S h i o n wrote:

Yuki YukI

1. 00:03:746 (T) - 没用的绿线 fixed
2. 00:43:027 (6) - 加个note? ^
3. 00:48:652 (2) - NC ? ^
4. 00:51:277 (4) - NC ? 00:54:277 (4) - ^
5. 01:04:027 (4) - 感觉去掉这个 这里用2连感合适点.. 后面已经有一个二连了 这里再二连的话感觉不是很舒服

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Yuki YukI]

1. 01:12:090 (1) - Try move to center? k
2. 01:30:840 - Add whistle. just as the begin

karenying wrote:

Hi e姐
Normal
00:13:590 - 這裡到00:22:590..感覺音效好小聲
00:19:590 (1) - 頭finish?
01:24:277 - 哇好空因为不想当MV本来是该放个spin的<.<
01:29:152 (2) - 這裡因為01:28:871有個音 所以感覺很容易按早 尤其新手

Aoi
00:23:340 (2) - 我覺得這反正是hard了 不如這樣 http://puu.sh/erL9
00:58:215 (1) - remove nc?這
00:58:590 (2) - nc?
01:36:183 - 沒用綠線

Insane
00:57:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - combo略長

I love last remote and koishi and e

karenying wrote:

Yuki YukI
00:14:808 (2) - 刪 k
00:19:590 (1) - 頭finish? k
00:25:590 (7) - 我覺得 不要叠? k
00:37:590 (1) - 頭finish k
00:45:465 (2) - 這個和1,3的spacing明顯有分別 edit里显示的是prev:1.24x next:1.29x
01:21:090 (1) - finish k
01:24:090 (1) - 頭finish k
01:27:090 (1) - 頭finish k
有些地方感覺音效不夠 加一下? 应该是音量有点小吧 加了10%

• - no thing zheli

• - Kiai part不太適合用N的hitnormal當打拍子用, 太沉
  - 以及kiai的whistle怎麼時有時無...都補上吧?

Pokie wrote:

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeebirthdayhappy


General

• - no thing zheli

AoiX's

• - Kiai part不太適合用N的hitnormal當打拍子用, 太沉
  - 以及kiai的whistle怎麼時有時無...都補上吧?

这个...我还真不知道他本人怎么下的
00:52:215 (1,2,3) - spacing 獵奇, 還少了00:49:590 (1,2,3) - 這裡的finish效果changed
01:30:090 (1) - 刪whistledone

Pokie wrote:

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeebirthdayhappy

Yuki's
[list:f1bef]00:25:590 - 建議填了這break, 歌不長..break不太需要, 尤其這是vocal段 k,初步添加了一下,应该还有要修改的
00:42:465 (5) - 間距可以加大, 不需要這麼低 k
01:14:715 (6,7,8,9) - clap換到6, 或者再加在8或9, 現在的下法比較違和 听了几遍没有问题啊 加快一拍罢了
01:27:090 (1) - 加長1/2拍 现在的挺好

S i R i R u wrote:

you can ignore which poin you don't like, this is just my opinion and sorry for my bad english eve

General

　● TAG : Happy Birthday Eve ! HAHAHAHANo way!


Normal

Fine for me


Aoi

00:50:715 (3) - add finish at the end of sliderk
00:53:715 (3) - ^^



Insane

00:05:902 (3) - I think use single note here and stat this slider at 00:06:090 and middle of slider at 00:06:371 is betterSince I didnt follow vocal so :<
00:24:558 (6) - remove new combo ?k
00:24:840 (3) - new combo ?k

00:33:090 (1,2,3) - follow the vocal is good at this part. ( for me )<.<but i still keep my rhythm...
00:54:183 (8) - delete note:< I'd like to keep it.

01:06:840 (1) - how about to change this note to Slider ?and delete note at 01:07:027 and 01:07:121 sorry
and finish slider at 01:07:121wut...?

01:24:183 (2) - move this to 01:24:277 ? and delete 01:24:371sorry

S i R i R u wrote:

YukiYuKI

00:17:715 - add note here with finish sound ?
00:52:590 (1,2,3) - spacing is confused how about to change slider to non repeat and move this to 00:53:715 ?
00:55:496 (6,1,2,3) - same opinion with ^

A s g a r d wrote:

[Normal]
00:28:777 (3) - change like this http://puu.sh/eKOLwhat's the reason i should change to it...?I think slider repeat is easy to play...

