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Alicia - smooooch (Piano Version)

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Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Keksi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 5. April 2012 at 12:49:52

Artist: Alicia
Title: smooooch (Piano Version)
Tags: Mystearica Sander-Don ShadowSoul Hanyuu YGOkid8 Beatmania IIDX
BPM: 177
Filesize: 1807kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hyper (4,91 stars, 391 notes)
  2. Sander's Taiko (0 stars, 410 notes)
  3. ShadowSoul's Another (5 stars, 371 notes)
  4. Standard (3,67 stars, 168 notes)
  5. YGOkid8's Easy (1,82 stars, 112 notes)
Download: Alicia - smooooch (Piano Version)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map

Sander's Taiko by Sander-Don ~ 100% done.
Hyper by Keksi ~ 100% done.
ShadowSoul's Another ~ 100% done.
Hanyuu's Standard ~ 100% done.
YGO's Easy ~ 100% done.


20/2/2012 Added Sander-Don's taiko diff.
20/2/2012 Fixed some patterns - ShadowSoul's mod
21/2/2012 Again fixing - Nexy's mod
3/3/2012 Added ShadowSoul's another diff.
25/3/2012 Added Hanyuu's normal diff.
27/3/2012 Hanyuu's mod | fixed some things.
2/4/2012 Added YGO's Easy (last diff).

Ready for Pending.

forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=75014 If anyone is interested who made these Piano songs , or if anyone want to map some too.


Enjoy it :)
Last edited by Keksi , edited 35 times in total.
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
Jenny
kiai + volume-mod/suggestions, few irc mentionings to kokatsu's diff - ask me to recheck when hyper is done
SeeU_old
138 posts
Joined May 2011
SeeU_old
Hard

Not setted lead-in :(
you have to apply lead-in
over 1 second
Sander-Don
1,282 posts
Joined March 2010
Sander-Don
Smooooch ･∀･

Download: Alicia - smooooch (Piano Version) (Keksi) [Sander's Taiko].osu
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
Small IRC Mod .. i think i don't need to post log in here ~
Cristian
1,945 posts
Joined November 2009
Cristian

ShadowSoul wrote:

Small IRC Mod .. i think i don't need to post log in here ~
i think you need to do it
also, in the tags you don't need to put this "," you just put an space and are fine
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Keksi

Kurisuchianu wrote:

ShadowSoul wrote:

Small IRC Mod .. i think i don't need to post log in here ~
i think you need to do it
also, in the tags you don't need to put this "," you just put an space and are fine

Done~
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Have a lightbulb ~

:idea:
Blatzk
141 posts
Joined August 2008
Blatzk
Boo, timing help~
ShadowSoul
352 posts
Joined September 2010
ShadowSoul
<3

Download: Alicia - smooooch (Piano Version) (Keksi) [Hyper].osu

Download: Alicia - smooooch (Piano Version) (Keksi) [ShadowSoul's Another].osu
Sanjenin Nagi
381 posts
Joined December 2009
Sanjenin Nagi
keksi :D
good piano music :3
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
was i meant to make an easy for this? great song btw
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Keksi

YGOkid8 wrote:

was i meant to make an easy for this? great song btw


yes :<
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Hyper:

00:05:013 (6,7) - spacing error
00:06:539 (3) - der slider passt nicht gut zur musik. am besten den repeat wegnehmen und einen circle setzen.
00:07:047 (4,5,6) - spacing error
00:08:742 (4,5) - ^
00:09:081 (6) - der passt auch überhaupt nicht dazu. slider am besten auf weißen tick starten und auf rot enden.
00:12:470 (6,7) - spacing error
00:25:528 (7) - finde den auch unpassend. der wiederholt sich einfach viel zu lange.
00:32:662 (1,2,3) - spacing error
00:36:739 (8) - ist nicht ganz genau unter (7)
00:37:758 (4,5,6) - spacing error
00:42:854 (0) - add circle
00:51:856 (8) - keine ahnung was das für eine rote break time da ist o.ô seh ich zum ersten mal
Das spacing am ende solltest du nochmal komplett überarbeiten.

Die ganzen spacing fehler kommen vom niedrigen grid level. Die werden zwar aufs grid gesetzt mit distance snap aber halt eben sehr ungenau. Am besten grid level auf 4 stellen und und noch einmal schnell durchgehen. Ist zwar minimal aber es fallt teilweise schon auf wenn das spacing nicht passt.

