Snowy Dream wrote:

Hi,Yuki~
Mod request from random modding & kiva's request (怎么这么巧两个撞一起了)
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[General]
spacing都不是很一致..（jump除外)
有些1.2 突然1.3 又1.1
比如要用1.2 那至少保持在1.15-1.25
之后的spacing问题我不吐槽了。。
用distance snap调一下吧0.0
如果是故意这样做的那。。。。。。。
这个是下的太匆忙了...以后会慢慢修改的=w=



[Normal]
00:06:625 (4) - spacing Fixed
00:07:470 (1) - d nc fixed
00:08:738 (2) - nc ^
00:09:583 (1) - d nc^
00:21:414 (2) - d finish ^
00:57:329 (1,2,3) - 做成一个slider比较好 （或者直接用4个1/2拍来排) fixed
03:00:709 (1) - finish 这个感觉差别不大呃


[Hard]
00:07:893 (x) - 这个音完全没踩中 硬要这样做也没什么大问题。。 嘛嘛 大丈夫
00:20:780 (4) - nc fixed
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好了其实没大问题 。。。。
Good luck
几年不见了？ .....

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. kiai須一致 因為沒有GD和Taiko所以不能不同 fixed
2. 圖片大小不符合4:3的比例 修了一下

[Normal]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 超過了3星 據說是unrankable ((不過聽說有例外= =

这个我会想办法降的

mapping

1. 00:01:555 (1,2) - 沒有左右對稱 上下差了一格的感覺 而且兩個都是 估計是用複製的吧 修了一下 应该好点了....
2. 00:37:893 (1,3) - 沒有覆蓋好 lol 这完全是碰巧啊
3. 00:59:019 (1,2,3) - 間距差很多耶... 改slider了
4. 01:05:780 (1,2) - 和00:01:555 (1,2) - 問題一樣 也修了一下
5. 01:19:301 (5) - 壓到HP Bar了~需要修改 fixed
6. 02:15:076 (5,6) - 覆蓋太多了 會讓人感覺有些凌亂~拉开了点

[Hard]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 未用到的綠線:
   02:43:702 -
   02:43:914 - [/color]

mapping

1. 02:52:259 (1) - 我嚓...直角阿. 換掉吧 實在有失美感lol 前面那个没吐槽
   那我就用前面那个了:3

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

1. 没用的osb文件就删掉吧～
2. LetterBox During Breaks如非必须也请关掉吧
3. (Nazi)Tag里的标签最好都用大写字母开头:)
4. 两个难度的Kiai time不一致，请修正为相同
5. 一般来说最低的难度需要低于3星，现在的Normal只能说勉强合格但是如果MAT/BAT抓你这个的话一点脾气没有，所以尽量降低到3星下吧。

1. 因为难度超过3星了，所以建议可以将HP和OD再降低一下，压压星会感觉好一点～
2. 建议使用sliderslide将slide滚动的声音静音，现在的滚动音真心感觉不太好听……给你附了一个wav文件，下载之后删掉后缀.osb(保留.wav)就好。
3. 01:11:278 (2,3,4) - 对于normal这里可能有点过难了……建议把(3,4)去掉直接增加(2)的折返次数会好点吧？
4. 01:14:658 (2,3,4) - 同上
5. 01:18:038 (2,3,4) - 同上
6. 02:04:095 (1) - 建议把这个NC放到后面的(2)那里～

