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IA - Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story

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Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月17日 at 23:00:58

Artist: IA
Title: Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story
Source: kemu
Tags: vocaloid hatsuko val0108 dksslqj Nakagawa-Kanon SapphireGhost No_Gu kanpakyin KanaRin climbb65588 vocaloid3
BPM: 186
Filesize: 16783kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. 0108 (5 stars, 755 notes)
  2. Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1408 notes)
  3. dksslqj Style (5 stars, 587 notes)
  4. Easy (2.73 stars, 225 notes)
  5. Gu's Hard (4.99 stars, 437 notes)
  6. Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1084 notes)
  7. Rin (5 stars, 753 notes)
  8. SG's Normal (3.77 stars, 245 notes)
Download: IA - Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story
Download: IA - Six Trillion Years and Overnight Story (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm17520775

The 1/8 slider in Rin diff used to be 1/8 sliders * 4.

虐菜当然有意思啦~


It's always a happy thing to map something you like.

Something after the map get ranked:
Mapping makes me happy.
Receiving good mods makes me happy.
Music Game is a really selfish game type, and:
^Respect that.
BeatofIke
A new map is born.
No_Gu
围观
spboxer3
前排
Mercurial
cock explosion
tutuhaha
苍天啊
Midasmens
lol
cRyo[iceeicee]
gogogo
kanpakyin
我來求個Taiko來做做..
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

kanpakyin wrote:

我來求個Taiko來做做..
[CSGA]Ar3sgice


cock explosion
Verdisphena
I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like I like

cock explosion
Megurine Luka
瞎了你们有人性?

还好我不是kemu控
Kotone

Verdisphena wrote:

cock explosion
LKs
还好我vocaloid抗性高 0108都来了这还怎么撞
Pokie

LKs wrote:

还好我vocaloid抗性高 0108都来了这还怎么撞
我說Suzumu那版本多好你們都不做
hvick225
1
xsrsbsns
哇0108也来了
raririn
0108~!
SapphireGhost
I'm highly looking forward to this map being finished. Currently making an Easy.
KanaRin
等到了
val0108
http://puu.sh/yfFz

Anyway object finished.
Frostmourne
!!!!!!
Nakagawa-Kanon
http://puu.sh/yhuD

omg. how can upload .osu file in post.

and finished.
Frobe
nice song!!!
nice beatmap!!!
star~ :)
Snowy Dream
waiting for be nuked
外挂铃
Nakagawa-Kanon


I tried to check timing?
Scorpiour
omg it's so incredible
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
@dk: Should be better now, thanks!
val0108
Raging Bull

iMercurial wrote:

cock explosion

Yay Rin! :D
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
yeaaaaa uuuuuuupdated!
SapphireGhost
Done!
Hope you like it too. Discussing over PM... it could be a Normal.
threenash
all hail NTR
rickyboi
Why are your maps so good? I'll never be this good at mapping orz
LKs
我都想掺一脚了
Megurine Luka
除了=口=

已经没有表情能够代表我现在的心情了
No_Gu
My 银河战舰 has been finished here.
http://puu.sh/zkG4
Konei
You post in my modding Queue. And I have to say sorry, because I can't figure out something wrong in the finished diffs yet :/


So good luck~
Atema
Hi ! From my modding queue ~~
But ehhhh… there’s not much to mod here ahah ! :)

I just saw this ridiculously little thing to be honest, in SG’S Normal !
01:29:057 (1) - I grid up to be perfectly symmetric with the (3) ? ^^

Also, all diffs does not end at the same time, maybe should you fix it ?

Good luck, awesome mapset !
val0108
http://puu.sh/A0SZ

all finished,sorry long time.
spboxer3
我在想怎麼都沒有人來給星星呢?
haha5957
shiranai shiranai 'o'/
raririn
除了=口= 丢颗星加fav我已经没有可做的了
SapphireGhost

Atema wrote:

I just saw this ridiculously little thing to be honest, in SG’S Normal !
01:29:057 (1) - I grid up to be perfectly symmetric with the (3) ? ^^
- The difference is one pixel, not one grid. Either way, I don't think any human would notice while playing. Oh well, fixed it anyway and made some other small change. Updated version is here.
- AIBat says red timing sections are still slightly inconsistent.
- [Gu's Hard] at 03:06:135 - I'd remove the break here.
pieguyn
hi there :D :D

Easy:

01:15:831 - start break 1/1 later like in other diffs?