[Aoi]
Why unsnapped Inherited points? resnap pointsresnapped

SPOILER

01:03:565
01:04:315
01:05:815
01:06:565
01:08:065
01:09:565
01:10:315
01:11:065
01:11:815
01:12:565
01:15:565
01:16:315
01:17:065
01:17:815
01:18:565
01:20:065
01:21:565
01:22:315
01:23:065
01:23:815
01:24:565

[Insane]
00:10:590 (2) - this is unrankable because players don't know where is start of slider changed
01:26:340 (1) - why this distance 1.07?? because of the downbeat


hmm... that's all
Good Luck!

L_P wrote:

mod 4 mod lai le
feel free to ignore some suggestion...

INSANE
00:05:902 (3) - 听了几次还是dont get it 为什么你要用这个节奏。。。。感觉纳闷当然我本来是顺手自制节奏带过既然你们1个2个都这么纠结我还是改了
00:21:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不要stack让它变成这种东西 ？自我感觉良好同样的放法对圣斗士是不能用两次的，之前这么放过了。
00:24:090 (1) - finish一下？好
00:37:590 (1) - 这里开始感觉slider好像随便放放没有经过整理构思等等？建议四个四个一组排列？或者一弯一直这样？我真不知道这哪里没有经过构思了...弯直不一起用或者不明显就不是构思了吗

00:49:590 (1) - 这个slider太上面了approach circle又和背景同色，建议换个combo color..(用粉色？首先combo color是浅蓝背景是深蓝不会吃色，如果我用的是深蓝才会。其次这也没碰到HP条。最后它是个slider,问题不大。找几个人试过了，完全没压力
00:51:840 (1) - delete NC, 00:52:590 (3) - start NC没删，不过加了个。
01:20:527 (4,5) - 从slider到note的flow好像不大顺畅。。。哦按spacing来就顺了吗那不叫flow,只是你的个人习惯。
01:36:090 (1) - 这个finish听起来有点。。怪怪的？不如用senbonzakura那个摇铃soft finish？效果绝对不错。。。请试试看
其实那个摇铃finish挺适合这首歌的。。不如有些地方用用看我不觉得怪，懒得加了。

aoi
00:03:090 (4) - 这个slider头建议用senbonzakura那个摇铃soft finish?挺不错的既然不怪就没必要用外加音效吧...
00:06:090 (4) - 同上同上
00:14:715 (3) - 用没有repeat的长slider感觉更顺畅？还真不觉得，我尊重他本人的看法，后面也是这么下的，从整体上来说保留。
这个难度有点尴尬的说。。。既不会难又有新手看不懂的stack新手就去玩normal吧,我承认这个对于hard来说稍难，不过既然BPM不高。
01:14:527 (5) - 建议拉长repeat。。那种效果尊重作者本人的想法，我觉得从结构上来说这个问题不大。
结尾那个note当然也建议soft finish

normal
00:13:590 (1) - 这种slider建议微弯曲？不会麻烦的按着ctrl点一点就得了(其实我map了很久才知道可以这么做不知道你知不知道？你说我知道不知道呢？既然你都知道了我怎么可能不知道呢？不过没必要弯为什么要弯这边体现的是鼓而不是vocal，而且也没有弯的理由。要把直的掰弯是要一个艰巨的过程的，你懂吗？
00:37:590 (1) - clap不大好听换finish了
01:23:715 (6) - 巨大空隙大丈夫？没问题，因为不想破坏视频的美感，反正新人也不会关video.


太多人做GD我orz一个一个推销soft finish真是悲剧的悲剧 加油慢慢推销。

edit:mod 4 mod在 下面↓那个hatsune miku的 谢谢~

goodbye wrote:

你说我知道不知道呢？既然你都知道了我怎么可能不知道呢？不过没必要弯为什么要弯这边体现的是鼓而不是vocal，而且也没有弯的理由。要把直的掰弯是要一个艰巨的过程的，你懂吗？

A s g a r d wrote:

[Yuki Yuki]
00:17:715 (7) - stack? change it to another pattern

L_P wrote:

yukiyuki
00:05:621 (2) - 尾巴cancel whistle,加在下一个slider头上 重复音并不是很好听 :<
00:07:590 (1) - 太大声了。。。。。？ 这里的整体音量都是36%啊
00:45:840 (3) - tail whistle k
00:57:277 (4) - 还是需要个whistle...虽然有了finish k
01:14:715 (6,7,8,9) - 个人认为。。如果弧度在另外一边会更顺畅 不是很好看...
01:31:121 (2) - 尾巴cancel whistle,加在下一个slider头上 ^
01:36:090 (5) - 最后这个note也建议用用看senbonzakura的那个摇铃soft finish..... 看e姐的主意
不错的GD只是稍微中规中矩了点，不如学学看e姐拖泥带水的mapping法？那种羞涩的slider被藏在combo burst后面的pattern...?