1. 00:04:095 (3,4) - 这个建议在(4)开头的蓝线加个note，然后把(4)向后推到红线开始做成三连。
2. 00:06:419 (1) - 这里建议改成红线的note+后面slider,折返感觉有点怪……
3. 00:08:109 (6) - 这里听着超级别扭……强烈建议删掉然后Finish放到下个白线那里去……然后00:07:792 (5) - 向后挪动到白线开始
4. 00:09:165 (3,4,5) - 这里也是建议做成前面的三连会感觉好一点
5. 00:30:926 (2) - 考虑删掉？感觉这里留个空拍比较有sense
6. 00:32:616 (6) - 同上～
7. 00:39:376 (5) - 同上～
8. 00:42:334 (2) - 同上～
9. 00:54:799 (9) - 建议将长度缩短一半，做成1/4的折返
10. 00:55:433 (1,2,3) - 这个三连起有点怪怪的感觉……
11. 01:05:785 (1,2,3) - 这三个蓝线折返都没对齐节奏或vocal，反复听了几次感觉应该是白红线才对……
12. 01:13:813 (6) - 建议向后移动到蓝线并且和(7)叠上
13. 01:23:531 (1,2,3,4) - 这个突然的减速又stream加速……也是有点难受……如果一定要放三连的话建议叠到下个slider开始处会感觉好一点
14. 01:27:017 (4) - 建议向后移动到红线并且和(5)叠上
15. 01:57:651 (4) - 建议删掉，这个Whistle应该是在(3)的结尾处～
16. 02:05:574 - 建议加个note和后面的(1)叠上～
17. 02:28:602 (1,2,3) - 和前面一样没对齐节奏，建议重新调整下吧
18. 02:36:313 (4) - 建议向后挪动到红线并且和(5)stack
19. 02:49:834 (4) - 同上

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for _kiva's request~
似乎可以用中文诶，真好

General:

1. 没用的osb文件就删掉吧～ sb后面应该会做的
2. LetterBox During Breaks如非必须也请关掉吧
3. (Nazi)Tag里的标签最好都用大写字母开头:)
4. 两个难度的Kiai time不一致，请修正为相同 fixed
5. 一般来说最低的难度需要低于3星，现在的Normal只能说勉强合格但是如果MAT/BAT抓你这个的话一点脾气没有，所以尽量降低到3星下吧。已经降到了2.99...:3

Normal:

1. 因为难度超过3星了，所以建议可以将HP和OD再降低一下，压压星会感觉好一点～
2. 建议使用sliderslide将slide滚动的声音静音，现在的滚动音真心感觉不太好听……给你附了一个wav文件，下载之后删掉后缀.osb(保留.wav)就好。
3. 01:11:278 (2,3,4) - 对于normal这里可能有点过难了……建议把(3,4)去掉直接增加(2)的折返次数会好点吧？
4. 01:14:658 (2,3,4) - 同上
5. 01:18:038 (2,3,4) - 同上
6. 02:04:095 (1) - 建议把这个NC放到后面的(2)那里～

Hard:

1. 00:04:095 (3,4) - 这个建议在(4)开头的蓝线加个note，然后把(4)向后推到红线开始做成三连。
2. 00:06:419 (1) - 这里建议改成红线的note+后面slider,折返感觉有点怪……
3. 00:08:109 (6) - 这里听着超级别扭……强烈建议删掉然后Finish放到下个白线那里去……然后00:07:792 (5) - 向后挪动到白线开始
4. 00:09:165 (3,4,5) - 这里也是建议做成前面的三连会感觉好一点
5. 00:30:926 (2) - 考虑删掉？感觉这里留个空拍比较有sense
6. 00:32:616 (6) - 同上～
7. 00:39:376 (5) - 同上～
8. 00:42:334 (2) - 同上～
9. 00:54:799 (9) - 建议将长度缩短一半，做成1/4的折返
10. 00:55:433 (1,2,3) - 这个三连起有点怪怪的感觉……
11. 01:05:785 (1,2,3) - 这三个蓝线折返都没对齐节奏或vocal，反复听了几次感觉应该是白红线才对……
12. 01:13:813 (6) - 建议向后移动到蓝线并且和(7)叠上
13. 01:23:531 (1,2,3,4) - 这个突然的减速又stream加速……也是有点难受……如果一定要放三连的话建议叠到下个slider开始处会感觉好一点
14. 01:27:017 (4) - 建议向后移动到红线并且和(5)叠上
15. 01:57:651 (4) - 建议删掉，这个Whistle应该是在(3)的结尾处～ Fixed
16. 02:05:574 - 建议加个note和后面的(1)叠上～
17. 02:28:602 (1,2,3) - 和前面一样没对齐节奏，建议重新调整下吧
18. 02:36:313 (4) - 建议向后挪动到红线并且和(5)stack
19. 02:49:834 (4) - 同上