SG's Normal:

00:59:057 (2) - too far from (1)
02:00:992 (2) - too far from (1)

Gu's Hard:

01:33:411 (1,2) - move 1/2 later? follows vocal and plays a bit better IMO...
03:09:353 (2,3,4) - maybe increase the spacing here a bit? since you use jumps in other parts like this...

Rin:

00:49:540 - add note?
00:49:621 - add note?
02:36:960 (4) - eeeh, for me, given how you mapped the rest of the diff, this slider seems kind of out of place...not sure how to change it though lol, so if you like it, keep it :P

dksslqj Style:

00:49:540 - add note?
00:49:621 - add note?

0108: fine...I think :?

awesome map >w<//
cRyo[iceeicee]
Hi Ntr \o.o/

[Rin]
SPOILER
  1. 00:24:540 (1) - mb add some original soft finish o.o?
  2. 00:28:411 (6) - NC i think, because changing rhytm + a bit long if compare to others
  3. 00:45:186 (1,2) - hmm, dunno but for some reason i wanted to see this kind of shape here http://puu.sh/AAjV
  4. 00:47:766 (3,4) - ^^^ http://puu.sh/AAkw
  5. 00:55:508 (1) - why not add some finish o.o?
  6. 01:00:669 (1) - i clearly hear finish in BGmusic
  7. 01:08:734 (2,3,4,5,6) - mb sexy overlap jumps xD ? http://puu.sh/AAw6 (increased spacing by 0.1 for all notes http://puu.sh/AAw6