Combofehler gibts auch einige. Mach am besten alle combos weg und setz neue combos auf jede 2. measure (die großen weiße striche auf der timeline), das ist jeder 8 beat. Das geht einfach und schnell wenn du den beatsnap divisor auf 1/1 stellst und mit den pfeiltasten durchgehst. Danach noch einmal kurz an den stellen nachsehen wo gerade kein circle vorhanden ist oder ein slider endet und dort die combos passend zur musik machen. Dann sollts eigentlich perfekt passen :)

Download: Alicia - smooooch (Piano Version) (Keksi) [Standard].osu
Last edited by Hanyuu , edited 2 times in total.
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,407 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
\o/
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Keksi
Added and Changed all things. Thanks for mod Hanyuu \:D/
YGOkid8
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2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Download: Alicia - smooooch (Piano Version) (Keksi) [YGOkid8's Easy].osu
a fairy challenging easy, made like that to reduce the difficulty jump from this to Standard.
Hawkii
86 posts
Joined February 2011
Hawkii
Heyyyaa ~

Erstmal .. das Lied ist sehr schön. ~
Meiner Meinung nach besser als das Original. :3

zum Mod..

da ich eigentlich keine Spacing Errors oder sonstiges finde mod ich einfach deine Slider, okay? ;)

[Standart]
00:09:589 (3) - Finish?

Slider-Mod
00:05:521 (1,2) - Versuch bei Slidern das letzte kleine Viereck (Sliderpoint? idk D:) immer in der Mitte zu haben damit der Slider gleichmäßig ist (macht vlt nicht so viel Unterschied, aber dennoch)

00:17:725 (4) - ^

Geh in File -> Open .osu in Notepad und gib den Code statt dem Code nach [HitObjects] ein. Sieh es dir an wenns dirs gefällt dann speichere sonst Esc und nicht speichern. :3

Ist die ganze Map, nur ich hab die Slider geändert. ^.^
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In den anderen find ich nichts. teheee x:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sehr tolle Map. :)

Sind natürlich alles nur Vorschläge, wenn dir es nicht gefällt dann ändere es auch nicht. ;)

Hab derzeit keine Kudos aber sobald ich wieder einen Kudosu habe, geb ich in dieser Map. :]

Viel Glück, weiterhin. ^x^
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Keksi
Thanks for the mod :) Standard is made by Hanyuu. So i will tell her that you modded her difficult.
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
i suggest taking out our nicknames in our diffs. and storyboarding them into their respective diffs. instead. imo it'll look a lot nicer and tidier.
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Keksi

YGOkid8 wrote:

i suggest taking out our nicknames in our diffs. and storyboarding them into their respective diffs. instead. imo it'll look a lot nicer and tidier.


Yeah why not. So do you want to make the Storyboard then ?
bomber34
1,529 posts
Joined February 2011
bomber34
General:
  1. Your Bitrate is too low D: 128 kBit/s is minimum and your is 96
  2. I can't download all difficulties O.o Try full submitt [I miss Shadowsouls Another]

YGOkid8's Easy:
  1. 00:29:945 (4) - NC?
  2. 00:35:890 (5) - Sounds better for me when the slider starts at 00:35:720
  3. 00:55:083 (2,3) - This could look better but idk
  4. 00:55:763 (3,4,6,1) - NC. You could argue that this is Combo Spam but it looks better.
  5. 01:25:997 - 3 1/1 stacked notes? It would fit to the song and you could easily
  6. 01:46:040 (1) - I don't know but i think the Slider is supposed to end at 01:48:928

Standard:
  1. 00:43:533 (1) - Slider starts to sharp
  2. 00:46:251 (1) - Well you can decide it of course but imo this break doesn't fit here
  3. 01:16:145 (3) - NC
  4. 01:21:581 - Add note
  5. 01:24:299 (1,2,3) - This overlapping doesn't look good
  6. 01:32:452 - Slider should end here
  7. 01:41:114 - Add note, because the next 3 notes sound weird without it
  8. 01:48:843 - Let this note end at 01:48:928. What is the purpose of this green timing at 01:48:928?
Hyper
  1. 00:08:572 (2) - Use position X: 168 Y: 160. Next note straight under until (4)
  2. 00:08:911 (4) - To many Slider repeat arrows. Let it end at 00:09:589
  3. 00:12:470 (6,7) - Looks better when it uses the same direction as (1,2)
  4. 00:15:182 (6,7) - ^ even though i would switch it with (4,5) this time
  5. 00:25:528 (5) - Short the slider repeat once so it ends at 00:25:868 and put a note on the next 1/2
  6. 00:26:208 (6) - ugly overlapping with (5)
  7. 00:31:643 (9,10,11) - a curve looks better than this straight
  8. 00:36:739 (8) - Can't see this slider because it is hidden under (6)
  9. 00:37:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make this more symmetrical
  10. 00:38:437 (1,2) - Slider fits better
  11. 00:39:626 - Add slider which ends at 00:39:966, because (5) doesn't fit there at all
  12. 00:41:495 (1) - Short the repeats or put (2) at the sliderend
  13. 00:43:533 (7,1) - Add NC and remove NC at (1)
  14. 00:44:382 (4,5,6) - Could look better when (5,6) are directly under (4) or all 3 fit to (1,2,3)
  15. 00:50:327 (1) - If you wanna have a break around 00:52:366 i would suggest to remove the whole combo here. Everything else feels weird for me. Or if you wanna have your break at 01:03:236, remove the whole combo at 01:01:368 (1) and map through 00:52:366
  16. 01:15:806 (2) - remove this note
  17. 01:27:866 (6) - ^ and add it here 01:28:205
  18. 01:33:130 (4,5,6,7,8) - - spacing
  19. 01:37:547 (11) - NC
  20. 01:48:928 - this green timing section doesn't make sense for me
IMO
Nazi mod
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8