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
[Aoi]一堆unsnapped timing section 看看吧我改掉了T.T
建議也tag th11 subterranean animism加

[Insane]
無力吐嘈

[Normal]
...

...(無可吐嘈) 都不錯 嗯嗯
神mapper e姐教我map圖 QAQ

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
[Aoi]一堆unsnapped timing section 看看吧 我也不知道怎么回事Q_Q
建議也tag th11 subterranean animism

[AoiX]
00:53:152 (2,3) - 一個normal+的難度來說這個可能難了點 ._. 调整了间距
01:28:590 (3) - whistle at beginning as you've done afterwards done

wmfchris wrote:

[Yuki]
00:03:090 (3) - whistle at begining? sounds fitting with the coming (1) k
00:06:090 (3) - ^ it's enough
00:17:715 (7) - don't know why finish there orz no drum sound there in the music removed
01:07:027 (4,5,6,7) - [Nazi] right 1 grid lv4 to maintain spacing k..thx for nazi
01:26:340 (3) - remove clap at the ending k
01:28:590 (4) - whistle at beginning k
01:31:590 (3) - ^ ^

1. 把第一根紅線移到00:00:840 - .以確保重音是踩在白長線上.
2. 其實我想問第一根紅線是用來做甚麼得...這個其實BPM沒變阿 如果是用來變換速度那就麻煩刪掉把,因為用紅線來減速是unrankable得.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:28:215 (2,3,4) - 我覺得這堆slider得排佈有點凌亂,一堆slider堆在一起對新手不是一件好事.反而會混亂他們,我個人覺得
   2. 01:24:277 (x) - 我個人覺得這裡可以加個spinner到01:26:715 - 結束 感覺這裡空的有點過分 加一下應該會比較好
   3. 01:28:590 (1,2,3) - 其實我是不建議在最低難度放這類得3/4 因為一般新手都不能很好的處理這種節拍.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:13:590 (1,2) - 都在slider返回得位置加上whistle?感覺對上樂器了 效果應該也不錯
   2. 00:19:590 (1,2) - ^同
   3. 01:20:152 (4) - 在slider的結束部分加上whistle?

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR-1?
2. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:41:527 (2,3,4) - (gameplay) 不相等間距,求修復 關掉grid snap然後重新snap一下就可以了
3. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:34:590 (3) - 這裡為甚麼縮短間距?有特別的意義麼?而且這裡感覺放spinner會更好.
   2. 00:53:715 (3) - 間距,我不知道你這裡是不是故意得,但現在看起來確實不太舒服
   3. 01:29:340 (4) - 刪掉這個note?這裡沒有音樂去支持這個note,所一聽起來違和感滿載 而且這裡放whistle也太..
4. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:14:152 (2) - 在這個slider的頭尾都加上whistle?感覺這slider就是在強調音樂.不加上就比較怪
   2. 01:28:871 (3) - 在slider折返的位置加上whistle

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:36:090 (1,2,3,4) - 我覺得這裡不如把這4個notes都分別踩上X軸和Y軸會比較好,最起碼美觀上也會比現在得好
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:19:590 (1) - 在折返加上whistle?
   2. 00:20:902 (2) - 在slider得頭尾加上whistle.
   3. 01:32:996 (x) - 從這裡開始使用20%的音量?

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:48:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 為甚麼這裡突然鬼觸起來了?從整體來看,這圖得難度根本沒到到需要1/4 的程度,而且整個圖就著力是最難得了
   2. 00:54:183 (6) - 其實這裡還是跟著vocal走比較好,自創節奏在這裡比較違和了

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod request from my queue.
[Aoi]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR-1? 似乎是设定成Hard的，再减就太低了
2. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:41:527 (2,3,4) - (gameplay) 不相等間距,求修復 關掉grid snap然後重新snap一下就可以了
3. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:34:590 (3) - 這裡為甚麼縮短間距?有特別的意義麼?而且這裡感覺放spinner會更好. 这样处理从曲调走向考虑的，而且这里加spinner会增加难度
   2. 00:53:715 (3) - 間距,我不知道你這裡是不是故意得,但現在看起來確實不太舒服 fixed
   3. 01:29:340 (4) - 刪掉這個note?這裡沒有音樂去支持這個note,所一聽起來違和感滿載 而且這裡放whistle也太.. fixed
4. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:14:152 (2) - 在這個slider的頭尾都加上whistle?感覺這slider就是在強調音樂.不加上就比較怪 fixed
   2. 01:28:871 (3) - 在slider折返的位置加上whistle

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod request from my queue.

