1. 01:25:676 - Kiai should end here on all difficulties. Bolding because Normal's kiai is unsnapped and you might as well move them all.
2. 00:16:841 - Map this break on all difficulties (Easy can have the break). It's an extremely short song that doesn't need breaks.
3. The combo colors very closely resemble the background colors. It makes the objects hard to see. Combined with the fact that they are all bright, it's making my eyes bleed. It would be nice if there was some more contrast between combo colors and the background.

1. 00:44:580 (1) - This slider is too close to the previous spinner on the timeline. Beginner players don't have enough time to stop spinning here.
2. 00:46:635 (3) - Short multiple repeat sliders like this can be hard to read. Try making this two sliders instead.
3. 00:57:731 (1) - This circle is too close to the previous spinner on the timeline. Beginner players don't have enough time to stop spinning here.
4. 01:17:457 (6) - Short multiple repeat sliders like this can be hard to read. Try making this two sliders instead.
5. 01:20:745 (3) - Short multiple repeat sliders like this can be hard to read. Try making this two sliders instead.

1. A lot of objects in this difficulty overlap each other in ugly ways. This is because you used grid 3 to place objects, and grid 3 isn't too precise. Here's an example: http://puu.sh/k9FY : Notice how the 5 overlaps the 6 but the 6 is not touching the 1. It would be great if these little visual problems were fixed.
2. 00:13:553 (1,2) - Bad spacing. 2 is too close to 1. Desired spacing is 1.2x
3. 00:28:142 (1,2,3) - Make this a repeat slider for better readability. This is quite tough to read.
4. 00:59:375 - There's quite a large difficulty jump here. This makes the difficulty feel rather inconsistent. You might want to either make this last part easier or make the beginning harder.
5. 01:05:950 (1,2) - Bad spacing. 2 is too far from the 1's endpoint.
6. 01:10:882 (1,2,3) - This spacing is questionably difficult. Remember, this is a Normal, not a Hard.
7. 01:19:101 (1,2) - Bad spacing. The 2 is too far from the 1's endpoint.
8. 01:24:032 (1) - Short multiple repeat sliders like this can be hard to read. Since this is the only one in the map, it's very unexpected.
9. 01:24:032 (1,1) - Bad spacing, the objects are too close together.

1. HP -1
2. Consider OD +1
3. Consider AR -1
4. 00:15:608 - Remove finish sound, sounds out of place.
5. 00:16:019 - Remove finish sound, sounds out of place.
6. 00:16:430 - Remove finish sound, sounds out of place.
7. 00:28:142 (1,2,3) - Consider making this a repeat slider for better readability.
8. 01:10:882 (1) - This would look better if it wasn't touching the HP bar.

Philippines wrote:

Done with everything. Thanks XD

1. Not really, kiai time is still different.
2. 
   http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beatmania_ ... ort_Anthem
   ^ As you can see, Artist should be "Kiyommy+Seiya" without additional spaces. You know what to do. Btw, since you have to full submit, remove osb.
3. And you can add Beatmania IIDX 12: Happy Sky (at least to the tags) as original source.
4. This line is useless in all diffs:
   

   StoryFireInFront: 0

5. imo, 100% is too loud. Also, if about hitsounds, you have c:s1 sections,but no custom hitsounds in folder.(yes, it changes nothing, maybe you missed hitsound?)

Rikers wrote:

Could I make a taiko for this? D:

Aleks719 wrote:

Philippines wrote:

Done with everything. Thanks XD

1. Not really, kiai time is still different.
2. 
   http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beatmania_ ... ort_Anthem
   ^ As you can see, Artist should be "Kiyommy+Seiya" without additional spaces. You know what to do. Btw, since you have to full submit, remove osb.
3. And you can add Beatmania IIDX 12: Happy Sky (at least to the tags) as original source. k
4. This line is useless in all diffs:
   

   StoryFireInFront: 0

5. imo, 100% is too loud. Also, if about hitsounds, you have c:s1 sections,but no custom hitsounds in folder.(yes, it changes nothing, maybe you missed hitsound?)removed hit sound. changed everything to Soft sound. Changed 100% to 85%

Hard
Why different slider tickrate in Hard? cause it's a hard diff
00:56:087 (1) - add whistle k
01:10:882 (1) - try to make skider without this overlap i think its fine

01:18:690 (8) - guess nc should be here, instead of 01:19:101 (1) nah
01:25:882 (1) - add finish like in a other diffs?