    108,24,68734,1,0
    112,156,68895,1,2
    232,216,69057,1,0
    148,88,69218,1,2
    40,188,69379,1,2
  8. 01:10:992 (1) - finish
  9. 01:26:476 (3) - i think original soft finish fits better,
  10. 01:47:121 (1,2) - same as before, dunno why but i think this shape and blanket thing fits good with music http://puu.sh/AADa
  11. 01:48:734 (3) - could be blanket better imo, also a bit different spacing here 1.0 previous and 0.9 next object, for example here 01:51:637 (1) - u got 1.10
    mb make it consistant for both o.o?
  12. 01:49:702 (1,2) - well u know xD http://puu.sh/AAG4
  13. 01:57:444 (1) - finish
  14. 02:02:605 (1) - finish ( dunno why u ignore them, and put whistle instead, this part is very heavy and normal finish fits very good here.
  15. 02:12:927 (1) - ^^ (
  16. 02:45:831 (3,4,5,6) - there is some changing in BG music for this notes, i think it will be better to make jumps for them o.o?
    http://puu.sh/AAM2 (#6 can be putted on the head of 02:46:798 (1) -
  17. 02:47:766 (3) - finish
  18. 02:57:444 (1) - why not overlap it with 02:56:637 (7) - xD ?
  19. 02:58:089 (2) - finish
[dksslqj Style]
SPOILER
  1. 00:18:734 (1) - mb NC, to fit with changing from soft to normal, also 13 is a bad number a bit long o.o!
  2. 00:24:540 (1) - soft finish
  3. 00:34:863 (1) - should be some finish here
  4. 00:51:637 - a bit strange here....there is a piano sound here + vocal, dunno why u decided to break flow here, copy that previous long slider ? http://puu.sh/AAT4
    looks funny + folowing vocal + plays better ww
  5. 01:03:250 (1,2,3,4,1) - can be placed better to make it 2. more creativity and 3. more beautiful :3
    currently it looks like this http://puu.sh/AAVD (allined and fliped -30)
  6. 01:15:186 (3,4) - why not ctrl+r ...
  7. 01:26:476 (1) - soft finish
  8. 01:36:798 (1) - soft finish
  9. 01:45:508 (1) - should be clap here
  10. 02:07:444 (1,1) - make this slider 1.5x \o.o/ http://puu.sh/AB1e
  11. 02:18:250 - 02:28:169 too many unnused time sections lazy dksslqj www
  12. 02:32:927 (5) - finish o.o!
  13. 02:33:653 - 02:36:153 again xD
  14. 02:37:927 - add note o.o? http://puu.sh/AB2Y
  15. 02:43:895 (1) - dunno but i think this spinner dont fit at all....., mb better to start spinner from 02:44:863 ? it fits with BG music that suddenly appears ( sounds like wind \o.o/) and fits with vocal also
  16. 03:05:391 (1) - NC for AAAAAA xD
[Gu's Hard]
SPOILER
  1. 00:13:895 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - u almost hide all reverse arrows =.=, its rly hard to see them with default skin because of hitburst....i think its better to avoid that kind of stuff,
  2. 00:34:863 (1) - why not default soft finish o.o?
  3. 00:40:024 (1) - also sounds like soft finish if u listen to BG music
  4. 00:47:283 (2,3) - remove whistle from #2 and put it on #3 o.o?
  5. 00:54:863 - why not add notes for *shi ra nai* :3 ?
  6. 00:57:444 (3,4,5,6) - this spacing looks weird, and pattern sounds strange because vocal little bit late here 00:57:605 (4) -
    so mb delete #3 and do smth like this o.o? http://puu.sh/ABam
  7. 01:13:250 (3) - its too close.....
    i think pattern should be ended either here 01:15:508 (with vocal) or here 01:16:153, u got something in the middle xD, consider to add note at 01:16:153
  8. 01:31:476 (4,1) - this 2 should be same color
  9. 01:32:605 (2,3,4,1,2) - and this part should have same combo color, because right now it look little bit unreadeble...
  10. 01:33:734 (2) - this note not following nothing...orz, move it to 01:33:895
  11. 01:36:153 - +note (Ha na shi
  12. 02:03:250 (3) - this revert not good =.=, mb this http://puu.sh/ABfU , its much harder but overal this diff cant be named as easy [Hard]
  13. 02:13:573 (3) - revert =.=
  14. 02:18:089 - 02:28:411 delete all unnused time points
  15. 02:28:411 (1) - finish
  16. 02:40:669 (5) - i think whistles sounds better here
  17. 02:42:605 - +note o.o?
  18. 03:04:579 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this spacing not fits with music at all, try to make large spacing for first notes and then decrease spacing on every next note
    same as before, end pattern with vocal 03:09:998, or add note here 03:10:643
[SG's Normal]
SPOILER
  1. 00:21:798 (5) - i think its better without this note....
  2. 00:38:411 (2,4) - missed claps ?
  3. 00:40:024 (1) - this sounds more like original soft finish then clap
  4. 00:40:024 (1) - clap on slider tail instead of finish
  5. 00:41:315 (2) - same
  6. 00:42:605 (1) - finish instead of clap
  7. 00:42:927 (2) - clap
  8. 00:43:250 (3) - whistle head, clap tail
  9. 00:57:766 - note o.o? ( same as here 01:59:702 (4) - )
  10. 01:00:669 (1) - finish
  11. 01:01:960 (3) - i think this finish dont fit ._.
  12. 01:04:540 (5) - sounds more like finish then whistle for me o.o
  13. 01:06:153 (2) - finish fit with BG music o.o!
  14. 01:07:121 (3) - and this dont xD ( u did same at this part btw 02:08:089 (2,3) - )
  15. 01:10:669 (4) - i think its better to move this note to 01:10:347 or add some note here
  16. 01:36:798 (1) - mb original soft finish o.o?
  17. 01:39:379 (1) - remove clap from tail and add it on next note
  18. 01:40:669 (3) - ^^^ same
  19. 02:02:605 (1) - mb finish instead of whistle o.o?
  20. 02:12:605 (4) - this part again, i think there should be some sound at 02:12:282 so either add note here or do smth sike this http://puu.sh/ABxK
  21. 02:25:831 (1) - sounds like original soft finish
  22. 02:37:766 (2) - add clap on tail and remove clap from next note
  23. 02:42:605 - + note o.o!
  24. 02:55:186 - note
  25. 02:58:089 (1) - finish
  26. 03:00:669 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part hitsounds different from others (01:03:250 (1) - , 02:15:508 (1) - ), i think it should be same :3
    also spacing on the map a bit inconsistent .... orz
[Easy]
SPOILER