[General]

1. 把第一根紅線移到00:00:840 - .以確保重音是踩在白長線上.其实重音24是在80BPM的现在的红线上的...
2. 其實我想問第一根紅線是用來做甚麼得...這個其實BPM沒變阿 如果是用來變換速度那就麻煩刪掉把,因為用紅線來減速是unrankable得.省得日后麻烦这里改了...我真的不是为了变速啊...

[Normal]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:28:215 (2,3,4) - 我覺得這堆slider得排佈有點凌亂,一堆slider堆在一起對新手不是一件好事.反而會混亂他們,我個人覺得改了
   2. 01:24:277 (x) - 我個人覺得這裡可以加個spinner到01:26:715 - 結束 感覺這裡空的有點過分 加一下應該會比較好是为了视频才不加Spinner的...补了个slider和note
   3. 01:28:590 (1,2,3) - 其實我是不建議在最低難度放這類得3/4 因為一般新手都不能很好的處理這種節拍.虽然改掉了但是我觉得其实还是3/4最合毕竟最体现钢琴这段...而且折返不难打的..新人一般都跟着最明显的音乐打的...有时候认为简单反而不会了...
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:13:590 (1,2) - 都在slider返回得位置加上whistle?感覺對上樂器了 效果應該也不錯加
   2. 00:19:590 (1,2) - ^同^
   3. 01:20:152 (4) - 在slider的結束部分加上whistle?^

[Insane]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:48:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 為甚麼這裡突然鬼觸起來了?從整體來看,這圖得難度根本沒到到需要1/4 的程度,而且整個圖就著力是最難得了改了
   2. 00:54:183 (6) - 其實這裡還是跟著vocal走比較好,自創節奏在這裡比較違和了改了

看來wmf會泡,於是我就不動手了

kanpakyin wrote:

[Yuki Yuki]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:36:090 (1,2,3,4) - 我覺得這裡不如把這4個notes都分別踩上X軸和Y軸會比較好,最起碼美觀上也會比現在得好
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:19:590 (1) - 在折返加上whistle?
   2. 00:20:902 (2) - 在slider得頭尾加上whistle.
   3. 01:32:996 (x) - 從這裡開始使用20%的音量?

1. 00:39:090 (3) - 在slider的折返加一個whistle?
2. 01:24:465 (1) - 在slider的開始加上clap?
3. 01:28:590 (1,2,3) - 麻其實可以選擇用slider代替notes的..又可以符合音樂, 新手也打得舒服

1. 01:09:090 (1) - 試試在slider的開頭加上finish?聽起來不錯
2. 01:15:465 ~ 01:17:715 - 在這部分的紅線上都加上whistle?因為這部分的節奏和接拍都比叫鮮明 而且配奏都在紅線上

1. 00:35:152 (3) - ...這種slider還是少有為妙...
2. 01:11:152 (5) - 感覺略醜...試試這個?位置需要自行調整
   
   ..

   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/262075
3. 01:35:152 (3,4,5,1) - 不相等間距...是故意得麼?

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. OD-1?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:12:277 (1) - 感覺這裡可以new combo一下
   2. 00:57:465 (1) - ^
   3. 01:22:965 (7) - 這條slider向右彎, 還有角度可以誇張一點?像這樣
      
      .

      http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/262079
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:25:590 ~ 00:36:840 - 這部分的音量有點過大 我覺得整體的音量可以-10~15左右 主要原因是這部分很柔和 不需要太大的音量/ 這部分可以考慮適量的加上whistle?
   2. ...這難度只有finish sound?- -

kanpakyin wrote:

Rechecking.
[ignore's Lunatic]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. OD-1?
   改掉了
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:12:277 (1) - 感覺這裡可以new combo一下
      改掉了
   2. 00:57:465 (1) - ^
      改掉了
   3. 01:22:965 (7) - 這條slider向右彎, 還有角度可以誇張一點?像這樣
      