Normal
00:30:608 (2,3) - fix overlap k
00:37:594 (3,4) - ^ same nty.
01:04:306 (5) - add nc , combo 8 looks too long k
01:18:484 (8) - same about nc, like in Hard k
01:25:676 (1) - remove nc? mope

Easy
00:06:772 (5,6) - spacing I guess it's fine since it has a long break.
00:08:416 (6) - combo 6 is long for easy, try to keep it lower? k
00:35:950 (8) - ^ k
00:23:211 (1,2,3) - spacing goes to 1.0x suddenly i'm trying to make a blanket here so i guess it's okay.
00:35:950 (8) - long combo
00:42:937 (7) - ^

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello, sorry for the delay

Song's Info:
- Tags: Remove the ":" Done. Also, I changed '12' and '18' with 'Twelve' and 'Eighteen'. I guess that's fine, right?

General:
- Inconsistency in kiai times. First kiai in Hard starts at 00:59:375 while in other diffs it starts at 00:59:376 hmm, how can this happen with such small difference. D:
- If you could, please get a better bg, the quality of the one you have right now isn't that good i'll stick to this one atm. XD
- The kiai placement is bad imo, I think that kiai from 00:59:375 to 01:12:115 then start another kiai from 01:13:526 to 01:25:676 will be good It's fine for me though.

Easy:
- 00:29:786 >> Add a finish nope
- 00:32:663 (4,1) >> Unstack, stacks can be hard for novice players it's 1/1 beat so it's fine.
- 01:05:950 (2,3) >> Spacing, this goes for the next few notes too oh shi. fixed XD
- 01:07:594 >> New combo k
- 01:15:813 >> ^ k
- 01:24:032 (1,2) >> Spacing This is done on purpose since this are the final notes so i guess ill just make it a wee bit harder.

Normal:
- 00:04:923 >> New combo
- 00:08:211 (4,5) >> Spacing
- 00:11:498 >> New combo
- 00:21:361 (4,1,2,3,1) >> Way too many stacks for a Normal, players might get confused. Unstack some as you like it's just two notes stack in one slider. this could just serve as a good practice for normal players who are practicing for stacks XD
- 00:31:430 >> Remove new combo then new combo at 00:32:663 after that remove the new combo on the next note nope, sorry
- 00:33:074 (2,3,4,5) >> Really boring and repetitive in a way, also doesn't follow the music a lot
- 00:34:717 >> New combo k
- 00:37:183 >> Add a note i'm trying to follow the vocals on this part, so no.
- 00:37:594 >> New combo
- 00:42:937 >> ^
- 01:09:854 >> New combo yep then remove new combo at 01:10:882 no and after that add a new combo at 01:11:704 k
- 01:14:169 >> New combo k
- 01:25:676 >> Remove new combo no

Hard:
- 00:16:635 >> Remove whistle, add finish k
- 01:10:882 >> Remove new combo then new combo on the next note k, but still not sure about this one. D:
- 01:24:032 (1~17) >> This is kinda hard for a Hard diff, it may be better to make repeating 1/4 sliders It's the final part of the song. Like what I said on your suggestion on the last part of the Easy Diff, also, this is a hard diff :3

* That's all [color=#FF0000]THANK YOU SO MUCH LOVHIN! D[/color]

Haruka wrote:

Finally, the taiko diff is here! Makar8000 made the taiko bg and he also did a mod, but I lost the log. The taiko bg can be found here.