  • nothing wrong here actually..well mb just
  1. 00:40:024 (1) - original soft finish \o.o/
  2. 01:36:798 (1) - ^^^
    and some other normal finish sugestion that i mentioned in Rin diff
  3. 02:42:605 - oh yeah, u could add note here :3
[0108]
SPOILER
  1. 02:10:024 (7) - add clap, and remove clap from next note 02:10:186 (8) -
  2. 02:10:347 (1) - add clap on slider tail and remove clap from 02:10:831 (2) -
  3. 03:08:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - evil val \o.o/
  4. 03:09:676 (3,4) - mb put this notes here ? http://puu.sh/ABMv
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there :D :D

Easy:

01:15:831 - start break 1/1 later like in other diffs? yeah my bad.

Rin:

00:49:540 - add note? something like in the 0108~? sure.
00:49:621 - add note? ^
02:36:960 (4) - eeeh, for me, given how you mapped the rest of the diff, this slider seems kind of out of place...not sure how to change it though lol, so if you like it, keep it :P o.o... fine for me on this one, just a simple reversed slider to give the flow back.

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi Ntr \o.o/

[Rin]
SPOILER
  1. 00:24:540 (1) - mb add some original soft finish o.o? ehh personally i feel this parts don't really need one, so don't want to.
  2. 00:28:411 (6) - NC i think, because changing rhytm + a bit long if compare to others agreed,
  3. 00:45:186 (1,2) - hmm, dunno but for some reason i wanted to see this kind of shape here http://puu.sh/AAjV good suggestion!
  4. 00:47:766 (3,4) - ^^^ http://puu.sh/AAkw used another way to arrange (more like the previous 00:45:186 (1,2) and make them like a group.)
  5. 00:55:508 (1) - why not add some finish o.o? ...don't really feel like to.
  6. 01:00:669 (1) - i clearly hear finish in BGmusic you're right on this one!
  7. 01:08:734 (2,3,4,5,6) - mb sexy overlap jumps xD ? http://puu.sh/AAw6 (increased spacing by 0.1 for all notes http://puu.sh/AAw6 AWESOME!

    108,24,68734,1,0
    112,156,68895,1,2
    232,216,69057,1,0
    148,88,69218,1,2
    40,188,69379,1,2
  8. 01:10:992 (1) - finish ...yeah
  9. 01:26:476 (3) - i think original soft finish fits better, true.
  10. 01:47:121 (1,2) - same as before, dunno why but i think this shape and blanket thing fits good with music http://puu.sh/AADa
  11. 01:48:734 (3) - could be blanket better imo, also a bit different spacing here 1.0 previous and 0.9 next object, for example here 01:51:637 (1) - u got 1.10
    mb make it consistant for both o.o? ehh no change for this one.
  12. 01:49:702 (1,2) - well u know xD http://puu.sh/AAG4 i know. great.
  13. 01:57:444 (1) - finish added.
  14. 02:02:605 (1) - finish ( dunno why u ignore them, and put whistle instead, this part is very heavy and normal finish fits very good here. added, when adding finishes here i only paid attention to the slow down sliders so really didn't notice them... my bad.
  15. 02:12:927 (1) - ^^ ( ^^
  16. 02:45:831 (3,4,5,6) - there is some changing in BG music for this notes, i think it will be better to make jumps for them o.o?
    http://puu.sh/AAM2 (#6 can be putted on the head of 02:46:798 (1) - you're just right. feel better now?(but i used a different way ww)
  17. 02:47:766 (3) - finish ye.
  18. 02:57:444 (1) - why not overlap it with 02:56:637 (7) - xD ? not a big deal but fixed.
  19. 02:58:089 (2) - finish added

[Easy]
SPOILER

  • nothing wrong here actually..well mb just
  1. 00:40:024 (1) - original soft finish \o.o/ k. 70% volume
  2. 01:36:798 (1) - ^^^ ^^
    and some other normal finish sugestion that i mentioned in Rin diff
  3. 02:42:605 - oh yeah, u could add note here :3 added

So pro mod, i haven't got such a good mod for years, you should totally be a BAT.
LunarSakuya
Hi ^^

