1. Easy (2,23 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (4,98 stars, 227 notes)
3. Insane (4,9 stars, 298 notes)
4. Normal (3,74 stars, 119 notes)
5. XK's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 528 notes)

Regou wrote:

From #modreq
[General]
00:00:619 - Lower the volume of this red line to 25% done
[Insane]
00:04:906 (4) - Put it at x:176,y:192 done
^If you do this changes, please put 00:05:192 (5) - up 3/4 grids.[ color=#FF0000]done[/color]
00:05:192 (5) - NC done
00:05:620 (7) - 1 grid lower somewhat i'm done it, but i'm not really sure it can fit well or not =='
00:05:906 (8) - 1 grid left done
00:06:049 (9) - 2 grid left done
00:06:478 (1) - Add a note done
00:06:478 (1) - Put it at x:424,y:104 done
00:07:192 (4) - Don't overlap it on 00:06:621 (2) ! Ugly and hardly see this. done
00:07:478 (5,6,7) - Don't just over lap them orz done
00:19:054 - Delete this note. It doesn't fit the music. deleted, change it with a slider
00:19:340 - Add a note? no, since i'm changing the pattern above, it should be flown well now
00:21:198 (10,1) - Confusing spacing. fixed that part
00:33:774 - Add a note? color=#FF0000]done, changing some parts of it[/color]
00:55:782 (1,1,1) - REMOVE NC done
00:56:926 (1,1,1) - ^ done
00:58:069 (1,1,1) - ^ done
00:59:212 (1,1,1) - ^ done
01:02:642 (1,1,1) - ^ done
01:03:499 (2) - NC done
01:26:365 (1,2,3,4) - Make them into jump will be better imo? i think so too, changing that part a little
rrr lot to improve D:
I'm too lazy and I am not willing to give a full mod D: Sorry!
Good luck!

vwxcrossover wrote:

request mod from pm in game

[General]
move the map to Pending Maps. It's not really done yet, is it ok to move on the pending now? o.o
I suggest you should use distance snap (its under grid snap panel) i'm try it, and looks like i'm starting to understand what is the purpose of the distance snap just for now XD, been turned off of it all the times since i don't know how to use it
move the kiai time in 00:55:476 done

[Easy]

- 00:09:761 - better to add finish sound add it, forgot to place it before, thanks for noticing ><
- 00:20:047 - make the slider more long orz -> http://puu.sh/oSpy there was some stuff that im forgot to fix, one is in that part, should be fixed for now
- 00:21:190 - spacing. its too far and its hard for an easy player. use distance snap owo reduce the spacing, and hey, im finally able to use ditance snap now!! XD
- 01:12:361 - added new BPM ? I think it's ok to put it in that way for now, dunno for later case o.o

[Normal]

- 00:20:904 - replace the note, it will hard for a normal player --" done
- 00:23:476 - replace the note done
- 01:12:361 - added new BPM ? same as the statement at the easy diff

[Hard]

wow wow wow this is hard. change the slider velocity under 1.50 orz done it for now!, repositioning the whole spacing orz
- 00:09:190 (1-5) - replace the note, its insane owo" im reducing the spacing in that part, should be way more easier for now

[Insane]

- 01:20:333 - new combo ? done

good luck<3

Slider Velocity 0.8 - this beatmap is too hard foe beginner
00:02:904 (1) - this circle is overlay
00:23:476 (4) - add new combo
00:24:619 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:190 (2) - down a bit
00:38:619 (4) - left a bit , down a bit
00:38:904 (5) - left 2 bit , down a bit
00:42:904 (1,2,3) - up a bit , right a bit
00:45:190 (5) - set at x:256 , y:280
01:09:190 (1) - down 3 bit

Slider Velocity 1.0 - too hard
00:26:904 (1) - remove new combo
00:28:047 (4) - add new combo
00:41:190 (3) - down 2 bit , left a bit
00:41:761 (4) - set at x:192 , y:312
00:45:761 (3) - up a bit
00:46:333 (3,4) - make a space here
01:05:761 (5) - down 2 bit , right a bit

SPOILER

00:09:761 (5) - left a bit
00:27:476 (4) - down a bit
00:28:333 (1,2) - make a space her
00:31:476 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:761 (3) - left a bit
00:41:190 (8) - up a bit
00:44:619 (3) - right a bit
00:44:904 (4) - down a bit
00:45:190 (5) - up a bit
00:49:761 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:190 (2,8) - down 2 bit , left a bit
01:02:333 (8) - add new combo
01:04:047 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:619 (4) - add new combo
01:05:761 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:904 (5) - add new combo
01:08:047 (1) - remove new combo
01:09:190 (5) - add new combo
01:09:761 (1) - remove new combo
01:10:904 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:476 (1,2) - up 2 bit
01:14:047 (3) - up 4 bit
01:14:619 (5) - left a bit
01:15:190 (7) - up a bit
01:15:476 (8) - up a bit , left a bit
01:16:047 (1) - up a bit
01:17:190 (5) - left a bit
01:17:761 (7,8,9) - down a bit
01:19:476 (1,2,3) - those circle is overlay
01:20:047 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:047 (1,2) - make a space here

00:06:333 - add circle here
00:19:761 (1) - remove new combo
00:20:333 (3) - add new combo
00:22:047 (3,4) - down a bit

Envi wrote:

vwxcrossover wrote:

request mod from pm in game

[General]
move the map to Pending Maps. It's not really done yet, is it ok to move on the pending now? o.o
I suggest you should use distance snap (its under grid snap panel) i'm try it, and looks like i'm starting to understand what is the purpose of the distance snap just for now XD, been turned off of it all the times since i don't know how to use it
move the kiai time in 00:55:476 done



thanks for the mod!!

bestz2541 wrote:

sorry for not good mod and poor english
your beatmap is too harddd > <

[Easy]

Slider Velocity 0.8 - this beatmap is too hard foe beginner done
00:02:904 (1) - this circle is overlay move it to x312, y312 now
00:23:476 (4) - add new combo done
00:24:619 (1) - remove new combo done
00:33:190 (2) - down a bit done
00:38:619 (4) - left a bit , down a bit changing the position there a bit
00:38:904 (5) - left 2 bit , down a bit same as above
00:42:904 (1,2,3) - up a bit , right a bit done
00:45:190 (5) - set at x:256 , y:280 done
01:09:190 (1) - down 3 bit i think it's ok for now, since im changing the SV and fixing some sliders before, the spacing between slider and the notes there are good enough

[Normal]

Slider Velocity 1.0 - too hard
00:26:904 (1) - remove new combo
00:28:047 (4) - add new combo
00:41:190 (3) - down 2 bit , left a bit
00:41:761 (4) - set at x:192 , y:312
00:45:761 (3) - up a bit
00:46:333 (3,4) - make a space here
01:05:761 (5) - down 2 bit , right a bit

done all

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:09:761 (5) - left a bit
00:27:476 (4) - down a bit
00:28:333 (1,2) - make a space her
00:31:476 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:761 (3) - left a bit
00:41:190 (8) - up a bit
00:44:619 (3) - right a bit
00:44:904 (4) - down a bit
00:45:190 (5) - up a bit
00:49:761 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:190 (2,8) - down 2 bit , left a bit
01:02:333 (8) - add new combo
01:04:047 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:619 (4) - add new combo
01:05:761 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:904 (5) - add new combo
01:08:047 (1) - remove new combo
01:09:190 (5) - add new combo
01:09:761 (1) - remove new combo
01:10:904 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:476 (1,2) - up 2 bit
01:14:047 (3) - up 4 bit
01:14:619 (5) - left a bit
01:15:190 (7) - up a bit
01:15:476 (8) - up a bit , left a bit
01:16:047 (1) - up a bit
01:17:190 (5) - left a bit
01:17:761 (7,8,9) - down a bit
01:19:476 (1,2,3) - those circle is overlay
01:20:047 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:047 (1,2) - make a space here

done all

[Insane]

00:06:333 - add circle here not sure if it can blend well if im putting the circle here, i'll try to look for the better patter on it
00:19:761 (1) - remove new combo done
00:20:333 (3) - add new combo done
00:22:047 (3,4) - down a bit done

good luck ˊ• ᵜ •ˋ) ~ ♪

1. Background: Should be 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. This is avaible in Guildlines rules. After this, you must fullsubmit.
2. OSB file: In this beatmap folder has double .osb file. delete them please since you aren't use Storyboard
3. AudioLeadIn: Inconsistency AudioLeadIn in Hard difficulty. Easy, Normal and Insane has same audioleadin, but in Hard isn't same. please be consistent since this map play beginning is same. or, I'm very recommendated to change it to 2000 (use notepad to fix manually)
4. Priview Time: In here too. must be consistent. fix it please.
5. Timing: Why in Easy and Normal has different red timing section(s)? Must be same and consistent in all difficulty. Delete red timing points at 01:12:361 . This is useless. and don't forget to resnap green timing points and the notes.
6. Kiai Time: this too. why has different end kiai time in Insane diff? andd, I think the kiai end is really weird. try to change the end at 01:22:904?
7. Storyboarding:
   1. Disabled Countdown much better imo
   2. Disabled "LetterDuringBreaks" because you has a video
8. Tags: Remove "anime" from this, because that will choose by BAT when ranked. so, 'anime' is useless in here
9. Some notes isn't snapped correctly, check in Timing tab -> Resnap all notes -> yes

