Both the song and map were cool.. 't'
*stars

title:Ishidatami no Akaki Akuma

good luck~


btw why not fullver?

Fluorine wrote:

Both the song and map were cool.. 't'
*stars

Thanks ^^

[Aramary] wrote:

title:Ishidatami no Akaki Akuma I'm not sure. I've seen both Akeki and Akaki being used, and Akeki seems to be the more common one ><

good luck~


btw why not fullver? When I mapped the fullver for [Shaytan], the score went way over 10 mil ):

Storyboard Mod!!

Thoughts and Suggestions
- This is pretty cool to be your first storyboard, good job!! >w</
- A little tip to help you making sb's easier: If you want any image to cover the full screen without having to scale/move it, resize the image to 640x480px, you'll only have to select the sprite and it will be already covering the whole playfield. This is so useful for white flashes or black bacgrounds and you won't have any unnecessary SB load.

Issues and Adjustments
- The max size of storyboard elements is 800x600px, please resize the following images:

1. black.jpg (it would be even better if you resize it to 640x480 to reduce the SB load)

~ 00:00:000 - You don't need to have "pic1" on the screen while you have the black image totally opaque, this only adds unnecessary SB load.
~ 00:28:707 - pic1 dissapears so suddenly, please fade it out! Remember that in CTB mode spinners doesn't cover the screen!!
~ 00:29:616 - lyric1 dissapears so suddenly, please fade it out!!
~ 00:37:002 - ishidatami and no appear at different times, is this on purpose? I think it looks weird, but if it's on purpose then it's okay
~ 02:28:820 - The black background appears so suddenly, fade it like you did to make it dissapear?
~ 02:43:707 - I suggest to scale this lyrics line to make it a bit smaller. You don't have to do it though xP
~ 03:02:343 - pic2 dissapears so suddenly, please fade it out!!
~ 03:11:548 - black is still on the screen, but the picture is covering it, so it's adding unnecessary load (it also appears for a moment when the picture is dissapearing). Remove it here please.

Not bad, not bad!! Just remember for your next storyboards to think about removing elements from the screen when they're completely covered with anything else, and to fade images even if they're covered by spinners!

Call me if you need a recheck, good luck!!

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Storyboard Mod!!

Thoughts and Suggestions
- This is pretty cool to be your first storyboard, good job!! >w</
- A little tip to help you making sb's easier: If you want any image to cover the full screen without having to scale/move it, resize the image to 640x480px, you'll only have to select the sprite and it will be already covering the whole playfield. This is so useful for white flashes or black bacgrounds and you won't have any unnecessary SB load.

Issues and Adjustments
- The max size of storyboard elements is 800x600px, please resize the following images:

1. black.jpg (it would be even better if you resize it to 640x480 to reduce the SB load)

~ 00:00:000 - You don't need to have "pic1" on the screen while you have the black image totally opaque, this only adds unnecessary SB load.
~ 00:28:707 - pic1 dissapears so suddenly, please fade it out! Remember that in CTB mode spinners doesn't cover the screen!!
~ 00:29:616 - lyric1 dissapears so suddenly, please fade it out!!
~ 00:37:002 - ishidatami and no appear at different times, is this on purpose? I think it looks weird, but if it's on purpose then it's okay It's on purpose (:
~ 02:28:820 - The black background appears so suddenly, fade it like you did to make it dissapear?
~ 02:43:707 - I suggest to scale this lyrics line to make it a bit smaller. You don't have to do it though xP
~ 03:02:343 - pic2 dissapears so suddenly, please fade it out!!
~ 03:11:548 - black is still on the screen, but the picture is covering it, so it's adding unnecessary load (it also appears for a moment when the picture is dissapearing). Remove it here please.

Not bad, not bad!! Just remember for your next storyboards to think about removing elements from the screen when they're completely covered with anything else, and to fade images even if they're covered by spinners!

Call me if you need a recheck, good luck!!