MMzz irc mod

00:26 <MMzz> : when you use a whistle for a cap
00:26 <MMzz> : it makes a echo sound
00:26 <MMzz> : and the clap is a solid it
00:27 <Haruka> : so, I'll go through and um
00:27 <MMzz> : nono
00:27 <MMzz> : ctrl a
00:27 <MMzz> : and hit w twice
00:27 <MMzz> : it will make every note a wistle, ten remove whistle from every note :3
00:27 <Haruka> : oh I see Q_Q
00:28 <MMzz> : but uhh, want IRC mod
00:28 <Haruka> : thank you so much ><
00:28 <MMzz> : or thread mod
00:28 <Haruka> : uhhh, irc would be better so I can talk to you about it, if you don't mind D:
00:28 <MMzz> : ok then
00:28 <MMzz> : First off
00:29 <MMzz> : go into your timing pannel, make sure every timing point is the same volume
00:29 <MMzz> : 80-85% on normal sounds nice to me
00:29 <Haruka> : alright ^^
00:29 <MMzz> : then u, od and p drain 6
00:30 <Haruka> : done~ ^^
00:30 <MMzz> : delete the 2nd to last timing point
00:31 <MMzz> : cause it's not doing anything anymore
00:31 <Haruka> : o.ob
00:31 <MMzz> : hmmm, maybe uh, make the kiai consistant the whole end of the song
00:32 <MMzz> : or not, doesn't really matter
00:32 <Haruka> : you mean the timing points?
00:32 <MMzz> : yeah
00:32 <Haruka> : I can do that :3
00:32 <Haruka> : er
00:32 <Haruka> : nvm I'll just leave it
00:32 <Haruka> : Dx
00:32 <MMzz> : okidokie
00:33 <MMzz> : Now we get to the notes :D
00:33 <Haruka> : yay fun ;w;
00:33 <MMzz> : well make the very first note a finisher v:
00:33 <Haruka> : I can already predict what parts you're gonna bitch at me for :v
00:33 <Haruka> : alright :3
00:34 <MMzz> :  00:04:923 (2,1) - reverse these two
00:35 <MMzz> : you changed the kat positions from red ticks to white ticks
00:35 <MMzz> : threw the flow off
00:35 <MMzz> : 00:05:334 (1,2,1,2,1) -  same for this pattern
00:35 <Haruka> : awesome ;w; totally something I would do
00:35 <MMzz> : you should make something that starts and ends with k
00:36 <Haruka> : alright
00:36 <MMzz> : then 00:05:950 (1) - make this a don
00:37 <MMzz> : 00:06:567 (1) - make this a kat
00:37 <MMzz> : it always plays better when you use the same note after comming off of stuff like kdk or dkd
00:37 <Haruka> : I'll keep that in mind, thanks ^^
00:38 <MMzz> : so now we have that first bit flowing nicely
00:38 <MMzz> : cause the rest of it you did well
00:38 <Haruka> : o:
00:38 <Haruka> : I was just about to say we're gonna be here all night about flow xD
00:38 <Haruka> : because of flow*
00:38 <Haruka> : derp
00:38 <MMzz> : xD
00:39 <MMzz> : alright
00:39 <Haruka> : thank you :3
00:39 <MMzz> : 00:09:649 (2,1) - reverse these two
00:39 <MMzz> : make sure they both have finishes
00:39 <Haruka> : you want 1 as well to have a finish?
00:39 <MMzz> : yes
00:40 <MMzz> : the one that starts the next pattern sequence should
00:40 <Haruka> : alright, done~
00:40 <MMzz> : 00:13:348 (2) - don
00:40 <Haruka> : it's coloured a don here
00:40 <Haruka> : wow, I must've been so asleep while doing this
00:41 <MMzz> : lol
00:41 <Haruka> : alright, changed
00:41 <MMzz> : alright now
00:41 <MMzz> : 00:14:786 (2,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - 
00:41 <MMzz> : I don't like this pattern
00:41 <MMzz> : YOu kinda ignored the finishers
00:41 <MMzz> : now you have 3 choices
00:41 <MMzz> : of what to do with this
00:42 <MMzz> : You could delete it, and map the finishers
00:42 <MMzz> : Leave it how it is, but add finsiher sounds
00:42 <MMzz> : or ignore me cause i'm silly