1. Unsnapped green timing points at: 00:20:054
2. Difficulty Setting:
   1. I think for Easy more easier read by players if using large Circle Size : 3
   2. Approach Rate (AR) is too fast for Easy. -1 that.
3. Spacing: must be consistent in Easy. That will be make easier read since this is easy diff. some notes hasn't consistent spacing. use distance snap when put notes (click alt) or enable that.
4. add more hitsound in some spot. that's really felt silent.
5. 00:04:047 (3,4,5) - These circle is too hard for newbie. 1/1 in here is too hard since the BPM is higher. I suggest to change them into one slider or delete (4). and if you can, don't stack notes in Easy for easier play.
6. 00:05:190 (1) - add finish in slider's beginning for guitar sound
7. 00:07:476 (3) - add whistle in here for cymbal sounder. finish sound is ok too, but I think that to noisy in here.
8. 00:08:619 (1,2,3,4,5) - here same too. these circle isn't easy to catch by newbie. Change into one slider or repeater slider. then, in (5) place, add finish sound for cymbal sounder too. much better.
9. 00:35:190 - 00:36:619 - Map this part. That's hasn't reason why should add break in there. The break is really useless.
10. 00:39:476 (6) - add new combo in here. 1 - 9 combo set is too long for easy.
11. 00:46:333 (1) - why not use finish sound in here? that's more better since the cymbal sounder is heard.
12. 00:48:619 (1) - same as above
13. 00:50:904 (1) - ^, but in slider's beginning
14. 00:53:190 - 00:54:904 - same as 00:35:190
15. 00:55:476 (1) - add finish for kiai's start effect?
16. 00:58:904 (3) - too many repeat in here. will get bored for player. change this to another pattern
17. 01:10:333 (3) - same as above
18. 01:11:761 - 01:13:190 - same as 00:35:190
19. 01:20:619 - 01:22:904 - add spinner in here for long vocal

• Unsnapped green timing points at: 00:20:054

1. Difficulty Setting:
   1. HP drain : -2
   2. AR : -2
   3. OD : -1
   4. the difficulty setting has your set is for hard.
2. about spacing and hitsound comment is same with Easy
3. 00:01:761 (2) - remove clap in slider's beginning. that's weird since you just added whistle in (1)
4. 00:02:904 (3,1) - add whistle
5. 00:05:190 (4) - add new combo
6. 00:09:761 (4) - remove clap, no drum sound is heard in there
7. 00:33:761 (1) - this new combo is useless since same vocal. remove it.
8. 00:34:904 (1) - add whistle. much better when spinner is done.
9. 00:42:904 (5) - add new combo for combo pattern.
10. 00:47:476 (5) - same as above
11. 00:50:904 (4) - ^
12. 00:55:476 (1) - here, add finish sound.
13. 01:00:047 (4) - add new combo
14. 01:04:619 (3) - add finish sound
15. 01:10:333 (6) - add new combo
16. 01:11:404 (1) - this spinner should start at next long white tick (01:11:476) and end at 01:12:932
17. 01:16:362 (4) - this circle is overlaped with (2)'s slider body. try to move to another place
18. 01:20:864 - 01:22:650 - add spinner, then at 01:22:936 - 01:24:651 add some notes. this break is weird.
19. 01:28:652 (5) - add new combo

1. Unsnapped green timing points at: 00:05:192 ; 01:20:864
2. Difficulty Setting:
   1. OD : -1?
3. 00:05:190 (1) - overlaped with (4)'s body. that's look not good. try to move to another place.
4. 00:06:333 (5) - add new combo
5. 00:24:619 (3) - nee, this slider has really weird shape imo. try make it like this
6. 00:25:190 (4) - from reason above, you can replace this slider with (3) shape. just copy-paste that and rotate Rotate clockwise twice time (or ctrl + >).
7. 00:25:761 (5) - add new combo
8. 00:28:047 (8) - same as above
9. 00:36:904 (2,3,4) - make it like this? these slider seems isn't tidy
10. 00:49:761 (1) - remove this new combo
11. 00:50:904 (1) - this is hard to catch 300 because there 1/1 and that's to near with (2)'s tail. try to stack this at (2)'s tail or move it to far another place (using distance snap is very suggestion)
12. 00:55:476 (1) - change the clap with finish
13. 01:10:904 (1) - remove this new combo, but add in 01:10:619 (5).
14. 01:13:476 (1,2) - don't put these notes in the center of spinner. that's will overlap with hitburst after spinner.
15. 01:20:833 - 01:22:904 - add spinner then add some notes at 01:23:190 - 01:24:904. the break seems weird.
16. 01:28:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use same spacing in here. that's really hard for catch.

1. Delete useless green timing points at 00:05:222. that's has double orz
2. Unsnapped green timing points at: 00:05:222 ; 00:18:356 ; 00:36:630 ; 00:45:767 ; 00:53:782 ; 00:54:925 ; 00:54:925
3. 00:20:333 (8) - add new combo
4. 00:35:190 - 00:36:333 - Map this break please. this break is really useless.
5. 01:20:833 - 01:22:904 - add spinner then like other difficulty, map the next.

Yasora-chan wrote:

General

1. Background: Must be 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. This is avaible in Guildlines rules. After this, you must fullsubmit.

current ranking rules wrote:

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels, although 800x600 is recommended. Most background ratios that are 4:3 should also work reasonably well. Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen).

Odaril wrote:

Yasora-chan wrote:

General

1. Background: Must be 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. This is avaible in Guildlines rules. After this, you must fullsubmit.

For clarification: this is wrong. Any resolution is rankable as long as width is under 1024 and height is under 768. The only thing about non 4:3 resolutions is that they will make black bars appear, which will look a bit ugly.

current ranking rules wrote:

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels, although 800x600 is recommended. Most background ratios that are 4:3 should also work reasonably well. Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen).

Odaril wrote:

What's wrong is saying that it MUST be 800x600 or 1024x768. Use "should" instead =p

Yasora-chan wrote:

hi there

General

1. Background: Should be 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768. This is avaible in Guildlines rules. After this, you must fullsubmit.
2. OSB file: In this beatmap folder has double .osb file. delete them please since you aren't use Storyboard
3. AudioLeadIn: Inconsistency AudioLeadIn in Hard difficulty. Easy, Normal and Insane has same audioleadin, but in Hard isn't same. please be consistent since this map play beginning is same. or, I'm very recommendated to change it to 2000 (use notepad to fix manually)
4. Priview Time: In here too. must be consistent. fix it please.
5. Timing: Why in Easy and Normal has different red timing section(s)? Must be same and consistent in all difficulty. Delete red timing points at 01:12:361 . This is useless. and don't forget to resnap green timing points and the notes.
6. Kiai Time: this too. why has different end kiai time in Insane diff? andd, I think the kiai end is really weird. try to change the end at 01:22:904?
7. Storyboarding:
   1. Disabled Countdown much better imo
   2. Disabled "LetterDuringBreaks" because you has a video
8. Tags: Remove "anime" from this, because that will choose by BAT when ranked. so, 'anime' is useless in here
9. Some notes isn't snapped correctly, check in Timing tab -> Resnap all notes -> yes
   
   done all

Easy

1. Unsnapped green timing points at: 00:20:054
2. Difficulty Setting:
   1. I think for Easy more easier read by players if using large Circle Size : 3
   2. Approach Rate (AR) is too fast for Easy. -1 that.
3. Spacing: must be consistent in Easy. That will be make easier read since this is easy diff. some notes hasn't consistent spacing. use distance snap when put notes (click alt) or enable that.
4. add more hitsound in some spot. that's really felt silent.
5. 00:04:047 (3,4,5) - These circle is too hard for newbie. 1/1 in here is too hard since the BPM is higher. I suggest to change them into one slider or delete (4). and if you can, don't stack notes in Easy for easier play.
6. 00:05:190 (1) - add finish in slider's beginning for guitar sound
7. 00:07:476 (3) - add whistle in here for cymbal sounder. finish sound is ok too, but I think that to noisy in here.
8. 00:08:619 (1,2,3,4,5) - here same too. these circle isn't easy to catch by newbie. Change into one slider or repeater slider. then, in (5) place, add finish sound for cymbal sounder too. much better.
9. 00:35:190 - 00:36:619 - Map this part. That's hasn't reason why should add break in there. The break is really useless.
10. 00:39:476 (6) - add new combo in here. 1 - 9 combo set is too long for easy.
11. 00:46:333 (1) - why not use finish sound in here? that's more better since the cymbal sounder is heard.
12. 00:48:619 (1) - same as above
13. 00:50:904 (1) - ^, but in slider's beginning
14. 00:53:190 - 00:54:904 - same as 00:35:190
15. 00:55:476 (1) - add finish for kiai's start effect?
16. 00:58:904 (3) - too many repeat in here. will get bored for player. change this to another pattern
17. 01:10:333 (3) - same as above
18. 01:11:761 - 01:13:190 - same as 00:35:190
19. 01:20:619 - 01:22:904 - add spinner in here for long vocal
    