      .

      http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/262079
   这一条没有改，这个slider是跟上面对称的，改掉了之后看着比较难看
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:25:590 ~ 00:36:840 - 這部分的音量有點過大 我覺得整體的音量可以-10~15左右 主要原因是這部分很柔和 不需要太大的音量/ 這部分可以考慮適量的加上whistle?
      音量加大了，不过我觉得加whistle比较违和，所以就索性不加了
   2. ...這難度只有finish sound?- -

標星...能多找一點mod麼?因為你加了new difficulty.

kanpakyin wrote:

Rechecking.

[Normal]

1. 00:39:090 (3) - 在slider的折返加一個whistle?fixed
2. 01:24:465 (1) - 在slider的開始加上clap?fixed
3. 01:28:590 (1,2,3) - 麻其實可以選擇用slider代替notes的..又可以符合音樂, 新手也打得舒服done

[Insane]

1. 00:35:152 (3) - ...這種slider還是少有為妙...changed
2. 01:11:152 (5) - 感覺略醜...試試這個?位置需要自行調整k
   
   ..

   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/262075
3. 01:35:152 (3,4,5,1) - 不相等間距...是故意得麼?也不是说故意我没按尾巴上的间距走而是slider的整个重心点..不过算了一点点间距 改了

標星...能多找一點mod麼?因為你加了new difficulty.

goodbye wrote:

顺便补一下对几个gd的mod吧...有一些一直想说的...当我自己凑数好了!
[Aoi]
00:40:590 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 说实话这边之前我就一直很想改掉.这个无论从连续note还是摆法上来说真心不好按...大概会挨很多1分的那种不好按啊! 其实我自己都会断啊Q_Q

Philippines's mod
00:04:590 (1) - Move the 3rd point at X: 400 Y: 96 so it would look like it's a semi slider blanket. (: sorry,I think now is fine

Philippines wrote:

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1. 00:03:465 (3,1) - I hope you are aware that this sliders are not parallel. Switch to grid level 4 then move the 2nd point of (3) one grid to the left.changed
   
   
2. 00:13:590 (1,2) - ^. Do the same instructions. But do the changes on (1).I guess you're said 00:03:590, fixed
   
   
3. 00:28:215 (2,1,2) - Try this kind of pattern: done

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1. 00:05:340 (2) - Wuuut? Try not to overlap this slider. It's ugly for me.changed
   
   
2. 00:21:090 (Whole combo) - Try this kind of pattern: No, there is drum at 00:21:558 but the next one havent.

goodbye wrote:

[Yuki Yuki]
00:03:840 (1) - 我不知道别人听起来怎么样反正我拿耳机听这里音量突然很大... 整体修改了一下 不知道现在怎样
00:13:215 (2) - 建议NC..说实话我在这里有点看到100pa-的影子... k

Philippines wrote:

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1. 00:03:840 (1) - This section I believe doesn't need a new combo. but actually it doesn't make no sense if u watch it carefully
   
2. 01:29:340 (1) - ^. ^
   
   
3. 01:32:340 (1) - ^. ^
   
   
4. Wow, It was quite easy at first then suddenly on kiai time, there are scattered streams everywhere. Try adjusting the diff balance on this difficulty. but the streams are all not very long so it's ok imo

anyway thanks for suggestion

1. 00:37:590 (1) - Probably add a whistle at the end of the slider?
2. 00:43:590 (2) - ^Same.

1. 01:33:090 (2) - Remove the finish at the beginning of the slider?

kanpakyin wrote:

Rechecking...

[Normal]

1. 00:37:590 (1) - Probably add a whistle at the end of the slider?
2. 00:43:590 (2) - ^Same.

[Aoi]

1. 01:33:090 (2) - Remove the finish at the beginning of the slider?

Consider it and I'll bubble

Garven wrote:

'sup

[Aoi]
00:33:840 (2,3) - Spacing is a little iffy here
01:02:340 (1,1) - Eh, not a fan of new combo spam

[Yuki YukI]
00:46:590 (1) - Add finish on end. And make it audible
01:08:152 (3) - This curve could look smoother.

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[Insane]
00:10:590 (2) - I like the flow of this better ctrl + h'd
01:15:090 (1,2,3,4,5) - <3

Sweet Jesus that woman is going to have back problems.lol

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