00:42 <Haruka> : ignore you cause you're si-
00:42 <Haruka> : I mean
00:42 <Haruka> : add finishers :D
00:42 <Haruka> : tell me where I should place them and I'll see what I can do
00:43 <MMzz> : well
00:43 <MMzz> : you can hear them right? o:
00:43 <MMzz> : make the first 4 kat finishers, then the last one a don finisher
00:43 <MMzz> : and replaceing that kdk with a don
00:44 <MMzz> : incase I confused you http://puu.sh/mqNj
00:47 <Haruka> : alright, sorry that took so long ><
00:47 <MMzz> : no problem
00:47 <MMzz> : alright
00:47 <MMzz> : the next part is pretty good
00:48 <MMzz> : just a few things I noticed
00:48 <MMzz> : cause I am a flow nazi
00:48 <MMzz> : so, 00:19:101 (2,1) - reverse these
00:49 <Haruka> : ah, these little guys ;w; do you want me to do that to all of them?
00:49 <Haruka> : like uh
00:49 <MMzz> : uh
00:49 <Haruka> : the first one of those pair in this section that is
00:49 <MMzz> : yes
00:49 <Haruka> : alright
00:49 <MMzz> : xD
00:49 <MMzz> : sorry
00:49 <MMzz> : Remember, you don't HAVE to
00:49 <MMzz> : my feelings won't be hurt if you don't do it, it'd your map
00:50 <Haruka> : gawdseastdgf you know how I feel about this ><
00:50 <MMzz> : wait no
00:50 <MMzz> : don't do it to all of them actually
00:50 <Haruka> : er, alright o.o
00:50 <MMzz> : 00:22:389 (1,1) -  do it to this one
00:51 <MMzz> : don't do it to this one 00:25:676 (1,1) - 
00:51 <MMzz> : cause you had that don infront of it, it flowed nice
00:51 <Haruka> : okay, done :3
00:51 <MMzz> : as for this one 00:28:142 (1,1,1,1,1) - 
00:52 <MMzz> : replace it with withhhh
00:52 <MMzz> : kddkddk
00:52 <MMzz> : and make that kat before it a don
00:52 <MMzz> : I just think that fits the music pretty nice o;
00:52 <MMzz> : 00:30:608 (2,1) - reverse with these ones
00:53 <MMzz> : ok yeah the rest are fine
00:55 <Haruka> : alright
00:55 <MMzz> : mmkay
00:55 <MMzz> : let's go back a little bit
00:55 <MMzz> : to here 00:21:567 (1,2,3,1,1) - 
00:55 <MMzz> : try making this, d kkd k
00:56 <MMzz> : and you changed that kd kd to dk kd already so it will flow nicely~
00:57 <MMzz> : nowww, try making this k ddk 00:31:224 (2,1,2,1) - 
00:57 <Haruka> : changed, thank you ^^
00:58 <Haruka> : done :3
00:58 <MMzz> : hmmm
00:58 <MMzz> : with this 00:32:252 (2,3,1,2,1) - 
00:58 <MMzz> : try making the first note a don
00:58 <MMzz> : then  the same when you use that pattern again right after
00:59 <MMzz> : then make this a kat, and we're done this part O:
01:00 <Haruka> : make what a kat? D:
01:00 <MMzz> : oops
01:00 <Haruka> : :3
01:00 <MMzz> : 00:39:443 (2) - 
01:00 <MMzz> : this one
01:00 <Haruka> : o.ob
01:01 <MMzz> : I like what you did with this calm part
01:01 <MMzz> : basic 1/2 beats for a nice break~
01:02 <Haruka> : aw, thanks :>
01:02 <MMzz> : 00:51:567 (1) - remove this finisher
01:02 <MMzz> : 00:53:211 (1) - ^
01:03 <MMzz> : alright
01:03 <Haruka> : that retarded mush for a stream
01:03 <MMzz> : time for the hard part
01:03 <Haruka> : is gonna have to change too now
01:03 <Haruka> : I think
01:03 <MMzz> : o:
01:03 <Haruka> : er
01:03 <Haruka> : o_o
01:03 <MMzz> : if you wanna change it
01:04 <Haruka> : nono, if it's fine then good x.x
01:04 <MMzz> : Well see
01:04 <MMzz> : it's hard for me to deny streams
01:04 <MMzz> : cause I love them :D
01:04 <Haruka> : LOL
01:04 <Haruka> : well, I'll leave it then because I don't see anything wrong D:
01:04 <MMzz> : So maybe some other modder will have a nice suggestion for it