    All done

Normal

• Unsnapped green timing points at: 00:20:054

1. Difficulty Setting:
   1. HP drain : -2
   2. AR : -2
   3. OD : -1
   4. the difficulty setting has your set is for hard.
2. about spacing and hitsound comment is same with Easy
3. 00:01:761 (2) - remove clap in slider's beginning. that's weird since you just added whistle in (1)
4. 00:02:904 (3,1) - add whistle
5. 00:05:190 (4) - add new combo
6. 00:09:761 (4) - remove clap, no drum sound is heard in there
7. 00:33:761 (1) - this new combo is useless since same vocal. remove it.
8. 00:34:904 (1) - add whistle. much better when spinner is done.
9. 00:42:904 (5) - add new combo for combo pattern.
10. 00:47:476 (5) - same as above
11. 00:50:904 (4) - ^
12. 00:55:476 (1) - here, add finish sound.
13. 01:00:047 (4) - add new combo
14. 01:04:619 (3) - add finish sound
15. 01:10:333 (6) - add new combo
16. 01:11:404 (1) - this spinner should start at next long white tick (01:11:476) and end at 01:12:932
17. 01:16:362 (4) - this circle is overlaped with (2)'s slider body. try to move to another place
18. 01:20:864 - 01:22:650 - add spinner, then at 01:22:936 - 01:24:651 add some notes. this break is weird.
19. 01:28:652 (5) - add new combo
    
    done all, with additional changes

Hard

1. Unsnapped green timing points at: 00:05:192 ; 01:20:864
2. Difficulty Setting:
   1. OD : -1?
3. 00:05:190 (1) - overlaped with (4)'s body. that's look not good. try to move to another place.
4. 00:06:333 (5) - add new combo
5. 00:24:619 (3) - nee, this slider has really weird shape imo. try make it like this
6. 00:25:190 (4) - from reason above, you can replace this slider with (3) shape. just copy-paste that and rotate Rotate clockwise twice time (or ctrl + >).
7. 00:25:761 (5) - add new combo
8. 00:28:047 (8) - same as above
9. 00:36:904 (2,3,4) - make it like this? these slider seems isn't tidy
10. 00:49:761 (1) - remove this new combo
11. 00:50:904 (1) - this is hard to catch 300 because there 1/1 and that's to near with (2)'s tail. try to stack this at (2)'s tail or move it to far another place (using distance snap is very suggestion)
12. 00:55:476 (1) - change the clap with finish
13. 01:10:904 (1) - remove this new combo, but add in 01:10:619 (5).
14. 01:13:476 (1,2) - don't put these notes in the center of spinner. that's will overlap with hitburst after spinner.
15. 01:20:833 - 01:22:904 - add spinner then add some notes at 01:23:190 - 01:24:904. the break seems weird.
16. 01:28:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use same spacing in here. that's really hard for catch.
    
    done, fixed some parts of the map

Rhythm is ok, but pattern and hitsound still need more work. That's I got from this map. Don't be sad, you just must to more improve your map.
Good luck :3

Byakugan249 wrote:

dw i haven't forgotten about this. mod requested in-game.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix
Red: You should take a look but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.

[General]
add "opening 2" in the tags since this is the 2nd op in the anime?

[Easy]
00:00:619 (1) - i think adding a finish here is effective as it matches with the guitar, and it sounds a lot better IMO ah, it's true, add
00:18:904 (1) - ^ add
00:28:047 (3) - ^ add
00:46:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can you do a different pattern because putting patterns like this might be boring for beginners. I suggest doing a diamond pattern, or a zig-zag pattern, etc...there's a lot of patterns you can come up with.i'll try to make some unique pattern now, since i'm running out of ideas and doesn't really understand much of the editor >.<
00:47:476 (3) - same as 00:00:619. add
00:48:619 (1) - *nazi* align this properly to the previous note. it looks bad when the notes aren't aligned in the same line. done
00:49:761 (3) - same as 00:00:619. add
00:54:333 (5,1) - a spacing error here. for easy diffs the spacing should be consistent because beginners aren't used to jumps like this. the current spacing for this is at 1.18 and the default DS is at 1.0, also add a finish at (1) to match the vocals. somewhat i'm able to fix'd it, dunno if it works well or not orz
01:02:333 (4,5) - remove the whistle at the sliderbody. that sound gets in the way during gameplay. done
01:04:619 (1) - same as 00:54:333 about the finish. done
01:05:190 (2) - you forgot a clap here. add it to keep the consistency. done
01:09:190 (1) - same as 01:04:619. done
01:11:761 - why is there a break here? remove it because it's unnecessary and the Hp bar doesn't decrease that much.well, since i don't know what should i add at that part and adding the spinners are seems to short, i'm adding the break there b4, dunno if it's not giving too much loss at hp bar >.<, fix's
01:13:761 (1) - same as 01:04:619. done
01:19:476 (3) - try to do something easier than this because beginners won't know when this slider will end. fix'd and change the pattern
01:23:190 - same as 01:11:761. done
not bad but all i heard are claps, replace some of the claps for whistles and add more finishes when necessary. still looking for a better hitsound to add till now, i'll try to try to looking at it more later ><

[Normal]
00:00:619 (1,2) - these curved sliders look ugly. to make it nicer, make these 2 sliders symmetrical.
00:04:619 (3,1) - the spacing is inconsistent unless this is intentional. so i suggest stacking this on (1) so that it'd blanket (2) like this.
00:28:047 (1) - remove the clap at the slider body because it's unnecessary as nothing but the beginning and the end are claps, add i think adding finish at the beginning at the beginning would be effective as it matches the guitar.
00:34:904 (5) - same as above about the finish but to match the vocals.
00:38:333 (2) - since this is a high bpm song, i think adding a clap here would sound a lot better. basically add the claps at the 1st downbeat till 00:45:190. in other words the big white tick.
00:46:333 (4,1) - (4) should be a NC because of new lyrics and remove the NC for (1) if you make (4) a NC since the vocals are still going.
00:52:904 - add a circle to follow vocals?
01:00:047 (1) - i think adding a finish here would sound nice as it matches with the vocals.
01:02:047 - ^
01:04:619 (3) - a NC here because of new lyrics and you have a finish on this note.
01:09:190 (4) - same as above except you don't have a finish here, so add it to match the vocals.
01:13:761 (1,2) - same as 00:04:619.
01:18:333 (4) - same as 01:04:619 about the NC.

done all and fix'd/change the pattern at the several parts of the map

[Insane]
00:07:333 (4) - if you see during gameplay, this barely looks like a curved slider, curve it properly so that it will fully show that it's a curved slider.
00:19:190 (4) - it's a curved slider but not a nice 1. curve it more so that this slider looks symmetrical.
00:34:976 - add a spinner and end it till 00:36:047 to follow the long pause.
00:37:190-00:45:761 - same as normal about the claps.
00:46:333 (3) - replace the clap for a finish to match the guitar, or add a finish with the clap. same reason.
00:47:476 (3) - ^
00:48:619 (3) - same as above but at the beginning.
00:49:761 (1) - ^
00:50:904 (1) - same as 00:46:333.
00:55:476 (1) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals.
01:00:047 (1) - same as 00:07:333.
01:04:619 (1) - same as 00:46:333.
01:11:476 - i find this unacceptable because the break is on the kiai and it's supposed to be the best part of the song. so add a spinner at 01:11:261 and end it till 01:13:476 to follow the vocals and guitar. if you ignore this, then end the spinner till 01:12:904 to follow the long pause in vocals.
01:13:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find this star ugly because of the look. try this instead. you just have to rotate it a bit and it'll look like a nice star pattern. actually in this part i'm trying to make the star became bigger each time the previous star are build, but i'm forgot to re-position it into the nice pattern, dunno if it's still looks good or dull =='

done all!!