Thanks ^^ I fixed everything (:

[Shaytan]
0:36:548 (4,5,6,1) down 1 grid
0:42:684 delete break
1:04:275 (6) up 1 grid
1:05:070 (8) up 1 grid
1:13:139 (5) right 1 grid
1:18:593 (8) up 1 grid
1:41:775 (4,5,6) uneven spacing
1:45:866 (5,6,7) ^
1:51:434 (2,3) up 1 grid
1:52:457 (5,6,7) uneven spacing
2:34:729 (7,8,9)^
2:52:684 (8) it has correct spacing, but down 1 grid looks better
3:25:866 (12,13) (12) down+left 1 grid, (13) down 1 grid
Just some nazi spacing adjustment, not bad~

[Layla]
0:54:048 (5) up 1 grid looks better
1:05:866 (2) left 2 grids
1:49:502 (5) up 1 grid
2:07:002 (4) spacing

3.67 stars, a normal, maybe need an easier diff.

star~

wmfchris wrote:

[Shaytan]
0:36:548 (4,5,6,1) down 1 grid
0:42:684 delete break
1:04:275 (6) up 1 grid
1:05:070 (8) up 1 grid
1:13:139 (5) right 1 grid
1:18:593 (8) up 1 grid
1:41:775 (4,5,6) uneven spacing
1:45:866 (5,6,7) ^
1:51:434 (2,3) up 1 grid
1:52:457 (5,6,7) uneven spacing
2:34:729 (7,8,9)^
2:52:684 (8) it has correct spacing, but down 1 grid looks better
3:25:866 (12,13) (12) down+left 1 grid, (13) down 1 grid
Just some nazi spacing adjustment, not bad~

[Layla]
0:54:048 (5) up 1 grid looks better
1:05:866 (2) left 2 grids
1:49:502 (5) up 1 grid
2:07:002 (4) spacing

3.67 stars, a normal, maybe need an easier diff.

star~

All fixed, thanks ^^ I guess I'll map an easier difficulty ><

First of all: Sorry for the late mods! Don't you hate it when real life gets in the way of osu!? Anyway,

Beginner
00:55:184 (1, 2) You should curve these so they don't overlap.
00:57:002 (1) This slider is not my favorite, but that's just an opinion.
Layla
02:16:775 (1) Aah this note is hiding. It's okay, but consider a change.

Final Thoughts
Wow, very well done. Notes work well together and skin/storyboarding shows a lot of effort. Flow is natural, unlike this sentence. This is most definitely a Star from me.

SapphireGhost wrote:

First of all: Sorry for the late mods! Don't you hate it when real life gets in the way of osu!? Anyway,

Beginner
00:55:184 (1, 2) You should curve these so they don't overlap. Fixed!
00:57:002 (1) This slider is not my favorite, but that's just an opinion. I think it's okay ^^"
Layla
02:16:775 (1) Aah this note is hiding. It's okay, but consider a change. Fixed!

Final Thoughts
Wow, very well done. Notes work well together and skin/storyboarding shows a lot of effort. Flow is natural, unlike this sentence. This is most definitely a Star from me.

Thanks (:

I think this is one of the best songs of Sound Horizon&Revo...lol, really hope someone can map a 6 min full ver...

[General]

• Timing:132.010 (You can tell the timing is off if you listen the kiai carefully.)
  Offset:645
  
  Lyric1.png is too small imo.
  
  layla.png dispears too fast, I suggest to end at 02:29:502
  
  Make a little SB for the last part?
  
  Title: Because it's only half of the song, use "Ishidatami no Akeki Akuma (Short Ver.)" ?
  
  Move Seisen no Iberia to tags? (viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  Tags: also add "The Crimson Demon under the Stone Pavement" ?