Keksi wrote:

Yeah why not. So do you want to make the Storyboard then ?
lol, i could but i'm pretty n00b. i'd ask someone else who can 1) storyboard 2) make decent graphics for the names.

bomber34 wrote:

YGOkid8's Easy:
  1. 00:29:945 (4) - NC? consistency reasons, so no
  2. 00:35:890 (5) - Sounds better for me when the slider starts at 00:35:720 mapping to main melody
  3. 00:55:083 (2,3) - This could look better but idk true, but flow > looks
  4. 00:55:763 (3,4,6,1) - NC. You could argue that this is Combo Spam but it looks better. but it makes no sense. "looks better" doesn't justify comboing. most of the time anyhow, and this is one of those times.
  5. 01:25:997 - 3 1/1 stacked notes? It would fit to the song and you could easily to me, this seems like the most appropriate place for a break in the easier diffs, so i'll leave my mini-break here.
  6. 01:46:040 (1) - I don't know but i think the Slider is supposed to end at 01:48:928 i think you mean spinner. i also see what you mean, it sounds better where it ends now imo
Last edited by YGOkid8 , edited 1 time in total.
BrokenArrow
2,236 posts
Joined June 2010
BrokenArrow
If you still need a new .mp3 with 128 kBit/s, you can take this one~ (File too big, i'll upload via puush -_-)
New offset should be around 175

Mp3: http://puu.sh/o0Qt replace with the old one
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Keksi
Thanks for the new mp3 \:D/
Keksi
987 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Keksi

bomber34 wrote:

General:
  1. Your Bitrate is too low D: 128 kBit/s is minimum and your is 96
  2. I can't download all difficulties O.o Try full submitt [I miss Shadowsouls Another]


Hyper
  1. 00:08:572 (2) - Use position X: 168 Y: 160. Next note straight under until (4)
  2. 00:08:911 (4) - To many Slider repeat arrows. Let it end at 00:09:589
  3. 00:12:470 (6,7) - Looks better when it uses the same direction as (1,2)
  4. 00:15:182 (6,7) - ^ even though i would switch it with (4,5) this time
  5. 00:25:528 (5) - Short the slider repeat once so it ends at 00:25:868 and put a note on the next 1/2
  6. 00:26:208 (6) - ugly overlapping with (5)
  7. 00:31:643 (9,10,11) - a curve looks better than this straight
  8. 00:36:739 (8) - Can't see this slider because it is hidden under (6)
  9. 00:37:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make this more symmetrical
  10. 00:38:437 (1,2) - Slider fits better
  11. 00:39:626 - Add slider which ends at 00:39:966, because (5) doesn't fit there at all
  12. 00:41:495 (1) - Short the repeats or put (2) at the sliderend
  13. 00:43:533 (7,1) - Add NC and remove NC at (1)
  14. 00:44:382 (4,5,6) - Could look better when (5,6) are directly under (4) or all 3 fit to (1,2,3)
  15. 00:50:327 (1) - If you wanna have a break around 00:52:366 i would suggest to remove the whole combo here. Everything else feels weird for me. Or if you wanna have your break at 01:03:236, remove the whole combo at 01:01:368 (1) and map through 00:52:366
  16. 01:15:806 (2) - remove this note
  17. 01:27:866 (6) - ^ and add it here 01:28:205
  18. 01:33:130 (4,5,6,7,8) - - spacing
  19. 01:37:547 (11) - NC
  20. 01:48:928 - this green timing section doesn't make sense for me
IMO
Nazi mod
changed some things. Not every.
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang
this map is good :D

It's too bad already taiko difficult in this map.
I'm taiko mapper! not modder.

and... cheer up!
Stefan
Global Moderator
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Joined January 2011
Stefan
Smooooch-ing ･∀･

[Sander's Taiko]
00:00:000 - 01:52:587 - Map this Part.

[YGOkid8's Easy]
00:00:080 (1) - Sounds off, move it to 00:00:165.
00:05:503 (1) - ^ to 00:05:588.

[Standard]
Sounds off.

ijfjifjdsifjjsiufjhiufjhdfuijdhsfuijhfusjfuis
BrokenArrow
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Joined June 2010
BrokenArrow

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Smooooch-ing ･∀･

[Sander's Taiko]
00:00:000 - 01:52:587 - Map this Part.

[YGOkid8's Easy]
00:00:080 (1) - Sounds off, move it to 00:00:165.
00:05:503 (1) - ^ to 00:05:588.

[Standard]
Sounds off.

ijfjifjdsifjjsiufjhiufjhdfuijdhsfuijhfusjfuis
It's because Keksi didn't resnap everything right and failed at the timing from the Taiko Diff
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
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YGOkid8
^ yeah so please re-snap everything right pl0x

EDIT: whyyyyyy is this gravedddddd
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