差不多就这些啦～～加油&Good Luck~

• 恩..hitsound很酷 但是说实话效果不好 感觉和背景伴奏比较接近(或许是刻意接近? 音量70%的话实在听不出什么区别 感觉像在打soft =_= 建议用N的hit来做clap, 配soft whistle也很好听的 ww 如果实在无法接受的话可以试试改到S2 把Kiai段改成S2 效果也不错...另外改完音效后有很多地方可以用clap填上....还有可以听出来某些空缺..记得补上(例:hard的00:38:743 (4), 02:01:560 (2)
  http://puu.sh/dL0s
  
  喔 对了 记得source大写Touhou
  
  Arrange: REDALiCE→Tags

• 00:21:419 (2) - 换finish算了╮(╯_╰)╭
  00:28:602 (1) - finish开头?
  00:41:278 (1) - finish结尾?
  00:55:221 (4) - finish?
  00:55:644~01:10:433 (T) - 其实感觉这段只用soft-whistle有点弱..不如继续用前一段的音效模式
  02:09:588 (3) - clap开头?
  02:11:278 (5) - ^

• 00:30:292 (1) - 删NC?
  00:31:137 (3) - 加NC?
  00:30:926 (2) - ...建议往前挪1/4 或者干脆挪一边 总之别叠着就好...前面两个1/4容易造成惯性思维 这note很容易手滑啊...
  00:38:743 (4) - clap结尾?
  00:47:193 (2) - 中间在蓝线的哨子改结尾?
  01:05:785 (1,2,3) - 其实可以试试这样的节奏 音效也好加一些
  02:01:560 (2) - ^
  02:10:010 (2) - 中间在蓝线的哨子改结尾?
  02:22:686 (1) - 删NC ?
  02:23:531 (4) - 加NC ?

Selee wrote:

中文无压力吧..好长时间没用中文写mod 略蛋疼

[General]

• 恩..hitsound很酷 但是说实话效果不好 感觉和背景伴奏比较接近(或许是刻意接近? 音量70%的话实在听不出什么区别 感觉像在打soft =_= 建议用N的hit来做clap, 配soft whistle也很好听的 ww 如果实在无法接受的话可以试试改到S2 把Kiai段改成S2 效果也不错...另外改完音效后有很多地方可以用clap填上....还有可以听出来某些空缺..记得补上(例:hard的00:38:743 (4), 02:01:560 (2)
  http://puu.sh/dL0s
  
  其实clap的话当时没有找到合适的 也没有想到用N...不过用N的效果的确不错:3
  
  喔 对了 记得source大写Touhou fixed
  
  Arrange: REDALiCE→Tags fixed

[Normal]

• 00:21:419 (2) - 换finish算了╮(╯_╰)╭ fixed
  00:28:602 (1) - finish开头? fixed
  00:41:278 (1) - finish结尾? fixed
  00:55:221 (4) - finish? fixed
  00:55:644~01:10:433 (T) - 其实感觉这段只用soft-whistle有点弱..不如继续用前一段的音效模式 好
  02:09:588 (3) - clap开头? fixed
  02:11:278 (5) - ^ fixed

[Hard]

• 00:30:292 (1) - 删NC? fixed
  00:31:137 (3) - 加NC? fixed
  00:30:926 (2) - ...建议往前挪1/4 或者干脆挪一边 总之别叠着就好...前面两个1/4容易造成惯性思维 这note很容易手滑啊... 挪开了
  00:38:743 (4) - clap结尾? 漏掉了lol
  00:47:193 (2) - 中间在蓝线的哨子改结尾? hmm...这个应该是放在高音上的吧
  01:05:785 (1,2,3) - 其实可以试试这样的节奏 音效也好加一些 好!后面的也一并修改了
  02:01:560 (2) - ^ fixed
  02:10:010 (2) - 中间在蓝线的哨子改结尾? ^
  02:22:686 (1) - 删NC ? fixed
  02:23:531 (4) - 加NC ? fixed