[Beginner]

Nice

• 00:20:643 (2) - Remove whistle end? and whistle at 00:22:007 (1)?
  00:24:279 (4,1) - ^
  00:57:004 (3) - I suggest to remove new combo, 1 grid up and 1 grid right? Move the shift point further to make a symmetry?
  00:59:276 (1) - Clap?
  02:36:542 (X) - add a note with clap?
  02:38:814 (2) - Finish at begining?
  02:51:995 (2,3) - Switch hitsounds
  02:53:813 (5,6) - ^

[Layla]

• 00:57:911 (1,2,3) - add Clap / remove whistle / add clap?
  02:31:866 (3) - Shorten 1/4 and move 1/4 beat forward?
  02:51:548 (3) - clap at 1st and 3rd reverse instead of 2

[Shaytan]

• 00:21:093 (5) - whistle begin, and remove end whislte?
  00:42:457 (1) - Make a small jump like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:13:701 (X) - Add a note?
  01:13:928 (X) - ^
  01:15:519 (X) - ^
  01:15:746 (X) - ^
  02:20:401 (1) - 1 grid up?
  02:27:002 (1) - Extend it for 1/4 beat?
  02:50:070 (10,11) - To follow the rhythm, remove 10, extend 11 for 1/4 beat and move 1/4 beat backward.

Well made SB and skin! Have my star~

Selee wrote:

I think this is one of the best songs of Sound Horizon&Revo...lol, really hope someone can map a 6 min full ver...

[General]

• Timing:132.010 (You can tell the timing is off if you listen the kiai carefully.)
  Offset:645
  
  Lyric1.png is too small imo.
  
  layla.png dispears too fast, I suggest to end at 02:29:502
  
  Make a little SB for the last part?
  
  Title: Because it's only half of the song, use "Ishidatami no Akeki Akuma (Short Ver.)" ?
  
  Move Seisen no Iberia to tags? (viewtopic.php?f=6&t=24765)
  
  Tags: also add "The Crimson Demon under the Stone Pavement" ?

[Beginner]

Nice

• 00:20:643 (2) - Remove whistle end? and whistle at 00:22:007 (1)?
  00:24:279 (4,1) - ^
  00:57:004 (3) - I suggest to remove new combo, 1 grid up and 1 grid right? Move the shift point further to make a symmetry?
  00:59:276 (1) - Clap?
  02:36:542 (X) - add a note with clap?
  02:38:814 (2) - Finish at begining?
  02:51:995 (2,3) - Switch hitsounds
  02:53:813 (5,6) - ^

[Layla]

• 00:57:911 (1,2,3) - add Clap / remove whistle / add clap?
  02:31:866 (3) - Shorten 1/4 and move 1/4 beat forward?
  02:51:548 (3) - clap at 1st and 3rd reverse instead of 2

[Shaytan]

• 00:21:093 (5) - whistle begin, and remove end whislte?
  00:42:457 (1) - Make a small jump like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:13:701 (X) - Add a note?
  01:13:928 (X) - ^
  01:15:519 (X) - ^
  01:15:746 (X) - ^
  02:20:401 (1) - 1 grid up?
  02:27:002 (1) - Extend it for 1/4 beat?
  02:50:070 (10,11) - To follow the rhythm, remove 10, extend 11 for 1/4 beat and move 1/4 beat backward.

Well made SB and skin! Have my star~

Thanks for the mod and timing help (:
Fixed mostly everything (I didn't follow some of the hitsound mods). I also changed the tag/source thing, but I left the title the same for now ><

Done !

Source: Seisen no Iberia
Tag: The Crimson Demon under the Stone Pavement, Revo, Yuuki, Rikki, Remi, Kaori

The info above i found is probably more precise

Download: Sound Horizon - Ishidatami no Akeki Akuma (Ichigo-Sora) [gdeath].osu

Download: soft-hitclap2.rar

Nice and simple storyboard, I like it

Sorry but I can't find any thing wrong, so just take this star.

gdeath wrote:

Done !

Source: Seisen no Iberia
Tag: The Crimson Demon under the Stone Pavement, Revo, Yuuki, Rikki, Remi, Kaori

The info above i found is probably more precise

Thanks for the diff and for fixing the source/tags ^^

And thanks Kuroneko for the star ^^

Shaytan
02:17:907 (5) - finish?

Good mapset! I cannot find other problems
star

aesopl19193 wrote:

Shaytan
02:17:907 (5) - finish? fixed!