Easy
Really nice, just some suggestions
00:18:734 (4) - Finish at the end
00:50:347 (3) - Whistle at beginning
01:36:798 - 01:46:798 - Use normal-hitclap? also at 00:34:863 (1)'s section
02:25:831 (3) - Some kind of Finish
03:03:250 (1) - Finish
03:07:418 (1) - Delete Finish and put it on 03:08:063 (1) instead

SG's Normal
01:06:153 (2) - Finish on beginning
01:04:057 (4) - Delete note, makes it consistent with the previous stack and easier to read in the same combo
01:07:121 (3) - Delete Finish, sounds a little off putting it in the middle of the chorus
01:14:379 (4) - Delete note, same reason as before
02:05:992 (4) - ^
02:16:315 (4) - ^
02:52:927 (1) - Finish at end instead of Clap
03:03:250 (1) - Finish at beginning
Beautiful use of sliders!

Gu's Hard
00:20:992 (6) - Ctrl + R, rhythm vs. spacing between 00:20:669 (5,6) is different than 00:20:992 (6,7)
01:00:992 (2) - ^
01:06:798 (3) - ^
01:13:250 (3) - NC for different spacing?
01:30:992 (3) - Ctrl + R, flows better i think
01:59:057 (2) - ^ same reason as before
03:06:135 (9) - Delete break after this note
03:10:643 - Add note with Finish since it's the really end of the song

0108
01:15:508 (1) - Delete NC and put it on the next note
01:31:153 (10) - one grid to the left to make the stream evenly spaced
02:17:443 (1) - Delete NC and place it on the next note
02:42:605 (1) - Use Soft Finish instead, better transition into quiet part imo
03:09:998 (1) - Delete NC, put it on next note
Awesome!

dksslqj Style
00:19:379 (1) - Finish on beginning
00:24:540 - 00:34:057 - Add some whistles in this part, feels a bit empty, for example on 00:29:702 (1)
00:34:863 (1) - Some kind of Finish
00:51:637 - I feel like something needs to be here but probably doesnt matter lol
00:57:121 (2) - Move up 2 grids to match the spacing of 00:56:476 (4)
01:16:153 (1) - Delete NC unless theres some reason
01:52:766 (3) - Delete note, don't hear any matching bg music
02:33:653 (1) - Finish
Great flow

Rin
00:19:379 (1) - Finish
00:24:540 (1) - ^
00:42:282 (5) - Curve downwards for a better flow to 00:42:605 (1) imo
00:50:347 (5) - NC, kinda matches the structure of 00:47:121 (1,2,1,2,3)
02:00:508 (3) - Place this towards the bottom instead http://puu.sh/AGf3, behind the slider is kinda meh? xD
02:18:089 (1) - Finish on beginning instead of Whistle
03:03:250 (2) - Finish on beginning
03:10:643 - Add some note here since it's the really end of the song

Amazing map!! :cry: Good luck!
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hi ^^

Easy
Really nice, just some suggestions
00:18:734 (4) - Finish at the end k.
00:50:347 (3) - Whistle at beginning finish for 3 and whistle for 4.
01:36:798 - 01:46:798 - Use normal-hitclap? also at 00:34:863 (1)'s section no... feels kinda different.
02:25:831 (3) - Some kind of Finish effect is not that good. no.
03:03:250 (1) - Finish k.
03:07:418 (1) - Delete Finish and put it on 03:08:063 (1) instead i didn't delete the finish but still added the one you mentioned.

Rin
00:19:379 (1) - Finish added,
00:24:540 (1) - ^ fine.
00:42:282 (5) - Curve downwards for a better flow to 00:42:605 (1) imo true.
00:50:347 (5) - NC, kinda matches the structure of 00:47:121 (1,2,1,2,3) yep,
02:00:508 (3) - Place this towards the bottom instead http://puu.sh/AGf3, behind the slider is kinda meh? xD it's a different flow and not what i want.
02:18:089 (1) - Finish on beginning instead of Whistle k.
03:03:250 (2) - Finish on beginning added
03:10:643 - Add some note here since it's the really end of the song i considered but yeah... still no. to keep the same feeling as the 1st/2nd kiai.
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