01:05 <Haruka> : yeah and if so, I'll change it :3
01:05 <Haruka> : er
01:05 <Haruka> : if I feel like it should that is o.ob
01:05 <MMzz> : okidokie
01:05 <Haruka> : anyways, onto the hard part ><
01:05 <MMzz> : one thing
01:05 <MMzz> : I wanna point out
01:05 <MMzz> : Finisher Vocals <3
01:05 <MMzz> : You did them perfect D:
01:05 <MMzz> : That's like ONE OF THE ONLY TIMES
01:05 <MMzz> : you should vocal map
01:05 <MMzz> : cause it's epic \:D/
01:06 <Haruka> : ...
01:06 <Haruka> : Q_Q
01:06 <Haruka> : ♥
01:06 <MMzz> : I do it all the time v:
01:06 <MMzz> : <3
01:06 <Haruka> : ^^ thank you~
01:06 <MMzz> : alrighty
01:06 <MMzz> : 00:59:683 (1,2) - delete this
01:06 <MMzz> : make it uhhh
01:06 <MMzz> : ddk
01:07 <MMzz> : 01:00:813 right here at this empty space
01:07 <MMzz> : start making a don triplet
01:08 <MMzz> : ok this is gonna feel nazi ish
01:08 <Haruka> : alright D:
01:08 <MMzz> : 01:01:532 (1) - delete
01:08 <MMzz> : 01:01:635 (1) - don
01:08 <MMzz> : 01:01:841 (2) - delete
01:09 <Haruka> : can you puush me what this will look like so I don't stumble over it forever xD
01:09 <Haruka> : er, please? ><
01:10 <MMzz> : http://puu.sh/mqWi
01:10 <MMzz> : like that
01:10 <MMzz> : so there is a little pause before your next sequence starts
01:11 <MMzz> : 01:02:457 (1,2,1) - then make this a don triplet and it will tie into your harder sequence nice
01:11 <Haruka> : oh wait, do you mind if you wait for a sec? ><
01:12 <MMzz> : mhm
01:12 <Haruka> : I have to brb cause of parents ._.
01:12 <MMzz> : just tell me if I go to fast
01:12 <MMzz> : ok xD
01:12 <Haruka> : alright thank you, I'll be quick 
01:12 <MMzz> : mmk :3
01:12 <Haruka> : LOL xD
01:23 <Haruka> : alright I'm back D:
01:23 <Haruka> : sorry for the long wait ><
01:23 <Haruka> : if I suddenly "dc" then just wait cause I'll be back OTL
01:24 <MMzz> : ok xD
01:24 <MMzz> : so um
01:24 <MMzz> : after this 2nd part of the kiai
01:24 <MMzz> : would you be ok with copy/paste, or do you want it to be different o:
01:25 <Haruka> : o:
01:25 <Haruka> : just let me listen for a sec
01:26 <MMzz> : mmk
01:26 <MMzz> : like you could copy paste
01:26 <MMzz> : but change a few parts
01:26 <MMzz> : but it still keeps that general beat
01:27 <Haruka> : meh, I think copy/paste sound fine
01:28 <Haruka> : I'll just change it up a bit
01:28 <MMzz> : :3
01:28 <MMzz> : ok then
01:28 <MMzz> : well going on
01:28 <MMzz> : 01:05:334 add a don here
01:28 <MMzz> : that pause sounds weird
01:29 <Haruka> : you sound weird
01:29 <MMzz> : ;_;
01:29 <Haruka> : jk ♥
01:29 <MMzz> : so mean
01:29 <Haruka> : changed ^^
01:29 <Haruka> : D:
01:29 <Haruka> : I was joking ;w;
01:29 <MMzz> :  now take 01:06:156 (1) - 
01:29 <MMzz> : and move it forward to the blue tick
01:30 <Haruka> : okay o:
01:30 <MMzz> : then add a don here 01:06:361, and here 01:06:772
01:30 <MMzz> : 01:07:594 (2,3,1,2,1) - maybe have this a pattern that starts and ends with a don
01:30 <MMzz> : 01:08:211 (1) - then this would be a kat
01:32 <MMzz> : 01:08:827 add a don here
01:33 <MMzz> : 01:09:032 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - then reverse these? so it's k dd dd k
01:33 <MMzz> : 01:10:882 (1,2) - then make both of these finishers
01:33 <MMzz> : and you're ready for copy paste
01:33 <MMzz> : o:
01:34 <MMzz> : and a not so undermapped kiai
01:34 <Haruka> : wow, that was a lot xD
01:34 <Haruka> : but thank you :3
01:35 <MMzz> : No rpoblem :3