Good mapset! I cannot find other problems
star

Thanks for modding ^^

Hi Sora~

[General]
- you're missing the spinner approach circle, please add one even if it's from the default skin
- section fail really destroy the mood of the song
- missing tags on gdeath's diff
- gdeath's diff has different offset
- check the "display story board in front of the combo fire" in case there are some players who enabled the combo fire
- and maybe unable the letter box during break option
- see this if you want to make a perfect symmetry slider ;)

[SB]
- it'll be cool if you can SB the english translation too (if there any)
- layla.png fade out too fast imo, I suggest you to start the fade out at 149502 and end it in 149616
- extend the fade in of pic3?
- end the story board as the same time as the map end, you really should do this for Beginner and Layla diff. just copy the code from the osb file into the osu file of each diff to make it diff spec (make sure not to paste all of the code for 2 of the lower diffs)

[Beginner]
This is enough as the easiest diff
00:26:097 (2) - add finish at the end
01:26:547 (1) - ^
01:55:636 (4) - disable grid snap then position this so it right under the 3's curve
02:16:998 (1) - make this into an elbow slider (see general)
02:40:632 (3) - NC

[Saythan]
01:27:229 (1) - move the finish to this spinner's end?
01:44:273 (1) - this slider should end 1/4 beat later
02:13:362 (1) - finish?
02:35:406 (1) - you can remove NC from this spinner to end the combo here. This doesn't really matter, just making it more hard :P
02:49:836 (8) - seems out of place
02:50:063 (10) - start this 1/4 sooner then lengthen it 1/4 beat
03:26:083 (1) - add finish at the start
03:31:538 (1) - lengthen this 1/2 later

[gdeath]
00:42:229 (8,9) - make this into a slider repeat
01:43:820 (4) - change into a single circle
02:11:775 (5) - the repeat is hidden by 02:10:979 (2) score burst
03:31:548 (1) - lengthen this 1/2 later
the 2x slider speed is too extreme, I suggest you to change it to 1.5 slider speed
That way your unique slider speed will be down to 3 and it's more predictable

Nice map and Great SB the word layla is using arabic words? I'm surprised :o
Good Luck~
~STAR

Thanks of the mod, Sallad4ever ^^ I fixed mostly everything, but there were a couple things I didn't change ><
I didn't make any changes to gdeath's diff either.

Changed some parts accroding to Sallad4ever's mod.
Thanks =)

Download: Sound Horizon - Ishidatami no Akeki Akuma (Ichigo-Sora) [gdeath].osu

[General]
-5 to the offset? The streams in [gdeath] would actually sound better with it.

[Layla] and [Beginner] are fine as they are.

[Shaytan]

02:16:998 (3,4,5) - Spacing issue.
02:52:677 (1) - New combo? The actual one is pretty long.


[gdeath]
01:12:230 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream doesn't really fits the song. Or, could you add a note at 01:13:139?
01:47:677 (8,1) - sounds weird. Remove 01:48:245 (2); Set the slider at 01:47:904; Add a circle at 01:47:790. Fix the spacings afterwards.
Should look like this in the time table:

Kiai mode sure gives! Not that I don't like it, on the contrary, I love it but there is a big contrast between the kiai part and the rest of the song which may piss off some people.
02:57:222 (6) - New combo, not really easy to guess that triplet.

That's about it.

galvenize wrote:

[General]
-5 to the offset? The streams in [gdeath] would actually sound better with it.

[Layla] and [Beginner] are fine as they are.

[Shaytan]

02:16:998 (3,4,5) - Spacing issue.
02:52:677 (1) - New combo? The actual one is pretty long.

That's about it.

Thanks for the mod ^^

Oh, just noticed now but gdeath isn't in the tags, add him.

No kudosu.

good~~

Star~

Star~

Sound Horizon! :D
I think I grabbed this off #modreqs, but I'm not sure.

[Storyboard]
I think some of the scene transitions would work better if you timed them with the music. So like with the first transition at 00:28:819 - with the horse whinny, I think it would go better with the cymbal crash.
02:36:082 - The transition here might work better at the cymbal crash too, so at 02:36:991 - and maybe extending the fade out for the end of it
02:50:854 - Same thing here - I think the really fast transitions into the image like this would be better timed with big hits, but if you do a slower transition, have them go fully into the image right at the beginning of a new musical phrase for the best impact, imo. This also would work better with a slower fade out. Maybe also keep the lyrics on screen longer than the image itself to keep the karaoke effect.