就这样 还是张不错的图 >_>

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
关于上面提到了的Normal星数问题，这个东西说有算有，但是除非你得罪人太多，没人拿这个找你碴。
但另一方面，在你拉低难度后，分数的分布就糟糕透了。Normal只有1M而Hard有快10M。
一个平衡点可能是你把OD/HP拉高1，分数会到1.5M（星数3.03），如果你愿意改Tick Rate 2还可以进一步加分。
作为第一张图来讲够好了。但是稍微苦一点的是：就算我想夸哪点似乎没有太特别的地方。[Hard]00:15:714 (1) - 这里起的一段不错。

NM的话吧HP和AR都拉高了1

[Normal]
AR+1，上面提到的HP/OD+1会对分数有一定帮助。
01:10:433 (1) - 尾finish或许比较好，一方面有进kiai，另一方面和后一个slider有一定照应
01:41:278 - kiai段还有break是比较无理的 这段已添加
02:20:151 (3) - 02:26:912 (3) - 不会有种一直在小的范围里转圈圈的感觉吗。。？
02:33:250 (1) - 同01:10:433 (1)
这个难度莫名的让人感到过于横平竖直（尽管你用的并没那么多）。这或许因为那些太“直”的slider都被集中到一起用了。。。
另外对于弧度不大的slider，我个人不建议用红点+白点来画，并不好看。

NM难度all fixed

[Hard]
建议做节奏时有个提前的规划。目前clap位置时断时续，不太连贯。 这个会进行大修改的..
00:53:109 (4) - 给个new combo？ fixed
一个有点奇怪的感觉是我觉得你进了kiai，节奏反而缓了，比如01:12:545 (1)这种1/1在之前不常有，kiai里却很多。说为了歌词重音是可以理解的，但是总体上似乎不是很协调。 嗯 我会适当的改下节奏
02:15:926 (4) - new combo fixed
02:23:109 (5,6) - 这里可以考虑换个位置。如果要叠，看一下实际play的感觉手动右下移一点 改换了排版
02:49:306 (2) - 碰到HP bar了 fixed
00:05:574 (4,5,6,7) - 个人习惯，这种如果没有特别用意，就不要叠了，因为打时的停滞感在大多情况下并不好 改换了排版

如果要我泡的话到至少8星后给我个论坛PM。

• - SB歌詞這字體瞎我一臉 XD
  - 我要吐槽綾倉盟做野宮あゆみ的歌
  - 音效音量整體偏低, 這歌可是需要你各種加激情音效, 現在顯的太安靜了些..

• 00:04:940 (3) - 開頭位置最好補一個whistle, 前面兩個slider開頭都加了..這邊少一個感覺像漏加
  00:10:855 (1,1) - combo color明顯的關係, 這邊的nc顯的比較突兀..建議00:10:855 (1) - 刪nc
  00:15:081 (1) - 這個位置放上finish效果會好些...
  00:21:841 (3) - 三連finish稍那啥, 建議這一個換成clap, 或者切NC1用finish (後面這個要降低大概15%音量)
  00:51:419 (4,5) - 4結尾加clap, 5開頭改成finish
  00:53:954 (1,2,3,4) - 可以考慮音量遞增
  01:15:926 (4) - 位置尷尬: http://puu.sh/eiZa , 另外折返上的whistle加的不理智...
  01:23:531 (5) - 可clap
  02:08:743 (2) - 既然前面間距可以開到1.24, 不如這個也開高一些...把位置移好看點吧: http://puu.sh/eiZO
  02:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - 同00:53:954
  02:26:912 (3) - 沒音效嗎? 像02:23:531 (3) -
  02:46:348 (5) - clap
  
  
  
  Hard
  [list:416e1]

Pokie wrote:

抱歉這兩天沒空開osu -w- 來mod了

General

• - SB歌詞這字體瞎我一臉 XD
  - 我要吐槽綾倉盟做野宮あゆみ的歌
  - 音效音量整體偏低, 這歌可是需要你各種加激情音效, 現在顯的太安靜了些.. 个人不是很喜欢那么大的音量=A=

Normal

• 00:04:940 (3) - 開頭位置最好補一個whistle, 前面兩個slider開頭都加了..這邊少一個感覺像漏加
  00:10:855 (1,1) - combo color明顯的關係, 這邊的nc顯的比較突兀..建議00:10:855 (1) - 刪nc
  00:15:081 (1) - 這個位置放上finish效果會好些...
  00:21:841 (3) - 三連finish稍那啥, 建議這一個換成clap, 或者切NC1用finish (後面這個要降低大概15%音量) 这个三连的话先保留下
  00:51:419 (4,5) - 4結尾加clap, 5開頭改成finish
  00:53:954 (1,2,3,4) - 可以考慮音量遞增
  01:15:926 (4) - 位置尷尬: http://puu.sh/eiZa , 另外折返上的whistle加的不理智...
  01:23:531 (5) - 可clap
  02:08:743 (2) - 既然前面間距可以開到1.24, 不如這個也開高一些...把位置移好看點吧: http://puu.sh/eiZO
  02:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - 同00:53:954
  02:26:912 (3) - 沒音效嗎? 像02:23:531 (3) -
  02:46:348 (5) - clap
  
  NM难度All fixed
  
  
  
  Hard
  [list:3822f]

Hitsound想mod的比較多, 我決定不一條條寫出來了..直接改一個給你看看效果, 如果你覺得不好的話就直接刪掉吧-w- 感觉不错啊 修改了一些>///<
下面是我沒有改掉的mod
00:15:081 (4) - 這個...我覺得如果你要跟吉他, 前面的(3)就不應該跟鼓..否則太違和了 这里只能由鼓起了啊..
00:55:644 ~ 沒有clap? 鼓點這麼明顯, 就算SC2的clap也好啊T_T fixed
01:16:348 (1) - 這梗建議刪掉, 不是太適合歌之餘也太突兀了囧..另外建議下這個節奏: http://puu.sh/ej71 兩個踩藍線的下whistle 先保留下看看
01:23:530 (T) - 用0.75x比較好o_o 0.75感觉有点长了= = 不是很好看呢
01:37:052 (3) - ^ ^
02:13:390 (6,7,8) - 節奏改成: http://puu.sh/ej9H fixed
02:39:165 (1) - 同01:16:348 ^
02:39:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - combo巨長, 都到16了 oops 这段remap过 匆忙之下忘记加了 thanks~lol
02:44:869 (4) - 位置移到三角中心比較好? http://puu.sh/ejb0 换了一个位置了

Pokie wrote:

Hard的音效好像還是沒有改掉O_Q? (除了有寫在mod上的)

gabiacob wrote:

I like song

• General

1. I don't like the way you use that soft-hitclap2 custom sample. I mean, what is the point of using a sample that sounds almost exactly like the song? It isn't noticeable. The first time that I tested your map.. I had to go to the editor and check if you used samples or not. Obviously, this is just my personal opinion. I suggest you to replace that sample with another one more.. "noticeable".
   
   
2. You need a Easy difficulty. The Normal diff is a bit tough to be the easiest difficulty of the mapset in my opinion.
   
   
3. The Kiai times of all the difficulties aren't placed downbeat (they aren't snapped). Please fix this.

• [Normal]

1. I am wrong or.. this difficulty has spacing problems?.. I'm saying this because sometimes when I select a note with distance snap activated.. the note doesn't seems to be placed properly.. but the map looks nice.. It doesn't look like it has spacing problems. I'm confused lol.
   