[Hard]
00:08:047 (2,3,4,5) - remove this because it doesn't follow the guitar accurately. instead do this as it follows the guitar accurately.
00:18:904 (4) - add a finish here to match the vocals and guitar.
00:25:190 (4,1) - follow the DS for these 2 notes because DS for this is at 0.48 and the default DS is at 1.0. i don't see a reason why the DS suddenly changed.
00:46:333 (4) - same as Insane.
00:46:904 (6,7) - same as 00:25:190 and same as above.
00:48:619 (1) - same as 00:46:333.
00:49:761 (3) - ^
00:50:904 (1) - ^
01:00:047 (5) - same as above but to match the vocals.
01:04:619 (4) - ^
01:09:190 (5) - ^
01:13:761 (2) - ^
01:14:904 (6) - same as 00:46:333.
01:16:047 (1) - ^
01:17:190 (5) - ^
01:27:476 (1,2,1) - do this to follow the guitar. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.

done all

I guess that's it. GL

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb file and full submit if you aren't using storyboard.
Your choice of combos appears to be a bit off; I don't see a consistent pattern in your comboing, and I would suggest you just combo on the first downbeat of each measure, and take it from there.
Your Kiai Times and Preview Points aren't consistent with all difficulties.

fix'ed

[Easy]
Your map didn't stray away from 1/1 beat snap at all. In fact, you have no notes on the upbeats at all. Although this is an Easy diff, you can't stop yourself from being creative. For example: 01:10:333 (3) - could end 01:11:190 instead. i just tried to make it as easy as any newbie player able to play it without some hassle in it, but maybe i'll try to make some good pattern at the various part later :3

[Normal]
Again, you mapped this with the 1/1 beat snap. :c
00:04:047 (1) - NC doesn't make sense; I'd much rather have 00:02:904 (3) - NC.
00:20:047 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:190 (2) - NC
00:23:476 (5) - NC
00:24:047 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:761 (4) - NC
00:31:761 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:619 (3) - NC
00:39:476 (5) - NC
00:40:619 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:761 (4) - NC
00:42:904 (1) - Remove NC
00:44:047 (2) - NC
00:46:333 (4) - NC
00:47:476 (1) - Remove NC

fix'd all

[Hard]
00:18:904 (4) - NC
00:19:476 (1) - Remove NC, and increase spacing to 1.00x

[Insane]
00:02:761 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:904 (2) - NC
00:06:333 (6) - NC
00:06:619 (1) - Remove NC
Figure the rest out; I know you can do it by just looking at this mod.
00:53:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really fit with the music.
00:55:404 (8,1) - Space better (closer)
00:57:333 (4) - Hits HP bar

fix all too

Good luck :3

1. BG is 1024x732. You'd better change a 4:3 BG because there is black edges now.
2. Disable countdown in all diffs.
3. Add same tags to all diffs.
4. Use same slider tick rate in all diffs.

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

1. BG is 1024x732. You'd better change a 4:3 BG because there is black edges now.
2. Disable countdown in all diffs.
3. Add same tags to all diffs.
4. Use same slider tick rate in all diffs.

done

[Easy]

00:04:619 (4,1) - overlap
01:11:476 - remove the break

done

[Normal]

00:07:476 (1,2,3) - put them vertically
00:22:904 (4) - spacing issue
00:28:047 (1) - ^
00:39:476 (1) - try to use ctrl+h to make it more symmetric

done

[Hard]

01:13:476 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the two flower seem not so neat. Also, you can NC at 01:14:047 (3) and 01:16:047 (1) and delete other NC

done

[Insane]

00:07:333 (4) - change this to a note at 00:07:476? This rhythm sounds weird.
00:36:619 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - not so neat
00:58:333 (3) - too close to previous note
01:15:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - the star looks weird
01:20:404 (2,3,4,5) - move 1 grid up (grid 3)

done

That's all I can find. GL~

Megurine Luka wrote:

/Queue

[General]

Del "2" in tag. If you mean it's the second OP, then del the space between them.
del osb. file since you don't have storyboard. full submit
Oops. What's wrong with All of your SV shows like this and you'd better fix it.
Don't forget to check your slider after you fix this. It might cause your slider unsnapped since you need to change the SV

ok fix'd all just now

[Easy]

del the line of countdown offset in this osu file. It doesn't work
00:29:761 (4) - spacing
00:34:904 (1) - ^
00:38:904 (4) - put it on x=304 y=272
00:47:476 (2,1,2,1,2) - spacing
00:56:619 (3) - 1 grid down
01:12:760 (1) - spinner is too short.. hardly to recognize it as a spinner ah sorry actually i'm just delete that spinner from the previous mod, looks like it doesnt deleted yet ><

fixed!!

[Normal]

00:01:476 (2,3) - ctrl+1 and moved them down a little bit. Also fix the spacing
00:47:190 (2,3) - fix spacing
00:59:476 (5) - new combo and del next NC
01:07:762 (2) - fix spacing
01:16:904 (2) - put it on x=248,y=208
01:26:047 (2) - spacing


fixed!!
[Hard]

00:21:619 (x) - add a circle
00:26:761 (3) - stack 2
00:34:333 (1) - try http://puu.sh/pSFr
01:02:047 (3) - leave 1
01:11:190 (3) - stack 1 perfectly
01:18:333 (1) - fin at the head
00:43:762 (5) - ^

[Insane]

00:21:619 (1) - stack perfectly
Actually from 00:36:619 (1) - 00:45:761 (2) you can decrease the slider velocity i'll try to use 0,5 here

done!
That's all.

1. LOL @ the screwed SD rating calculation (Insane has 4.9 SD while Hard has 4.98).
2. If you want to say that this is Hanasaku Iroha's 2nd opening, use "2nd opening" and not "opening2" on the Tag section. "op2" is fine too. Well, unless someone actually searches for an opening song from an anime with the "(anime name) opening(x)" phrase and not "(anime name) op(x)".

1. 01:20:690 - Break? I can't really see a reason to leave this place as is, especially since the length is almost 5 seconds from the previous note to the next one.

1. 00:09:190 (1,2) - Make these circles a slider? Considering that the previous four objects the players must hit are 1/2 beat-spaced (the distance from a white tick to the nearest red tick on the timeline) sliders (at 210 BPM and 1.5 SV, no less), and then there will be a slider and circle after these objects, we must go "hold-release (x4)-tap (x2)-hold-release-tap" (try playing this spot so you'll understand, if you can't get it), which is bad, IMO, and the current state (can't explain precisely) of 00:09:476 (3), the slider after the (2) circle, only makes it worse.
2. 01:20:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - The change from 1/1 beat-spaced (the distance from a white tick to the nearest another white tick on the timeline) circles to 1/2 feels kinda unexpected and isn't really good. If you can't understand that one, just read this: I suggest to remove (2) and (4).

1. 00:53:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uh... are you sure about this formation of kick sliders and circles? Remember, this song has 210 BPM and the beatmap has 1.8 SV assigned to it. The repeating kick sliders' end are hard to know, the linear ones (those that don't repeat) feels a bit too fast and has an odd pattern (not bad, just... strange), and to hit all those eight circles after the sliders (just hitting with at least 50s, no miss) feels almost impossible after those sliders. I don't know if it's just me that suck at this kind of pattern, but you should look at it.
2. 01:13:761 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Only three stars? Wanna make some pattern variations here?

1. Missing Skin Files reversearrow.png spinner-clear.png spinner-spin.png spinner-osu.png cursortrail.png
   
2. remove all countdown
3. 
   Warning: [Hard] 00:18:333 useless timing sections
   Warning: [Hard] 01:13:476 set it as new combo
   Warning: [Insane] 00:18:333 useless timing sections
   Warning: [Normal] 00:35:190 set it as new combo
4. VideoOffset in diffs is not the same
   

Hinsvar wrote:

210 BPM? You guys must be joking right?

Anyway, came here because Envi PM'd me in-game to mod this. Let's do it in English, since I want to look cool just want to.

