Hello

General
* The filesize should be max. 12MB if you using a SB. Please reduce the filesize because yours are 19MB
* For all diff except Collab, please map part at 03:11:167, because the breaks are way too long


Easy
02:26:072 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts, and it's hard to read for beginners
02:38:659 (x) - Add note here, the pauses can makes confusing for beginners, though
02:51:666 (4) - The head slider is touch the HP Bar


Normal
01:06:771 (3,4) - This long pauses are completely confusing for me. Add some notes between these two notes
02:20:827 (5) - What's the point having a finish hitsound on tail slider?


Hard
00:29:638 (3,4,5,6) - It's kinda boring to see those stacks in tail slider. Try making a interesting pattern
01:08:449 (1) - It doesn't make sense if there is a single combo in single notes
02:24:184 (5) - I'm was expecting that this should be snap at white tick, but it's not. Maybe try to add note at 02:23:974 to preventing of confusing?


Insane
01:07:296 (1) - Remove new combo please


Byeeeeee

Hi. Here a requested Taiko mod by Leorda.

[Taiko Collab]
Generel:
the volumen is set to ,,soft". Please change it to ,,Normal".

Hitcircles:
01:04:883 (208) - D?
02:39:079 - kiai time x1.10? Variating it with the next coming kiai as x1.20 would be nice.
02:25:442 (1,2,3) - make it to d D / d K ?
02:35:512 (46) - D?
03:29:428 - kiai time x1.20? I think it would make a nice change in the beatmap.
03:49:568 (2) - D?

That's all couldn't find so much. The map is really well maden and has a really nice diff spread for a collab.
Good work!

Good luck~

>3<
Easy
00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - ........疊屁咧 不要疊
00:51:666 (1,2,3) - 這樣? http://puu.sh/mChX
00:58:379 (1) - 不要finish
01:55:442 (1) - ^ 要加就加whistle,後面也加些whistle
02:13:484 (3) - 頭應該沒clap
02:16:421 (2) - ^尾
02:20:198 (2) - ^
03:07:610 (1) - 這whistle不如不加
Normal
00:26:282 (3) - 還不如在白線開始
00:50:407 (4) - finish
00:52:296 (2) - o.o頭尾切clap? 3可刪
01:10:128 (1) - nc..?
01:25:233 (1) - 串里找個地方nc..?太長了combo
Hard
00:51:771 - 略多餘
00:52:925 (4) - 尾finish
01:08:869 (2) - 刪nc
01:10:128 (6) - nc
01:26:701 (1) - nc
01:38:240 (1) - 可nc o.o
Collab
00:24:813 (1,2) - ...JPY slider
01:07:296 (1) - why nc
01:21:247 (6) - head finish
01:23:974 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing不一樣
03:59:638 (1) - why nc o.o
04:14:743 (6) - 要nc的話加在4吧

1.谷子你加whistle可以加多些
2.字體字效太柔和,這曲應該活潑些

karenying wrote:

>3< >A<
Easy
00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - ........疊屁咧 不要疊嘛别的都这样我就觉得统一下
00:51:666 (1,2,3) - 這樣? http://puu.sh/mChX 呜 好
00:58:379 (1) - 不要finish改whistle了
01:55:442 (1) - ^ 要加就加whistle,後面也加些whistle^
02:13:484 (3) - 頭應該沒clap/.\故意的
02:16:421 (2) - ^尾^
02:20:198 (2) - ^^
03:07:610 (1) - 這whistle不如不加好
Normal
00:26:282 (3) - 還不如在白線開始呜这个跟vocal
00:50:407 (4) - finish好
00:52:296 (2) - o.o頭尾切clap? 3可刪我觉得这里没问题
01:10:128 (1) - nc..?都是按俩downbeat一个来的NC
01:25:233 (1) - 串里找個地方nc..?太長了combo这个本来就有NC的。。
Hard
00:51:771 - 略多餘应该没事
00:52:925 (4) - 尾finish好
01:08:869 (2) - 刪nc恩误操作了
01:10:128 (6) - nc
01:26:701 (1) - nc
01:38:240 (1) - 可nc o.o都按俩downbeat一个NC来的，hard里面稍微长点也没事
Collab
00:24:813 (1,2) - ...JPY slider22222
01:07:296 (1) - why ncmistake/.\
01:21:247 (6) - head finishOK
01:23:974 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing不一樣差不多好像
03:59:638 (1) - why nc o.oremoved
04:14:743 (6) - 要nc的話加在4吧呜 也行

1.谷子你加whistle可以加多些恩下次争取/.\
2.字體字效太柔和,這曲應該活潑些找不到什么好字体啊主要是

baka

Yeah !