   
2. 00:51:419 (4) - How about adding a new combo here? It fits nice with the music, and doing this you'll also avoid that high combo number 6 (I think that 6~9 combo numbers are high for this kind of difficulties).
3. 01:07:475 (2) - Hm. Maybe add a hitfinish at the start of this slider? Sounds good imo.
4. 01:43:813 (4,5,6) - Antijump in a Normal difficulty (that is also the easiest difficulty of the mapset)? I suggest you to place this notes with distance snap instead of changing spacing like this.
5. 03:00:714 (1) - I think that this spinner starts way early after (4). I suggest you to move it to 03:00:926.
   
   
   Overall, it's a nice difficulty.

• [Hard]

1. 00:04:200 (4) - I suggest you to move this slider to the next red tick, and make it 1 tick shorter. Sounds way better in my opinion.
2. 00:07:792 (5) - ^
3. 00:27:757 - Drag the end of the break here. I think that it fits better with the music.
4. 00:34:834 (4) - Hm. Again. I suggest you to move this slider to the next tick and make it 1 tick shorter.
5. 00:39:588 (1,2,3) - Maybe, to make more "emphasis" to this part, you can try this:
   
   SPOILER

   1. Add hitfinish at the start of the slider (1).
   2. Add hitfinish at the start of the slider (2).
   3. Add hitfinish to (3).
6. 01:06:630 (4,7) - Add hitfinish at the start of (4) and (7). (For the same reason as above). Sounds nice to me.
7. 01:16:348 (1) - The end of this slider is not clearly visible because of the shape and the hitbursts. I think that you should change the shape of this slider to fix this:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:19:940 (4,5) - This sudden jump doesn't fit well here in my opinion.
9. 01:34:517 (1,2,3) - I think that you should reduce a bit this jump. Is really big for a Hard difficulty in my opinion.
10. 02:29:447 (3,5) - And again, to make some "emphasis", add hitfinish at the start of (3) and (5).
11. 02:39:165 (1) - Again, this slider's end is not visible because of the shape and the hitbursts.
12. 02:58:179 (1,2,3) - Same as I told you about 01:34:517 (1,2,3).
    
    
    Nice difficulty too. It's fun to play, but I feel some jumps a bit big.

Kei wrote:

Hi.

• General

1. I don't like the way you use that soft-hitclap2 custom sample. I mean, what is the point of using a sample that sounds almost exactly like the song? It isn't noticeable. The first time that I tested your map.. I had to go to the editor and check if you used samples or not. Obviously, this is just my personal opinion. I suggest you to replace that sample with another one more.. "noticeable".
   
   I'll try to find a more noticeable clap if not...maybe use the original soft-clap
   
2. You need a Easy difficulty. The Normal diff is a bit tough to be the easiest difficulty of the mapset in my opinion.
   
   hmm..I've discussed with MAT about the star rating and he said it's ok. If necessary, I'll make easy
   Anyway thanks for suggestion
   
   
3. The Kiai times of all the difficulties aren't placed downbeat (they aren't snapped). Please fix this. resnaped

• [Normal]

1. I am wrong or.. this difficulty has spacing problems?.. I'm saying this because sometimes when I select a note with distance snap activated.. the note doesn't seems to be placed properly.. but the map looks nice.. It doesn't look like it has spacing problems. I'm confused lol. as you said about star rating above maybe the spacing cause the problem but actually It's easier than 3star,right?
   
   
2. 00:51:419 (4) - How about adding a new combo here? It fits nice with the music, and doing this you'll also avoid that high combo number 6 (I think that 6~9 combo numbers are high for this kind of difficulties). fixed
3. 01:07:475 (2) - Hm. Maybe add a hitfinish at the start of this slider? Sounds good imo. fixed
4. 01:43:813 (4,5,6) - Antijump in a Normal difficulty (that is also the easiest difficulty of the mapset)? I suggest you to place this notes with distance snap instead of changing spacing like this. oops didn't consider about it fixed
5. 03:00:714 (1) - I think that this spinner starts way early after (4). I suggest you to move it to 03:00:926.
   It's ok I think
   
   
   Overall, it's a nice difficulty.