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. LOL @ the screwed SD rating calculation (Insane has 4.9 SD while Hard has 4.98). I don't understand too why the diff spread are like that, cant figured out till now D:
2. If you want to say that this is Hanasaku Iroha's 2nd opening, use "2nd opening" and not "opening2" on the Tag section. "op2" is fine too. Well, unless someone actually searches for an opening song from an anime with the "(anime name) opening(x)" phrase and not "(anime name) op(x)". i thin op2 are better, since from how usually "i'm" look for the opening, i'm always write op or op2, dunno with other people maybe different :/

>Easy

1. 01:20:690 - Break? I can't really see a reason to leave this place as is, especially since the length is almost 5 seconds from the previous note to the next one. actually it's from the previous mod suggestion, he/she said if that part doesn't really need a break since the hp bar are not so draining, I'm already add that the first time i'm make it, though

>Hard

1. 00:09:190 (1,2) - Make these circles a slider? Considering that the previous four objects the players must hit are 1/2 beat-spaced (the distance from a white tick to the nearest red tick on the timeline) sliders (at 210 BPM and 1.5 SV, no less), and then there will be a slider and circle after these objects, we must go "hold-release (x4)-tap (x2)-hold-release-tap" (try playing this spot so you'll understand, if you can't get it), which is bad, IMO, and the current state (can't explain precisely) of 00:09:476 (3), the slider after the (2) circle, only makes it worse. [/color]
2. 01:20:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - The change from 1/1 beat-spaced (the distance from a white tick to the nearest another white tick on the timeline) circles to 1/2 feels kinda unexpected and isn't really good. If you can't understand that one, just read this: I suggest to remove (2) and (4). fix'd, change the pattern a bit, dunno if it was good or not

>Insane

1. 00:53:190 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uh... are you sure about this formation of kick sliders and circles? Remember, this song has 210 BPM and the beatmap has 1.8 SV assigned to it. The repeating kick sliders' end are hard to know, the linear ones (those that don't repeat) feels a bit too fast and has an odd pattern (not bad, just... strange), and to hit all those eight circles after the sliders (just hitting with at least 50s, no miss) feels almost impossible after those sliders. I don't know if it's just me that suck at this kind of pattern, but you should look at it. [/color]
2. 01:13:761 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Only three stars? Wanna make some pattern variations here? same as above, i'm trying to follow the vocal and that was what i got on my head when i came to this part.

Normal looks fine. thanks^^

So yeah, just that. Hope my mod helped. very helpful

Good luck on the way

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

1. Missing Skin Files reversearrow.png spinner-clear.png spinner-spin.png spinner-osu.png cursortrail.png
   
2. remove all countdown
3. 
   Warning: [Hard] 00:18:333 useless timing sections
   Warning: [Hard] 01:13:476 set it as new combo
   Warning: [Insane] 00:18:333 useless timing sections
   Warning: [Normal] 00:35:190 set it as new combo
4. VideoOffset in diffs is not the same
   
   fix'd all, i'll upload the rest of the skin after this post
   

[Easy]

01:11:476 (4) - how about temporarily stop the kiai here and restart it 01:13:761 (1) - is it ok? i hear that the kiai time must be the same for all diff, but i think that way is pretty fine too.
01:20:618 (4) - should the kiai ends here fix'd

[Normal]

00:39:476 (1,3) - this couple of sliders seems weird, they are not balance in a degree somehow i'm able to fix'd it, dunno if this way works

[Insane]

00:37:761 (5) - move the NC here(00:38:333 (1) - )?
00:42:333 (1) - ^
01:13:761 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this series of 5-point star..move 3&4 a bit down fix'd

[Hard]

fine thanks!

as your 1st map this is not quite bad, good luck

Loli Cjj wrote:

Karena aku cinta padamu ada perubahan semenjak pertama kali aku mod (dan sekarang jadi lebih baik), aku mod lagi >:3

=General=
1. Di diff normal masih ada countdown, untick >u<
2. Video offset +192, looks better.
3. Part galau ada di 00:37:190, jadi mungkin timing yang merubah dari NC:1 ke SC:1 diganti ke sini. Sekalian mau ngasih hitson yang coco di sini ( owo)b >> http://puu.sh/q1VM
4. Kiai berhenti di 01:20:619.

beres

=Easy=
1. 00:01:761 (2) - Satu grid ke atas?
2. 00:02:904 (1,2,3,4) - Buat pattern persegi aja, biar lebih rapi >u<
3. [Kalo yang diatas disetujui] 00:05:190 (1) - Buat stack sama 00:02:904 (1) done
4. [Kalo nomor 1 disetujui dan juga nomor 2] 00:07:476 (1,2,3,4) - 3 grid small ke kanan.
5. 00:18:333 volume 25% suara hitnya jadi kayak annoying imo. Mending kerasin, 40% dihilangin aja timing point nya biar sama kayak diff yg lain
6. 00:18:333 - 00:36:619 Pake hitclap tiap ketukan kedua sama keempat aja, biar enak imo. done
7.01:11:476 (4,1) - Dari sini ada delay, isi pake spinner aja.done
8. 01:20:618 (4,1) - Delaynya cukup lama, jadi isi pake break. ud di mod atas

=Normal=
1. 00:05:190 (1) - Overlap. Pindahkanlah.
2. 00:18:333 - 00:36:619 Pake hitclap tiap ketukan kedua sama keempat aja, biar enak imo.. done
3. 00:53:047 (1) - Spinner berhenti di 00:54:904 biar pemain baru bisa bersiap lagi >u< done
4. 01:11:761 (1) - Spinner berhenti di 01:13:190, alasan sama dengan di atas. done

=Hard=
4.98 star rating? o3o aku jg gk ngerti kenapa begini D:
1. 00:41:761 (1) - clap di ujung slider?
2. 00:42:333 (3) - ^
3. 01:20:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rotate selection center CW by 25. nggak usah, patternnya udah lain lagi XD

=Insane=
1. SC:1 25% cukup kok, biar imbang sama diff lain. udah 25% tuh dari awal o3o

Slidernya unyu", hitsound coba buat sedikit lebih teratur, dan semoga patternnya diperbaiki D: orz

1. 00:02:904 (1,1) - Mungkin akan lebih bagus kalau dua ini ditumpuk, jadi hitburst (1) yang pertama nggak menghalangin (1) yang kedua
2. 00:06:333 (2,3) - Lagi-lagi soal stacking. Kenapa dua ini nggak di-stack aja? Satu-satunya jalan supaya bisa di-stack adalah dengan membuat (2,1,2) menjadi segitiga yang rapih, yang otomatis lebih nyaman untuk dimainkan~
3. 00:18:904 (1,2) - (optional) Kenapa harus lurus? Bisa sih diatur begini, tapi lebih baik diatur begini imo, supaya lebih dapat flow-nya:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:20:047 (3,1) - Jauhin jaraknya - difficulty Easy tidak semestinya punya anti-jump seperti ini, dan membuat pattern segitiga dari (3,1,2) tidaklah sulit xD
5. 00:22:333 (3) - (optional) Coba curve ini supaya dia melingkari (2) dari luar? Flow-nya dengan (1) yang berikutnya jadi bagus lho~
6. 00:26:904 (2,1) - Lagi, jangan buat anti-jump di sini - (1,2,3,4) bisa diatur seperti ini supaya (4) berakhir di bawah awal (2) dan tetap konsisten dengan spacing:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:30:333 (5) - New combo di sini - berlebihan punya 6 combo streak di diff Easy xD
8. 00:33:761 (3) - Apakah ini disengaja penempatannya satu grid di bawah (2)? Nggak salah sih, tapi kelihatan agak aneh aja...
9. 00:39:476 (1) - Sekali lagi di sini, jangan buat anti-jump dengan (4) - saran gw sih seperti di gambar berikut, (4,1,2) akan membuat segitiga yang rapih, plus pattern ini juga konsisten spacingnya dengan (1) yang berikutnya:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:44:047 (1,2) - (optional) Agaknya slider ini agak... random? Coba slider ini diarahkan ke arah yang berlawanan satu sama lain (seperti dalam contoh di atas) supaya lebih kelihatan nggak random xD
11. 00:50:904 (1) - Kenapa ada clap di badan slider ini? Remove aja~
12. 00:54:333 (3) - Di sini juga, akan jauh lebih rapih untuk membuat pattern segitiga simetris antara (1,2,3) - karena circle selanjutnya di-stack di bawah (2), penempatan (3) semestinya bisa lebih bebas~
13. 00:56:619 (3) - Taruh clap di akhir slider? Ini masalah hitsounding utama yang sering dialami mapper pemula - hitsound yang inkonsisten. Agaknya penempatan clap itu konsisten setiap beberapa beat, dalam kasus ini konsisten setiap 4/1 (kecuali bila lagunya memungkinkan untuk menempatkan variasi lain). Selanjutnya ada beberapa kasus lagi seperti ini (ex : 01:01:190 (3)), jadi di-cek lagi yah konsistensi clapnya, terutama di bagian chorus di mana suaranya paling keras terdengar~
14. 01:04:619 (1,2,3,1) - Err... Ini patternnya apa? o.o - Mungkin lebih bagus kalau (2,3,1) bisa dibuat simetris seperti contoh berikut:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:16:047 (1,2,3) - (optional) Tiga ini juga bisa dibuat lebih simetris supaya rapih :3
16. 01:23:615 - Apa di sini nggak ditambah break aja? Panah-panah merah break itu pas sekali dengan 01:25:190 (1) xD
17. 01:25:190 (1,2) - Ini juga bisa dibuat simetris (apalagi mengingat ini ending, ending yang simetris itu akan lebih mengena) - (1) itu mestinya ada di x:144 y:128, (2) itu tinggal copy-paste dan flip (:

1. 00:01:476 (2) - (optional) Coba tarik ini beberapa grid ke atas supaya (1,2,3) membentuk arc? Flow-nya lebih bagus begini imo~
2. 00:03:761 (2) - Kalau ^ diterapkan, circle ini jadi bisa di-stack di (2) yang sebelumnya (hitung-hitung sekalian juga jadi lebih rapi)
3. 00:08:619 (4) - Hmm, jujur slider ini kelihatannya berantakan, bisa loh dirapihkan seperti ini:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:09:761 (5) - New combo di sini? Akan lebih baik apabila sebelum break lebih berwarna, selain itu nada ini juga terletak di downbeat~
5. 00:18:904 (1) - Untuk awal bagian baru seperti ini, akan lebih bijak untuk menempatkan finish daripada clap - kalau memang ingin menempatkan clap, sebaiknya clap diposisikan konsisten setiap 4/1 dimulai dari akhir slider ini
6. 00:23:476 (1) - Bentuk slider ini berantakan... Kenapa nggak 00:24:619 (3) - di copy-paste ke sini aja, lalu rotate 90° (CTRL + >) ?
7. 00:28:904 (2) - Err... coba geser circle ini beberapa grid ke kiri atas supaya spacing dengan 00:27:761 (4) kesannya konsisten
8. 00:32:904 (2) - Kenapa nggak di-stack ke awal 00:30:333 (1) aja? Dengan begini, spacing di (1,2) akan menjadi konsisten
9. 00:34:976 (1) - Mulai spinnernya di titik ini - tidak ada apapun dari musiknya untuk diikuti pada 00:35:190 (1), jauh lebih bijak untuk menempatkan spinner di sini
10. 00:47:476 (3) - (optional) Apa nggak di-curve seperti ini aja? Kalau begini, slider ini akan mengelilingi baik circle sebelumnya dan awal slider setelahnya:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:50:904 (1) - Mengingat bentuk curve (3), akan lebih bijak untuk meng-curve ini ke bawah untuk memberikan variasi lebih
12. 00:53:047 (1,1) - Mengingat difficulty ini adalah Normal, berikan waktu lebih bagi pemain untuk me-recover diri sendiri setelah spinner - ini jelas terlalu cepat untuk Normal, satu solusi yang mungkin adalah dengan mengakhiri spinner di 00:54:619
13. 01:03:476 (3) - Geser satu grid ke bawah (kalau dilihat baik-baik, (2) itu nggak di tengah, jadi kalau mau simetris ya nggak harus kepatok banget sama grid tengah itu)
14. 01:06:904 (1,3) - Tambahkan clap di awal masing-masing slider agar hitsound tetap konsisten - aneh rasanya clappingnya tiba-tiba terhenti o.o
15. 01:09:190 (1,2,3) - (optional) Jujur, distance snapping 1.0x itu amat sangat memungkinkan sekali untuk membuat variasi-variasi slider, contohnya:
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:11:476 (5) - New combo di sini? Kurang lebih karena di sini downbeat, selain itu juga sama seperti sebelumnya (agar jadi lebih berwarna)
17. 01:18:333 (1,3) - Apakah memang perlu untuk memberhentikan finish-nya di sini? Kedengarannya lebih bagus imo kalau finish sound-nya diteruskan hingga spinner...
18. 01:27:476 (2,3) - Jujur, ritme 3/2 ini lumayan tidak terduga mengingat ritme sebelumnya itu hanya 1/2 atau 1/1, mungkin rubah ini menjadi slider? (pemain mungkin akan frustasi karena 1x100 di sini lol, akibat ritme yang tidak biasa ini)

1. 00:06:333 (1) - Satu grid ke bawah agar simetris dengan 00:05:761 (3) orz (kalau nggak simetris, kurang enak dilihat)
2. 00:07:904 (2,4,1,2) - Kenapa clap-nya tidak diteruskan di sini? Clap di bagian ini akan melebur dengan ritme dari drum lagunya~
3. 00:18:904 (1) - Jangan buat repeating slider di sini - tidak ada ritme yang bisa diikuti di 00:19:047... Slider 1/1 seperti ini jauh lebih mengikuti musiknya:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:20:761 (x) - Nah, di sini malah kekurangan circle untuk mengikuti vokalnya~
5. 00:22:904 (1) - (optional) Untuk lebih merapikan bagian ini, slider ini bisa dibuat melingkari (2) dari luar~
6. 00:24:619 (2) - Taruh clap pada akhir slider di sini agar hitsounding tetap konsisten
7. 00:27:047 (4,5) - Buat manual stacking seperti ini - karena skinnya transparan, pengaturan seperti ini diperlukan agar (1) dan (4) terlihat sempurna di play mode
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:31:476 (2,3,4) - Lagi soal stacking di sini, stacking akan merusak simetri - kalau ingin menjaga simetri, ubah tiga circle ini menjadi repeating slider
9. 00:32:619 (3,4,1,2) - Kenapa tidak konsisten dengan pola simetri di sini? Dengan begini, (2) dapat di-stack dengan 00:32:047 (1) sekaligus membuat bagian ini menjadi lebih rapi
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:35:190 (1) - Mulai spinner ini 1/4 setelah circle sebelumnya - di titik ini tidak ada sesuatu yang signifikan dari lagunya, dan memulai dari titik ini hanya akan kedengaran aneh...
11. 00:37:190 (3) - Mulai bagian soft-nya dari sini, tambah lagi tambah finish pada awal slider ini seperti pada difficulty-difficulty sebelumnya ((1,2) itu pada hakikatnya masih bagian normal)
12. 00:38:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - Woah, pattern di bagian ini bisa dibilang nggak ada... Coba dirapikan, misalnya dengan membuat pola segilima seperti berikut:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:44:047 (1,2,3,4) - Apakah memang disengaja pengaturannya seperti ini? Lebih bagus kalau (4) agak ditarik menjauh supaya ada pola diamond di sini imo...
14. 00:48:619 (1,3) - Lagi, stack yang tidak sempurna - hati-hati dengan hal semacam ini karena skinnya transparan
15. 00:59:761 (5) - Agar konsisten, clap baiknya ditambahkan ke awal slider
16. 01:02:333 (1,3) - Jangan buat (1) dan (3) saling bersentuhan - akan lebih baik apabila (3) di-stack pada awal 01:01:190 (1), seperti berikut:
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:07:333 (2) - (optional) Untuk variasi (sekaligus juga untuk menghindari pattern yang terlalu linear), geser ini beberapa grid ke atas agar (1,2,3) membentuk suatu pola segitiga?
18. 01:19:476 (3) - Sama seperti diff sebelumnya, agak aneh rasanya finish sound-nya terhenti di sini, kenapa tidak dilanjutkan? xD
19. 01:27:476 (1,2,3,...) - Clap rasanya bagus ditempatkan pada posisi-posisi tertentu di sini, semisal di akhir (1) dan awal (3)