Download: marble - Suisai Candy (No_Gu) [Taiko Collab].osu

谷子妹妹\o/

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. 你要的东西~ http://puu.sh/nTGF 要帮忙改什么的话随时找我/.\
2. 问了KPY等都说SB原件不一定要PNG, t/75882 这里也没有提到类似的规则.看看你要不要没有透明元素的图像换回JPG来节省大量的空间.尤其是BG那是肯定能换成JPG的.4张BG就要5.12MB嗷呜毫可趴/.\
3. 删掉SB文件夹和Lyric子文件夹里的Thumbs.db文件.

[Easy]

1. 翔都没有~(pia

[Normal]

1. 00:01:317 (0) - 唔，开头2个break快remove掉，note还没打完play-warningarrow.png就出来了感觉很奇葩很多余诶o_o
2. 00:31:526 (1) - 从红线开始和vocal更搭诶..(这歌听多了我在这里习惯性摁快lol") 而且这个难度1/2链接没少用为什么这里不用呢o o
3. 00:56:701 (5) - 同上~建议开始点前挪1/2 > <
4. 01:31:946 (1) - ^

[Hard]

1. HD-2 OD-2: 4.74 star rating 不降总分..
2. 00:01:317 (0) - 如果降了HD的话开头2个break移除掉..
3. 01:10:757 (9) - 只在第一个折返+clap?
4. 01:17:890 (7,8) - 这spacing有点突然.
5. 02:32:365 (1,2) - 太高了~而且我感觉2这个节奏有点牵强>_>

[Collab]

1. 连个屁股都没有~www (slap

唔,神图的结果就是渣mod...OAQ

JoJo wrote:

谷子妹妹\o//o\啾啾哥哥

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. 你要的东西~ http://puu.sh/nTGF 要帮忙改什么的话随时找我/.\
2. 问了KPY等都说SB原件不一定要PNG, t/75882 这里也没有提到类似的规则.看看你要不要没有透明元素的图像换回JPG来节省大量的空间.尤其是BG那是肯定能换成JPG的.4张BG就要5.12MB嗷呜毫可趴/.\恩下次改东西再弄。。
3. 删掉SB文件夹和Lyric子文件夹里的Thumbs.db文件.这个我总是第一次进文件夹能见到然后闪了一下就没了

[Easy]

1. 翔都没有~(pia

[Normal]

1. 00:01:317 (0) - 唔，开头2个break快remove掉，note还没打完play-warningarrow.png就出来了感觉很奇葩很多余诶o_o好
2. 00:31:526 (1) - 从红线开始和vocal更搭诶..(这歌听多了我在这里习惯性摁快lol") 而且这个难度1/2链接没少用为什么这里不用呢o o 恩
3. 00:56:701 (5) - 同上~建议开始点前挪1/2 > <同
4. 01:31:946 (1) - ^^

[Hard]

1. HD-2 OD-2: 4.74 star rating 不降总分..保留
2. 00:01:317 (0) - 如果降了HD的话开头2个break移除掉..^
3. 01:10:757 (9) - 只在第一个折返+clap?好像也行
4. 01:17:890 (7,8) - 这spacing有点突然.我感觉节奏满跳的，先保留
5. 02:32:365 (1,2) - 太高了~而且我感觉2这个节奏有点牵强>_>应该没问题。跟vocal的..

[Collab]

1. 连个屁股都没有~www (slap/me slaps JoJo

唔,神图的结果就是渣mod...OAQ快自重

谢了owo/

why not. i might as well take a look at this. if you ignore any of my suggestions, please tell me a reason why you ignored them. i want to hear your opinion on them if you ignore any of them.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should take a look, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.

[General]
I suggest using this code for the 3rd and 4th combo colors as it matches Airi and Miu's Hair. also raise the brightness a bit to match angie's hair because from what I see, the combo colors represents the colors of the girl's hair.

Combo3 : 49,207,253
Combo4 : 242,228,153

The blue combo color is fine as it matches Sakuno's Hair.
the SB looks nice but add the lyrics for the chorus. I find it odd that there are no lyrics at all at the chorus when there are lyrics at the verses.
When the BG of Pannya shows up , i don't like how it suddenly pops up, so how about adding that white SB to show the fade in and fade out of Pannya.