There are a few mods in here which I said I changed, but I went back and changed it later, just to let you know; like for example, most of the changes were when Mitten said "make this pattern start and end on a don", in which I would start on a don, but I would end on a kat.

I know I said this to you many times through PM, but again, sorry for taking so long!

Haruka wrote:

Finally, the taiko diff is here! Makar8000 made the taiko bg and he also did a mod, but I lost the log. The taiko bg can be found here.

Makar8000 wrote:

I lost the log too so just a small recheck~ we fail OTL

00:20:745 (1,2,3,1) - dkkd please D: There are cymbal hits on the suggested kk, and dddk doesn't really play well here. sounds good!
00:25:676 (1,1) - Use dk here for better flow with the next double and the previous pattern. more flow, more flow!
00:33:895 (1,1) - Same as mentioned above, it would feel much better because of the patterns before this. done~

Good job~ thank you~


@Philippines: Add "Haruka" and "Sweet_Serenitee" to the tags now that you have a guest difficulty. oh yeah! thanks in advance, Philippines!

xcherry wrote:

mod for the taiko here. :3

irc mod for taiko

19:55 <Haruka> : o.o?
19:56 <xcherry> : sorry
19:56 <xcherry> : I crashed
19:56 <xcherry> : anyways
19:59 <xcherry> : HP Drain Rate and Overall difficulty
19:59 <xcherry> : did someone tell you to do that
20:00 <Haruka> : yes
20:00 <Haruka> : Mitten did
20:00 <xcherry> : eh okay
20:00 <xcherry> : 00:03:485 (1) - big D?
20:01 <Haruka> : I was told big K xD
20:01 <xcherry> : o.o;
20:01 <xcherry> : big don sounds better but eh okay
20:02 <xcherry> : 00:04:101 (2) - don?
20:03 <Haruka> : k flows better
20:03 <xcherry> : how does it flow better...
20:03 <xcherry> : okay w/e all these are just suggestions
20:04 <xcherry> : 00:06:361 (1) - don ._.
20:04 <xcherry> : this one I kinda recommend
20:04 <xcherry> : kdk sounds a little strange here
20:04 <xcherry> : 00:09:649 (1) - big D?
20:05 <xcherry> : 00:11:087 (2) - k
20:05 <xcherry> : 00:11:498 (1) - k
20:05 <xcherry> : those 2 are suggestions
20:05 <Haruka> : o_o
20:05 <xcherry> : o.o
20:05 <xcherry> : all are suggestions except the big D and don ._.
20:05 <xcherry> : 00:12:937 (1) - k?
20:07 <Haruka> : I originally had that suggestion as a big D
20:07 <Haruka> : up there
20:07 <Haruka> : I'm listening to it
20:07 <xcherry> : it sounds better like that
20:07 <xcherry> : 00:28:142 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 
20:07 <xcherry> : omfg
20:07 <xcherry> : you
20:07 <xcherry> : asdf
20:07 <xcherry> : TAIKO GODDESS
20:07 <xcherry> : AMAZING
20:07 <Haruka> : and I see why it should be big D K D K
20:07 <xcherry> : ok
20:07 <Haruka> : what
20:07 <xcherry> : sounds awesome
20:07 <Haruka> : D:
20:07 <xcherry> : o_ob
20:08 <xcherry> : but no
20:08 <Haruka> : asdf thank you ><
20:08 <xcherry> : np o3o
20:08 <xcherry> : that part should be
20:08 <xcherry> : D K D D
20:08 <Haruka> : :v
20:10 <xcherry> : 00:14:375 - a note?
20:10 <xcherry> : k or d works
20:10 <xcherry> : whichever
20:10 <xcherry> : 00:24:238 - don o.ob
20:11 <xcherry> : try avoidng a lot of 2 - 4 combos
20:11 <xcherry> : unless it's called for
20:12 <xcherry> : 00:16:738 - note?
20:12 <xcherry> : I suggest a don
20:12 <xcherry> : even though you hate dkd lol
20:13 <Haruka> : no it sounds not that good ><
20:14 <xcherry> : wut
20:14 <xcherry> : it sounds better D:
20:14 <xcherry> : http://puu.sh/nu9R
20:14 <xcherry> : more suggestions ^
20:14 <xcherry> : I typed them to Mark orz
20:14 <xcherry> : er
20:14 <xcherry> : holy fuck
20:14 <xcherry> : I meant
20:14 <xcherry> : 00:16:841
20:14 <Haruka> : o.o
20:15 <Haruka> : retype? xD
20:15 <xcherry> : = =
20:15 <xcherry> : okay
20:15 <Haruka> : x.x
20:15 <xcherry> : 00:25:470 (1) - kat?
20:16 <xcherry> : er
20:16 <xcherry> : 00:25:470 (1,2,1,2,1) - inverse these all
20:16 <xcherry> : and this
20:16 <xcherry> : 00:26:293 (2,3,1) - 
20:17 <Haruka> : inverse why? D:
20:17 <xcherry> : it sounds better o.o
20:17 <Haruka> : I need reasons here ;w;
20:17 <Haruka> : Dx
20:17 <xcherry> : it just sounds better with the background ._.
20:18 <xcherry> : 00:24:238 - remember note here too
20:18 <xcherry> : this is for flow issues
20:18 <xcherry> : and sound
20:18 <xcherry> : 00:26:704 (2,3,1,2) - this section should be something like you're using: dk kd or something
20:18 <xcherry> : not a triple
20:19 <xcherry> : 00:32:252 (1,1,2,1,1) - this... I'll give a suggestion
20:19 <xcherry> : this sounds really off
20:20 <xcherry> : dkkkd maybe
20:20 <xcherry> : 00:32:868 (1) - then k here
20:21 <Haruka> : well that part I was told
20:21 <Haruka> : to start and end on a don previously
20:21 <Haruka> : but that pattern you suggested doesn't sound right
20:21 <xcherry> : well that pattern you have isn't any better
20:21 <xcherry> : it just sounds random
20:22 <Haruka> : blah
20:22 <xcherry> : what about
20:22 <xcherry> : dkdkd
20:22 <xcherry> : 00:32:868 (1) - then k here
20:22 <xcherry> : with that
20:22 <xcherry> : 00:33:074 (2,1,1,2,1) - 
20:22 <xcherry> : this needs no fixing
20:23 <xcherry> : sounds good together
20:24 <Haruka> : it plays bad imo
20:24 <xcherry> : okay up to you
20:24 <Haruka> : though the flow is better
20:24 <Haruka> : I dunno
20:24 <xcherry> : up to you