[General]
Timing feels iffy. Can you get someone to double check the offset?

[Beginner]
01:26:542 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:29:951 -
02:01:539 (3) - Hrm, move the middle point down and right one grid point (level 4)
Really nice. Kind of squarish, but it works.

[Layla]
01:26:542 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:29:951 -
02:26:538 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:28:810 -
02:35:173 (4) - Think you can make this symmetrical so you get the slider tick centered in the apex of this?

[Shaytan]
03:31:533 (1) - Maybe do an audible soft whistle on the end of this?

[gdeath]
Ahaha, I was wondering if you were going to do a guest diff on one of all these new Sound Horizon maps showing up. :D
Really cool rhythms here.
01:43:814 (4) - Maybe just do a normal hit instead of a slider?
02:25:969 (6) - Hrm, I think starting with this repeating slider and going into the two sliders into the stream would play a lot better. That or maybe have the 4 and 5 be a normal stream with all circles, then make the 6 into two short sliders into the stream.
03:31:533 (1) - Maybe do an audible soft whistle on the end of this?
The ending got a little anti-climactic though. Maybe follow the violin a bit more and try to keep a good velocity going?

Really solid set here. Call me back.

Garven wrote:

[gdeath]
Ahaha, I was wondering if you were going to do a guest diff on one of all these new Sound Horizon maps showing up.
Becoz of love =)
Really cool rhythms here.
01:43:814 (4) - Maybe just do a normal hit instead of a slider? Changed another pattern and looked better now.
02:25:969 (6) - Hrm, I think starting with this repeating slider and going into the two sliders into the stream would play a lot better. That or maybe have the 4 and 5 be a normal stream with all circles, then make the 6 into two short sliders into the stream.
kk, fixed.
03:31:533 (1) - Maybe do an audible soft whistle on the end of this? It sounds better with slience imo.
The ending got a little anti-climactic though. Maybe follow the violin a bit more and try to keep a good velocity going?
Been taking account of this nice idea x.x

Also, Re-mapped 2 parts in order to get it more fun.

Download: Sound Horizon - Ishidatami no Akeki Akuma (Ichigo-Sora) [gdeath].osu

@Garven: Thanks for the mod (: I fixed most of them; I didn't add the whistle at the end of the spinner though.
@gdeath: Thanks!

Hi!!!! I got your request :3.

Well umm as for the offset. I'm gonna say 631... It was very hard to determine in gameplay, so in this case, I'll just trust the tick of the timer . See if it makes sense for you!

Oh... and the BPM is EXACTLY 132,000. Remove the extra 0,010 , otherwise, the song is kinda off near the end.

VERY NICE map btw !!!! Starrrrrrr *

Alrighty then

[SB]
Hrm, with the pic3.png transition, I was thinking more a long the lines of it start to fade it at 156764 (02:36:764 - ) and be fully in at 156991 (02:36:991 - ) changing right at 164263 (02:44:263 - ) for the phrase change/cymbal crash. Right now it feels a little premature.
There's something weird going on with the fading of pic2.png btw. This happens in all difficulties except for gdeath's.

[Shaytan]
Hrm, maybe reduce HP drain by 1? It's kind of hard to regain HP for a Hard difficulty.

[gdeath]
01:43:586 (2) - Reduce by one repeat?

Get that weird fading problem in the SB fixed up and call me back!

Keep it up~

Garven wrote:

[gdeath]
01:43:586 (2) - Reduce by one repeat? kk, done.

Also, Re-mapped the last part for the suggestion on your previous post.

Download: Sound Horizon - Ishidatami no Akeki Akuma (Ichigo-Sora) [gdeath].osu

All fixed! Thanks for the mods ^^

[Layla]
02:42:449 (1) - Remove new combo

[gdeath]
02:58:812 (3) - Finish on the start of this?
02:59:721 (6) - Finish on the start, and other two hits as custom clap? Also maybe have higher volume on these? That drum part that you're following sticks out a lot compared to the volume of the hit sounds.
03:11:540 - Extend the beginning of the break so it starts here? Has a cooler effect.
Love what you did with the ending, btw.