• [Hard]

1. 00:04:200 (4) - I suggest you to move this slider to the next red tick, and make it 1 tick shorter. Sounds way better in my opinion. It's custom rhythm and It's ok imo
2. 00:07:792 (5) - ^ ^
3. 00:27:757 - Drag the end of the break here. I think that it fits better with the music. ok
4. 00:34:834 (4) - Hm. Again. I suggest you to move this slider to the next tick and make it 1 tick shorter. ^
5. 00:39:588 (1,2,3) - Maybe, to make more "emphasis" to this part, you can try this:
   
   SPOILER

   1. Add hitfinish at the start of the slider (1).
   2. Add hitfinish at the start of the slider (2).
   3. Add hitfinish to (3).
   sounds cool
6. 01:06:630 (4,7) - Add hitfinish at the start of (4) and (7). (For the same reason as above). Sounds nice to me. ^
7. 01:16:348 (1) - The end of this slider is not clearly visible because of the shape and the hitbursts. I think that you should change the shape of this slider to fix this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   maybe ur right but I've find several players to test it and it's ok for them so keep it first
8. 01:19:940 (4,5) - This sudden jump doesn't fit well here in my opinion. ok fixed
9. 01:34:517 (1,2,3) - I think that you should reduce a bit this jump. Is really big for a Hard difficulty in my opinion. actually it's hard+
10. 02:29:447 (3,5) - And again, to make some "emphasis", add hitfinish at the start of (3) and (5). ok
11. 02:39:165 (1) - Again, this slider's end is not visible because of the shape and the hitbursts. as above
12. 02:58:179 (1,2,3) - Same as I told you about 01:34:517 (1,2,3). sorry no change
    
    
    Nice difficulty too. It's fun to play, but I feel some jumps a bit big.

Hm...about the difficulty I think the [Hard] difficulty maybe intervene between Hard and Insane...
I'll mention it in the creator's words

That's all. I hope this was helpful.

Good luck!

1. 01:34:517 (1,2,3) - 虽然我玩起来这里没什么大碍，但是基于你前面00:51:419 (1,2,3) 后面02:15:081 (5,6)都保持相同DS的情况我还是建议DS一致

1. 00:05:890 (5) - 有点多余了，而且我不建议在白线踩三连，很容易出100，节奏感没踩红线强。不过我建议的话还是像00:04:095 (3,4,5) - 这样排列好一些
2. 00:10:855 (5,6,7) - ^
3. 01:20:468 (7) - 这两连显得有点笨拙，我建议这个蓝线的Note去掉然后迎合01:21:419 (1,2,3)

成绩

KayeSara wrote:

果然没有失望诶，做的很好:3

[Normal]

1. 01:34:517 (1,2,3) - 虽然我玩起来这里没什么大碍，但是基于你前面00:51:419 (1,2,3) 后面02:15:081 (5,6)都保持相同DS的情况我还是建议DS一致 嘛 考虑到kiai的效果所以先保留一下0.0

[Hard]

1. 00:05:890 (5) - 有点多余了，而且我不建议在白线踩三连，很容易出100，节奏感没踩红线强。不过我建议的话还是像00:04:095 (3,4,5) - 这样排列好一些 lol感觉那样的话就有点单调了..
2. 00:10:855 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
3. 01:20:468 (7) - 这两连显得有点笨拙，我建议这个蓝线的Note去掉然后迎合01:21:419 (1,2,3) 改了 后面的也一并修改了

哦。。。没了，不过我把我第一PC录下来给你参考吧XD，中间的4个50无视，那是电脑卡了下

成绩

NatsumeRin wrote:

kiai time is different in the 2 diffs, plz check them and then call me back, no kud.

Edit: the beginning of first and last kiai in [Hard] is still not snapped.

NatsumeRin wrote:

good enough for a first map.

Snowy Dream wrote:

yo~这么快就拿到第一个泡了







我感到我无限苦逼

eikkaleyd wrote:

nice 别坑掉了……

Ayakura Mei wrote:

eikkaleyd wrote:

nice 别坑掉了……

尽力吧QAQ

Snowy Dream wrote:

最近泡图越来越多 想rank不容易。。。
比如我又被戳了2个泡。