[Easy]
00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - i think this would be hard for beginners because the hitbursts are covering this note which makes it hard for beginners when to hit these notes, so to make it easier, i suggest spacing it out but use a DS of 0.8 or lower to make it easier, or use half of the default DS which is 0.5
00:01:317 (1) - maybe add a finish but try to decrease the volume to match the instrumental.
00:04:673 (1) - ^
00:08:030 - add a circle here because i see a pattern here, and also same suggestion about the finish.
00:34:883 (1,2,1,2) - i'd rather keep the claps and whistles consistent because the claps or "dings" sound bad IMO, and it gets in the way during gameplay. if you do this, remove the claps and whistles and add the claps and whistles at the 2nd and 4th downbeat. this sounds a lot better, and IMO it flows during gameplay.
01:12:226 (2) - ooh i don't like the look of this slider. I suggest making this slider symmetrical to a v-shaped slider. IMO it looks easier for beginners and straightforward/
01:58:799 (1) - maybe replace this for a finish? i think the whistle is too quiet for this part and i think it matches the instrumental.
02:05:512 (1,2,1,2) - same as 00:34:883.
02:23:764 (1,1) - first off, beginners won't have enough time to recover after the spinner is complete, and the hit burst is covering this note which makes it hard for beginners to find. try to do something easier than this because this looks hard for beginners.
02:39:079 (1) - unstack this because beginners might hit this too early.
03:09:393 (1) - space out this spinner because this spinner might surprise beginners.
03:59:743 (1) - same as 03:09:393.
04:09:708 (1,2,1,2) - same as 00:34:883.


[Normal]
00:01:317 (1) - same as easy.
00:01:631 - is this break necessary? remove it since you don't have it on the easy diff.
00:04:673 (1) - same as 00:01:317.
00:04:988 - ^
00:08:030 - same as easy.
00:29:638 (4,5) - try this as it follows vocals accurately.
00:34:883 (1,2,1,2) - same as easy.
00:57:121 (6,7) - remove these notes and try this to follow vocals accurately. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.
01:04:463 (5) - make this a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause accurately.
01:07:191 - maybe add a 1/1 slider to follow the instrumental?
01:24:603 (4) - add a repeat on this slider to follow vocals accurately.
01:28:379 - same as above but add a circle.
01:33:205 (4) - replace this for a circle followed by a 1/1 slider to follow vocals accurately.
02:05:512 (1,2,1,2) - same as 00:34:883.
02:37:820 - same as 01:07:191.
02:50:617 (3,4) - same as 01:33:205 but make the second note a 1/2 slider.
02:59:009 - add a circle to follow vocals. these 3 circles follow "Kokoro"
03:08:869 (6) - remove this and add a 1/1 slider starting at 03:08:449.
03:51:876 - add a circle to follow vocals?
04:09:708 (1,2,1,2) - same as 00:34:883.

[Hard]
00:01:317 (1) - same as easy about the finish.
00:01:631 - same as normal
00:04:988 - ^
00:08:030 - same as 00:01:317.
00:34:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as easy about the claps and whistles.
01:04:044 (8,9) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow vocals accurately. if you ignore this, then add 2 circles to make it a bit challenging for beginners. either way, both will work.
01:14:953 - add a circle to follow vocals?
02:05:512 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:34:883.
02:17:261 (4,5) - move this 2 ticks back to follow vocals accurately, and add a circle at 02:18:310 to follow the guitar.
02:27:960 (5,6,1,2,3) - this doesn't flow to the vocals accurately. instead do this as it follows vocals accurately.
03:18:729 (5) - make this a 1/4 repeat slider and add a circle at 03:19:149 to follow the guitar. if you ignore this, then keep the 1/1 slider and add a circle at 03:19:149.
03:22:086 (7) - ^
03:38:659 (6) - delete this and add a 1/2 slider starting at 03:38:449. to follow vocals accurately.

[Collab]
00:01:317 (1) - same as easy about the finish.
00:01:631 - same as normal.
00:04:673 (1) - same as 00:01:317.
00:08:030 - same as easy.
00:21:456 (1,2) - if you see during gameplay, these 2 sliders barely look like curved sliders, so i suggest curving it properly to make it clear for players that these are curved sliders.
00:34:883 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - same as easy.
00:51:456 (5) - how about aligning this to (3) so that this note looks like a triangle.
01:02:365 (3) - add another repeat to follow the drums.
01:31:317 (5) - how about Ctrl+R to challenge players on this slider jump?
02:05:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - wait what happened to the dings? add those back because they sound nice. the default claps doesn't fit with this song at all, and same as 00:34:883.
02:34:254 (1) - same as 00:21:456.
02:42:435 (1) - add a finish or a whistle to match that sound?
03:27:540 (4) - same as 00:21:456.
03:43:275 (2) - make this look like (1) for a nicer flow.

I guess that's it. GL

modding~

[General]
Fine!

