sounds on 00:36:00 (1) - this section in Normal. WHYYYY?! Change it and I'll bubble...but I wanted to bubble it nooooow! *crycry*
Gladi wrote:
Uhm.. places like this in the map is really annoying.
01:10:922 - 01:11:256. it's ok.. but then after it, with the same spacing, you have to click slower.
This doesn't feel really right to be ranked
01:19:505 - 01:19:765, 1,2,3 It goes slow, ok that's good but then, with the same spacing...
01:21:005 - 01:21:255, 5,6,7 It goes faster.
This is just pure random, and I don't get why this is ranked
02:26:256 - 02:26:756 wrong spacing, though that is ok.
02:39:006 - 02:39:380 again wrong spacing, now it's again slower..
02:52:006 - 02:52:756 wrong spacing...
02:53:256 -02:54:006 ...
why rank this if the maker can also just press ALT when puttin' down a note?
Or if you do wrong spacing, make it not pure random fast clicking slow clicking.
This feels like a map, mapped before 2007..
03:02:006 - 03:03:006 ...
Ok I stop... T_T
But I really don't get why this is getting ranked IMHO..
Okay, so here's what I did to hard.peppy wrote:
Unranked because I don't like hard.
here's a few points to start - i can't be bothered fully modding this because there's too much i dont agree with
* turn stacking back on
* spinner at end is too long
* 03:03:00 (9) - offscreen slider
* 03:14:00 (1,2) - ...
too much abuse of bpm changes
impossible to read the song unless you know it
and its not really a song you can learn
Updated.strager wrote:
General
AMAZING ch00n! <3<3<3
Nice BG too. Fitting. =D
You know what would be cool? If at the end the city decomposed and stuff with the music. Storyboard away!
I'm scared this will only get approved due its length. Max score is 9.3m which is less than the 10m recommendation, though, so it could happen.
Hard
00:09:25 (1) - Correct spacing with other sliders.
00:42:50 (1,1) - Align ends or don't have them touch.
00:45:00 (1) - One less repeat to match 00:43:50 (1) and add a hit circle.
00:53:00 (1,1) - Align ends.
00:57:75 (2) - IMO move up, kinda like 01:02:25 (2).
01:04:50 (4) - Me no like.
01:12:00 (1) - Me no like.
01:18:38 (2,3,4,5) - Why Whistles?
01:20:99 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - BEAUTIFUL. I came.
01:32:25 (1,2,3) - Hard to read.
01:37:50 (3) - Me no like.
01:42:38 (2,4,6) - Unstack.
02:04:50 (3) - New combo.
02:07:00 (3) - New combo.
02:11:50 (1) - Me no like.
02:12:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Match the bass? C'mon, no one will get this.
02:24:50 (1,2,1,3) - Stack properly.
02:39:00 (1) - Me no like.
02:45:25 (2) - Eh?
02:54:50 (6) - New combo.
02:55:75 (7) - New combo.
03:14:50 (2) - Me no like.
03:28:25 (1,1) - Align ends.
04:06:25 (1) - Remove new combo.
04:14:50 (1,2) - Hitsounds like 04:10:75 (1,2,3,4) please.
04:29:00 (4,5) - etc. Hard to read with slower sliders.
Gah, I've forgotten. Thanks. I'll work on the easy mode.Gens wrote:
Hey you, give kudosu for those who helped you in this map!
Hello, I'm just passin' by, not going to give a formal mod on this, but yeah, the length of this beatmap will be a problem. 4 mins is just too much! You can probably make an Easy with half the length and there, it's rankable. It would be rankable IMO but I'm not a BAT.