20:25 <xcherry> : all I can do it give suggestions
20:25 <xcherry> : whether you listen or not is up to you
20:25 <Haruka> : alright
20:25 <Haruka> : keep going then
20:25 <xcherry> : 00:37:286 - notw
20:25 <xcherry> : 00:37:491 - here too
20:26 <xcherry> : 00:38:827 (3) - don
20:27 <xcherry> : 00:40:676 - note?
20:27 <xcherry> : or fix this pattern around
20:27 <xcherry> : it plays not very well
20:27 <xcherry> : 00:40:265 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - 
20:27 <Haruka> : accepted the don suggestion
20:28 <xcherry> : alright :3
20:28 <Haruka> : last suggestion flows well ._.
20:28 <xcherry> : all the undermapped parts
20:28 <xcherry> : follow the vocals too much
20:28 <xcherry> : so lets
20:28 <xcherry> : add some notes
20:28 <Haruka> : wut
20:29 <Haruka> : that part is totally fine imo
20:29 <xcherry> : mmm
20:29 <xcherry> : no
20:29 <Haruka> : ._.
20:29 <Haruka> : okay
20:29 <Haruka> : come at me then
20:29 <xcherry> : some of it follows the vocals too much D:
20:29 <Haruka> : let's see what I can do
20:29 <xcherry> : I just want to add some notes
20:29 <xcherry> : so it's not like a guessing game
20:29 <xcherry> : 00:44:781 - don
20:29 <xcherry> : 00:44:889 - don?
20:29 <xcherry> : 00:44:991 (2) - make this a kat
20:29 <Haruka> : it's suppose to be undermapped
20:30 <Haruka> : because of the way it sounds
20:30 <xcherry> : well
20:30 <xcherry> : I can see why
20:30 <xcherry> : but we don't want it like
20:30 <Haruka> : it's a perfect part to undermap
20:30 <xcherry> : so undermapped that it's hard to play
20:30 <xcherry> : it is
20:30 <xcherry> : I agree
20:30 <xcherry> : it's the best part to undermap
20:30 <xcherry> : but it could use some more notes
20:30 <xcherry> : because you're following the vocals a bit much
20:30 <xcherry> : you could at least make it consistent
20:30 <xcherry> : like 00:46:430 (2) - don here
20:31 <xcherry> : 00:48:279 (2) - kat here (there's no note here right now)
20:31 <xcherry> : 00:45:608 - note here if you want to keep the triple
20:33 <xcherry> : 00:51:772 - note here
20:33 <xcherry> : don or kat
20:33 <xcherry> : 00:53:416 - here too but keep it consistent with the other suggestion
20:33 <xcherry> : so if you choose don, then don here , vice versa
20:34 <xcherry> : 00:55:163 (1) - 00:55:368 (1) - remove these
20:34 <xcherry> : 00:55:265 (1) - this if you want
20:34 <xcherry> : since you're following the vocals
20:34 <Haruka> : wait
20:34 <Haruka> : what the fuck
20:34 <Haruka> : all those suggestions
20:35 <Haruka> : are already there
20:35 <Haruka> : I don't know what you're talking about
20:35 <Haruka> : 00:46:635
20:35 <Haruka> : er
20:35 <Haruka> : 00:46:635 -
20:35 <Haruka> : theres a don there
20:35 <Haruka> : 00:48:485 -
20:35 <Haruka> : there's a kat there
20:35 <xcherry> : o.o
20:35 <xcherry> : well if they are then ignore those suggestions
20:36 <xcherry> : just don't get pissed, lol
20:36 <xcherry> : be glad that they are
20:36 <xcherry> : my bad, dunno what happened
20:36 <xcherry> : for those fillers btw
20:36 <xcherry> : the ones I said to keep consistent
20:36 <xcherry> : I suggest kat
20:37 <Haruka> : alright well besides the suggestions that were already there
20:37 <Haruka> : yeah no change
20:37 <Haruka> : go on
20:37 <xcherry> : what
20:37 <xcherry> : ...
20:37 <xcherry> : alright fine your choice
20:38 <Haruka> : :3
20:39 <xcherry> : 00:59:580 - note please
20:39 <xcherry> : 01:00:197 - one here is optional
20:40 <xcherry> : I suggest the first especially, but these are just to help with flow
20:41 <xcherry> : 01:04:101 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - asdf
20:41 <xcherry> : this sounds kinda weird
20:41 <xcherry> : try...
20:42 <xcherry> : kkd kdk kkd
20:42 <xcherry> : same pattern but
20:42 <Haruka> : blag
20:42 <xcherry> : 01:06:156 - note ><
20:42 <xcherry> : 01:17:252 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - same here
20:43 <Haruka> : moar
20:43 <xcherry> : o.o?
20:43 <xcherry> : 01:19:314 - same thing with the note here
20:44 <xcherry> : aaaaand
20:44 <xcherry> : that's it \:3/
20:44 <Haruka> : \:D/
20:44 <xcherry> : anything to say before I post? \:D/
20:44 <Haruka> : thanks for the mod xD
20:44 <xcherry> : np ^~^
20:44  *xcherry savelog
20:44 <Haruka> : O:
20:44 <xcherry> : ...
20:44 <xcherry> : LOL
20:44 <xcherry> : DAT AWKWARD MOMENT
20:44 <Haruka> : LOL
20:44 <xcherry> : LMFAO
20:44 <xcherry> : anyways =3=
20:44 <Haruka> : DUDE
20:44 <Haruka> : THAT HAPPENS TO ME
20:44 <Haruka> : LIKE WHEN I MEET SOMEONE NEW
20:44 <Haruka> : AND THEIR LIKE
20:44 <xcherry> : LOL ME TOO
20:45 <xcherry> : JUST LIKE
20:45 <Haruka> : WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU SAVE THAT
20:45  *xcherry savelog
20:45 <xcherry> : OH AWK
20:45 <Haruka> : AND I'M LIKE
20:45 <xcherry> : SRY
20:45 <Haruka> : ... for reasons...
20:45 <Haruka> : LOL
20:45 <xcherry> : IKR
20:45 <xcherry> : AND THEY'RE LIKE
20:45 <xcherry> : creepy...
20:45 <xcherry> : LOL
20:45 <Haruka> : ^^^^
20:45 <Haruka> : LOL
20:45 <Haruka> : like
20:45 <Haruka> : stalker much
20:45 <Haruka> : Dx
20:45 <Haruka> : anyways, go ahead and post for kudosu
20:45 <Haruka> : I'll upload my diff soon xD
20:45 <xcherry> : yaaaay ^-^ thanks c:
20:46 <Haruka> : I didn't change much xD
20:46 <Haruka> : but yeah, mods yay
20:46 <xcherry> : = =