1. 00:05:476 (2,3,4) - Unstack (3,4) dari (2), dan bentuk formasi segitiga di sini? Stack yang berlebihan seperti ini kurang bagus kelihatannya di play mode~
2. 00:06:761 (2) - (optional) Buat ini melingkari (4)? Akan lebih rapih seperti ini imo, selain itu flow dari (1) ke (2) juga jadi lebih bagus
3. 00:09:690 (x) - Stream harusnya berlanjut di sini, mungkin stream bergerak seperti gambar di bawah ini cocok dengan lagunya:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:18:333 (1) - Mungkin daripada repeating slider, bisa dibuat tiga circle yang akhirnya di-stack di atas 00:18:904 (2)? Efek delay yang akan terjadi sangat pas dengan bagian ini imo
5. 00:18:904 (2) - Tambahkan finish (ada suara simbal dari lagunya di sini)
6. 00:22:190 (3) - Err... Jujur rasanya ini lebih pas kalau ditaruh di downbeat (1/2 kemudian) dibanding di sini, soalnya di sini nggak ada suara drum dari lagunya sama sekali
7. 00:25:047 (2,3) - (optional) Di sini juga, coba unstack dua ini dan buat segitiga seperti gambar di bawah, soalnya bagian sebelumnya itu bergerak terus, kalau tiba-tiba stack kesannya memberhentikan flow:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:29:333 (1) - Karena (2,3) sesudahnya di-curve sedikit, bagaimana kalau ini di-curve sedikit juga? xD
9. 00:32:333 (3,4,1) - Jujur di sini gw kurang dapat patternnya, dengan memutar (3) 120° bisa didapatkan pattern sebagai berikut:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:37:190 (3) - Sama seperti [Hard] - soft-sampleset harusnya mulai dari sini, dan tambahkan juga finish pada circle ini
11. 00:42:904 (3) - Hmm, tambahkan clap pada awal slider agar clapping-nya konsisten?
12. 00:50:333 (3,4,1,2) - Lagi, pattern yang kelihatan abstrak - kenapa nggak dibuat diamond pattern aja antar keempat circle ini? Menggeser (2) agar terbentuk diamond tidak sulit, kok~
13. 00:55:761 (2) - Apakah memang sengaja meng-curve slider ini seperti ini? Lebih bagus kalau mengelilingi (4) dari luar imo...
14. 01:02:190 (4) - (optional) Mungkin lebih bagus kalau (4)-nya ditaruh agak ke bawah, sehingga (2,3,4) akan membentuk suatu segitiga (baru setelah itu, (5)-nya ditaruh di atas (4))
15. 01:11:547 (x) - Spinner harusnya dimulai di sini - teruskan mappingnya hingga 1/4 sebelum awal spinner ini, dan pada circle yang terletak pada 1/4 sebelum spinner itu tambahkan finish
16. 01:29:333 (1) - Clap juga semestinya harus ada di sini (ini sih self-explanatory xD)

Niva wrote:

Mod4Mod ~

[General]

-> Hmm, gw nggak lihat penggunaan file Untitled-2.jpg dan ohana2.jpg, mengingat ukuran filenya cukup besar dan lumayan memakan hard disk space - delete lalu full-submit? baru aja kudelete pas mod terakhir tadi ><
-> Disable countdown di [Hard] dan [Normal], karena memang dasarnya tidak digunakan udah
-> Jujur, buat lagu seperti ini gw lebih suka supaya preview time-nya nggak langsung di vokal/chorusnya, tapi di beberapa milidetik sebelum chorus (contoh lagu lain yang preview time-nya beberapa detik sebelum chorus) - coba taruh PreviewTime: 53690 ? kalo ngeliat dari kebanyakan map sih emang semua pada masang di chorus, coba deh kucoba sekarang di titik lain
-> Sama satu lagi, gw setuju dengan Hinsvar soal tags, hampir nggak ada orang yang mencari dengan kata kunci "opening2", "opening op2" kurang lebih sudah mencakupi tags-tags yang umum dicari orang (mungkin sekalian juga tambahin "ShinKuria" ke tagsnya xD)

[Easy]

1. 00:02:904 (1,1) - Mungkin akan lebih bagus kalau dua ini ditumpuk, jadi hitburst (1) yang pertama nggak menghalangin (1) yang kedua udah di mod sebelumnya
2. 00:06:333 (2,3) - Lagi-lagi soal stacking. Kenapa dua ini nggak di-stack aja? Satu-satunya jalan supaya bisa di-stack adalah dengan membuat (2,1,2) menjadi segitiga yang rapih, yang otomatis lebih nyaman untuk dimainkan~ done
3. 00:18:904 (1,2) - (optional) Kenapa harus lurus? Bisa sih diatur begini, tapi lebih baik diatur begini imo, supaya lebih dapat flow-nya: fixedfixed
   
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4. 00:20:047 (3,1) - Jauhin jaraknya - difficulty Easy tidak semestinya punya anti-jump seperti ini, dan membuat pattern segitiga dari (3,1,2) tidaklah sulit xD done
5. 00:22:333 (3) - (optional) Coba curve ini supaya dia melingkari (2) dari luar? Flow-nya dengan (1) yang berikutnya jadi bagus lho~
6. 00:26:904 (2,1) - Lagi, jangan buat anti-jump di sini - (1,2,3,4) bisa diatur seperti ini supaya (4) berakhir di bawah awal (2) dan tetap konsisten dengan spacing: somewhat done
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:30:333 (5) - New combo di sini - berlebihan punya 6 combo streak di diff Easy xD done
8. 00:33:761 (3) - Apakah ini disengaja penempatannya satu grid di bawah (2)? Nggak salah sih, tapi kelihatan agak aneh aja... changing a bit
9. 00:39:476 (1) - Sekali lagi di sini, jangan buat anti-jump dengan (4) - saran gw sih seperti di gambar berikut, (4,1,2) akan membuat segitiga yang rapih, plus pattern ini juga konsisten spacingnya dengan (1) yang berikutnya: fix'd
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:44:047 (1,2) - (optional) Agaknya slider ini agak... random? Coba slider ini diarahkan ke arah yang berlawanan satu sama lain (seperti dalam contoh di atas) supaya lebih kelihatan nggak random xD done
11. 00:50:904 (1) - Kenapa ada clap di badan slider ini? Remove aja~ done
12. 00:54:333 (3) - Di sini juga, akan jauh lebih rapih untuk membuat pattern segitiga simetris antara (1,2,3) - karena circle selanjutnya di-stack di bawah (2), penempatan (3) semestinya bisa lebih bebas~ done
13. 00:56:619 (3) - Taruh clap di akhir slider? Ini masalah hitsounding utama yang sering dialami mapper pemula - hitsound yang inkonsisten. Agaknya penempatan clap itu konsisten setiap beberapa beat, dalam kasus ini konsisten setiap 4/1 (kecuali bila lagunya memungkinkan untuk menempatkan variasi lain). Selanjutnya ada beberapa kasus lagi seperti ini (ex : 01:01:190 (3)), jadi di-cek lagi yah konsistensi clapnya, terutama di bagian chorus di mana suaranya paling keras terdengar~ sebenarnya di bagian ini emang beberapa hitsound ada yang nggak pas sih, dan aku sudah tahu sebelum-sebelumnya, tapimasih belum sempet ngeperbaiki keseluruhan mape mid sekarang ><
14. 01:04:619 (1,2,3,1) - Err... Ini patternnya apa? o.o - Mungkin lebih bagus kalau (2,3,1) bisa dibuat simetris seperti contoh berikut:
    
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    fix'd
15. 01:16:047 (1,2,3) - (optional) Tiga ini juga bisa dibuat lebih simetris supaya rapih :3 fix'd
16. 01:23:615 - Apa di sini nggak ditambah break aja? Panah-panah merah break itu pas sekali dengan 01:25:190 (1) xD udah di mod sebelumnya
17. 01:25:190 (1,2) - Ini juga bisa dibuat simetris (apalagi mengingat ini ending, ending yang simetris itu akan lebih mengena) - (1) itu mestinya ada di x:144 y:128, (2) itu tinggal copy-paste dan flip (:

done

[Normal]

-> Gw lebih suka kalau HP Drain dan OD-nya dikurangi satu sih, menurut gw setelan seperti ini lebih seimbang untuk Normal