SB looks great now, thanks for putting up with me. :P

Let me know what you think with those mods and I'll bubble~

Garven wrote:

[Layla]
02:42:449 (1) - Remove new combo

[gdeath]
02:58:812 (3) - Finish on the start of this?
02:59:721 (6) - Finish on the start, and other two hits as custom clap? Also maybe have higher volume on these? That drum part that you're following sticks out a lot compared to the volume of the hit sounds.
03:11:540 - Extend the beginning of the break so it starts here? Has a cooler effect.
Love what you did with the ending, btw.

SB looks great now, thanks for putting up with me.

Let me know what you think with those mods and I'll bubble~

Thanks for modding once again ^^ Now I'm just waiting for gdeath's diff.

Will revert it tonight.

Garven wrote:

[gdeath]
02:58:812 (3) - Finish on the start of this? Done
02:59:721 (6) - Finish on the start, and other two hits as custom clap? Also maybe have higher volume on these? That drum part that you're following sticks out a lot compared to the volume of the hit sounds. Done
03:11:540 - Extend the beginning of the break so it starts here? Has a cooler effect. Really hard to map this part which is no vocal & drum. I tried mapping with sliders only in the beginning but it doesnt look good after testing, so i just leave a spinner here. Perhaps will remove this extend stuff if someone point out or i change my idea someday.
Love what you did with the ending, btw.

SB looks great now, thanks for putting up with me.

Let me know what you think with those mods and I'll bubble~

Download: Sound Horizon - Ishidatami no Akeki Akuma (Ichigo-Sora) [gdeath].osu

Alrighty. Everything looks good now!

:U

Thank you ^^

-Seeing as the ending of the first 2 aren't too far off from the others I would just end them all at the same place (include the ending break the last 2 have as well)
-You could say what each difficulty matches up to (Easy, Normal etc) in the song info just so people can tell?
-Your spinner circle doesn't really have a visible center for players to spin around if you could add one
-Seems pretty random where you are ending your kiai right now, end it at 03:00:631 instead?

Layla:
02:58:812 (1,2) - space out more

Shaytan:
-Almost 3 minutes without a break, put a break in the first half of the map like the other difficulties if you can
02:35:403 (1) - make sure every spinner has a new combo (old bug that existed)
03:31:540 (1) - ^

gdeath:
-Has a break near the start but still the breaks are pretty short...
02:11:881 (9,10,11) - sounds odd being so quiet

Call me back after fixes and I will rebubble~

James2250 wrote:

gdeath:
-Has a break near the start but still the breaks are pretty short... Already exsit a breat at 00:42:676...
02:11:881 (9,10,11) - sounds odd being so quiet kk, fixed.

-Enclosed update osu file.

Download: Sound Horizon - Ishidatami no Akeki Akuma (Ichigo-Sora) [gdeath].osu

Good map.Although I can not survive LOL
star

James2250 wrote:

-Seeing as the ending of the first 2 aren't too far off from the others I would just end them all at the same place (include the ending break the last 2 have as well)
-You could say what each difficulty matches up to (Easy, Normal etc) in the song info just so people can tell?
-Your spinner circle doesn't really have a visible center for players to spin around if you could add one
-Seems pretty random where you are ending your kiai right now, end it at 03:00:631 instead?

Layla:
02:58:812 (1,2) - space out more

Shaytan:
-Almost 3 minutes without a break, put a break in the first half of the map like the other difficulties if you can
02:35:403 (1) - make sure every spinner has a new combo (old bug that existed)
03:31:540 (1) - ^

gdeath:
-Has a break near the start but still the breaks are pretty short...
02:11:881 (9,10,11) - sounds odd being so quiet

Call me back after fixes and I will rebubble~

All fixed~

oh graveyard

Kind of my fault huh

Forum PM me if you want this ungraved so I can recheck/rebubble x_x

star~

cool :3

;_;

nice map

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