good luck with this mapset! O~O/

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko check as requested thanks for taking a look

[Taiko]
00:59:375 - start kiai exactly here fixed!

00:20:745 - ending with d sounds a bit odd, you may want to try kkdk sounds lovely, thank you~
00:47:046 - k d
00:59:375 - finish this note as well (espeially there's clear accent in the music ah, thanks for pointing that out
01:25:676 - add a note before spinner starts may sounds good ~

yeah the taiko diff sounds nice. thank you!

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Modding~~

[General]
The Kiai Time between 01:24:032 - 01:25:676 is strange. I suggest to remove this time.

[Easy]
00:27:320 (2) - Set Whistle at End Point.
00:28:964 (4) - Remove Whistle at Start Point.
00:29:786 (1) - Set Finish. no
00:48:690 (4) - NC?
01:11:293 (2) - Set Finish. no
01:17:457 (3) - Set on every Hit Finish except on Start Point. no
01:22:389 (4) - NC

[Normal]
00:33:074 (4) - NC
01:04:717 (2,3) - Set on Start Point by both Whistle. no
01:11:293 (2) - IMO it looks irritating, place like this: http://puu.sh/oh4u
01:24:032 (1) - Except of the Start Point, set on every point Finish. no

[Hard]
00:29:786 (1) - Set Finish. no
01:04:717 (2,3) - Set on Start Point by both Whistle. no

A bit short, but the Map is good. IMO there's not much to find anymore. So go call a MAT. owo

Lissette wrote:

hi~

Hard
00:29:580 (7) - nazi~ move a bit up i don't see the point here, so i just moved it at X:72 Y:60

Normal
00:28:964 (3) - why don't you add a repeat? nope. D:
why don't you use slider tick 2 in this one, like in hard? same goes for easy okay

Easy
00:59:375 (1) - longer half beat okay

I suggest to silence slider slider to all diff, cuz would be so nice *.* i guess it's fine as it is. (:

MeowcenariesJP wrote:

I like the mapset!

But, here in easy:

00:06:361 (4) It starts off as .98x
00:06:772 (1,2) It goes to 1.36x. Most new players would have a hard time with this jump, is there a way to shorten it? Maybe combine the ends of both the sliders?

Lissette wrote:

Haruka's Taiko
01:25:676 - snap kiai time

no kudosu

Byakugan249 wrote:

OMG Haru-chan's first ranked diff D: congratz on the rank

Byakugan249 wrote:

OMG Haru-chan's first ranked diff D: congratz on the rank

Pheon wrote:

Congratulations Haruka with your first ranked taiko!~ \^-^/