1. 00:01:476 (2) - (optional) Coba tarik ini beberapa grid ke atas supaya (1,2,3) membentuk arc? Flow-nya lebih bagus begini imo~
2. 00:03:761 (2) - Kalau ^ diterapkan, circle ini jadi bisa di-stack di (2) yang sebelumnya (hitung-hitung sekalian juga jadi lebih rapi)
3. 00:08:619 (4) - Hmm, jujur slider ini kelihatannya berantakan, bisa loh dirapihkan seperti ini:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:09:761 (5) - New combo di sini? Akan lebih baik apabila sebelum break lebih berwarna, selain itu nada ini juga terletak di downbeat~
5. 00:18:904 (1) - Untuk awal bagian baru seperti ini, akan lebih bijak untuk menempatkan finish daripada clap - kalau memang ingin menempatkan clap, sebaiknya clap diposisikan konsisten setiap 4/1 dimulai dari akhir slider ini
6. 00:23:476 (1) - Bentuk slider ini berantakan... Kenapa nggak 00:24:619 (3) - di copy-paste ke sini aja, lalu rotate 90° (CTRL + >) ?
7. 00:28:904 (2) - Err... coba geser circle ini beberapa grid ke kiri atas supaya spacing dengan 00:27:761 (4) kesannya konsisten
8. 00:32:904 (2) - Kenapa nggak di-stack ke awal 00:30:333 (1) aja? Dengan begini, spacing di (1,2) akan menjadi konsisten
9. 00:34:976 (1) - Mulai spinnernya di titik ini - tidak ada apapun dari musiknya untuk diikuti pada 00:35:190 (1), jauh lebih bijak untuk menempatkan spinner di sini
10. 00:47:476 (3) - (optional) Apa nggak di-curve seperti ini aja? Kalau begini, slider ini akan mengelilingi baik circle sebelumnya dan awal slider setelahnya:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:50:904 (1) - Mengingat bentuk curve (3), akan lebih bijak untuk meng-curve ini ke bawah untuk memberikan variasi lebih
12. 00:53:047 (1,1) - Mengingat difficulty ini adalah Normal, berikan waktu lebih bagi pemain untuk me-recover diri sendiri setelah spinner - ini jelas terlalu cepat untuk Normal, satu solusi yang mungkin adalah dengan mengakhiri spinner di 00:54:619
13. 01:03:476 (3) - Geser satu grid ke bawah (kalau dilihat baik-baik, (2) itu nggak di tengah, jadi kalau mau simetris ya nggak harus kepatok banget sama grid tengah itu)
14. 01:06:904 (1,3) - Tambahkan clap di awal masing-masing slider agar hitsound tetap konsisten - aneh rasanya clappingnya tiba-tiba terhenti o.o
15. 01:09:190 (1,2,3) - (optional) Jujur, distance snapping 1.0x itu amat sangat memungkinkan sekali untuk membuat variasi-variasi slider, contohnya:
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:11:476 (5) - New combo di sini? Kurang lebih karena di sini downbeat, selain itu juga sama seperti sebelumnya (agar jadi lebih berwarna)
17. 01:18:333 (1,3) - Apakah memang perlu untuk memberhentikan finish-nya di sini? Kedengarannya lebih bagus imo kalau finish sound-nya diteruskan hingga spinner... i'm prefer this way, looks like better like this
18. 01:27:476 (2,3) - Jujur, ritme 3/2 ini lumayan tidak terduga mengingat ritme sebelumnya itu hanya 1/2 atau 1/1, mungkin rubah ini menjadi slider? (pemain mungkin akan frustasi karena 1x100 di sini lol, akibat ritme yang tidak biasa ini) supaya nggak sekedar gampang "just kidding",maybe i'll fix this part later because right now that was what i got in my head since im trying to follow the guitar voice

[Hard]

1. 00:06:333 (1) - Satu grid ke bawah agar simetris dengan 00:05:761 (3) orz (kalau nggak simetris, kurang enak dilihat)
2. 00:07:904 (2,4,1,2) - Kenapa clap-nya tidak diteruskan di sini? Clap di bagian ini akan melebur dengan ritme dari drum lagunya~
3. 00:18:904 (1) - Jangan buat repeating slider di sini - tidak ada ritme yang bisa diikuti di 00:19:047... Slider 1/1 seperti ini jauh lebih mengikuti musiknya:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:20:761 (x) - Nah, di sini malah kekurangan circle untuk mengikuti vokalnya~
5. 00:22:904 (1) - (optional) Untuk lebih merapikan bagian ini, slider ini bisa dibuat melingkari (2) dari luar~
6. 00:24:619 (2) - Taruh clap pada akhir slider di sini agar hitsounding tetap konsisten
7. 00:27:047 (4,5) - Buat manual stacking seperti ini - karena skinnya transparan, pengaturan seperti ini diperlukan agar (1) dan (4) terlihat sempurna di play mode
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:31:476 (2,3,4) - Lagi soal stacking di sini, stacking akan merusak simetri - kalau ingin menjaga simetri, ubah tiga circle ini menjadi repeating slider
9. 00:32:619 (3,4,1,2) - Kenapa tidak konsisten dengan pola simetri di sini? Dengan begini, (2) dapat di-stack dengan 00:32:047 (1) sekaligus membuat bagian ini menjadi lebih rapi
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:35:190 (1) - Mulai spinner ini 1/4 setelah circle sebelumnya - di titik ini tidak ada sesuatu yang signifikan dari lagunya, dan memulai dari titik ini hanya akan kedengaran aneh...
11. 00:37:190 (3) - Mulai bagian soft-nya dari sini, tambah lagi tambah finish pada awal slider ini seperti pada difficulty-difficulty sebelumnya ((1,2) itu pada hakikatnya masih bagian normal)
12. 00:38:904 (2,3,4,5,6) - Woah, pattern di bagian ini bisa dibilang nggak ada... Coba dirapikan, misalnya dengan membuat pola segilima seperti berikut:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:44:047 (1,2,3,4) - Apakah memang disengaja pengaturannya seperti ini? Lebih bagus kalau (4) agak ditarik menjauh supaya ada pola diamond di sini imo...
14. 00:48:619 (1,3) - Lagi, stack yang tidak sempurna - hati-hati dengan hal semacam ini karena skinnya transparan
15. 00:59:761 (5) - Agar konsisten, clap baiknya ditambahkan ke awal slider
16. 01:02:333 (1,3) - Jangan buat (1) dan (3) saling bersentuhan - akan lebih baik apabila (3) di-stack pada awal 01:01:190 (1), seperti berikut:
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:07:333 (2) - (optional) Untuk variasi (sekaligus juga untuk menghindari pattern yang terlalu linear), geser ini beberapa grid ke atas agar (1,2,3) membentuk suatu pola segitiga?
18. 01:19:476 (3) - Sama seperti diff sebelumnya, agak aneh rasanya finish sound-nya terhenti di sini, kenapa tidak dilanjutkan? xD
19. 01:27:476 (1,2,3,...) - Clap rasanya bagus ditempatkan pada posisi-posisi tertentu di sini, semisal di akhir (1) dan awal (3)

pretty much done here and the, fix'd some parts and pattern too

[Insane]

-> Hmm, kenapa background yang paling mengganggu perhatian malah ditaruh di diff Insane orz... Nggak masalah sih sebenarnya, tapi kesannya... ya... orz ><

1. 00:05:476 (2,3,4) - Unstack (3,4) dari (2), dan bentuk formasi segitiga di sini? Stack yang berlebihan seperti ini kurang bagus kelihatannya di play mode~
2. 00:06:761 (2) - (optional) Buat ini melingkari (4)? Akan lebih rapih seperti ini imo, selain itu flow dari (1) ke (2) juga jadi lebih bagus
3. 00:09:690 (x) - Stream harusnya berlanjut di sini, mungkin stream bergerak seperti gambar di bawah ini cocok dengan lagunya:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:18:333 (1) - Mungkin daripada repeating slider, bisa dibuat tiga circle yang akhirnya di-stack di atas 00:18:904 (2)? Efek delay yang akan terjadi sangat pas dengan bagian ini imo
5. 00:18:904 (2) - Tambahkan finish (ada suara simbal dari lagunya di sini)
6. 00:22:190 (3) - Err... Jujur rasanya ini lebih pas kalau ditaruh di downbeat (1/2 kemudian) dibanding di sini, soalnya di sini nggak ada suara drum dari lagunya sama sekali can't really understand this one ><
7. 00:25:047 (2,3) - (optional) Di sini juga, coba unstack dua ini dan buat segitiga seperti gambar di bawah, soalnya bagian sebelumnya itu bergerak terus, kalau tiba-tiba stack kesannya memberhentikan flow:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:29:333 (1) - Karena (2,3) sesudahnya di-curve sedikit, bagaimana kalau ini di-curve sedikit juga? xD
9. 00:32:333 (3,4,1) - Jujur di sini gw kurang dapat patternnya, dengan memutar (3) 120° bisa didapatkan pattern sebagai berikut:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:37:190 (3) - Sama seperti [Hard] - soft-sampleset harusnya mulai dari sini, dan tambahkan juga finish pada circle ini
11. 00:42:904 (3) - Hmm, tambahkan clap pada awal slider agar clapping-nya konsisten?
12. 00:50:333 (3,4,1,2) - Lagi, pattern yang kelihatan abstrak - kenapa nggak dibuat diamond pattern aja antar keempat circle ini? Menggeser (2) agar terbentuk diamond tidak sulit, kok~
13. 00:55:761 (2) - Apakah memang sengaja meng-curve slider ini seperti ini? Lebih bagus kalau mengelilingi (4) dari luar imo...
14. 01:02:190 (4) - (optional) Mungkin lebih bagus kalau (4)-nya ditaruh agak ke bawah, sehingga (2,3,4) akan membentuk suatu segitiga (baru setelah itu, (5)-nya ditaruh di atas (4))
15. 01:11:547 (x) - Spinner harusnya dimulai di sini - teruskan mappingnya hingga 1/4 sebelum awal spinner ini, dan pada circle yang terletak pada 1/4 sebelum spinner itu tambahkan finish
16. 01:29:333 (1) - Clap juga semestinya harus ada di sini (ini sih self-explanatory xD)

done

Yap, itu dia mod dari gw~
Untuk mapper pemula ini udah tergolong rapih kok (jujur map Ardentryst's Theme gw dulu di awal lebih berantakan daripada ini)


Good luck~ ditunggu m4mnya :3

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[*]Taiko

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