[Collab]
00:21:456 (1) - Remove NC
01:58:589 (6) - NC
01:58:799 (1) - Remove NC
04:02:995 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:21:456 (1) - Remove NC
01:14:953 (9) - Add circle

[Normal]
00:21:456 (1) - Remove NC

[Easy]
00:21:456 (1) - Remove NC

nice map
Good lucl

uoload..too lazy

哎我都不知道哪個是在.osu裏哪個是在.osb裏的了 干脆把全部弄去.osu如何?
哎這個我不想整理了你自己整理下
As you request: http://puu.sh/ums9
1.請先把原來的SB file刪了再丟進去
2.[Collab]你別直接用..用裏面的SB就好 map好像被我動過..恩 原Collab http://puu.sh/umxg
3.我忘了刪BG ef.jpg 沒用的了刪
3.沒紗凪我略不爽於是最後全改了之餘還丟了張紗凪
4.所謂的動畫SB
5.各種修改 能轉jpg的png都轉了 目測現在10mb
6.好困 記得整理.osu和.osb 亂死了..干脆就別用taiko sb嘛

EDIT
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http://puu.sh/urJ7
.osb裏面的東西直接搬進.osu
下面的是每個diff都不同的 請放在Foreground的最低

Hi ~ No_Gu ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions







That's all ~ pretty nice mapset and SB ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[General]

[*]Taiko BG looks wrong cut,so you can try use this(edit by me).恩不过不太喜欢灰色感觉没活力，我还是加上名字卡好了
[/list]

[Collab]

2. 03:02:575 - Add finish.这个听着不太好
   

别的都改了，辛苦了rika姐T.T

Gu , feel free to chage to that bg as Rika said :3

Netsukawa wrote:

Gu , feel free to chage to that bg as Rika said :3

added name plate.So no need to change now >w<

thanks rika www

Bubbled combo for 2 song in 1 hour Gu and Laurier w

.哼

karenying wrote:

.哼

呜..

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  Taiko BG is...
  
  SPOILER

  
  The white space is too wide so there is an extra space between the playing space and the title space. You have to edit it.

1. 00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Just putting all notes at the center is a bit boring. I want you to make a variation of placing notes here.

[Easy]

• 
  OD+1.

1. 02:23:764 (1) - Too short time after a spinner for newbie. It should be ended at 02:25:233.

[Normal]

• 
  OD+1 to make the diff spread be reasonable.
  Next time you make a normal diff, please avoid using 0.7xDS. Because the spacing is too narrow if comparing with the slider speed, so to read the timing of notes become a bit hard.

[Hard]

• 
  HP,AR,OD -1. These setting fit a hard diff more, and I don't think the gameplay will be worse even if you changed.

1. 02:25:442 (x) - A note is needed here to follow the music(vocal). If you won't fix this, you should avoid stacking (8,1) because the player must be confused due to the reason I wrote.
2. 03:08:869 (3) - You should add new combo to this note because of the spacing change after using anti-jump.

[Collab]

• 
  More whistles are needed at Nymph's part in 2nd&3rd KIAI ><

[Taiko]

1. 01:06:771 (213) - You cannot use finish on the slider(it's same as the stream in taiko mode).
2. 02:37:400 (51) - ^

Call me back after fix. I'll rank :3

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue.

[General]

• 
  Taiko BG is...
  
  SPOILER

  
  The white space is too wide so there is an extra space between the playing space and the title space. You have to edit it.
  this is the satuation which I see... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/332869

1. 00:01:317 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Just putting all notes at the center is a bit boring. I want you to make a variation of placing notes here.want to put something around SB..not boring imo.

others are fixed.thanks.update

Cute SB is cute<3
Ranked!

thank you very much suzully!

Congratz~ ^^

搶人recheck好可惡!!!

Oops, I forgot to set the genre. Now it's set correctly.

屁股说好的节操呢~ =o=
ome! =A=/

Yay the full version's ranked . congratz

瞎了神mapper 各各都rank ~

恭喜。。。瞎了

恭喜 Gu

Congratz~>3<//

www thanks everyone

.

Congratz \:D/

YEAHHHH \:D/

Nice SB !

Oh yeah ! ><

thanks...go to bed now..too tired

我似乎慢了一步 loool
congrats ~

好歌好图！恭喜！

Congrats ~ >w<

Congrats ~ \:3/

congratz \o/

用樱乃做collabBG深得我心 液

congrats!

Great song, storyboard, and map. Hope to see lots more from you Congrats!

Awesome Storyboard!

NiceSB，congratz.

Congrats for achieving most played~ :3

感动得我眼泪哗哗的

yukinohara wrote:

SPOILER

SB夹子里db文件忘记删除了:3
最后那几个animationload load好浪费...
用0.625缩放立绘效果会更好，现在的貌似有白边，不是提取gameCG的么0 0.character介绍人物立绘也缓慢移动感觉好点
好几处SBBG入场好违和，再缓一点就好了
“..orz”那一组图片没抠干净，最后SB淡出的时候看到图片矩形边框了:3

NiceSB，congratz.

！！！
謝謝神SBer！學到東西了！（。。。

刚复活就看到各种rank瞎眼

怒瞎